Equestrian Fanfiction

by Lise

First published 27th of December, 2016

The life and times of Lyra's fanfiction site.

Falling in love with the mythological book series Midnight Castle, Lyra Heartstrings has created her very own fan fiction site, a home to all that enjoy reading and writing human fiction.

This is the life and times of that site.

First Post

Hello, Equestria!

And welcome to Midnight Castle!

This is finally happening, ponies! (Yeah, I know it’s been a long wait.)

For those who don’t know, I’ve been dreaming of getting a Midnight Castle fansite online for some time. While it's fun posting stories in Ponify, I feel that we Nightlings deserve a site of our own. And now we do!

Feel free to show you love of the series, get to know your fellow Nightlings, or just say hi and have a good time. If you're new to Midnight Castle, ask us anything you want. We're a friendly group and welcome any and all questions!

Special thanks to my friend and my other friend who helped set this up! (They're still in denial, but I'm working on that.) That said, the site is paid for and supported by yours truly so please excuse the glitches. I was never good with aether code and the spell manuals aren't making things any easier. I'm hoping to finally figure how to link a-scrolls to the site by the end of this week. Until then please just open a topic and post the link to your stories manually.

I’m so excited! Have fun and remember "We're here for each other!"

LyraHands

First!

Kidding! Great work, LyraHands. All I can say is... it's about time! :P I'm at school right now, so I can't post links till I get back home. You okay if I link my Danny Saga?

RRBB

Hello Lyra!

As a fan of Midnight Castle since book one, I welcome your undertaking. Reading that you have problems with a-code, might I offer my services? I've been developing a-pages professionally for over five years, and think I could lend a hoof. What exactly are you using? Twiscript? CCL?

Thank you for bringing back the magic of my childhood.

The TechNightling

Break my strings! You girls are fast! :)

@RRBB: Are you kidding?! I love that saga! Link away! Also, private messaging isn't working yet, so post any questions directly in general. I'll organize things better when more ponies join. For now that's it, though.

Oh, and glad to have you here! :D

@The TechNightling: Wow! Never thought we'd have a veteran! Welcome to Midnight Castle fansite! I've only read series three and on. It's damn hard to find the first editions :( The copies in my local library have more pages missing than a tree in winter. Know where I could find one? I managed to see one of the first series in an antique shop in Canterlot, but that thing costs more than my three month salary!

Anyway, I can totally use some help with the site. I'm using Twiscript lite. Tried CCL, but that thing's insane! I have a friend who's really good with that stuff, but she's mega shy. Hope that when she sees there's another codefilly here she'll join. In the meantime, I'll give you Mod rights... when I figure out how. :/

LyraHands

Thank you, Lyra.

I'm honoured by your trust. Once I get a look at the framework you're using I'll help you set things up. Might I also suggest you find an artist? One of the reasons Midnight Castle is so popular is because of the illustrations, even if some of the pre-Luna ones are... typical of their time.

One thing. While I would be glad to help your friend join the Nightling fandom, being a "codefilly" is out of the question, since I'm a stallion. Would love to talk code with her, though. Some of the mares I work with can't tell the difference between an if-script and an open switch. (Your friend will get the joke.)

I'm afraid the early books are difficult to get nowadays. If you don't mind bad quality, I think I might be able to find a few copies. No guarantees, though. I'll get back to you on that later this week.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: You're a stallion? Want to meet? I'm in Canterlot.

Brush

Lol! Calm down, filly! :)

You're hopeless, Brush! Instead of jumping at everything without nipples, when will you continue The Human and I? It's been three months, girl!

RRBB

Hello Brush,

Sorry to disappoint you, but I'm married.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: Story of my life.

@RRBB: Soon. :P

Brush

Girls (and TechNightling), I'm think we should lay some ground rules.

Before you draw and quarter me, let me remind you all this isn't a meetup. Things tend to get a bit wilder in aether, and I don't want them to spiral out of control. I'll probably add a rules section the next few days. Until then please treat your fellow Nightlings with respect and limit personal topics. You'll be able to have plenty of that when I (or TechNightling) get the messaging system working.

@Brush: Finish that hay-bitten story! I've been crying my eyes out wondering if they get back together or not! (Not that I'm trying to influence, you :P)

@TechNightling: Good point. I'll be marking the site beta until we things get in order. No idea if I can find any artists, though. All the ones I know are classically trained and can't a-draw to save their hides.

LyraHands

Sorry, Handy, I done bad. Please forgive! I promise to add a new character with four pairs of hands in the story just for you.

Brush

You know that means eight hands, right?

Btw, I'm totally stealing that idea! What do you think of this: Paradise wants to hang out with Danny, but messes up the spell and instead of turning into a human changes his hooves into hands. Now, he knows that the spell will only last for three days, so he decides to lock himself in his room and wait it out. But then, Danny passes by and asks him to hang out.

Now, Paradise wants to go out with him, but doesn't want anyone to see his hands, so he puts on boots. In summer!

RRBB

...

@RRBB, please for the sake of everything sacred... never write comedies. You're great at adventure fics, but some things are just not meant to be. :P (And if you ruin the Danny Saga with any such nonsense, I'm banning you, rewriting the story, and never talking to you again! >:P)

Okay, I'll be heading off. (Time to go earn the hits to keep the site up.) Have fun, ponies, and don't burn the place down while I'm gone. Be sure to invite any Nightling you know!

LyraHands

Author's Notes:

This is a self edited daily, so it would be a great help if you point out mistakes in the comments or PM :)

Hope you enjoy :D

Best Humie

Hello everyone!

MixaMax here. Am I dreaming? Lazy Hands finally got off her butt and did something? Guess I know where I'll be linking my Midnight Shorts. :) On that note who do you think is best humie? *cough* Eric *cough*

Seriously, though, I want to try get a proper discussion on this. Give real reasons! It's fun trashing characters in meetups, but let's get past the best-bottle-carrier jokes.

I'll go first. I think Eric is the best human. Now, I know has less than five pages in Crimson Gem, but he's been instrumental in keep the portal safe (which I think is a pretty big deal). And don't give me that he hasn't been in Equestria before! The talk he had with Danny and Blazen in volume 5 (It Shines For All) pretty much confirms he has been to Canterlot at least twice. How else would he know about the changing of the guard and the chaos disaster?

Anyway, he's the only one who understands proper electro-science (yes, Danny does, too, but only because he's Megan's brother) and has managed to sneak into the Felina corp. And I totally see him having a thing with Caprice!

Now that I've convinced you who's best humie, let me see what you think.

MixaMax

Hello MixaMax,

Welcome to Midnight Castle. Are any characters eligible or are we only focusing on the Mistmount Chronicles?

The TechNightling

I guess...

I haven't read much of the original books, but I don't like much what I've seen (sorry :(). The whole idea of neighbouring kingdoms and a pool between worlds really puts me off. And yes, I know times were different back when the books were written, but seriously? Like they're so mushy that I literally feel the pages stick to my hooves. And having huge descriptions every five pages is annoying.

It's not like I can stop you, but half the ponies won't have any idea what you're talking about. Just go with your favorite Mistmount human, okay?

Oh, and great to have you here *nuzzles* :)

MixaMax

Hello,

I'm new. Haven't been to any meetups, but I really enjoy the Midnight Castle series. Is it okay if I link a few attempts of my own? I know they aren't very good, but I'd really like to hear your thoughts

Candle

@Candle: Hi! Welcome to the insanity. Don't worry, we don't bite (unless you ask nicely :))

Brush

Hello Candle,

Wonderful to have you here. It's always a joy to see new Nightlings and I'm sure you'll feel at home pretty quick. Please, you're welcome to share your stories. Don't worry about quality, it's always difficult at the beginning. If you need any advice, editing, or proofing just let me know and I'll lend a hoof.

@MixaMax: I'm sorry you didn't like what you've read of the originals. While the tone is generally different, there are a few gems that I find on par with the later books, possibly even better. I strongly recommend you read Ghost in the Powerplant. I consider it the best, and you might recognize some characters referred to in the Mistmount Chronicles.

As for your question, my Mistmount favourite is Megan; my all time pick being Icelos. I admit Megan does seem to be a bit omnipotent at times, but she is the central character of the series, even more than Danny I'd argue. What she lacks in book-time she makes up in behind the scenes battles. I'd like to point out that she's also one of two characters who has a helicopter license—something I hope would be focused on if there is another book series, as the rumours suggest.

The TechNightling

@Candle: Hiiii! Share your stuff! :D It can't be as bad as my Danny's Angst story.

@MixaMax: Was wondering when you'd show your stupid snout :P How has it been, Mixa? Did you get that part time job you wanted?

Oh, and Danny is best humie. Duh! :P He's cute, he gets things done, and also he has far greater depth as a character than anyone else. Don't get me wrong, the others are well written too (even some of the ponies) but he has far more conflicts than them. Like, I know they've tried to mirror the Elements of Harmony with the character traits, bit that still makes them a bit one dimensional: Eric the science geek, Blazen the loyal loner, Karl the nature kid, Bellucio the photo model, and Omni the playboy *ahem* party guy. Danny, though... *swoon*

@The TechNightling: thought you might say that! :P Nah, I think Megan is cool too. She's like the great older sister that helps with everything. I can't stand Molly, though. She's so underused and mostly written in for dumb jokes and comic relief. And don't get me started on her crush on Bellucio. *angry pony*

RRBB

@RRBB: don't you trash talk my Bellucio! *shakes fist* He can be my prince any day of the week!

Brush

@Brush: Bellucio confirmed for worst humie! :P

@RRBB: I'll agree with you on that. The characters are a version of the Elements of Harmony, but it's to be expected for a colt's series. As great as the world and the writing is, that's something we can't escape. That said, S.Child has done a pretty decent job. All the characters are believable and their interactions are almost 100% realistic.

You're still wrong, though. Danny is only second best. >:D I'll give you that he and Eric would make a great couple, though.

@The TechNightling: wasn't Icelos the goth kid? As for Megan, I just don't feel her. Sorry, filly.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: go buck a tree!

Brush

Thanks, all! Really great to be here :) I'll link some of my stories in a bit. Please don't be too harsh O:)

My favorite human is Eric.

Candle

@Brush: you first, sweetheart ;)

@Candle: I knew I liked you :D

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Joke's on you, mare. TechNightling is a stallion. Lol.

RRBB

@RRBB: And I'm Prince Blueblood!

@The TechNightling: just kidding. You're cool either way :)

MixaMax

Holy stars! I'm gone for a few hours and you already start with the best humie discussion?!

Just got back from work, so I'll try to get more of the site functionality set up after work. With luck we'll have proper threads and private messaging by tomorrow. (Or I'll be dead on the keyboard.)

@The TechNightling: can you help out with stuff? I've set up a new section visible only for you so we could talk code there. I also think I've given you Mod privileges.

@Candle: great to have you here! Feel free to post anything, and don't let these mares scare you. If anypony gives you any trouble just let me know, okay? :)

@MixaMax: of course it'd be you who starts this. :P I'll have to go with Omni. He's so funny and we all know he gets all the mares. :) Actually, I can't choose. I just like all of them so much... even the CEO's son. I'm almost sure he might turn out not to be the jerk we think he is.

Now that that's settled, I'll be locking posting till tomorrow. Off to trying to code again (rip my horn). Take care, Nightlings.

We're here for each other!

LyraHands

Technical and Other Issues

Morning, girls!

I have some good news and some... not good news. Good news is I'm alive (how did that happen? :P) and thanks to our lovely stallion got the basics of the site working. (TechNightling is da pone!)

Now the bad news... Seems I had made such a mess of things that Tech and I had to redo all from scratch. Tech managed to save most of the plaintext post, but you'll have to relink all your stories (this mostly concerns RRBB. Sorry, filly :( Promise I'll make it up to you.)

Good news regarding the bad news: TechNightling got the depository functionality working, so you can upload your fics directly! Formatting is a bit wonky, but it'll have to do until we find somepony with a basic understanding of aesthetics.

Also, big news! TechNightling has agreed to be our first official Mod! (Yay!) Give him a stomp and a hug, everypony! Without him the site would have been messed up till Hearth's Warming. :)

Anyway, let the posting continue!

LyraHands

Noooooo! My beautiful Danny links! Curse you, Handy! Cuuuuuurse you!!!

I'll upload all my stuff after school. I hope this time it'll remain for more than ten hours. :P

On another note, I have a friend at school who's really good at drawing. Now she's not into humies exactly, but I've been making casual comments about Midnight Castle to test the waters. So far she's quite open to the idea, so am thinking of inviting her here. You girls cool? She tends to draw a bit risqué, though.

RRBB

Risqué?! Did you seriously type risqué?!? Lol!

MixaMax

@RRBB: I approve! Bring in all the lewd pics! Does she have a cute brother?

Brush

@MixaMax: and why not? It's a perfectly normal word.

@Brush: you're a beast, you know that? :P but yes, she does have a "cute brother" who's far too good for you! Seriously, he's like five years older and in a Celestial college. Not sure his family will approve him hanging round mares (they are mega conservative :/)

RRBB

Hello everyone,

Let me start by thanking LyraHands for letting me be part of this. I'll work my hardest to not misplace her trust and make Midnight Castle the best site there is. (By Luna, there are some pretty awful sites in the aether.)

While I, and I'm sure everypony else, always welcomes any new members and discussions, could you refrain from posting explicit pics for the moment? I'll start work on getting an explicit filter once the personal messaging system is fully functional. I don't want to be the rump of the site, but I'm at work most of the time, and having such things appear on my screen might cause problems.

Thank you.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: Anything for you, bby. ;) *passes fingers through Techie's fragrant mane*

Brush

@Brush: stahp, you crazy filly! :) The guy said he's married. Use some of that imagination to continue The Human and I! I promise I'll personally commission art for each of your chapters!

LyraHands

@LyraHands: lewd art?

Brush

@Brush: the lewdest art! So lewd that Princess Cadence will tell us to tone it down! Just get writing already!

@RRBB: I think it's great if you can get your friend to join. I know firsthoof how awkward it is might be. Until I came out, I used to say I was buying the books for my brother (and before you say anything, Brush, I don't have a brother!) Let me know if there's anything I could help. Same goes for everypony—if you're even teased or made uncomfortable let me know and I'll help you handle it. (I've been through that already)

LyraHands

@LyraHands: thanks, but she's fine.

@Brush: you okay if I send her one of your things to read? She tends to find colt stuff a bit simplistic, but that's only because she's never seen your take on it :D

RRBB

@RRBB: Yes! Make me famous! When she gets hooked I'll accept her brother as tribute! Mwahaha! >:)

@LyraHands: Slavedriver! Temptress! *grumbles*

Brush

Can somepony help me with this upload thing? I guess I'm stupid, but I can't get it to work. :(

Candle

Sorry, Candle. It might be a bit confusing. I'll add a help section to the site. It'll be just text, but should help for now. If you have any further troubles just let me know.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: thanks :)

Candle

Hey hey, everybody! :)

New Nightling here. I've been reading the books for half an year now and I love the series to bits!
Here, have a bottle! :P

So what do you pones do here? Just chat and post stories, or discuss the books as well? For one thing, have you noticed that the woman-man ratio is 2:1? I know I was surprised. Reading the books, it seems like it's mostly the Great Eight and a few support characters (also male) who do all the things, but when I noted down all the characters as they appear I get 83 women and 41 men. Granted that 7 of the women are just references and 24 are of the sorceress squads, but I was the heck surprised!

Is it the same with the first series?

Thanks, and we're here for each other!

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: nice web-name. I approve. And yeah, that has been discussed. The ratio is pretty much the same throughout the entire series, but when you take into account that most of the women are background characters it's more like a 1:3. Keep in mind this isn't Shakesmare but a series for colts. A lot of the things are there just to make a scene feel full.

Best example: Bellucio's maids. So far we have 3 claiming to have worked at his parent's house before his birth: Sorsa - The Missing Hare (series 1), Euryala - Shadowknife's prophecy (series 1 finale, parts 1,2, and 3), and Claris - Am I Who I Am? (Series 3). They never meet or appear outside of their respective chapters. Plus, based on descriptions we have fifteen more who come and go at random intervals, most of the time bringing Bellucio a bottle of soda, never to be seen again.

Based on these numbers, Bellucio's family must be rich (which we know isn't so, since he originally set on his modeling career to help pay for his ballet classes).

My advice is don't read too much into things :)

Also, welcome aboard!

MixaMax

Hello PrinceEric,

Wonderful to have you here. I haven't analyzed the series that much in depth, but I think MixaMax is correct. I can tell you that in the original Midnight Castle there were five, yes five, female characters, and that includes the original villain Hera.

I find it commendable that you've devoted so much time into these things. I'm sure it'll help piece together a greater understanding of the world we all love.

The TechNightling

Before Brush jumps all over you because of your stallion name, let me welcome you to Midnight Castle. I already see you'll do fine here :)

If you want I can send you the first series of the Mistmount Chronicles. I have several, so it's no prob. Just send me a personal message with a p.o.box and I'll send them to you.

LyraHands

@LyraHands: wow! Thanks! I'll do that!

And hey, I'm not worried. I'm a colt in real life. Junior in high school.

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: you have no idea what you have unleashed! Flee while you still can!

RRBB

*perks up ears* Did somepony say colt? O, bby, come 'ere! *tackle-nuzzles PrinceEric*

Brush

Here we go again... somepony, please find Brush a stallion! She clearly needs one.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: buck you!

Brush

Bellucio Theories

Good morning,

My apologies to all, but the personal messaging system will take a few more days. An urgent task has come up, requiring my attention elsewhere. The only way this affects you all is that my request that you refrain from posting NSFW content is prolonged until then.

A few other site improvements:

Midnight Help Section
I have added added a somewhat functional help section. Explanations need a bit work, but is usable at this point. If there's anything missing, feel free to tell me or LyraHands and we'll make the appropriate changes.

Member Titles
Members now have titles visible under the user name. At present I've only used generic titles (Princess, Moderator, Member, Newbie). It's a simple process to add more classes and change the names, so don't worry about that. Also, everypony with an existing account is automatically assigned the Member title. Any new users will start as Newbies for a period of seven days.

String Scripts
You can now use simple combinations to use phrases while posting. For example *n will automatically post *nuzzles*. For the time being scrips are hardcoded, which means you'll have to ask me or LyraHands to add more on the list. That said, LuraHands has assured me that we have the ones you most commonly use.

See you in a few days,

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: thanks, bby. *nuzzles* *tackles* *kisses with spaghetti*

Brush

@The TechNightling: Thanks! Be back soon!

By the way, that post got me thinking. How do you think aether works in MC? We've seen that they have computers (Tartarus, Eric even carries one round his neck), but it's never clear how they function. The whole notion of mana generators seems a bit absurd. In Shadowknife's prophecy (season 1 finale) we have Megan "disrupt" the Felina corp powerplant so that Molly can sneak in and get the shadowknife to Bellucio. It's said that "causes half the city to go black" and "sorceress squads fill the streets to prevent a panic."

What the heck, S.Child?!? I mean, I get it's hyperbole, but still... half a city? Not that I see it practical having every home getting its mana from the same powerplant.

Anyway, I digress. Clearly they gave computers and an equivalent to the aethernet. My question is, how do you think it works? (Please don't say "deities!" I really don't see Zeus, Poseidon, And Hades running around fixing everyone's computer.)

MixaMax

@The TechNightling: get some rest, sweetie. You've earned it. :)

@MixaMax: Good one! Yeah, some of the things seen illogical, but it's the humie tech that makes Midnight Castle so great. Keep in mind that the idea of powerplants (also called manaplants in a few chapters) isn't new. Tech will correct me if I'm wrong, but I think it was mentioned in the third chapter of the original series. I was just a filly back then, but I remember Danny taking Caprice (same names, different characters) into a powerplant for some reason.

My take is that they use some form of stored rainbow or lightning and transfer it via silver threads to the homes. As for the aethernet, I think it is a deity. Remember the chapter in which Bellucio spent all night posing in front of his computer and then had love letters appear on every aethertech he walked passed? What if the focus wasn't Bellucio's vanity, but in fact the aether deity falling for him?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Nooooo! Not my Bellucio! *hiss* *stomp*

Brush

Girls, girls! I just realized the most extraordinary thing!

I was rereading Am I Who I Am? And it hit me. Bellucio is fashioned after Prince Blueblood! Same mannerisms, same hair, same way of speaking. Even that time he stops to take a rose from a random garden as the Great Eight run from the Fae Queen.

I can't believe I didn't see that sooner! Now I wonder what other characters were based on real life. Do you think Zeus is Princess Celestia humanized? Hades is so totally Princess Luna (remember he can also enter memories, also that would explain why the two of them go so well in Portal Madness). No idea who Poseidon is. Maybe Cadence?

PrinceEric

Bellucio is fashioned after Prince Blueblood!

I think I'm going to be sick D: Eric, bby, why did you do this to me?

Brush

@Brush: What? Blueblood is hot! I mean I'm a colt, but I'll totally go gay for Blueblood.

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Wow! You're a total flirt, just like Brush! :P But, yes, Blueblood is hot. (Sorry, Brushy O:))

@MixaMax: I think I read in one of the scroll companions that Midnight powerplants were sun powered. That's why the CEO freaked when Eric told her Celestia might pass through the portal. As for the aethernet I'm clueless, but am so stealing Handy's idea! (Thanks, LyraHands :))

By the way, I openly asked my friend if she would join and got a definite maybe! (Hey, it's not as bad as it sounds!) I gave her Eyes of Lightning, and she promised if she likes it she'd make an account. I'm counting on you, Brush! Don't let me down!

Also. We'll be having a "surprise test" this Friday, so I don't think I'll be able to post or link more stuff till the weekend. My parents are making a big fuss about it. It's not like I'm a straight-A student and have the second highest score in the hay-spitting school! :/ Sometimes I really can't understand what my parents want.

RRBB

@LyraHands: oooh! I like! :) I must re-read that chapter. It puts everything in a totally new perspective!

@RRBB: I had totally forgotten about that. It's still stupid. What do you suggest? They steal part of the sun and store it in the powerplant? And of course The TechNightling is gone when we need him. :(

@PrinceEric: Interesting. Blueblood's whiny as heck. That ass though... :)

MixaMax

@The TechNightling: Did you read my story? Please, tell me what you think when you get back.

Candle

@PrinceEric: No! Nope! Just no!

The heck, girls! You got me thinking about that… and I actually see Blueblood as I go to work. Damn it! I hate you all! If I get arrested for attempting to flirt with royalty, it's all your fault!

LyraHands

Heated Exchange

Molly worst human!

That is all.

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: heya. Not that I disagree, but maybe not start your first post with that? The books are about being together and helping each other out. Maybe explain why you came to that conclusion? Just my two bits.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: well I thought this was a cool place with cool pones who discussed the second greatest series in existence. Didn't know you had a tree stuck in your rump.

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: do I know you?

MixaMax

@MixaMax @CEOWicth: Girls, please chill. I was hoping to make the great announcement that I got messaging to work properly, and instead I come to this :/

Midnight Castle is something I've loved since I was a filly and I don't want it to become a mess like roller! So, please calm a bit down, okay?

I was going to announce something else, but am not in the mood, so I'll do it later. Maybe.

LyraHands

Sorry, Lyra :( Guess my hooves more faster than my brain...

MixaMax

The cold subsides as Bellucio sat on the window frame, looking into the night. He felt a set of fingers pass through his hair. They were warm, soft, gently, and definitely not his. He could feel his neck hairs stand on end.

"Don't," he whispered not turning around, afraid that the acini might put an end to the sensation—an experience he hated, but also longed for. "Please..." His voice barely left his mouth.

Bellucio had fought these feelings for months. No, longer. Ever he had first set eyes on Caprice he had felt something. He had mistaken it for curiosity, for friendship... how mistaken had he been. The fingers moved down to his neck, sliding along his skin like gentle feathers. He could feel Caprice tremble. As strong as she was as unsure as him. He could feel her breath on his skin on short uneven intervals.

Will she kiss me? Bellucio found himself wondering. The last time she had done so he had no idea it was her; her voice, her body, her very species was completely different. When she had met him in the coffee shop she had been a total stranger, yet knowing everything of his past.

"Bel, I..." she began. Bellucio liked to fantasize she had been crying, at least a little bit. "Bel, I wanted to tell you. So many times, I wanted to."

"You didn't." Bellucio closed his eyes. If he hadn't seen the cutie mark on her thigh he would have remained ignorant. Yet it was not Caprice he was mad at. He was mad at himself. This wasn't the first time he fantasized her being in human form. Each time they would talk or touch upon their feelings the thought crossed his mind, then just as swiftly fade away knowing it was never meant to be. Now... now he wasn't sure what to think anymore.

Brush

@Brush: ...I can't stop crying. Why did you give me the feels before i go to work, Brush? If I were a stallion I'd marry you here and now!

LyraHands

@MixaMax @LyraHands: sorry, I went way overboard as well. It's been a tough day at work, and I've been given a double shift. This place is a great escape for me guys. I just forget I'm not at work and don't have to be confrontational.

@MixaMax: I'm quite sure you don't know me. I'm military, so I fly about a lot.

@Brush: beautiful, as always! I'm a big fan :)

CEOWitch

@LyraHands: pity for the both of us you aren't. ;) Enjoy, Handy. I'll try to write more later.

@CEOWitch: are you a pegasus? Please, by all the stars, say you're a pegasus stud!

Brush

@Brush: heh. I think the username is pretty obvious.

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: Nooo! *heart shatters to a million pieces* It's fine... *sob* I still have Bellucio.

Brush

@Brush: it's times like these I remember why I like you. Sure, you can be a stallion-obsessed-maniac, but damn do you write well! :)

By the way, called it! I knew Cally was Caprice in human form. You're one twisted twitter, though. Building up all that tension between her and Bellucio, while seeing him under a new identity? Or maybe that way the point? Did she aim to get him stressed so they could kick the hay better? Wow, that's devious even for you, Brush! ;) I approve :D

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Maybe? O:P

Brush

@Brush: oh, shut up, you tease! Just marry me already! *ahem* I meant continue writing!

@CEOWitch: don't worry about it :) And sorry for the way I reacted. I haven't been having a good day either. Now that Brush has successfully energized all of us, some exciting news!

I finally convinced my tech friend to join. Now, she's mega shy, so please go out of your way to be nice to her. Her username is CodeFilly, and along with TechNightling, she'll be responsible for fixing my mistakes. Also, she's a bigger fan of the series than me, so no worries she'll get lost in our babble. :)

Meanwhile, I'll do some experimenting with tagging. As Tech pointed out to me yesterday, things are manageable now that we have 27 stories (love your story, @Candle! Need an editing pass, but other than that great work!), but if we grow finding something will be a pain in the flank. Tech proposed a tagging system, though I'm not sure that would work. In any event, I'll start poking that and see where it takes me (assuming my horn doesn't fall off).

Things are moving ahead steadily, Nightlings! Just a little more patience!

LyraHands

@LyraHands: thank you. *blush* I still have so much to learn.

@Brush: *weeps* I want to write like you. You made me fall in love with Bellucio and don't even like him! Can you, maybe, teach me to write like you?

Candle

Girls! I heard the most amazing thing just now! There are rumors that there will be a reboot of Midnight Castle! What do you think? Isn't that cool or what? :D

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: You are cool or what ;) You can reboot my Midnight Castle anytime.

Brush

@Brush: *facepalm*

@PrinceEric: Don't worry. Brush is harmless. Both I and Lyra know her in real life so we can vouch she's safe.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: your dad can vouch I'm safe!

@PrinceEric: Sorry, bby. I'll stop if I make you feel uncomfortable.

Brush

Okay, I'm off to work. Everypony, continue pestering Brush to finish her chapter!

As fast as a rhino, as strong as a bee!

LyraHands

Author's Notes:

Hello, all! Thanks for reading so far.
Reaching day 5, I have a question: would you like a companion fic describing events outside the site as well (formatted as a standard story)?
Please let me know your thoughts in the comments :)

New Faces

Morning.

I'm RRBB's friend PaintDrop, and I must confess I'm surprised I'm writing this at all. When RRBB told me about this place I thought it was a joke—just a punch of mares reading colt stories. Well, jokes are on me.

@Brush, your writing is spectacular. I literally felt my mane stand on end as I read your stories (I searched through the aethernet for everything you've written.) if it's okay with you, can I make illustrations to your words? I won't be able to post them until the filter system is in place, i want to hear your thoughts, though.

As for me, I'm a total newbie to Midnight Castle. I've already ordered the Mistmount Chronicles and am willing to give them a chance. If nothing else I'll be able to enjoy Brush's works fully that way. @RRBB You wish you can write like that!

Thank you for your time, and pleased to get to know you.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: oh, you're the one with the cute brother? Glad to know you. And, please, my writing isn't that good. *blush* I'm glad you enjoyed it, and a, curious to see what pictures will come from you.

Any chance you could do one of that scene in The Human and I?

Brush

@Brush: I suppose I am, but my brother is off limits.

I was thinking more of illustrating The Space Confession. It's sad, but as RRBB has mentioned I have a thing for M-M scenes. I could do The Human and I afterwards, if you want?

PaintDrop

Woohoo!

Glad to have you join us, PaintDrop. Any friend of RRBB is welcome! Welcome to the Nightlings. If you're just starting the series, I recommend you skip chapters 3 and 7 of the first Mistmount series. Not that they are bad, but... okay, they are bad. I've had a friend almost quit because she started with them.

If you have any questions about the series, or anything in general go ahead and ask anytime. :)

LyraHands

@PaintDrop: so we got ourselves out first victim? Niiiice! Guess RRBB could do something right. :P Any idea if she'll log on today? She mentioned something about an exam and such.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: heya. RRBB might not log in today. She got into a fight. Still not sure if she's grounded or not. I'll go ask her after class.

She has told me a lot about you, thought. I, just not sure I can repeat what she said before the filter system is working.

PaintDrop

Hello, PaintDrop :)

I'm also new! Good to know I'm no longer alone among the Timberwolves of the site :D Can you show some of your pictures? Also, do you write? (I write, but not very well.)

Candle

@Candle: I just draw. And I read the story you posted on the site. Definitely keep writing! I can only say that RRBB's first attempts were... again, I best wait for the filter before I can describe them. And great knowing you too.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: RRBB got into a fight?! Is she okay?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: nothing serious. There are some fillies in class she doesn't get along with. I suppose she'll be grumpy for a while, but that's it.

PaintDrop

Hey,

I'm Lyra's friend, and I'll be lending a horn to the code of the site. Thanks.

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: *gasp* She really got you? I can't believe it! Welcome to the party!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Afraid so. No regrets, though.

CodeFilly

Glad to meet you, CodeFilly! :) You know each other?

Something that I've been wondering. How many of you write? I know that Brush and RRBB do, and that TechNightling edits (and now that PaintDrop draws). What about the rest?

Candle

@Candle: Mix tries, but she's crap.

Brush

@Candle: I can't. I've tried a few times :( CodeFilly can, but she's so self-critical that she stops half way then sets it on fire.

@Brush: ooooh! The was a Celestia level burn :D

LyraHands

Hey, pones. I might be a bit scarce the next few days. :(

Got into a mess at school and my dad is freshening to cut my aether access if I don't "behave as a daughter of his should". Argh!

Anyway, I see we have fresh meat for the grinder :D And for your information, Paint, I have quite a large following!

@PrinceEric: What's that about a reboot? My father works in goods and I didn't hear anything.

RRBB

@RRBB: aww, sweetie :( Hope all goes well.

Rumor is probably fake. Reminds me of the "Twin Sister Cycle". That was a laugh.

LyraHands

@RRBB @LyraHands: I can't say much because I'll get some ponies in trouble, but so far it seems pretty real!

Now I don't know much details, but S.Child is forming a new team. From what I heard two things are being discussed: a total reboot of the series with a new set of characters, and a continuation of the old series. Somepony I'm close to said that S.Child wanted a totally new series in a new world with new characters. She said they're calling it the Famous Five. The other thing they are considering is a merging of worlds after the end of volume 7.

And yes, hope you aren't grounded for long. Did you win?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: a few bruises, but you should see the other gal ;) I'm fine, seriously. And even if I end up grounded, I'll still sneak from Paint's device. We're in the same class, so there's that.

Argh! The Famous Five is the worst idea ever! Not that the other one is good. It's like the stunt they pulled between the original series and Mistmount Chronicles. :( I get it that ten years passed between volumes, back then, but what's the deal now? Mistmount ended half an year ago. :/ I really hope that's a hoax.

RRBB

@PrinceEric: that would suck. Totally sounds fake. Would still suck, though.

New characters would be such a waste. The old ones are perfect. Plus, Brush will get a heart attack if they killed Bellucio. Although, interesting if they take the descendant approach. That might be cool. The current cast are married and successful and whatnot, and the Famous Five are their kids? I could see it happening, especially if we have cameos now and and then.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: hissss!

@PrinceEric: I still love you, so you're forgiven.

Brush

Okay, please stop with the theories. I'll create a Rumors section. Please only discuss theories there.

LyraHands

Rumors 1

Hey, Nightlings!

Here's your very own Rumors section. Please discuss rumors here and not in the general section. Theories are still okay, but anything related to new books, scrolls, products, and such go here.

I have PrinceEric's post some more thought. Honestly, things might not be as bad as my initial reaction. I remember the first time Mistmount Chronicles came out. Hay, was I skeptical back then... I even bought three bottle of red ink to mark all the "weaknesses" in the first scroll and "fix" the story. I think I still saw one of them unopened when I cleaned my room.

(On a sidenote I might be moving soon. Prices in Canterlot are unimaginable, and my part time job doesn't cover it. Nothing is certain for now. I'll let you know if there are any changes.)

Moving on, the Mistmount Chronicles had a bumpy start, but have become great, bringing in a whole new fanbase. If S.Child does things right, as I'm sure she would, I think we’ve got nothing to worry about.

LyraHands

Not sure if this is related, but have you noticed that both the series original and the reboot start with the same letters? _M_idnight _C_astle, _M_istmount _C_hronicles. What if the next series name is also something? Moving Continents? Magic Contained?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: MixaMax x Candle? Poor Candle... :(

Brush

@Brush: ha ha! Look who's talking. Projecting much?

MixaMax

@PrinceEric: out of curiosity, where did you get your information? I know a few ponies I could ask about such stuff.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: I've been going out with a filly whose parents work in an events promotion company. She knows I'm into this stuff, and I guess she wanted to impress me. Please, don't ask me about names and specifics. I don't want to get her in trouble.

PrinceEric

Good afternoon,

The information intrigues me and I did some checking. I can confirm that both "Famous Five" has been booked as a aethernet domain, as have been "Worlds of Tomorrow", "Mirestorm Chimera", "Boys United", and "Everhere". All domains are blank, but I managed to trace them back to a subsidiary of Scroll & Sword, who hold the rights to the Midnight Castle series.

Now, this is nothing concrete. Since it's standard practice for companies to take the domain names of their popular franchises to prevent someone else from stealing them. It does bring some credit to PrinceEric's claims, however.

Hope that was helpful.

P.S. I've almost completed the filter. In addition will be adding spoiler functionality so we can discuss things without ruining the experience for new users.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: thanks., you're the best! That brings a whole lot of questions. If one of the titles is the name of the new series we already have a hint what it's about! We've already discussed Famous Five and Worlds of tomorrow, but what about the rest?

Here's my take:

Mirestorm Chimera - my favorite because of MixaMax's theory of the naming convention.
The Felina Corporation has managed to corrupt Hades and now he's become the Gr8's enemy. Danny must find a way to bring him back to his senses.

Boys United - 5 years after the present series. The Gr8 have started living their own lives, but some event forces them to get back together and fight a new evil.

Everhere - hmm. Not sure about this one. Maybe Eric messed up with the portal and the Gr8 ended up stranded in another world, maybe even Equestria?

What do you girls think?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: pone, you really should read the first Mistmount series...

Mirestorm Chimera: you've pretty much described the first chapter of the book. Only difference being, we didn't know about the corp back then. Of the three gods, Hades was corrupt (the idea is still touched upon in later chapters), Poseidon was missing, and Zeus was imprisoned in ice and only appears in Danny's dreams. Pretty much the reason for the Gr8 to form was Danny's visions along with Caprice, who breaches the portals to warn them of Hades' awakening.

Boys United: you've described the second worst type of MC fanfics. Everyone has achieved their dreams, yet something happens requiring them to get together again and juggle fighting evil with their new responsibilities? Pone, seriously? The target audience is young colts! Nopony will want to read Bellucio does his taxes in between fighting an evil greater than the magic corporations. Granted the title doesn't help either. I've seen less cheese in a cheese factory.

Everhere: you've described the worst type of MC fanfic. That's worse than having a mare "accidentally" go to earth and pretty much seduce all the Gr8 (Megan and Molly included). I know I give Brush a hard time, but damn, she can write! Even if there are elements of wish fulfillment, her stories are logical and well written. What you are saying is pretty much a whole series written in the fashion of Hooves of a Stranger (chapter 3, series 1) which was the worst chapter of the entire franchise!

I still think it's a hoax. I don't see S&S publishing anything of that franchise anytime soon.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: not that I don't agree, but maybe use a smile or two? PrinceEric is still a schoolcolt. No need to go all Nightmare on him. ;)

@PrinceEric: the name that works best for me is Everhere, precisely because it could be anything. Call me stupid, but I love such stuff. Read it out loud. Seriously, just do it and listen how it sounds. It's so mystical I can see merhumans making an appearance.

LyraHands

That's some good reasoning, PrinceEric. Once again, I admire your enthusiasm, and energy. Unfortunately, I must agree with MixaMax. The names are most probably stock names, and while Everhere does have some appeal, I doubt it's catchy enough for a wider audience. Boys United sounds more suitable for a teenage audience, which I hope isn't what Scroll & Sword are going for.

Number-wise, it makes financial sense for them to try and diversify the brand. The series, while selling well, is nowhere as popular as the Daring Do franchise or the other big hitters. I fear they might go back to their roots and take a more Midnight Castle approach, while keeping the characters.

The TechNightling

Scroll & Sword is based in Manehattan, right? I think there might be someone I could ask about this. @The TechNightling: can you find me some info on the editor?

RRBB says hi. She didn't get grounded for that fight. Instead, she dot grounded for getting an A-. Her punishment should last till the end of the week.

PaintDrop

I like Boys United. ;P

Brush

Chapter One Discussions

I started reading Mistmount Chronicles. So far have only gone through the first two chapters, but i have some issues I'd like to address.

Is the spoiler filter working, or do I need to post in the Rumors section?

PaintDrop

Hello PaintDrop,

Unfortunately, I haven't finished poking the code. CodeFilly has been a lot of help, but we decided to scrap the old approach for something that would allow us greater flexibility for future updates. We're aiming to implement it tonight. Until then, I leave it to your discretion.

The TechNightling

@all: Check out the new fancy Mod command CodeFilly made for me? :P
On a serious note, PrinceEric and Candle are the only ones that haven't read the start of Mistmount Chronicles, so it's up to them to say. I'm fine with whatever (as long as you respect the safe work principle)

LyraHands

I'm don't care. i'll know what to look for while reading :D

@LyraHands: is it okay for you to still send me the first series? I'll be going to Canterlot on a one week exchange program, so can grab them there.

PrinceEric

This might be fun. Maybe we can have a separate section for full analysis and reviews? It's somewhat spoilery, but could be cool. I know There are a few things I want to say about Brush and Candle's stories.

@RRBB: sorry, but I just can't read your stuff. I really tried, but your Danny Saga is not my bowl of oats. Sorry, kiddo.

CEOWitch

@PaintDrop: I don't mind.

@CEOWitch: I'm not sure. I'm still uncomfortable talking about my work. :(

Candle

Candle,

Sorry, I forgot to mention that I finished reading your stories. I definitely think you have potential. I'll go into more detail in private, but I just want to openly say that you should have more self-esteem. Your greatest problem, I think, stems from your fear of consequences. Let me the first to tell you that, it is no longer possible for anypony to find your identity unless you tell them (which I strongly advise anyone against).

I would also like to ask you to send me a draft of your work before editing, so I can see your flow then.

Cheers,

The TechNightling

Very well. I'll start my rant. If anyone feels there are too many spoilers, just tell me and I'll delete the post.

So, starting with the beginning. We are introduced to a small town (city?) called Mistmount located, incidentally, next to a mountain of the same name. The main character (Danny) is an ordinary human who lives with his two sisters (Megan and Molly), suddenly receives a calling in the form of a pegasus who flies from Equestria to tell him he must save two worlds.

I'll forgive the basic "unwilling hero" cliche, since the story was written rather well considering it's a foal's book. Yet, the whole concept is so unbelievable. I understand that humans are probably different, but what parent would leave their children alone like that? We only know he has parents thanks to a two sentence description of the family picture in the living room.

No offense to anypony, but only a colt would fall for that. Danny, by my estimates, is somewhere in high school. Molly his older sister is working as an intern in a corporation, and his younger sister Megan is said to be too young to work. I'll say that she is about cutie mark age.

How does someone just go on a crazy adventure like that without thinking of any consequences? Sure, they are children (they are written like grown up foals), but still there could be a bit more realism. They never work and yet they always have money! This is precisely why I avoid colt fiction in general. They provide some grand adventure and don't bother with the small details. I swear to the stars, Brush's stories are ten times better!

Moving on. Danny learns that his dreams are actually the only means for him to talk to Zeus, who is an ancient deity who everyone's forgotten about, yet at the same time information could be found in the first public library! I'm amazed they didn't find out through an aethernet search.

Danny gathers five random people, who he's hardly met before, and makes them enter an abandoned mine in the mountain. The total trust thing I can understand. It’s also a nice touch that Zeus is imprisoned there and can only reach out to people in the city. But, why are the magic corps letting it play out without interfering? It's almost as if they don't care.

I don't know, girls. I'm not sure I can go on. :(

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: read chapters 5, 11, 10, and 4. In that order.

Brush

@PaintDrop: you mixed up the sisters :P Megan is the older one. Molly is the kid with a crush on Bellucio.

And for the most part you are right. The guest serious is notorious for missing out "life details." For the most part it's the world and the characters who pulled me in. To make any real sense of things, you have to read them in the order Brush suggested, then continue chronologically. If you still don't like it, maybe MC is not for you.

The problem (well, it isn't exactly a problem) is again the target audience. Colts, especially that age, don't care about mundane details. They just want adventure, action, fights, and sexy mares when they get older. Think of their minds as a checklist. Stallions like checking things off. They can't stand the idea that there's something connecting everything so the lack of connection doesn't bother them.

MixaMax

@PaintDrop: no offense, but you're a kid. Just because something exists doesn't mean it has to be explained. What MixaMax said could pass, but there's one other thing: minimum load.

In the military there are two things that are key: fly light and only have the essentials. If everything is described the stories will become boring (as Mixa said) and also each chapter will be the size of a small book. Not many readers will pick it up, even if they could afford the price.

Here's an example. If I ask "how do I get to Canterlot?" you don't start describing wind currents, airspeed velocity, training paths, and such; you just say "fly over X, make a turn at Y, and you'll see it atop the mountain." Same thing in MC. There's enough plausibility not to bother with the small stuff. We know the great eight have parents, we know that money isn't an issue for most of them, we assume they intake and exhale...

CEOWitch

@MixaMax

Think of their minds as a checklist. Stallions like checking things off. They can't stand the idea that there's something connecting everything so the lack of connection doesn't bother them.

Life makes so much more sense now.

@CEOWitch: and you sound like a bitchy stallion. Are you sure you didn't typo your username?

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: a Brush can dream...

Brush

Bob

Cassandra started at the door. I'm not supposed to be here. She shifted her weight from her left foot the right. Her brother had spend years trying to destroy the power within the house, her father—decades. Both of them had warned her of the consequences were she to approach any of the chosen. She had a career to worry about, a future. A few more years and the protectors would surely fall, leaving her father to fulfill the Titan pact and become Prince-ruler of Earth. None would be able to stand to him then—not the pack of children, not the gods, not even the whole of Equestria. Cassandra would see her family rise and reap all the benefits that came with it—power, knowledge, fame, any consort she'd like. And yet there was one thing that would be lost for her.

"It was a mistake coming." She looked away. "I'm an idiot."

"Of that we're in agreement," a voice said. A form flickered in front of the door, changing from invisible to semi-transparent, to the Megan herself.

Cassandra bit her lip.

"Did you really think I wouldn't sense you, Cass?" Megan crossed her arms. She was dressed in her pajamas—cheap cotton things that could be found in every store—staring intently at Cassandra. "Does the CEO know you’re here?"

"I—" Cassandra but her lip. Why am I feeling nervous? I have the strength to level this house in a blink of an eye. "I just wanted to see if you're alright." She could feel sweat covering her forehead. "I— damn it, Meg!" She turned her head briskly to the side, her long black hair waving as she did. "Why must you be so dense!"

That's it, Cassandra thought. I've said goodbye to my corporate future, my family, my self-esteem... why not add a heart to the mix? Not like I'd—

"You always were an idiot, Cass." Megan put her hand on Cassandra's shoulder. "Give me a minute to change."

---

Hello, losers :P

I'm Bob, and while I don't like the series too much, I certainly could use the fics. And we seem to have a celebrity here (notice me, Brush!).

Looking forward to all your love and arrows :)

Bob

@Bob: I only notice stallions. *snort*

...so, are you a stallion, bby? ;)

Brush

@Bob: marry me! @.@

Welcome to our Midnight Castle corner, and girl are we glad to have you here. You really touched on an interesting oat of the series. So little is said about the CEO's daughter that it's ridiculous. I must say I've been fantasizing about something similar for a while, but I never managed to get Brush to write it.

Have you read any of the series, by the way?

LyraHands

Hello Bob,

Welcome to Midnight Castle. I hope you enjoy it here. Be sure to check the Help and Rules sections, or ask here if you have any questions.

The TechNightling

We have a Rules section?

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: yes. Since yesterday. Nothing major has changed. If there are new things, one of us will make an announcement to let you know :)

In the meantime continue to have fun. Oh, and when will you post your stories, CEOWitch? I'm sure people would be curious to see. :)

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: how did you know I had stories?

CEOWitch

I'm a code filly. What did you expect? ;)

CodeFilly

@Bob: OMG! Can I draw for you? I've pretty much finished doing illustrations for Brush (oh why are you so good, Brush?! :)) so could start focusing on other fics. Wow, is that scene hot! Please PM what happens next.

PaintDrop

I almost forgot. RRBB got into another fight today, so I'm not sure she'll be able to connect in the next few days. I'll try to see her after school, but from what I heard it might be a while before she comes back to school or sets hoof outside her room.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: :/ The usual target? I've told her a thousands times not to do stupid stuff like that!

Ask her if she wants me to intervene.

LyraHands

@PaintDrop: I'm on business in ManeHattan so I could lend a wing as well. I have some influence in the education system.

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: No offense, but I don't know you well enough to share personal details.

@LyraHands: Thanks, I'll ask.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Sorry to hear that. :( I like RRBB's Danny Saga a lot. Hope she gets things resolved, and tell her hello from a fan.

Bob

@Brush @Bob: What's this? Brush has competition? Please tell me you aren't obsessed with stallions. Equestria wouldn't survive two Brushes. Time and space would collapse, transforming everything into a huge harem herd! :P

Bob, who's your favorite humie?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Wow! :P Well, Brush can sleep safely. I'm not into stallions. And I don't write as well. Guess Equestria lives another day, eh? Would have been awkward to have Twilight knock on my door to ask me to quit the site for the sake of Equestria. :P

Favorite human? Let me think on this. Hmm. Nope, nope... can't think of anyone. :P It's Cassandra. I have a thing for marginal characters. They give lots of freedom to shape them as you wish. And I totally see her having a crush on Megan. Megan isn't too bad either.

Bob

@Bob: whaaaat?! I love Cassandra! Well, okay, I love all of them... O:) But Cassandra is the hawt! Have you seen the collector cards? They were around when Mistmount Chronicles launched. Didn't sell that well so were discontinued. There were a Felina corp cycle among them, including one of Cassandra (at the time she was referred to as CEO Witch Cassandra). She was really ba-dum!

LyraHands

@LyraHands: I remember that one. There was a lot of speculation on the aethernet what she'll be. Originally it was "leaked" she'd be a commander of the sorceress squads. So much for that theory.

CEOWitch

@PaintDrop: sorry to ask this, but can you draw an original human character for me? Money's no problem. I think that'll be a sweet thing to have.

Bob

@PaintDrop: I want one too! Also, can you do a humanized version of your brother? O:)

Brush

Girls... *sighs* you're lucky you write so well... and that I'm so twisted. >:) I'll be starting a humie version of my brother as soon as I finish Brush's illustrations. I might also do some humie versions of other ponies as well. Hmm...

@The TechNightling @CodeFilly @LyraHands: any chance of having an art section?

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: not for the moment :( Art will have to remain hosted links only. I've paid for the most minimal aether package. That might change in a few weeks (as in I'll either have enough money or I'll be moving back to my parents’ place). Start drawing and I'll see what I can do, okay? ;)

LyraHands

You girls are the best! Love it here already!

Bob

The Questionnaire

Since we're becoming a nice little group I think a questionnaire is in order. ;) Before Lyra bites my tail off, keep in mind that revealing any personal info is a big no-no. I personally am fine with revealing my race and sex. Age and location—not so much.

Here goes:

Race: unicorn
Sex: mare
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Eric
Favorite pony: Caprice
Favorite deity: Poseidon
Favorite background character: Hercules (I have a thing for scrawny tech geeks with glasses)
Favorite chapter: It Shines For All
Favorite quote: "Have a water bottle" - Eric

Go wild! :D

MixaMax

Good initiative, MixaMax!

It's a pity that you still can't appreciate the original series. Hopefully, one day we get to do a reading. Did you try the original chapters I suggested?

On another note, Lyra, I have found a complete first series collection in relatively good condition (better than what I originally thought I outdo give you). I do not dare send it through the standard mail, though. I'll look into dedicated courier services and get back to you.

Now the quiz:

Race: unicorn
Sex: stallion (married with foals)
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Megan
Favorite pony: Tie between Caprice and Fireblaze
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: Athena
Favorite chapter: Cannot decide
Favorite quote: "Don't chew when you eat!" - Molly

The TechNightling

Race: pegasus
Sex: dazzling sexy supermodel mare (just saying O:))
Favorite humie (Mistmount): My Bellucio
Favorite pony: Caprice
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: Dirk the football captain
Favorite chapter: It's Difficult Being Bellucio
Favorite quote: "Zeus wishes he had my looks." - Bellucio

Brush

@The TechNightling: I'll borrow them from Handy. I promise to read through them again. Just for you ;)

@Brush: at least you didn't say you're a "sexy sexy beast" :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: buck you!

Brush

Yay! I love these. Not that I don't know most of you already :P Some of you I see every day.

Oh, oh! The craziest thing happened to me today! As I was going to work today, I saw Prince Blueblood in front of the palace gate, flirting with some snobby mares. So I said to my self "what the heck? My life is a mess as it is." So, as I passed by I said "Good morning, Bellucio."

Crazy, right? Well, it gets better! I was totally expecting him to give me a wut look. He didn't! He looked at me right in the eyes, then snorted with a shrug and said "At least it isn't Omni."

Yes! You read right! Prince Blueblood reads MC! *mind blown*

I think I told him about the site (the whole experience is still hazy). Here's to hoping he creates an account!

Name: Lyra Heartstrings
City: Canterlot (maybe not for long)
Race: unicorn
Sex: mare, almost as dazzling and sexy as Brush (just saying :P)
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Errrr
Favorite pony: Errrrrr!
Favorite deity: Umm
Favorite background character: Err, yeah, that one!
Favorite chapter: All of them!
Favorite quote: "We're here for each other!"

LyraHands

@LyraHands: him you can have...

Brush

Hey! This looks fun!

City: Cloudsdale
Race: Pegasus
Sex: Stallion
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Eric
Favorite pony: Cloud Thunder
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: Orpheus (CEO's nephew. I think he'll have a big role in the reboot.)
Favorite chapter: They are all so good...
Favorite quote: "It's a two in two." - Omni

PrinceEric

Well, RRBB managed to talk her way out of home imprisonment, but only because the math and physics test results came in (she got max points along with me and a few others).

@LyraHands: she told all is cool, but thanks you for the thought. Let us both know if you visit sometime. I know she could you some cheering up, and I have never talked to you face to face (well, not about such things, anyway :))

City: wouldn't you like to know?
Sex: mare
Race: alicorn wannabe
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Karl (so far)
Favorite pony: Fireblaze
Favorite deity: Poseidon (so far)
Favorite background character: Principal Ulysses (I like the way he talks)
Favorite chapter: still reading
Favorite quote: "With the speed of a sleeping arrow." - Danny

PaintDrop

@LyraHands: I get to see him all the time. Never took him for the type who reads Midnight Castle. No way I'm letting him live that down. :D I’ll be sure to casually mention it the next time I see him. Thanks, Lyra :)

City: Everywhere (seriously. I fly a lot because of work)
Race: pegasus
Sex: you're kidding, right?
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Blazen
Favorite pony: Caprice (not that there are many to choose from. S.Child is great as creating human characters, but her pony descriptions suck)
Favorite deity: Hades
Favorite background character: None
Favorite chapter: It's Difficult Being Bellucio
Favorite quote: "We're here for each other!"

CEOWitch

@MixaMax: Nice try.

@CEOWitch: I like Molly. So sorry :(

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: Come on! Seriously? :/ It's not like anypony will find you based on which characters you like. At times you're just too you. Live a little!

MixaMax

This must be my lucky day! Barely joined and I get to read all the juicy tidbits about you all :) I agree with the Tech that we should include original MC characters at one point (distinctions will have to be made with some of the names being reused for legal reasons).

City: Near Canterlot
Race: Earth Pony
Sex: Just a normal mare model (I kid :) I'm your average plumpish mare)
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Cassandra
Favorite pony: I don't like the ponies much. Maybe Luna?
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: Feather (griffons count too, right?)
Favorite chapter: Wrath of the CEO
Favorite quote: "Kiss me twice if you love me"

Bob

@Bob: where the heck did you read that? If there's such a quote somepony messed up big time. There's no way there'd be anything that suggestive in a series targeting young colts. I'm not sure there's even a Hearts and Hooves chapter.

MixaMix

@Bob: you're near Canterlot?! Let's meet!

LyraHands

Umm. I'm not too comfortable with the questions. Mostly because ponies make fun of me when they learn that I read colt fiction. :( Sorry. I'm from Manehattan and... ponies around here could be a bit harsh.

Candle

@Candle: send me a PM.

LyraHands

@MixaMax: just checking. :P Would have been nice to have such a quote, though ;)

@LyraHands: you're silly ;P

Bob

Rumors 2

Girls? I got some new info! (And am going totally crazy :D)
The series is confirmed! The first announcement will be in a few weeks, followed by a viral campaign. Still no idea what it'll be about. The only thing I know for sure is that there will be a new villain.

Speculation? I think it'll involve Titans.

PrinceEric

Thank you for the information, PrinceEric.

Although I'm still not convinced that a new series is on the way this soon after the last, especially with a new set of writers, I believe it's logical for there be a return to original series villains. Admittedly, the majority of those were cardboard caricatures of characters, but we also have some of the best fantasy villains in fiction (and not only colt fiction). Hera was a perfect example of a grand villainess. I really hope we see more of her. She had so much potential that never came to fruition.

I, unfortunately, have been too busy with work and the filter systems of the site to look into the matter.

The TechNightling

@PrinceEric: I don't know who your sources are, but you were right.

From what I learned there's going to be a heavy push on this one. The goal is to have it compete with the Daring Do series. A tall order, if you ask me. Daring Do the lucrative YA group and is exceptionally close to reality. Midnight Castle, for all its remarkable world and plot building, remains a humie fic series... and that still holds a stigma be it for colts or not.

Going back to what I learned:

The "Great Eight" will become the "Fine Nine."
Seems like a new cast member will join the group. There are no details, but I was lead to believe that it's possible for her to be a girl. (Maybe Bob's fiction will come true and we'll have Cassandra join the fold?)

There will be a new villain.
No surprises there. PrinceEric has also confirmed as much. The interesting part is that the new villain won't be an ancient evil, or an adversary their age, but "both". To be honest that has me completely stumped.

A set of collectible miniatures will emerge alongside the new series.
Personally, I'm surprised this hasn't happened already. Colts love playing with miniatures. My brother has an entire room filled with them. Without going into details, these ones are likely to be of extremely good quality. I'll poke RRBB to see if she can learn more... once she's completely ungrounded.

That's all I managed to get. I expect next week there might be more.

PaintDrop

I think I have an answer for your villain question, PaintDrop.

The way I read it, it sounds very much like they'll be rebooting a villain from the original. I only hope they don't mess things up like they did with Icelos. (Phobetor is an attempt at the same character, but with a different name.)

Also, congratulations, PaintDrop. You are now officially a Nightling... for better or worse. Here, have a water bottle.

The TechNightling

Argh! That's it! I'll just become somepony's slave now and save myself the agony.
New series? Miniatures? As if I didn't spend enough money on MC as it is. (Huge thanks, Tech. I might go bankrupt, but at least I'll have my own original collection.)

Brush, Bob, you ok I be your slave? CodeFilly is cheap as dirt! :P Maybe I should ask Prince Blueblood if he can use one more servant in the palace? He knows about MC, so he can't be all bad.

Seriously, though, great work! I'm drooling all over my screen just thinking about it!
curse my weak will and diminishing funds!

LyraHands

It's a hoax!

MixaMax

@The TechNightling: thanks. :) Coming from you that means a lot.

@LyraHands: if you're short on bits I can help out. You did create this place, after all.

PaintDrop

@LyraHands: Woooow! I'm offering my coding services for free, you know! :P

CodeFilly

@LyraHands: we seriously need to talk.

Bob

@PaintDrop: Wowowowow! You sure got a cool inside scoop! I'm so envious!

I told you how I get my info. I just hang around fillies and they tell me. (I may or may not be sort of charming in real life O:))

PrinceEric

@LyraHands: you can crash at my place anytime you want, girl. No slavery, though. :)

@PrinceEric: you little flirt! :P It's always the quiet ones, eh? Guess I know who to be careful round if we ever do a site meet-up!

@PaintDrop: name your price!

Brush

There will be an equivalent of the Wonderbolts, composed of mostly male characters with two exceptions. The new character will be someone from there.

Don't go around saying I don't know stuff :P

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: joining the bandwagon, are we? What you've just said is an educated guess that everypony can make by reading the posts so far. If you want any of us to take you seriously either name a source or give a unique detail that could be checked.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: what's your problem? Next you'll say I'm not a mare either.

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: Well, I haven't seen any proof so far!

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: As much as such a reaction might be merited, there's no need for such language. You've made your point, let's leave it at that, please.

@CEOWitch: while. I understand you're from a different environment, I really would like to ask you to make an effort to be less extreme. Several users have PMed me about you, which is a lot considering how small the group is. I still choose to believe that you bear no malice, but please make an extra effort.

As for your claim, some additional proof would be vastly appreciated.

Thank you.

The TechNightling

The new character will be announced during a Wonderbolt show in Manehattan next week. She will come as something of a surprise to fans of Mistmount Chronicles.

CEOWitch

@all: Please stop!

I happen to know who CEOWitch is and can assure they are no troll, nor do they want to impress, snub, or hurt anypony here. I know all this is a the result of miscommunication. CEOWitch is one of the nicest ponies I know in real life (even before I learned who they were on the site.)

With that I'm closing the matter!

LyraHands

Ungrounded

Freeeedom! Coltlaaand!

I finally have my access back. It's been a heck of a week (rip me :( ). One test goes wrong, the teacher is on my back (again!) and this annoying brat at school... Argh! I really hate her with all my heart! I'll write a horribly gory story how she's kidnapped by the Felina corp and cut up for dog food! (Ooops... Sorry, Tech. I pwomise to be a good fiwwy O:))

Seriously, though. I really can't stand brownnosers! Just because they bring apples to the teacher every week doesn't mean they can sick her on me every chance they get. And thanks to my latest outbursts, I have to be extra careful or my dad will ground me again. (Mom has completely stopped talking to me, by the way, but that's probably for the best.)

Anyway! Humies. :) PaintDrop has been telling me all the stuff going on. Coolness! Also, I've seen her sketches. I think after tomorrow Brush will be her eternal slave :) (PaintDrop's bro is pretty meh, but the humanized version of him... wow! Let's just say I see him in a totally new light. :P)

I'll be posting more Danny Saga sometime. I'll also check out the rumors.

@Brush: are you famous? :D

Argh! It's good to be back :) I missed you, you idiots ;)

RRBB

Oh, I almost forgot!

Race: earth pony 2.0
Sex: oh, stars, yes please!
City: half a dozen or so
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Danny! (Seriously, can't we petition Celestia to magic one up or something?)
Favorite pony: Caprice... I guess
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: Eric (:P )
Favorite chapter: It's Difficult Being Bellucio
Favorite quote: "My shoes aren't up here..." - Bellucio

Also, talking about rumors. If you can humanize anypony and put them in the series, who'd you go for?

I know this might sound weird, but I think LyraHands would fit right in. :)

RRBB

@RRBB: You're back! You never opened your PMs so I was worried. We've talked before about the issue. I'm not pushing you or anything, but I don't think you're handling it well.

And I so totally deserve to be on the show! *waves fists of justice*

LyraHands

Welcome back, RRBB.

To mark the occasion the spoiler and NSFW filters are fully functional. With the risk of being counterproductive I'd ask that you use it responsibly.

Since LyraHands is too modest, you can thank her for working on the framework of a tagging system. This will only be used for stories and search results. The task isn't as simple as you might think, so please give her some credit (and a few ice packs for her horn wouldn't hurt either).

The TechNightling

@RRBB: now, I don't want to sound like a bitch, but you know your mother can read this, right? I mean I was in another fandom and my CO stumbled on my profile and... let's just say that she still hasn't let me forget it.

Must the pony be alive? I think Mistmount Chronicles need a Starswirl character. Yes, I know there is constant t mention of the Morgan, but she barely gets two lines. Plus she and Starswirl together would kick ass.

My two bits.

CEOWitch

RRBB: Good one!
Did you know that most characters of the series are copies of ponies? At first I thought it was only the Gr8, but after talking with a friend of mine, we saw that there are others as well! Im hyper excited! The mistake I've been making is thinking that the character and the sides must match. They don't!

Now just imagine this: Twilight is the President of the Felina corporation. Forget about the whole evil thing, Zdrach behaves in exactly the same fashion: authoritative, obsessed with schedules, loves science, considers the corporation one big family.

I'm starting a human-to-pony chart, so if anyone wants to help, please go ahead! :)

@CEOWitch: That's so cool! I can see Morgan and Starswirl. Argh! Now I want that to become a thing in the next series.

What's a CO?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: it stands for Crevice Opener :P (just kidding :))

@CEOWitch: that's actually a good idea. Danny has a mentor in the face of Zeus, and Megan is his supportive sister, but he could really use a wiseman—someone totally doesn't care and is "just do this shit, yo!"

RRBB

@RRBB: I know exactly who you'd want to see in the story. :P

Unrelated: I finished the first volume of Mistmount Chronicles. It's actually nice, provided I read them in the suggested order. I know why they chose to sell them as a book of stories, but a set of chapters would have been better IMO. Are there any differences between the books and the collector scrolls? I'm thinking of buying those, but don't want to spend all that money if the S&S messed things up.

@Brush: I think I made a huge mistake :( Still not sure if that's good or not. You know how I was making a humanized sketch of my brother? Well, he found it. The problem is he also found my other sketches... along with your story. At this point we usually get into a cold sarcastic exchanges of opinions, but he actually liked them. And it gets better.

He recognized the setting and mentioned he was surprised that S.Child had decided to go in that direction. When I told him a friend of mine wrote this he was "No way!". It took me an hour to convince him I wasn't lying and that the author was a mare (Brush, for some reason he thinks you're the melancholic sensitive type. :))

Now, my brother's not the type to join a site (especially one full of mares obsessing over colt fiction) but he has expressed interest in reading more of your stuff. Do you have anything non-human related?

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Yesss! Bring him to meee! I don't know, what does he like reading? Also, is totally okay to put him in touch with me, if he's fine about it.

I'll leave my final judgement until I see your drawing, but he sounds like a total catch :D

@RRBB: I'm marginally famous, but prefer not to talk about it.

And if Lyra can enter the series, so should I!

Brush

@PrinceEric: You're insane, you know that? :)

You had to mention Twilight... Now each time I see her I'll imagine her saying something like "Send out the sorceress squads!" or "Did you get the impossibility stone!" Thanks Eric... :/

@RRBB: You really need to be a bit more careful. I heard what happened at school. This isn't the place to discuss it, but take care, okay?

@Brush: somepony scored! If we pass by your place will there be horseshoes in front of the door? Oh, and don't forget to let him say a few words before you start with the nuzzling. :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: No! The moment I see him I'll kill the air out of his lungs then proceed to extreme snuggling in the street!

Oh, and buck you!

Brush

Brush PMs

Good morning, Brush.

Sorry for contacting your out of the blue, but your stories have enchanted me. I actually remember Midnight Castle from when I was a foal. At the time they were one of the few colt fiction stories available, and the only ones with any depth, so I did enjoy them considerably. Don't tell my sister, but I have a first edition signed collection of volumes one and two. (My parents are quite well off and despite their strictness they have always pampered me considerably.)

I must ask, have you written anything before? There are some minor grammar issues, and certain phrasings could be better, but your fiction is nothing short of inspiring. The way you merge emotion and action is something I've rarely seen before; and I'm talking as a soon to be literature graduate. I'm not exaggerating, when I say you're better than many published authors.

Hoping and looking forward to your reply,

MasterOfThisAstra

Thanks :) I always enjoy when pones like my writing. I'm not anywhere near prof level. :D which of my stories have you read?

Brush

All of them, actually. I'm PaintDrop's brother. Maybe I should have mentioned that earlier. She did a printout of all your stories and is doing artworks for them. I just happened to stumble upon them yesterday and, well, got hooked.

To be perfectly honest, I found the notion of my sister visiting a Midnight Castle forum alarming at first. The majority of such places are, honestly speaking, quite suggestive. And her best friend isn't a good influence on her either. I must admit, though, after reading your work, and some of the others', I'm rethinking my stance on the matter.

You most definitely write well, and I'm being a hundred percent objective here. My sister can easily ace college level essays, and her friend, as much as I hate to admit it, is a competent editor, but none of them come close to your work. Even I don't think I could pull that off.

MasterOfThisAstra

Omg! You're PaintDrop's brother?! Never thought you'd join the site! :))) Guess I owe her a story, huh?

PaintDrop said you wanted to read something non-humie. I have a few of those, but they're really crap. No prob to write something dedicated, just tell me what you're into :)

Brush

That's remarkably sweet of you. Before I make a request, there's something I'd like to ask you. Apologies in advance for being insensitive. Are you really a mare? Your writing seems way too gentle and sensitive, almost hurting, to be a mare.

MasterOfThisAstra

Lol! No worries, I get that a lot. I've lost count how many times fans have hit on me thinking I'm a stallion. (You know there are no stallions on the net :P) What about you? Are you really a stallion?

Brush

Yes, I most certainly am. And my parents never let me forget it. Sorry for going on a rant, but this is pretty much one of the few times I get to talk to a mare without my parents going all alicorn on me. Don't misunderstand, I love my parents, and I am grateful to them, but they have outdated views on certain things, sons in particular. While my sister gets free reign, along with all the shouts and groundings that includes, I'm treated as a fragile bunny that would shatter if I set one hoof out of home. Little wonder they sent me to a Celestial College.

Sorry, I tend to rant a lot at times. For some reason I feel you're somepony who'd understand.

Thanks for listening.

MasterOfThisAstra

Oh :( You don't get out much, do you? A close friend of mine had really restrictive parents. She rebelled, doing the craziest things ever, to the point they just let her do what she wanted. Guess it's different being a stallion.

Not that it's not cool, but are you okay sharing this with a pony you've just met?

Brush

I think I know you better than you think. You put a lot in your writing. For one thing, I strongly suspect you really are a pegasus. Also, you seem more hurt than you let others think. I wouldn't be surprised if you hide behind a mask (trust me, I know all about that). I also think that you're much older than my sister, or at least have gone through a lot more experiences than her, not all of them pleasant I think.

Sorry, professional inclination. What I'm trying to say is, can I read something by you? I mean the real you. It doesn't have to be human, though I'll read it even if it is.

Again, I don't want to come as pushy or strange, but your writing resonates strongly with me, all much so that you're a mare. No offense, but most of those I've met were jerks or snobs, or both.

MasterOfThisAstra

I don't know what to say. You've read my stuff, right? As you've seen it's a bit... extremely snugly. What am I saying? Glass of Water has a ten page scene of the characters fucking like rabbits. Are you sure you want to read my unedited works? Pones in the forum joke a lot, but some of them have read the stuff I haven't put online... and they agree there's a reason for that.

Brush

You really don't have to try and shock me. My parents will find you despicable, I'm sure. Just because I'm a stallion doesn't mean I'll faint after reading erotica. And I have no idea how the conversation got here. I usually don't go so far out. I still want to read more of your works, and maybe even sneak a meeting with you?

MasterOfThisAstra

Hold on. You are asking me out?! *confused look* I thought your parents were all strict and such.

Brush

Stallions can do that, you know. As for my parents, what they don't know won't hurt them.

MasterOfThisAstra

Where have you been all my life? :D

Brush

I can't believe I wrote that. I was so convinced you'd laugh me off as a fancolt. Who knew what desperation could achieve?

MasterOfThisAstra

*nuzzles* Disappointed?

Brush

Not on your life! *wink*
I think this hasn't sunk in yet, though. Tartarus, my parents would be so pissed. Nopony's ever good enough for their little prince. I have an important exam, so no chance I'll be home for the next week... so want to meet once I'm back from college?

Hope you are okay with me being an earth pony.

MasterOfThisAstra

Please, stop my pounding heart! *faints*
Whenever you can I'm cool. Just keep in mind I'm different in real life, so don't be expecting a mare in shining armor. :P

Brush

Too late. I'll write to you when I get the chance.

See you soon.

MasterOfThisAstra

Rumors 3

Well, girls, we can make it official. A new MC series is confirmed. :D (Yay!)

@PrinceEric: I’m impressed. Well, only a bit. I think I know how you got your info (if so you’re damn sneaky :P ). Just to close the topic, does her name start with a C?

And now the juicy stuff! (Don't’ think for a moment that I won’t be using it in my next Danny Saga story! :P ) The Next series is scheduled to hit the stores exactly at midnight on Nightmare’s Night. Miniatures (yes, they have been confirmed) will start appearing six months before that, which makes it likely the first ones to appear in less than a month from now. (I seriously recommend you buy the early ones as fast as possible since they are promo editions and will be released in extremely limited quantities)

@LyraHands: No worries, I’ll buy you a set and you can repay me when you have a chance. ;) For everypony else, I’ll need money in advance. (I’m estimating the figurines would be somewhere around 50-100 bits each).

I’ve no idea what the actual story will be. From what I’ve heard the first miniatures will come with spoiler fliers which will have some hints, but nothing too spoilery. Still no idea about the name :/ All I got is that it’s referred to as “Codename: Starshine”

@The TechNightling: Think you can dig on anything with that? They are bound to have a site by now.

@MixaMax: In your face deskbucker! :P

RRBB

@RRBB: Not fair! You could have given me the scoop before I started writing this chapter. Now I don’t know if Bellucio will be in the next series or not. *sad humie*

Brush

@Brush: Aaaaah! My bad, Brushy. You know better than to ask. Fly right over and we could discuss how to take over the world together! :P (Just be sure it’s a weekend and you know who doesn’t learn about it.)

RRBB

@RRBB: You caught me. One of the names is C :) Do you know her? If you come in my part of Equestria let me know and we can meet?

Great info! I’m not interested in the miniatures, but the rest sounds really interesting. If anypony gets them, please share the flier text? Would be fun to speculate what we’ll find in the series.

Let’s speculate now! :D I think they’ll move from the mountain. It’s still not sure where Poseidon is (it was mentioned that might only be his spiritual vessel and the real him is hidden somewhere else.) I think the series will take place in a desert!

PrinceEric

@RRBB: Language! Brush, you’ve clearly been a bad influence on her.

Also, I’m still not convinced this isn’t an elaborate hoax…. A very elaborate hoax.

MixaMax

Thanks for the information, RRBB.

Great find. I did some digging. There is something called Starshine – an aether domain registered under a company that was created less than a month ago. I haven’t been able to find any information on that company which leads me to believe it’s a copyright front.

Other domains the company has registered include:
Desertfox, Shadowstar, and Sorrowchild.

Sadly that’s still not much, since the names are generic in regard to colt fiction. The reason I’m inclined to believe they are MC related is the fact that there are no doublings as of yet. Whoever registered the domains, made sure that there aren’t any existing ones, and that in itself is impressive (and expensive). Of course, there’s no guarantee that some other book series hasn’t taken the names for their own.

The TechNightling

Desertfox

I knew it! It’s going to be in a desert! I can’t wait to read it! I’ve always loved deserts! Do you think they’ll face sand golems? Or corporate stronghold? I’m so excited!

PrinceEric

My sources are a bit unwell, so I won't be able to get anything more for the time being.

RRBB: grab me a set of miniatures when you can. I'm curious to see how they've done the humans. I asked my parents to get me a professional clay set so I'll start making human clay models soon. Brush gets the first good one.

PaintDrop

@RRBB: I love you! :D You've probably condemned me to a life of poverty, but I still love you! :D

@PrinceEric: forgive the lack of enthusiasm. We've been through this before with the last MC volume. There were a lot of speculations and rumors flying around, then it had nothing to do with it. A friend of mine told me that publishing houses sometimes spread fake info when they want to limit leaks.

LyraHands

I might know somepony to ask, but I'm really uncomfortable about this. Sorry :(

Candle

@Candle: no sweat. It's not like we'll have to wait for much :) The moment the miniatures are out we'll have lots of material to kill each other over :P You just take care of yourself. Okay?

RRBB

I've actually seen some of the miniatures, and they are not that good. :( I mean they are okay sort of, but no Daring Do collectible. The posters are something else. I've already got three and might try to get one more. If there are any left after the event I'll get some for you girls as well.

If anypony happens to be in Manehattan for the Wonderbolt gig let me know, okay?

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: okay, I'll bite. If I go there, how do I recognize you?

RRBB

All this makes no sense! Why in Equestria will they start their campaign so early?!? There's eight months till Nightmare Night. Even with popular books the hype machine usually starts up to three months before release. There's absolutely no way for anyone to maintain that, even S&S.

That aside... miniatures? You must be bucking kidding me! Who the heck buys miniatures of a series they know nothing about. The only way I see it is if the miniatures are free gifts. 50 bits?! I can buy a mug for that much! With any picture I want!

There's no denying this looks legit, but it makes no bucking sense! Either that or is the most elaborate hoax ever! Do you think Pinkie Pie is behind this?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Don't even joke about that!

RRBB

@MixaMax: there's a scary thought.

PaintDrop

@MixaMax: Hey!

Brush

@MixaMax: oh, you :P Pinkie's not that bad. Might be fun if she put in all that effort to prank us. If it turns out a Pinkie Prank, I'll personally make her a special Mod on the site. :)

LyraHands

Minor Update

Girls, I have some huge announcements to make!

First, let me thank The TechNightling and CodeFilly for rewriting mess and making it usable. We now have a solid and fast system that is secure and can withstand infinite updates with minimum rewrites. I strongly recommend you change your user passwords. I've no idea what might have happened while I did the code, and don't want to risk it!

My horn has melted off, but I finally managed to get the tagging system working. Thanks to CodeFilly for lending a hoof and free pizza (love you, babe!). From now on please add all the respective tags as you post your stories. For the moment, I've only added the most basic of the basic. If you want new tags just poke me.

Be sure to tag all NSFW fics as NSFW

I'm in talks with somepony who's good in art to help out with the site UI. Might cost me a bit, but since it's a onetime expense I'm cool (especially since RRBB will be paying for my MC miniatures :P)

After some talks with Tech and CodeFilly, we've decided it's a shame not to use PaintDrop's art. (I bet Brush will be too drolly for the next of the day to post :P) So anypony can link one pic to fic. Links still have to be external :(

With that, I wish you a good day! I'm off to work after spending the whole night coding (Celestia take me now! :((( )

LyraHands

@LyraHands: *drool* *drool* *drool* Oh, you said something, kettle?

@PaintDrop: Your bro is sooo cuuute! *drool intensifies* The things I can do with him... O:) Also you're quite cool yourself. I bet you're popular with the colts at school ;)

Brush

A small additional announcement.

We've also added the option to link music files to fics. Now you can also provide background music to set the ambience for your readers.

NSFW applies to pictures and music, so be sure to tick the checkbox where needed.

CodeFilly

What is NSFW?

Candle

@Candle: Not Safe For Woona! :P

RRBB

@RRBB: :) I actually meant what is considered NSFW? I work in a field that has a lot of provocative elements. I've often found that when talking to ponies out of Manehatten I say things that appear shocking, which is weird because I'm usually called the shy one.

Candle

Good question, Candle!

The rule of hoof is that if it gets you in trouble at work it's best not to post it. On your case, though, this might not apply. I remember you having some surprising scenes in the latest fic you sent me. Now I understand why.

I'll be adding a new tag called Borderline. It's a temporary measure until I can talk to LyraHands and CodeFilly about the matter in depth.

Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

The TechNightling

@Brush: he's my brother, but he can be such a drama king. :P I'm joking. He's nice if extremely sheltered.

You can say I have no problem with colts... if only the ones at school weren't such shallow airheads :/ I can't wait to get in college. Maybe there I'll meet somepony adequate.

Do you want more pics? I'm working on Bob's story, but I always have time for you :) Let me know if you want any of your pics redone.

PaintDrop

@RRBB: Pfft. You'll be amazed at the things I see at night.

Luna

@Luna: maybe I can share a peek? :P

@PaintDrop: you know I can't say no, but you've done so much already. *jumps with joy* Also, I think I'll be fine seeing your pics for Bob.

@Bob: you game for a collab? :)

Brush

@Luna: Oh, my. :P That's a very naughty thing to say, Your Highness. I never knew you were a fan of Midnight Castle.

RRBB

@Brush: I don't usually do this, but... I'll see what I can do. Just for you :)

@RRBB: You have no idea how boring it gets on the moon. Also humies are fun :D

Luna

@Brush: I thought you'd never ask. :D I see a great F-M-M triangle forming. It will be glorious! Bwahahahaha! Sure thing. I think it will be great. Maybe we can wait to see if the next series is a thing and go with that?

@Luna: uh-oh...

Bob

@Bob: Don't you uh-oh me, "Bob!"

Luna

Impersonating royalty? I can get you arrested! Do you know what they do to impersonators in prison? I hear they Pierce their tongue and ears, then throw them naked in the cold! You won't last an hour let alone a day!

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: No! I'll arrest you!

Great use of quote :) You really know your stuff.

Don't worry, girls. I'm not here to cause problems, just for fun and amusement. Surprised it took me so long to find a Midnight Castle fansite. There are over fifty Daring Do ones, twice that much for the action comic series, but none for MC :( Well, apart from this one ;)

Luna

Omg! It's a honor to have you here, Princess! :) Let me be the... fourth *shakes fistt at Brush, Bob, and CEOWitch* to welcome you to our humble site. I'll do everything in my power to ensure your stay is comfortable and eternal :)

LyraHands

@Luna: no way! :) We have Luna!

Btw, I think Luna totally has a thing for Eric! Well, not a thing, thing... more like a mentor-student thing. So far nearly all the Dream warnings she has sent have been to him, even after The Dream Stone. Maybe that's how Eric knows what's going on in Canterlot without going there? Also, I'm almost convinced Eric's pet bat is in fact one of Luna's batponies. There's no other reason for the bat to get so much attention (87 mentions so far, and I've still not finished reading Vols 1 and 2 of Mistmount Chronicles!

PrinceEric

@LyraHands: Well, you always were one of my favourites :)

@PrinceEric: Aren't you the enthusiastic one *pats on head*

Actually, I'll be making several appearances in the upcoming series. I can only say: good catch on the bat ;)

Luna

Here we go again...

PaintDrop

Author's Notes:

I managed to last till day 15 :)

To mark the occasion, and than all of you for your patience and comments, I'm going to do a character AMA.

Please write in the contents who (other than Luna) you'd like to go first :) At the next update I'll open a blog on the subject and answer all questions gathered there till the weekend :)

The blog will NOT be posted as a chapter, but everything said there is "cannon" :P

Site Collab and Other Horrors

"Bellucio," she whispered. He wasn't there.

His bed left untouched, posters of his commercials arranged neatly on the wall beside it—three soft drink commercials and a second place in a semi-pro model contest. Caprice remembered that time. She had used magic to tell him, but ultimately Bellucio had decided to play it honest, rejecting a guaranteed winner for a quick punk hairstyle in the last hour.

"You looked so stupid then," Caprice chuckled as she sat on the bed. "All your friends said so. All my friends said so, but you didn't care."

Back then caprice had been a pony, drowning in her attraction by him. She knew she loved him, just as she knew he never would... not in the way she wanted. Thinking they'd be anything more than friends had been a foolish dream, a hopeless desire, and yet she had gotten her chance. A single wish upon the most magical of items and she had changed her body, casting away her wings for him. It had been everything she wished, everything she could hope for, and now he had grown to hate her.

"Was I so stupid?" She covered her face with both hands, trying to hold back the tears.

"One dumb bitch, yes." A cackle came from the window. Caprice turned around briskly. Floating outside the window, smirk on face, was the CEO's daughter, the very same that had tried to capture her and her Equestrain friends three times over.

Caprice's immediate reaction was to jump off her bead and fly up. Mid way she remembered she could no longer fly.

"Omph!" She plopped on the floor. Last time she was trying that in a human body.

"Touching." The CEO's daughter tilted her head. "And totally worthless. I can't believe you were so sex deprived you changed shape." The witch floated in. She was dressed all in black today—casual jeans and shirt, not her corporate uniform. "So, did you get some D before he found out?"

"Get out, Cassandra!" Caprice hissed. She still had some Equestria magic, but in such small quantities she might as well remain a human.

"Oh, you bet." Cassandra snapped her fingers, a cigarette appearing between them. "But not just yet." She put the cigarette in her mouth. Its end flickered alight lettering her take a puff. "There's something I want. You can give it to me."

Caprice narrowed her eyes. No way she was going to work with a corporate witch.

"And in return, I'll get you Bel." Cassandra smirked. "It's what you want, isn't it?"

Damn it! Caprice gritted her teeth. That changed everything.

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Just a little something I wrote between chores. Seeing Bob's work gave me an idea. Hope you like it.

Brush

"Don't be so serious," Cassandra took another puff, floating closer to Caprice. The ex-pegasus could smell the fragrance of her perfume. "It'll be our little secret." The CEO witch put her left hand under Caprice's chin and gently lifted it up.

"You...?" Caprice's eyes shot open with shock and horror. This is a nightmare! It has to be! There's no way that Cassandra of all people would fall for me. Could she?! Droplets of sweat corned all over her forehead. "You want—"

"You're so gullible," Cassandra laughed, pulling her hand away. "You really thought I'd want that? From you?"

Caprice didn't say nothing. She had grown accustomed to humiliation these last few days. Still, if she were in pony form, she wouldn't mind bucking that birch in the face.

"Sorry, I'm not into horses." Cassandra took another puff of her cigar, turning her back to the equestrian. "I meant what I said. I know how to get Bellucio straight in your bed, and more. Who knows, you might enjoy a long happy life together." Another puff, this time forming a heart shaped ring of smoke in the air. "Or break up in a week. You never know. The question is, how much do you want it."

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@Brush: Challenge accepted! (Yay, Brush noticed me!)

Bob

Suddenly, the door swung open. Without warning, Bellucio stepped in—very much to the shock and horror of the two girls in his room—and turned on the light. Throwing his backpack to the browned, he stretched a yawn then went towards the bed... only to see that his room wasn't as empty as he left it.

"Huh?" He managed to say, his glance moving from Caprice to Cassandra. "Wh—"

"Bel, what are you doing here?!" Caprice shouted, jumping to her feet.

"Err, I live here?" Bellucio crossed his arms. "And last I checked neither of you two did. Unless my mom has gone on another adoption spree." He looked at the ceiling pensively.

"But, but... you ran away! You were upset that I didn't tell you about being me and..." Caprice turned at Cassandra. "He ran away, right? I'm not imagining things, right? Right?"

"Don't look at me," Cassandra shrugged, taking another puff of her cigarette. "I'm not the one following him around like a sick puppy."

"S-s-sick puppy?!" Caprice stammered, red with rage and shame.

"Are you smoking in my room?" Bellucio pointed at Cassandra. "My mom will kill me! Magic that smoke out of here! And stop floating!"

"Whatever." Cassandra looked away, flicking the cigarette out of the window. "It's not like I like you or anything."

"Hold on!" Caprice crossed her arms as well. "What exactly were you going to ask of me?"

Silence filled the room. Two sets of eyes focused on the CEO witch, who for some reason was not as red in the face as Caprice.

"You know," she began, her back to both Bellucio and Caprice. "Like the thing no man can refuse? You, me—"

"Whoah," Bellucio whispered.

"I'm not hearing this!" Caprice shouted, pacing around the room, hands waving madly in the air. "This was your grand plan to get us together? This?!"

"Well, he isn't complaining," Cassandra pouted.

"That's not the point!" Caprice hissed. "It's—" she stopped. Did it matter? She was getting back with Bellucio, and as Cassandra said, it didn't seem he was terribly upset with the idea. "What the heck." She shrugged. It was going to be a long night, in the best of ways.

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@Brush @Bob: Ha! :P

RRBB

@RRBB: ... what you did was like splashing a bar of chocolate onto a five star meal: it's terribly disgusting, yet you somehow find you enjoy it... despite the mountain of guilt.

Why, RRBB, whyyyy?

LyraHands

Lol! Way to go! RRBB, you are my new hero! This round goes to you! :D

MixaMax

I'm so doing a comic based on this!

PaintDrop

I wish I could write like that...

Candle

I wish I could look away. Damn it, girls! How do you expect me to fly straight after reading this train wreck? My CO is going to have a field day...

CEOWitch

Dear all,

I'd usually be upset that you didn't use the NSFW filter, but I laughed so hard, my colleagues thought I had lost it, resulting in me being told to take the afternoon off.

Smashing work. :)

The TechNightling

I fully approve!

Luna

I'm so confused... :(

PrinceEric

I'm DannyFan! :P

I literally laughed my orange juice out of my nose! :)))

Cheers

DannyFan

@all: Let's never talk of this again.

LyraHands

A Brush PM Spark

Heya.

Sorry for the poke, but RRBB invited me to her place to talk about the new MC release. Your sis will be there. (I promised to meet her in person.) Any chance you can find a reason to come along? Would like to see you.

You look cute in human form. ;)

Brush

Was just thinking about you.

When exactly is this event taking place? Scoop didn't tell me anything about meeting you last we talked. Then again it's not like she tells me anything. You have an exam tomorrow, but if you push it to the weekend, I think I can do something. She'll probably shout my years in if I suggest accompanying her to RRBB's place. And strictly speaking, I agree with her. Last time I passed by her school her classmates all but started whistling at me. It's really annoying when they are at that age.

As much as I like to claim I'm cute, it's probably Scoop's work. She's been drawing since she was four. I was convinced her cutie mark would be a brush.

How have you been?

MasterOfThisAstra

:( Ouch. Yeah, mares could be like that, especially teens. RRBB likes to act a bit wild, but she's okay. From what I've seen from PaintDrop she's quite well behaved. (It's adorable you call her Scoop :))

I've been mostly okay. Lots of work demanding my attention. That's why I'm so short on the site. I rarely get time to spend more than a few minutes before I'm call to avert another crisis. Not that I don't like it, but every now and again, I wish to have some me time.

The meeting was supposed to be today, but I can push it back two days, if that'll work for you.

Brush

That would be great. It'll also give me an excuse to skip another "social activity" with my roommates. What that really means is go to a bar and get drunk on free drinks from flirty mares. My parents would go crazy if they knew, of course. Pity that the mares there are nothing like you, they are all plot and no substance, if you pardon the expression.

MasterOfThisAstra

Oooh! I bet half the chat would like to go at your wild stallion drinking parties :P I know I would. *nuzzle* *ear chew* (What the heck? Lyra added an earchew string? How will I stop using it?!)
Cute of you to like my stuff, but you haven't even met me. What if I turn out to be some crow ugly mare? At least I've seen a version of you.

Brush

Hey, now. Didn't you say you're a supermodel? I'm sure you'll be great. Your stories are out of this world. I'm sure you are as well :) *ear lick* (Apparently, ear chew isn't the only ear string.)

MasterOfThisAstra

Sweetie, everypony online is a supermodel, a princess, or a stallion. :) And lol about the ears. I never knew Lyra had an ear fetish. I'll ask CodeFilly to change her name to LyraEars :D

I can send you a pic of me if you want.

Brush

If you're a supermodel and I'm a stallion that makes us a perfect match, doesn't it? Just please don't go "dick pics or gtfo" on me. I'm so sleep deprived because of exams and I just might do it.

And it's fine. You're beautiful in my heart. I can wait to see you a few days.

MasterOfThisAstra

Hey! It's a mare's job to do the romantic pickups. Guess I'm not as natural as I am in my stories, huh? I might really be falling for you, like a pegasus in summer. For some reason I fantasize you being the most magnificent creature alive. O:)

Well... that was cheesy. After all the stories I've written you'd think I'm better at this. :/ What's your exam on?

Brush

:) I'm just a plain earth pony. I admit I was cute when younger, but now I'm not so sure. Actually, I'm a bit if terrified what you might think of me when we meet. A humanised drawing isn't exactly a good description. The colors are close, though, if that's any indication. And...I'm ashamed to say this, but I wear glasses. :(

MasterOfThisAstra

Omg! Could you be any cuter?!? *ear lick* *ear chew*
Well, I have wings, though I don't like them much. (My friends tell me they're fine, but... you know how friends are.)

Now I really want to see you. Argh! Unjust education system! Cruel examination board!

Oh, I started writing a story for you, but keep getting distracted after the first line. :( I might just give up and write something about kittens, as cliche as that is. Do you like kittens?

Brush

... how do you do that? I've been wanting a kitten since I was five. Of course my parents were against it since it might ruin my "beautiful hooves". And let us not forget that I'm just a pretty face and can't take care of anything and so mustn't even try. When it comes to sis, though, sure. Can you believe she had a cat and a bat? Not that she ever took care of them. I did.

Do you have a kitten?

MasterOfThisAstra

Yep. :) Can't bring it to the meet, though. It's too young. Maybe next time you're free we can go to my place? Or sometime. You're probably busy and all.

Brush

I'd like that.

MasterOfThisAstra

Sorry, but I'll have to go now. Roommate is being a jerk about my computer distracting him. He's really the annoying type. I can guarantee, half of his whining is in the hope that I'll slip up and tell him what I'm doing.

He's cool mostly, but he comes from a town the size of a convenience store, and as the guest to get a scholarship to a Celestial College is full of himself. Parties like a beast. Sometimes I'm scared about the mares he brings over.

MasterOfThisAstra

Lol. I hear you. Well, soon you might have a mare to bring over as well ;)

Take care, Mota.

Hugs and nuzzles! And good luck with your exams.

Brush

Thank you.

Hugs and cuddles.

MasterOfThisAstra

Real Life Panic

@all: Is there anypony from the Crystal Empire? I heard there's been a flash blizzard that has paralyzed the capital. No trains in or out. :( Do you think it's Windigos?

I pray that everything is okay, but that has me really scared. If you're from there or know anypony who is please let us know. I'll also be organizing a check-in site so at least there's info on the matter. @CodeFilly, @The TechNightling, can you lend a hoof?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Something definitely is going on. Stars, I hope it isn't windigos. With Cadence there they shouldn't be able to come close. I asked the Mayor for more info, but she's just as in the dark as I am. :(

@Brush: do you know anything?

MixaMax

@LyraHands, @MixaMax: I haven't been called yet, but might well be. I'll ask at the weather center. If it's weather related they should know.

I really hope no one is hurt :(

Brush

I have some info. All trains and roads to and from the Empire are blocked. Air is tricky. The storm clouds are blocking nearly all magic, aethernet included. Dragonmail is also impossible.

Not gonna lie, things look scary. Hopefully, is a freak storm.

@LyraHands: great initiative! Well know when the net is back up. Maybe also add a note about clothes donations? It's still early, but if this keeps up help centers for clothes and blankets will pop up in every major city, for when the trains can reach the Empire.

I'll let you know if I learn more.

Bob

Things are real. Wonderbolt show is cancelled. The A-team is scrambled and heading to try and breach the cloud cover. Would be nice if somepony knew what the fuck was going on there!

CEOWitch

Weather is clueless. I asked a friend and she said no clouds are planned for this month. Empire weather is as bad as Everwheather :/

@CEOWitch: I'll call in a favor and see what's going on. I'll write in a bit.

Brush

This can't be real! I have family that moved to the Empire! Stars I was thinking of going there next week! Paint's brother studies there!

What if it's another invasion? I really don't know what to think right now.

@Brush @Bob: please tell me you know something!

RRBB

@RRBB: don't worry. Everything will be ok. We'll deal with this. Take the day off, spend it with PaintDrop and your family. If something comes up somepony will post it here.

I'll have to go. Hope to check the site in a few hours.

CEOWitch

@Bob: added a note. Thanks.

LyraHands

@all: All aethernet in the Empire capital is down. A few airbases nearby are in battle readiness. So far only the Wonderbolts have been dispatched. As difficult as it is, I suggest we try to keep calm. I know what you're going through—I lost my wife in a weather accident seven years ago—but starting a panic will help no one. CEOWitch gave some great advice: take the day off if you need to, but try to be as calm and collected as possible.

The TechNightling

There'll be an announcement from the Palace in about ten minutes. Mostly, what's already been said. A mage train is getting ready to try and Pierce the cold belt.

In the meantime just wait. Please.

Luna

This is shit! :/ Nopony knows anything. I even tried getting in touch with Twilight.

@RRBB: Hang tight. I'll send sis to be with you and PaintDrop.

MixaMax

I hope it's just me, but did CEOWitch say she was a Wonderbolt and flying into the storm? I hope nothing bad happens to her.

@LyraHands, @Bob: I can gather a lot of blankets and clothes. Just tell me where to take them. I've also spoken to a few friends to do the same.

@RRBB, @PaintDrop: I'm so sorry :( Let me know if I can help.

Candle

@CEOWitch: the clouds are full of wild magic! Buck it! Please read this on time! You might lose your ability to fly if you go through. Dammit, CEOWitch!! :(((

Brush

@Brush: are the in city okay?

RRBB

@RRBB: Fuck! Sorry :( Yes, everypony inside is supposed to be well for now. Most are in the palace with Shining casting a protective shield. Please, tell PaintDrop.

Brush

@Brush: thank you. I will.

RRBB

@all: Girls, I'll be volunteering to go on the mage train. I've a good enough magic score to be let on. While I'm gone CodeFilly will be taking care of the site. Please post any news here as you get it.

I'm linking all emergency help sites. Tech, please check to see if any of them are scams. Also add any new ones if you could.

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Don't you dare!!!

Bob

Mods, @all this message.

Communication with the Crystal Empire has been restored. Anther is back up, but public access is deliberately blocked not to overwhelm it. There's nothing to worry about. There will be an official announcement soon.

The short version is that there was a freak magic storm for a few hours, but it's now gone. So far no pony has been harmed as a result.

Thank you for all your effort. Get some rest. Take the day off. If anypony has any issue at work or school, just let me know and I'll settle things.

Luna

@all: Communication with the Crystal Empire has been restored. Anther is back up, but public access is deliberately blocked not to overwhelm it. There's nothing to worry about. There will be an official announcement soon.

The short version is that there was a freak magic storm for a few hours, but it's now gone. So far no pony has been harmed as a result.

Thank you for all your effort. Get some rest. Take the day off. If anypony has any issue at work or school, just let me know and I'll settle things.

Luna

@Luna: thank you so much! That's the best news we could wish for.

LyraHands

@Candle: guess the secret is out. ;)

Thanks for your concern, all (and especially you, @Brush). Wonderbolts were called off. Locals can deal with it.

Some scare, eh?

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: When the storm heard it had to deal with your ugly snout it flew away. Don’t scare us like that, you idiot. :) And thanks.

RRBB

Girls! Sorry I couldn't be here :( Parents were a bit freaked about that and dragged me out of school. Didn't have access to my computer until just now.

Now that it's over, what do you think it was? Imagine if there were a portal to Earth in center of the Crystal Empire! Won't that be cool or what?! What if the storm was because Danny or Bellucio crossed over?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: … never change, bby;) *intense hug* *ear chew*

Brush

Changes

@all: Well, I have a few announcements to make, and not all of them good :( As some of you know I have been struggling with some issues for quite some time. Without going into details, there are some things between me and my parents. Apparently, things that can't be settled as easily as I hoped.

Yesterday's scare got me thinking about someone dear to me who I'd been avoiding lately (if you read this, you were right all along). Everything changes and maybe it's time I did as well, instead of waiting for a disaster to do it for me.

Midnight Castle has been my life for ever since I could remember, and I'm not quitting anytime soon. I just need a while to figure out my next steps. With that, I won't be logging on for a while after this post. If you send any replies or PMs I'll not look at them until I return.

Most of you know me in real life, some quite well, so I ask please give me some space the next week, okay? I know you are there for me, but this is one thing you can't help.

CodeFilly will be in charge of the site while I'm gone. She's a wonderful pony, even if a bit shy, and will take great care of things. Please be nice to her, okay? Tech will keep on being as magnificent as he's always been and deal with features in a professional fashion. I'm also making MixaMax a Mod. She'll be dealing with community issues and make sure the site remains organized.

Sorry I have to do this :( These last few weeks have been the best of my life. I'd have wanted to make the site look a bit better, but I'm sure that you girls will make it shine in my place.

Bye all. Into the next portal!

LyraHands

What just happened?!?

RRBB

@RRBB: Lyra just needs to deal with some things. I can promise you I'm keeping an eye on her. The issue is complicated, so best leave it at that and continue with the usual site discussions. That's what Lyra wants.

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: well, she better get well! I love that goofy idiot!

RRBB

Maybe love wasn't the right word, but you know what I mean.

@MixaMax: so what now? I had a huge announcement to make regarding the reboot, but with the hurricane Lyra dropped on us (too soon?) it's a bit... meh.

RRBB

@RRBB: I feel you. :( Well, for now just make the announcement here. I'll be adding a few new sections: Discussions (for anything related to the new books) and Fiction (for anything fanfic related, including story and help discussions). This will become General and Rumors will remain as it is.

New rule: discussions of new MC stories are considered rumors until one week after store release. (Special Events don't count as a store release).

MixaMax

Okay. So we have our new series. Technically the announcement will be made sometime today, but at this point I might as well share what I know.

The new series (volume 7) will be called Midnight Castle: Everhere and will have the following cast: Danny, Eric, Bellucio, Omni, Blazen, Karl, Megan (no surprises), Molly (argh! Kill me now!), and Euryala ("an unorthodox character, who's been an undercover operative of the Corporate Overview Bureau as part of the Warlockwings mage squadron.")

It's not mentioned, but I think events are likely to take place a few years after the end of Mistmount Chronicles.

There you go.

RRBB

What did I tell you? :P

CEOWitch

@RRBB: O!M!G! Warlockwings mage squadron? That sounds so cool! Do you think they'll be flying and all? So far only Danny was given flight, but we know Megan can fly with Firefly, and Bellucio has his secret aether wings (I think Eric knows about them, though). Do you think the others will get fly powers as well?

Omni also has a few scenes flying, but that was mostly him mixing potions and drinks.

What do you think?

PrinceEric

@RRBB: What the fuck?! This is real? S.Child, what are you doing to my childhood? :(Warlockwings? I understand what they are going for, but that name. Even Warlock squad would be better! Also, the "fine nine"? We might as well make it official :(

Megan and Molly get a role increase? Are you kidding? Are you bucking kidding me?!? Girls in an all boys cast? I get it they want to broaden the audience, but seriously? No offense, but what do colts that young know about romance? Looks pretty much like wish fulfillment to me! As much as I like to think it's pandering to us, I doubt it.

And this new character. Argh! Mysterious character, blah blah bla! I could go on about this, but Tech will probably ban me from the site (sorry bby *nuzzles*). They could have at least bothered to check the name :/ It's the same as one of Bellucio's maids. She was even referred to in 4 stories! She even had interaction in one of them, claiming to have been with the family since before he was born. :/

I don't know, but I don't see this as a positive thing. They should just have gone with the a new setting. Maybe the age gap thing with the gr8 making appearances from time to time. Plus it would have been great to see their kids. (As much as I and everypony else hate Mellucio, I could see them having a cute kid: vane and daring.)

Guess all I can do is wait and see.

Rant over!

MixaMax

Now you understand how I felt with Mistmount Chronicles. To be perfectly honest, I was very skeptical when that version came out. Back at the time I even went so far as to say that S.Child was only doing it for the money. I never expected the series to amount to anything. Volume four, though, thoroughly changed my mind.

What I'm trying to say is, be skeptical as much as you want, but keep an open mind. This new direction might surprise us in a positive way.

The TechNightling

@MixaMax, @PrinceEric: some minor spoilers from me.

[MC spoiler]
Euryala isn't human.
She is the same one that claimed that she was with Bellucio's family.
She is female.
Her model and character are modeled after an existing top ranking Wonderbolt.
I can get you autographs of said top ranking Wonderbolt, but only to a small group.
You might not have to wait till Nightmare Night to learn more of the series.
[MC spoiler]

Exciting times are yet to come!

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: Just don't get too excited, please. Your dreams are as naughty as Brush's.

Luna

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@Luna: I'd ship that. I'd draw it even. >;)

@CEOWitch: Sorry for being a jerk to you. You're cool, and it shouldn't have take me to see how you're risking your life to help my brother and I to realize that. I'll be at the Wonderbolt show in Manehattan cheering whoever you might be.

PaintDrop

Author's Notes:

Reminder!
I'll be answering Lyra's AMA tomorrow, so be sure to add all your questions if you have any (or want to ask more) :)

Questions relating to this chapter will not be considered, though O:)

Euryala

Hey! I went through volumes 5, 6, 7, searching for facts about Euryala. Here's what I found so far:

-female
-always seen near Bellucio
-appears in 3 stories (still waiting on the first Mistmount volumes) always with a different description
-can see behind her (she dodges the stray batball Danny hit, saw Molly sneaking into the house, and also covered for Bellucio by distracting his parents)
-loves storms
-might be the user "Eury" on the occult site Blazen keeps visiting

I'm so hyped by this new development! A lot of ponies at school been discussing it like crazy! Especially with the Wonderbolts announcing the new series!

@CEOWitch: can you say which Wonderbolt Euryala is modeled after?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: ...yay :/ As far as I can remember there are a few more instances in vol 4. She's pretty much a late character, appearing when we got to see Bellucio's home for the first time. The only other case was that horrible scene in which Molly was swooning over him (The Hidden Doorway).

I'll check after work to see if I can find out more.... if I can be bothered.

MixaMax

@PrinceEric: CEOWitch is preparing for the Wonderbolt show. We had a few PMs and she told me she might not be in touch till then. She did tell me two things about Euryala, though:

She's not exactly human.
The Wonderbolt she's modeled after is really cool. (I think it's Spitfire)

PaintDrop and Brush won't be here for a while either. I'll be hanging out with them today. (After what happened with the storm both of them want some time to take it easy.)

@MixaMax: I can't believe your sis came all this way yesterday. Nuzzles for that. You okay if I snatch her to tag along with us?

RRBB

RRBB: Why ask me? If she's cool she's cool. Not like I can influence her :)

A big hello to the band! Go crazy, girls!

MixaMax

I'm not sure this is relevant, but a friend mentioned that she's working on jewelry design for a new colt series. That's an unusual order, so we got into chatting. She mentioned it was a type of snake bracelet.

I think it's Euryala's. Megan already has her rainbow necklace and Molly is too young.

Candle

Let me shed some light on the matter.

Euryala isn't human, but has humanoid form.
She does have native and acquired magic powers.
She isn't modeled after Spitfire (although Spitfire is consulting on the new series).
The bracelet Candle mentioned is related her, but doesn't belong to her.
Blueblood is secretly reading this forum. :P
One of the things I've said isn't true.

Back to Euryala, I know she was planned to make an appearance in volume 5, but things got constantly pushed back, so please don't keep on saying she's a new character. Also, the good thing about nine characters is that they represent exactly 3 groups of 3. Why is that so important? You'll have to wait a few weeks to find out :)

Luna

Speculation — me favourite part :) I've been going over the aethernet for the last two days, and I think I might have found something about Euryala. It's from an interview from the early MC books, where it was hinted of three princesses on extraordinary power that fell in a battle against the deities.

How cool is that? We might have our first official princess in MC. :D

DannyFan

@DannyFan: Hello, and welcome! Sorry for not greeting you earlier.

You'll really make me read the original series, won't you? :/ I so hope you are wrong about the princess thing. It was hard enough suffering through Princess Molly (even if that was one of the future-maybe-to-be stories).

I no longer know what to think! This is getting worse by the day. We have a new female character, who is a princess, knows magic, part of this Warlock squadron, and related to the deities? What's next? She's Danny's lover? :/ I know I should get upset by this, but what the bucking hay?!? I've seen better self inserts! The only thing that gives me some hope is the three groups comment. It was getting difficult to follow things with ten characters running around. Three plus three villains and/or support characters is quite manageable.

@RRBB: tell sis I said hiiii! :)

MixaMax

@MixaMax: done. She said she'll have words with you once she gets home. (Ooooh, somepony's in trouble :))

Well, it happened: an event that made PaintDrop lose her shit. You know how she was supposed to come to hang with me and Brush? Well, her brother showed up. Not only that, but he gave her a set of first edition Midnight Castle (signed by S.Child and everything!).

We all went WOAH! And Brush... I've never seen anypony drool as much in real life (and not only because of the books.) She'll probably tear my tail off when she reads this, but it's so worth it :)))

Anyway, PaintBro came up with the theory that Euryala might be Titanspawn. He said there are several creatures that can change shape in the original series, so might be that.

RRBB

@RRBB: ...and now we have changelings in the series. :/ Sure, why not? Divine changeling princess with divine powers and corporate connections. Nope, nothing wrong here.

I just decided I'll be writing a fic! It'll be about Euryala's long lost brother. No! Sister! Her twin sister with an even darker and more mysterious past, who will date all the gr8 at the same time!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: as disturbing as this is I so want to read it now. Please do it! I'll even edit for you!

CodeFilly

If it's safe for work, I'll be curious to see it as well. Just be sure to tag it properly.

I have my theories on Euryala, but will keep them to myself for now. Unlike MixaMax, I think she'll be a great character. Keep in mind there's nothing wrong in adding female characters as long as they are done well. So far I think S.Child is an extremely good writer and feel they can pull it off superbly.

The TechNightling

Don't you think I won't! And I'll get both of you to edit it! Then when you cry yourself to sleep at night wondering what has become of your life I'll be here laughing!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: like you're one to talk :P

Luna

Author's Notes:

Reached day 20! Woohoo!

Here's LyraHands' AMA to mark the occasion.

Will also try to colourtag a few chapters tonight. :)

Thank you, all! :)

The Announcement

Wowowowowowow! Did you hear? MC:E will be out on scrolls! That's hyper cool! So retro it's incredible! That also explains why we'll be getting the next volume at Nightmare's Night.

Do you think that there'll be any connection to the date? Daring Do cosplay is wild then, but won't it be cool, if they do a push for gr8 costumes? I can't wait!

PrinceEric

I must admit, this decision caught me off guard. I haven't seen anything published in scrolls for years, not counting collectors and special editions. This is going to change the dynamic entirely. Now I understand why S&S pushed so heavily on miniatures and announcements at grand events. Midnight Castle: Everhere might be fiction, but it's directly competing with comic books.

I'm looking forward to see how this will unfold. If successful we might see other franchises follow suit, maybe even get Daring Do scrolls (admittedly not my bowl of oats).

The TechNightling

The last few days were incredible! Yesterday, I got to spend some heat time with RRBB discussing the new series, got to meet Brush (I definitely didn't see that coming! Brush, you are the greatest!) and MixaMax's sis (Mixa, I want to strangle you!), my brother showed up out of the blue and gave me a signed first edition of the original series, and I got to see CEOWitch at the Wonderbolt show!

@CEOWitch: I have no idea who you are, but having Misty find me in the stands and give me a MC poster (signed by her, Spitfire, Fleetfoot, and Soarin) was way cool! I also got a few more to give out to the respective ponies.

@LyraHands: hope you read this and get better soon. I have a poster for you, as well as a first edition from Tech. Also, RRBB and I will be buying you a full collection of miniatures and the first series of scrolls. ;) Come back soon.

@Brush: sorry for my brother's behavior. He's not used to being round mares, so he starts acting all quiet. It's nothing personal. I'm sure he'll get used to you in time.

Now that I've finished bragging... Back to drawing. I have a ship and some illustrations to finish.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: no sweat ;) Sorry I didn't come chat. Things were a bit tense because of that hurricane thing. Still, the show did go well (even if I didn't do much).

@MixaMax: can we do away with the one week waiting for the first scroll? I've already read it (weeks ago), but with the release coming out tomorrow, maybe we can start discussing directly? The schedule is a scroll per week for the first 13 (just to let you know).

CEOWitch

Smashing! :)

S&S got us there. I thought we might have the first volume earlier, but didn't think they'd go all scroll on us.

@PrinceEric: you can wager they'll make use of Nightmare's Night. I'm all but certain that Icelos will make a reappearance! I hope they keep his ability to dreamwalk. That was the coolest part. Maybe he'll get to be Luna's sweetheart?

DannyFan

@CEOWitch: just for you, I'll make an exception. You can start tomorrow once ponies get the scroll, but not before!

@PaintDrop: heh. Sis said the same thing when she came back. Is it true Brush drooled a puddle on the floor at the sight of your brother. I asked, but Sis said "he was okay" which could mean anything. :)

@PrinceEric / @DannyFan: you two seem remarkably alike. Do we have our first multi account?

MixaMax

All is in order as far as I can tell. They are a flight and a half away from each other and unless someone is using some advanced coding skills, there's no way for them to fake their signatures.

The TechNightling

@DannyFan: what's this? You want me to have a sweetheart? I'll let you know that I've met a Icelos and we're just friends. ;) Seriously, I *have* met him!

Here's a spoiler from me for making my day: the name of the first scroll is Backwards Treasure. The first sentence is "Waking is part of the dream."

Have fun, you meddlesome kids.

Luna

@Luna: Hey! Stop spoiling them! That's my job! ;)

CEOWitch

@MixaMax: :) No, Brush didn't drool. She just blushed a bit. For the record, I might trash my brother, but that doesn't mean there aren't mares gawking at him. :)

You're sis is way cooler than I thought. And you? You're full of surprises.

PaintDrop

@RRBB: I. Will. Kill. You! :/

@MixaMax: Buck you with a rock.

Brush

@Brush: heh heh heh. :D

Nah, it was all fun. Not that I would blame her. PaintDrop's brother is the real Bellucio! And yeah, Max' sis has always been nice, but this time was mega cool she was here during the scare. I tell you even my dad got worried. Heck, even my mom did! (Can you believe she went as far as tell em that "even the best minds get an occasional B in their studies".) Not that I ever would get a B, mind you!

It's just things at school that got me on edge, and that thing with the storm... Anyway, let me tell you what I got!

Scroll number one, baby! Heck yes! :) I can confirm what Luna has said is true. (Luna, are you really a Princess. I know everypony jokes online, but it would be awkward if we're talking trash to royalty.)

RRBB

What's this? Everypony's getting scroll one early? And I thought I'd impress people by posting that I've preordered them before the official site was launched. Damn, you girls are good!

@RRBB, @PaintDrop: Super kind of you to buy Lyra MC merch. If there's any trouble let me know and I'll chip in too. After everything she's done, she deserves some joy in her life.

@Brush, @RRBB: you ready for our project?

...I just noticed that all our names have a B. Must be destiny! :)

Bob

Ha! We are the real Luna!

TheRealLuna

@CEOWitch: oh, oh! Who is the Wonderbolt Euryala is modeled after? Please, we have to know! :)

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Fleetfoot

CEOWitch

@all: So much for following the rules! :/ Good job, all. *slow clap* You can't even wait a day before starting with the spoilers.

MixaMax

So much for following the rules! :/

My thought's exactly...

Fleetfoot

Unexpected

Danny Williams

Dreamer, adventurer, chosen.

Resourceful and adventurous, his life changed when he received a dream from Zeus—deity of the heavens—changing everyone's life in the small town of Mistmount forever. Whether facing the ominous Felina corporation, protecting the realm from otherworldly threats, or journeying to distant magical worlds, Danny’s always there to help his friends and do what's right!

Siblings: Megan and Molly.
Place of birth: Mistmount, Gumania
Occupation: College student
Hobby: Stargazing
Mentor deity: Zeus
Magic power: Divine Flight
Eternity gem: unknown

"I got it now. I know how three halves can make a whole."

The first official spoiler (comes with the Danny figure). Yes, be envious! My sweet, sweet Danny is first! I don't care what anypony says, the figurines are so cool! They'll be on the shelves in a few days, followed by Blazen, then Molly (argh! :/).

Dad promised to buy me the whole bunch, plus the ones for Lyra, Brush, and someone else, so I can buy a few more sets with the money I have. Just don't burn me, okay? If any of you want minis, better have the bits at some point soon.

RRBB

@RRBB: Wow! Can you save me a set? I promise I have the money. I just can't send it :(

That's a really cool bit of info! Eternity gem? What do you think those are? Maybe something connected with the new series? Everhere and eternity seem quite close. Maybe all of the grand nine will have their own gem? Why else mention it's unknown?

Also, is it just me, or is the hobby thing also new? It was mentioned once, I think, but it's never been described as a thing, I wonder how important it'll be.

PrinceEric

@Fleetfoot: do you happen to be the real Fleetfoot? Will you be at book signings? :D

@PrinceEric: we also have confirmation that Danny's power is here to stay! And let us not forget the occupation. So it's official that at least one of the six has entered university. I wonder if all of them have.

I'm curious about the quote. I pretty much remember everything Danny has said in the series and I can't remember anything remotely similar. My guess is that it's a line from the actual series. Interesting to see if it's in the first scroll.

DannyFan

@RRBB: What's this? No spoilers? What's happened to you, RRBB? Not another fight again? I hope you save a set for me. I'll bring you the money tomorrow, or ask sis to bring it for me.

And now the ranting... *sigh* Where do I start? The initial paragraph is generic, but I could work for a new audience. I'm not sure it isn't over promising things. If I didn't know better I'd laugh at such description. There's just too much stuff. Yes I know that half of the actual info has been cut out, but we're all maniacs here! Give it to someone new and she'll go huh?

So, it seems that place of birth will have some importance. The idea of them going between worlds becomes more likely. I just hope they don't turn it into a Human in Equestria thing. A mention here and there could be tolerable, a whole arc—no!

The eternity is clearly the central theme, and for once I'm hopeful it might turn out good.

@DannyFan: we generally don't ask about real life, sugar. ;)

MixaMax

@MixaMax: It's not like it'll matter. Wonderbolts stake hooves with ponies all the time. Asking here is certainly safer than after an aerial display. I myself even have her autograph from two years ago, when she visited.

@Fleetfoot: I was the colt that stuttered when asking you for an autograph :D

DannyFan

DannyFan, you have been warned. Continue this and you'll be banned from the site.

The TechNightling

Well, that happened...

@MixaMax: do you always pester your sister like that? Sheesh! How hasn't she thrown you out yet? :P And you can keep your lousy bits! I got a set for you two. As long as you share it!

In other news. With finals over, and the moronic teacher pleased with me (that's a first) I can get back to writing. I'll be continuing my Danny Saga even if I know that it's no longer possible for it to be canon worthy :( Yes, although scroll one is quite good, they have explained a few things... and their explanation clashes with my explanation.

Max, can we have a way to show that a story is in conflict with the series? I love my works, but I don't want to read something without knowing it's different from canon. I'll think the author is an idiot. Something like Mirror tag of something would be nice.

RRBB

I'll take care of it.

CodeFilly

I kinda want to write a story about college Danny now. O:)

@The TechNightling: will you help he with the editing?

Candle

The scroll is incredible! And yes, the phrase is a perfect match from something says (to Caprice). I've read some weird stuff, but this takes the top. The writing team is insane! I'm sure you'll love it!

[MC spoiler]
The 9 get split in 3 separate realities at the very start of the scroll! Each part has the city, but three of the characters and one deity. It's interesting that the Felina corp is the same in all three. Also, the writing is far more mature. I'd give it a 13+.

The scroll ends with Danny realizing he must try to bring back things together. It's a real mindfuck!
[MC spoiler]

Bob

@all: Heya.

I'd like to say sorry for the last few days. It was wrong if me to just vanish with a quick message. Every single one of you has sent me messages, and that makes me so happy that I don't know what to say. Thanks, I guess? :)

The last few days have not been easy, but I think I'll get through this, much thanks to you all, and the new series coming out. (RRBB, I can't thank you enough.)

I've come to the conclusion that despite attempts on all sides, there is no solving the issue between my parents and I. From tomorrow, I'll be leaving my job and home and moving to Ponyville. Still no idea about a job. At least rent is five times cheaper :)

CodeFilly will run the site until I settle in, but I'll still be here reading and commenting.

I'm locking this thread until tomorrow. I know you all want to say hi, but that would shut down the site :D

See you soon.

LyraHands

Everyone Loves Lyra

@LyraHands: Hey! Hey! Listen! I got your stuff! (Well as much as I could get at this point.) Don’t worry about money or such. Also let me know if you need bits. My school report is going to arrive home next week and since I know I’ve aced it, I expect mom to show a modicum of generosity.

Don’t be a mule, you hear?

RRBB

@LyraHands: I’m with RRBB on this one. Clearly you’re going through a rough patch, and you have helped all of us. Don’t you dare say otherwise! You got this place set up, you paid for it, coded it, got people to post stories here, and whatnot.

I’ve only been here for a few weeks, but you’d be surprised how much this place has helped me relax and get to know the most remarkable ponies. (In some cases I saw ponies I’ve known for years in a totally new light.) So, as RRBB said, don’t be a mule, and accept our help.

Let me know what exactly you’re looking for and I’ll ask some family friends if I can find a place for you in Ponyville (or Canterlot if you prefer to remain there).

PaintDrop

@LyraHands: I can be of some help as well. I have a very good friend in Ponyville. I’m sure she’ll help.

Candle

@all: girls, girls, seriously. I might not be in the best psychological state, but I am fine :) I’m not broke or homeless. I still have savings, and I’ve got a series of interviews set up. CodeFilly and MixaMax have already helped me loads.

It’s sweet of you, but please. I don’t want to be the one taking advantage of you lovely ponies just because I made a fansite. If things get really bad I have friends to ask for help.

I’m sure there are lots of other things that we could be talking about. Like, there’s a new series out already! We should be going crazy! On that note…

@The TechNightling: I think we might be expecting an influx of new users (based on my experience from other fansites). Is there any danger of the site folding?

LyraHands

Have no fear, Lyra.

In your absence, CodeFilly and I had some discussions and decided to up the aether tier of the site. Midnight castle is pretty much at the best commercially available service.

Furthermore, we have managed to find a few UI potential artists to make a new and far superior design to go with the new and more stable code. Both of us are confident that in a few weeks this place will shine as it deserves to.

Welcome back :)

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: commercially available? Let me see if I can fix that ;)

Luna

@The TechNightling, @Luna: Girls… :) I’m crying over my keyboard. I get to be friends with the nicest ponies. I seriously don’t want to burden you, though. I promise to pay you back the moment things get back on track for me.

@RRBB: Same goes for you, you doofus!

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Offer still stands no matter what you say! :P (And if you refuse the Omni statue I've been working on I won't talk to you ever!)

Oh, I'm thinking of asking someone from class to join the site. She's a bit meh about reading, but she writes quite well. I give her a week before she starts collecting everything. You girls okay with that?

PaintDrop

@LyraHands: Too late, don't hate ;)

Luna

@LyraHands: mare... how come I hear how bad things are from the site? When I asked you you said it was "just a small hiccup." :/ Next time you do that to me I'll drag you to the barracks! I'll even try to get you to suffer a whole hour with Fleet! (She chewed my mane off, by the way, but still is okay to meet you, so whenever you want just let me know and I'll fly you there."

CEOWitch

@LyraHands: chances are I'll be moving out soonish (last year of school). So if you're all right, we could be roommates. :)

DannyFan

@CEOWitch: I will, I promise. :) I didn't want to burden you with my troubles. Give me a few weeks and I'll be fine.

@DannyFan: umm, not sure your parents would approve you moving in with some unemployed mare. The thought is enough to make me smile, though. Thanks :)

LyraHands

@PaintDrop: who're you talking about? :/ Tell me you haven't talked with that bitch!

RRBB

@RRBB: SweetStuff. I think you need to stop that animosity between you and you-know-who, but no, it isn't her.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: SweetStuff is meh, but okay. We should ask Sparky, though. She'll like it. :)

@Brush: where have you been hiding? :) Don't you want to hear about your adored Bellucio? Also we must start working on that collab.

RRBB

@all: Girls, I'm gonna move out too! I've always dreamed living at the palace. Canterlot Palace. No! The Crystal Empire Palace! (Twilight's Palace is freaky. :P) If anypony could help me achieve my dream I'll be eternally grateful and promise to dedicate one day per week on not being sarcastic or annoying. :P

I'm joking. Lyra is fine, though. I know everypony loves Lyra, but she's getting the best of care.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: well, if Max says it, it must be true! :P Thanks, goofball.

@The TechNightling: I see we've a lot of silent users. Are those temp accounts, or are they just lurking?

LyraHands

Several of them are active. Fleetfoot has only logged on once, but I have assurances it's a legitimate account. If you want I can set a fifty day inactivity purge limit. Currently it's not a huge issue, but if we are to grow, as you suspect, it might be wise to have it.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: Thanks. :) What would I do without you? (Not learn code, that's for sure.)

LyraHands

First Analysis

Girls, I’ve come to a big decision. With the new scrolls coming out, I’m putting my wing at analyzing the chapters as they appear. I know I’ll never be as good as MixaMax, but it might be fun :)
Here goes! (I’ve read a few spoilers, but this is the first time I’m reading the scroll. Comments are done in the process of reading so I might end up contradicting myself :P )

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Midnight Castle: Everhere, Vol 7, Chapter 1, Backwards Treasure

The title makes me think of a treasure that is lost in time. From what I’ve read S.Child doesn’t like to write about time travel, so I doubt it’s that. Maybe it’s a cursed treasure? Time to find out! :D

We start with Danny having a dream while in college. I like the new environment. It presents a slightly older (and much more mature Danny) and also fleshes out the world a bit. He wakes up in the middle of the night, all in sweat, but can’t remember what just happened. His roommate (I’m saying it now – Loki best character ever. He sort of reminds me of Rainbow Dash.) tells him he said something about a crown, so Danny drops everything and and heads home.

Danny goes back to his house (which is five minutes away) and we get to meet Molly. I’m not sure how to feel about grown up Molly. She’s no longer a comic relief character, but with everything in the past I can’t think of her as anything else. It was funny how she pretends she’s over her crush on Bellucio, but the moment he appears goes all swoony.

The rest of the gr8 appear one by one, and we learn what they have been up to: Bellucio is in modeling school (big surprise), Eric and Karl are in different colleges. Omni got enlisted in cadet school (O.o I don’t even want to ask) and Blazen was vague what he had been into. Megan is working in the Skyla corporation (maybe that’ll be a theme of this series?) and couldn’t make it.

They catch up and Danny is just about to tell them that he’s started to have dreams again, when the lights go out and they are all attacked by some new enemies (The Warlockwings). Bellucio fights some female warlock (I already know that will be Euryala). Things start to get ugly, but then Hades emerges and teleports them away to his mountain shrine (yay magma clouds, also yay finally we get to see Hades do something).

We learn that a new threat is about to appear (of course Hades cannot tell them more or help them because of some oath-bond.) He tells them that they must “keep the crown from reaching the Everprince.” (No idea what that is, but it sounds way awesome!) Hades then kicks them out back in Mistmount.

We then get a long sequence of events exploring the daily life of the main cast as they go on about doing stuff (and a new subtle level of Molly antics). Of course, each of them gets attacked by the Warlocks, who also know of the crown.

Giving them the slip (Molly’s new fighting moves was a nice touch. Also, wow Bellucio! “I’ve been taking mage-defense lessons” is best phrase ever. Calling it will become the “bottles” of series 7) everyone goes to Blazen’s secret hideout (huh?) where Caprice lives (huh?!?) and tells them that portal magic has been in flux lately. No mention why Eric didn’t know about this, since portals are his thing.

Megan arrives, then there’s a long discussion about the crown and the new threat. Megan says she remembers a memo on the subject (quite convenient) and says she’ll ask about. A few jokes are exchanged and she leaves. As everyone goes to sleep Blazen and Caprice sneak away and Caprice whispers that maybe they must tell the others what is going on, but Blazen refuses. (Foreshadowing!)

We then see Megan talking to a mysterious contact from the Felina corp saying that all corps are seeking the crown because of the star alignment (this is so The Mare on the Moon)! Next morning everyone gathers and go to raid the Felina corp.

The raid was described pretty neat. I love how we got cool combos of divine powers and tech weapons. S.Child is a genius! They find what they are looking for and go to a desert (Called it! :P ) where they find some booby-trapped temple. (A bit too much Daring Do here, but still cool.) They reach the treasure and surprise, Euryala… I mean “an unknown Warlock” attacks. The warlock defeats them all and is about to get the treasure, when Omni appears all commando style and beats her up. (Omni best humie! :) )

Of course, Omni being Omni, he puts the crown on his head, splitting reality into three. We then learn that because they have found the crown, they must find it again in each reality so as to keep it. (This was crazy! Took me three reads to understand. If I got it right, the crown is both eternal and nowhere. So in a way it’s split in many realities and in order to get it, they must get it. That’s why the crown is Ever Here? This is both so cool and confusing. :P )

So at the end we have Danny realizing this, after a talk with Hades (in a reality where Zeus and Poseidon never existed). To sum up: Danny, Molly, and Eric are in reality Hades (poor Molly); Megan, Blazen, Karl are in reality Zeus; Omni, Bellucio, and Euryala are in reality Poseidon (very ominous, since Euryala went all crazy when she learned.)

Overall, I loved it! Still not certain about Euryala and the older Molly. Love Loki and the new way the main cast react. The world is phenomenal, and the idea of reality morphing is out of this world! :D

So, what do you think? Did you like my analyses?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Why aren’t you in my school? I’m so tired of airheaded colts and brainless mares… oh, hi, RRBB. :P

Wonderful work. I agree that the story was the best ever. The whole reality thing had me going “No, they didn’t!” Not only is it ingenious, but ponies actually have to think to get it! I know I could never have come up with something as clever. I might ask my brother to see what he thinks (him being more the target audience). My only fear is, I hope it doesn’t alienate readers.

PaintDrop

@PrinceEric: way to go, Prince. :) I really think you should do this for every chapter. It’s nice reading your thoughts as you describe stuff. And I still don’t know how you managed to compress everything in one post. If it were MixaMax we’d have seven threads maxed out before we get to the first Hades meeting. :D

I have a few theories, but will wait till next chapter before I say anything. Have you noticed how they give us the next title of the next scroll at the very end? S&S = max teasers! Any theories what “The Shatterstone” is? Do you think it’s one of the new powers the grand 9 will get?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: That was mean. At least I won’t get into a hissy fit about Molly stealing "my" Bellucio :P

Chapter was pretty good. Writing could have been a bit better (dialogue was too telly to be real) but keeping in mind we’re competing with comics now, it’s fine. The premise bends horseshoes, though! Sometimes I think that there really is a portal to the human world and that S.Child uses it.

Oh, and Euryala is meh at best.

MixaMax

Hello,

I’ve been keeping my eye on this site for a while. Honestly, I was skeptical it would survive more than a week. I’m pleased that it did! It’s a wonderful environment for a mare (or stallion) to learn critical thinking, get feedback, and take part in some of the most thorough and friendly exchanges of opinions I have ever seen!

Not only that, but some of the works are of professional quality (or close). With a bit of help I think the authors could be quite successful. I myself have dabbled in fanfiction, mostly in Daring Do circles, but would love to be part of this vibrant community as well. “Nightlings forever!” :)

@PrinceEric: good job. I’ll send you a few pointers, but for your first time you did really well. I am impressed. Keep it up! :D

DarkSparkle

“Nightlings forever!” :)

It has begun! Brace yourselves!

MixaMax

Brush's PM Confession

Lyra, I need to talk to you.

Brush

Please send a line when you get back. It's really important.

Brush

Lyra, are you there?

Brush

Hey! Sorry, was at a job interview and couldn't check the site. :( Seems that Ponyville doesn't need an elementary music teacher. :/ Might be for the better, though. Not sure how awkward it would have been me being there.

So what's up?

LyraHands

I think I did something horrible...

Brush

What? What happened? I just need to call off an interview and will go to your place.

LyraHands

No! I can't face anypony right now. Even talking about it here is... I'm so disgusted with myself. I'm so horrible.

Please, don't mess up your life because of me. Go get that job. I'll manage somehow.

Brush

Mare, I'll go there and slaps you in the face! I've already sent the letter to the post office. (Wasn't big on being a delivery mare anyway.)

What happened exactly? Before my vacation you were so happy and cheerful. Was somepony mean to you? Fuck what Tech says, I'll track whoever hurt you and give her one in the snout!

LyraHands

Nopony hurt me, Lyra. I messed things up :(

Brush

I went on a date with PaintDrop's brother. He's in the forum. He said he liked my writing, so i flirted a bit as I do with everypony. Soon things went a bit further. We exchanged PMs, talked about stuff all the time, discussed his life, my writing. Then RRBB organized that get-together at her place.

You probably think I'm terrible! :( We arranged to secretly meet with Mota there. The official story was that he went to see his sister and give her his first edition books. The thing was, he just came so we could see each other.

He was so beautiful you wouldn't believe. I didn't believe! All those fantasies about rick college colts? That's him. He even has glasses! And what do you think I did? Messed everything up! :(((

Brush

Mare, I'm so sorry :((( I know what's it's like to have your heart ripped out. It hurts like Tartarus, but only if you let it. I know you don't want to see anyone right now, but I think friends and ice cream are what you need.

And keep fighting the fight! I know from experience everything seems blue right now, but there'll be someone else. Just give it time.

LyraHands

It's not that at all. I... we... we went out after the the get-tougher. PaintDrop thinks he went back to college, but he didn't. We met up secretly that evening and I took him to my place. I can still smell his perfume.

He was so nice. We talk about everything: him, me, our lives. Then I offered to go to my place. I've no idea what possessed me. I was half hoping he'd refuse, but he said yes. He told me that after the scare in the Crystal Empire he thought life was short and that he wanted to try so many things. We... spent the night together.

Brush

Err? I'm confused. :( Sorry that I'm slow, but wasn't that what you've always wanted? You found your dream stallion, he was cute and and fun, and open to advances.

Honestly, I'd hoofbump you right now if you didn't sound so miserable.

LyraHands

I slept with a virgin collegecolt, Lyra! After what must have been the most traumatic moment of his life! You think that's okay? Fuck, I'm probably four years older! I'm the first mate he's been with ever! And I'm not talking kicking in the hay! His parent spent the greater part of their lives keeping him away from mares!

I took advantage of him! I'm not sure he was even ready! It's only when I woke up the next morning I realized what I had done. He lay there sleeping on my bed and I though... Stars, I actually thought how that might affect me! And do you know what he did? The moment he opened his eyes, half asleep, he told me he loved me!

Brush

Wow. You got yourself an impressionable one. Not surprising, him being of a Celestial illegal and that. Are you scared his parents would come after you?

LyraHands

Do you have idea how bad it sounds? I shlobbed the brother of my greatest fanfic fan! For that alone I should be sent to the moon! How do you think he will feel when he realizes what happened? He lost virginity with me! Doesn't any of this ring any alarm bells for you?

Brush

Listen to me. You've always been sensitive. True, things aren't ideal, but at the end of the day the two of you are reasonable adults. His family might not like it, but whatever he wants to do he can and they don't have a say.

Has he said anything?

LyraHands

So far he's focusing on his exams again. The freak storm messed the curriculum and something or other. He's sent a few PMs that he loves me and wants me to come see him soon.

I spent half my life writing shitty romance stories, but when it comes to the real thing I'm as horrible as they come!

Brush

Do you want to get serious with him?

LyraHands

I don't know! Right now I think he's the most magnificent creature on hooves, but what do I know about him? All I saw was a fine flank and a gorgeous mane! Max was right about me. I really am obsessed.

Brush

Max wouldn't know romance if it bucked her in the head! And don't give me that crap about you being a monster. Stallions aren't made of glass. If they don't want to do something they sure as Tartarus won't.

Since you want my advice I'll give it to you: talk to him. Tell him everything you told me, all your fears, all your worries, then see what he says. Right now you're just as scared that he might stay than he might run off. Just lay the cards on the table. If you want him, fight to get him and be ready to take responsibility. Knowing you, that isn't a problem.

And if everything else fails, I might ask Twilight for a favor.

LyraHands

Twilight?

Brush

Yep. Cadence's sister in law. ;)

LyraHands

Sorry, but I'm too crap for jokes. Thanks for the talk though. Not sure if I feel better, but it helped.

Brush

Anytime. Just remember: silent mouths get no oats. Talk to him. I'm sure everything will be fine.

LyraHands

Conflict of Definitions

@all: Good morning, Nightlings!

With the return of LyraHands and the first new chapter of MCE out, I'd like to make a few announcements.

Firstly, we have managed to find an artist who'll go through every section of the site and give it the shine it deserves. I've personally known her for quite some time, and can vouch for her skills in the area. Olivia is, in fact, an aetherdesign veteran, specialized in UI, who has created some of the most well known sites out there (including Princess Cadence's wedding site). We're truly fortunate to have her here! Furthermore, I'm happy to say she's a fan of Midnight Castle, be it the original series, so rest assured, we're in good hands.

Things don't stop there! Yesterday evening CodeFilly was contacted by none other than Summer Breeze, known better as Haysticks, has asked to draw the main banner. Undoubtedly, you know him for his work on the Daring Do comics, Cloud Hunters, Tulip Troubles, and his original series Lone Stallion. To our great surprise he has been lurking on the site since day one under the alias HayFish, and has been quite impressed by PaintDrop's work (good job there, filly!)

Finally, I am pleased to announce that the tagging and search engine, that LyraHands started, are fully functional. CodeFilly and I have made sure everything works as it should. Naturally that means from now on you'll have to tag your stories adequately.

With that, I wish you a lovely day.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: what tags are there exactly? And, can you add a better explanation how to use them? When I think of my stories, I can't choose what to put :(

Candle

@The TechNightling: why am I only now hearing about this? Lyra got something started and it's good?!? What's next? Celestia has an account here? Hmm. That might actually be true. Lyra still has lectures with her.

Princess, can you use your influence to make Midnight Castle into a Bridleway show? Please?

MixaMax

@Candle: It's a bit simpler now. :) All you have to do is choose the genre of your story, then add the tags that describe it. Here's an example.

Title: The Human Between Us
Story link: xxxxxxxxxxx
Picture link: xxxxxxxxxxx
Song link: xxxxxxxxxxx
Genre: Drama
Tags: Magitech, Love, Taur, Violence, Sex, Adventure, Nightmare, Alternative, Sorrow

There's no limit, but I'd recommend sticking to six maximum. Also, leave any links you don't use blank. If you have any trouble PM me and I'll help. :)

@MixaMax: you're silly :) Bursty will be coming to Canterlot next week for some work in. Want to have a class get together?

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: Not to be one to argue, but having a hierarchy of tags might be beneficial. Some of the examples you gave are very specific, while others are quite broad.

For example: Magitech is more as interesting note. I am fully aware that it has a large following among comic book and graphic novel enthusiast, but by the same logic you might have Occult, Supernatural, Modern, Historical, and what not. Same thing about Love and Sorrow. If Love is the focus it's a romance. If we have Love, why not add Friendship?

A field to enter a brief description would also be beneficial. There an author could use a few sentences and describe exactly what she (or he) wishes the readers to see. Since this is based on a literary work, I suggest we keep to the literary conventions instead of making up new ones.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: You are hilarious! :)) I love you already!

RRBB

Dear DarkSparkle,

Thank you for your well thought through advice. While what you're suggesting makes sense in the real world, there is no way for a search engine to work on a description. For that reason, the tags are not so much a classification, but a means to identify stories. While you are correct that many more tags could be added, we have settled on tags that are currently used in our small community. Magitech and NonMagic tags exist since we have stories that focus strongly on them, and others avoiding them completely. Same is for Love and Sorrow, Adventure and Social, and so on.

I agree that for clarity a Blurb section could be added so the author could write a description, and will add it momentarily.

Have a nice day.

The TechNightling

@CodeFilly: you two dating yet? That sounds cool! Do it! Doooo iiiiit!

@DarkSparkle: Woo there! Hierarchy of tags sounds so wrong. (And I deal with bureaucracy for a living!) the mess it'll cause outweighs the benefits. You must keep in mind that ponies need to be able to use it, not just me and you. (And don't you dare say cross indexing!)

MixaMax

@The TechNightling: I concede your point, although you'll find that is far less efficient than what I'm suggesting. As the amount of writers grows, so will the tags and you'll be stuck with a flat structure of hundreds of tags.

Could you provide a description or explanation regarding the so-called tags, then? I had some free time yesterday and wrote a few stories I'd like to post, but want to be certain I tag them correctly.

DarkSparkle

@MixaMax: I sincerely doubt that any pony would have any problems with something as simple as tag hierarchy and cross indexing and referencing.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: Tragic. I blame the education system :P

MixaMax

Here's a list of all current tags and an explanation how to use them.

Genre: comedy, drama, horror, satire, romance, poetry, tragedy, tragicomedy, parody

Tags:
Adventure - elements of high adventure
Alternative - alternative to existing canon
Love - love elements
Magitech - magical technology elements
Nightmare - dark and often gruesome elements
NonMagic - contains no magic whatsoever
Sex - erotica
Social - daily life events and social interactions
Sorrow - elements of sadness or heartbreak
Taur - humans with pony elements (centaurs, minotaurs, etc)
Violence - high levels of blood and gore

I trust that everything is clear now?

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: thank you :) would it be possible for you to review my new story? I've tried to follow your advice.

Candle

The tags are so out of sync with reality and proper conventions! I'll make a proper tagging system and send it to you via Private Message!

I would also like my story reviewed. It's never too late for one to learn, especially in a community that thrives on discussions :D

DarkSparkle

@Candle, @DarkSparkle: I can review them too if you want! I love reviewing! :D

PrinceEric

Meanwhile somewhere a pony shouted "Buck you!"

@CodeFilly: please write the story you used for an example! Love, sorrow, sex, and violence... what could anypony want more? :D (I'm sure Brush will pop up and say "Stallions" :P)

RRBB

Two Reviews

Review of Shine
By Candle

Genre: Drama

Having edited a few of Candle's stories so far, technical issues aside, I can honestly say that this one outshines them all. The story is a lovely description of Danny's roommate Loki, who after arriving at college starts noticing strange things.

From the very first sentence we are presented with an encounter between a confused Caprice and an even more confused Loki. Caprice flies into the dorm through the window as Loki is unpacking then, seeing she's made a mistake, apologizes and flies off. Already we are prepared for a comedy of errors to take place and the story doesn't disappoint.

After his unexpected experience, Loki tries to figure out what's going on in a semi disinterested fashion. Each time he's about to put the whole thing behind him something happens: an attack by corporate sorceresses, a magic insect infestation, a dragon in the refrigerator. Candle provides us with a number of laughs and witty dialogue, but it's the topic of the story that shines.

At the end, after yet another unexplained event, we have a thought provoking discussion between Loki and Megan. To our surprise we find that Loki has a crush, possibly more, on Danny, but is hiding it due to the pressures of society. This is a very deep and unusual take, reflecting a lot of our own problems, but presented in a light and amusing fashion. More remarkably. Loki believes that the weird events surrounding him are in fact signs urging to confess his feelings to Danny despite the pressure of society not to. Ultimately we are left with Loki going to Danny and mentally preparing himself for the conversation.

Magnificent take and, with the exception with a few spelling mishaps, well executed. You have come a long way in a short time, Candle. I can only say—keep it up.

The TechNightling

Review of Centaur Heart
By DarkSparkle

Genre: Romance

I must admit, the title had me very conflicted. The combination of Taur and Romance (along with the tags Sex and Love) raised a number of red flags. Hadn't it been for my promise I would have left the story for later at best. I'm glad that I didn't. The story is exceptionally well written and, while not carrying a deep message, has an interesting plot and well thought out world. What is more, it includes elements of the original series alongside Mistmount Chronicles. The story's only fault—the unnecessary amount of technical details which bogs it down.

At first we are presented with Eric, who is reading up on portals in the city library. After going through a number books on myths and magic, he all but gives up, only to bump into an older version of Icelos. Icelos shares that there's much more about portals that could be found in the library and offers to share the secret if Eric is ready.

This is the first point at which the story disappoints. Instead of going on with the storyline, we are subjected to an analyses of the situation and an overly-details description of Eric's fears. Ultimately he agrees and is taken to a new realm to learn the nature of portals. There he meets Hylonome—a centaur rescued by Zeus, yet "imprisoned for her own protection" to be safe from her vicious brothers.

Hylonome agrees to share her knowledge with Eric, but at a price: for every sect she reveals he must perform a boon. Initially it's relatively minor things: seeing ancient artifacts, sending messages to creatures she knew. Gradually the tasks become more and more life threatening. At the same time, Eric continues to fight the Felina corporation. He has developed portal magic which makes him far stronger than before, yet as one of his promises cannot mention where he learned to use it.

Gradually a spark of love forms between Eric and Hylonome, and naturally he sets it on himself to set her free. Arguably, the story could have ended here, but the author decided to go the extra mile, depicting a new set of fights, including against Hylonome's brothers, as well as conflicts between Eric and his friends. We are also presented with a few disturbing scenes of sexual nature that I think we could have done without.

Ultimately, Eric convinces his friends to help and together they obtain Zeus' permission to set Hylonome free, as well as transform her into a full human.

DarkSparkle mentioned they had written fiction before and it shows: from the good level of writing to the obligatory angst and sex that are frequent in such circles. My advice would be—try to remove those bits and your work will shine much brighter.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: Wow! I read through the stories, but after your reviews I don't think I'll post mine. You really are good at this!

I kinda liked the both of them, but Candle's hits far closer to home. You see I'm like that in real life and understand exactly what Loki is going though. In my case my parents know and are very supportive of it. My friends too, but it's not something I shout to everyone.

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: power to you! :) Saw it from a mile away :) Brush will be devastated, though. Then again, she has PaintDrop's brother to chase after >:D (Paint, any chance you can drag your bro to the site? Let Brush have at least some hope :P)

As for the stories, I'm pretty much in agreement with what Tech said. Shine is nice and sweet. I would have ended in a kiss between them, but that's just me. I don't like things open to interpretation.

Centaur Heart, on the other hoof... where do I start. I actually checked all the explanations on magic and psychology, and they are quite correct. I can even say which books they were taken from. The sex scenes, though... my lungs almost exploded from laughing. Really, DarkSparkle? I appreciate you are trying to be accurate, but the way they end up doing it is so uncomfortable they might well quit. This is fiction, and as in fiction, the most important thing is to convey the feeling adequately. Tech is 100% right you could do away with those scenes and still keep the impact. Just add a few sentences that it had been done (Eric blushes at some point or something).

My biggest problem, however, is how useless you've made Zeus. It's almost as if he's powerless and Eric and company must do everything for him. He's a deity, for stars' sake! That and the way you describe humans is a bit weird. I'm not sure they'd act that way.

MixaMax

You don't understand a thing! I know exactly how humans behave!

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: hey, no need to get upset. *hugs* Nopony is being mean to you. Your story is great, it just needs a few touches here and there. We're all here because we like reading and writing. (That and Midnight Castle.) Tech and Max were just offering advice.

After all, we're here for each other!

LyraHands

Fights and Theories

Girls! I have a theory!

Remember how it's said that the crown is actually made of three pieces? What if everything else is like that too? I mean there are three deities, Danny has two siblings (making them a total of three), and there are three corporations.

Won't it be cool if it turns out that all of Mistmount is just part of a split reality that sharded off from the original Midnight Castle and the Everprince is the true ruler?

Also, it's interesting how every group got two boys and one girl (the same as Danny's family). I think there's something here!

What do you think?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Sounds a bit stupid, but at this point it's anypony's guess. On another note, I blame you all! This forum has spoilt me! I can't read normal fiction without finding it boring. :/ Even MC and Mistmount Chronicles seem a bit meh compared to the start of Volume 7.

I asked my brother about MCE and he said it was good. Coming from him that means a lot. He's also impressed by Brush's work (it's annoying at times :/). Still, at least he's doing something useful with his life instead of grooming himself in front of the mirror all day long.

Almost forgot! I finished the illustrations for Brush and Bob. Please tell me what you think, girls? And tell me when you're planning to start the "story of all shipping." RRBB has really been looking forward to it. Let me bring her at least some good news (she got grounded for fighting again.)

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: What the fuck?! :/

@PrinceEric: a little too early for such theories. Rather, what do you think the shatterstone is? If it's one of the ever-stones maybe it's some sort of weapon? Or maybe... Eric, I could kiss you! What if the shatterstone shatters realities? That would be cool!

@Brush: Brushy, you're starting to worry me. You're not in trouble, are you?

MixaMax

Well, guess who got his ass chewed off today? :/ CO has been on my case for that leak all day! "Just because you're sexy, Witch, doesn't mean you can spill info!" Bla, bla, bla!

@PrinceEric, MixaMax: how I want to tell you... :) I pretty much know the starting arc. After the 6th scroll though, I'll be a regular reader like you.

@RRBB: I think you might need some help, kiddo. Nopony fights that much without a reason. Let me know how I can help.

CEOWitch

@MixaMax: I'm here, just was busy.

@PaintDrop: Sure. Tell her to message me when she can.

Brush

Seems like I'm not the only one who had a crappy day. :/ Three rejections. Top in my class in magic, A-list student in the conservatory and I still can't be trusted with even the basic stuff! At this point I'm praying they'll let me be a mailmare! :/

@PaintDrop: is she alright? I think it's high time I talked with her.

LyraHands

@LyraHands, @CEOWitch, @MixaMax: it got ugly this time. She bit a classmate's feathers off. No teachers saw and the classmate isn't a snitch, but that got her really shaken.

PaintDrop

Gosh! That sounds extreme. I know I'm half Equestria away, but let me know if I can help.

DannyFan

What?! Fighting in class? That's just... Tell me which school! I'll go there and set things straight! Biting wings off. They should get along together, not fight. At worst, they should discuss their differences and find a solution to their problem. Whatever the reason there's always a solution.

DarkSparkle

Thanks, all. I'll tell her that, but it's really nothing new. Schools are much more violent than you think, and this is a sort of complicated issue. I expect RRBB to be back in a few days to tell you all about it.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Well, I'm taking things into my own hooves! I'm also telling my sister!

MixaMax

Do you want me to get involved?

Luna

Or me?

TheRealLuna

@Luna: That might be a good idea, Princess. Just please allow me to try and resolve this first. Or her friends. I really don't want us to bother you needlessly.

DarkSparkle

@PaintDrop: I'll pass by today.

Brush

@RRBB, @PaintDrop: The reason this small community is thriving is because we believe in the values of the series. When somepony is in trouble it's only natural that we want to help, and CEOWitch is right. You are fighting more and more, RRBB.

I have an idea what is going on, but would rather talk to you in private. Get PaintDrop's tech if you have to, but please write me, okay?

LyraHands

You said it, mare. If there's anything we can help with, we will. And don't you worry about the story. We'll put our heads together and make the best one the site has ever seen! (We have Brush and you, after all. ;))

@CEOWitch: I just have to ask... is your CEO into nice asses that she gives you such a hard time? :P

Bob

@Bob: Best ass in the Wonderbolts! Wait, what? :P

CEOWitch

@all: As much as we want to help, maybe at this point we should move all conversations on the matter to private.

@PrinceEric: I think you and Max might be onto something here. The whole idea of reality shards does seem linked with this shatter stone. I think the more important question is: who is the Everprince. What if he's also someone who's also been split in the three realities and needs the crown to become whole again?

As much as I hate saying this, we still don't know if Hades is good (he might still be tainted) or if that's him at all. Danny usually receives dreams from Zeus. All Hades dreams so far have been attempts to harm him, with one exception. Could it be this is all a corporate trick?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: I thought of that, but remember the bit of the evil being old and new? Hades has been in the series quite a lot. If anyone I'd say it might be Poseidon making an appearance. Or maybe the three deities are the Everprince and Hades wants them to remain as separate entities?

Argh! Too much ideas! :D

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Never change, colt! :) You're adorable.

PaintDrop

Author's Notes:

Hi, all!

With Day 30 nearing, I'm thinking of doing another character AMA :) Please let me know which of the posters (other than Luna) you'd like to have :)

Also, can someone good with colours help me find suitable ones so I can change the posts? im really bad at this :(

RRBB's PM Troubles

Hey, it's me.

Parents have grounded me real bad. Will be days before I get back to the site :/ All because of that idiot! When I get back to school, I'll show her!

PaintDrop

Why do you get in so much trouble? :(

LyraHands

Oh, please don't be like Paint! I got into a little argument, big deal. Not like anypony was seriously hurt. Some girls really like to exaggerate! I've been through this lots of times. So, maybe I was a bit mean, but hey, life at school is tough.

PaintDrop

If things weren't serious you wouldn't be talking to me. So tell me exactly what happened! It was her again, wasn't it?

LyraHands

Fine! Yes, it was her. It's always her! Just seeing her makes me want to tear her mane off! Why doesn't she just quit and go back to Cloudsdale or somewhere! It's not like she'll be missed! The trash they let come to school is really appalling!

PaintDrop

I didn't meant that! You're cool. And so is Brush, and even Max. I just... I don't know why she drives me crazy, but she does! I can't stand her!

PaintDrop

Biting somepony's feathers off isn't a slap on the muzzle, filly! Have you any idea how painful that is for a pegasus? I've had friends cry so hard they had to magic them to calm down.

First thing when you get back you apologies to her, and this time do it right! I'll see if I can help her get better faster. Honestly, if you were my kid sister, I'd give you such a trashing right now! You literally have it all, and you just mess things up! No one can save you from yourself, even me.

LyraHands

This is why it's a bad idea talking to you. I always end up crying!

PaintDrop

I know. I've been there. Why do you hate her so much, though? I thought you had put all that stuff behind you.

LyraHands

I hate her because I like her!

PaintDrop

I can't like her! She’s the most horrible pony in existence! She sticks, is always dirty, and has the perception of a blind rock! And I still like that freak! And hate myself for it!

PaintDrop

And don't get me started on my parents! If they ever find out... Dad will probably get a heart attack. And mom? Well she'll probably disown me and burn my name off the family tree. Doesn't matter that she married into the family!

The mere suggestion I could associate with someone as lowly as her would get my relatives to flip! Life is so unfair sometimes! It'll be different if she just notices me for once. But no! I try to be nice and she ridicules me in front of the entire class! I try helping her out and she assures me of conniving against her! I bet that idiot doesn't even know what conniving means!

PaintDrop

Sweetie, do you think it might be more than like?

LyraHands

Lyra, that's gross! I'm not some freak! I just like her as a friend!

PaintDrop

I didn't mean that!

PaintDrop

I know. Something is going on with you, though, I've seen you be nice, then all of a sudden there's this. Have you been mean to anypony else?

LyraHands

Nah. Just a few yells and bucks. Nothing serious.

You know, that's why I got into Midnight Castle. It helps me relax. Things would be so much better if there really was a portal to a human world. There I could finally be myself: no stupid parents, no stupid classmates, or annoying teachers, no one to judge me. Do you think Princess Celestia has a hidden portal somewhere?

PaintDrop

Filly, if there were something I'd know about it. ;) Still, I'd only go visiting. I have too many friends there. You do too! And don't give me that hay about not having any friends! I know at least two (and that's outside the site).

LyraHands

You're a good mare, you know that, right? I wish I had a sister like you.

PaintDrop

Because having an unemployed older sister is so cool? :P Just messing with you. You know that you don't have to get grounded to talk to me. (I've been saying that a lot lately.) Things are not ideal for me right now, but I'm still here for advice.

Best find somepony to talk to. PaintDrop told me you don't share things with her lately. Not like before anyway.

LyraHands

What?! That crybaby! And yes, I know she'll be able to read my messages! I just don't think she can help me all the time. Plus, I also got Max and her sister. (Oh mare, was she mad when she learned. Let me tell you those two are scary!)

PaintDrop

You know what they say: only thing worse than unicorns fighting is unicorn stallions fighting. :P Max is harmless, though. Just don't tell her I said that.

Going back to you, do you feel a bit better? I can pass by if you want me.

LyraHands

Naaah. I'm fine. You always calm me down. Besides, I got a whole site of ponies to be nasty at :P

Also, Max's sis is here. I have no idea how she tricks my parents into letting her in, but it works every time. Even PaintDrop has a harder time.

Can you do me one favor, though? If you're friends with CEOWitch and she really is part of the Wonderbolts, can you get her to get me their autographs? I know it's silly, but... you know.

PaintDrop

I'll send CEO a PM and see how things go from there. Shouldn't be a problem, I think. I've done far wilder things :) Don't tell anypony, but I had caramels with Blueblood on my last day before leaving Camterlot. I told him I was a huge MC fan and Caprice wouldn't forgive me if I left without asking Bellucio to a date. And he went along.

LyraHands

You dork! :)

PaintDrop

This dork has a selfie with two Princesses and a Prince :P
Must go now—more interviews and house searching. :/

Take care, and please no fighting at school.

LyraHands

I'll try

PaintDrop

Author's Notes:

So far one vote for Brush and half for CEOWitch and MixaMax :)

Second Spoiler

Megan Williams

Scholar, guardian, chosen.

Silent and determined, Megan was chosen from birth to serve as her realm's guardian, yet carried that secret hidden inside until it was revealed to her by Luna. Shying away from the spotlight, she helps her brother and his friends protect their realm, while seeking answers as a researcher at the Skyla corporation.

Siblings: Danny and Molly.
Place of birth: Mistmount, Gumania
Occupation: Junior field researcher of the Skyla corporation
Hobby: Linear Algebra and Analytical Geometry
Mentor deity: Unknown
Magic power: Unknown
Eternity gem: Shatterstone

"You idiot, Danny! You know I'll do anything for all three of you"

With RRBB occupied, it falls upon me to bring you this. And yes there's a Megan figurine as well. (The figurine isn't anything special. Mine is much better! I'll be sharing a pic as soon as I get the fingers right. They are a nightmare!)

As one who's put Mistmount Chronicles on pause until I read the original Midnight Castle, I feel terribly spoilered. "Realm's guardian"?! "Revealed by Luna?!" Somepony who has read the books, please tell me if those things happened! And please no further spoilers (I'm looking at you, PrinceEric ;)).

Also, Megan is such a geek! :) Having LAAG as a hobby? Lol! I guess I'm cool as well now :P

Another interesting thing is the mention of the shatterstone. With the next scroll expected tomorrow, I guess I know which group it will focus on.

What do you girls think?

PaintDrop

I actually hate myself right now! This series is getting better and better. Not gonna lie, I thought it'll be just another money grab, but wow do they link things. Granted this is just the second scroll. We already have one of the mysterious gems explained (to a degree) as well as a clear indication there'll be more reality shattering. (I wonder if Megan will split her brother in three while experimenting with the stone. That would be fun :))

@PaintDrop: something you missed: it's mentioned that Megan has a deity as well as powers. And going back to your question, there's nothing actually revealed on the matter. There are a few scenes with her talking with Luna about some secret, but it was never mentioned. CodeFilly used to theorize about it a lot. Interesting way to get us ready for things to come.

The huge problem with the old series (not talking about the originals) was that there was only a broad connection between stories. We have Danny and Co. fight titanspawn, then next chapter they are dealing with Felina agents testing hazardous magic. This seems to be well thought out.

Oh, and I think my sis got the MC bug :)

MixaMax

Luna can do anything! Ha ha ha!

Actually, there had been plans to include the actual scene of the conversation between Megan and Luna as early as volume 5. For one reason or another it never happened. If you go through the fourth chapter of volume 3 you'll see that Luna addresses Megan as "seven times blessed". That was supposed to be linked to her being chosen, not a funny way of greeting her.

I can promise you, though, you haven't seen anything yet ;)

Luna

@Luna: Not fair! How can you spoil and I can't? :/

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: because I know where to draw the line and you don't! Also, you aren't a princess last I checked. :)

Luna

Mind blown! :))) On so many levels! I get to talk with a Wonderbolts and a Princess in this place! Also, MCE is out of this world! At times I think S.Child is actually a human, who writes this in the human world, then sends it to S&S by magic portal!

Three Dannys? Three? And yet one? Can't wait to read and analyze this!

Also one of my friends told me something big is going to happen in a month. She was very vague about it, but I have ways to get her to share :D

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: You scare me sometimes. :)

PaintDrop

Ah, speculation! This is what I like to see :)

@MixaMax: I remember those theories. And now we see that CodeFilly was actually right! :) And, I agree that the way they are linking everything together is working quite well so far. If this keeps up we might have something to take the crown from Daring Do (doubtful, but a mare can dream.)

Sorry I have to be short, but I might have found a solution to my homelessness issue. :) With luck next time I post I'll have good news!

LyraHands

Will you stop being so dramatic?! Everypony, Lyra will be moving in at my place till she finds one of her own. She's just being a mule about it!

Bob

...this is my next post. I have good news.

LyraHands

@PaintDrop, @MixaMax: I find it interesting that Megan would be the second of the grand nine to get her spoilers out. It was clear that Danny would be first, possibly followed by Blazen or Eric (at least that was my theory).

On the surface it doesn't look like a big deal, but I believe this is S&S trying to tell us something. Note that Megan is very different to the original core demographic: she is a girl in her late teens and early twenties, and older than the six heroes. If you ask me this is a clear indication that S&S want to include the female audience (at least in sort). This is no longer a colt's series, it's a series mares could read to their foals. I wouldn't be surprised if we also see an increase in romantic chapters, and not only between Molly and Bellucio.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: sister, you seriously over analyze things. MC has always been an inbetween series. Even in the original there was a strong female presence. The idea of an older sister isn't new, so stop trying to turn Midnight Castle into a bucking Daring Do copy!

CEOWitch

Fight! Fight! Fight! :)

DannyFan

@CEOWitch: I'll always like you, but you act like an asshole sometimes. Then you ask why ponies end up in tears and hating you.

PaintDrop

I'm not crying!!!

DarkSparkle

Analysis 2

Midnight Castle: Everhere, Vol 7, Chapter 2, The Shatterstone

We start with Megan and Blazen having a talk (in secret) about something in Danny's past. Megan insists that Blazen be honest with Danny when they manage to get the realities back. Blazen threatens to reveal her secret (now I'm really curious about that!) so things end at a stalemate.

Meanwhile, Karl has been going about checking if the plants and animals are the same. For the most part there are no differences, yet it turns out that Danny's pup is feral in this reality. Just as he tries to get it out of hiding, Caprice shows up asking where they have been all this time. Karl tries to explain, but Megan and Blazen appear and decide it's time to think about their next steps. Megan starts inspecting the crown when they are suddenly surrounded by Felina corp sorceresses. Everyone prepares for a fight, then the CEO's daughter (yes, it's Cassandra) descends from the sky and congratulates Megan for finding the crown. (Yikes! In this reality she's been working for Felina corp all along!)

We then see Bellucio's group. Omni, in typical Omni fashion, keeps playing about with the crown, while Euryala paces about panicking (for some reason she's terrified that this is Poseidon's reality). Annoyed, Bellucio suggests they go to his place until things calm down. They do, but along the way it's obvious that Mistmount has an increased guard sorceress presence. The three witness a teen getting arrested for no apparent reason. Bellucio is about to see what's going on, when Euryala tells him to stop. ("You've no idea what Poseidon is like, especially when unchecked.")

The group's involvement ends with them going to Bellucio's mansion, where the butler asks Euryala why she hasn't dusted the china (Oooh! Continuity from that time Euryala was Bellucio's maid? I know the ages don't match, but that's one huge coincidence.)

Back in the Zeus reality, Megan and company are taken to a Felina corp prison facility. Megan is ushered to the VIP section, while everyone else is taken away (probably to be locked up). Megan waits in some luxurious room, catching up on news from the net (seems Felina is the only corp in the area, all others have been dismantled). Then, Cassandra comes in and slaps her across the face (Wow! Talk about going hardcore! This is the first time I see an actual slap in the series! Still can't believe they did it.). Turns out that Cass and Megan knew each other from college and were friends. Cass has been coveting for her and giving info all this time. (Not sure if only in this reality or in general.)

This is what I love about this series! Everyone has character. The villains aren't just some evil league of evil, they have their own personalities. Some of them are actually nice, but do terrible things. I just wish more books would be like this and not treat Colts as idiots. (Okay, rant over :P.)

We learn that Cassandra had this complicated plan to keep the corp from getting the crown all along. Now that it's in a corporate facility, though, her father is already on his way to get it. She also mentions having a last resort plan, but it being risky. (This is getting tense!)

Sudden jump to Danny who's having trouble breathing. For some reason Hades is still corrupt in the Hades reality, and while Danny is his faithful servant ("Chosen of Hades") his un-corruptness is causing him to suffocate. Of course he must pretend that he's evil Danny (rather loyal Danny. Hades wasn't shown doing anything evil), while Eric and Molly try to keep him from fainting. (Interesting why neither of them have any problems breathing). Molly turned out to be smart enough to hide the crown (first good decision she's done in the entire series) so that's one thing they don't have to worry about. Cerberus in human form appears and tells Danny he is expected for the peace talks with the Titans.

Let me just pause for a moment. Cerberus! In human form! And not just some monster with three heads, but three identical twins who can shapeshift into one beast form at will!

Argh! I'll have to stop here :( Parents making a fuss about me not doing homework. :((( This chapter is soooo gooood! Really want to keep on reading, but! I'll promise to finish the review tomorrow!

PrinceEric

Whoa! A wall of text and you only got half way?! I'm impressed, PrinceEric! If only I could be so good :(

Yeah, though. This keeps getting better and better! If the rest of the series is as good, I'll buy a hat and publicly eat it at our next meetup! On that note...

@LyraHands: how about we organize a site greet-and-meet? I'm curious to see lots of the new members.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: You just want to see if there are any cute stallions! Just like Brush! -RRBB

As you can see RRBB is back in school... We both agree that the second chapter was great! Even my brother found it remarkable. He's actually agreed to edit some of Brush's stuff when he comes home end of this week.

Must go. Time for class.

PaintDrop

Dear PrinceEric.

It's impressive that you have such enthusiasm, but maybe keep future reviews slightly shorter? Remember it's the main points that are important. :)

A point of interest, the early series was far more violent than this one, although Mistmount Chronicles was toned down a lot. In the original series we had characters (of various ages) punch each other. On one occasion there even was a pony kicking a human in the face. Personally, I doubt that a human would survive after that, but those were different times.

Still, good job and keep on analyzing.

The TechNightling

@MixaMax, @LyraHands: A meetup sounds like a sweet idea! I can organize something. I'd offer my place, but clouds... Still, there are a few ponies I could ask.

Also, next chapters are even better ;)

CEOWitch

Umm, hiii everybody! :)

I'm totally new to this, but a friend said I'd like it, so... hi? O:) *waves hand*

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: hello and welcome, sweetie :) Are you a stallion? *ear nibbles*

Brush

@Brush: I should have known it would take a potential stallion to bring you back :P You had me worried there, Brush. Next time reply to your fucking PMs!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: I'm fine, no worries. Been working and writing.

Oh, and buck you!

Brush

Brush: Err, no I'm a filly.

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: Welcome :) Don't worry, some of the posters might be a bit strange, but we're a friendly bunch. :) Feel free to explore the site, read stories, or just hang out :D

Also, use @<name> to notify someone :)

@all: a meet-and-greet sounds fine, though I'm not sure how available I'll be given my circumstances. CEOWitch, if you can organize this I'll be grateful. I'll try to go, but no promises.

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Thank you! <3 :)

SweetStuff

@PrinceEric, @The TechNightling: I always write a detailed summary of what I review, then cut it down to the most essential elements I present in checklist format. That way, anypony can experience the full content of the story at a fraction of the time.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: I'm sure you do.

MixaMax

Author's Notes:

One more day for AMA character :)

Add your choice in the comments if you haven't already :D

Analysis 2.5

Sorry :( I'll try to write less. It's difficult when the story is so good! :D

Oh, and yes please for the meeting! Can we do it at Canterlot? I have relatives there, so can go without problem. Manehattan I'm not sure.

Anyway, here I go!

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Midnight Castle: Everhere, Vol 7, Chapter 2, The Shatterstone - Part 2

The Cerberus triplets take Danny and Molly to the banquet hall, while Eric (who's secretly given the crown) leaves the temple (?) to try and figure out a way to get back. He takes out his handphone to compare the city with the pictures he's made before and discovers that the city is owned by the Atlas corporation (and their CEO is a titan).

Jump back to Megan in the Zeus reality. Cassandra's plan is for them to break into the vault and try and use one of the forbidden artifacts in the hopes it would destroy the crown. That would ensure that the Everprince is never restored. While they set up a complicated set of events to help them get there Blazen starts acting on his own. Taking a piece of black chalk he's been hiding in his ear (gross!) he draws some weird symbols on the ground that transform into a nightmare beast, which sets him, Caprice, and Karl free. Rushing off, they coincidentally bump into Megan and Cassandra on their way to the vault. No one says a word, but Cassandra notices the traces of chalk on Blazen's fingers. Fearing that the CEO might arrive at any moment the group rushes into the vault room. Arriving there, however, they find that someone is already there. A man identifying himself as the director shows them a blue glowing rock and asks if that's what they are searching for.

Meanwhile, Euryala has finally convinced the butler she isn't a member of Bellucio's staff. It also becomes clear that Bellucio is extremely rich, mostly because he's one of the dreamwaters (anyone who can hear Poseidon when they dream). Euryala insists they should flee out of town, but Bellucio refuses. Omni, who as always goes over Bellucio's things finds a photo of Bellucio and eleven unknown boys, all in strange uniforms. A step in front of them is a tall pale man with blue hair, who Euryala identifies as Poseidon. Everyone ransacks Bellucio's room and find more information of him being something of a known secret agent (?) who does whatever Poseidon tells him. Omni comments it's like Danny in the real reality, but then they find a picture of Bellucio standing next to a display case with a strange rock in it, and a plaque reading The Shatterstone.

(Reality Hades). Danny and Molly have a weird time talking with deities (everyone at the banquet is a titan or deity! Heck, the Cerberus triplets are just servants!) and starts getting a sense that they are forming an alliance against something. Before he could say more he starts choking uncontrollably and Molly rushes to help him.

(Reality Zeus) The Director says he's the Felina CEO's boss, then just hands them the stone. Blazen tries to use his chalk monster to attack him, but the mister disintegrates into dust. The Director pretty much says that the crown cannot be destroyed, at least not while separated. To achieve that they must find the roost and knowledge to do so. (It's explained that the Stone has the power, like the crown, to shatter and reunite realities.) He says Megan can use it to merge the realities in one, but in doing so will leave a piece of herself to each of them. That is the price and her choice to make.

(Reality Poseidon) Euryala finally convinces Bellucio they must get out of his house. (Oh, and Omni finds a stash of daggers and other concealable weapons Bellucio must have used in his missions :)) As they try to leave, all the water in the room attacks them, then transforms into a water warrior with ice gear (wicked armored surfer humie! I hope that miniature is for sale! :) Euryala takes out a fancy staff and says "I told you so".

(Reality Hades) Everyone has surrounded Danny as he lurches on the floor, gasping for air. Cerberus figures something's not right so he transformed into his three-headed self. There are whispers that Danny is tainted. Molly tries to remain close, but some titan (Prometheus) takes her away. Hades then orders that Cerberus "eliminate the plague".

Megan keeps hesitating, but in the end uses the shatterstone. Suddenly everyone is back where they found the crown. Omni's still holding it, yet this time nothing weird happens. Euryala tries to take it, but both Bellucio and Megan say she shouldn't even think about it. Euryala huffs and puffs, then leaves. A bit later everyone else does as well, with only Megan remaining. Concerned, Karl asks what's going on. Then Megan tells him she can't see with her right eye, almost as if it isn't there anymore.

That was incredible! So wild that I don't know what to think! I'll reread everything just to make sense of it all! There are so many threads, so many questions! I'm going insane! :D

Oh, next chapter will be "The Equestrian Convict" Can't wait! :)

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: usually when you try to write less you don't use more words ;). We still love you, though.

And yes, this was quite the brain exercise. As much as I like it, though, I'm worried about the readership. I know this is a horrible thing to say, but these types of books aren't aimed at a thinking audience. It's better suited for ponies in middle school and older. At least, in my opinion.

Another interesting thing I've notices: female characters so far have a much larger role than all stories before. I understand that Karl is pretty much a background character, but Megan pretty much stole the show (Euryala, and even Molly had strong appearances as well.) Maybe it's because of the sudden shift? I was expecting Danny to carry the story on his back, provided his words at the end of the previous scroll. Maybe it's just me?

PaintDrop

Each time there's a new Midnight Castle series I tell myself they can't possibly be as good as that, and each time I'm wrong! Everhere is... I don't know! Daring Do can eat her wings off! Really, this is so much better! And the characters are developed so well! We couldn't see from PrinceEric's review, but they aren't anywhere as flat as the previous series. (Volume 4 did have this problem a lot.)

@PaintDrop: I did notice, yes, and that's not all. Caprice is nearly a main character. Also the next chapter is the first that has the word Equestria in the title. This means it'll be involved much more. I love it!

LyraHands

@LyraHands: I don't know. :/ I like my humans human. There's nothing worse in suddenly sticking ponies in there. If I wanted to read pony adventure books, I'd do that! There are hundreds of series to choose from. What makes Midnight Castle special is precisely the humans.

I don't care if you hate me for it, but i want it to become a human only series.

MixaMax

Sorry, but I'm completely lost :(

If there was one reality and then it's split into three, does that mean the merge reality is a different reality than the other three? In that case must they get the crown in all four realities? And if everyone is on reality is in the others how come there are things missing in the shattered realities?

I liked the way it was written (and I love Molly <3) but this is really confusing :(

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: The way I see it is like one of those huge pictures you make, but you don't have enough paper so you put three next to each other. The three realities are the pieces, and the big one is the picture.

And yes, Molly is magnificent! Cerberus also has me intrigued, as do the Director, and Prometheus. Based on past books, when there's a name mentioned that character usually has some important role. Just like Euryala.

DannyFan

I still don't get it, but I'll keep reading! Thanks :)

SweetStuff

Molly can go buck a tree!

Brush

They're pulling no punches with the mythological stuff. Atlas and Prometheus are in fact ancient beings that inhabited Tartarus. I wonder if we'll get to see other creatures. Hydra anyone? :)

This was a pretty solid opening for any series. As was said there are so many directions this could continue. The fact that we have a breather (based on next chapter's title) means we'll have a mix of story arcs and unrelated chapters.

@CEOWitch: can you say if next chapter is related?

Bob

@Bob: She can't and it isn't. ;)

Luna

@Bob: apparently, I can't and it isn't.

If everyone okay with the meetup being in Canterlot? There are a few ponies I can ask about hotels and convention centers.

CEOWitch

I have a place that can easily hold up to 50 ponies. (No, it isn't the Palace proper ;)) It'll be free of charge, so only thing participants need to cover are travel and food.

Luna

I'll see if I can get Fleetfoot to go. (No guarantees, though.)

@Luna: any chance of you dragging any of the writers?

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: Ha! Hahaha! Hahahahahahaha ha! Sure, why not :)

Luna

I think I fainted... :) RIP!

LyraHands

Author's Notes:

The next character AMA is CEOWitch. :)
I'll post a blog in a few hours :)

Brush's PM Exchange

Finally, I'm done with exams for the semester. Finally I get to enjoy a few weeks of calm, or maybe not ;).

It was so sweet of you to come to the Crystal Empire. I found it incredible. You are incredible! To think if it wasn't for my sister I might never have met you. Fate is a strange thing. Sometimes the most unexpected thing happens by accident. In a few days I'll be back home and we'll be seeing a lot more of each other.

MasterOfThisAstra

I'll be counting the hours. *ear nibble*

And I had a magical time at the Empire, even with all the hiding and sneaking around. :P This time we can be together for a bit longer, I hope? How long will you be here?

Brush

Three weeks. Half of that I'll probably have to spend with my parents. Now that I'm a year away from graduation they've begun to notice me. And, of course, they have started making subtle remarks that I must find a mare from a good family. At times I almost want to tell them about you just to see their reaction.

MasterOfThisAstra

You really are extreme, my little hooftoy :P Won't it be a problem me coming to your house, though? This will be the second time I'm there. Don't you think your parents will start asking questions? Also, I'm worried that PaintDrop might be catching on. She's already shipped our OCs in a few of her sketches. (Thank the stars it's only kissing.) :P

Brush

Sweet wings, my parents won't notice a thing. As long as my sister and her friend are there they won't even see you as a mare in that way. Besides my father likes you. Now only that, but you are famous! My roommate recognized you and got really pissy about it. (He's a huge Manehattan snob, and keeps going on and on that one time he numbed into Princess Twilight before her ascension.)

I'm actually thinking of announcing we're dating once I graduate. Nothing big. I don't like too much fuss. If we get married I foresee a small ceremony, just a dozen ponies at most, then I'll go live at your place.

MasterOfThisAstra

What did I do to deserve you? You're too good for me...

Brush

I'm the lucky one here. Let me tell you a secret about stallions: we're incredibly vain and do everything in our power to get noticed. A sure way to get a stallion is ignore him a few times. (And yes, I've fallen for that one myself. The mare was as sensitive as a brick.)

You were beautiful before I met you. After I saw you, you became ten times more.

MasterOfThisAstra

I'm no Fleetfoot, sweetie, but thank you.

Do you think we'll get any writing done during our writing time? :P

Brush

Well I hope we manage to get at least a chapter ready. Not that I'd mind if we don't. ;) I suppose we'll have to with my sister being there. It's a bit weird seeing her adore you almost as much as I do. Of course, when your writing is that good.

MasterOfThisAstra

You're breaking the rules again. You know it's my job to incessantly flatter you :P

But yes, she does. Did I tell you she asked me what I thought of you after my first visit?

Brush

That little pigtail! What did you say?

MasterOfThisAstra

Pigtail? Lol! I just said you were a gorgeous specimen and she could sacrifice you to me anytime she wants. The best part was she thought about it for a while and said "she'd think about it." :D

Brush

How considerate of her. Well, at least we know if all else fails you could buy me body and soul for the low price of a fanfic. (Not that you haven't already ;))

MasterOfThisAstra

You say that, but you're the one who got me! And quite mercilessly at that! :P This is a bit embarrassing, but I've been having dreams about you. Frequently. Some of the things we did were outright awkward.

Brush

Well, will you tell me what they were? Or do I have to wait for you to show me?

MasterOfThisAstra

Mota! You're horrible! :P

Brush

Don't I know it? I've just been pretending to be timid and fragile. :P

MasterOfThisAstra

Sometimes I think I've infected you with my bad aethernet habits. When we first talked you were so refined and pure. Now look at you! You're even emoticoning like me!

Brush

It's a slippery slope. One moment we're discussing Midnight Castle, the next we're drinking champagne from saddlebags. Come to think of it we're just like Molly and Bellucio.

MasterOfThisAstra

Wow! Way to ruin the moment. :/

...

Although, you'd make a pretty good Bellucio. You have the frame and the mane to pull it off. Add that innocent collegecolt expression and the mares'll go wild. (I'll have to clip their tails, of course. Nopony touches my Bellucio!)

I don't think I could be Molly, though.

Brush

You'll make a great Molly! (The Molly of this series, I mean.) Maybe we can cosplay for the meet-up? I know somepony who could make me a great Bellucio costume. I'll ask for her to make you a Molly.

MasterOfThisAstra

And we'll smooch and nibble throughout Canterlot. :P

Brush

I'm being serious. You can bet others will come in costumes too. Why can't we go as Molly and Bellucio?

MasterOfThisAstra

Sweetie, this isn't a Daring Do convention. Nightling meetups are just a few friends getting together in a coffee shop. And I do mean few. I've been going to them ever since Lyra started organizing them. We were so uncomfortable that the first few times we avoided the word "human". Only Lyra was crazy enough to come with a set of shoes shaped like hands. (That's how she got her nickname.)

Brush

But what if we do it this time?

MasterOfThisAstra

Sweetness, I really don't want to. It'll be way too awkward...

Brush

Please? For me? I promise to make it up for you.

MasterOfThisAstra

We've been dating a week and already you manipulate me! :P okay, if it means so much to you I'll go as Molly. Just don't expect me to wear the costume all the way to Canterlot.

Brush

Love you, sugar wings? *nuzzles*

MasterOfThisAstra

I know *nuzzles* *ear nibble*

Brush

Questionnaire 2

Hello, everypony!

I love Midnight Castle! It's my 7th most favorite book ever! Once I wrote a school play based on Mistmount Chronicles, but nopony wanted to play in it, so it was postponed.

I found this site through a friend and I found it really precious! It's better than many of the Daring Do and Wonder Mare ones I've seen. :)

Name: Twist
City: Ponyville
Race: Earth Pony
Sex: Female
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Omni
Favorite pony: Caprice
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: Euryala
Favorite chapter: It's Difficult Being Bellucio
Favorite quote: "It's a two in two!" - Omni

Twist

This seems like fun! :) I'll have a go after I finish my homework. (Mean sis is glaring at me.)

SweetStuff

@all: Please don't put any real life information on the site! It's ill advised and could be read by lurkers who haven't even registered.

@Twist: I highly recommend you edit your post.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: I know. I'm registered in so many places that everypony knows me. I also have a lot of friends, so it's no worry. Thanks for the concern!

Twist

Finally done! I hate math :/ Lit is so much better. :)

Name: SweetStuff
City: Manehattan
Race: Unicorn
Sex: Filly
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Blazen
Favorite pony: Caprice
Favorite deity: Hades (the other two seem scary)
Favorite background character: Prometheus
Favorite chapter: The Shatterstone
Favorite quote: I don't know yet :(

SweetStuff

@Twist: you really should be a bit more careful. MC is a nice place, but always better to be safe than sorry.

Still glad to have you here :)

P.S. Tried your candy canes yesterday. There are great! :D

LyraHands

The candy canes were okay... I kid :P They are the best :D If you ruin Lyra's figure I'm coming after you, Twist! :P

Bob

I suppose I should fill the questionnaire as well... *magnanimous sigh*

Name: (Princess) Luna
City: Canterlot (formerly the Moon)
Race: Alicorn
Sex: Mare
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Megan
Favorite pony: Caprice
Favorite deity: Me
Favorite background character: Atlas
Favorite chapter: Everhere, Chapter 13
Favorite quote: "This we did not expect!" - ???

Luna

Name: (Real Princess) Luna
City: Canterlot (formerly the Moon, Castle of the Two Sisters)
Race: Real Alicorn
Sex: Real Mare (not like the mares that you see nowadays!)
Favorite humie (Mistmount): The real Megan
Favorite pony: The real Caprice
Favorite deity: The real Me
Favorite background character: The real Atlas
Favorite chapter: Everhere, Chapter 14
Favorite quote: "I knew it all along!" - !!!

TheRealLuna

@Bob, @LyraHands: Thank you! :) I'll make you more. (But not too much :D)

Twist

@Bob: thanks a lot! :/ I could have had all the candy canes!

LyraHands

I completely forgot about the questionnaire! Smashing that you brought it up, Twist :) Time to dazzle the site with my answers!

City: Trottingham
Race: earth pony
Sex: stallion
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Danny
Favorite pony: None
Favorite deity: None
Favorite background character: None
Favorite chapter: One Step Between
Favorite quote: "Have a water bottle."

DannyFan

@DannyFan: you're from Trottingham?! I'm swooning already! I really hope you make it to the meetup! You've no idea how much I love listening to Trottny accents :)

MixaMax

@MixaMax: And you call me stallion-obsessed? :/ Lyra, can you rename her to MaxKettle?

Brush

@Brush: hush! Don't you have any stallions to drool over that you're picking with me? And admit it, you want to hear him just as much as I do.

Oh, and keep in mind that I have the power to change names! So you better be nice with me or who knows what might happen?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Pfft!

HypocriticalBrush

Very funny! :/ now set it back!

HypocriticalBrush

A survey sound alike a wonderful idea, although it seems a bit oversimplified. Here's a suggestion for a much better one, which I'll fill out:

UserName: DarkSparkle
City of Birth: Canterlot
Occupation: Administrator
Original Race: Unicorn
Siblings: 2
Favorite Human: Eric
Favorite Deity: Zeus
Favorite Secondary Character: Orpheus
Favorite Secondary Character: Cassandra
Favorite Volume: 7
Favorite Chapter: The Shatterstone
Favorite Quote: "the mana required to run this thing must be in the gigs range!" - Eric

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: quite good. Just one question. Why do you have TWO favorites, when by definition there could only be one favorite? :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: That's because I forgot to specify. I have a male and female favorite.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: Really? Then why aren't your other favorites divided by male and female? :D

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Don't be rude. I think it's a nice template. You're such an ass sometimes. :/

@DarkSparkle: Don't worry about Max. She does get like that at times. She's an administrator as well, so... well, it's not her fault (RIP Max! :P)

LyraHands

I like Eric as well. He's nice.

CodeFilly

Race: Dragon
Sex: Male
Favorite humie (Mistmount): Cassandra
Favorite pony: Luna
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: I'll have to go with Loki. He's just been in one scroll, but he's very amusing.
Favorite chapter: Boardgame Mania
Favorite quote: "Free food at half price!" - Omni

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: oh, baby, gimme some of your fire *wink* *nuzzle*

Brush

@Brush: sorry, I'm already taken. And by a pony you know well. :)

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: Huh? Who?

Brush

Wow! So many new ponies! I didn't think we had that many active members until now! This is really great! I really hope all of you make it to the meetup! I've already talked with my parents and they are okay with it! (Well, I sort of said that a Wonderbolt will take me there and back. Hope that's okay, CEOWitch?

PrinceEric

@Brush: he's my boyfriend ;) I brought him here, so be nice.

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: Way to go, mare! It's always the quiet ones? I bet half the ponies here don't have a SO! *looks at Brush*

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Buck you down a cliff!

Brush

@CodeFilly: what did you get me into?

MightyDragon

@PrinceEric: if you're in Cloudsdale, no problem. I'll make sure somepony cool picks you up :)

CEOWitch

@MightyDragon: I warned you what would happen if you regged with that nick :P

CodeFilly

I like dragons...

Brush

Where's the Karl Love?

Girls, girls! There's a question that has been driving me nuts for a while now. I know this might change with the new series going on, but... I just want to know!

Why is Karl so disliked? I've been reading through some of the stories and both there and in the comments pones laugh at him. Not that he's my favorite or anything, but I still find him likable.

Any ideas?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: it's not that everypony hates him, he's just more like a background human. He's only there half the time, and even then doesn't do much. If you gather all the chapters, apart from those he actually does something relevant, you'll see he does exactly one and the same: find a new/strange/old animal, discuss some weird/useless facts about plants, break someone's skull... oh wait, he won't because Karl believes in non-violent confrontation.

If I have to be honest Karl is one of those characters that has the best schemes in one or two chapters and is entirely forgettable in all the rest. In a way he's like Molly without a love interest.

LyraHands

@PrinceEric: that's because he's totally boring! The way he's written he's supposed to act as the comedic relief character. However, since that overlaps with Omni's role (who, let's face it, is far better) Karl ends up becoming entirely forgettable. Even in the first two chapters of Everhere he's only there because he's there. :/

If you ask me the only reason they haven't gotten rid of him is because the notion of the gr8 (now the grand nine) is too deeply linked to everything else. Good thing I'm not in charge or I'll send him to Icelake or somewhere.

MixaMax

@LyraHands: says you! Karl is head over heals into Danny! -RRBB

I personally found him okay. He's almost as boring as my brother. Actually, I'll call my brother Karl when he gets home and see how he reacts.

PaintDrop

@LyraHands: I checked and Karl appears in more chapters than any other character. He also takes part in as many fights as Blazen.

You're right he's sort of predictable, though. Maybe that's it?

PrinceEric

@PaintDrop: if your brother was Karl... *drool* Just kidding :P Bellucio, on the other hoof...

@RRBB: you ship everyone with everyone!

Brush

And what's wrong with shipping everyone with everyone? Personally, I prefer the F-F ships, but M-M are far more popular, as well as straight ships.

I think Karl has a mega crush on Megan, though. She did compliment him a few times in Mistmount Chronicles (each time getting him to blush). And he was grouped with her in Everhere. I don't know about you, but I think Kegan is cute.

Bob

as well as straight ships.

Eww! Gross! Who are those weirdos? ... oh, hi, Brush. Didn't see you there. :P

MixaMax

Girls, no fair! :/ I haven't read the old series yet! :(

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: you can borrow them from me.

PaintDrop

It's obvious how little you understand of relationships.

Karl has a crush on Bellucio, who has a crush on Caprice (which is so obvious in Mirror Magic, when she transforms into a girl).

Caprice is uncertain between Eric, Bellucio, and Blazen (I think she'd go for Blazen.)

Blazen has a crush on Megan, who has a thing with Cassandra (confirmed in MCE).

Omni has a thing for Danny, who is conflicted between Orpheus and Karl

Euryala might have a thing for Omni (since he defeated her and all), but that's just guessing.

DarkSparkle

Wow!

MixaMax

Wow!

LyraHands

Wow! Still is crap, though.

Brush

@DarkSparkle:

I don't think Blazen has a crush on Megan. He's indifferent in Mistmount Chronicles, and his conflicts in Everhere are based on his fear that Danny will discover his secret. As such I think if he should be shipped with anyone it's Danny.

Also, your Danny theory is unfounded. So far Danny has been tempted twice in his dreams and both times it said "love of the fairest maiden in the stars will be his" if he helps tainted Hades. If anyone I think he'll go for Euryala. She's a new character and has an established connection with Poseidon and the titans.

Twist

@Twist: very good, but you clearly don't take into account that Hades was corrupt to a point he couldn't get things right. He also offered him a golden kitten, while it's been stated that Danny likes dogs. Also, Hades mixed up Megan and Molly, referring to Molly as the "eldest".

And I completely disagree with your logic regarding Blazen! Just because you hid something from someone doesn't mean you have a crush on them!

DarkSparkle

Wooo! Where's the popcorn! War of the geeks! Who do you think will win? :)

MixaMax

Max,

While I recognize, this is in good fun, I strongly recommend that you avoid any talk about betting and gambling until our site disclaimer is in effect. If the popularity of the series rises, which is now more than likely based on the safes figures of MCE, we'll be getting more and more users. That includes users you don't know personally and who might think you're serious.

Thank you!

The TechNightling

I ship Max and Tech so hard! (I know I'm horrible).

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: well, I ship you and Fleetfoot! ... Damn! Now I'm envious. Wanna trade?

MixaMax

Karl reminds ponies too much of themselves to be liked. He's the character who always gets left out, and they don't want to feel left out, so they don't want to associate with him.

Candle

@Candle: that's incredibly insightful!

DarkSparkle

I can say that at least two of the grand 9 will become a couple by the end of Volume 7.

Luna

Err... err... Megan x Euryala!

(That's the only one left...)

MightyDragon

... I'm going to bed! When ships start to make sense it's time to get some rest!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: at two in the afternoon?!

LyraHands

@LyraHands: shut up!

MixaMax

Planning

@all: okay, it's official! I've arranged for all the big stuff, so in two weeks we can have our first big get together! (I finally got to use the fancy @all command!)

Luna has got us the study tower near the palace. It should be big enough to hold us all together. Note that will only be used for discussions, readings, meeting pones related to the series and so on. Sleeping will be at the Celestial (again Luna has taken care of the cost, so don't worry.) Those who want to go there just let me know so I know how many rooms to book. (If you have other arrangements that's cool too, but again, let me know.)

Fillies and colts will have to come with a parent or legal guardian. I have made an exception with PrinceEric, since he's from Canterlot and I've already spoken to his parents about it, but everypony else, please keep that in mind. I know that not all of you can be open about the hobby in front of your parents, but you'll need an adult with you. If you very much want to go, but can't find a guardian, ping me and I'll see if I can help on a case by case scenario. (I won't bother for users who I don't know, so there's that.)

The event will be exactly 14 days from now, which is in the middle of a five day holiday, so school and work shouldn't be an issue. If they are please poke Luna and she might figure something out.

Please, everyone who's going reply to this post!

CEOWitch

Well I'll be there. Clearly. :P Just wanted to tell you to bring anything you want signed. Fleetfoot has agreed to go, along with a few of the writing staff, and a few other surprises. :)

Luna

I'll be there as well! Maybe.

TheRealLuna

Have no fear, my doppelgänger! We'll make it work.

Luna

I live in Canterlot, so no problems on my end. MightyDragon will be sleeping with me, so don't worry about him either.

CodeFilly

Oh, my! :P

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: jerk!

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: Can I crash at your place?

MixaMax

I'll gladly come. I'd really like to see all of you. If anypony else is coming from Manehattan, let me know, okay? We can catch the same train.

Candle

This is indeed a great event, but I doubt I'll be able to take part. Everything else aside, I doubt I'll finish my work until then (holiday or no holiday).

I wish you all a wonderful time, and above all have fun and be safe. (And don't forget your bottles of water.)

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: isn't there any way you can make it? You'll really be missed :(

LyraHands

@The TechNightling: Seriously, can't you postpone things or something? I'd like to meet you as well.

I'll hassle my brother into taking me, so no worries there. I'll also bring RRBB, if she doesn't get in any trouble by then. (She's still grounded, by the way.)

@Luna: is it okay if I bring my art? Some of it is a bit risqué, but nothing too bad. I'll also bring my complete statuettes (they turned out quite good once I got the hang of it. Still having problems with the hands and fingers :/)

PaintDrop

I'm so there? Thanks, CEOWitch! I never knew my parents were such fans of you. I can't wait to see how many ponies will be surprised when they find out who you are :))

PrinceEric

@PaintDrop: Sure. Go ahead :)

Luna

I have my own accommodations in Canterlot, but I'll be present at the event. I'll also start working on the event timetable.

I'm so looking forward to this!

DarkSparkle

I'll see if I can make time for this. Hope so. Very much want to meet Brush, RRBB, and PaintDrop so we can discuss our project :)

I'll need a hotel room.

Bob

@PaintDrop: can I tag along with you? I don't want to ask my sister. (She'll never understand :/)

SweetStuff

Apparently, I won't be going either :( My father's being a jerk and refuses to let me go or come along. I'm really not happy about this. >:

You pones have a great time for me, alright?

DannyFan

A chance to see cute stallions? Sign me up! *drool*

Brush

Hellooo!

I asked my mother and she said it was okay. Lyra, can I go along with you? I'll brink lots of sugarcanes!

@DarkSparkle: I'll bring my notes on the shipping couples in the series. I've been compiling them for years and can guarantee they are 100% accurate and reliable. I still think you're wrong with at least two pairings and will prove it. I'll also bring you a sack of candy canes as well. :)

Twist

@Twist: I admire your approach and confidence, but I've checked and double checked my sources, and can assure you they are better than your sources. Naturally, I'll bring them as well, so we can have an open debate on the issue.

DarkSparkle

Party?!?

PPI

@PPI: Hello and welcome to our corner of condensed insanity :)

The site is focused on everything surrounding the Midnight Castle series, so if you're an old fan or a total newbie, feel free to explore and ask if you need any help. We are a helpful, lot :)

LyraHands

@LyraHands: I know, silly :) They tell me all the time!

@MixaMax: Nopony :) When I heard you're organizing a party, I just couldn't not hop in ;)

@Brush: No, I'm a mare :)))

@RRBB: you're welcome :D

PPI

Who let crazy in?

MixaMax

@PPI: are you a cute stallion? Please tell me you're a cute stallion!

Brush

That's actually freaky!

@PPI: Has anypony told you you're strange? :)

LyraHands

Two weeks away and I'm already excited! I really can't wait! We're getting photos, right? I really think it'll be cool to have a group photo of us all together:) CEO, Luna, think that's possible?

MixaMax

Freedom! My parents finally let me have 30 minutes aether time per day for "educational" purposes.

I'm going! Definitely! If I have to chew my way there! If someone can be my guardian for the event, let me know!

RRBB

Third Spoiler

Molly Williams

Dancer, fighter, chosen

Curious and athletic, Molly lived a normal life until fate chose to intervene and change her siblings. The only one with a firm connection to earth, despite her young age she'll stop at nothing to fight for those she loves.

Siblings: Danny and Megan.
Place of birth: Mistmount, Gumania
Occupation: High-school student
Hobby: Ballet
Mentor deity: Poseidon
Magic power: Unknown
Eternity gem: Unknown

"I'll always like you..."

@Brush: feel the burn! "Always like you?" They really are taking things between Molly and Bellucio seriously. I keep forgetting she's older in the series, almost as old as the six were.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but she was 14 before (according to my theory). If this series is 3-4 years after the events in Mistmount Chronicles, that would make her 18... and we all know what that means :P

If it happens, that will change a lot of things :) Didn't Luna say that a few main characters will end up as a couple? :D

RRBB

Heartbroken! Forever alone!

I won't give my Bellucio away! ... without a suitable replacement! (I really need to get back to writing.)

Brush

No! This cannot be correct! Bellucio and Molly will never start anything! She's far too young! It's plainly stated that she's a child, and also that Bellucio has no interest in her!

The only logical explanation is that Molly will meet a pony from Equestria (who's been imprisoned for some reason). Note the title of the next scroll, and also the use of 'like' instead of 'love' (which would have been the case if the characters were officially shipped).

Clearly, Molly will go to Equestria next chapter, which will make for an interesting read.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: I like you, you know that right? I’m not being sarcastic here. Your logic, however, stinks!

Talk about alicorn jumps of logic! I'll grant you that the Molly romance thing is inappropriate, but that's aside... how did you come to the conclusion she'll go to Equestria? For one thing there's no guarantee the chapter will be focused on her. It might be a trend, or just a coincidence so far.

Even if it is. Why do you think the pony won't go to Earth? And why do you think that the calf live between the two would stop? It's worked well for three volumes, so why change the formula?

And don't you think I didn't see you avoid the Poseidon connection. Molly and Bellucio are linked to the same deity? That's bound to mean something.

MixaMax

O!M!G!

It's confirmed that Molly will have a power! And a stone! And if Dark's theory is correct, her power (or stone) will be linked to Equestria! Can't wait to see how they explain that! You remember how Lin mentioned that all magic on Earth is different? What it affects Molly in some weird way? Like what if she grows hooves?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: please no! If there's one thing I dislike it's taurs:( Yes, I know, some of my favorite stories have them, but for me that's just lazy.

I do agree with the idea that there will be Equestrian magic involved. Maybe we'll even get to see a princess?

@Luna, @CEOWitch: Can you tell if Celestia will make an appearance?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Nice try.

Sorry that this is unrelated, but I really want to rant a bit! Now, it's not exactly a secret that I like MC and have a few Nightling costumes, but today I caught someone staring at my ass during practice, and when I made a comment about it, they just said "like you're bothered by that! You read homie fics"

I'm so mad right now I... what the fuck is their problem? Just because I read stuff doesn't mean I like ponies gawking at me!

Anyway, I have no idea. Maybe Luna can help.

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: I don't expect you'll give me a name?

Luna

Thought so.

And yes, Celestia does have a chapter to herself.

Luna

I'm seriously revising my stance on Molly. So far she's actually cool? I kid you not, I saw colts with stickers of her on their backpacks. If this keeps up I might actually... like her? (Pun intended :P)

Do you girls think that we'll have humies riding ponies again? From what I read, it was a thing in the original series.

RRBB

Won't it be interesting, if Molly has the power to dreamwalk like Princess Luna? It's been mentioned that all of the gr8 have a connection to the dreamscape, but so far it's only Danny who has done most of it.

What if the Equestrian convict is in her dream?

Twist

There's no way a human, or pony, could for that. Dreamscaping has been reserved for deities.

I also very much doubt the events will take place on Earth. It simply has to be Equestria. Even if it isn't, that doesn't solve the problem with the quote. How can you like a dream?

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: Many ways. Do you want me to show you? ;)

Luna

I'm so dream-y!

TheRealLuna

In an ass contest, who do you think has the best ass? The favorite is Bellucio because of his modeling career, but maybe Karl could have him beat?

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: hmm. I'll have to see all of them to give an adequate answer.

Why doesn't this exist as a fic yet?!? PaintDrop, would you illustrate if I wrote one?

Brush

@all: Please, a bit restraint? Remember what we talked about awhile back?

The TechNightling

Actually, that might be interesting as a literary exercises. I think it will help me better describing humans.

Great idea, Brush! :)

DarkSparkle

What have I done?! I already want to read that!

Brush

@Brush: you and me both. I even thought of a name: the AssAss-Ination. :P

Bob

Locking thread!

The TechNightling

Analysis 3

Analysis of The Equestrian Convict by DarkSparkle

The story is a one off chapter, barely linked to the first two. The main characters are Molly, Bellucio, and [MC-spoiler] Icelos [MC-spoiler]. The story follows the typical three-act structure.

Act 1
Molly experiences a lucid dream, in which she is entering college and Bellucio, now a senior, is showing her about. As they walk in the park, he admits that he's always noticed her and invites her to a date. The scene is interrupted by a bleeding Danny, who appears out of nowhere with warnings he's being chased. Molly then wakes up and sneaks to the dorm of her brother, where Loki is busy playing a board game to notice. After a brief conversation a wild Portal appears and swallows Bellucio. Seeking advice from Eric and Bellucio, Molly goes through the portal and enters Equestria, where her brother is held prisoner for high treason.

Act 2
Molly and Bellucio discover that someone has been attacking ponies in their sleep. Convincing Luna they mean no Equestria no harm, they are given a chance to prove Danny's innocence. Following a set of clues, and Molly's newly found dreamwalking ability, they set a trap only to find out that it's Luna who's been attacking her ponies. Defeated by her in a dream encounter, they are branded trailers and thrown in the dungeon, where they meet Icelos—a human dream deity who revealed that Luna is not herself, but the third-reality version of herself (the others being Filly Luna and Nightmare Moon). They then decide to join forces to save her and Danny.

Act 3
Icelos teaches Molly enough dreamwalking to send a message to Megan. Meanwhile, Bellucio tricks the guards to approach, and frees them all. Taking refuge at an arcade club, Icelos performs a ritual, linking Molly to himself, so she can save his power as they prepare for the coming battle. Luna-3 manages to find them and engages in a mix battle (taking place simultaneously in the real and dream world). Molly, is nearly defeated, but then Megan appears and, after some tense moments, manages to use the shatterstone on Luna, making her whole again and ending the dream attacks.

Epilogue
Danny's status as Friend of Equestria is restored, Bellucio is given a new custom made suit, and Megan is given a scroll to teach her how to use the shatterstone better. Molly says goodbye to Icelos, uttering the spoiler phrase, then joins the other humans through the portal to Earth. Bellucio tells Celestia to thank Icelos, when he discovers that there never was a third prisoner with them.

Score 6/10

DarkSparkle

That was the most boring, spoilers review I've ever seen (and I work in city administration!) Dark, you deserve a medal. I'd rather read ten screens of PrinceEric's enthusiastic ramblings than go through that again. :/ I honestly can taste chalk in my mouth! That's how bad it is!

Don't cry, but you're really bad at this! Like really! Which is a shame, because you can spot things, and you a promising writer (from what I've seen). Usually, I'd say "next time add some emotion" but I really hope there's no next time and you focus your efforts on that butt fic instead.

MixaMax

Yeap. Here's some prime crap right here. :/

CEOWitch

@DarkSparkle: I liked it! Much more well written than mine! You're really good! The only thing I don't agree with is the score.

For me this was just as good as the first two chapters. There were less characters and the action scenes weren't that well written, but it had plenty of intrigue and mystery. Plus we got to understand a lot about the shatterstone, and possibly the other ever-stones. It's also interesting that Molly really got to dreamwalk. Maybe she'll develop that to full dreamscaping?

And Icelos... wow! I know he was from the original series, but disappearing like that was mega spooky! And I still have no idea if he's bad or evil! Maybe he's the Everprince? Or at least one of his segments (as it seems many things are shattered in multiple realities)?

I can't wait fro the next scroll! Why does next week have to be so far off!? *cries*

PrinceEric

Yea, you girls! Reviews are difficult, and DarkSparkle did a great job! She's one of the only two reviews of the site!

@DarkSparkle: maybe you and PrinceEric could write reviews together? I'm sure they'll be great.

Twist

@Twist: Shipping DarkSparke and PrinceEric? Hmm. Nope, can't see it.

Brush

@Twist: sorry, but I call them as I see them, and that review was bad. Sure, maybe it was closer to what a review should be like, but I 100% agree with Max that reading it felt like eating chalk. I'm sure there are many things DarkSparkle is great at, but this isn't one.

CEOWitch

Harsh, mare. :/ Deserved! But harsh. That's why I don't write reviews. I'm really bad at it. Plus, I'll fuck things up a lot probably.

@PrinceEric: you're bad and evil, baby ;P

RRBB

What the heck?!? DarkSparkle deleted her account?!?

@LyraHands, @CodeFilly, @The TechNightling: can you track her or something? I feel like a jerk. I definitely didn't want to get her to quit or anything :((( I feel like crap and want to apologize to her.

MixaMax

Already dealing with it. Maybe you should have a bit nicer, MixaMax. I warned you this might happen.

Lyra and Code and off to the Crystal Empire and I don't know if they'll have access until evening.

The TechNightling

@DarkSparkle: No :( Don't go!

SweetStuff

I think I know who they might be in real life. Leave it to me. I'll try to get them back. In the meantime, maybe this should be a lesson to you all? I know that none of you acted with ill intent, but maybe cool your criticism a bit? Especially when you're talking with somepony you don't know that well?

Luna

What Luna said! :/

I know DarkSaprkle and will talk with her about this at lunch. Let's hope she agrees to come back.

MixaMax, you booed bad!

TheRealLuna

Revelations

@all: I have two announcements to make.

First. We must be nice to new members. Period! This is non negotiable! When CodeFilly, MixaMax, and Brush started talking about making a site, we decided that it won't be just another sugar site. This was always intended as a place where ponies could be critical and say what they think. I have no intention of changing that.

However, we must consider that we've known each other for a long time. I've spoken to pretty much every active member personally (plus a few inactive ones). It's my mistake I didn't get to talk to DarkSparkle before she left. I hope it's not permanent, I really do. In order not to go through this, everyone must be polite to new members until they get used to our level of discussion.

Remember, nopony is at fault here! Max has been crying her eyes out all morning. We all know her and love her, and don't for a moment think that she drove Dark away intentionally. That said, we can all try to be a bit nicer. (If CEO didn't have thick skin they might have left as well when they got nasty posts.)

With that I'm closing the matter. Hopefully. I'll never get to talk about it again.

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Second. This is the big one. As you know lately things haven't been the best for me. Still, something really, really good happened. A few of you might know this has going on for a while (thank you for keeping the secret :)). Yesterday I spend all day reflecting on life with one of my oldest friends, and decided there's no point in hiding it anymore.

I'm officially moving in with Bob! :)))

There you have it! Now back to humans! :)

LyraHands

@LyraHands: you sneaky little fluff! That's why you went to the Empire yesterday, right? Sheesh, you're such an airhead sometimes! :P

Bob

Wait! Does this mean that we have an actual ship?! I can't believe it! I never thought you two would become a couple! That's so cool! Congrats :))

PrinceEric

Awwww! That's so sweet! @.@
I wish something as romantic would happen to me one day...

SweetStuff

Congratulations from the bottom of my heart! You deserve to be happy, and I'm glad you found the courage to the the final step to do so. So far you've been the one bringing joy to others, despite your real life problems.

I'm sure everyone will say the same, but let me be the first to say that I'm here if you need anything I'll be there. Also, if you happen to go to Trottingham on vacation, let me know (and don't you dare book a hotel!)

The TechNightling

That's so precious! You two met in a forum and got together! :)))

Twist

@Twist: we knew each other long before the site, sweetie ;) Lyra was just a dumbass and didn't recognize me here. *snort* *sexy narwhal*

Who came up with with these reactions? They are hilarious! Lol!

Bob

I promise I'll perform at your wedding. ;)

Brush

@Bob: how was I to know you were into humies?! You never told me! (Anything else you've been keeping from me? :P)

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Scooore! :D Like I didn't see that from a mile away! You'll tell me all the details, and I'll create a pair of original characters in MC based on you and Bob! PiantDrop will provide the art!

Also, I hate you! I hope it works out for me as well... as if! :P

RRBB

@LyraHands, @Bob: hmm. To be honest I'm a bit disappointed. I was hoping for a Brush x Bob ship, but meh. :P

Seriously. This is great! And I'm so making pictures for the story RRBB is writing. :D I'm so happy you let us know. Also, you do realize that you two are the first MC couple, right? ;)

PaintDrop

The first of many, to be sure.

MasterOfThisAstra

@PaintDrop: well, technically Code announced me a few days earlier :P Just joking. I wouldn't have joined if she hadn't dragged me.

@LyraHands: how about a get together of the old gang? :)

MightyDragon

@LyraHands: and all this time I thought you'd fall for me. :P Take good care of her, Bob! I know where you live! :P

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: so do I!

Bob

@Bob: I'd hope so! Otherwise Lyra would be living with an idiot! :D

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: you know each other?! This is crazy! :D It's more complicated than MCE!

So, you, Bob, and LyraHands know each other. LyraHands also made the site together with Brush, MixaMax, and CodeFilly. Twist knows Bob and LyraHands because of candy canes (?!?). Finally, RRBB, PaintDrop, SweetStuff, and Candle are in the same city?

This is too much! :)

PrinceEric

@LyraHands: So happy for you! I wish you a lot of happiness and pleasant moments together! Unfortunately, looks like I won't be able to make it to the meetup :( A new order arrived and I'll have to focus on that. Please send photos.

Candle

@Candle: Aww :( we can use dragon mail, but it's such a pity you can't come. I wanted to see everypony!

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: at least it will give me and Tech a chance to work on my next fic. Maybe next time I'll be able to make it.

Candle

@all: To mark this fateful occasion, another announcement! The site improvement we've been working on for some time is finally done. Tomorrow, you'll all see the new interface, as well as a few new features. Remember, the changes are massive and there might be some issues here and there, but the core is solid.

With that, I'll be closing the site after an hour so we can start the update. In that regard, I'd like to thank MightyDragon, also an exceptional coder, who helped with some the tricky bits. It's not everyday that one gets to meet an expert on CelestialCode and CC+. :)

Sleep well, Nightlings, for tomorrow will be an exciting day!

The TechNightling

I love bunnies...

Brush

Brush PM Concerns

That's wasn't nice, hooftoy :( Why did you comment on the site? Code and Tech might suspect something.

Brush

Sweet wings, I posted because I wanted to suspect. We've been together for how long now? I love you, but I'm tired of hiding. Can't we tell them, at least here? My mother practically knows I'm seeing somepony, she's just not said it out loud. For all I know she might even know it's you.

Really, whatever happens I'm ready for it. I have a small account set aside from my grandfather, so I'll be able to live comfortably even if my parents cut me off.

MasterOfThisAstra

I love you, but I think we're moving too fast. Can we at least wait till the meet up? I already agreed to dress up as Molly for there. Things are too hectic now... Lyra came out, work has been a bit tense. My best friend is on my case for days. She found a few strands of your mane in my bed and has been pressuring me ever since. :(

I promise, I'll do this, I'm just worried about what ponies will think about you. You're in college...

Brush

Almost graduated. And it's not like we'll get married in the next few weeks. You make me feel incredible, and I just want others to respect that, not hide it. You deserve so much more in so many ways!

MasterOfThisAstra

I know you do :) I'm just stupid, and frightened, and have no idea how to act when good things happen to me. I'm sort of scared that if others find out they'll take you from me and I'll lose you.

Brush

Not that you belong to me! It's not what I meant. I mean that people will start talking to you and they'll see how fun and pretty you are... and you'll see how more interesting they are and...

I don't know anything anymore :(

Brush

Just hold me, you silly mare! *nuzzles* :)

MasterOfThisAstra

I will! Tomorrow. I'll winghug you to oblivion as I lay on you writing human words! :D

Brush

For a Brush you sure are dirty! :P

MasterOfThisAstra

Don't pretend you don't enjoy it! :P I'm your sugar wings, remember?

Brush

*ear munch* You'll always be.

I swear, yesterday there was this stupid discussion in the general dorm. Who had the cutest girlfriend. Of course there was this unicorn, who'd shake his flank for anymare, and he goes 'just one'? I swear I felt like tearing his mane off! The Jade Wing—you know the shy crystal pegasus with the glasses who stutters a lot—blushed which got Royal Star to snicker in his usual style.

"What about you, evervirgins?" He asked. I swear, those were his exact words! So I stood up, looked him in the eye and said: "My marefriend is a supermodel!" That got him to shut up so fast. Not sure how many believed me, but they enjoyed the moment. :)

MasterOfThisAstra

Wow! Much harsh! Serves him right, though. That guy sounds like an ass. How come Jade is single? He's such a cutie.

Brush

Looking at other stallions already?! Well, with your writing, I should have known. Sis will get such a nosebleed if she sees some of the things you write. :P

MasterOfThisAstra

That's why I don't send them to her or RRBB. Only Lyra has seen some of them. And Max, but Max knows how to keep her mouth shut.

Seriously, why is Jade single? He can get any mare at "hello".

Brush

I don't know. Sheltered life? From his perspective, the Empire was under Sombra rule a few years ago. Also, he's incredibly shy. It doesn't help he has glasses either. I know the image of the cute stallion with glasses is a turn on, but we get picked on a lot. Me, I don't care—my family's needed glasses for generations. Jade, though...

MasterOfThisAstra

Maybe you should ask him to join the site? He sounds like the pony who'd like that.

Brush

...okay, who do you want to ship him with?

MasterOfThisAstra

Hey! I'm just worried he's having a rough time. I know stuff about bullying. More than I'd like to admit. :(

Brush

I know you better than that.

MasterOfThisAstra

Fine! It's for Max. If there's a physical embodiment of her fantasies that's Jade. I really didn't think he'd be available! I mean you're hot (*ear nibble* *wing hug*) but you must admit that he's 10/10.

And Max is not bad looking. I think they'll be the perfect pairing!

Brush

Sweet wings, they are nothing alike! She'll shatter him with her first comment. You've heard how much he stutters. And that's a genuine stutter, anxiety just makes it worse. He barely speaks to anypony other than his family and some childhood friends.

The only time we dragged him to a bar he almost got a heart attack when a waitress hit on him.

MasterOfThisAstra

Really? Max can be gentle too...

Brush

We should go to Tartarus for what we're doing. I'll try to get him to join the site. Shouldn't be that difficult since he's already a fan of the series. You won't believe how crazy they pushed the series. Three newspapers mentioned it, which is a big deal for a colt story.

Do you want me to tell him about Max? Or just direct him to the site?

MasterOfThisAstra

Just get him to join. I'll take care of things from there. And please no more scary comments, okay? We'll tell everypony at the meet-up, okay?

Brush

How could I say no to you... Okay, I'll try to be patient. A bit! But you better not delay indefinitely! Otherwise no more huggles! :P

MasterOfThisAstra

You can be scary harsh... I better get all the huggles I can before the meetup then? Starting tomorrow O:)

Brush

You're not fooling anypony with that innocent emoticon! :P

MasterOfThisAstra

Foiled again! *slobbery kisses* *ear kisses* *ear nibbles*

Brush

A New Contender

@all: Sorry, the update (although looking spectacular) has caused some coding issues. It seems that for some reason new stories can't be posted. Tech, Mighty, and I are looking into the problem, so it should be resolved quickly, until then, please don't post stories. :(

In other news, Lyra has been poking in the code again and had the nerve to find three bugs! (Including this one) we all boo her and suggest you do the same! :P

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: I boo for no mare!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: I'll remind you that next time we start discussing theories :P

And in other news, I almost got into a fight again :/ This time it was totally not my fault! I just gave somepony a compliment (relating to MCE) and what do I get? More accusations! I should have bit more feathers off! :/

RRBB

@RRBB: Wait, what?!? O.o

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: we should just drop it.

RRBB

Hello.

I was told this was a great place to be, so I decided to check it out. Cool stories you have there, must say :)

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: Wow! You have an interesting nick. :) Welcome to the site. I think you'll feel right at home here. :D As long as you keep your libido in check :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: And what exactly is that supposed to mean? :/

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: Nothing. Just your nick is a bit suggestive? Scratch that. Your nick is extremely suggestive! I know it's probably a clever play on words (Everhere and all) but facts are facts. So chill and don't get your nipples in a twist.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Well, for your info, referring to me as a virgin is incredibly rude! Did I ask if you're a virgin? (Oh, and for your info I'm a stallion, so I can't get "my nipples in a twist")!

You know for someone who doesn't write you sure criticize a lot! I've gone through all of your posts and you always have something smart to say. If you're such an expert, why don't you post a fic so others can comment on it, eh?

Jade the Evervirgin

Wow! Shots fired :D

RRBB

I'm sure this will end well :/

@SweetStuff: don't worry about it. RRBB wasn't targeting you. She just writes the first thing that comes to mind.

PaintDrop

@Jade the Evervirgin: oh, excuse me for offering my opinion! And just because I can't write doesn't mean I can't read! There are things that a half blind mike will notice! Pointing such mistakes out is called constructive criticism!

But hey, what do I know? It's not like this has been my job or anything? And I haven't seen you post anything!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: you're not worth the effort to embarrass in public. You're already doing a pretty good job yourself. Oh, and I'm an actual literature student with several published short stories.

Jade the Evervirgin

I know this is wrong and I should be yelling at ponies to stop, but it's strangely mesmerizing to read. Could it be that Max has met her match? ;)

If I had any bits I'd go all in on Jade. O:)

LyraHands

@Jade the Evervirgin: oh, so you have a fancy title? Well I have two! Want to compare hooves as well? You've no idea who you're messing with, do you loud mouth? I take trolls like you for breakfast!

Go ahead, post one of your short stories! Or better yet, write a MCE fic. For a professional author that can't be too hard.

MixaMax

Kiss already!

Brush

@MixaMax: what titles would those be? "Very" and "Stupid"? And I'll not only post a fic on the site, but will do so immediately once the system is fixed. Please feel free to criticize. Just remember I've studied this stuff, so will tear your pale opinion pieces to shreds!

@Brush: tempting, thought I'd rather have my hooves removed first. Besides, I doubt Max would be able to go through the door with all that blubber on.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: did you just call me fat?!?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: what happened to the nicks being what they are? Clearly you like to mix and eat to the Max. Not my fault your nick is like that!

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: you're so much fun! :) This is the first time I've seen Max on the defensive! :))

Which MC volumes have you read? Which is your favorite humie? :D Inquisitive minds want to know!

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Thanks, that's nice of you :)

I must admit, that I just started the Everhere scrolls. I'm a crystal pony, so I've missed everything that came out more than a few years ago. Actually, its thanks to a friend that I started reading this series at all. Adventure and fighting aren't very popular in the Empire, as opposed to comedies and romance novels.

The series so far is surprisingly well written. Personally, I think the author is wasting his skills on colt fiction, when he could easily take the young adult market in storm.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: wait, you're a crystal pony?!?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: want pics? You must be really desperate for a boyfriend.

Jade the Evervirgin

Buuuuurn! :) Max, do you want some ice? You know for that burn you just got? :D

RRBB

@Jade the Evervirgin: Oh? My brother's a college student on the Crystal Empire. He studies literature too!

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: I doubt I know him. I don't have a too active social life.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: Wow, I wonder why. Could it be that you have the worst character anypony has in the last thousand years? I bet Beauty and the Mule was based on you!

MixaMax

MixaMax: that's harsh. I'd call you many things, but even I won't call you a mule. They have feelings too, you know.

Jade the Evervirgin

This has gone for far too long! I'm locking the thread and locking both of you out for 12 hours.

That is all!

The TechNightling

The Song

Umm, well, I made a song. It's not very good, but I really wanted to share with you. Some have actually heard it and think it's good, so I posted it under stories. I know it isn't exactly a story, but... I really, really wanted to share it! It's the first full song I've recorded and it's based on Midnight Castle, so... *innocent smile*

It's posted under the story "Midnight Shadow" (I've tagged it as a romance story with the sad tag). The lyrics are there too!

Tell me what you think. (Really, really, really hope you like it.)

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: love your voice! :) And the way you sing is so full of emotion! Can I play it to my class? (Promise I won't tell I know you if you don't want me to... although I'd really like to brag about it :D

Also, love that it's about Eric!!! :)

PrinceEric

@SweetStuff: marry me! :D

DannyFan

DannyFan, keep acting that way you'll get banned. Please, don't make me warn you again.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: so harsh today... did something happen, Tech?

@SweetStuff: that's actually not bad. Who On my way! You had skills? Think you can do a reading of some of my stories? I won't be mad if you feel inspired and add a few words as well ;)

RRBB

@RRBB: really? :D Love your Danny saga! (I started reading it soon.) Will be difficult to do Danny with my voice, but if you're okay with a younger version, I'll go for it. :D

@PrinceEric, @DannyFan: thanks, you're both so sweet! :D

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: you have a beautiful voice, but you need a bit more practice. If you want, PM me and I can give you some pointers? :)

The song, on the other hoof is... it's... I cried all over my keyboard! I know a few pones have said it's incredible, but it really is. There's slight word clutter in two places, but that could be fixed. If you take care of that, train your voice a bit more, and add music, I think it'll shine!

P.S. please do a happy romantic song next? ;)

Brush

@SweetStuff: way to become popular! And you deserve it every bit! Can't wait to hear your Danny impression... and more songs :D Oh, and before I forget, I'm kidnapping you to my place tomorrow! No way I won't take part in recording this! I'll also ask a few friends if they can join in (who knew my musical scholarship would come in handy? :P)

LyraHands

LyraHands: can you get Octavia Harmony?! :) I'm such a huge fan!

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: I could, and I will! ;)

@LyraHands: and you won't be kidnapping anypony! I'll be snatching you both! I'll arrange for the recording. :)

Luna

On second thought, maybe you can have a recording session in the royal conservatory. :) Might be less problematic.

Luna

I can get DJ Pon3!

TheRealLuna

@SweetStuff: that's actually sweet! :) You just need to pause a bit more between lines, like you do during the chorus. My sister will love this. :D

Going to the lyrics. Yep, you've got it! With a few months more practice I bet you can become a pony idol! :))

MixaMax

@MixaMax: I never knew you were an expert in singing as well. Please, enlighten us, what myriad of talents do you possess?

Sweet just did something remarkable, that on most places would be considered a ticket to a scholarship, but no! Somepony had to be an eternal critic. :/

Jade the Evervirgin

Cool it you two. No ear nibbling in public! :P

Brush

@Brush: I'd rather have my mane torn off hair by hair, than have anything to do with that harpy!

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: cool it a bit, will you? I've no idea where this animosity came from, but that's enough.

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: And who exactly made you king Sombra?

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: I did.

CodeFilly

@Jade the Evervirgin: I know you're a cutie, but cool it a bit, will you? Instead of yelling at ponies, write a magnificent story that will make half the site (Max included) drool their spit out.

Brush

@Brush: Well... okay. Yeah, sorry. I can be like that at times. Guess, I have a bit of a temper, huh? It's just ponies like MixaMax drive me crazy! :( Never done a thing in their lives, yet they never miss an opportunity to correct others. Half my class is like that! Arrogant, snobbish jerks, who think they are so much better just because they go to a good college (often only thanks to their financial backing.)

I'll try to keep my temper under check, but... oh well. And I definitely write something to have Max eat her heart out! Let me see her then!

@SweetStuff: if you're still in school (guess based on your voice), I see you becoming famous in a few years. Just don't let loudmouths like MixaMax discourage you. :)

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: Listen, cupcake. If taking cheap shots at me turns you on, go right ahead. You think I'll quit because some aethernet warrior said something bad about me? If you're so brave why don't you come to the meetup? Last I heard there were direct trains from the Empire to Canterlot.

MixaMax

@Jade the Evervirgin: thank you <3 Everypony here has been very nice to me :)
I hope nothing bad happened to you during the magic storm. My sister said it was very scary and a number of ponies got hurt :(

If you write a story, I promise I'll narrate it :)

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: what do you say about us working on a common project? I've started working on a comic based on MCE. If you voice it, we can post it on the aethernet and link it up here.

@LyraHands: some rules about that might be nice. Comics and songs aren't exactly fics, but are still part of Midnight Castle. What is a Nightling to do in these circumstances?

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop, @SweetStuff: of course, dears. Go ahead. That's what the site is for :) I'll add a few new tags. ;)

CodeFilly

The Conspiracy

I'm bringing Lyra in the loop. (She knows about us.)

Lyra, please don't ban Jade. I asked Mota to get him to join so we could finally get Max hitched.

Brush

Seriously, Brush?! Not that she doesn't need it, but that's one of your worst ideas ever. :/ What did you think would happen? I've got five complaints. Code is annoyed at him for snapping at Mighty, RRBB said she thought he was going too far.

I don't know what he's like in real life, but he definitely comes across as a condescending jerk. And Max isn't the easiest to get along with either when she's in her moods...

I can save him from the banhammer, but I doubt they'd get along. If anything they'll kill each other.

LyraHands

Has Max sent any complaints? ;)

Brush

No, but don't read into that. Probably, she still feels bad about the DarkSparkle thing and just won't PM me. I'm sure she'll drill my ears about it in a few days.

It would be so hilarious, though. From a fictional point of view I ship them already :P

Who is Jade anyway?

LyraBrysh

Hi, Lyra.

Jade's an acquaintance from college. Before yesterday I never thought him capable of such behavior. I've known him for a few years and he's the type of pony who'd apologize for you shouting at him. Also, he's extremely polite, very kind and incredibly shy.

Here's a pic what he looks like (second row utmost left).

MasterOfThisAstra

O!M!G! I'd never ever have imagined that being Jade. It's like a totally different pony! I'm afraid Max's head would explode if she got to see. :)

Oh, and thanks for taming our wild Brush, Mota. Was high time she found somepony to be happy with :)

LyraHands

Well, my sister's one to thank for that. If she hadn't left Brush's story lying about I'd never have shown any interest, and most definitely never gotten to meet her. Brush is something special in so many ways.

MasterOfThisAstra

Getting back to the main topic of discussion... (I'm already shipped :P) How do we get things to calm down a bit? I guarantee that Max is already fantasizing about Jade, in between hating him, but Jade is being a bit too aggressive. Must be the result of decades of suppressed anger.

Mota, can you talk to him, get him to calm down?

Brush

I can try. We've been discussing a bit of MCE and for the most part he finds it just as amusing as I. He likes your stories more, though (I gave him the one about the human and the mirror and he loved it.)

Keep in mind that he doesn't know that I visit the site, just that I've read a few things from there. Don't tell anypony this, but he's not impressed with most of the fan fictions published. He's extremely supportive, though. I'm trying to get him to comment more, but he seems to only want to flame Max.

MasterOfThisAstra

Does any of you know what Jade's type is, though? If he and Max happen to meet and like each other that's one thing. If it turns out that she's nothing like his idea SO (or that he even isn't into mares) it's best we stop here. At this point they are still at the insult phase, so we're fine.

Mota, anything you could share?

LyraHands

That's not a topic we discuss too much. Well, other than the time he met Brush. He went on and on about how lucky I am, which means he's into mares. I think. It's not an issue asking him. On another note, his favourite human is Megan and he's convinced she'll be shipped with Blazen.

MasterOfThisAstra

... I take back what I said. He's a horrible match for Max!

Mezen?! Seriously? That's the worst ship out there! I can't believe he's really suggesting that. On the plus side, I think it's safe to say he's into mares, and that Max has just become a very viable candidate. (Of all the characters in the series, she is closest to Megan the most). :)

Brush

Best check to be completely sure. Also, talk to him to turn down the hate, a personal thing between him and Max, I'd allow, but shouting at every second user. Get him to at least rode down things until he becomes like CEOWitch, okay?

Will you bring him to the meetup, btw?

LyraHands

That's the plan :) And, yes I'll talk with him on both points.

Do you think we should get anypony else involved in the conspiracy? I'm afraid Code or Tech might ban first ask later.

MasterOfThisAstra

Tech finds their arguments amusing, although he'll never admit it publicly. I wouldn't worry about him. Code is a different matter. When he went into an argument with her coltfriend, he automatically got on her bad list. I'll see if I can get him out of there. Might have to tell her what you told me and show that picture. (I still gotta say it: daymn! :))

Mota, how come Jade is single?

LyraHands

Not you too...

MasterOfThisAstra

Lyra, can you ask CEOWitch to make a "mistake" and put both of them in the same room when he books hotel rooms for the meetup? O:)

Brush

No, but I can ask him to get one for you two. If you're making it official, that is.

LyraHands

Thank you, that would be ideal! :)

And yes, I agree that is one thing that shouldn't be forced. I know you like shipping ponies, sweet wings, but our involvement should end with getting them in the same place at the same time. After that, they can decide for themselves whether they like each other or not.

Personally, I hope it works out. MixaMax sounds like one fun character, and (in my opinion) Jade needs a marefriend.

MasterOfThisAstra

Me and my big mouth... :/

Brush

Spoiler 4

Blazen Ruul

Outcast, shaman, chosen

Dark and mysterious, Blazen fled to Mistmount to escape the fate set out for him by his family, but ran straight into something larger. Dreading his past, he still uses his powers for the sake of those he cares about, regardless of the consequences.

Siblings: Unknown
Place of birth: Unknown
Occupation: None
Hobby: Paper figurines
Mentor deity: None
Magic power: Runecraft
Eternity gem: Inkstone

"Don't leave me... I'm lost without you."

Talk about bombshells! Ruul? Ruul?! Blazen fucking Ruul?! I pray that's a pun or nick and that his family isn't called that. "The House of Ruul!" :P Sheesh, I'm starting to sound like MixaMax :D

That aside, it's the first time we learn anything about him, including that he isn't from Mistmount. Oh, and those ryne powers he has are real, along with the occult site.

Hmm, I wonder who the phrase is directed at. It might be Megan... or it might be Danny. I think Blanny will be incredibly hot! But no chance S&S would go for it.

I'm not sure if anypony said this before, but there will be 13 spoilers: 9 are obvious, 4 remain unknown. Let the guessing for the next one begin :) I'm going for Eric.

RRBB

@RRBB: that means tomorrow I'll make another analyses :) Will try to be shorter this time :)

But yes, big reveal! The whole family thing wasn't even hinted in MC! Although... remember how it was mentioned that he changed homes in "The Dagger's Hilt"? Could that have been an indication or foreshadowing?

More curious, he's given almost as much importance as the Williams siblings. I won't be surprised if he has a much larger role in the series... although I'm still hoping for Eric to make an appearance.

Also... Blazen x Eric? O:)

PrinceEric

I'm getting on this early, since I don't have job interviews today. I think that S&S will go for some romance because of the shift towards comics. I agree with RRBB that it won't be a M-M ship, which leaves a few options:

I don't see them shipping Blazen with any pony (they went as far as they could with the Caprice friendship thing). It's also safe to assume Molly won't be a thing. That leaves Megan, Cassandra, Euryala (out of the main characters).

Megan has been suggested, but personally I don't see it. They are too alike to be interesting together. Also, I think Megan will go for someone older. Call it a hunch.

Cassandra is possible, them being on different sides and all, but for that to develop we need a much more active Cass, and since she's a secondary character it's not likely to happen yet.

Euryala has existed and has strange powers of her one, making the pairing ideal. And since it was mentioned that two of the 9 will become a couple, I think these two are it. :D

I know the logic is flimsy, but any logic would be at this stage. Still, my 2 bits.

LyraHands

And this series started so well...

We had excitement, intrigue, mystery, and now what?!? Soap opera romance?! Seriously, what are you thinking, S.Child? Getting Blazen, of all people, to fall for someone is pretty much absurd. His whole thing in MC was being the loner, and only helping because he feels like it. Getting him to find someone will be against his character.

Interesting info on him, though I hate the family but! Won't it be cooler if he just stumbled on his power while reading occult net stuff? There's no need for a dark past, or an ominous family. We've seen how strong he is, we get it!

MixaMax

@RRBB: since I'm unburdened by MC, I think that it makes a lot of sense. He's obviously a runecrafter, and as such will pair up with someone with a similar power level. And while Danny is an option, the only other character remotely eligible (based on book logic) is Euryala.

If Omni was a female I'd change my view, but for the moment it still stands.

Personally I'm more curious on how the evergems link together. The inkstone will obviously grant him the ability to summon shadow creatures, but so what? Could he and Megan create monsters in the various realities, if they work together? I really hope I get answers to those questions tomorrow.

Jade the Evervirgin

Hmm, so theoretical couples are theoretical. The public seems to love it, though, so I guess one will happen. I can't stop thinking about Megan and Karl! (Curse you, Max!) I know it's all wrong, but it's so sweet! Argh! :/

Karl is always the lost relaxed guy, and Megan is a strong leader, so they'll make the word couple, that's for sure. :) Still, it can happen...

Brush

We must organize a shipping contest! Lyra, how about we do that? I can guarantee the prize: a figurine if the winner's choice. All you have to do is post with your magical @all.

Rules:
Must be a legit ship
Must be explained why is legit ship
Must be well written
Must be SFW (I'm sure Tech would like it that way)

RRBB

Sure, that sounds like fun. Not sure if a whole fic would be necessary, but buck it! It's my site :P I need to think about the details a bit.

LyraHands

What she means to say is that she'll be going over all options, dividing which one to choose :P

I still would like to see Cass and Meg become an item. Impossible, I know, but just picture it. Or better read the fic I'll post 5 weeks from now. It'll be great! :P

Bob

@Bob: you realize I'm sitting next to you, right? Don't make me bap you on the head. And we'll see what happens with a Blazen tomorrow! That said time to go to sleep. Bye!

LyraHands

Sleep well! Tomorrow will be an interesting day :D

RRBB

This was unexpected...

Midnight Castle: Everhere, Vol 7, Chapter 4, The Mirror Rune

(A bit of fancolting! I had to read this five times! It's so amazing that each time it becomes better! I really hope Luna gets to bring some of the writers. Whoever wrote this is... just wow!!! :D )

We start with Blazen going through the net, reading about occult stuff. We learn where he got the runes he used in the first chapter. He then sees a three times twisted snake biting its tail, and goes all crazy. We then jump to a flashback of him as a child with his family (and get our first picture of him and he's so cute!). The Ruuls were a clan that used runecraft to give powers to objects, summon spirits, etc. Blazen was supposed to become the "East Shield of the Runelord" but ran away, tired to be treated as mindless puppet.

I like how we got to meet the entire Ruul clan. There's so much backstory there that I can go on for ages! Also it was hinted they might be Titan blessed. Anyway, Blazen gets back to his senses, then runs out to talk to Megan, but is suddenly run over by a magitech carriage. (Blam! No warning whatsoever!) Bleeding (!!!) on the ground he reaches to grab a piece of mirror, looks at it, and...zones out in front of his computer again!

Wondering what's going on, he leaves to go to Megan, but gets crashed into by Caprice who's chased by some "inkform slivers of bat proportions" that swoop down at her. The two rush through the city, while Caprice goes on that he mustn't use his magic to attack people and remember she'll always be there for him, and that no one will replace him. When they finally fight off the bats, he's about to ask what is going on, when a mirror shard hits Caprice in the wing. Blazen pulls it out and... wakes up in front of his computer.

Glancing at the rune on the forum, Blazen is about to leave to talk to Megan, when there's a knock on his window. Opening it, he's pulled out by Omni, who drags him off to the forest, where they are attacked by Felina sorcerers. Omni is wounded, but the two manage to escape, until Cassandra and Orpheus show up. Cassandra goes on about how he forced their hand, when Omni suddenly takes out a mirror shard out of nowhere and shows it to Blazen...who wakes up in front of his computer.

(Anypony getting dizzy so far?) This time Blazen sneaks to Megan's work, and after an elaborate sneak in gets to talk to her about his fears that his family is after him. Megan hushes him and takes him to the vault of her corp, where she takes out what she describes as a mirror rune. As she explains, the rune has been reacting to him ever since he moved to Mistmount. She's about to reveal more, when the walls are torn apart by an inklike monster. Blazen grabs the rune and... wakes up in front of his computer.

This time, he's still holding the mirror rune. Before he could tell what's going on, ash from all the black chalk in the room goes towards the mirror rune, causing Blazen to split into seven pieces. We (and he) then find out that the mirror rune creates a copy of him a few minutes before the last instance a copy was created (there are 5 of him so far!) The thought drives him insane, so he uses his runecraft to try and kill all his other selves. Yet then, Euryala jumps through the window and shows him a shard.

Blazen wakes up and Euryala is already there. She explains that he must break the loop if he's to get through that day. It also turns out that he created the mirror rune for himself (in the future, but sent it to the past) for some unknown purpose. She also mentions that he's the only one who can stop the Everprince and that she has faith in him. (Oh, and by the way, she mentions they're a couple in the future and she loves him!!!) She then gives him a box saying the mirror shard is inside. He then utters the phrase of the spoiler, but she's already opened the box so he wakes up... in front of his computer.

Blazen looks at the mirror rune, then puts it away in his wallet. He doesn't turn on the computer. Instead, he phones Danny and says he wants to hang out.

Next chapter: "Poseidon's Faithful"

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Just wow! I still can't wrap my head around it! :))) And, and! For the first time we have such an extensive solo chapter! Usually it's 2-3 characters. Here it's just Blazen and himselves.

Interesting how similar this is to the shatterstone. What do you girls think?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: quite the trippy chapter. :) From what I get, the mirror rune makes copies of himself who could be there at the same place and time, but also not there since no one mentioned seeing two of him? I just hope they don't use "divine nature" as an explanation:/ Other than that the chapter is cool and we get to finally see Blazen's family (see, Brush? He's no orphan!)

Note that he still hasn't hit the inkstone. At most he'll use it to make the mirror rune at some point. Thus begs the question... what exactly is the inkstone and what can it do? Scarily interesting :)

MixaMax

Actually, I think it's not so much him making copies of himself, rather than sharing his own existence. Note, how he never actually sees himself. I speculate that the nature of the mirror rune is such that it creates a paradox if any of his selves sees another. Same for a person seeing two instances of him. Euryala is an exception since she's a shard as well.

Overall, I'd say this was well thought out and perfectly executed. Clearly, the writer didn't know anything about time spells, but the story doesn't need them, and that's what makes it so good.

@SweetStuff: a much belated congratulations! The song was wonderful, but I always knew you had a nice voice. :) You should have told me you're a fan of Midnight Castle!

DarkSparkle

Hmmm! Hmmmmmmmmmmmm!
This story sounds oddly familiar -.-

PPI

@DarkSparkle: you're back! :) Are you alright? We missed you so much!

PrinceEric

@DarkSparkle: Girl! So sorry! :( I didn't mean to be so mean to you! Please let me make it up to you somehow! Anything you ask, it's yours!

So glad you returned. I was feeling so rotten being a jerk. Want to meet and have doughnuts sometime? I'm paying.

MixaMax

@DarkSparkle, I think I'm in love with you...

Jade the Evervirgin

...this was unexpected.

Brush

Brush PMs - Confusion and Saucy Secrets

What just happened?! I'm so mad I want to scream! Two days of aethernet fighting (I had pretty much paired them) and then Dark appears out of nowhere and gets Jade to swoon with one post?!? Tell me this is a joke! :/

Brush

Sorry, sweet wings :( He spent all night talking about her (and thanking me a million times for getting him to sign up to the site). He's read every post she's made as well as her stories... more than once. His exact words were "she's not your marefriend, but she's something else." :/ I then had to endure hours of him freaking out whether she'd like him.

I really can't understand him sometimes. He's under the impression he's crap and that no mare will give him the time of day (because of his glasses). And he keeps telling me how lucky I am, not that I'm not :).

MasterOfThisAstra

Whyyy? Whyyyyy? Buck DarkSparkle! :((( Who is she anyway?

Brush

I'm totally clueless. She's one of the regulars who's a mystery :/ I PMed her to be sure she was okay, but that's it. She replied that everything's fine and that Max is really nice if a bit extreme.

LyraHands

The irony. Dark came back because she has a crush on Max and snatched Jade who we were setting up for Max? This is so similar to a fic it isn't even funny.

MasterOfThisAstra

Hooftoy, I love you, but please shut up. What are we going to do now? I already started asking Max what she thought about Jade in real life. For the most part it was "that jerk" but there was more than a hint she was considering having a one on one with him.

Mota, can you get a pic from him so I can send it to Max? Meanwhile I'll find a way to deal with Dark.

Brush

No offense, Brush, but I'd prefer you don't "deal" with anything in real life. All ten times you've tried things ended in chaos. :/

We agreed to let things happen naturally. Either Jade falls for Max or not. We're not pulling a Starlight, got it?

LyraHands

Well, on the positive side, Jade will definitely go to the meetup. He's already "talked me into" sharing a room with him. If we want to be evil, we can have Brush share a room with Max and then swap. We all know that we'll be together ;)

Lyra, any chance we can meet? I know you're busy with the job thing, but I'll be spending a week away from uni, and we'd love to spend an afternoon with you, if you are free.

MasterOfThisAstra

It all depends on my job thing. I think I might have gotten a temp job. Delivering mail *sigh*. The boss is cool, though, and my coworker is really nice. A bit strange, but nice :D

If I have the time, I'll definitely go to spend an afternoon with you. :) Oh and, Brush looks really sexy in her Molly outfit. *grrrrowl* :P

LyraHands

Traitor! If you've sent those pics to Mota I'll never talk to you again! :/

Brush

You have sexy Brush photos? Send them! I want to see my sweet wings all sexy and blushing :)

MasterOfThisAstra

Oh, she’s hot, believe me. If I didn't have someone, I'd be all over Brush. :P

Getting back to MaxJade, I think we best leave things as they are. Meetup is only five days away, so whatever happens will happen. CEOWitch and Luna have pretty much taken care of everything. Don't tell anypony, but there's a (small) chance that S.Child shows up.

I might try to dress up as my OC. I've already spoken with Rarity if she can make me some handshoes.

LyraHands

Buck a tree both of you!

Brush

Only if that's your turn-on ;)

MasterOfThisAstra

Hush! *blush*

Hmm. What do you guys think of getting Jade to dress up as something? That might increase the chances of JadeMax.

Brush

You just want to see him cosplay, don't you? :P

LyraHands

As it happens, you’ll have your wish. One of the things we discussed last night, I use the term "discussed" loosely, was Jade's idea of costume. I don't need to tell you his family is pretty well off, as most in that college, so he has the means to get something done fast.

The big surprise is that, believe it or not, he's considering going as Poseidon. Now, when I say Poseidon, I mean a Poseidon like the kind my sister draws. (If you know what I mean.)

MasterOfThisAstra

LMAO! This is too much! :) I'm so getting RRBB to hire professional photographers for this :) Just one question: do you think he can pull it off?

LyraHands

Well, I'm not the expert what mares like, but if I were a mare I'd bang him.

MasterOfThisAstra

Say no more. :) That and him being a crystal pegasus is likely to cause quite a stir. Also, do you note what a high number of stallions we have compared to other fansites? Code checked recently and they can all be jealous of our quantity and quality. Well, excluding fighting and colt comic sites, but those are a different thing altogether.

LyraHands

Despite what you think, you run a pretty neat site. And I'm not only talking visual and functionality. Those two are the best there is, but it's mostly you. You're the type of pony that's passionate about something but isn't a megalomaniac. You've no idea how rare that is. Naturally, you'll attract others like you. Tartarus, even your trolls are nice!

MasterOfThisAstra

Stahp! :P It's just something I wanted to do and I'm lucky I was with cool ponies. Max and Code were a huge support. Brush too... although the talk of stallions and cosplay seems to have given her a heart attack. :P

LyraHands

Bleh! I'll have you know that I went to visit Mota, I turned quite a few heads!

Brush

She did. Half of my class asked how good she's in the hay. I told them 8/10.

MasterOfThisAstra

What?!?

Brush

Well, I suppose I could add another 1 for your cute snoring. It sounds exactly like a hummingbird. :)

(She does it when she falls asleep with her wings around me. Really cute.)

MasterOfThisAstra

Mota!!! Don't tell her that!

Brush

Now I feel jealous! :P

Sadly must go to a few job interviews. Be wild you two, and see you tomorrow! :)

LyraHands

Meet-up Planning

Oh, oh! I want room 25! And a +1!

@DarkSparkle: don't worry about that, silly! :P I'll bring all the food we'll need! :)

PPI

@all: Time for me to start spamming the site with meetup details. I'll be booking rooms next few days, so will need to know who, what, where, when! (Oh, and I got Fleetfoot, so you all owe me big time! ;))

Equestrian Inn
Room 23
SweetStuff + 1, Twist + 1

Room 24
Candle, 1 free (talk to Candle for sharing)

Room 25
2 free

Room 26
Brush, MixaMax

Room 27
MasterOfThisAstra + 1

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PaintDrop and RRBB have their own thing

CodeFilly, MightyDragon, LyraHands, and Bob will be at Code's place

PrinceEric will be staying in the Wonderbolt section of the palace

Luna has her own thing (boo! :P)

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Tech said he won't be going. Anypony else, please let me know asap!

CEOWitch

@PPI: lol. Okay, you're booked. :)

CEOWitch

Seems I won't be going :( My stupid father is so stupid!!! I was hoping he'd change his mind, but he prefers to be a pissy twat that would see me do anything but be happy :/

Have a great time, all. And send photos :)

DannyFan

@SweetStuff: +1 ?! A snugglebuddy? Please tell more >:D

RRBB

I'll be going, but I've made my own arrangements. Most likely I'll be there a day in advance, so if you need any help organizing or setting things up, I'm your mare.

It might also be a good idea to bring some food. Princess Luna has graciously offered to provide for the event, but ponies must eat before and after as well.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: I'll bring something special, I'm sure you'll enjoy :) As an apology for the mess. (And don't you dare say no! :))

MixaMax

@RRBB: I wish it was a snugglebuddy. Just somepony I have to bring :/ *sigh*

I'll also be there a few days earlier to get my recordings done! (OMG! This is happening! :))

SweetStuff

@DarkSparkle: cool, cause I'll be going too. Maybe we can, you know, meet and talk about stuff? I love your stories.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: sure :)

DarkSparkle

I won't be going :( Have work and stuff. Maybe next time.

TheRealLuna

Oh, my other half, what will I do without you? Cruel fate is this that keeps us apart.

A few of the writers have confirmed, so that'll be a treat for you guys :)

Luna

@Luna: Alas, my better half. At least you have things under control. ;)

TheRealLuna

Are we missing anypony? It's difficult to keep track of who's what. Please let CEOWitch know if you're left out.

LyraHands

@DannyFan: aww! So sad you can't make it :( I was looking forward to seeing you. Now that I'm committed feeling a bit scary being there among all the mares.

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: you'll always be safe with me, bby:)

Brush

Dear all,

I truly hope you have a wonderful time. This sounds like an event for the history books. It's really unfortunate that I wouldn't be able to make it. With work and the travel time being what it is, I'll have to delay me appearing until next time.

I'll be with you in spirit, and wave from the aethernet.

The TechNightling

Hey, all.

None of you know me, but I've been lurking on the site for a while (thanks to Bob). Any chance you can book a room for me as well?

Lurkling

@Lurkling: if Bob can vouch for you, sure thing.

CEOWitch

@Lurkling: hold a moment! Are you ho I think you are?!? BB?!?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: afraid so O:)

Lurkling

@CEOWitch: I vouch for Lurk. Double room. :)

@Twist: bring candy canes! :)

LyraHands

Suuure! :)))

Twist

@LyraHands, @Lurkling: Done! Any chance I might know you?

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: you'll be surprised :P

LyraHands

@Luna: what exactly is the plan once this starts? We know there will be food and such, authors, and Fleetfoot (I'm so pestering her for an autograph! :)) and what else?

I'll bring my pictures and sculptures, RRBB and Brush will bring some new stories. Do we do readings?

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: two ponies which shall remain unnamed, convince me to do the reading. Since I haven't read since school it will be a fun experience.

And I'll be glad to give out autographs. You get the first one ;)

Fleetfoot

@Fleetfoot: you kept your account. Does that make you a Nightling? :P

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: kid, I was a Nightling before you were able to fly!

Nah, I just got curious. Kudos to the three ponies who wrote about me. :)

Fleetfoot

@Fleetfoot: Omg! You and CEO are my heroes! During the storm scare I had family in the Empire, plus my best friend's brother was there, so I was a little terrified. Thanks for being there for us!

And I'm also totally hanging out with you >:D

RRBB

@RRBB: Somepony has an idol? :P

Brush

@Brush: to use your phrase... go buck a tree!

RRBB

@all: Please spam CEOWitch with suggestions (sane, safe, and practical ones only!) what to do when we're there.

@DarkSparkle: Thanks for offering to help! We'll need it :)

LyraHands

Hey! I can organize stuff as well, you know! :/

MixaMax

@MixaMax: heh! Probably as much as a foal with a sugar rush.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: that wasn't nice! Max might have a sharp tongue, but she's actually very nice and doesn't deserve such an attitude!

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: I'm sorry :( I just get all upset and lash out at times. My bad.

Apologies, MixaMax.

Jade the Evervirgin

@DarkSparkle, @Jade the Evervirgin: it's cool. I'm a loudmouth all too often :P You should join in and hang with me and Dark at the meetup! (Hope you can drink ;))

MixaMax

Excuse me while I go tear my mane off!

Brush

?!?

RRBB

@RRBB: Brush is just dealing with a series of confusing issues. Let her be.

LyraHands

Laughs and Tears

Oh my goodness! This is wild! I got to spend time with Octavia Harmony, Vinyl Scratch, and CEOWitch! (My lips are sealed! <3)

It was so great! Not only did we get to record my song (3-4 versions of it) but I also got to hang with Octavia :))) Of course my sister had to tag along :/ I don't think she even got what was going on. CEOWitch tried to plain, but sis never was a bookpony.

@Luna, @TheRealLuna: <3 you both! *hugs* Pity you were busy. Would have liked to hang out...

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: no worries :) Small world, though.

Shame you couldn't stay till the meetup. I thought you had arranged that. It's not like it would have cost you anything. :/

By the way, some girls on the squad are hooked on Vinyl's remix of your song. The rhythm is really good for concentrating during flight and your voice is really a good match. Don't get me wrong, I love Octavia's song to death, but it's something I'd listen in the privacy of my own home... when nopony will see me cry.

CEOWitch

I never thought you to be such a softy, love. ;)

Octavia

@Octavia: Octavia! I can't believe it! You actually joined?! :D Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! <3

SweetStuff

How could I not? :) After the performance you did, it would be a shame if I at least didn't check what inspired you. And let us not forget that Lyra and I have been friends for a while, not to mention colleagues.

@LyraHands: I'm glad you achieved your dream. Sorry for what happened with your parents. If there's anything I could help with, let me know.

Octavia

Miss Harmony, this is indeed an honour!

Can I just say that I find your work delightful. My son has all your records and I myself have a few personal copies. While, I suspect this would hardly be to your taste, let me welcome you to our small corner of the aethernet—where passions and enthusiasm run high and miracles happen.

The TechNightling

@Octavia: Octy! (I'm not sure you remember, but my father hired you for my cute-ceañera.)

Please tell me you'll consider reading the series. I know it sounds strange on the surface, but maybe just give the first two scrolls a chance? If after that you don't like the series, I perfectly understand and will drop the matter.

Thank you a lot for helping SweetStuff. Having you help out in a song is a big deal (not only for Sweet, but for all of us). I honestly hope, there are most songs to come.

PaintDrop

Thank you, Tech. I'm honoured :) Is that a fellow Trotney I sense?

Apologies, dear, but I have been to a number of important occasions. I'm sure if I see you I'll remember. :) And I will gladly give the scrolls a read, especially after CEOWitch was kind enough to provide me with a few signed from the Wonderbolts and the writers.:)

Octavia

@SweetStuff: I'm so envious right now! If it wasn't for my stupid parents and my stupid fight at school, I could have gone to Canterlot with you! :/ Did you take lots of photos, at least? :)

RRBB

@RRBB: Sorry :( I just did the singing. I completely forgot to take photos.

SweetStuff

@RRBB: what did you get yourself into again? :/ I thought your fighting days were over?

@Octavia: Yo, Tavi! It's Dopey :) Nice to see you in our little piece of chaos.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: It wasn't a real fight! Just a misunderstanding, okay? And I don't want to talk about it!

RRBB

Some news from me. I'm at Paint's working on my new story, and I got thinking. You know what day it is tomorrow, right? Anypony have any plans for the occasion? It's scary how close that is to our first meetup.

To mark the occasion, I'll be doing requests: short stories in MC / MCE that you want to give to somepony special. (Friends also work :)) RRBB, you get first pick ;)

Brush

@Brush: who cares about a stupid holiday anyway?!? :/

RRBB

@Brush: sorry, I'm just not in the best place right now :( I'll be fine. My parents already promised I could go to Canterlot, so there's that at least. It's just that... today was a really bad day for me. I wish I could have gone to Canterlot to hear SweetStuff sing. Instead I chose to stay at school and try to be nice. :/ Some good that did me. :(

RRBB

@RRBB: Everything will be okay! I'll bake a fresh batch of candy canes just for you when we meet. :)

Twist

@Twist: you can't fix everything with candy...

RRBB

@RRBB: I'm taking you with us this afternoon! It'll do you good. Plus my brother and Brush will be there.

PaintDrop

@RRBB: I hope nothing serious has happened.

Octavia

@Octavia: no, nothing serious. Just nonsense. Sorry you had to see this :( I really mess up the mood at times. Is super cool for you to make an account here :)

RRBB

@RRBB: You know best, but if it was you-know-who, I'd like to know.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: yes it was! Can we drop it now? Please?

RRBB

Well, I'm getting married tomorrow...

MightyDragon

What?!?

MixaMax

What?!?

Brush

Huh?

CodeFilly

Seriously?!?

RRBB

Oh, my bad. I meant I'm getting mared tomorrow. As in seeing my marefriend?

MightyDragon

You jerk! :/

Still love you, though.

CodeFilly

@MightyDragon: Never speak to me again!

Until the meetup.

Brush

@MightyDragon: Wow! Just wow! Code, where did you find that loser? A fine flank can't be worth that much suffering!

MixaMax

If nothing else it definitely is lively here :) Thank you for the welcome, and have fun at your meetup.

Dopey, you never change... :)

Octavia

@MightyDragon: To the moon with you!

TheRealLuna

No! Wait! We need the moon! He'll just mess it up!

Luna

@Luna: Fiiiine! :/

TheRealLuna

@all: What did I just trot back to?!?

LyraHands

Truly Shattered

Lyra, are you here?

RRBB

I did something dumb today... really dumb...

RRBB

I'm just pathetic. Alone and on the aethernet while everypony else is out nuzzling and smooching each other. You're probably out with somepony as well...

RRBB

I hate Hearts and Hooves! Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!

Not as stupid a me, though. Banged the door on my leg just so I get to miss school. Not that mom noticed. Only reason she let it pass was because it's a "semi holiday" and I “wouldn't miss anything” if I stayed home. The servants were worried more about me that my own parents! How twisted is that?

RRBB

This hurts like Tartarus. I don't think I'll be going to the meetup. Sorry. I was all excited about it, but after yesterday, I don't think I can take it.

I hardly survived Paint's outing yesterday. She tried to get me to feel better. They all did, but I can't stand sitting there, watching Brush and Paint's brother ogle each other all the time! They can't be more obvious if they started nuzzling each other! Everypony at Paint's place knows, they're just not saying anything because they want her brother to be happy.

I wish somepony would want me to be happy...

RRBB

RRBB, I'm here! Sorry, had a really long orientation and couldn't get to a computer sooner.

Tell me what happened.

LyraHands

Nothing happened. Nothing ever happens...

RRBB

Tell that lie to somepony else. :/ Was it about the fight with you know who?

LyraHands

Yeah... maybe...

RRBB

RR...

LyraHands

There never was a fight, okay? She left, then I busted the bathroom sink and lied we had a fight. Since I was the only one with scrapes, nopony cared! They just phoned my mom and told her how much the damages would cost.

RRBB

It happened, didn't it? :( Oh, RR... I warned you not to build your hopes up. Some things are just not meant to be. Sucks, I know. Happened a few times to me as well. Try to cry it out.

LyraHands

I'm so disgusting! Of course she'd react like that. Because I'm disgusting! Repulsive! :( I did my best to pretend I wasn't, but I always knew. In my nightmares, I could see it! Jr Prom Princess, top tier of my class, multi-pageant winner, and I'm just disgusting!!!

RRBB

RR, you're not disgusting! Never think that! It's just a lot to take in, especially at that age. Do you think I was any different? I couldn't tell hoof from tail! I know there's nothing I or anypony could say to make you feel better, but you have to let it all out. If you keep it inside it will only hurt you more. Trust me on this.

LyraHands

I finally started to accept what I might be and she! She did nothing! Just looked at me sort of confused and left. Do you know how that feels?!

I could see it in her eyes! Pity and disgust. Disgust I could live with! Heck, nopony likes me. Most can't stand me. Pity, though... that just burns me from the inside. I keep imagining things could have been different and that hurts... it hurts so much.

RRBB

I spent the entire afternoon yesterday hoping she'd trot up to me. Not that I'd think she'd change her mind, but maybe at least talk to me, you know? Just a few words. Don't I get to get a few words?

I miss all those times she yell that she hates me. How sick is that?

RRBB

That's called heartbreak, RR. There are a thousands things ponies will tell you to do, but none of it matters. And it's not true that nopony likes you. Just look at the site. The Nightlings adore you. Your friends adore you! Do you think I'd drop everything for a random stranger? You matter, RR. I, Brush, Max, we're always here for you. So is PaintDrop. And I'm sure there are others.

I know it's the last thing on your mind, but please come to the meetup. Even if you stay in your room all day, at least it will be a change. And there'll always be someone there if you change your mind.

LyraHands

I guess...

Heh, well known fanfiction author, literary prodigy, and I still couldn't see this coming. Half my fucking stories deal with heartbreak and I was still too stupid to see my own.

RRBB

And please don't hurt yourself again. One pain won't mask another. I'll borrow some money from Bob and pass by to see you. Better get a doctor to see you.

Does anypony else know what happened?

LyraHands

No. I don't think so. I made sure it was only the two of us when I confessed. A few ran in the bathroom after I broke the sink...

RRBB

Okay, now listen to me. Go take a shower then go to bed. Don't do anything in between. Just shower and go to sleep. No writing on the site, no browsing through the net. Don't even read. Then, when you wake up go through your stories. The old ones.

LyraHands

Why? They are shit! I should have burned them years ago!

RRBB

They have her in there. It won't help, but it'll take off the edge a bit. And get a spare pillow. When it happened to me I cried all night. You're an earth pony, so you're stronger, but you'll still cry.

LyraHands

What about coming to see me? I thought you said you would.

RRBB

Do you want anypony to visit? Or do you prefer to be alone?

LyraHands

I don't know!

RRBB

:) cry a bit, RR. I'll be with you later tonight. And please don't hurt yourself anymore.

LyraHands

I'll try. Thank you.

RRBB

A DarkMax PM

Umm, hey Dark. Just wanted to poke you see how you're doing.

Heh the site has gone wild while you were gone. We have ponies joining left and right. This meetup thing is almost here... new tags, new UI, new stories. All in all cool stuff.

MixaMax

Hello.

Yes, I've noticed. It's also grown even more disorganized than before. (I didn't think that was possible.)

DarkSparkle

Yeah... that too :(

MixaMax

No, no, no, no! That was a joke. I was just being funny. :) It's so very much Lyra. I'd be surprised if she didn't leave her mark.

DarkSparkle

Right *giggle*

Dark, I just wanted to apologize for being such a jerk last time. There are things you said I really don't agree with, but that doesn't mean you're always wrong. And I shouldn't have made fun of you. I get cranky because of my BORING job so I often take it out shouting at ponies on the site. You can say it has been my outlet for a while now.

What I'm trying to say, it was never meant to get personal. I like everypony on the site (even Jerk the Evervirgin), I just don't always express it as I should. Do you think we can be friends?

MixaMax

MixaMax, we are friends. I just overreacted a bit. Was as much my fault as yours. I hope I haven't caused you any sleepless nights. Sorry if I have :(

Between you and me this isn't the first time I'm chased off a site. To be perfectly honest, you girls rock compared to most of the other places I've been to. Let's just say that here, at least I left on my own accord O:) Not that I plan on getting kicked out! Also, don't think I'll change my views. The facts are on my side.

DarkSparkle

Heh, on your side, you say? It must be a pretty small side. :P

Can I ask what made you return to us? Not that I don't want you here! Just when you disappeared I tried to get Code and Tech to find you and none of them could. I feared that we'd lost all contact with you :(

MixaMax

Understandable. They aren't the only ones who can code, you know. ;) (Plus Tech's code isn't all that good. It gets the job done, I'll give him that, but it's so messy argh!)

TheRealLuna poked me. I've known her from a few other forums so we have information to our dummy accounts. We never used them much, but in this case I'm glad we did. Also, I don't believe that's Princess Luna. Her schedule doesn't match one bit with TheRealLuna. She seems nice' though.

DarkSparkle

Wouldn't that be something? To have a Princess on the forum. Ponies would go insane :)

I'm glad that TheRealLuna brought you back. I know it doesn't show, but I like arguing with ponies. I mean I like the arguing itself, regardless if I'm right or wrong. (Don't read anything into that. I'm mostly always right.)

You should have seen our verbal battles with Brush and RRBB. Lyra is such a spoilsport, though.

MixaMax

Heh. Yes, I haven't seen Lyra argue in years. I mean sure, she does try, but it's really... umm... well... She's as parallel to the conversation as an X.

I've no idea who the rest are, though. Well, other than Twist. I don't know where that filly gets her energy, but she's posting like wild in every forum. Tartarus, she admins four Daring Do sites! I’m scared what she'll become when she grows up.

DarkSparkle

Maybe she's a herd of teenagers who like causing chaos on the aethernet? :P

MixaMax

Hmm. Twist is secretly discord? That would explain some things. Just joking :P

DarkSparkle

You're jokes are really horrible! :P Don't worry, I'll give you a helping hoof. ;)

Oh, you're old enough to drink, right? I don't want to get a mug of strong stuff to see that you're a little filly (that's happened once before :P)

MixaMax

I assure you, I'm of drinking age. Although, if I weren't I'd probably say the same thing. In any case, you'll soon see. Maybe we can not start drinking at the first meeting? Isn't the event going to be focused on discussing Midnight Castle stories? Oh, and I'll so crush Twist! Her half baked shipping theories have no chance against my cold hard logic!

DarkSparkle

*snrk* Poor use of words :P

And if you think the event will only be about discussing literature... you've never been to a Lyra meetup. ;) Lets just say that some of us will keep well behaved during the day because there will be foals around. After dark, though, anything goes! >:D

MixaMax

Argh! Sorry, but I don't have good experiences of late night parties :(

DarkSparkle

You'll have a fun time, trust me :)

I'm really curious to see who is who. To be honest you're one of the mysteries on the site. As I said, nopony has a clue who you are, even Lyra. You and Jade. I bet she's some skinny mare with acne living out her fantasy online. Like, she's trying so hard to be threatening that it's almost sweet. :)

MixaMax

She? I thought Jade was a stallion.

DarkSparkle

Trust me, she isn't. I invented that game. She's just an insecure filly that hopes to get attention and find a colt. Shit! I must help my sis with her H&H gift! She's going to kill me!

MixaMax

Oh, right :/ the day of the super-commercialized-but-we-really-want-you-to-feel-loved event. Personally, I find it stupid. Why wait a whole year to be with somepony?

DarkSparkle

Riiiiight. :P Well, don't fret. I'm solo as well. :) Let’s cry together... and help our sisters try to win "the love of their life" ... again! :P

MixaMax

Heh. Max, you can be so cruel. :) Have fun and see you soon.

DarkSparkle

Take care, Dark.

MixaMax

Author's Notes:

Hi, all! :)

Let me thank you for helping reach day 50 of Equestrian Fanfiction :)
You've been an incredible support and put up with me even when I scrambled sentences beyond recognition :D

Originally, I was planning to have the sidefic today, but unexpected real life complications had me push it back to the weekend (tentatively :( ). In order to keep the surprise I'll be stretching the timeline a bit, so the weekly Spoikers and analysis might be a bit out of sync :( Sorry.

Thanks again for being part of this, and a happy Heart's day to you all :D

Spoiler 5

Bellucio Forsa

Model, disciple, chosen

A rising star in the modeling world, Bellucio has worked hard for everything he had. Of noble lineage, faced with difficult times, he's made sacrifices to maintain the false appearances required by his family. Cast between two fates, he has so far managed not to pick a side, but for how long can one serve two masters?

Siblings: None
Place of birth: Mistmount, Gumania
Occupation: Model, College student
Hobby: Darts
Mentor deity: Poseidon
Magic power: Waterwill
Eternity gem: Adamantium

"I've gone a long, long way together..."

RRBB is sick, so it's up to me to keep you all informed of the latest spoilers.

Sadly, my Mistmount Chronicles lore is a bit iffy, but there are several things that seem strange to me. First, is Bellucio spoiler ominous, unlike all the ones until now? Good or bad, the previous four always had a determined path. Bellucio seems to be undecided with "two masters,” and I can only assume one of them is Poseidon. Curious what the other one is.

Another thing, he's the first character to have nothing in his spoiler marked unknown. Nothing is unknown, which is suspicious in itself. That and the adamantium. Seems very meh on the surface.

Finally, that quote? Unless it's a typo (and someone made a career ending mistake) it poses a lot of questions.

Of course, I could be wrong, thoughts?

PaintDrop

Here we go...

We have confirmation Bellucio is a model (not that there was any doubt), but also that he's a discipline of Poseidon (his role, as well as the title of the upcoming scroll).

While in reality-Zeus that's no big deal, the Poseidon in reality-Poseidon is a huge dick! I won't be surprised if it ends out that he's had Bellucio steal all the artifacts from other dimensions. That would be interesting.

Oh, and darts? Darts?!? How much more handy can we get? I understand the writers want the characters to be "as human as possible" but darts? They might invent a sport called a thumb war. :/

MixaMax

I did some research, and it turns out adamantium is actually a mythical metal which has the dominion over water. I can't be sure that's what S. Child had in mind, but it's a very interesting possibility.

Twist

@Twist: I agree that there is a chance that the writers have gone with the water (and weather) control aspect of adamantium, but I'm more convinced they'd focus on the indestructible aspect of it. According to some of the legends, the metal of the ocean could not be harmed by anything, thus a sword of adamantium will never get dull.

Personally, I find it remarkable that there's no confirmation that Poseidon is Bellucio's master. All we have are carefully placed hints, and that is why I think that the "second master" that Bellucio serves might be a Titan.

DarkSparkle

I’m not sure if I'm the only one, but I didn’t see any mention of Molly anywhere. Maybe love is the second "master" that we're hinted at? If the characters age and grow relative to real time, Molly should be of age.

Candle

@Candle: I don't think that's the answer. Molly will probably have a relationship with Icelos and her dream-walking thing. There was just too much focus on it. And we still know nothing about Bellucio's actual role as Poseidon's apprentice. I think he's something like an assassin that eliminates threats, and that the power of adamantium is something else.

What do you think if he can transform himself into water? That would be wicked! Or maybe, instead of controlling the weather, Bellucio can become the weather? Oooh! I so much want a Bellucio hurricane to become a thing right now!

Do you think they'll go for it?

PrinceEric

@Candle: I agree with PrinceEric. The love aspect would be lame. Maybe in 5-10 chapters later we might have stuff develop, but at this stage? What possible benefit could there be? And don't forget that it's pretty much established that each chapter is linked to a character. Molly had her turn, and I don't think we'll be getting back to her for a while.

@PrinceEric: I so hope you are wrong. Controlling water is already a huge cliche. Controlling the weather is... look, if he was so powerful, why can't he just destroy the corporations and take the crown?

MixaMax

What if Bellucio is the Everprince?

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: that's crazy! But is also sort of cool. Talk about a twist in the plot. If that happens, I promise I'll sing you praises for years to come!

MixaMax

@all: last call for hotel rooms! If you want to book one but haven't till now, let me know!

A small hint before Luna tears off my ears: adamantium, and water, is also linked to the moon. ;)

CEOWitch

I think DarkSparkle is right. There's too much focus on the water for it to be true. And the titan theory? Simply beautiful! We have everyone worrying how close Bellucio is to Poseidon, only to learn he's titan spawn. :)

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: hmm, what is Bellucio is a crystal human and his special power is to turn his clothes (or those of others) to water? That would bring to some interesting situations :)

Brush

@Brush: are you hitting on me?

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: do you want me to? :) Please tell me you're a charming crystal blond with glasses. *hubba hubba* *ear nibble*

Brush

Brush: pfft! Leave the kid alone. Can't you see she's doing her best to attract Dark's attention? :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Who in Tartarus do you think you are?!? Just because somepony is smarter than you doesn't give you the right to use me to ridicule her and drag her to you level! You're projecting so hard it's not even funny! I bet you've never seen a stallion in your life! Other than your body cushion!

@Brush: did you seriously ask me that? I take it you're the site playmare, but seriously get yourself under control! There are foals here and they could do without your suggestiveness! LyraHands didn't make her site for that!

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: you're so cute when you get angry :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: I can't believe you said that... ;)

DarkSparkle

...

Jade the Evervirgin

@all: let me stop you all before this gets out of control. As fun as it is, there really are young viewers, and if Tech were here (and not busy) he'd go on a long lecture how we must act responsibly, appropriately, and so on.

That said, somepony please write a story with Bellucio having the power to turn clothes into water O:)

LyraHands

@LyraHands: well, I won't write about it... ;)

PaintDrop

Author's Notes:

Out of curiosity:

DarkMax, DarkJade, or JadeMax? What are your theories? :D

Analysis 5

Midnight Castle: Everhere, Vol 7, Chapter 5, Poseidon's Faithful

Before I start, let me share some theories based on the chapter title. It's obvious it's about Bellucio. Possibly it'll also be about Poseidon as well. But (and this is big) who are going to be the other two? So far the chapters usually keep to the 3-person-group principle. That means that we're likely to have 3 main characters: Bellucio (duh), and two more.

Personally, I think it'll be Molly and Euryala (who are both connected to Poseidon and Bellucio) If I'm right that will lead to a very interesting love triangle. (And if it were a fic I'd say it'll end up with Molly and Euryala getting shipped :P)

Anyway, here goes!

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We start with Molly having nightmares (about her and Danny being chased in the Hades-reality). We practically get a repeat of Titan-Hades ball (?) scene, which turns into a chase after it's discovered that Danny isn't tainted. Lots of wild chasing (yay Cerberus triplets) ending in Danny being caught and Hades thanking Molly. Molly is confused, but before she can say anything she notices that she too is tainted (her arm is covered in pitch black goo). She screams and wakes up in her bedroom, and (naturally) runs out to see Danny in the middle of the night.

Getting to his dorm at campus, she stumbles upon Loki, who is making cheat cards for his exam (go, Loki :))) I absolutely love him! :)) Who says that he's gone, but she isn't the only one to ask for him. Then we suddenly find that Bellucio is also there (dun dun duuun!). Some innocent flirting followers, ending with them deciding to track down Euryala to find out what's going on (since she seems to know more than anyone on the matter of the everthings.)

Molly uses her dreamwalking skills (with some occasional help from Icelos, which was mega scary!) to find out how to get to Euryala, then with Bellucio they go on a creepy spy hunt to uncover part of the organization she is from (the Warlockwings are just touched upon). After some more cloak and dagger stuff, they manage to go to Euryala's hideout (?) only to find that she's expecting them.

After the weirdest exchange ever, she agrees to help them in exchange for a kiss (wow! Is thus even aimed at young colts anymore? :P Not that I'm complaining.) and an artifact from Poseidon. They then go to Megan, since the only way to re-renter a reality is through the shatter stone (which was expected) and they go there.

Immediately, we see that Poseidon is not as nice as originally believed. Not only does he control the entire town (and beyond) through his own type of water-reflection-dream magic, but he also uses his disciples to kill enemies and steal artifacts. Under the guise of his number one follower, Bellucio (and co) enter his boobytrapped vault and steal part of a medallion (a "metal loop"). They then return and part ways: Euryalla vanishes in a splash of water and Molly rushes off (almost daring to peck him on the cheek).

Bellucio is left alone and mutters something about not trusting her, at which point Icelos appears in the night and asks "which one?"

Next Chapter: "Hooves of a Human"

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Wooooow! So much going here that I just can't... argh! Molly tainted? Bellucio can see Icelos? Euryala wanting kisses from Bellucio (wasn't she with Blazen?!?)

I very much like how there's subtle continuity. I must reread everything now to see if there aren't more things that I've missed.

What do you all think of this?

PrinceEric

That's a rather interesting take. Personally, the story strongly reminds me of Sombra's rule. His corruption is unmistakable, and it also granted certain "advantages" to those who were corrupt. Needless to say, the more corrupt one was, the closer to the upper eschewing of power.

The Hades corruption seems to be exactly that. When Danny was shown not to be corrupted he had problems breathing. Everyone else, Molly included, seemed perfectly alright. To me this reads exactly like Hades marking his closest servants corrupted puppets.

Furthermore, note how in the same chapter we have Poseidon. Now, if there is any mercy in the idea of the deities being Princess Celestia, Luna, and Cadence, we can say that Hades (Luna) is suffering from the corruption Sombra had, and the one to wash it away would be Poseidon (Hades).

True, I've allowed myself a bit of interpretative freedom, but it does make sense and pose questions. If we go by analogy, it means that Poseidon along with Molly will destroy Hades' darkness. However, what will happen if Poseidon is evil? An evil Princess Cadence would be a scary thing (especially if she doesn't have a husband).

Taking it further, does that mean that Megan will marry Poseidon? Not impossible, I say.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jafe the Evervirgin: ... that's just. You can actually be smart and sweet when you're not yelling at pones. That's some deep analyses, and as much as I want I can't find anything wrong. If the writers go along that path it will be one wild ride. :D

I'm still creeped out by the idea of Poseidon and Megan. Though, Shining and Cadence made the cutest couple ever!

MixaMax

@Jade the Evervirgin: Mary me, please! :) That analyses was perfect. And thinking about the parallels with real life, that's quite close to how Shining Armor would react (I mean the way Megan does). The only thing I can't picture is an evil Cadence. Even without a husband she shouldn't have fallen so drastically.

Do you think we'll see them taking children in the series?

DarkSparkle

@Jade the Evervirgin: somepony has become popular with the mares :P

MasterOfThisAstra

Argh! I just give up!

@Jade the Evervirgin: snuggles for me too? Or at least analyze my stories? :P

Brush

@Brush: if it wasn't for your skill in writing, I would be talking to you. And yes, I will review several of your stories, along with all of DarkSparkle's, Max's attempt (if she ever gets to write it), and a few others.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: My hero! :P *ear lick*

Brush

@Brush: back off! I saw her first! (I guess Dark can have her for a while, though :P If she promises not to break Jade. :P)

MixaMax

@MixaMax: you're such a romantic… :)

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: I try, bby. ;)

MixaMax

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I'm locking this!
Jade, you get a 24 hour ban!

CodeFilly

Moderator PMs

What the hay, mare?! This Jade has gone way too far! If Tech were here he'd permabanned him long ago. Heck, I would have banned him if you hadn't asked me to take it easy on him. I get Jade has issues, but this isn't the place to resolve them! So tell me what's going on!

CodeFilly

Err, it's sort of complicated.

LyraHands

Lyra, he's received a several warnings plus a few bans. I don't know what his beef is, but the moment anypony says something he goes all nutjob. We can't keep him on the site!

CodeFilly

Can you keep him online until the meetup? That's all I ask.

LyraHands

Lyra, you've always been full of joy and laughs, that's what I love about you, but you can't save all of Equestria. Max, Brush, RRBB, now this... Please, I'm asking as a friend. What's really going on?

CodeFilly

This doesn't go past you, okay? You won't say a word to anypony, okay? Not the old bunch, not Max, not even Mighty. Promise me!

LyraHands

That sounds serious. Okay, I promise. What's the deal?

CodeFilly

Jade is MasterOfThisAstra's classmate (who, by the way is Brush's coltfriend... and also Paint's brother). From what Brush and Mota told me he's this really shy and isolated crystal pegasus who gets picked on a lot.

To cut a very long story short, Brush had the great idea to hitch him and Max. As you saw, things didn't go that way.

LyraHands

Wow! That explains so much.

It's horrible, but I also feel amused... like watching a cart crash in slow motion, but unable to look away because you want to see exactly how pineapples will get squished by watermelons.

I can tell you from now that's one can of worms that'll take weeks to clear. If they haven't killed Jade by then.

CodeFilly

Err?

LyraHands

You've given a repressed pony, a collegecolt at that, the means to act the way he's only dreamt of with zero repercussions. What did you think would happen? All the times he wished he could stand up to somepony but didn't dare? Well here he can, and a ban won't stop him.

How did you agree to this?

CodeFilly

I know. :( I'm a sucker for romance. Brush convinced me that it would be like in her stories. Filly meets colt, they talk a bit, fall in love, get together, marry...

LyraHands

And start a few flame wars in the process. Really, Lyra! I don't know if I should laugh or be mad at you. And Brush. If she wasn't that close I'd pluck her tail feathers off!

What do you know about Jade?

CodeFilly

Nothing! Brush and Mota just said a few things about him and that's it.

LyraHands

You're hiding something, but okay. This might be the biggest mistake ever, but I'll keep him alive until the meetup. If he doesn't behave there, though, that's it! No more chances!

You know you're lucky Tech is busy. He really can't stand these sort of situations. Pity he won't make it to the meetup. Was hoping to see him.

CodeFilly

Yeah, a shame. He's one of the few I haven't met face to face. Did he say what was going on exactly? He was a bit cryptic when I asked.

LyraHands

Yeah. He just told me he's got some family issues. Trying to patch things up with his child. Poor Tech. I get the sense things haven't been going well for him lately. We're so lucky he joined the site.

CodeFilly

Well, he got you to join. :P Did Mighty get to Canterlot? Miss that goof.

LyraHands

Not yet. He was okayed to take a few days off for the event, though. Do you know what that idiot did! He went straight to his boss and asked to get some vacation days "to go to a Nightling convention." :/

Lucky, his boss is a bigger geek than him. From what I heard they spent the rest of the day geeking out until his boss' wife appeared to see why her husband hadn't come back. If you ask me somepony slept in the barn that night :)

CodeFilly

Pfft! I've seen you and Mighty talk geek. You swoon so hard your chest fluff shows! :P

LyraHands

Do you really want me to tell Bob about your college flings?

CodeFilly

So, getting back to Jade, he's fine for a few days, right? Don't make any obvious exceptions, but please don't ban him. If things get bad I'll talk to him myself. At least he hasn't picked a fight with me... yet.

LyraHands

Careful what you wish for. By the by, Mighty was impressed by his reasoning. A lot of the things he said make sense. I totally didn't see the Cadence vs Sombra angle. It's almost a pity Cadence isn't on the forum. I'd ask her if she was.

Do you think that it's true that Blueblood is a user? I tried to do a trace on Luna and TheRealLuna. Luna's actually in the palace, which is a bit scary. Imagine us chatting with a princess on a daily basis :). TheRealLuna's completely untraceable. That also is a bit scary.

CodeFilly

Heh. Who knows? After I met CEOWitch nothing could surprise me. Besides it's not like it matters. Anypony can be a Nightling. Anyone, actually.

LyraHands

Oh please tell me you aren't one of those who think "real humans" are hiding among the users talking to us. :/ It's just a myth! Humans don't really exist.

CodeFilly

... gryphons, Code. Or dragons, diamond dogs, zebras, yaks...

LyraHands

Oh, right, them. Heh heh O:) Nope, I haven't been playing MCRP with Mighty long distance through the aethernet. :P

CodeFilly

I really, really, want to hear details, but must run to work. My boss is great and all, but I feel bad when I'm late.

Ciao!

LyraHands

See you, crazy. :)

CodeFilly

Travel Talks

@all: okay, this is the big one! The meeting is upon us, the rooms are booked (thanks CEO), the events planned (thanks Dark & Max), all that's left for us to do is get there. And talking about getting there, grouping together might be a good idea.

As you know I'm in Ponyville now, so I’will be taking the early train to Canterlot. If anypony wants to join me (or group with others based on city) go ahead and post here.

This is happeniiiing! :)

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Sorry, but I've already spoken with somepony. And the early train is too early for me. :(

I still need to make, more candy canes to bring for the event!

Twist

If anypony wants to join me from Manehattan, I'll be taking the 11:05 train from Manehattan West. Can't wait to see all of you there :)

Candle

I have my own arrangements, so will be going with PaintDrop and her brother. See you there, though :)

Paint has already brought a pile of lewd pictures. Like, I'm not sure she's allowed to look at them, they are so lewd! :P

RRBB

@LyraHands: we'll be flying there with the wife. Thanks, though. Oh, and she sends you hush and all. :)

Lurkling

@LyraHands: I'm game! Pass by my place as you go, okay? I think I'll be ready by 4, just to be on the safe side.

MixaMax

@RRBB: I'll be tagging along, just to keep an eye on you girls ;) I hope all of you will be at your best behavior! :P

Brush

I'll probably be flying from the Crystal Empire, but if somepony wants to catch a train that's fine, I'll do that.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: are you serious?! :) I'll be going from there as well! Meet up at the place or the train station? Might be good for us to catch the 10:00 express.

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: palace is fine. Thank you.

Jade the Evervirgin

RRBB: they are NOT so lewd! :/

PaintDrop

They are a bit suggestive, sis.

Hello, everypony. I'm MasterOfThisAstra, and I'm PaintDrop's older brother. I've already got my own arrangements, but wanted you to know that I'm looking forward to this!

Bring your water bottles! :)

MasterOfThisAstra

As surely all of you suspect, I'm already in Canterlot, and actually listening to the result of SweetStuff's songs. As tempting as it is to post them here, I'll wait till we've all gathered.

If you ever come to Canterlot early, just come to the palace and send me a PM. ;)

Luna

@Luna: Well, I'm already here. Along with Fleetfoot and PrinceEric. (Fleet snores, by the way.)

Still, if anyone needs a lift from anywhere, let me know.

CEOWitch

Best MCE party ever!!! :D

PPI

I'm still not able to go :/ Stupid important work keeping me from having fun ://

You enjoy yourselves, though. I'll be popping up to ask for juice details. Like who won the shipping wars. What did the food taste like, etc. (just kidding. I know what the food tastes like.)

TheRealLuna

@DarkSparkle: how will you be traveling? If you're anywhere near the Crystal Empire we might pick you up.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: That's very sweet, but I'll be arriving on the Ponyville train as well. Thank you for the offer :)

DarkSparkle

I'll be going with my stupid sister! :/ I swear she never lets me go alone anywhere! It's not like I haven't gone to Canterlot before.

Sorry for ranting, but I feel really annoyed right now. :( At least the girls in class are happy for me. I'm a bit sad they can't come along. Not that they'll understand this colt stuff...

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: You're not making any sense, kiddo. First of all, your sis is fine. Second, don't worry about ponies making fun of you. If Midnight Castle is good enough for a Wonderbolt, it's good enough for anypony! Does anypony make fun of Raimbow Dash's Daring Do obsession?

CEOWitch

@DarkSparkle: oh? What train are you catching? We can ride together! You, me, and Lyra, I mean.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: at 4 in the morning? I'm crazy, but not crazy. :)

Actually, I have a few things I must do before my trip, so will be catching another train.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: you're not preparing materials for your shipping argument, I hope? :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: I'll have you know that I have a lot of important work that I need to finish since I won't be able to dedicate any time while at the meetup. If I just happen to gather a few materials to better present my point, it's something I'll do on the side.

DarkSparkle

Sorry for the stupid question, but will anypony greet us upon arrival? Canterlot is quite large and I'm not sure everypony has been there before. I have many times, so there's one less to worry about. It would still be appreciated, though. :)

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: fine! I'll take care of that. Anything else? Come on, pones, don't be shy!

CEOWitch

@DarkSparkle: You're kidding me, right? You're actually going to spend the morning preparing for your ship war? Not that I won't find it hilarious, but seriously, mare! Can't you loosen up at least for a few days?

MixaMax

@CEOWitch: somepony has a little crush on you, it seems. :P

@MixaMax: on you too :D

Brush

@Brush: Will you stop with the shipping, already!? It's funny online, but in the real ponies might get hurt! I know what you're doing innocent, but it's starting to wear everyone down.

CodeFilly

@PaintDrop: Little filly, did you happen to draw any pictures of me, by chance?

Fleetfoot

@DarkSparkle: I'll be there when you arrive.

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: What about me? Will you be here when I get to Canterlot?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: No.

Jade the Evervirgin

Filly Talk

You okay? I didn't see you at school today. Please tell me you didn't get in any trouble before getting there. That would be a new accomplishment even for you.

PaintDrop

Is something wrong with me? I mean, we've been friends since forever and if there is something that's terribly wrong you'd tell me, right? Right?

RRBB

?!? Where did that come from? There's nothing wrong with you. Why would you even think that? And, of course, if there was I'd tell you, just like I did during the school election.

Did you get in a fight with you-know-who again? That would explain why she was all quite and mopey today. What did you do? Threaten reprisals? Say you'd get her kicked out of school?

PaintDrop

She was sad?

RRBB

Definitely. She even asked me about you once, but after your fight a few days ago, I said I had no idea. This really isn't healthy for you, you know. You can't keep getting into fights. I've told you before. Heck half the site has told you. What will it take for you to get it through your thick skull, you mule?

PaintDrop

We didn't fight, okay? Things are complicated.

RRBB

Complicated how?

PaintDrop

Complicated as in I like fillies!

RRBB

Well, I didn't see that coming. All this time I thought you hated that sort of thing. Although it's not like your behavior wasn't all over the place last few years. That love-hate cycle you went through with you-know-who makes a bit of sense now. Although, I should be mad at you for not telling me earlier. I'm your best friend, RRBB, and that doesn't mean just bringing you cake at parties.

PaintDrop

As if I'd share anything as disgusting as that with anypony!

Look, I know you're my friend...or were until I told you this, but I just couldn't tell you. I'm sorry! I was so disgusted with myself and afraid you'd never talk to me again. I tried so hard to keep this under control, but... well, look what happened!

Don't bother picking me up tomorrow. I won't be going to the meetup. Instead I'll be here, trying to figure out what to do with the shambles of my life.

RRBB

I won't pretend I understand what's going on, but I'm certainly not leaving you here! I'll drag you by the mane if I have to, but you're going to the meetup! And you'll have a great time whether you want to or not!

RRBB, you've seen the things I draw. Don't you think I'd at least have researched the topic? I, not some airhead, you know.

PaintDrop

And you aren't afraid I'd ravishe you? My hooves sliding through your mane, as you lay beneath me...helpless, gasping for air, as my lips touch yours.

RRBB

1) You've written steamier things than that
2) I've drawn wilder things than that
3) That's the method you always use when you want to deflect a topic.

I wish you would have trusted me with this. I'd have known how to react, at least. Tell me you didn't tell her? That would be the stupidest things you've done if true.

PaintDrop

I'm stupid.

RRBB

Filly! Why? There was no way that could play out well.

PaintDrop

Can we talk about something else, please?

RRBB

Sure. What do you want to talk about? Brush and my brother? Though, please try to act surprised when the "announcement" is made.

PaintDrop

Not that it was wasn't completely obvious. I mean, really? What did they expect?

RRBB

I'm just glad that my brother stopped acting like a wound up melancholic. Mom's pleased as well, although she'll never ever admit it. I guess part of her still mourns the loss of her sweet little angel, stolen by the vile Brush. I really hope Mom doesn't have a site account. That would be awkward in more ways than one.

Hang in there, you heard? Remember what you used to tell me? When life gets difficult buck it in the face.

PaintDrop

You're a good friend, Paint. Sometimes I really don't know what I did to deserve you. If only you were my type... things would have been so much easier.

RRBB

Well, sorry for not being sexy enough for you to hit on me. Like, this is such a level of abstracted absurdity, I, not even sure kid it's a good or bad thing.

PaintDrop

And now this is you deflecting,

RRBB

Well, of course it is! I learned minutes ago that my best friend is gay! And from an aethernet message at that! You thought I wouldn't freak out? And no, I don't hate you. I'm just mad at you for not telling me sooner.

PaintDrop

So, what do we do with her? I don't want to see or talk to her right now. Maybe I won't want to see or talk to her ever again. Tartarus knows once was enough.

RRBB

Want me to talk to her? Now that I have a grip on the situation, I might be able to fix your mess as I usually do. No guarantees this time. I'm not gonna lie, this is even weirder than my brother dating my writing idol.

PaintDrop

I'd like that. Thanks, Paint.

RRBB

And in the meantime, you get some sleep, okay? We have to look our best for the meetup. You wouldn't want somepony else steal the show, right?

PaintDrop

I'll try, but tears get in the way...

It's like I'm in this magical mansion made of everything I desire, only to find out that the mansion is smack in the center of a field of shit. One step outside and I feel I'll never be able to get back.

RRBB

Sleep! I'll pick you up tomorrow!

PaintDrop

To sleep, perchance to dream... of love, and joy, and happiness...

RRBB

Author's Notes:

Hi, all!

Just a quick update! The companion fic is coming along nicely. Hopefully will be done and posted the next few days. (At least one person gas read the desert so far :P)

Useful Advice

@all: okay, this is the big one! Tomorrow we all set off the meet in Canterlot. As somepony who's been to a few conventions (in a personal and professional capacity) here are a few hints to keep in mind:

1) Ears and teeth - clean them, brush them, check them!

It sounds silly, I know, but trust me the amount of ponies who neglect this is staggering :/ Make sure you have no bits of straw in your teeth, check your breath, and for stars' sake pay attention to your ears! With the amount of ear nibble comments on the site this should be obvious. You don't want anypony to get a mouthful of earwax after a nibble, right? (Don't ask :/).

2) Wings and mane

This is mostly for the pegasi. Make sure you preen your wings! There will be professional photographers, so don't ruin your memories by not taking care. Yes, I know that by definition we're described as shut-ins, living in our parents' basement, so let's prove them wrong! (Fleet and I will be posing with everypony who wants)

3) Stallions

They do exist, they will be there, so don't freak out! Also, I know some of the posters claim to be male (which we'll see for sure) so take it easy. No Brushisms, okay? If you find a cute stallion engage in NORMAL conversation with him. (Don't be “that girl”) And also, don't be nervous. Stallions are ponies too!

4) Keep it family friendly

I know for a fact that some of our members are foals, so keep the lewds to a min. It’s Canterlot so there's enough places to go and engage in such discussions after sunset.

5) Have fun!

I'm sure a lot of you are tense (I've seen this at every convention I've been to) but try to shake that off. The whole point of the meetup is to see each other and have a few days of Nightling fun. Real life can wait for that long (trust me, nearly always it can). And if anything happens, there will be a few Wonderbolts to keep you safe *wink*

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: my heroine.

PaintDrop

@all: A few additional things for all of you who aren't from Canterlot. It's a big place, you can get lost. If you get lost ask for the Palace. It's visible from almost everywhere and everypony knows it. I'll talk to the guards so they expect lost Nightlings.

Although the schedule for the event is pretty packed (thanks to MixaMax and DarkSparkle) everypony who wants can still get a guided tour of the city. If you do, let me know once you get here and I'll see how to make it work.

See you soon!

CodeFilly

@all: Guess I have to say a few words as well.

First of all, huge thanks to CEOWitch and Luna for making this possible. In my wildest dreams I couldn't imagine this happening. :D Those who know me know how much I've been wanting this even if... Stupid emotions. Breaking my train of thought :~) All I wanted to say is… thank you.

Thank you for being here. Thank you for trusting me. Thank you for making Equestria a better place. We might be just a group of weirdos on an aethernet site, but we've helped each other in times of need (and trust me, I know how trying some of them have been) and isn't that what matters? We might have not all saved Equestria but each of us has saved somepony, and in life that's what counts.

And I made a fool of myself. :) See you soon, you crazies.

LyraHands

@LyraHands: well, you're our fool, and we love you for it. *ear nibble* Have a great time, you silly thing. Not sure I'll make it, but I'm with you in spirit.

Bob

@Bob: Nooo! :( I was hoping to meet you, Brush, and RRBB. You three are my favorite writers.

@LyraHands: That was really sweet. Just like in a Mistmount Chronicles chapter. Thank you, Lyra! Thank you for making this wonderful place. I have a lot of good friends in the real world, but all of you are precious to me as well. After the meetup I hope you become my real life friends as well. :D

I know this might be a bit self serving, but I have been working on something of a surprise for all of you. I'm sure it won't be the best thing ever, but it's just a little something from me to you all.

SweetStuff

Some of us, who know what SweetStuff is talking about, can confirm that it will be spectacular. To add to that, I've also made something for you all: convention badges! :D

Yes, I know this isn't a convention and what not, but we could play the part! It's not the amount of ponies that matter, it's the amount of fun! So, I've picked a different humie for the regulars, plus I have a bag of defaults for anypony else I don't know.

And you know I'll be bringing statues along (those will be sold, sorry; it's not about the money, than getting a sense of things if I'm to make my hobby into a job.)

Last, but not least. Please don't make me do sketches of each of you there. I considered it, but in the end decided I wanted to have fun as well. There's enough homework and drama at school, so I could use a break.

PaintDrop

@all: Well, I'll bring absolutely nothing! Actually, I'll do the opposite! I'll go there and take all your hugs and kisses, plus any food and swag I can get away with, then hoard them in my cave forever! :P

Or something like that.

@CEOWitch: you said no Brushisms, but what will Brush do? What if she breaks and starts jumping at mares instead? Will Fleetfoot be safe? Will you?! What about Princess Luna? Inquisitive minds need to know!

@Brush: love you too, sweetie. :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: you'll be surprised ;)

MasterOfThisAstra

Locking the thread before we get any more spoilers! :P

LyraHands

Special comment from a user insisting on having a say before the thread is completely locked. Due to the nature of the post I'm keeping her identity hidden.

"Buck you, MixaMax!" - Anonymous

That is all :P

LyraHands

En Route

Girls, this is unbelievable!

Sorry for not writing in a while, but it's been so wild! Spitfire! Yes, the Spitfire, came to Canterlot today! I managed to see her for a few minutes, but thanks to CEOWitch and Fleetfoot, I got to shake hooves with her. But there's more! Spitfire knows about the meetup! (She even called it a convention!)

I'm so freaking out right now! I'll say it again! I met Spitfire and she told me to have fun at my convention! This is so incredible! And if that’s not enough, CEOWitch gave me a tour of Canterlot!

Now, I know I'm writing this a bit late... and that nopony will read this at seven in the morning, but I'm really, really, really looking forward to this! LyraHands is supposed to arrive in a few hours. That will mark the start of the event!

P.S. Spitfire! I even have a picture with her and everything! :)

PrinceEric

Well, I wouldn't say that everypony is asleep, although I think they should be. I'll be grabbing the train in a few hours and should arrive with Jade in the afternoon. What's the weather schedule like there? I remember there were some plans for a thunderstorm or something?

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: oh, stop complaining! :P And please catch the tight train this time! I don't want to have to use magic to find you again.

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: Pfft! :P My magic is just as good! To a certain degree.

MightyDragon

What do you think we should start with when everypony appears? Maybe we can discuss the next chapter? Or the spoiler? I'm sure the miniature with the spoiler will be out very soon.

I'll take as many pictures as possibly with each and every one of you when you arrive. :D

PrinceEric

Here's a short agenda in case of emergency:

Now - 13:00 — fun?
13:00 - 19:00 — more fun!
19:00 + — after dark fun.

CEOWitch.

@all: I'm on the train. Thirty minutes more and I should be there. I'm with MixaMax and her sister.

@PrinceEric: did you sleep at all? :P

LyraHands

Any chance you can post some of the pictures? You all seem to be having so much fun, while I’m stuck here today (and tomorrow) doing stupid chores! There simply is no justice! Where are the Elements of Harmony now?!

Actually, I'm just really jelly. I so much wish I could go into your dreams to see what's going on, but I bet Luna won't let me :/ Oh, well.

Have fun, I guess.

TheRealLuna

I promise to post stuff when I get the chance. Something like a diary of the meetup, but here. That way everypony who wasn't able to get here will get a sense of what's go in on.

On a side note, I've been thinking. If a human somehow appeared in Canterlot, where will it hide? According to MC, there have been over a hundred instances of humans entering the realm of Equestria, yet only eight resulted in any the humans being captured. That means they have to been using some sort of disguise... or there's a portal in the Palace itself!

What do you think?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: are you suggesting that there's a portal to the human realm in my palace? That's so not true! Absolute nonsense! Really!

TheRealLuna

Hmm. I suppose technically it is possible, but that would be a terrible idea from a strategic point of view. Unless the Princesses have full control of the portal having it in their palace would be the single greatest threat there is. Because nothing says safe as a tunnel that could bring a stand of sorceresses directly into the throne room.

If I'd had to guess any humans that active probably have a transformation or illusion spell, making them appear as ponies.

CEOWItch

@CEOWitch: You realize what you've just said, right? By your logic everypony could be a human and we have no way of throwing. It's as bad as when the changelings tried to invade. Maybe worse!

Good job in creating a new nightmare for everyone.

TheRealLuna

Whatever. Going to the train station to meet LyraHands.

CEOWitch

You raise an interesting point. If there were a portal between worlds, there would also have to be a way to keep all visitors hidden. Since we can all agree a human walking in Canterlot would be easily noticed, the only solution would be for them to be hidden in some fashion.

If it were me I'd link the transformation spell to the portal itself. That way any human that passes through automatically becomes a pony and no one could tell the difference. Simple, elegant, efficient.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: Oh yeah? Tell me this then: what pony tribe does a human turn into when she arrives to Equestria? :/

TheRealLuna

That's elementary! Humans that have magic become unicorns, the rest become earth ponies or pegasi.

DarkSparkle

Avoiding the question, much?

I give you the magic thing, but what about the rest? Humans can't fly, so by your logic they can't be pegasi. This in turn means that no human can transform into a Pegasus upon crossing, which raises the question what do pegasi turn into when they cross into the other world? (Since it obviously can't be humans.)

TheRealLuna

Well, in that case it clearly depends on the mentality and temperament of the human crossing. If there is magic powerful enough to create a portal between realms it should be able to determine what form a human should take.

DarkSparkle

So, what you're saying humans transform into ponies of all types based on some unclear principle because magic? I expected more from you. :/

TheRealLuna

No, no, no! That's not what I meant! I'm sure there's some logic, I just don't know what it is! It's not like researching such things is easy. :(

DarkSparkle

Calm down, DarkSparkle. Everything is okay. I didn't mean anything by that. I just wanted to get ponies to think a bit more on the matter.

TheRealLuna

And everypony left... :/ Fun...

TheRealLuna

Sleepy PM Chaos

Mighty, I know this might not be the best time, but there's something I need to tell you.

CodeFilly

Err, okay?

MightyDragon

Did I mess something up? It's not your birthday, and our anniversary is two months away. Your mother's birthday? I keep forgetting that one :( Could have sworn it was near the end of the year.

MightyDragon

Relax, oligosaccharide :) You're fine. It's just that some things happened recently and I... Okay, look! Tell this to anypony and I'll crash all you Code and then break up with you. (And you know I'll find out if you've told anypony!)

So, Lyra is part of a conspiracy to get Max laid. Don't ask me about the details, but from what I know the plan is to get her to fall for Jade at the meetup. Which is 100% crazy! But do they listen? No!

CodeFilly

Can you type that again, this time, slower? For a moment I thought I read that Lyra wants to get Max laid.

MightyDragon

Apparently it was Brush's idea, but Lyra and Mota went along with it. I don't know whether to be jealous or annoyed. :/

CodeFilly

Brush and Lyra came with a plan to get Max laid? That's... that's...

That's hilarious! Nothing like those two to cause a disaster of Equestrian proportions. And I'll be there to watch... again :D Remember the orange butterfly rampage? So funny! :)

MightyDragon

Will you be serious for one minute? You've seen what happens when Jade and Max interact. They nearly blew up the site! The two of them are the only ponies that have been banned on the site. Imagine what could happen if they meet in real life.

CodeFilly

You worry too much, my twenty-sided die. If anything I'm more worried about Jade. Max has magic, the unfortunate colt doesn't. Even if he wanted to, the most he could do is get himself transformed into a watermelon or something.

Sorry, what were you freaking out over again? I get confused.

MightyDragon

What if they actually like each other?

CodeFilly

So, a moment ago you were worried about hating each other and now you're scared they might like each other? I think you need to go to sleep, sweetness.

MightyDragon

Maybe you're right. It's just... time flies so fast, Mighty. Just yesterday we were pesky foals pulling each other's manes. Look at us now. Twilight's a Princess, you and I are engaged. Lyra's one step closer to finding somepony in her life, Max will almost certainly kick the hay during this meetup.

I guess I'm just being philosophical, but everything seems so different. We're a bunch of grownups obsessed with pastel clothed humans. It's just...

CodeFilly

Come here! *huggles*

You're overthinking things again. We're the same as ever, just better looking :P Although you're a bit too sure about Max. Do you know something I don't?

MightyDragon

I've seen pictures of Jade. Brush and Lyra are right—he is her dreamcolt. Thing is, he seems to have fallen for DarkSparkle, who might have something for Max. :/ (And here I was thinking that love triangles couldn't exist.)

CodeFilly

Joy! I'm so looking forward to this! Two pones enter, one pone leaves! :D

MightyDragon

You're impossible! :P

CodeFilly

That's why you love me ;)

How's Lyra, btw? Are her parents still not talking to her? And by the looks of it, she hasn't told anypony about the thing. Does that mean she's changed her mind?

MightyDragon

No. They still don't talk. Her mother made it very clear. Her father asked me to send a few letters to her once, but I haven't heard from him after that. As things stand Lyra's practically disowned.

I still find it hard to believe. Like, who in Tartarus are they to treat their own daughter like that!?

CodeFilly

You're getting cranky again. Go to sleep.

MightyDragon

In a bit.

CodeFilly

Look, can you jet the next three days unfold on their own? You're just like Max and Twilight. Equestria won't come to an end if you take a few days to enjoy yourself.

Now you're making me sound like my mother. Cdi, Code! :P

Seriously, though, no more dark thoughts. Get that pillow and get some zzzs.

MightyDragon

Alright, you win. I'll go get some rest, and I'll try to keep an open mind. You just be safe on the trip here, okay? And send me messages when you meet Jade.

CodeFilly

I'll try to remember :P Anything else, my Princess?

MightyDragon

Since you ask, can you do a code review? I think the site is taking too long to load. Usually, I'd ask Tech to do that, but he sent me a note he'll be offline for a while. Looks like his son is finally talking to him again.

Mighty, promise me that when we have children we'll take care of them. I don't want us to end up like Lyra or Tech.

Have you decided on names? I know the stallion was supposed to take care of that, but... I was thinking of naming our firstborn Caprice. I like the sound of that.

CodeFilly

Go to sleep! You're not making any sense! :P

MightyDragon

You're not making sense! And your code sux! You can't make the difference between a variable and a function! And, and you rely too much on undocumented functionality.

CodeFilly

Yes, you're absolutely right! I'm no match for a big strong mare such as yourself.

Now I'm going to meet Jade. Try to get some sleep.

MightyDragon

You know you'll make a great alicorn, right? And I'll love you forever!

CodeFilly

Yes, the best alicorn.

MightyDragon

Code? Are you awake?

MightyDragon

Good! :P See you in five hours.

MightyDragon

Dark Jade PMs

Hello.

Jade the Evervirgin

Hello :)

DarkSparkle

How are you?

Jade the Evervirgin

Fine. Yourself?

DarkSparkle

Fine.

Jade the Evervirgin

Sorry for the question, but do we know each other? I mean, I've seen you on the site and we've exchanged a few words—you were impressed by a comment of mine I think—but I'm not sure if we've met in real life.

DarkSparkle

No, we haven't. But I very much want us to. Sorry if I'm so straightforward, but I think I love you...

Stupid, I know, but I really feel you're something special. The way you think, the way you write... I can't describe it. There are many other writers out there, some of them better, most of them worse, but none quite like you.

A shadow broken
A winter heart awakens
By a sparkle's smile

Jade the Evervirgin

Did you just write a love poem in preclassical staring verse? That's remarkable. Not to mention incredibly rare! Nearly nopony today writes starting verse, let alone follows the preclassical rules. (In the last two hundred years it was decided that weather descriptions are no longer an obligatory element opening starting verses to a whole different range of experiences. Of course, several traditionalist schools of poetry haven't accepted the idea and continue to this day to follow the old standards.)

DarkSparkle

Sorry, I get carried away at times. I mean I'm flattered, but it really isn't a good idea to act so impulsively on the aethernet. Everything else aside, you hardly know me—and I certainly don't know a thing about you.

DarlSparkle

What more do I need to know than the way you think? You've put plenty of that in your posts and stories. Even now: the way you reacted to the poem, identifying it with such ease... How can I not fall in love with you?

Jade the Evervirgin

Jade, you don't even know if I'm a mare or a stallion. Granted that there is a far higher likelihood I'm the former, yet still this is educated guessing. Not to mention I might be married, have a significant other or be twice your age.

I'd be lying if I said it wasn't sweet, though. To be honest, you're the first pony to send me a love confession out of the blue (and you haven't even seen me!)

DarkSparkle

I know you are a mare. Just as I know who everypony on the site is. LyraHands, MixaMax, Brush, and Candle are all mares. CEOWitch is such an obvious stallion. Pretending he's a mare only makes him look stupid. Tech is also an obvious stallion, though he never hides it. MasterOfThisAstra is also a stallion and a friend of mine. We actually study in the same college.

It is only natural for one to compliment beauty. I'm only sorry that my poetry skills are so poor.

Jade the Evervirgin

No, no, no. The poem was lovely! I was just taken aback because you matched the preclassical style so well. You really need to have more confidence in your skills. (Strange since you have no problem arguing with MixaMax.)

DarkSparkle

Technically, I'm over a thousand years old. Yes, quite dramatic, I know. :) In reality I'll be twenty in three weeks. As I've said, I'm a crystal pony. Pegasus to be exact.

I want to be with you at the meetup.

Jade the Evervirgin

You aren't joking, are you? Crystal pegasi are uncommon. I often go to the Crystal Empire for work and other things. Would be nice if we've met already, though I doubt it.

DarkSparkle

No, we haven't. I'm not very social. The only opaques I see on a daily basis are schoolmates. I'll be going to the meet-up. In fact, you're the reason I'll be going. I don't really know many of the rest. Lyra seems nice, and I know Brush tries to be, but the rest...

Max is such an ass! I know she's nice to you now, but the things she did to make you leave the site... I'm sorry to say this, but she's terrible! She argues for argument's sake, is inconsiderate, needlessly criticizes others, and hasn't done a thing in her life! I don't know how she manages to get me so mad.

Jade the Evervirgin

Wow, she really gets on your nerves, huh?

DarkSparkle

She does, she really does. One of the things I'm afraid is that I'll come across her at the meet-up and we'll get into a really nasty fight. I've never been in a fight before, but I think she'll make me get into one.

Can I ask you something?

Jade the Evervirgin

I guess. Don't go weird, okay?

DarkSparkle

When will you arrive at the meet-up? It might be silly, but I want to be there to meet you at the train station. I don't care if anything happens after that. I'm a grown adult and accept that life is what it is, but I also know I have to make my own opportunities...and this is one of them.

Jade the Evervirgin

I really shouldn't be saying this, but... I've been there all along. I just didn't want the others on the sire to know. A bit like you, I didn't get along all to well with everypony. (I know it's a horrible thing to say, but I'm glad that TechNightling won't be coming to the gathering. For some reason he makes me feel like I'm back in school.)

Since you asked, I get a question as well. Why did you choose such a username? I know you might get mad, but it's really suggestive, and also a bit depressing.

DarkSparkle

I'm suggestive and a bit depressing. (You'll understand when you see me face to face.)

I must go now. See you at three. I really hope I do.

Jade the Evervirgin

Author's Notes:

Due to gdoc s being down (and me having no access) meetup 2 will be delayed till tomorrow (I hope) :( Sorry, all.

Spoiler 6

Karl Summer

Caretaker, caver, chosen

A child of daring explorer biologists, Karl was born in the Pinecoast jungles, far from the civilized world. For the first five years of his life he was one with nature, learning first hand about the various wildlife surrounding him. Moving to Mistmount with his parents he quickly adapted to city life, though the spark of nature continues to shine bright within him.

Siblings: Felix Summer, Dawn Summer
Place of birth: Zapad, Gumania
Occupation: Animal shelter assistant, College student
Hobby: cave exploring, mountain climbing, crosswords
Mentor deity: Unknown
Magic power: Unknown
Eternity gem: Everchanger

"Looks like a torn limb to me."

Guess, I'll continue this, though not sure if anypony would read (with all the traveling going on). I should have been on my way as well, but my stupid brother had to oversleep today. :/ Guess that means RRBB, myself, Brush, and idiot brother would be there round 2.

Anyway, we gave a few bombshell's here. First, and I might be wrong, I never took Karl for the adventurer type. Sure, he's all about animals and such, but I thought he'd be one of those mellow hippies, not the child of biologists. Guess that explains his grades and love of crosswords.

Second, this is the first time we learn he has siblings (no indication if they are younger, older, or anything else. My take is that Felix is male and Dawn is female. Strange that we never hear about them, though...even if it's Karl we're talking about.

Finally, his magic. Curious that no deity's mentioned. I'd have taken him for a Zeus human, but guess I might be wrong. The everchanger, though. Maybe that means he's able to change form like a changeling? Not sure what I think about this.

Update: my brother just got home with Brush and... I can only say I totally forgive him! :) We'll be heating for the train in 20.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Aww! :( Why didn't you tell me earlier? My sister just got tickets for the one o'clock :( I could have asked her to get for your ride. Would have been fun to ride together. How's RRBB?

SweetStuff

@PaintDrop: I'm on the same train! I wanted to go on a balloon ride, but I made too many sweets O:).

@SweetStuff: Aww :( We'll see each other there, though!

I'm not surprised about Karl. He's always been described as so normal that it was certain he'd have some mysterious. If it was any other series I'd say he's actually a dryad pony cursed into human form. The way S.Child writes I think Karl would be chosen by a nature deity (maybe Zeus has a wife or girlfriend?).

Twist

@SweetStuff: Such is life. Would have been fun have you ding on the way there :P And RRBB is fine considering. She could use some hugs when we get to Canterlot.

@Twist: How much did you make?!? Meet up at the ticket office at the station in 15?

PaintDrop

I can answer for myself, thank you! :/ And I definitely don't need hugs!

Karl is lame. Guess this will be the first waster chapter of the series. Oh well, maybe we'll get some nice Caprice scenes.

RRBB

(maybe Zeus has a wife or girlfriend?)

Why?!? Isn't it enough that I'm missing the gathering, but I also must imagine Tia with a husband?!

TheRealLuna

It's interesting to note that if the Everchanger does what it sounds like, Karl would be able to change into every animal (thanks to his flora & fauna knowledge). But that's not all! There's nothing to say that he can't use the stone to change everyone and everything.

Transfiguration spells are a thing, so the stone will only give Karl the power to use it on others. Maybe he'll turn the Felina corp into a... Oh my goodness!

Everypony, think back to the title for this week! "Hooves of a Human" we thought that it would be Caprice changing into a human, but what if Karl uses the Everchanger to become a stallion?

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: I read that out to Brush. She started foaming at the mouth then ran to the bathroom. I think I hear her screaming "Y U do this to me?!"

Now it's my turn to ask something. Do you realize that Karl could use the Everchanger to transform Bellucio into a stallion? :P

PaintDrop

@DarkSparkle: you just scored 1000 points in my book! ;)

10/10 would "snuggle" Cassandra.

Bob

@Bob: Weren't you going to the event?! I thought you and LyraHands were on the early train.

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: Oh, I am, but I'll be catching a later train. Work came up.

Then again, I'm not sure if I should go at all. Lyra's gonna have such a fit when she sees this. Maybe we should delete it and pretend it never happened?

By the way, if this becomes canon that means pontification is legal (and far simpler). We'll have to brace ourselves for a huge influx of ponified stories, since there's nothing stopping the grand nine to become ponies and start living in Equestria. On the other hoof, we can have all the ponies transformed into humans... human Celestia x Zeus anypony?

Bob

@Bob: I definitely chose the best time to focus on MCE art commissions :D

Going to catch the train. See you soon!

PaintDrop

@Bob: that just sounds wrong! The worst part is that I know it will happen. Worse, everypony is now free to create self-inserts of themselves and treat them as canon.

"Hey, it's me Special Snowflake. I was an ordinary mare in Equestria until one day he arrived to change my life and take me to a new strange world." :/

And yes, I have written a few of those. And yes, they might have been a bit suggestive.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: Hmmm.

(That's me judging you silently.)

Just out of curiosity... did you happen to humanize me in any of your stories by chance? -.-

TheRealLuna

@TheRealLuna: I think she left to catch her ride to Canterlot.

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: Suuuuuure she did.

TheRealLuna

Author's Notes:

Good news! I think gdocs are fully fixed! :)
Bad news... I didn't finish chapter 2.
Good news in relation to bad news: it's the weekend so hope to finish the whole story then :D

Analyses 6 Poems

Well, since our usual analyst is probably enjoying his time in Canterlot (along with everypony else) I've decided to take it upon myself to do this week's review, but will do it somewhat different. Before I do, I like to thank a certain somepony (you know who you are) for getting me to rediscover the beauty of starting verse.

Yes, you've guessed it! I'll try to use starting verse to make the summary of this week's story. Since the series still follows the three act structure, plays epilogue, I'll be using three/four separate verses. Hopefully it ends up being coherent.

Nightmares, single rabbit
Spring rush to destroy Felina
A chase most unfair

Mother's lost present
Given from an autumn grave
Four hooves, two wings, muzzle.

Two corporations
A changing Karl deep in fight
A moonlit ally helps

Two stones of ever
A will of winter combat
An enemy waits

DarkSparkle

The edge! The edge!

Okay, seriously, nopony will understand anything from this. Cool idea, but not in this case.

For all those who want to know what happened, let me try to put it in words: A rabbit that is real but also exists in dreams tells Karl to find the stone at his mother's grave. Two corporation fight for it, yet Karl gets it and turns himself into a pony. A lot of silliness later he manages to turn back into a humie.

The huge thing (unfelt because of Dark’s poetry) is that for the very first time we see the Everprince (or someone working for him). I won't lie, I got chills!

How's the drunken partying going on?

TheRealLuna

I doubt there's real drinking involved. At least not so early.

And it was nice to finally see the presence of this elusive power. No lines of dialogue, though.

I'm still curious why he's revealing himself. I mean, sure Karl has a stone, but then again so does Megan. The only thing special is the mention that Karl's mother is dead. (How she got the stone in the first place remains a mystery.) Do you think it's possible that Karl is actually the Everprince?

DarkSparkle

Jumping in for a quick minute.

@TheRealLuna: Don't worry, there will be after dark. For the moment it's just food and getting to learn who is who.

As for the Everprince! Woohoo! Almost as cool as Brush cosplaying Molly :) (You're welcome, aethernet.) Going back to doing stuff. Will try to log on again tonight.

LyraHands

Hmm. I guess I'll register an account too...

Short&Hoofy

@Short&Hoofy: Love your nick :) I take it you're somepony who got interested in MCE at the meetup?

TheRealLuna

@TheRealLuna: Sort of. Am Max's sister, so I thought I'd finally make an account of my own. Remains to be seen how active I'll be. I've read a fair amount of Mistmount Chronicles thanks to Max and so far it seems okay.

Short&Hoofy

Great to have you here. :)

DarkSparkle

Back to today's chapter. The more I think about it the more complicated things get. Let me make a list of things that stand out arranged in order of chronological appearance:

1 The dreams Karl receives don't come from any of the three main deities.
2 Karl's mother is dead (possibly other members of his family as well)
3 Karl's mother had the changer stone
4 Two corporation fighting in the open (just wow!)
5 Karl turned into a pony (yes! Just as we suspected! :)) This allows for so much possibilities.

I can only come to the conclusion that Karl's parents were, or are, involved in some way with the corporations. (On that note, Karl was never worried about money. A bit like Omni. Hmmm)

DarkSparkle

I think you are onto something. So far we know very little about the Everprince. The only common element in all the chapters is that everyone is afraid of him: the deities, the titans, the corporations, and Euryala who is part of something beyond the corporations. By sheer number were supposed to think that the prince is the evil one, but what if he isn't?

I wouldn't put it past the writers to do a 180 twist and tell us, at some point, that the Everprince was imprisoned between realities by all the parties involved, who are now squabbling for what crumbs are left of his power.

Jade the Evervirgin

You all really are into this series, aren't you? I don't want to sound like the party pooper, but I still don't get the huge appeal. I mean the stories are okay, but idea of homies is interesting, but so what? There are lots of other series that are considered remarkable. What's so special here?

Short&Hoofy

@Short&Hoofy: it's one of those things. If you have to ask you'll never get it. Have you tried the fanfics? They provide interesting takes on... well, maybe you should read and see for yourself.

I strongly recommend Brush and DarkSparkle

Jade the Evervirgin

I'm already reading those, and find some of the stories nice. (Currently reading the Danny saga). I'm still curious what made so many ponies devote so much time and energy in such a strange hobby. I know Max keeps going on and on about it all the time.

Short&Hoofy

@Short&Hoofy: Max is a whole different animal altogether :)

Jade the Evervirgin

@Short&Hoofy: Just think about it: a different world, like our own but different. A world full of danger, mystery, adventure, and romance. Now imagine yourself in that world. Imagine seeking a castle that holds the answers to all your questions. Imagine friends by your side, helping you face any challenges the world my throw at you. Imagine one of them becoming your lover, sharing you pain and joy. Imagine everything you've ever wanted in front of you, you can touch it with the tips of your hooves... that is Midnight Castle! ;)

TheRealLuna

...wow.

Short&Hoofy

Afterthoughts

Howdy, all!

The convention was amazing! There should be one every year! Even sooner! I'd never heard of Midnight Castle till five days ago, and I feel I've been missing out. Well, sorta. Humans are weird, but the adventures are darn good! (Why didn't I think of that?)

And Molly is best creature! She even gets to hang out with Luna!

RRBB, PaintDrop: you girls are okay.

WaterBottle

@WaterBottle: you seriously chose that as a name? -.-

And I've been telling you how cool the stories are! The idea of other worlds, gods, humans, bending reality, it's so incredible! And meeting one of the writers! Unreal! :D

Oh, and read the fanfics! So many of them are great. I like Brush's a lot! I'll bring you my copies of MCE tomorrow, just take good care of them, okay?

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: I ain't reading some of those! You shouldn't be either!

I'm thinking of writing some stories of my own. Something a bit different... which I've posted :D so y'all can tell me what you think.

@LyraHands: I couldn't understand the tagging whatchamacallit. Comedy is fine, right?

WaterBottle

@all: Thank you all for making this such a wonderful experience! I'll never forget this. When I started Midnight Castle, I never considered ill make so many new friends or get in touch with old ones. Something magical happened here, and while I don't to argue in a chat full of unicorns, this is magic that isn't taught in a classroom.

@Luna, @Fleetfoot, @Number1: thank you so much for being part of my dream. I know it's hardly my place, but I consider you friends. Also, Fleetfoot, you make the best Euryala. :)

@WaterBottle, @Short&Hoofy: very glad to have you here. Now that you know the ponies involved you know we don't bite. :) No worries about the tags, I'll take care of it (and I'm sure Tech will make a better help section soon, as he's been threatening to). Just remember to have fun and ask if you have any questions.

LyraHands

Now that you know the ponies involved you know we don't bite.

you know we don't bite.

we don't bite.

Speak for yourself! :/

Brush

I'm inclined to agree with Brush. O:)

MasterOfThisAstra

@Brush, @MasterOfThisAstra: Will you two stop it? I doubt there's a pony alive who doesn't know you're into each other! At least behave on the site, sheesh! :/

@WaterBottle: congratulations on becoming a Nightling. It's a curse, but you'll get to like it in time. :) What's your story about? (Can't read anything deep right now)

PaintDrop

@LyraHands: that magic is called friendship ;)

I'll say it before, I'll say it again: I'm so glad I returned. Let me the first to say I was wrong about a lot of things, and I deeply apologize.

@The TechNightling: after hearing what you've been through I can say you're one of the most remarkable ponies I've known! What you're doing is much braver and more difficult than anything I could imagine. I just wanted you to know that.

DarkSparkle

@PaintDrop: Oh, it ain't deep :P Just some silliness: a journalist from Ponyville goes to Mistmount to take an interview from the characters there.

WaterBottle

@all: And a small announcement. A new role has been created: Dreamers. Everypony at the meetep gets it (yes, you were so cool), plus a few others. It gives you the power to use @all, so don't abuse it. ;)

Sorry for not being able to spend much time with you at the event :( It's just that I hadn't seen MightyDragon for a while and wanted to catch up.

@PPI: You're crazy, you know that? :)

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: sure blame it all on me! :P

@all: was a pleasure meeting you all! Especially Bob! Bob rules!

MightyDragon

@all: CEOWitch got called on a mission and might be gone for a while. He told me to tell you he thought the event was great and he was happy to see you. I'll add the same. Even though I'll never read the stories I might hang out here from time to time.

Stay strong!

Fleetfoot

@DarkSparkle: you softy! ;P Glad to have you and thanks for the support. You've no idea how much it means.

@CodeFilly: understandable. :D

@Fleetfoot: we're always happy to have you :D

@MasterOfThisAstra, @Brush: those costumes! :D Really, you two and Jade pulled it off. (Though Jade was clearly cheating! Not fair when you are born with crystal wings :P)

LyraHands

O! M! G! I think I know who S.Child is. It's so simple I don't know why I never thought of it before!

Starswirl the Bearded!

If there's any pony who can travel between worlds. Between time even! Do you think these are recollections of his adventures? I mean I know humans are mythological, but do you think he went there and actually saw them?

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: that actually makes sense! Of course Starswirl would be able to do that! That explains how he knows so much about humans. There's no way anypony could have such good imagination.

One other thing I now see—the name S.Child could mean nothing less than Starswirl for children. He had written a lot about spells. Maybe he also wrote foal stories, which were later discovered and made into a book series? Sounds perfectly logical if you ask me.

DarkSparkle

Interesting, but weren't all of Starswirl's works discovered ages ago? Difficult to believe nopony would mention such a big find.

InItForTheShipping

@InItForTheShipping: Hello. And yes, that's the one point that has me skeptical. Would be nice, though. A foal's series originating from Starswirl himself... I'm so writing this! :D

DarkSparkle

@InItForTheShipping: Finally another shipper! Do you write or just here to admire the view? :)

Brush

@Brush: a bit of both :) Reading for now (and I love your stuff :)) Oh, and before you ask...I'm a mare.

InItForTheShipping

@InItForTheShipping: Competition, eh? Well you can't have them! All the stallions are mine! Will be watching you try, though ;)

Brush

@Brush: how generous ;)

InItForTheShipping

Questionnaire 3

Wow, that meetup was something, am I right? (PPI, what the hay did you put in those drinks? No way that was cider!) Anyway, am pleased to say it was absolutely great! Can't wait till we do it again (if work doesn't kill me by then :/) Good thing Luna's on my side :D

Was fun seeing some old faces, some new faces, and some unexpected faces (you know who you are!) And since we have a few new members, as is tradition, please fill out the traditional questionnaire:

City:
Race:
Sex:
Favorite human:
Favorite pony:
Favorite deity:
Favorite background character:
Favorite chapter:
Favorite quote:

Welcome to Midnight Castle, Nightlings!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: traditional tradition! You word good, Max :P Or should I say HypocriteMax?

Brush

@Brush: Shuttap! I have no regrets!

MixaMax

Oh, this looks like fun! Can I go first?

City: Crystal Empire
Race: Alicorn
Sex: Mare
Favorite human: Euryala (girl's got style)
Favorite pony: Luna (Caprice is a cute close second)
Favorite deity: Poseidon
Favorite background character: Undecided
Favorite chapter: MCE chapter 3
Favorite quote: "Watch out for the fish!" - Omni
Favorite pairing: Cassandra x Danny (trust me, this is happening)

InItForTheShipping

@InItForTheShipping: more alicorns? Sure is getting crowded over here. Nice additional question, though :) Love it!

MixaMax

I might as well go ahead. There's no longer any point in lurking.

City: Ponyville
Race: Earth Pony
Sex: Stallion
Favorite human: Bellucio
Favorite pony: Caprice
Favorite deity: Zeus
Favorite background character: Cassandra
Favorite chapter: the next one. Always the next one.
Favorite quote: "I'm feeling the mystical energy, man." - Loki
Favorite pairing: Bellucio x Molly (well, you saw the cosplay. Please tell me Brush wasn't the best Molly out there?)

MasterOfThisAstra

@MasterOfThisAstra: Hooftoy, I was the only Molly out there. :P Still, sweet of you to say that.

Brush

Awwwww! :P Aren't you two just so cute? :P "Hooftoy"? Sounds lewd!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Like you're one to talk, sis! Last time I clean up after you!

Short&Hoofy

What?! It's supposed to be a happy occasion. You can't blame a mare for having a few...strange drinks. Not like anypony got hurt (other than me the following morning :/)

And fill in the questionnaire! You're not getting away that easily!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: mouthy as ever, eh? :P And here I was thinking somepony finally shut up the big mouth of yours. So much for hoping, eh?

@Short&Hoofy: I am curious, though. That is if you've read the Mistmount Chronicles.

RRBB

Okay...

City: unknown
Race: unicorn
Sex: young mare
Favorite human: Megan
Favorite pony: Caprice
Favorite deity: none
Favorite background character: Cassandra
Favorite chapter: none so far
Favorite quote: nine so far

Happy now?

Short&Hoofy

Before I go, I'd like to apologize to everypony for the way I've been behaving, I know it's no excuse, but I never was good in dealing with others. For years I was terrified I might be sent to the mines, then all this happened and... it's not easy catching up to a thousand years of changes.

I lashed out because I was scared and didn't want to get bullied, not on this site, at least. Now I know I should have behaved better and I will really try to. You pones are the most magnificent in all Equestria.

Race: crystal pegasus
Sex: stallion
Favorite human: Danny
Favorite pony: Cadence
Favorite deity: Poseidon
Favorite background character: Loki
Favorite chapter: all
Favorite quote: "There goes the mana drill." - Karl
Favorite pairing: Blazen x Euryala

Jade

@Jade: Told you you'll love it ;) Glad you're finally happy, pone. Your parents okay?

MasterOfThisAstra

Whoa! You changed your name? What happened?

RRBB

@MasterOfThisAstra: getting there. :) And my parent are fine. They're just happy for me. I'm happy for me. I never expected things to develop this way. It still seems surreal.

@RRBB: It was just a silly nickname. Jade is fine.

Jade

Pffft! Pffffffffttt! :P So cute! :D

Brush

@Jade: Well, I'm overjoyed that you're happy! :) I was worried when I saw you crying. Glad that's all settled. By the way, you're welcome to come and visit me. (Everypony is, as long as you give me a few days' notice.)

On another note, I'm no longer sure that S.Child can be Starswirl. There simply are too many discrepancies between the humans he describes and the rest. True, on first glance they seem the same, but in reality there are a number of small mistakes and omissions that lead me to believe that Starswirl couldn't possibly come up with the idea of Midnight Castle.

DarkSparkle

@MasterOfThisAstra, @Brush: to be honest, I'm still mad at you! My own brother and my fanfic mentor conspiring behind my back! You could have told me, you know!

Yes, it was obvious, but all this time I thought you were pulling a joke on everyone. :/ It was expected that Brush would drool over my brother (that's the first thing we joked about on the site!) I just never imagined it'd be literally drool!

I'm so making a comic about you two! Humanize! >:P

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Join the coup :/

Short&Hoofy

Well, I, glad everything's back to normal. My better half managed to organize something for once. Big wow!

Now, I know you might say I'm just bitter that I wasn't able to join you... and you'll be 100% right! I'm bitter! Very bitter! (Even more now that I look at the photos!)

Seriously, ponies, how could you?!?

@MasterOfThisAstra: nice flank, by the way :P

TheRealLuna

@Brush: Sugar wings, which photos did you send out?

MasterOfThisAstra

@MasterOfThisAstra: I didn't send anything! I swear!

Brush

Hmm. These questions seem mighty fun. :D

City: Ponyville
Race: Earth Pony
Sex: Mare and proud of it!
Favorite human: That Danny one
Favorite pony: Princess Luna
Favorite deity: Princess Luna
Favorite background character: Caprice
Favorite chapter: chapter 1, I reckon
Favorite quote: no idea

Mighty thanks for your comments on my story! It was fun writing :D I'll be writing more soon.

WaterBottle

Hmmm...

RRBB

My Rain of Daggers

@all: Okay! Who did it? Don't make me start digging through aether signatures! (You know I can!) Just mare up and admit it!

Code, was it you? :/

LyraHands

Huh? What happened! What are you going on about? I've done nothing but study since you left. Just take a deep breath and tell me what's going on.

PM might be better, I think.

CodeFilly

@LyraHands: Aroo? Never seen you react this way, mare. What's going on?

RRBB

@all, @CodeFilly, @RRBB: My Rain of Daggers! Who wrote it?! It's an entirely new account, and yet they got the tags all right on the first go, do I know it's somepony's alt!

I read through the first few chapters and it's beautiful! I feel the same way I felt when I read The Human and I for the first time! It's so new and different and... It's as if somepony took the characters and made an entirely different world with them, yet so complex and intricate That it's exactly like the real thing! The Cerberus Council? The Water Initiative? It's like someone turned Midnight Castle upside down... in a good way!

Seriously, whoever thought of this is a genius!

LyraHands

I've been keeping my eye on that and I agree. There could have been some more hip-showing, but it's remarkably well written. Far better than any of mine (I'm so jealous! >:I). I don't see who could have done it, though. Isn't me, and the style isn't anything like RRBB's or Bob's. And it's way more deep than the newbies on the site. A pony who's written before did this.

Dark? Jade?

Brush

Nope. If I had written it I wouldn't have gotten the mythological aspect so wrong. I mean, come on, the myths are all over the place! Cerberus crossed with the mirror pool, and the siren's banishment? The "four elements of concord"?!

Apollo can't be Hade's son, since it's clearly stated in the original myths that he's clearly a child of Zeus. There isn't even contention! Starswirl himself makes a note on four occasions!

All those inconsistencies aside, the story is quite promising and grammatically sound (to the Canterlot comma). Could it be one of the series writers?

DarkSparkle

As much as I would like to take the credit it isn't my work. The only thing I can add is that I'm almost certain it's written by a mare. Personally, I don't think the author is trying to hide it. Interesting they picked Simile for their pen name.

@Luna: I'm also curious if it's somepony on staff that wrote this. By the amount of poetic imagery used, I'd say the author had music or fine arts training.

Jade

I'll ask about, but usually the writers don't get involved in such things. Technically there's nothing keeping them, but for the most part they don't have the time.

I, myself, don't recognize the style, but that doesn't mean a thing. We have a few authors who have written everything from foal-stories to extremely suggestive romances.

Luna

Whoever it is, they've been to Tartarus and back. Some of the descriptions are too real to be imagined. That whole scene in the Everfree forest (and the maiming of the rebellious Cerberus sibling) that's way too detailed. I'm not saying that the author got maimed, but s/he definitely experienced some amount of pain.

Also the whole theme of betrayal seems to run so smoothly, unlike the romantic instances. Although, that might be the author getting a feel of things.

Oh, and let's not forget that the author has read a lot of MC! Making references about obscure Mistmount characters from Volume 3, that requires dedication. I don't think the author liked the originals, though. Not one single reference. That rules out Tech, I guess.

MixaMax

@LyraHands: I'll kill you! :/ You had me in tears trying to figure out what I did wrong! :(

Story is nice, though. And you can't trace the signature, can you? (I can't either. It's very well hidden.)

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: sorry, but... Argh! Now I'm wondering if I met the author at the meetup! This is so infuriating! If there's anypony I really want to find out the identity, that's Simile!

I was so convinced it was somepony here. I've sent a dozen PMs, but no response. (And I know Simile has received and read them! :/)

@Simile: y u do this?

LyraHands

Pfft! I could do better. Style is fine, dialogue and descriptions are okay. Characters are a bit talky. The huge plus is the worldbuilding, though that too (as Dark pointed out) was mostly assembled from various sources.

RRBB

@RRBB: the day you tell a story like that is the day I sculpt a life-size nude humanized statue of your choice. Face it, you're good, but not that good.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Oh, really? Any humanized statue? Any pose? You're on! And since you didn't specify, there's no time limit! The only thing that matters is that I become as good, right?

RRBB

Umm, can't we just ask here? :)

@Simile: I <3 your story! Can I make a song based on it?

SweetStuff

@Simile: I think there's just one area that your story is lacking. (And I'm not talking about how close to the original myths it is :))

If you need any help, let me know. :)

InItForTheShipping

@all: Hold the presses! I got a response! Simile will continue her story, but asks if she can commission art and music for it. Any takers?

LyraHands

I don't need bits :) The song will be my gift to Simile and to all Nightlings :)

SweetStuff

If none of the professional artists on the site (hello, teacher) decide to take it on, I'll be willing to. PM me if you choose and we'll talk trade or bits.

PaintDrop

@Simile: Wait! Are you a stallion or a mare?

Brush

@Brush: I'm whatever you want me to be ;)

Simile

Author's Notes:

Apologies about the Meet-up delay. Minor health issues prevented me from finishing it during the weekend. I'm working on it daily, though so shouldn't be long.

On another note: I'm starting to do research on getting the first 5-10 chapters voiced, so if any of you have any knowledge on the matter / know of rates and practices, let me know please :)

Light and Dark Sparkles

Testing, testing.

LightSparkle

Cool! It works! :)

Hi, everyone. I just heard from a friend that there's a site dedicated to one of my favorite childhood stories, so I decided to check it out. Good job with the code structure. It's pretty solid from what I can see.

Anyway, I also just found out that they started a new MC generation. I stopped at Volume 4 (real life issues). Volume 7 looks pretty sweet, though. Pity it's on scrolls. (I don't buy into the nostalgia thing. :/)

And now I've started ranting... sorry, girls. I'm usually not like this, but being able to write on such a site really is something else. You have no idea how much I've missed this. Must rush to class now, but talk to you soon!

Cheers!

LightSparkle

Well, that happened. Welcome, I guess? Why is it we attract the weirdest ponies? I mean seriously? Not that I'm complaining, but on all the other sites I've been you have the comfortable meh users with a few insane ones. With us the meh users turn into the best thing ever in a few weeks.

Is still way weird, though. Now I'm seriously scared that my boss might be lurking reading my comments.

MixaMax

Heeeeyyyy, alll! I'm back! :)

Sorry it took me so long to log on after the meetup, but a lot happened. We had to take my grandfather to hospital (He's fine, though he did get a broken wing. Doctors say he'll be able to fly again in a few months, as long as he takes it easy.)

I didn't get the latest scroll until yesterday :( No point in doing a reaction, I see. (You rock, Dark! :))

@LightSparkle: Welcome! Always nice to see a new face :) You'll like it here I'm sure! (Everypony loves it here :))

Which is you favorite humie?

PrinceEric

@LightSparkle: Also, are you a stallion? (Hey, I'm just asking!)

Brush

@Brush: Mare. 100%

Jade

@PrinceEric: thanks. I'm still working on that :) For now I like Megan most. At least she had a clue of what's going on. Euryala and Blazen are a close second. Not sure I see them as a couple, though. I definitely see a Megan x Eric scenario, though.

@Brush: Sorry, not a stallion.

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: you don't say... Well, get ready to defend your theories, for I'll show you no mercy! :P

Great to have you join! :D I seriously didn't know you liked MC, or I'd have told you about this site long ago.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: Hey, hey :)

You know me—full of surprises. Now I must find a way to get all the MC stories. (Just when I finished reading Daring Do.)

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: Or you could, you know, read our fiction. Not that I'm plugging my story or anything... but I am! :P

And talking about stories, I'll be continuing with my updates soon. (I haven't gotten in any trouble this week at school, so this is a promising start.) And, I'll be starting something entirely new. (Can you blaming after Simile did such a splash?) This time, the story will focus on two entirely original characters in the world of MC. Not exactly original, but I haven't seen any 100% stories yet.

RRBB

@PrinceEric: sorry to hear about you grandfather :( Glad he's alright. And also glad you're back. Was fun seeing you at the meetup :)

@LightSparkle: Any new member is always welcome :) Sadly, it will be a while before the scrolls are gathered in a collection, from what I know there are plans to group the first 13 in one body. Until then I can share what I have with you, if you want? (Just not my original stories series, sorry.)

@RRBB: hmm. If it were anypony else who told me this, I'd laugh, but since I know your writing, I'm looking forward to it. Hope you pull it off :)

LyraHands

Well, I'll be taking a break from writing for a while. (Not that I've written anything more than a few oneshots :/ ) Work has become a bit busy and also my roommate is impossible! :P

@RRBB: give them Tartarus, girl :)

@Brush: will you ever finish The Human and I? :P

Bob

Yay, Bob is back :)

@Bob: what about our collab? That still happening, right?

RRBB

@LyraHands: Thanks :) I'm impressed you went ahead with this. Top pro!

@RRBB: I read some of your stuff after the post. Not bad. Not my thing, though. Brush's is closer to what I had in mine. (I like tears. Nothing like a good sad story to give me the feels.)

LightSparkle

Umm, I'm thinking of trying something new. I know it's stupid, but I've been thinking of exploring the life of a fashionista in Mistmount. RRBB, do you think you could give me some advice, especially if you are doing an all OC story?

@The TechNightling: Will you be able to edit from me again? I liked the way we worked together with my previous stories.

Candle

I think I got a great idea as well! Pony in Mistmount! Picture this: a pony suddenly wakes up and is in Mistmount. That's rare in itself, but she's a TALKING pony, so everyone freaks out! She has learn to live in a strange new environment and also work on making friends with humans (despite most treating her as an alien.)

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: What's next? A bunch of humans fall in love with her and fight for her attention? Please tell me you won't be doing a herd fic. This is such wish fulfillment. :/

That aside, how did the pony get there? Why doesn't she go back? (Eric protects the portals, so it should be easy.) How come the humans are so accepting? (You say freak out, but can you imagine what would happen if a human got into Equestria? Everyone would freak, the army would be called, even the Wonderbolts might be sent to capture the human.)

Think this through!

MixaMax

Wonderbolts might be sent to capture the human.

Can confirm.

Fleetfoot

@MixaMax, @Fleetfoot, @LightSparkle: Well, I think it's a great idea and I'll write it! That will show you!

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: Why the h do did you tag me? I didn't say anything! :I

LightSparkle

Just because! :/

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: you're such a dork!

LightSparkle

Hahahahahahah! DorkSparkle!

MixaMax

Spoiler 7

Omni Shea

Party-boy, soldier, chosen

The fifth child in a seventh generation military family, Omni was born was dealt a rough hand. Born with severe epilepsy, he spent the first seven years of his life in hospitals or locked in his room under constant care. Upon his eighth birthday he asked for just one present—to be outside, and he got his wish. With a constant supply of experimental pills and muscle relaxants, Omni has devoted his life to a life of joy, eager to make everyone happy, and possibly forget his own fears and sadness.

Siblings: Vita Shea, Marcus Shea, Gregorius Shea, Octavian Shea, Augustian Shea
Place of birth: Mistmount, Gumania
Occupation: Military Cadet First Class
Hobby: Partying, paper plane competitions (nationally ranked)
Mentor deity: None
Magic power: None
Eternity gem: Hopedasher

"Welcome to my desert of tears."

My mom almost found my stash of lewds. I thought I was going to get a heart attack. (I appreciate the art, okay? :/ Well, maybe not only the art O:)) Seriously, though, don't parents knock anymore? Two years ago she'd always knock then ask "RRBB, are you proper?" I used to get so annoyed. Now she just barges into my room with accusations of me wasting my time with nonsense!

Anyway, the spoiler. (Let me just say before that... the Omni miniature bound use some work. I'm sorry, Luna/Prince B. But it's really, really poorly done. My butler could do better.)

So, we certainly went dark today. Epilepsy? Seven years in hospitals? That would certainly explain the partying and his clowning about. Put it that way, Omni is probably the deepest character there is. I reread Volume 3 and mare do things seem different. Omni is my new favorite character, and I hope he gets cured, or at least doesn't die. I know S.Child has killed off characters in the original series, so I hope this isn't the case in vol 7.

You girls have any thoughts?

RRBB

My mom almost found my stash of lewds.

Which ones? :P You have so many it's difficult to keep track!

Wow about Omni. We got hints about his family, and it was mentioned twice that he couldn't join the army (what kind of military academy they sent him to after Vol 6 remains a mystery :/) but that whole sickness thing... *shivers*

Also, did you notice the other depressing things?

Mentor deity: None
Magic power: None
Eternity gem: Hopedasher

Even the gem sounds ominous.

Update: my sis threw a horseshoe at me when she read my post. She also reminded me that you "don't have that many lewds" :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: pfft! You enjoy tormenting her, don't you? :P Tell her I said "hi" :)

Oh, and I have ALL the lewds! More lewds than even Brush can imagine! :)

RRBB

@RRBB: Ha! As if that obvious provocation will get me to stoop to your level! (Especially with Mota looking over my shoulder...)

I've just one thing to say to you: Buck granite! Oh, and new update in a few hours.

Brush

This spoiler is giving me the feels :( Yes, I love Eric, but Omni... I always thought of him as the happy one, now I learn he's actually the saddest of them all. Such a nasty illness to have. I have a relative with that (considered to be mild) and he couldn't get in the army or fly unaccompanied because of it. I can only imagine the Tartarus Omni is going through. I just want to go and hug him.

Has anyone noticed that so far the chapters focus on the characters?

Chapter 1, Backwards Treasure (Danny)
Chapter 2, The Shatterstone (Megan)
Chapter 3, The Equestrian Convict (Molly)
Chapter 4, The Mirror Rune (Blazen)
Chapter 5, Poseidon's Faithful (Bellucio)
Chapter 6, Hooves of a Human (Karl)
Chapter 7, The Desert of Tears (Omni)

That means that the entire first arc will be one huge introduction to the story. The whole Everprince plot hasn't progressed at all! We have so many different threads it'll be crazy when they all combine :)))

By the way, has anyone seen DannyFan?

PrinceEric

I haven't read tomorrow's chapter and already I'm sad :( Why do you do this to me? First Daggers, now this! It seems it's my fate to drown in my own tears... please take care of the site while I'm gone...

Seriously, I never expected such a turn if events. If anything I thought Eric to be the sick one (with all the water bottles he carries). Having it be Omni is a good choice, though, and I can totally see him developing such a personality as a result.

@PrinceEric: he's fine, just won't be online for a bit. No need to worry :)

LyraHands

Well, it seems it's my job to lighten the mood. (Also, I can't be the only one who noticed:) Omni's family has six children. Six! All male :D Can you imagine the amount of ero fics that will start gushing out?

And the streets shall flow with...questionable liquids! Bwahaha!

[edit LyraHands] You didn't just go there!

Update: Too soon? :P

Bob

@Bob: Marry me! :))) Lol!

RRBB

@RRBB: I don't know... I'll have to kick out Lyra first. I'll think about it, though. :)

Bob

RRBB message has been deleted.

Bob message has been deleted.

@RRBB, @Bob: Okay, it was fun, but you two should stop. This is still a mostly family friendly site, okay?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: But Lyyyyyra... they were just getting to the interesting part *grumpy face*

Brush

Yeah! I'm curious to see where that was going. (As was everyone else, the hypocrites! :P)

MixaMax

Pfft! Light stuff. :)

InItForTheShipping

I'm not saying I liked the posts or anything, but... *ahem* poor Omni! So sad! He must have one final... party before he goes.

MightyDragon

@all: I'm licking the thread so all of you get a chance to calm down!

LyraHands

I just can't!

@all: I'm licking the thread so you get a chance to calm down!

Best typo ever! :)

CodeFilly

Back to normal

Sorry, everyone. :(

I know you expected me to make a review, I really do, but I just can't. The chapter hit me too hard from the start :( Twice I stopped reading, and I still haven't gone past the hospital point. :((( Why did they have to start with an Omni flashback? It's not the first time (they did it for Blazen) but describing the life of a sick child... it's just too much for me.

Sorry

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: :( Yes, it can have that effect. I read it in one breath and it was quite the emotional rollercoaster. The writing was really good. Too good. I have the feeling that the author has experienced something similar firsthoof. (I pray to the Stars I'm wrong about this.) I can only say that it gets much better after the nosebleed scene.

LyraHands

@LyraHands: I'll try. Thanks, Lyra. Maybe somepony else could do this week's reviews/analyses?

@DarkSparkle: Maybe you have something?

PrinceEric

Well, I'm not Dark, but I'll have a go. Besides, I loved this chapter. (It's so my type of thing!)

The chapter starts with Omni as a child. He's in his room, playing a board game with his brothers (mostly being annoying) when he suddenly has a seizure. Vita phones their parents then gets Omni in his car and drives to hospital. We then have a long scene depicting the sickness and the doctor's explaining to his parents that this was just a mild one and they recommend him remaining in hospital for an extended period of time to see if he'd be perceptible to some experimental treatment. A few rather depressing scenes follow with him nearly dying (once while going to the bathroom) and him coming to with the words "I don't want to live like this".

Fast forward to present day. Omni is having a smashing party with lots of chicks (I've been to one of those, they're cool), when he notices Eury among the crowd. His phone's battery out, so he chases after her in the alley. There she reveals she knows of his past and blackmails him into helping her. It's revealed Eury knows Poseidon (he's totally her ex, I think) and wants to stop him from getting the upper hand again. Omni agrees because he doesn't want anyone to find out about his sickness. (How they don't already is a bit sketchy.)

They seek help from Cassandra, who gives Eury a black box in exchange for part of her debt to Eury. (That girl has dirt on everyone. I like :)) Then they have Megan use the shatterstone to set them to the Hades reality. The interesting thing is that Eury doesn't need Earth, but instead goes to Equestria, yet in that version the Everfree forest is a desert.

A quarter of the book, the two march to the heart of the desert, fighting Sandwolves, dust roses and all sorts of other which represent the embodiment of sicknesses and negative emotions. (and getting help from nomad Zebra tribes). The more they travel the more they share about each other (there a a few almost shipping moments). They are told by a Zebran shaman that in order to reach the heard they must face the "Beast that hungers for Omni" (which is clear from now that it's the embodiment of his epilepsy). At the heart do the desert they try to set a trap for the beats, but it beats them up good. Eury manages to escape, dragging Ok I to safety, then heals him back to health. For the first time (I think) we see him crying on her shoulder, confessing the only reason he parties so much is because he's no idea what will happen to him and doesn't want to miss a moment.

They try to face the beast again, and get their asses kicked again. This time it's Eury who's almost killed. She uses some divine magic (wow) to make a sandstorm and flee, but is in no condition to do anything else. Semi conscious she tells Omni to use the box when he defeats the beast, then goes unconscious. Omni goes on a trip of self discovering (getting more advice from the Shaman) then faces the beast one last time. It's revealed the beast is him (well, his epilepsy which has been gnawing on him for so long that it's part of him). Accepting that (and possibly that he must live with it) he vanquishes it (no spoilers how exactly) and gets the Hopedasher.

As Eury is restored to health, she casts a time spell and they return to a minute after Megan split reality. Eury gives the box with the stone to Omni, they kiss (ha! Just kidding :)), and everything ends.

Well... then Icelos appeared out of nowhere and roasts her that she took too many chances. Eury just replies that it doesn't matter and that Omni will be the one to kill the Everprince.

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There you go. Not the best writing, but you get the point. I really like the details. The author definitely knows what she's talking about. With that must rush to school. Midterm exams.

Ciao!

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle

They kiss

I like your style :) Is it just me, or does the story and the writing resemble My Rain of Daggers? Simile, care to share your thoughts?

Light, which school do you go to? I didn't know it was time for midterms...

InItForTheShipping

@InItForTheShipping: why, alicorn school. Of course ;)

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: Of course... -.-

InItForTheShipping

@LightSparkle: Not a bad attempt, though I've seen better. You seem to focus a lit on the things you like, while skipping everything else. Like, for example, not a single mention if the Felina corp agents in the hospital...when Omni was five! I mean, come on, mare! At least be consistent!

And that whole he faints, she faints thing in the desert. You could have summarized it in one sentence. I take it you read the scroll during class and was scared not to get caught? Tsk tsk tsk. You're a bad pony :P

MixaMax

@MixaMax: And here we have grumpy puss again. Tell me, Max, are you this annoying by birth or have you been practicing? Seriously, it must take a spectacular talent to find something to be displeased about in everything.

Jade

What's that? Showing your inadequacy again, are you? I can say what I damn like and I won't take any fucks, least from you! If you bothered to read (weren't you supposed to be writing something that would impress me?) you'll see that everything I said is true! Just because you're so sensitive about it is not my or anypony's problem!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: says the stuck yo mare who kisses playcolt magazines! And don't talk to me like you've any idea about literature! I study this! You're a paper pusher who gets a high by testing down others!

Jade

@MixaMax, @Jade: You two...

LyraHands

@MixaMax, @Jade: Now kiss!

Brush

@MixaMax, @Jade: Now kiss!

InItForTheShipping

@Brush; Ha ha ha :) You beat me to it :D

InItForTheShipping

You better be careful! Else Lyra might lick the thread again! :P

RRBB

@REBB: Nah, Lyra only licks ears.

Brush

Can partially confirm!

Bob

And that's how Equestria was saved!

PPI

@PPI: I don't even... :)

InItForTheShipping

Author's Notes:

I'm thinking of doing an Equestrian Fanfiction discord Sunday afternoon (morningish for the US) to coincide with the completion of the meetup.

What do you all think? :)

Featured

Wow, what's with this week? Brush updates, a bunch of newcomers post great stories, RRBB starts something new, Dark starts something new... have I gone to Elysium Fields? Whatever the reason, I like :)

Today I'd like to do a huge shoutout to Jade. (You weren't kidding when you said you know how to write.) the story is called The Human Within Me and is the saddest heartwarming story I've read ever! (And if you all are confused, yes it's sad and heartwarming at the same time!)

@Tech Nightling, @CodeFilly: is there a way we could have recommendation fics appear on the site? I think I'd like to have a popularity meter, but also something like an editor's choice. (Although, I'm not an editor so we'll need to work on the name.)

@MixaMax: Well? Your move :) (I'll get popcorn.)

LyraHands

@Jade: That's very unlike you. Did you post a draft?

MasterOfThisAstra

@MasterOfThisAstra: Yes. I rushed it a bit to have it ready for today, if you know who would get all p...roblematic about it. I'll do an edit later this week and fix the stuff.

Jade

@Jade: No sweat. I'll go through it for you.

@LyraHands: just to let you know, Brush has written something magnificent. I'm still in the process of editing it, but I think we'll be submitting it for publication (it's original fiction, though. No humans).

MasterOfThisAstra

I like Jade's story. And Simile's. Why are there so many good writers? :P

Brush

@Brush: you still haven't showed it to me! When I ask my stupid brother he always goes "uhh, still working on it". :/ You've seen my sketches, what's the big difference?

Also, any chance you'll be needing pictures?

PaintDrop

@LyraHands: That's a good idea, actually. From a code point it's not that difficult. Tech and I made sure we could add modules freely. The main problem is the UI. Nothing I could do there. Maybe Tech will have some ideas when he gets back.

CodeFilly

@Jade: I see the Crystal Empire style. :) Wonderful job on conveying all the emotions (you are in your element there). I've no idea how you managed, but you actually touch on what would be valid human concerns. Those together with what the pony is going through make for a magnificent read.

My only complaint (other than the editing misses) is the length. You're on the edge of what is acceptable in terms of pacing, a few more thousands words and things would have been much smoother, I think.

InItForTheShiping

@MixaMax: you gonna say something or now? Jade owned you, mare! He made a feather duster out of your tail! :D (Not that you didn't deserve it, you grump :p)

Also, where's out entertainment? I want there to be enough flames so that I could fry my hay! :P

RRBB

@RRBB: Careful! You might get the thread licked again. :D

Brush

@Jade: I've never met you, but you write some mean prose. ;) I'll disagree with Shiping a bit on the humans. There are some aspects I'm not sure will go as you have described, but those are just my view and quite minor.

Have you throught about extending this into a 6 chapter story? Or alternatively to write a sequel? There's so much more than can be said. The characters are awesome (although Brush and Simile's win out with points to spare).

Guess I'll be saying goodbye to my A+ :/ Between this, Daggers, The Human and I, and MCE itself, I'm not sure if I'll have the time for school.

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: Graduation comes first! We talked about this!

@Jade: I never doubted you can write like that! The poem was enough to show me your skill. All you need to do now is refine it until it becomes as hard and shiny as a diamond.

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: "Hard and shiny"? Maybe somepony needs a coltfriend? :P

And chill. My studies come first. I'll just reduce my extracurricular activities... like hanging with friends and going to bars, and picking up guys (Seriously, you'll be surprised how easy that is here.)

LightSparkle

@MixaMax: hey, you sleeping or something? :/

LyraHands

@InItForTheShipping: Were you serious about helping me with emotional descriptions? I'd much appreciate that.

Maybe you can mentor me? Or even join me in a collaboration? Just for the sake of learning, of course.

Simile

@Simile: My pleasure :)

Anyone who wants to polish up her writing skills is welcome to ask.

InItForTheShipping

@all: MixaMax just galloped out of the house! I have no idea why or where she went. Only thing I know was that she packed a bag in a hurry and grabbed her last savings. I don't know what happened exactly, but I'm worried. She’s never done this before.

Short&Hoofy

@Short&Hoofy: What? You sure she hasn't just gone to finish some work at town hall. I'm sure it's nothing. Best you can do is call the guards.

LyraHands

@Short&Hoofy: That sounds serious. Want us to do something? Personally, I think it's nothing. She probably forgot some bug ass meeting. You know how she is. If nothing changes in a few hours, let me know.

RRBB

Moving this to PM. If we need site help we're ask at a later date

LyraHands

Did she leave a note? A message? Anything.

Jade

@Jade: nothing so far. I'll check her room and the kitchen, but I doubt it. Something must have freaked her out.

Short&Hoofy

@Luna: did you know anything? Did Max talk to you about vacation, relaxation, or anything?

LyraHands

Nope, is news to me. I'll use what I can to track her down...once a full day has passed. I'm almost sure that there's some idiotic reason that got her hooves in a knot.

Don't worry, all. I'm on it ;)

Luna

And I'm on it as well!

TheRealLuna

Max' Shocking PMs

I'm frightened now. It's dark and I haven't heard a thing. I knew I should have gone after her and not to school! What if something bad had happened?

Short&Hoofy

Don't say such things! Nothing has happened! She'll be fine. I've checked at the hospital and she isn't there. I know it's a long shot, but I'll ask Pinkie Pie if she knows anything. In the meantime, get some herbs to relax. Worrying isn't going to do anypony any good.

LyraHands

I know, I know. That's what the girls as school said. RRBB offered to come to my place to wait for sis. I refused. RRBB has enough problems to deal with mine right now. Maybe I should have said yes. Does that make me selfish?

Short&Hoofy

Herbs! Now! You're having a panic attack.

Max is a grown mare. She knows how to take care of herself. She even took care of me a few times when I was down on my luck.

I'm adding CodeFilly to the PM group.

LyraHands

Heya.

I didn't know things were so serious. When you said she galloped out, I thought she was off doing something stupid and would be back in an hour or so.

CodeFilly

I'm fine! And no, it wasn't just an hour. She left in the morning and I haven't heard her since. Only think I know is that she isn't at work. Mayor Mare asked me about her as I was returning from school.

Short&Hoofy

Any idea what made her freak out? Oh, and what did she take? Maybe we could figure out what she's up to based on that.

LyraHands

That's just it! I've no idea! I logged on her account. The only messages she got were from Jade. I had a quick talk with him as well in the morning. He has no idea what's going on either. Offered help, as everypony, but that's all.

She took most of her savings (seven thousand bits). There's a few thousand left. She also took some clothes (the first thing she could grab from her wardrobe. She even took one of my hoodies by accident.

Short&Hoofy

Hmm. I hope I'm wrong, but I've seen that pattern before. There's somepony I could ask about, but not in the next hour. And, of course, I can't get ahold of Brush :/

LyraHands

I'm looking at her activity. Last thing Max did was open Jade's story. She read 62% of it, then fifteen minutes later she logged on again and started PMing him.

Short, was that you? I really don't want to open user PMs unless I don't have to.

CodeFilly

Yes, that was me.

Short&Hoofy

Seven thousand bits. That's a lot of money by my current standards. She could rent a house in Canterlot or Manehattan for that much. I'll try to get in touch with Candle to see if they haven't talked. It's a long shot, but maybe we're lucky.

I'll try to get ahold of Luna and CEO as well. If something's wrong Wonderbolt support is the best we can hope for.

LyraHands

Save your energy. She hasn't PMed Candle since the meetup.

CodeFilly

Adding MightyDragon. He's got news.

CodeFilly

Now, I'm not at all sure about this, but I think I saw somepony looking like Max during lunch. I just hit a glimpse, mind you. My boss's daughter was breaking stuff in the cafe, so I had to take care of things. It totally slipped my mind until Code told me about the situation.

MightyDragon

The Crystal Empire?! What the fuck?! What's she doing there? With 7k bits. What can you buy for that much?

LyraHands

Might not have been her. Like I said: just a glance; annoying child with superpowers.

MightyDragon

Some drunk is singing in the street. I'll see if it's her.

Short&Hoofy

Mare! Do you think Max went to get drunk? You can do that with 7k.

MightyDragon

Not now. This sounds serious! :/

CodeFilly

Sorry :(

MightyDragon

What's up, jerks? :) I have big news!

I just got engaged!

Short&Hoofy

Wow. My sis just yelled at me then ran off crying to her room... What gives?

Short&Hoofy

Max?! Where the heck were you?! :/ Of course she'll rush off crying! She's been worrying for you the entire day!

Are you drunk? Where have you been?

LyraHands

What? I'm not drunk! What gave you that idea? :/ Is this a RD prank?

Short&Hoofy

You maniac! The entire site freaked out! You grabbed a bag of clothes, 7k bits and galloped off somewhere and you expect everyone to consider that normal? You! Galloping off! The last time you did something without a plan or schedule was when we were back in high school!

LyraHands

And I can't change? What, is there some new law I wasn't told about?

For your information I went to the Crystal Empire and got engaged. Thanks for ruining the mood, idiots! :/

Short&Hoofy

Hold a min. Sis is back.

Short&Hoofy

Max, we didn't mean to get you mad. We were just worried, and knowing what we did you would be too. Now can you please explain what happened, starting from the beginning?

CodeFilly

And she's gone.

MightyDragon

I really hope she's just drunk.

LyraHands

Guess we'll find out soon.

CodeFilly

I swear, if she doesn't respond in twenty minutes, I'm going to her place and kicking the door in!

LyraHands

Err, okay. I see what happened. Sorry, girls, I didn't mean to snap at you and I certainly didn't mean to scare you. Short explained things to me. Poor filly, stars know she hasn't had it easy this week. (And right now she's sticking her tongue out at me. :))

Here's what happened. In the rush I put the note I'd written in my luggage. I only found out now, when Short asked that I give back her hoody.

The reason I took the money was so I can go to the Crystal Empire and buy an engagement shoe. (I wanted to go for the non-cheap stuff.) And the reason I did that, is that after reading the start of Jade's story I decided to act on my feelings. There's no point in wasting this chance (it might be the only one I get). So, I went there, bought the most expensive engagement shoe I could find, then asked the question.

Spoilers: it went well :D

Short&Hoofy

Wait! Wait a minute here! You went all the way to the Empire and spent your savings on a piece of jewelry so you can propose to a pony you've met a few days ago at a human Fanfiction meetup without even knowing what he thinks about you, all based to a story he wrote? And succeeded?!?

Max, you must tell me what dice you use.

MightyDragon

Hey, you've all been telling me to be more impulsive! (You hypocrites!) And I did put some more thought into it! Even asked his parents. (Mare, was that scary. I had no idea they were aristocracy.)

Short&Hoofy

Wings, Max. Those things usually stand for nobility in the Empire (and by “usually” I mean always.)

CodeFilly

How was I supposed to know!? Anyway, we've decided to have the ceremony once Jade graduates. Until then we'll just keep a long distance relationship (close distance on weekends).

My sis is making gagging sounds. Lyra, can I do something to get this account banned? :/

Short&Hoofy

I... Just... Give me a minute or ten to wrap my mind round this. Max and Jade engaged? Just like that?

How? I mean, no offense Max (congrats and all) but... Jade! The guy can choose any mare he wants. And let's be honest, none of us are supermodels.

LyraHands

Without getting too awkward, I can only say there are some damn good advantages of having a Princess of Love around. (Also Spike is an incredibly huge deal there.)

Anyway, off to sleep. Today was great, but exhausting.

Have fun, you jerks!

Short&Hoofy

I need those dice!

MightyDragon

Author's Notes:

As promised, I'm opening a small Discord server for EqF trivia :)

Link (active for the next 24 hours): https://discord.gg/FrVRq

Embarrassment Eternal

Greetings,

I've some important news I'd like to share. As some of you are probably aware, there are rumors about me getting married to a certain mare on this site. I'd like to put those rumors to rest.

I am, in fact, absolutely not married! I'm engaged, which if you check the definition in any dictionary, would see that is an entirely different concept. I will be married in a number of months once I have fully graduated with honors.

As for the culprit in question, the mare that foolishly spent all her money on an engagement shoe without checking its size, she's none other than our very own MixaMax. Yes, that idiot galloped all the way to my college and proposed to me in the middle of the yard under the shocked gazes of my fellow students.

Needless to say that I wholeheartedly said yes...and then went to adjust the size of the engagement shoe. ;)

TL; DR: MixaMax proposed, I said "meh, why not?"

Jade

@Jade: You jerk! I spend all night and most of the day writing a post about that! You can't come here, compose something for five minutes and post it! And it's not my fault you have the hooves of a filly! :/

MixaMax

I don't remember you complaining about my hooves before. As for malign the announcement...it was cute the first ten times you sent me those awful drafts, but enough is enough! I used to ridicule you about not being able to write, but now I see I wasn't harsh enough. Better stick to "reviewing" and paperwork from now on.

Jade

@.@ I think I'm going to cry... :~) Max and Jade, I wish you the very very best and more! You've no idea how happy I am for you two! I just...

Edit: Brush has gone into the kitchen where she's crying and eating ice cream. It might be a while before she returns. Good going, Jade. :) Wish I could have been there to see the proposal. - MasterOfThisAstra

Brush

MixaMax: I must say you did the impossible. Never in a thousand years dud I think anypony would find your ugly mug attractive! :P Enjoy your engagement, Max. And you better invite me to the wedding! :D

RRBB

@CodeFilly: Max galloped all the way to the Crystal Empire through snow and sleep and rain. Why weren't you that romantic when you proposed? :(

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: It was you who proposed, dumdum! ;P Plus, Max just did a one-day session, I engaged on a multi-campaign. ;) Also we're still getting married before them.

CodeFilly

What the fuck?!? I'm gone a week and this is what I return to?!? Good job on breaking stereotypes, you girls. If we keep that up we'll be kicked out of the geek union.

Seriously, though... Wow! Never would have seen this. Luna, was this your doing?

CEOWitch

Don't look at me, I'm just as happy...surprised as you are. They are cute, though :)

Luna

Excellent! All is going according to my plan! Beahahaha!

TheRealLuna

@TheRealLuna: That's my line, sweetie ;)

InItForTheShipping

Say what now? This can happen? I'm telling my brother right after school!

WaterBottle

@all: Nah, it's no biggie. I just thought Jade could use some honey in his life (to balance all the bitterness). Easy peasy Apple squeezy. It's not like I was worried or anything.

MixaMax

To quote my father after Max's visit:

"Jade, the young mare seems nice and everything, but did she seem to you like she was about to faint near the end of our conversation?"

Jade

@Jade: Ha! And who was the one who couldn't say his own name? You actually introduced me as "Max"! Good thing your mother was there to save you with the "so you're the filly I've been hearing about"? :/

MixaMax

So I happen to share things with my parents, sue me! Wait, you can't!

Jade

MixaMax message has been deleted.

Let's never speak of that again.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Hahagaha! Omg! Did you actually post nudes? Way to go, Max! You're my new number one heroine!

RRBB

@RRBB: Tell me you made a viewgrab!

PaintDrop

I did.

CEOWitch

I did.

MightyDragon

I did.

CodeFilly

@MixaMax: I'm impressed you're so flexible for your age. Tell me, did you use props to get into such a position or did you achieve it naturally? ;)

InItForTheShipping

I miss all the best stuff :(

Edit: Congratulations, Jade and Max! You made me tear up in class :~)

SweetStuff

@MixaMax: I'd say something, but looks like everypony else beat me to it.

Everypony: see what I've condemned myself to spend my life with? Actually, based on your point of view there might be certain advantages.

Jade

@Jade: I dare you to say that to my face!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: You must tell me how you made your tail look like that.

Bob

Leave it to MixaMix to mess things up. I was wondering when this would happen. The start of this thread seemed too tidy. I'm sure glad that Max intervened and set things straight, bringing us back to the quality posts we'd come to expect. :P

Now that I'm done being nasty, congrats you two! What started as a painful online experience and went through a number of hurdles (temp bans, mix-ups, talks of perm bans, Brush getting a dozen nervous breakdowns) has finally become something unique.

Having read Jade's story, I can say I understand what made Max rush through half Equestria to snatch him, but I also know I'd never had the guts to do so.

Be happy, Max & Jade! And may your future goals be as crazy and great as you!

LyraHands

@MixaMax: I want three foals.

Jade

WHAT?!?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: just like the Williams in MC.

Jade

... I'll think about it.

MixaMax

Author's Notes:

Writing and discussions on the Meet-up continue.

If anyone else wants to join the Discord, here's a 24h invite.

https://discord.gg/VktUP

Writing Advice

Umm, I don't know what to say :)

@Brush, @MasterOfThisAstra: Congratulations! You looked wonderful in your outfits. My boss even asked if you'd consider modeling for a science fiction collection she's planning, inspired by the meetup.

@CodeFilly, @MightyDragon: Congratulations on your engagement! You two looked so cute when you fell asleep on each other at the event. :) Next time I visit Canterlot I'll bring you something I think both of you would appreciate.

@MixaMax, @Jade: Congratulations for the fairytale engagement! I wish somepony does that to me one day. Max, you are one lucky mare. And Jade, you really are sweet in real life. :)

Sorry for taking away from these magnificent moments, but I was hoping to get some advice from you about writing humans. I'm hoping to have a longer discussion with Tech about this when he visits, but until then I would appreciate your help.

Candle

@Candle: What exactly is the problem? Your latest works seem quite good. You've undoubtedly gone a long way since your first attempts. I'd say you are way past the average of the submitted stories (and I'm talking about the good ones).

Bob

And I might be vanishing for a while... again! :/ Why did I expect things to be any different? Some jerk at school called me a [censored] at school. In front of everypony! I lost it! I think I might have broken his wing.

It wasn't like half the school avoided me even before this incident. :/ my mother will go bat shit when she gets here. Right now I'm writing from bathroom, but I expect to lose all aethernet privileges once I get out. :/ Life is fun :(

@Candle: I think your biggest weakness is you keep thinking of humans as these weird aliens and do everything possible to deponify them, even when it isn't needed. I agree that an interesting touch now and again is great, but at the end of the day humans are just ponies on two legs. They have similar problems, feelings, and motivations. Sure they might be omnivore, but don't reference that every three paragraphs (it gets a bit creepy). Also, cut down on the toes and fingers. Unless you're writing about some port fetish you can safely skip those.

Sorry I can't give more advice, but the principle is knocking on the bathroom door urging me to get out.

See you in a week (I hope).

RRBB

@RRBB: :( Hope things go well. Tell us if there's anything, okay?

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: Let's go to PM.

Short&Hoofy

@RRBB: Nooo! :( I had a friend like that. He's a bit calmer now, but he used to get into all sorts of trouble.

@Candle: I don't read much fanfiction, but I skimmed through your latest story and it seemed fine.

PrinceEric

@Bob: My main problem is that I struggle to describe their everyday life. What do humans do everyday exactly?

@RRBB: Sorry to hear that. :( You've been through so much.

Candle

@RRBB: This time I'm not taking no for an answer! I'll personally look into this!

Luna

I'll see if I can help in the matter as well.

@Candle: This might not be a very scientific way of doing it, but try writing taur stories (possibly starting with centaurs, then moving to minotaurs). Don't bother with food and sleeping habits (those will come naturally as you get more comfortable with your writing).

Keep things simple. Describe a simple scene, without any plot if you have to: two humans searching for books in the library, or preparing for a test, or walking in the park. Then, when you feel you're ready, string several scenes and see how it goes.

DarkSparkle

@Candle: you want to know about humans? Easy. I'll tell you the secret how to write great humans, and it will blow your mind!

Think cats and dogs. All females are cats, all males are dogs. Just get them walking on two legs, and follow RRBB's advice. And don't be afraid to have them talk. A lot. Oh, and make their reasoning less logical. That's the spirit of a human. All the rest are technical details you'll get with practice.

LightSparkle

@RRBB, @Short&Hoofy: I'll go there as soon as this stupid meeting is over! :/ RRBB, I usually get annoyed at you, but in this case... if he said what I think he said then. Let's just say I would have reacted the same way.

@Candle: Now, I might not have written a lot of (any) stories, but I think I could give some advice. Always start by describing the eyes and face. That's a great opener that's used almost each time a new character is presented. Remember the readers want to be able to visualize what you're saying, and for that they need to be aware of every last detail of your character. Is she short, tall, thin, cuddly? What's her hair? Her eyes? When she sleeps, does she have any specific mannerisms or phrases?

I'd suggest starting with a few descriptions.

@LyraHands: On that note, I think we could use some sort of screening process. I'm all for authors trying to get better, but some of the new fics are just argh! The grammar and spelling are catastrophic, there's no plot whatsoever, and oh the wish fulfillment... :/ ("My Class of Humans" is a terrifyingly good example)

MixaMax

@Candle: thanks on behalf of Max and myself for the good wishes. I'm sure both of us are happy and wish you to find your special somepony soon :)

As for the writing, the others have already given plenty of good advice, so I'll just summarize it for you:

RRBB: good advice
DarkSparkle: definitely good advice
LightSparkle: good advice, although very weird (yet strangely accurate when I thought about it)
MixaMax: good advice what NOT to do!

@MixaMax: You're kidding, right? Please tell me that was some disturbing prank! You can't be more wrong if you tried! Did you even try to write anything based on your own advice? Please do! If you don't vomit yesterday's breakfast after you read it, I'll personally use my influence to set you up as a guest lecturer here to talk about it!

Eyes? Hair? That deserves a sentence in passing. If you want to go really deep you need training in lit symbolism, metaphors, and social cues of the period! Just stick to reading and non-fiction and don't confuse others, okay?

Jade

@Jade: I'd say bite me, you wouldn't know how! :/

MixaMax

@RRBB: tell me what happens (use another account if needed)

@Candle: I think you're doing great. Just keep on writing and you'll get there :)

@MixaMax: yes, I agree. As harsh as it sounds the quantity of (bad) stories is starting to clutter the site. For that I think we need a curator system. I was hoping MasterOfThisAstra, Jade, and RRBB (when life permits) to be our first curators. (I'll add that on the todo list for Code and Tech.)

LyraHands

But I wanted to be a curator as well... :(

DarkSparkle

Changes and Improvements

@all: Announcement!

I'd like to announce that the site got its 1000th member today! I know this is nothing compared to the popular sites, but for us it's a pretty big deal. To mark the occasion we've upgraded the user interface a bit (notice the human banners made by our err own PaintDrop :)) and fixed a few pesky errors.

Along with that, and to cope with the huge influx of ponies and stories, we've also added a set of new features and implemented some policy changes. Usually Lyra would be the one announcing this, but she's got a rehearsal to prepare for (it's counts big time for her graduation score).

First let me say that MightyDragon (a.k.a. my geeky fiancé) has agreed to become a permanent moderator and help Tech and myself maintain the code.

Second, as Lyra mentioned, we'll be moving to a more restricted model of story posting. Now, before everypony starts to panic, let me explain. You'll still be able to submit stories, only now new stories will be curated and returned if they don't cover some minimal requirements. (Just for your info, this is going on even now: stories that have no connection to Midnight Castle are removed all the time.)

What do you need to do so your story gets approved for posting?
1) Be sure your story has a clear connection to MC
2) Have minimal grammar and spelling standard (at least)
3) Use the appropriate tags, especially if your story has adult content

Simple, isn't it? And in order to have everything running smoothly, here's the list of curators that will be overseeing the process:

Jade, LightSparkle, MasterOfThisAstra, RRBB, and DarkSparkle.

Finally, onto some tech stuff:

Thanks to Luna and Prince Blueblood (who has an account on the site) we have our own storage where to hold all our fics! So from now on no more hosting elsewhere (unless you want to).

We've also created a Lyra's Choice section, in which Lyra (based on her thoughts and suggestions from Mods) will post stories we subjectively like. (Please don't make this into a contest.)

Thank you!

CodeFilly

@All: CodeFilly forgot to mention that writers who have proven they understand the quality requirements will be able to post stories and updates without going through the standard submission process. (That is until they mess up and I have to step in and there will be much crying and gnashing of teeth, then Code will get mad at me and take away my modhood, and I'll cry all day, and she'll apologize, and...)

MightyDragon

Hey, you just got to the good part! Get to the smooching and the other stuff! :P

LightSparkle

Mmm. Smooching and other stuff... *drools* :) I think I'll write a story based on that.

Brush

@all: I just want to clarify something.

Curators will pass through the same screening process as everypony else, regardless of skill. I don't want anypony to think that we'll be giving each other a free pass. I can safely say that all of us have had some professional experience in literature, and we'll take our responsibilities very seriously!

DarkSparkle

@DarkSparkle: That we do, and I'm sad to say that your first submission failed to pass the required quality criteria and cannot be posted at this time.

Jade

What?!? Why? How? I checked the grammar and spelling a dozen times! Proofread it another two must be certain. Is it the language? Did I go too far with my use of suggestive language? Or did I mistag something?

Please tell me what I did wrong and I'll fix it!

DarkSparkle

@Jade: you jerk! :/ No more snuggles for you this week!

@DarkSparkle: Relax, he's just pulling one of his stupid jokes. Your story is up. I already read it, and I must say... it's definitely something new. A pony waking up in Mistmount... err, nope! Not going there!

Don't get me wrong, I like a good romance, but the way everyone just accepts her?

"What are you, deary?" The apple seller asked, handing me a large green apple.

"Umm, just a magical pony?" I smiled knowing full well how absurd it sounded. If I were in Equestria and a talking tree told me the same, the first thing I'd do is teleport to the doctor.

"Oh, are you now?" He patted me on the head. The experience was quite shocking, though not unpleasant...especially when he started scratching that spot behind the ear. "I take it you don't have a place to stay either.

Props for the ear scratching (it's so hard to reach that spot), but come on! Am unknown creature appears out of nowhere and the first reaction is "here's some food, do you have a place to stay?"

Hope you do better next chapter!

MixaMax

@Jade: Don't scare me like that!

DarkSparkle

@MixaMax: Really? It's usually you asking for snuggles.

Jade

@Jade: double snuggles then! Triple! All the snuggles! That will teach you to disagree with me!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: *sigh* What did I do to deserve this?

Jade

Everypony! RRBB didn't come to school today! When I went by her house her parents wouldn't let me see her. I managed to have a sneak chat with her butler and he told me that she'd gone on a trip to Canterlot. I'm worried.

@Luna: can you please tell me what's going on?

PaintDrop

Give me some time. I'm going through yesterday's incident. The colt's wing wasn't broken, which is good, and he did say something he wasn't supposed to. However, the force RRBB used was excessive.

I'll let you know if I learn more, okay?

Luna

I'll see what I can learn as well. Will be having a chat with Blueblood later today. Just don't worry. I'm sure it's nothing.

CEOWitch

@PaintDrop: she seemed fine yesterday, considering. Quite shaken, but she handled herself well when I saw her. Hope she hasn't done anything stupid again.

MixaMax

@All: I know I shouldn't be an asshole so soon after becoming a mod, but it would be best if we stop discussing RRBB in public? PMs would be more than necessary. Let's be a bit considerate of her, okay?

MightyDragon

Yes, that's would be a wise thing to do. And don't worry, everypony, I have a feeling she'll be fine.

InItForTheShipping

Coming Out

Eric Wildrose

Engineer, friend, chosen

Eager and smart, Eric was interested in technology before he could walk. A keen mind, he excelled in school and won a host of science awards, yet had few friends, preferring to live in his own fantasy world. All that changed once the mirror-sprite appeared and shared its knowledge of world portals in exchange for a single favor.

Siblings: Caterina
Place of birth: Mistmount, Gumania
Occupation: College student
Hobby: cooking
Mentor deity: Hades
Magic power: Portal control
Eternity gem: Unknown

"When I look in mirrors they just wave back."

And we finally got Eric. Hardly surprising, since there's just one slot left and it has to belong to Euryala. To be honest I expected most. There were several hints that he was receiving help from some magical entity. I didn't see him being a follower of Hades, though. If anything, I thought he'd be anti-Hades, but guess the writers planned on that all along. (Them sneaky writers! :))

Weird thing about the mirrors. I must check if there are any mythological creatures that affect mirrors in anyway.

Awkward isn't it? I write something dramatic, vanish without a word, then I'm back just like that? Might as well come clean and get this thing over with.

My parents sent me to a shrink yesterday. Guess they had enough. Two hours in a small room talking nonsense...and I finally cracked. And I'm glad. I've so much shit in me you wouldn't believe. Looks like I'll be going to therapy from now on. I've always dreaded this, but after one session, i must say I don't feel any worse than usual. (I'm kidding. I feel a mess, but also a bit less burdened.)

As part of my therapy I'm now free (encouraged even) to write and be as active as possible on the site. (The curator thing come at the perfect. Thanks to whoever floated my name) Guess, I'm here to stay. For a while, at least.

Oh, and as part of my therapy I must share my big disgusting secret. I'm... I think I'm into fillies. (I added ellipsis for dramatic effect. Cool, eh?)

I just like to thank you, girls for all your help. Without you and this place I've no idea what I would have done. (The last filly psycho murderer was locked away eight seven years ago. I checked.)

But hey, enough of my crap. Homies! Wooo!

RRBB

You can be such an idiot, you know that?

Short&Hoofy

@RRBB: I must agree with Short on this. At least you're our idiot and we love you. (Don't get any ideas!) if you weren't so stubborn and listened to me, you might never had had anger issues! You scared us shitless! (Of course your parents would keep it a huge secret. Mine are just as bad in that regard.)

Anyway, Eric...

I don't know anything that reacts to mirrors other than nightmares. Interesting if there's a connection between mirrors and the portals between worlds. I know it sounds crazy, but weirder things have happened. I really hope Eric doesn't turn out to the be "traitor" archetype (or worse—the Everprince.) Apart from being a terrible chliché, I'd be sad if it turns out the nicest humie is evil.

Your thoughts?

PaintDrop

@RRBB: I'm so proud of you! It takes tremendous courage to do what you did. Starting is the first step to recovery. And if there are ANY hurdles on your way just let us know. We're your friends are are here for you. Never forget that!

LyraHands

@RRBB: you're cool. I've been going to therapy for three years. Nowadays it mostly feels like a chat, but I keep doing it so I don't go on a downward spiral again. You're much stronger than me, though. I'm sure you'll be fine in a few months.

@PaintDrop: Argh! I really hope things don't end up like that :( It's Eric! Think of all the nice things he's done (all the water bottles :P). If anyone, Blazen must be the traitor!

By the way, gave you noticed how everyone in the group is special? I mean special in relation to the Everthings. So far Blazen and Omni are said to be the ones to kill the Everprince, and the rest are the only ones who can save the world from his power. (Also, are we sure the Prince is male? I know the name suggests it, but the dragons have a girl for Dragon Lord.)

Maybe things aren't what they seem?

PrinceEric

@RRBB: Come here, you! *hugs* Why did you keep this from us, you silly filly? We could have helped! I live twenty minutes from your house! I'm just so mad right now I want to give you a hug!

Brush

Unlike fanfics, same sex is a tricky subject. I don't blame you for keeping it hidden to yourself, but give us some credit, will you?

It's sad that we live in a society that frowns upon such tendencies, but if everypony keeps it to herself things won't get better. Now, I'm not saying you should start screaming in the streets or constantly shouting it out, but for stats' sake share it with a few close friends! PaintDrop has known you for ages and I bet even she didn't know. Without having somepony to talk to it's normal you'll have anger issues, depression, or both! What's done is done, but I'm still upset at you. :/

Now I can start raging about the new "brilliant idea" the writers have! (Sorry, Prince Blueblood, but come on!) My Two month puppy can come up with something more original!) the good guy is suddenly the traitor/villain all along. What's next? Euryala is some deity princess? At this point I wouldn't be surprised if that came up with (a crappy) explanation for that.

I've given MCE many changes so far, but if they pull this on Eric, I'll stop reading!

MixaMax

@RRBB: hang in there. One day at a time.

@MixaMax: you're simply infuriating! I'll be arriving this weekend on the three thirty train.

Jade

@Jade: Great! :) I’ll have sis clean up the house!

MixaMax

Wow! Just woooow!

RRBB

Return to Insanity

Err, I'm conflicted. Whoever wrote this chapter is a genius or really messed up! I've never even heard of horror mixing with comedy. (Who does that?!) Now the review :)

We start with best humie doing a contraption for Caprice. (From what I could tell it's a sort of levitation set of saddlebags that hover behind her?) Of course he messes up, and causes it to fly all over the house (Caprice is so cute when she chuckles, by the way. And her humor is the best so far :)) so we have destruction, broken mirrors (this is important!) and lots of yelling from Eric's sister and parents. (Fun fact, his mother knows about the portals and such, since she said "your friends better come up with the money for this!" Typical lawyer.)

Caprice goes to Canterlot to give him some gems, everyone leaves Eric to clean up. And now the interesting part begins. While cleaning, Eric picks up a mirror piece and his reflection asks him how he's been. Eric goes into a "No!" cycle and then we have a flashback. We see young Eric (yay! Young Eric is so serious) presenting his science project and messing it up (and still getting third place). Devastated, he takes the long route to home, where he stumbles upon a world portal near the lake. The mirror entity appears and offers him the means to win first place always. Eric refuses, but the entity tells him it will be waiting for (this is also important) when he changes his mind. Eric hesitates for a while (lots of scenes I'll skip), but in the end agrees and is told of the portals.

Back in his room, the entity has a chat with him. We learn that the reason he's constantly carrying water bottles is to keep in touch (although it says mirrors would have been more efficient). They get into an argument until the mirror thing says it knows about the Everprince. (First bombshell: "we used to date once". Seems the mirror entity was/is female.) Then we have our second flashback.

Eric summons a portal and enters. (And all this time I though he didn't use them!) we have him walking around Canterlot as a pony (yikes! Here come the "Humans in Disguise fics) with only his reflection showing his true nature. A bit of comedy, though at the end he reaches the mirror pool and is attacked by versions of his human self, each having an aspect of him: hate, envy, fear, etc.

Flashback to the house. Where he says he'll never go back to Equestria. The mirror laughs asking what if his friends are in danger. (She's sort of a bitch.) And then she asks god the favor he owes her. They go into an argument, but at the end he agrees to do as she asks. The mirror only says "later" and disappears. A few comedy scenes with Caprice returning and some of Eric's friends passing by... And then the most chilling event of all: the mirror spirit takes form in the lake (and yes, she's a girl) where Icelos is sitting on a bench.

"Nice to see you, Echo." Icelos looked up from his book. "Pity you're not fully yourself yet."

"Don't meddle with him!" the watery form hissed. "I've claimed him! He's mine!"

"I doubt it. He belongs to Hades. Always has, always will." Icelos stood up, then with no effort tore the book he held in half. "Unless the script is rewritten. Don't interfere in my dealings with the Everprince and I'll give Eric to you."

"You wish!"

The more I'm starting to figure things out, the more confused I am. Eric is controlled by both Echo and Hades? Icelos and Echo are on opposite sides? Aaaargh! The confusion! :)

PrinceEric

Well, it's pretty clear to me. I think S.Child is playing with several oppositions and mixing them up. That's why we're so confused.

We have the corporations battle for control of Mistmount and Gumania (which has been been the focus of Mistmount Chronicles). So far only Felina and Skyla are described in detail, but it's said there are 8 in total. There's also the Wonderbolts-human-clones who are part of an overseeing body that tries to keep them in check.

We also have the Deities vs Titans vs taint (I think is the Everprince). Things are a bit messy here.i, still not sure if the taint is the Everprince or if the Everprince is a Titan or anything.

Finally, as we see in the shattered realities, Zeus, Hades, and Poseidon are fighting amongst themselves as well. (That might give new meaning to the Poseidon is lost theory.)

All in all an okay chapter. Definitely not what I feared it might be (thank the stars!)

MixaMax

Wow, Max. That was almost... nice? You liking MCE? Damn, those Jade snuggles must be game good to get you to mellow out. :P

Chapter was fine, though, just not sure what the horror element was. PrinceEric, were you scared of the mirror images thing? That was pretty weak in terms of horror, if you ask me. I still understand it might creep some ponies out.

On another note...

@all: Pones! Seriously! Tag your taur stories appropriately! Not everyone is into centaurs and minotaurs! This is basic practices, ponies! I'm not talking about my personal thoughts that ponified humans are the worst of the worst here! The mods have spent a lot of time to add flag functionality, so snorting use it!

RRBB

@RRBB: Not that I'm disagree with you, but the original novel *did* have a centaur. That means it's canon, like it or not.

DarkSparkle

Girls, don't fight! You need to get a camera for that. Just imagine the amount of views you'd get! ;)

LightSparkle

@RRBB: a few words
1) None of your damn business
2) They are pretty good
3) Buck that! They're outright amazing! (U jelly, mare?)
4) Mistmount is still better than Everhere!

@LightSparkle: Oooh! I like you :)

MixaMax

I like the idea of humans in disguise. Makes so much sense. I just don't think I can write them well enough yet :(

Candle

@LightSparkle, @DarkSparkle: ... I'm not against that, actually. O:)

RRBB

@RRBB: Right now Dark has either fainted or is panting heavily. :P

@MixaMax: You used to say the opposite in school! :P (No worries, all is fine. You're fun as well.)

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: Huh?!?

MixaMax

DarkSparkle's breath hastened as she reread the message for the fifth time. Her heart was pacing with the speed of a hummingbird making her wings tingly. She could picture the scene so clearly in her mind: the sweet smell of sweaty fur, the gentle sensation of muzzles brushing against another as they kissed, maybe even nibbling an ear. A sigh, escaped her mouth transforming into a stifled squeal as Dark...

Oops, must run for class. :P

RRBB

*giggle* I bet WaterBottle will still be blushing when you get here.

SweetStuff

@RRBB: Way to go, kiddo. You had an A in my book. Take it easy :)

LightSparkle

!!!

DarkSparkle

Jokes and Grumbling

Girls and guys, a big sorry from me.

After my taur post Dark rushed to my place, nearly broke the door down then gave me an earful about proper behavior online. (Took me a box of ice cream to calm her down.) Looking back at things, I see I went a bit too far.

So, everyone, let's chill and keep the lewd jokes for more serious times (and the non-general section of the site). Seeing Dark cry is no fun.

Your ever pesky

LightSparkle

Gees! I didn't know we hit that hard :( Sorry, Dark. Guess my nickname is there for a reason. Seriously, I was just kidding. I know that posting it after coming out might have sent the wrong message, so I just want to be ultra clear: I'm really not interested you (or anypony else on the site) in that way. Stars know I get enough trash about at school already. :(

I guess I'll go back to writing and rejecting fics.

Okay, so when I say rag your stories adequately, I don't mean add every bucking tag under the sun just in case! If someone winks at someone else that's not romance! If someone fights with someone else for five paragraphs that's not a tragedy!

@LyraHands, @CodeFilly, @The TechNightling, @MightyDragon: Maybe we could have a revision of the tagging system? As it is now it's pretty much useless.

RRBB

@LightSparkle: Yes, we were too mean to dear Dark. Also, glad to hear you're doing better. Im curious to see your writing, though. Something tells me I might be surprised. :)

@DarkSparkle: Huge sorry, *hugs and bumps* :) You need to relax a bit more, though. (Already you've improved significantly than before.)

InItForTheShipping

@LightSparkle: I honestly can't remember where I knew you from? I already asked everypony from my class, so can't... wait a minute! Mini, is that you? If you're pulling another prank on me I'll stick an orange on your horn, then buck a beehive off a tree!

@DarkSparkle: As somepony who's already caused you to quit once, I can say I didn't mean anything I said, and I don't want you to go again. Also, if anypony's mean towards you just send them my way!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: it's statements like those that drive me crazy!

orange on your horn, then buck a beehive off a tree!

What do bees have to do with oranges? I know I have been gone for a thousand years, but the natural world can't have changed that much? If there's some new type of bee I'd love to hear more about it.

somepony who's already caused you to quit once, I can say I didn't mean anything I said

And you just said that you were lying when you apologies to her. Good job, Max. Really.

All joking aside, I'd like to point out two things: First, as much as I like to correct Max, she knows what she's talking about and I know for a fact that she can annihilate anypony who's maliciously mean. If any any point you feel stressed with anything, I'm always here so send me a PM.

Second... Oh dear. I know a lot of you have been inspired by the the series, or the site, or the smash song by SweetStuff (do you know they're running your song in dance clubs here? I even heard it in the dorms, although it's strictly forbidden.), however, please try to write logically. Everypony starts from somewhere, but please rely a bit less on emotional impact. I can't tell the amount of stories that are so full of raw emotion that their authors have forsaken grammar altogether. That makes me really sad.

Jade

@Jade: she made me clean up for your visit. Not that I don't do that anyway, but she really wants to impress you.

Can you get me something from the Empire? Just a small gift.

Short&Hoofy

@Jade: I love you, you insufferable pedant :P

MixaMax

@RRBB: It's really nice seeing you like this. Whatever they did to you it must have worked. Oh and don't worry about stuff at school. You know who had a long talk with me about you and all I can say things are doing fine.

Party at SweetStuff's place? Her sis is out of town, so we could have a get together. I know it's not your usual groove, but I think it would be good for you to come. For one thing we'll be talking MCE, with everypony either on the site or secretly reading.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: I don't know. I really don't think it's the best thing right now. I've been avoiding YouKnowWho and she has me. For the moment that works best.

RRBB

Girls! I'm okay! It's not the end of the world, or anything. It's just that... Maybe I was a bit uncomfortable with the prospect of... Anyway, glad to know you are here for me, as am I for you :)

DarkSparkle

@RRBB: I'll be there if you don't feel comfortable.

Short&Hoofy

@RRBB: Pleaaaaaase? @.@

@Jade: eeeek! *blush* It really is nothing much. Although, I'm working on something new with PaintDrop and a few other friends.

SweetStuff

Sorry, I really don't feel like it. Next time.

RRBB

@InItForTheShipping: Second chapter of Daggers is up. Any chance of me coming to discuss better writing emotions? I travel pretty often, so just tell me where you are and I'll be there.

Simile

@Short&Hoofy: sure, just PM me what you want.

Jade

@Simile: With pleasure :) Unfortunately, I'm not as free as I once was. I travel pretty much myself, though for the most part I'm in the capital of the Crystal Empire. Will you passing through there anytime soon?

InItForTheShipping

@InItForTheShipping: Difficult. :( Any chance you can get to Manehattan? I'll be there for the next two weeks.

Simile

@Simile: Sadly no. :( We can still do it through PMs, though. Would that work?

InItForTheShipping

@InItForTheShipping: That works.

Simile

My rehearsal is tomorrow evening! Wish me luck, everypony!

Edit: Locking thread to avoid spam.

Edit2: Light & Dark, you crack me up :)

LyraHands

Old Faces and New

Hello, lovely ponies! :)

Wonderful to see you all here? Been meaning to check out this place for a while, but alway seemed to forget (heh :)). Lyra you old goof head, why didn't you tell me it was so great? I've just been going through the forum so far and it's been hilarious! (Well, mostly hilarious. RRBB, if you need cheering up I know somepony who could help.)

I really haven't read Midnight Castle since I was a filly, but will catch up :)

By the way, Lyra why haven't you shared your fanfiction series? Moonlight Castle was it? I loved that!

HopHop

@all: Good morning, my friends!

I must apologize for my long absence, but I wanted to spend some quality time with my family, as much as I have come to value the site, and the ponies in it, there are some things that come first. Furthermore, I spent a while in Manehattan where I got to be with our lovely Candle, whose work on stage in nothing short of spectacular.

Now for a few announcements. I will ignore the interesting things that happened during my absence, but please clean your posts of anything too suggestive, or post it in the appropriate section. For the most part that has been kept, but I'd like to remind everypony again that we are a family friendly ish channel. And for the love of Celestia, please move erotic role play to PMs. To be blunt it's a bit disturbing in the best of circumstances and few of you can write as well as RRBB and Brush.

Due to demand the tag system has been changed to include nation keywords. There are a hundred of them, so pick seven that best describe your story.

A "new and trendy" section has been added, so that anypony can see at first glance what is going being posted and what has received a lot of attention. It's still in beta, so expect issues.

Finally, a notification system is in place, so you can get notified when you receive new messages, stories you follow get updated, or authors you follow post a new story. Again, it's still in beta, so let me know if there are any issues.

With that I wish you all a wonderful day, and welcome @HopHop to our small corner of the aethernet.

The TechNightling

Yay! Tech is back! Missed you :)

With the risk of getting you to yell at me... how was the "visit"? Did you have fun with Candle? Or are we to expect a new announcement as has become fashionable lately? :P

RRBB

Just great. Everypony gets their fun and when I work up the nerve Tech returns... :/ Joking, just joking :) Great to see you, old man! (Well, not old or man, but this reminds me so much of that scene with Bellucio that I couldn't resist. :))

Was a bit worried when you were go for that long. Glad that everything worked out fine :) And, I'm not saying you and Candle are anything more than friends, but I think you two being together is sweet.

Oh, what are your thoughts on the latest MCE chapters? Dying to hear that.

@HopHop: Welcome :) We all have fun here, though sometime it gets a little scary. Just be sure to appease Brush by saying you're not a stallion (or forever keep running) :)

MixaMax

@LyraHands: It's absurd I gave to use this to let you know the results of your own exam, but I guess it can't be helped.

Congratulations, Lyra, you got second place, and even that was pretty much based on a coin toss. I've never heard such sad motifs come from you, but you pretty damn impressed everypony, judges included.

Also, I'm ashamed of myself for saying this, but I started reading Mistmount Chronicles: Everhere. It has the absurd amount of mindless action you'd expect for a colt series, but also a deep emotional touch as well. I'm not one for speculation, but the author(s) have experienced things first hoof, even if it isn't humans.

Cheers,

P.S. Dopey, you hopeless mare. I guess you finally found somepony to keep you awake? :)

Octavia

@Octavia: I know right? I feel so old! Half of my class is in a serious relationship or engaged. Meanwhile, I'm focusing on my career. Priorities, am I right?

By the way, who's Simile? She (he?) writes in a very unusual style. It's like cutting butter with dental floss: possible, definitely catches attention, but the amount of effort you need to put in is a lot. Also, if you're ever in Canterlot call me ;)

HopHop

@LyraHands: Congratulations! Not that there was any doubt! Most of the time. I'd say something smart, but right now I can't think of anything...

Also, without making any claims... don't gulp down heavy cider. Unicorn spells can't fix the headache.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: I think I warmed you. :/ Drink lots of juice and you'll be fine. Good thing there's no school today.

@LyraHands: that's crazy! :) Stop hiding and start bragging about it! Not only do you have a successful site (we're on the top 500 fansites) but you manage to kick flank in uni as well! I'm not exaggerating when I say you're my inspiration and role model! The things you've been through and still managed to achieve so much. If I ever write a serious novel it'll be based on you!

Also... elaborate on Moonlight Castle! (You've been keeping out on us!)

RRBB

@RRBB: She's a very dedicated employee as well :)

DaBoss

You know, I think I can find some of the stories. Most of them Lyra kept, but I still gave a few drafts she left at my place.

HopHop

@HooHop: You wouldn't dare! ... I think I have a few as well. I'll search around and then we can share, okay? :P

CodeFilly

@HopHop, @CodeFilly: Lyra's still asleep. The rehearsal drained her completely. I'll tell her about the good news. I fully approve of you posting any embarrassing things you could find :)

@Octavia: I'll also tell her that she passed the exam. I think she'll be happy.

Bob

What all of you are doing is foalish! Do you have any idea how embarrassing it could be for her?

I'm so in! :) I think I might have something at my parent's place. I'll post it when I find it.

MixaMax

This place always brings a smile to my face :) Keep it up!

InItForTheShipping

Short's PM Questions

Hey. I know we don't talk a lot, but can I ask you something?

Short&Hoofy

Okay. What do you want?

PaintDrop

RRBB. You've been friends for a long time, so... what things do you like? I mean I know what she says she likes, and there are the MCE scrolls (which she’s got already), but what does she really like? As in something that would make her happy.

Short&Hoofy

Heh. A functional family? Acceptance? It's a long list. Just to let you know she hates surprise parties. She never liked them, but lately she's really started to despise them.

PaintDrop

No, not a party. I want to give her a gift that will make her feel better, even if it's for a few days. Jade will be coming to visit soonish, so I want to ask him to get something. That's why I need your help. You know her better than anypony.

Short&Hoofy

... do you like her?

PaintDrop

Of course I do. She's always so sad or getting into fights. She's got a really bad rep in school and everypony thinks she's mean, but so few see she's hurting. Getting something nice every once in awhile might get her to feel a bit better. She can use that.

Short&Hoofy

That's not what I asked :/

PaintDrop

I do.

Short&Hoofy

Oh. I guess that's why you're always here when she was feeling down. I thought it was a MC thing. You know, because of your sis. How long has this been going on?

PaintDrop

Two and a half years almost.

Short&Hoofy

I never noticed. Are you...?

PaintDrop

Gay? Yes. I'm just discreet about it. My family knows. They support me, they just don't tell anyone about me. And yes, I know that one day I'll have to come out publicly, but for now I'll just keep things like this. And let's face it, I'm not very noticeable.

Short&Hoofy

You got that last bit right. And I never would have guessed. I've seen you talk with colts just as much as with fillies. Does RRBB know?

PainDrop

Paint, just because I am doesn't mean I'll drool at anypony with nipples! :/ Do you run around chasing colts all day? The only difference between me and RRBB is that I've known for a long time and had no pressure to hide it, not to my family at least. They even took me to a psychiatrist to do some tests the first time the were doubts. I'm perfectly okay with who I am, I just don't make a big deal out of it.

And... I'm not sure. I hinted to RRBB, but she might not have gotten the message. I just don't want to be too forward so soon after she had her heart shattered, you know? It's not like YouKnowWho isn't attractive (trust me on this), and let's face it, I'm not that much.

Short&Hoofy

That's RRBB for you. She tends to think about herself a lot. I know I'll hate myself, but how high am I rated?

PaintDrop

Haven't you asked her? And of course she'll think about herself! Don't pretend you don't know what I mean.

Short&Hoofy

Hey, I've been friends with her ever since kindergarten, so don't give me that! And we do talk a lot, just not about such stuff, with it being a touchy subject and all. In fact, she specifically asked me not to because she didn't want to feel uncomfortable!

PaintDrop

Yes. Sorry. I know, it's just... it's not easy seeing the one you like hurt all day and not be able to say a thing...

You're an 8/10

Short&Hoofy

I know what you mean. I don't think of RRBB the same way you do, obviously, but yes, it's painful watching her. Usually I wouldn't be saying this, but all the times we go to the bathroom to "freshen up" we’re actually there so she could cry. I used to think it was because of her parents and the shit she was getting at school.

Just an 8!? Are you serious? Why? What's wrong with me?

PainDrop

It's subjective. And you're too much of a stallion's mare to be of interest. RRBB and YouKnowWho are 11/10 just so you know.

Short&Hoofy

Okay, hold on. I take it this is your personal preference, but just 8? I know I'm not the most stylish, but stars... that's really average. What about SweetStuff?

PaintDrop

:/

Short&Hoofy

Seriously, tell me! It's not like I can ask anypony else, and I am curious in an academic way. Sort of. Really, I'm not picking on you or anything, I just find it curious. :)

PaintDrop

Fine. Sweet is a 9.5, Twist is a 8, WaterBottle is a 7. Anypony else you want? :/

Short&Hoofy

Twist? I’m rated the same as lispy Twist?! I must seriously reassess my life choices.

PaintDrop

Back to RRBB please? What gift do you think be okay for her? Something with crystals? I was thinking a crystal tiara? She likes those, I think. Maybe earrings?

Short&Hoofy

Err... no. Just no. Tiara has family in the Crystal Empire. She's probably got every jewelry there is. Have you seen her with anything else than she usually wears? No. The reason for that is simple: they hold no emotional value. For a really cool gift go unexpected. She'll never admit it, but she loves fluff and girly stuff. No sharp objects, please. I'm a bit scared what she might do with those. (Just kidding, but seriously don't!)

That help?

PaintDrop

I guess. Something fluffy and unexpected... can't be that hard, right?

Short&Hoofy

Why do I feel like I've made a huge mistake? Just one thing...if you hurt her, especially now, I will destroy you.

PaintDrop

If I hurt her, I'll help you do it.

Short&Hoofy

The Gift

Girl, girls!

We all know that the next character will be Euryala, but what about the chapter? From what we know so far she's got some connection to Poseidon (maybe the other deities), also is part of the special corp overseer org. Also she is/will become Blazen's girlfriend (as far as we know).

I think the entire chapter will be her backstory, telling us how she came to be and her connections to everything. I can't wait! :) I'm curious what her relation to the Everprince and Icelos is, oh and Echo. Something tells me this will be the best chapter yet :)

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Well, I think if there's a place the writers will mess up it will be here.:/

Now you know my opinion on Euryala (or OP Sue as I like to call her). She's just too much into everything. Now, I understand what they are trying to do (for those who haven't grasped it yet, S.Child is trying to reunite the franchise establishing a connection between the original and Mistmount Chronicles) but putting everything on two characters (I count Icelos as a sort of attempt) is too much.

There's no way anyone could be so connected! It's like Twilight being also the daughter to a wealthy noble and head of industry, related to Princess Celestia, part of a Tartarus resurgence group, Rarity's maid, and I don't know what not! I really think the writers have written themselves into a corner and for that reason we'll never see her backstory because it will sound ridiculously absurd!

I'll still read it, though (as will everypony on the site, I'm sure) but my expectations are at an all time low.

MixaMax

@MixaMax, @Jade: Someone needs a hug I think. :P

MightyDragon

Hey, it's not as absurd as it sounds. If she is chosen, as the rest are, it's normal that things will happen to her. It's a law of nature. And I'm not talking about some mystical energy (although there's that), but more a matter of visibility.

If you are the last line of defense you'll defend against any threat. Likewise any threat is likely to target you first. If Eury is an ex chosen, that would explain her relation with the gods, as well as those who oppose them (she did fight against them at one point, we assume). Also, with her set of skills it's normal for a powerful organization to recruit her. Think of it as applying to the S.G.U. Or the Wonderbolts. They don't accept just anypony. (Maybe CEOWitch can go into some details here.) As for the maid: keep in mind that Bellucio is the next chosen AND a follower of Poseidon. Of course she'll want to be there (to warm him.)

Finally, Blazen is hot ;) (I think I know someone like that in real life, by the way.)

LightSparkle

O! M! G! Sorry to disrupt the convo, but today's officially the best day of my life! You'll never guess what I got today! (No, I won't even give you the chance!) I got the best gift ever!

[a-net.manashare/GK5473547/R63745]

Isn't it just the cutest thing? Short&Hoofy (love you!!!) for me a crystal armadillo! He's three months old and really d'awwww! I've been smiling like crazy all day at school. Ever the teacher asked if I prefer to go home. Argh! It's so damn cuuute! I'm watching to eat a berry right now.

@Short&Hoofy: I don't know how you thought of that, but it's the best thing! You’re the best! I'll be having a party tomorrow to show it off, so be there or else :P (PaintDrop was so jelly when she saw it. :))) And she wasn't the only one.)

RRBB

@RRBB: Jealous is a strong word... it's really cute, though. You'll let me play with it, right? I just need to finish homework and stuff, and I'll be right over. We could also invite Short (being the one who actually gave it to you).

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Sorry, not tonight. I want it all to myself! Plus, my parents are freaking out a bit, as usual :/ "it's a huge responsibility?" "how will it affect your studies?" "are you capable of such commitment?"

It's as if I'm an idiot. And they've done a fine job raising me I can tell you that. :/ Just look what a wreck I've turned out to be... Anyway, today's a no go. Tomorrow, though, all stops are off :) (My parents won't be here, so you can brings colts for all I care.)

RRBB

@MixaMax: sound like a repeat of SweetStuff's party... :/

PaintDrop

Does anypony know when DarkSparkle will be online? I need to talk with her.

Twist

@RRBB: I'm not letting Short go to such a wild event! Or without me there to make sure everything is fine and proper! :P

@Twist: No idea :( Haven't seen her a lot last few days.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: No way, grandma! :P Don't you have Jade to keep you busy? (Or maybe you can't handle him, eh? There's no shame in admitting that. It happens to older mares!)

@Short&Hoofy: Oh, so sorry about the kiss in class :( I was really surprised when you gave me the present and it was an immediate reaction. I honestly didn't mean anything by it.

RRBB

@RRBB: Don't worry, I didn't mind.

Short&Hoofy

@RRBB: I love those! They really are incredibly cute! And you for a violet one too! Short has great taste (and a huge checkbook :)). Don't go wild at the party, though. Armadillos go crazy when there's loud music.

@Twist: Dark has some important business she's dealing with. I think she'll be back later today or tomorrow. Try sending her a PM if you haven't already.

LightSparkle

I'm awake! Thanks all for the wishes (you keep exploding my scrollbox, you know. Tech has had to change the code twice :P) Guess I'm that much closer to graduating.

@RRBB: Aww! I'm so envious. @Bob, can we get one? Please :)

@PrinceEric: hmm. I think it won't be that simple. Euryala is everywhere, but there's no way all her backstory could be explained in one chapter. I think we'll just see her day to day life.

Be well, everyone! Exciting times are ahead.

LyraHands

@REBB: Who’re you calling old?!?

MixaMax

Shipping Wars

I know I'm new here, but what do you think the best pairing should be? I've heard (and read) many pairings... I expect all of them are considered possible, but am really curious what the Nightling consensus is.

I, personally, love the idea of Eric and humanized Caprice. They seem like such a sweet couple you just can't do anything but d'awww. Karl and Cassandra are a close second, though.

Your thoughts?

DaBoss

Here we go again...

Danny is worst humie! :P

CEOWitch

@DaBoss: Congrats! You marched into a fiery swamp! That said, there isn't exactly a consensus among the Nightlings (or anypony else for that matter). In general, pones consider everything with Danny or Eric good. After that it's mostly based on popular fanfics (since S&S will never commit to ships, outside the mythical one true ship, a.k.a. Blayala). Eric x Caprice (all versions) is a popular one, as well as Megan x Cassandra. Molly x Bellucio was popular in the early days but has lost steam (maybe because Molly is finally a developed character, not a tag along). And then there are the M-M ships which seem to obsess this fandom. In general pick any combo and you're fine.

Are you planning to write something?

MixaMax

Heya, all!

Well, I'm finally back! Sorry for the long delay, but I just had such a wonderful time going about Equestria that Nightling matters were but on the back burner. For those of you who don't know, Candle is the absolute best. She deserves a human OC! :)

Going back to the topic at hand (ha, ha! I actually said that a few times, and got weird looks) Danny x anything is good (with the exception the sibling ships. :/ Those are just awful, and I don't buy into the "adopted theory" that some authors use to escape that.)

My favourite at present is Danny x Cassandra (I don't know why, but she's grown on me. I blame Bob! :))

DannyFan

@DannyFan: Yo! Missed you, pone! :) Where have you been? I sent a hundred PMs (I know because I get blocked if I send fifty per hour :P) Cool that you're doing well, and you won't believe the stuff that's been happening in MCE! (Well if you've read them you will :P)

And yes! Eric x Danny best ship forever! :)

PrinceEric

@DaBoss: As somepony who's written a number of Danny ships, I can say Danny is the most shipable character. I know what everyone will say, but that's pretty much an established fact. The reason is that he's the central character (despite the series writers claiming otherwise) and that's precisely why he's made in such a way so as to get along with everyone else (take that as you will).

On a related note...
Will you stop with the incest stories already! That's the most boringly disgusting thing there is! I say this as somepony who has written my share of suggestive stuff! Seriously, please stop! Danny is NOT adopted or replaced, and even if he were it would still be gross! If you so much want to write such trash there are other sites on the aethernet! I'm pretty sure Lyra will back me that this isn't what we want the site to become!

On a unrelated note... Pixel is so darn cute! (To quote WaterBottle:)) Last night he sneaked into my bed and fell asleep on the pillow. And the morning, he did the most adorable yawn. (I'm still upset I couldn't grab my camera fast enough to take a picture.) Party remains for tonight, just: no strangers and no loud music! (I read that crystal armadillos get stressed easily by cacophony.)

RRBB

@RRBB: I'm not sure I'll make it tonight... Max is a bit ill and I need to help out.

Short&Hoofy

@mods: I agree with RRBB on this. Maybe update the rules and add a few additional requirements for submission? I mean we already don't allow illegal things, but I think we should move to not allow some of the questionable ones as well? This site is just too good to get messed up (and trust me I've seen some pretty messed up sites.)

@DaBoss: well, the only consensus is that ships are good. I like pretty much any ship if it's written well enough. (My guilty pleasure is well written crack ships. :))

LightSparkle

Aww! That's what I wanted to talk to DarkSparkle about :( There are a few canon ships that are so obvious, but she still doesn't believe me. Blazen x Euryala at this point is a certainty. Also, I have a feeling that Megan x Everprince might be as well. That would be so interesting since it will break up the main cast (at least for a while.)

I've no idea what to make of Echo, although there are already a ton of ship fics with her.

@LightSparkle: what do you think about Icelos x Euryala? Shards of Joy and Despair is such a nice fic that explores that! I just love it :)

Twist

@Short&Hoofy: I'm fine! Shoo, go have fun! Plus, I have Jade to take care of me. *flittering eyelashes*

MixaMax

Greetings, everyone!

@all: I agree that it's better to have some higher standards, even if that costs us users. At the end of the day, we are here because of our love of Midnight Castle. Living out our fantasies is okay as long as we don't go too far.

I shall discuss this matter with the other mods and tell you of our decision.

The TechNightling

@RRBB: I'm so there! And I'll bring my camera. I read that they like strawberries, so I'll bring some. I still can't believe how well behaved Pixel is. RRBB brought it to class again, and it mostly remained quietly on her desk for the most part. I ever caught the teacher looking at it secretly while we were doing exercises :P (And let's not forget SweetStuff and WaterBottle almost faint when it yawned.)

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Did not!

WaterBottle

@MixaMax, @Short&Hoofy: Unfortunately... Don't worry, I can cook well enough for one night. Do have fun with your friends.

Max, if you're only doing that to get pampered, I'll... guess I'll pamper you. *sigh*

Jade

@DaBoss: I'm not particularly picky ;) (As long as it's legal and appropriate, of course :))

@MixaMax: I like your style :)

InItForTheShipping

@all: We're discussing a new submission policy, please hold off your submissions until then.

I want to stress that I absolutely agree! I prefer us going back to having 500 registered users than 3178 spammers of highly questionable content. I'm not a curator, but even I have seen things that make my stomach turn :(

Also, please don't think that if you make a second account through a mana filter we won't notice. Having additional accounts is okay, as long as you use them adequately. Please don't make me put in place a request-for-additional-accounts policy.

LyraHands

The Third Sparkle

Euryala

Sorceress, betrayed, former chosen

Before the rise of the Everprince, Euryala was one of the chosen. A follower of Poseidon, her task was to root out all corruption before it reached his realm. Her devotion was so great that she never saw the betrayal, especially when committed by the one she loved.

Place of birth: Olympus
Occupation: Warlockwing
Hobby: Drawing
Mentor deity: formerly Poseidon
Magic power: Quintessence
Eternity gem: encaser

"I gave you my heart and you used it against me."

And now we have all the main cast. Terrible miniature, by the way... I have no idea what they were thinking when doing that. :/ Luna, explanations, please?

@PaintDrop: Maybe you can make something? Haven't heard about your miniatures for a while. Are you quitting on us, filly? :(

Back to speculation. Nothing really new here. We already suspected that Eury was a chosen, we knew she had a score to settle with Poseidon. I'm really not sure that he was her lover, though. I mean, it is written in such a way to suggest it, but maybe that's the point? Either way tomorrow's scroll will clear up things. Sadly, I'll take the role of Max and say that I'm skeptical. There are far too many questions for a Euryala chapter to make sense.

RRBB

@RRBB: I had to take Max to the hospital last night. She's fine, but she got some nasty stomach infection so will have to remain there for a few days. :(

@MasterOfThisAstra: please tell the dean that I'll be missing a week.

Jade

@Jade: ouch :( Hope she gets better soon. Ping me if you need any help of anything. I've had that a lot when I was a filly and it's not fun. (And to happen on your visit too... :( )

LyraHands

@Jade: What the hay?! That sucks big time! :( Is it okay for us to visit her? We can trot by after school and such.

RRBB

Thanks for the offer, but I'm dealing with this. Max is just exhausted as a result of her stupid stubbornness and needs lots of rest and dry foods. I'll be with her the whole time, so no need for all of you to come. When she's in condition for visitors I'll let you know.

Also, knowing her she'll be mad her condition became the topic of discussion.

Jade

@Jade: I can understand that. Good luck, and we're a message away.

@Short&Hoofy: Are you okay? You seemed a bit quiet yesterday?

RRBB

@RRBB: You could have just asked her during break, you idiot :P

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: So I care about a friend than more than I care about geography! Sue me! :/

RRBB

@RRBB: I'm fine, but will be getting myself checked after school.

Short&Hoofy

@Short&Hoofy: Cool. Paint and I will tag along if that's okay. I'll even let you carry Pixel.

RRBB

Max always had a weak stomach (literally speaking) :/

Back to my favorite humie. Pretty much what I suspected. Only difference was that I was almost sure that she was Poseidon's daughter (with a titan mother).

Also, interesting stone she has. Encaser... being encased. Keeping in mind the theme of Everhere is reality, I think that this might be something that blocks/freezes reality? That might explain how only she of the former chosen is still around... unless Icelos also is one. In any event I think we'll have a fun chapter.

@RRBB: How was the party? Usually, when someone doesn't brag about it...well I just hope all is well, let's say.

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: omg! You gave me the greatest idea ever! What if it's not just her that's part of the original/old chosen? Think about it! Euryala is confirmed, but what if Icelos, Echo, the Everprince and maybe even Cerberus were as well?

Having a reality mess up so that the Cerberus triplets become one is possible. Or maybe there was just one and the shatterstone permanently split him into three? That makes two males, two females (if we assume the Everprince is male).

Ooooh! I'm so excited about this! Having the new chosen learn about the old chosen AND the event that caused reality to break! Maybe it created the corruption as well? I no longer know who is good and who is evil... :D

PrinceEric

@LightSparkle: Nah, the party was great, I just didn't want to go into it so close to a MCE spoiler ;) What can I say? There were drinks, there were colts... just kidding :P (well, there were, but it was mostly classy). Paint got herself a new hoofacure and manestyle before the event so she got all the colts "suddenly" want to talk to her. *snrk*

@SweetStuff: I'm still slightly mad at you! But damn are you manipulative! :) (She wrote and performed a Danny Saga song at the event) You totally should record that, by the way.

@Octavia: Are you listening? :)

RRBB

I have nothing to explain to you, filly! :P

TheRealLuna

@RRBB, @SweetStuff: A new song? I want to hear it! @Luna, any chance we can make a fan album? I know getting a deal with S&S is impossible, but maybe some license permission or such?

Sorry I can't get into the Euryala discussion, but am at work. :(

LyraHands

@RRBB: Sorry... she just asked and I couldn't say no, and I thought...

@LyraHands: It's nothing that good. I'm just glad that RRBB liked it.

SweetStuff

@RRBB: Please :/ It's not like I planned this. I just thought it's time I became mindful of my appearance. I don't want to ruin your image, or Sweet's for that matter.

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: Ha! Ain't that the biggest pile of horse crap! No way you were walking all fancy-like just for fun. And those silver horseshoes? Please :P

WaterBottle

Hi, hi!

Long time lurker, I finally decided to join in. (If only to argue with a few members :P) Have no fear, though. I'll be positive. I just think that @LightSparkle is so wrong it's not even funny! >:D

And with that I must vanish again. (Stupid homework assignments :/) Before I go, though, you girls (and guys) really are the best. Have been following your stories and posts non-stop since Dark told me about this place. :)

More tomorrow!

TrueSparkle

Bring it on, sister! ;)

LightSparkle

Distant Brush PMs

Sugar wings, everything okay? I know you told me you’re saving Equestria, but it’s almost been a week and I really, really, really miss you :( Will you be getting back soon? I’m really lonely without you.

I’m back to school. Things seem so different somehow. I can’t believe what I used to worry about a few months ago. Same with my parents. I finally got the courage and had a serious talk with them. Turns out I could pretty much do what I want. I wouldn’t say that all my life has been wasted not doing things because I feared they’d get mad, but there’s some regret I didn’t do some of the crazier stuff others have.

Let me know how when you'll be back.

Ear nibbles,

MasterOfThisAstra

Sorry, Hooftoy :( Things are complicated. This isn't a one day thing as I thought it would be. A close friend got hurt badly and I won't be able to fly for a week. :( Good thing I don't do too much of that, eh :)

I miss you too. Every moment I think about you, even when I sleep I dream of you. Just be patient a little longer. I'll visit once we get this over with.

Brush

I find the perfect mare and she turns out too perfect :( Each time I know you go out risking your life I fear the worst. Sending you nuzzles and nibbles.

MasterOfThisAstra

*hugs you so tight that you need kisses to breathe*

Let's talk of other things. How have things been going on the site? I still cry when I think how Max and Jade got engaged. So sweet.

Brush

Yes, I never thought of him being so impulsive. He didn't even tell me until after the thing. I doubt he'll share it to anypony, but he stormed in my room drunk that evening, literally chased my roommate out, locked the door, and told me all about it. (I'd never seen him even lick alcohol before!)

For two hours he went on and on how lucky he was and that he never dreamt anymare would go so far for him. Don't tell Max, but the engagement horseshoe she spent all her savings on was, well cheap by our standards. The gesture was appreciated by both Jade and his parents, though, to the point that he's actually been wearing it ever since.

MasterOfThisAstra

At least that's one happy story, I managed to read what happened to RRBB :( Poor thing. I always knew she had problems with others, but now that I know the reason, I feel sad. If only she'd told me... or anypony things could have been so different. I don't envy PaintDrop. She's a really good friend, but she's been subjected to a lot.

Brush

Sis is fine. She's tougher than she looks (and she looks quite tough). My father send me a letter about her just this yesterday. He's worried that she isn't showing any interest in colts. I've been asked to talk to her on the matter. I really can't imagine that. Can you? Scoop is definitely not as innocent or naive as my parents seem to think. I'm tempted to show them her drawings.

MasterOfThisAstra

Hooftoy... :) Just because she draws the things she does doesn't mean she isn't innocent. She'll have her crushes. And to be honest, I have no idea what she'd go for. She's strong so maybe she'd go for someone as delicate as Jade? Or possibly she'll prefer someone as strong as her? Time will tell. I still think you should have that talk, though. She'll appreciate it even if she laughs in your face.

Brush

Aren't you getting philosophical. Is something the matter? Usually you're aren't like this when things are fine. Are you in any danger? Stupid question. Of course you're in danger, but do you think there's a chance that...?

MasterOfThisAstra

Hooftoy, there's always a danger. Just don't think about it. I've been fine. I have a lot of very good friends to protect me should anything happen. And I have you :)

Brush

That you do. Actually, I was thinking. What about getting married when I graduate? I know you don't like to be rushed, but everypony else is doing it (literally). There's still quite some time till then, but I think it's time we start discussing this...and future foals O;)

MasterOfThisAstra

Mota! I'm on a mission! Don't make me get all weird! Now I'll need to ask for a unicorn spell to concentrate again :/ You're an evil, evil tempter, you know that? :P

We've talked about this. I'm not sure I'm ready to get married so soon. I love you, stars do I love you, but I was thinking of having a few more years just to us, you know? I'm not saying we won't get married, just maybe not right this instant?

Brush

That's what you said last time...

MasterOfThisAstra

Hey, sweetness, you know I'll do anything for you. I'll even walk about town in my Molly costume if I have to. I just am not sure that's what either of us want. We miss each other and that's bound to make you think that if we don't get married you'd lose me, but you won't. I'll always be here for you. Always.

Brush

Unless some monster eats you up :/

MasterOfThisAstra

No monster could keep me from you. You know that. I'll be back soon. I'll come visit and make you forget all your fears. Then in a few years we'll marry and will have the best foals ever. ;)

Brush

Okay...

I found a publisher for our book. So far they love it. They have requested a few changes, though. Apparently, dragons are a big thing in fiction now. Asked if we could add one among the Griffins. To be honest, I don't think you need to. They're just considering how to market you best. I expect a deal in a month, maybe less.

MasterOfThisAstra

Only because you made it happen! *snuggles* :) I must go. Things are about to become complicated again.

Be well, Hooftoy!

Brush

Ton of kisses, sweet wings (and a few licks for good measure ;P)

MasterOfThisAstra

You're terrible! :P

Brush

Reality Geeks

Midnight Castle: Everhere, Vol 7, Chapter 9, Euryala

Wow is this insane! When I started reading, I expected one of the popular theories: Euryala is Poseidon's ex-lover or something (we already know she was the first follower, so unlike she's his daughter). Then everything went huh?!

Sorry for my rants here and there :)

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We start with Euryala having a conversation with Poseidon. In the future. (Wait, what?!) Apparently, the Everprince has risen and the deities gave called for a truce with the corporations (huh?!) to face that threat. No mention if the grand9 at this point, only Euryala. There've agreed to a truce (despite the unforgivable thing that Poseidon has done). Euryala receives a ruby fragment with assurances that's all Poseidon has. Blazen then storms in (in the temple?) and says they must go.

So far a hundred lines and I'm completely clueless.

We are presented with a dark version of Mistmount in which the Everprince has gained control of reality. Everything is in decay, everyone is fighting these walking suits of armor, with only the "vassalized" allowed to live a normal life. We have the typical underground rebellion thing with them fighting the nights. Turns out that Danny is loyal to the Everprince, Bellucio is missing, Karl and Megan gave done on a mission, and Eric has closed the portals to keep the Everprince trapped.

Molly arrives with Omni and Icelos, and they start talking about the "pieces". (This is one of the minor let downs I have. Initially I was convinced they were part of the crown. When I learned what they really were for... I went bleh :( ) Euryala speculates the final stone is on the crown, so they coordinate a massive way to storm the Everprince's stronghold (some factory?!) and claim it.

Already things are wonky. I admit the factory makes sense on the reread, but other things still sound strange.

There's a huge (very well written) preparation and battle scene with various characters facing various enemies until we get to the final conflict. While everyone is fighting, Euryala sneaks into the treasury to find the Everprince waiting for her. It turns out that they know each other. There's an exchange of blows and cheesy dialogue, at the end of which the Everprince offers her a choice: the Ruby fragment or the evergem. Euryala picks the Ruby and it turns out that that is part of her (literally) shattered heart. She then uses Blazen's stone to make a reality clone of herself destroying reality (?!?).

We are then taken to some ancient setting in which Euryala must complete her trials to be chosen by Poseidon as her favorite. There's some tension (again great combat scenes) but she wins (of course) and us sent to the "chosen candidates". There as she relaxes, she has a conversation with another of the chosen, in which she explains she's seen the future and his time she went really far ahead and knows what to do. The other tells her not to mess up, at which point it's revealed it's Bellucio (?!?!?!?). And then Bellucio wakes up in the present day... and the chapter ends!!!

I mean there are cliffhangers, but this!

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Hey, no sweat. Since the key thing is reality, the story just follows some reality-continuum principles, and damn does it follow them well. I'm really curious who's writing this. They must have an academic on stall. @DarkSparkle, can you look into this? :)

For all unfamiliar with the theory, here as a few pointers:

1) Getting into contact with your reality clone can create a paradox which destroyed reality (the theory is that it does a hard reset to the first safe point)

2) Eury's power is to create a reality bubble, thus she remembers everything that has happened in any reality, even if it's destroyed. (Quite clever trick :))

3) Everything considered as part of Eury is subject to this bubble. (You mixed up the heart thing, Prince. Eury put it in herself in her self battle so she could transport it to her past state (apparently her past is considered the safe point).

I must admit that I'm stumped with Bellucio being there. Maybe he's been there all along and everything else is fake? Maybe he got put there through some reality changing power? Or maybe Euryala brought him there (curious why she kept pretending to be his maid in Chronicles)

All in all, I loved the science! Best chapter yet!

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: pfft! I don't know about the theory, but things just don't work like that in practice. (You rely on theory as much as Dark.)

It's obvious that the writers knew something about magic, but academics or not they messed up big time. There's no account for mnemonic artifacts after a paradox split. If Eury didn't have any protection (even if we assume she's a goddess / titan) she would at least add reality fatigue. Not to mention the butterfly effect as a result of knowing everything,

Personally I think that everything could have been explained much better with a dream simulation (both Icelos and Molly are dreamwalkers so they could easily have made a prophecy prediction model.)

TrueSparkle

Bleh! Geeks! :P

RRBB

@TrueSparkle: Don't put your ignorance on display, little girl. I deal with practical field tested theory. You clearly missed the mention of the reality bubble. It IS the shield. There'd be no mnemonic or physiological artifacts because Euryala has it. If she hadn't, it would have been a whole different matter altogether.

Another thing, the Everprince was in a power plant, not a factory. Huge difference since Eury could have used the power for her ability. (Which means that the Everprince needs large quantities of mana as well.)

LightSparkle

Wow! Even I am lost.

PaintDrop

Actually, things would be simpler, if the reality created was a bubble reality that Euryala created to explore and obtain parts of her heart. That way she wouldn't suffer any hazardous effects, since the true reality wouldn't be damaged. It would also explain how Bellucio was in the past and the present.

Simile

@Simile: Hmm. Never thought of that. Good theory :)

@LightSparkle: You're still a cow!

TrueSparkle

Wow, girls! That brings me back to school! Fascinating stuff. However, what about the aether buildup? Surely, creating reality bubbles would produce waste. What happens to that?

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: please don't embarrass yourself. ;) For small amounts of waste, reality dissipates before there could be a buildup. It would take over a thousands bubbles at the same time to create any significant problem and if that had happened the deities would have noticed, don't you think? :)

CodeFilly

Locking this thread before you scare everypony away with your geekiness.

CodeFilly is right, though. There's no way for reality waste to be a thing in MCE. For one thing it would have affected the portals, as we've seen how sensitive they are.

LyraHands

Reality has been licked!

MightyDragon

Birthday Wishes

Lyra Handstrings

Musician, Magician, Magnificent

Born in Canterlot, the heart of Equestria, Lyra's life changed as she discovered a portal to Midnight Castle hidden in a scroll of coltfiction. The experience changed her completely, causing her to open her own aether portal and share the experience with others.

Siblings: none
Place of birth: Canterlot
Occupation: Fanfiction Goddess
Hobby: Licking threads
Mentor Deity: Celestia
Magic Power: Aether Metal
Eternity gem: Herself

"Girls, please stahp!"

Happy birthday, you crazy thing! I was thinking if doing something more, but work intervened and you're stuck with this silly post. Promise I'll make it up at dinner tonight ;)

Bob

My stars! It was today? I'm so forgetful! :(

@LyraHands: Happy birthday, you goof! I know you hate these things as much as I do (yeah, I'm antisocial. Lyra just hates reminders she's getting old :P) so I won't mention it too much.

Have fun and be May your dream come true :)

CodeFilly

You mean we won't be giving that mega expensive gift after all? Do I get to keep it? Do I?! :)

@LyraHands: happy birthday, old girl. May you roll a critical success on luck this year and may you get lots of pleasant surprise loot encounters.

MightyDragon

Dear Lyra,

I would like to thank you for all the wonderful things you've done, regardless the toll they've had on you. You really are a remarkable mare and anypony who claims otherwise has no taste. If you'd forgive this old stallion, I'd say I could only dream of having a mare such as you become my daughter in law. May you be forever happy and always have twice as many the good things in your life outweigh the bad.

I know it isn't much, but I've bought you a little something. It should arrive via courier in about a week. Until then, take care and keep being wonderful!

The TechNightling

Well, since you'll obviously be busy tonight, I'd like to invite you (and a plus one) to a private soirée at the palace. It won't be much, but you'll get a chance to meet S.Child. (Yes, I've told them a fair deal about you and they will be thrilled to exchange a few words.)

Other than that, let me know if anypony causes you any trouble and I'll see what I could do to make their life miserable, okay? ;)

-Bellucio

And also a big happy birthday from me! Hope you like rum cake! I'll be sending you some today via express courier.

Luna

Well, I will be sending you nice dreams!

TheRealLuna

@LyraHands: Max is still in hospital but we wish you the best. If I'd had known I'd have bought you something from the Empire, but as it stands that will have to wait for next week :(

Sorry, I hope the wishes of fun and fortune from these two idiots will be enough till then ;)

You're an inspiration to us all.

Jade

I second that. And I'm sure that Paint is already busy making a life size stature of humanize do you. (Spoilers ;))

Brush will wish you her best if she were here.

MasterOfThisAstra

@LyraHands: Be sure to look at the sky at precisely 15:00, okay? ;)

CEOWitch

@LyraHands: Happy birthday, you magnificent mare! (I have a confession to make... I started reading your site and feel terribly guilty for not doing so earlier.)

I'll be there to wave with Soarin at 3.

Fleetfoot

@LyraHands: Why don't you ever tell me these things?!? :/

Kidding. Did you think I'd forget your birthday? :) The first and I have gathered together and decided on a gift for you. I'd love to say what it is, but Tech will ban me if I do :P let me just say that it costs a lot of money and will make Bob as happy as it would make you :)

Nah, kidding again. You'll love the gift, though! Happy bday on behalf of:

PaintDrop, Short&Hoofy, SweetStuff, Twist, WaterBottle, YouKnowWho, and myself! You rock, mare!

RRBB

@RRBB: I'm afraid to ask...

CEOWitch

Lyyyyyyrrrrrraaaaaa!

I can't believe it! Aww, we should have made the meetup on your birthday! Let's do it next time, can we? Oh please, please, please!

I don't know what to say that everypony hasn't. Just keep doing what you do and enjoy life? I'm a bit too young to give advice, really. You're already so much better in that area than me! :)

May the site reach 1000000 users this year!

PrinceEric

Umm, happy birthday :) I've tried to make a little something to celebrate the occasion (Tech told me the day in advance). It's just a hat I made in my spare time. I hope it suits you.

Candle

Way to go, Lyra! The wife sends hugs! :)

Lurkling

Err, Lyra is off delivering mail, but... I'll surprise her with a day off when she returns. I'd like to see the look on her face. Note, she hasn't had a chance to read any of the messages (she forgot her hoofheld at the office.)

@LyraHands: Here's my gift to you: a day off on whenever you choose. (Not counting today :))

DaBoss

@LyraHands: Ack! Girl, why do you keep those things secret? If it were me I'd have announcements all over the site! Sheesh, you really are as careless as I remember :P

Money's a bit tight right now (moved to a new place) but I'll think of something.

@Bob: you made a small mistake there. I think her hobby is hands only :P

LightSparkle

@LyraHands: Hmm... I can think of something O:) I'll send you a PM. All I can say is that I think it's something you've always wanted ;)

InItForTheShipping

@LyraHands: Nooooo! Just three more days and I would have been in Ponyville (surprise business trip). Guess I'll give mine then.

Lots of fun and magic! And have a great year!

Simile

@LyraHands: of course you'd pick the worst day to be born! :/ Happy bday, partymare! I'll try to send some champagne your way. :)

TrueSparkle

@all: I don't know what to say... :~) Thanks is hardly enough, but... I really get all emotional when this sort of thing happens. I'm sure there are a thousand ways any of you would respond, but all I can think of is "I love you all!"

Guess that shows why I'm not a writer, huh?

I'm touched. Deeply... but... sorry I really can't write. Tears are falling all over the screen. I never thought this would happen. Not after everything that's happened these last few years. Thank you for being here for me.

LyraHands

Rumors 4

Girls! I'm not sure how true this is, but I heard that someone from the MC writing staff retired (due to family issues). Details are sketchy, but this is enormous! What do you think this means for the series?

I'm worried there could be a change in direction. I love Chronicles and I adore Everhere, but Most of the original is too... old :( (Sorry Tech). There are descriptions of objects that existed before I was born. If there's a return to that series or if it's some entirely new direction... I'm afraid it might be too different from what it is now. :(

@Luna: Can you tell us anything about that?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: You charmed another filly, didn't you? You're outright scary sometimes!

You're worrying for nothing, though. I'll ask my father what he can find out, but staff changes are quite common in the industry. Writers come and go, some leave, change projects, or start their own thing. There's nothing alarming about it. For one thing I'm pretty sure the first arc of Everhere is written. The second arc is either entirely done as well or almost. And even if a writer leaves mid volume there's an entire team lead by a lead writer (S.Child).

Now that's explained, you've becoming like Max. :P Next I expect you to start grumbling that something will cause the end of the series.

RRBB

RRBB is indeed quite accurate. Furthermore, don't forget the publisher. They have a lot of interest for their product to be as accessible as possible. On the whole, things would likely remain the same.

Slightly off topic, Max is out of hospital and now recuperating at her home. She wishes you all hi and wants you to know that she suspected that would happen all along. "The series ended with volume 5!" The rest is unintelligible.

Jade

@Jade: You sure are pampering her well. Short said she's never seen her sis so calm. ;) By the way, have some pics for you. Not sure they are what you wanted, but I think they fit your story well.

PaintDrop

@PrinceEric: Technically, I'm not allowed to comment, but I can say that you have nothing to worry about. I can also say that there will be a new addition to the team (expect an announcement tomorrow.)

@MixaMax: good to know you are well and being pampered :)

Luna

Writers who displease me are sent to the moooooon!

TheRealLuna

I know it's a bit soon, but what do you think of organizing a second meetup? As you know MCE is huge in the Crystal Empire and it would be quite easy to get support for such an event. Our numbers still aren't enough for a convention, but it say wee half way there and could organize a weekend event here.

@Luna: I'd love to coordinate with you on getting this rolling and inviting staff, fans, and the site regulars. What do you think?

InItForTheShipping

@InItForTheShipping: I'd need to hear details, but I don't see why not. Send me a PM.

Luna

@RRBB: I hope you're right. I just get anxious sometimes. Anyway, ignore me. I just find it yard one if the writers would leave. I'm sure you're right and there are reasons, but it still hurts a bit... I'm just weird :(

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: You're not weird, you're deeply sensitive and you'll make somepony very happy someday.

I know, I've used your character in a few stories and have hidden massive support. (Don't be trying to find out, you jerks! It's under an alt :P)

RRBB

Wow, this has been some day! I get a high enough grade in class to skip a test, I think I started a relationship (guy's cute and clueless, just like I like them), Dark's package with all Midnight Castle books finally arrived (I love reading paper), and another magnificent thing happened which I cannot share at the moment. :)

Things haven't been so good since... Well, ever!

@InItForTheShipping: That would be so cool! I'm there 100%. Just please wake it a weekend. I don't want to miss more classes than I should (and summer vacation is so far away).

@PrinceEric: Don't worry, little charmer. Everything will be fine :)

LightSparkle

@all: Hello, Nightlings!

It's time for a few announcements.

We've revised the rules for submission, so please check them out. Everything should be clear, but if you think it isn't ask a curator or us (in that order).

Thanks to the generous support of Luna, we now have three servers storing stories, songs, and pictures, so adds won't be appearing anytime soon. In addition, we've added emoticon functionality, so you can vote on your favourite works (similar to standard voting, but adds a bit more uniqueness). It's still experimental, so bear with us.

With that I wish you a great day, and to Max a long and enjoyable "sickness". :)

The TechNightling

Did Tech smile just now?!?

RRBB

Sounds fishy to me. Maybe somepony has hacked his account? I say we take no chances.

PaintDrop

What up, posers? :) Cool peace you gave here :D Kidding, just kidding.

I must confess I've never read the series (and don't intend to), but some of the fics you girls did are way wicked! @Brush, @Simile you are my *yay* heroines! I'd be lying if I didn't say you changed my life. The rest of you are also cool, but those two... wow.

Well, that was it. See you around. I'll be here to pester you from now on :D

Edit: you have a *yay* filter? That's so lame it's *yay* cool! :P

Feather

@all: Remember how I said thank you yesterday? I take it back...

...and say it again a thousandfold stronger! There are no words to describe the gifts I got so far! They range from incredible to literally unbelievable! All the time effort and bits you put into that, I just...

@RRBB & co, you got me a bucking Silvarius Harp! I didn't even know those things were on sale!

@MasterOfThisAstra, @PaintDrop: a life size statue of me?!? Bob got a heart attack when I opened the package. You literally made me be inside the magic!

@CEOWitch, @Fleetfoot, @Lurkling: I can't believe what you did! Seriously! Way to get me crying on the street :) Love you, you crazies!

@InItForTheShipping: Thank you... just thank you. There's nothing else I could possibly say...

Now this silly mare is going to spend a while crying into Bob's mane.

Thank you, all! Thank you!

LyraHands

Minor Complication PMs

Hello.

YouKnowWho

Hey, I said hello!

YouKnowWho

What? :/

RRBB

I heard from the girls that you added me to the gift list for Lyra. Thanks. I know you didn't need to...or have to.

YouKnowWho

So? Lyra's cool and deserves it. Just because you're a *yay* *yay* doesn't mean she should feel bad about it!

RRBB

You remember our talk, right? Or did your massive ego block your ears?! I don't swing that way! If this is an attempt into guilt tripping me, it won't work and we'll both get hurt again. So in future, when you decide to pull something like this ask me first.

I don't know if what you did was nice or creepy, but after everything's gone through between us... just... I don't know, it feels weird.

YouKnowWho

Look, it's not all about you, okay? Sheesh! And ponies call me self centered :/ You seriously think I could forget our *yay* talk?!? You shattered my heart then stuffed the pieces into my brain through my nostrils!

RRBB

Why did you add me to the gift list then?!?

YouKnowWho

You *yay* *yay* idiot! Should I spell it out for you? I still love you, you *yay*!

I know you don't and nothing can come out of it, but I still love you! Even after everything! Trust me, I wish I didn't, but I do! Why do you think I moved away from you in class? Or that I try not to talk at you anymore? I look at you and a stupid part of my mind imagines what could have been. You're the topic of 95% of my therapy sessions! So, please stop yelling at me when there's no reason to! Celestia knows you can thing a million others!

*yay* *yay* *yay*!

RRBB

Well, it's not like I can do anything about it!

And stop *yay* yaying!

YouKnowWho

Oh... profanity filter.

YouKnowWho

Yeah, Tech added it when he came back. You get used to it. There was a discussion about having it as a removable option, but he said no. He's old fashioned that way.

RRBB

Yeah.

YouKnowWho

You write well, by the way. Not sure I told you.

YouKnowWho

You did.

RRBB

And just when I thought we’d resolved things. Life's never easy, eh?

YouKnowWho

Well at least you didn't have your heart torn out.

RRBB

Nope, I tore it out myself. Think best friend falling for your crush type of thing.

YouKnowWho

What the *yay*?! I didn't even know you had a crush! When did this happen?

RRBB

Not going into that. It's in the past anyway.

You think you'll be okay? With the therapy thing I mean. I did some aethernet searching and being you isn't as rare as it is. In most places ponies just don't talk about it.

YouKnowWho

If you're telling me "there are more apples in the orchard," I'll buck you so hard, you'd be able to fly five times across Equestria, even in your condition!

If it were that simple, I'd have done it! Not that I actually know anypony who is! Well, maybe I know a few, but I'm not moving to the Crystal Empire just for that. And I have been to the sites you mentioned. Most of them were put up by losers. A few are outright scams.

Edit: That wasn't right. They aren't losers, just people who can't figure things out. Pretty much like me, but at least I don't go making a pity sight about it!

RRBB

Right.

YouKnowWho

Yeah.

RRBB

Sorry about all mean stuff. I always had it for you. Now that we're a safe distance from each other I might as well tell you.

I’ve liked you since I got my cutie mark. Stars what a jerk I was back then. I wanted to impress everypony so I did my best to humiliate you every chance I got. I just wanted to get your attention. And I did. Then puberty hit and things got worse.

I still read my early stories. My therapist says it's a necessary step. I've no idea why. From what I read she should be encouraging me to put them in the past, but the amount of money my parents are paying I might as well listen. And I still like it. Damn, you're beautiful, you know that? Really, really beautiful.

RRBB

Are you hitting on me? O.o

YouKnowWho

A mare can dream. Don't take that away from me...

No, just commenting. I'm not a creep! Do I look like a creep?! You just are. One of the cosmic jokes the universe likes to play.

I still catchmy father crying secretly, by the way. Guess in his mind I was supposed to be the perfect tool to help him close some business merger. So much for that now.

Edit: i didn't mean to say that. He's not that bad. I guess everypony would react that way when they find that their filly is... Heck I would! That's one of the bad things about being gay—no foals. I guess magic and medicine have gone far, but... meh. I really was looking forward to having some. Sky knows that Pixel has been preparing me for the job.

RRBB

Are you drunk? Did you sleep at all?

YouKnowWho

This week? Sure I got a few hours.

Just messing with you :) At times I jump between thought without making sense. Beats thinking about you all the time.

RRBB

Yeah. Well... I'll be heading off to bed. Club meeting tomorrow. Thanks again for adding me to the gift list.

YouKnowWho

Stay on the site, okay? No reason to go just because things got messed up. We can still talk. Sort of. Right?

RRBB

Right?

RRBB

Message by RRBB has been deleted.

Sleep well, you jerk :)

RRBB

Speculator7

Aww, mare! I totally forgot about Lyra's birthday! :( Argh! Sorry, girl. Promise I'll make it up to you. Just give me till the weekend okay?

@LyraHands: Wait! You have the weekend free, right?

HopHop

@HopHop: Now she does :P

DaBoss

@DaBoss: Aww! Why can't I gave a boss like you? :) Doughnuts sometime? We can even drag @CodeFilly out of her lair.

HopHop

@all: So sorry for vanishing like that :( Had some very urgent work and had to deal with it. Thankfully, it's all over now and everypony's alright, so I'll get back to reading, writing, and approving.

@LyraHands: Happy birthday. Best wishes and a glorious future! Sorry I couldn't say that in person, but I'll be passing by today (and have an encyclopedia with your name on it :)) Everything you need to know (or can) about human myths! It's a bit bulky, but really, really, really good and in depth!

DarkSparkle

@HopHop: That would be great! :)

DaBoss

@DarkSparkle: That's not the way you give presents, doofus! :P They are supposed to be a surprise!

LightSparkle

Did somepony say surprise?!? *gasp*

I missed a surprise?!?!?!?!? :(

Well, I have to compensate by tripling the surprise and have a surprise-for-the-missed-birthday-party-surprise party! Everypony's invited! Then we have a second party in which every Nightling's invited!

PPI

Aww :( I'll be in the Crystal Empire for a few days so will miss it.

@LyraHands: A fluffy happy birthday! Check your PM for your gift ;)

Brush

@DarkSparkle: You silly. :D Wanna join? I know you love doughnuts. ;)

HopHop

@all: I thought we agreed you'd only make me cry on my birthday, not for a whole week! Bob is starting to make fun of me!

@HopHop: Apparently, I am. You thinking of visiting? :)

@DaBoss: I feel guilty :( Also very scared about you and Hop meeting...

@DarkSparkle: :D Looking towards to it.

@PPI: No! The neighbors will kick us out!

@Brush: ... at first I was going to make a snarky comment about you being busy, but then I saw the link... You wrote that for me? I read it the moment you posted it, but never imagined that... You're the best, Brush! *hugs*

LyraHands

Did you know that the MC always consists of 7 writers, not counting the S.Child?

The practice was established with the first reboot, known better as Volume 3, Mistmount Chronicles, or codename Project Phoenix. Before that S.Child wrote all stories with the help of a 3-pony editing team (currently retired).

In order to be eligible for a position (the number being chosen based on the days of the week, for an unknown reason) one has to answer to certain criteria, and have the support for no less than three current writers. The final choice rests with S.Child, who then invites the next member once there's an opening.

At present, the writing team consists of 5 younglings and 2 older writers (which was the original reason for the creation of Everhere).

More facts as they appear.

Speculator7

What the hay?! Is this for real?

@Speculator7: How do you know that?

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: Because he's S.Child! Dun dun duuuuun! :P

DannyFan

I am not nor have I ever claimed to be S.Child.

Speculator7

@PrinceEric: He's just a troll. Like CEOWitch. :P

RRBB

@RRBB: I heard that! :/ Not my fault I'm constantly sent out to rescue ponies night and day. And if you must know I happened to be assisting Brush and Dark in a matter (and keeping a nameless egomaniac out of trouble)

Also, I can confirm that the writing team was indeed 7 when I was involved, not counting advisors, character models, managers, PR, etc.

@InItForTheShipping: Great idea! Always loved the Empire, and @Fleetfoot is a star there. :P

CEOWitch

@CEOWitch: You'll get in trouble again. Keep in mind your good looks can't save you forever ;) And I'm already working on logistics for EverCon. This will be something big, so will take months of planning. (And you just volunteered to help out.)

Luna

@CEOWitch: And if you don't... it's to the moooooon!

TheRealLuna

@TheRealLuna: You've been quite evil lately, my other half. What's wrong?

Luna

Nothing. Just annoyed at things. Hope to make it for the con.

TheRealLuna

@Luna: I guess you'd want me to model or something, right? Not that I want to... :P

Sorry, I couldn't resist. This place has infected me. I blame CEO and Flame. (And my favorite authors, of course.)

Fleetfoot

Everypony, Speculator might actually be for real. Trying to track down her/his aether signature got me totally stumped. Either it's the best protection ever or is from another realm. Mysterious!

Joking aside, if it's a troll, it's a very dedicated one. Went through three aether walls before I lost the trace.

MightyDragon

Oligosaccharide, did you use the a-net root trace? It's a bit fiddly, but the results are far better.

CodeFilly

@Code: Not to argue with my future wife, but root trace is crap! It returns so much aether info I might as well get the gateway connect log. I used select connect a-net element, of course.

MightyDragon

"Oligosaccharide"? Snrk! :)

RRBB

@MightyDragon: But select is so limiting. You can refine root with a timestamp range, then add a filter for mana deterioration. Select is really bad when it comes to deteriorating error, that's why it's almost impossible to follow after an aetherwall. (Am impressed that you did, though :))

CodeFilly

@CodeFilly: That's me—mega impressive! Next time you see my boss can you tell him that? :)

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: I'll tell him :). Though you really should use aether source compare. That and root should get you what you need.

Real or not, Speculator is amusing :)

DarkSparkle

Argh! Enough with the geek squad! You make me feel depressed! (And I've yet to pass my magic exam. Why am I so bad with computers :(( )

LyraHands

This thread has been licked.

Speculator7

It has now.

LyraHands

Theories

Yo, losers!

Is it just me or are we completely in the dark for the next chapter? I mean so far there's always been a hint or a chapter name, a quote, or whatever. Have I missed something here?

Feather

@Feather: Nah. There's a deliberate blackout. I asked my father, and even stores have no idea what they will receive. There was a rumor that we'd get the three deities followed by the big evil (supposedly the Everprince), but that was way back before the first spoilers were out and there's been no confirmation about anything, so it's pretty much everypony's guess.

Personally, I think it sounds logical. And I'm sure we'll get Zeus first (Poseidon is missing and Hades is too obvious).

RRBB

@RRBB: Shows how much you know. It's obvious that Poseidon will be first. I mean. Everything so far has been centered around him. Bellucio, Euryala, the whole followers stealing stones thing (remember that alter Bellucio was the one who who got artifacts and stuff from somewhere?)

You know what I'm going to say, but if they mess something it will be here. The jump from characters to the Deities (which had almost never had a chapter of their own) will be the make or break it. There's been so many stories so far about the deities that no matter what the writers come up with, it will be hated by vast amounts of ponies.

One example: Poseidon. Is he good or evil? Half the Nightlings think he's good but misunderstood, while the others that he's a tyrant and usurper. Either way somepony will be upset. Although... I must say if they pull that off, I'll be really impressed! What if he's a a tyrant and usurper? With the reality shifts that's entirely possible!

MixaMax

@MixaMax: Glad that you're better under Jade's tender care :P Yet even a sweetie like him cannot get rid of your bitterness.

I think that the way things are structured the writers can't go wrong no matter what they do (well, apart from publishing a typo ridden story about self insert and harems :P)

Guess we'll know tomorrow.

Brush

@Brush: Notice me! :D Huge fan! Love nearly all your stories. (Ever the early ones :)) Really hope there are more chapters to the Human and I. :)

@MixaMax: That could work and it will be awesome! Why didn't I think of it before? Having a good, a bad, and a neutral of each god will be... I wonder if anyone has thought of this before. You girls know?

Feather

Umm, sorry for this, but I have some clothes left over from a performance that I'm giving away. They’rein perfect condition and only been worn for one season. I was about to give them away to charity, but thought if any of you are interested you can have first pick.

The clothes are for grown up mares only, and predominantly for earth ponies. I could modify it for pegasi and unicorns if you have any interest.

Posting links. Thank you :)

Candle

@Candle: The silk blouse is so mine! Anypony tries to take it and they receive a hoof in the muzzle!

Think you can add some touches? Nothing much, just something to make it more unique?

RRBB

Well, I think that we'll get Zeus as well. There hasn't been much Danny action lately and he still is the main character of the series. I say we'll get him be the focus, just like in the pilot chapters, then have Bellucio for Poseidon, and finally Blazen (I have a feeling) for Hades.

@Candle: Those are beautiful! Please save me the red thing! Bob will love it!

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Bob loves it, but Bob would also like to remind you that you that you're broke. I'm fine with providing food and all, but I'm not fine with you spending all your bit on me.

@Candle: It is lovely, but sadly this isn't the best time. Huge thanks, though :) Maybe somepony else will enjoy it more.

Bob

@Candle: Can I get that green cap? Don't care about the costume.

Feather

@all: A note about stories. I have discovered that lately a lot of the newer writers have started doing one of two things:

1) Copy an established writer, forming a trend (and pretty much ruining the experience)

2) Try to predict the next MCE chapter and writer something relating to it.

Please, stop. I'm serious! It's boring, unimaginative and ruins the experience for everypony! Reading a Bellucio is a hired assassin is cool the first time (even if disturbing, personally), but after the tenth it gets really old really fast! And having your Bellucio assassin having a slightly different tragic past doesn't count for different.

I admit, I don't like criticizing your authors like this, but when the behavior becomes systemic it's bad for all of us! (Curators included!)

@MixaMax: You promised you'd take it easy, not spend all day on the aethernet! :/ Must you behave like a little filly?

Jade

@Jade: You tell her, mister! :P And if she's being a bad filly you can always spank her!

I agree with the part about tech trends. For the most part I just find it annoying and return the bad ones for rewriting. Now, Jade being polite (after being kidnapped by Max) has asked you kindly to be more creative. Me, I'm just telling you that when I get fed up, I'll start returning fics for overuse of common ideas.

I dare you, give me an excuse to add you to my bleh list! :)

RRBB

@all: I'll be starting a group for reviewing bad fics. Well, for now it's just me, but all of you are welcome to join. Jade, RRBB, True? I think you'll fit perfectly :)

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: That's no way to behave! We need to encourage people, not ridicule them! Trust me, it might seem as harmless fun, but it isn't. I had my own personal experiences and I can tell you they weren't pleasant. :(

DarkSparkle

Dark is right. This is a place to help. Curators are to bring good fics to the public and advise new how authors to improve.

And authors, please keep in mind the curators are living beings. They need rest as well, so writing the same without listening to their advice is as bad as them not.

With that I hope the matter is closed!

LyraHands

Pixel just started snoring on my back :)

RRBB

Squeeee! <3

SweetStuff

@RRBB: Way to ruin the message... :)

LyraHands

First Mystery Spoiler

Zeus Skymaster

Deity, Thunderer, Chooser

Zeus was the god that conquered known existence. His power verging his with infinity, he conquered the world and everything in it from the titans and claimed himself king. Five times he created humans to inhabit his domain, five times he failed. For the six he shattered part of his essence to sand and gave every human a grain, granting them the power of magic. This is the sixth age.

Siblings: Hades, Poseidon
Place of birth: Holy Olympus
Divine power: Thunder
Follower: Danny Williams
Focus: Rule

"I've made mistakes, you're one of my lesser ones."

Well, I wasn't expecting that. :/ Though, I must say it's so cool written! I must find out who the author of this chapter is and marry her! Or at least who came up with the idea.

The spoiler says more about Zeus than everything else so far, and yet I've so many questions that I know nothing at all! Did the titans create Earth? What was his life like as a child (somepony please write this! :)) Did he have a love interest? Children? Why is there no mention of his rumored wife?

And, of course, we have Danny stated as follower. Not that anypony is surprised. Don't know about you, but I'm so hyped about next chapter!

RRBB

Hype! I'll be doing "tasteful" young Zeus commissions. If anyone us interested PM me. I'll only be taking 5, so better hurry!

I find it interesting that it's rated he's the master of the sky (I hope that's not his second name!). Does that mean the other are masters of things as well? Poseidon is sea, but what is Hades?

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: I find it fascinating that the writers are keeping so closely to the original pre classical human myths! Zeus was indeed said to be ruler of the heavens, Poseidon of the seas, and Hades of Tartarus and all above (which is to mean land).

This is the first time their dominion is so clearly defined. (Coincidentally, I had predicted such an outcome in my Zeus' Leader Sandals story.) It also begs the question if each of them gave powers the others don't.

Looking forward to this.

DarkSparkle

Girls, girls! I just had the craziest idea! What if each deity is an embodiment of a pony tribe? I mean, we discussed them being inspired by the Princesses, but what if they are each one tribe? Zeus is pegasi, Hades is earth ponies, and Poseidon is unicorns.

That would be so bash if true!

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: oh, and what am I? Horseshoes? I know that the three tribes are considered a big thing, but back when I was born crystal and sea ponies were far more dominant. And what about all the other tribes? Bat ponies? Zebras? I'm I won't even get into Griffins, Dragons, Diamond Dogs, Bovines, and all the other races that fill Equestria.

Princess Celestia is as a sovereign by all, and associating her to a single tribe is *yay* insulting! Zeus being linked to a single tribe is equally absurd!

Jade

@Jade: Sorry :( I didn't think while writing. I'm just too used to the myth that I forgot completely... :(

PrinceEric

Not cool, bro.

You did get me thinking, though. What if the deities are the Everprince? Maybe they were divided into three using the shatterstone? What if the Felina corp has been one of the good guys all along? *yay* it, I mean it was the deities that got the gr8 to find the crown. Euryala tried to stop them.

Wow! I sound so Jake right now. :P

Feather

@Jade: Calm down and buy me some oats! I'm sick and starving down here! :P

@Feather: A common theory. Not the most absurd (like the Williams siblings being the Everprince). I still think that we're looking beyond what even the writers could imagine. Again, I've said this before, I'll say it again: this is where we'll see if the series goes on or stops at the first arc.

MixaMax

@MixaMax: If you're well enough to browse you're well enough to get your own oats! What am I? Your servant?!

Jade

@Jade: You tell 'em, Jade! (psst! I can send you a whip real cheap.)

RRBB

@RRBB: Y'ain't go no idea about proper whips. I have a whole collection in the barn, though I don't use them yet. Sis says I could when I get a bit older.

WaterBottle

*shocked*

SweetStuff

... can't... breathe... too much laughing!

This is great! Water, you deserve a medal! :)))

Feather

@WaterBottle: Why, Water, I never knew you were so knowledgeable in that area :D

RRBB

@RRBB: Damn right! Seems like I can teach you a thing or two! :)

WaterBottle

This is just too painful to watch :)

DannyFan

Clearly we have an expert among us. I'd never have guessed. :)

PaintDrop

I'm curious how far this will go before I lock the thread...

LyraHands

@WaterBottle: Please just stop...

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: Why? RRBB always reckons she knows so much about everything! Well, I know more about whips than she ever will! So there! :)

WaterBottle

Ded! So dead right now! :))))

Feather

This must be a fic! Somepony, please make this into a fic!

RRBB

@Jade: Forget the oats! Come help me stop laughing!

MixaMax

@WaterBottle: I don't think you she means what you think she means...

YouKnowWho

Well... I think this a good time to lock the thread.

PaintDrop

Yes! Whips lead to licking!

MightyDragon

That was an unfortunate combination of jokes, Oligosaccharide. And I'll be leaving it just to teach you to read things before you post!

Love you :)

CodeFilly

Clearly my being away for a while has come at a price. Would everyone now please move on to more productive things?

Thank you!

The TechNightling

Can't say I'm surprised at where this train-wreck went. I won't lock, but please tone it down in future, okay?

LyraHands

The meaning has been explained.

RRBB

Poor Water :(

SweetStuff

Four Part Finale 1/4

Midnight Castle: Everhere, Vol 7, Chapter 10, Fall of The Risen

I feel so stupid. Rereading the last chapter I find it so obvious! Things are starting to make sense :D tl;dr I loved it, but all the more scared about next week's chapter. I'm afraid someone of the main characters might die :(

Here's my review.

The chapter starts after the end of the previous one, with Bellucio walking about his kitchen, worried about the dream he had. He does a bunch of phone calls (calling pretty much everyone). We have a few funny moments learning what everyone else does at four in the morning. (side rant! That huge reveal about Megan! Megan x Cassandra is a thing! I have no words how brave that is! Also funny how they are in bed when Bellucio calls. So sweet how Cassandra wishes Megan luck before flopping back to bed.) Also, Danny and Loki are hilarious preparing for their exam ("Guess that's another roommate I've ruined..." - best Loki quote:)

All nine (plus Caprice) gather and Bellucio explains what he saw in his dream: how Poseidon isn't what he thought, and that everything they've been through might be false. Everyone's down and confused (most coming to terms with their everpowers.) Bellucio then asks is anyone else has any secrets they want to share. We get some guilt flashbacks from everyone, but no one steps forward. Euryala says they a lying, but at this point they don't have to trust each other, just work together to stop the deities and the Everprince. Blazen gets in her face about giving out orders too much, at which point she shouts back that everyone was chosen before they were born.

"Three of your are claimed by powerful beings, the rest are chess pieces in a game you don't understand!"

After a lot of yelling, Euryala shares her plan: they go to Poseidon-Reality to arm themselves with "weapons and knowledge" then return to start the next phase. After some back and fro everyone agrees and they combine some powers to do that.... then suddenly everyone ends up in the past!

It's revealed that the only way to fight Poseidon is at a time when he has no knowledge of them. (Time travel :/ So cliche) They all try to blend in, gradually finding what Poseidon is like. Apparently there are selections for new disciples (not chosen?!) and they all try to become such. Bellucio is selected (no surprises) along with Molly (huh?). They have to do a few trials: kill a dragon threatening Mistmount (which seems to have been founded millennia ago). Everything seems a bit boring, until Icelos suddenly appears to Bellucio and Molly and starts blowing minds! First, he warns them not to believe Euryala. Then he says that all of this is a side-dream (a dream within a dream which keeps them away from Poseidon's eyes). We are told that Poseidon is the god who controls dreams, and all dreams up to this point are, in fact, sent by him. (All the times since Mistmount Chronicles in which other deities have sent dreams to anyone are in fact clever manipulations.) and, of course, he finished with the grand. "Things are more complicated than you think."

So, three more chapters to go till the end of the arc and everything is already so confusing! And I love it! :D

What do you think?

PrinceEric

It might be just me, but this is almost as if the writers are suggesting that all events that have taken place after the end of Chronicles aren't real. A curious approach. Something to ponder upon. No doubt about it, Everhere is much darker and mind*yay* than the previous series, yet with the number of fans increasing S.Child must have done something good.

I still like Chronicles, because it had a far more innocent field to it: corporations bad, deities good. Now we have constant questions, traitors, realities, dreamscapes. We literally don't know what's real or not, who is good or not, who is who even! I won't be surprised if it turns out that Cassandra is Megan's male lover who's been put under a spell to appear male. At this point that's just as possible as anything.

I must begrudgingly admit that the undertaking is huge, though, and so far they've pulled it off quite well.

MixaMax

@Jade: Better get some more meds, bro. Max is delirious! There's no way she'd say something nice about Everhere. Just no way!:P

@Short&Hoofy: On that note hope you're doing better. Must be nasty getting the bug :( I blame Max! Come back soon. Pixel misses you.

RRBB

@RRBB: Hold on! What do you mean? There's nothing wrong with sis. She's been going to school every day since the checkup. Hay, she's supposed to be at school now!

@Short&Hoofy: You better have a good explanation.

MixaMax

My bad. She's been seeing my physician. I would have hoped she'd TOLD ponies, but apparently not. :/

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: What the heck!? What's going on! Is she well? Is anything wrong?

MixaMax

@MixaMax: All's fine, but it's not something that could be discussed in general chat.

I'm sure you, of all ponies, would appreciate that, Miss I-Left-For-The-Crystal-Empire-But-Didn't-Tell-Anypony.

PaintDrop

Well... at least we had a sex scene in the series. Yay for Cassandra x Megan?

LightSparkle

@LightSparkle: This is hardly the time... :/

LyraHands

@LyraHands: Oh? So it's better to discuss things without hearing her opinion on the matter? If there's anything that Short wants to share she will. If not...

LightSparkle

Light has a point there.

TheRealLuna

@RRBB, @MixaMax: Sorry. I didn't want to tell you not to worry you. I'm fine, but I haven't been going to school, and I'm not exactly sick either. And I'd prefer not to talk about this.

@LyraHands: Please lock the thread?

Short&Hoofy

Done. PM me if you want to talk.

LyraHands

Furious Max PMs

Okay, what's this about my sister? She's never missed a day of school in her life. Even when she fell and cracked her horn she'd go. So telling me some crap about her going to your physician won't cut it.

What's really going on?

MixaMax

Maybe you should ask her instead of spamming the site?

PaintDrop

You said move it to PM, so don't give he that! Just tell me what's going on. Is she okay?

MixaMax

You really don't know anything, do you?

No, Short isn't okay. She hasn't been for years. Oh, she's really good at not showing it: mostly keeps to herself, talks a bit now and then, but she's not well at all. She's not like you or I. When she has problems she keeps them inside. Sort of like Brush.

Short is hopelessly in love. Has been for years.

PaintDrop

With you? If that's all why can't she just have told me. I've nothing against it. In fact I think it's time she found somepony. I had my amount of flings and crushes in high school, and it doesn't bother me that her barn swings the other way. If you two love each other you might as well tell me and not keep up that nonsense with being sick.

MixaMax