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Mother Moon, Sister Nightmare.

by ShadowStar_IMHP
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Waking up in a body of an Alicorn Colt. What could I do? Beside me was a filly one I was sure was Nightmare Moon reborn. Before me Luna looked down at us with a bit of fear in her face. "MOMMY!" I'm going to have fun with this!
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I'm dead, well not really. Somewhere in another universe, I'm sure there a dead man being mourned. Dead by cancer in the brain. Maybe all that talk of cell phones might be right after all or that I was just unlucky.

My last night alive I had a nightmare, worms eating everything around me. Yeah even dying my life was boring. That was till a cloud of stars appeared in my about. The starfield of Nightmare Moon.

She didn't take it long to figure out I was a dead man. The stars started to flee. Like hell, I was going to let her escape without me! Somehow I grabbed hold of the cloud and got my mind and soul pulled out of my body.

I found myself in the body of an Alicorn Colt surrounded by rubble and ruin. My best guess I was about the age of 5 or 6. Before me, I saw Luna herself waking up after being cleansed by the Elements of Harmony in starting episodes of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic. No this wasn't a cartoon everything was more real, more lifelike, more well anatomically correct.

Nightmare Moon saved my life. Sure I have a new body, but a nearly immortal alicorn body with all the magical perks is one heck of an upgrade. On the other hand or hoof, I was here because of Nightmare Moon. Beside me was an alicorn filly purple body black mane. I took a wild guess that filly was the Nightmare Reborn.

What was I going to do? Expose the fact I was saved by Nightmare Moon, that I was a soul from another reality? Let the fact the Nightmare was still alive and in the body of the filly beside me. Or Keep the secret that we weren't the innocent foals that look like.

Shadows fell over me, and I looked up. This was it before me the faces of both Princesses and all the bearers. "MOMMY!" I cried out to the blue Alicorn of the Night. Yeah, I was going to Troll these ponies for all it's worth.

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Okay, I know how some folks don't like first person perspective. I thought hard on it. To get some of the elements of the story, I want. The first person is the better option.

Second is that I have some major learning impairments that make writing hard. Dyslexia is among them. Please if you see any spelling or grammar errors. Yes, I know there going to be many! Just send a message or post below I be more than happy to fix them. Just tell me how to fix them!

Marking Teen because I'm going to use some swearing and more mature topics. Won't be any sex these are foals! Deaths will happen eventually, mainly thinking about the Changeling invasion, that will be quite some time in the future, though.

Teen
Incomplete
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe

1,333 words: Estimated 6 Minutes to read: [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Prolog: Dying [Cache] Mar 20th, 2017
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Published Nov 25th, 2016

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