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Where you've got it

by Broneyofnoel

Chapter 1: Read this first

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Alright, If you haven't read the first story, here it is, STORY It is the whole reason for this story being written, and I hope you enjoy it.

"Geez, you guys really like this story don't you?" Broneyofnoel said, snickering.

"Alright, enjoy this one!" he said, hitting the period button.

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Alright fans, here's a sneak peek of the first chapter!

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Twilight and Fluttershy were killed, they were falling it seemed, but nothing was moving, they were in darkness, with each other. They could move around, but it was endless black, Twilight felt around for the spell that Celestia had given her, she felt it, and pulled the piece of paper up, the text on the paper was slowly reappearing.

"Fluttershy, look," Twilight said loudly, shoving the piece of paper in Fluttershy's face.

"What's happening?" Fluttershy asked, looking around their dark space, a world was appearing.

"I don't, I don't know." Twilight said, she looked around, ponies were forming, they were dissolving, but in reverse, it seemed at particles of matter were forming solid, somewhat living ponies.

"Look!" Fluttershy said, pointing to a University, it was the magical institute that Twilight used to work at.

The world finally completed materialization, the world seemed exactly as their own, except, happier somehow, the two walked up the steps to the main hall. They walked up the stairs, and they arrived at the sixth floor, all of twilight's students were there, she couldn't look at them, every so often, she would see a flash of their wounds.

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Well, the first chapter should be up in a couple of days, probably less though, I am going to get some prereaders for it, so it will be worth the wait. Anypony want to volunteer?

Oh, and there will be some surprises during the story!

Next Chapter: Twilight's Students Part 1 Estimated time remaining: 33 Minutes
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