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Guided By The Light

by neokiva

Chapter 6: Chapter 5:Temples and Hormonal Mares (rewrote)

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After her visit to Rin’s world, Palutena stepped out of the portal and found herself back in her Equestria outside of her freshly built temple which now sat opposite Rin's smaller temple, Palutena's temple being solid white with royal purple accents. It was a single tower, which rose out of a large square building, which in turn was surrounded by alcoves filled with statues of herself executed in silver and seemed to also double as fountains that flowed into the moat that was bridged by a wide reinforced wooden drawbridge that led through a portcullis that matched the town gates. It also had ramparts skirting the roof, and on each corner of the roof stood pointed towers with glowing orbs, glowing white runes etched on each orb and placed on top of each tip.

On top of the temple tower sat a huge glowing orb, with the rings of the magic circles moving around it, one ring was horizontal, another was vertical, the last was diagonal turning the rings were flipping and turning, like that ring amusement park that sound you between a set of rings. The tower itself was cylindrical with windows at the four cardinal directions, two balconies midway up on the sides as you view the temple from the front and a single large balcony near the top front of the tower. The temple was now the centre of the town, and might as well have been a palace, not a temple for how extravagant it looked. Somehow the imps had expanded the size of the town and left plenty of space to build more homes and businesses.

Palutena watched as ponies ran around like headless chickens carrying decorative items and furniture into her temple. She made her way inside over the drawbridge and through the open doors, and immediately she felt a pleasant warmth washing over her, seeing another statue of her in the middle of the room. This statue was different it had a shrine torch, an offering plate and steps. It was made of marble like the flooring, which also felt warm through her shoes.

The statue had a queue forming and it was flanked on either side by stairs that curved up and around the statue to a landing taller than it, which had two large oak doors with iron hinges and door rings. The doors were open to let the flood of ponies move quickly with their cargo. As she stepped into the throne room she saw a flustered Captain Dash pacing about the main room with worry, ponies were going through each of the four doors carrying their cargo the proper places.

The room itself had a comfy looking cushioned throne sitting at the farthest end, on either side of it an arch doorway that opened to a curved staircase each, the left side going up and the right side going down. Above the throne hung a large red velvet banner with Palutena's halo in the centre and bordered by golden embroidered filigree. The ceiling was vaulted with red wood, and around the top edge of the room was a gallery with benches, wooden stairs leading up on each side.

Before the stairs leading to the gallery was a door on each side, where they led she had no idea and would explore later. Captain Dash had finally noticed her presence and smiled, she ran up to Palutena and bowed, “Rise Captain, to what do I owe the pleasure of your presence?” Palutena asked her with her arms folded under her breasts.

“Lady Palutena, you have returned! Spike asked me to find you, he was worried you had foalnapped Twilight after you and that fox disappeared.” Rainbow Dash replied
Palutena smiled warmly and pointed at the mare on her back who has been asleep since they’d entered the light realm and was nuzzling into Palutena's neck while she slept.

“She is fine Captain, as you can see? I took her to a special library that's as big as Canterlot,” Palutena explained quietly as she smirked at Captain Dash’s shocked expression. this must be why the real Palutena trolls Pit all the time. she thought to herself.

The mare on Palutena's back stirred, “Mommy Palutena” she mumbled in her sleep loud enough for them to hear before settling down, nuzzling deeper into her neck, causing Palutena to stiffen and leaving herself and the Captain blushing.

“I heard that Twilight was a ward of the palace in Canterlot,” Rainbow paused looking from side to side as if someone might be eavesdropping. Afterwards when she was sure she leant in and started again, “because after being accepted as Princess Celestia's student, her parents died in a freak weather accident, after even more of the Pegasi started abandoning the weather industry,” Rainbow explained with a hint of sympathy in her tone. “After pegasi abandoned their weather duties tribe relations were strained,” Rainbow added a little shame marring her face.

“Thank you for telling me, Captain. I shall take Twilight home, to Golden Oaks library. Oh, and before I go, put out word that I am recruiting for my personal army/guard, and I am making you the captain of my guard.”

“What about the wonderbolts, you said you would put in a good word for me.” Dash frowned but bowed anyway.

“I did and I will do so, However, it's not guaranteed that you’ll be accepted, so use this opportunity to practice to improve your chances even more so.” Palutena replied with a sympathetic tone in her voice.

Palutena turned to leave and almost bumped into Mayor Mare, stopping short. Mayor Mare stood in wide eyed awe at her before shaking herself out of it and bowing, “Your Majesty, Palutena, my name is”

“I know your name Mayor Mare, what do you want?” Palutena interrupted the Mayor, making her flinch.Okay I could have worded that better, Palutena thought ruefully.

“Of Course, I wanted to welcome you as the new Princess of Ponyville, and to ask you if you have any orders you want to give me.” She said eagerly. I rubbed the bridge of my nose and sighed in exasperation, Why am I being made a Princess? Is it cause I'm a goddess and it's just expected for the divines to rule mortals? And how did she know temples aren't normally palaces. she groaned internally.

“First job you have is petitioning Celestia to change the status for the town into a city. It has been far too long since it should have happened, explain that Palutena has ordered you to do so. If you encounter any difficulty, pray to me and I shall come and deal with the obstacle in person.” she ordered, Instantly Mayor bowed and then dashed off to do as ordered.

As Palutena walked, with Twilight on her back, towards Twilight's library home, ponies bowed to her as she passed they got out of her way. She was a little perturbed by how quickly the ponies adapted. Some seemed to wonder about the mare on her back, but she ignored them. The arcane quarter was filled with homes made of brick and mortar, with steaming chimneys and rune encrusted walls to form wards. This is were non-craftsman unicorns live, research and develop new magic and technology. The internet was first created here, TV also got its start here. Off in the distance she saw the first tv studio, now one of many. It has several channels, one dedicated to foal shows and cartoons, one for news and entertainment, another for music and finally one for comedy.

As they reached Twilight's home, the door slammed open, revealing Spike who glared at Palutena and charged at her, she wrapped him in a bubble shield and moved him back into the library as he struggled to get through it.

“What did you do to her!?” Spike demanded,

Palutena fixed Spike with a stern glare, “Shhh! She’s asleep.”
She carried Twilight upstairs to her room, along with a distraught Spike. She climbed up to Twilight's bed, pulled back the covers and laid Twilight down carefully and pulled the covers over her. She gave her a kiss on the forehead, which woke her up.

“Mommy?” Twilight asked drowsily, Palutena winced Me, a mother? Could I even give anypony foals, what if I'm not compatible with them? What if I'm​ barren? Palutena worried.

“Shhh, it’s okay, go back to sleep dear Twilight,” she responded softly as she could.

“Okay,” Twilight said again as she shut her eyes and wiggled under the covers to get comfy. Palutena smiled warmly at the mare and put Spike in his basket,

<<Your Majesty, the guards refuse to let me in to see Celestia, even though I told them you said to. They just laughed at me as if I'm crazy!>> Came Mayor Mare’s complaint.

Palutena's smile morphed into a frown, and she teleport away. As she appeared she noticed the two guards standing in front of the door to the throne room. The two guards flinched from her arrival and briefly were stunned into silence before shaking themselves out of it.

“Okay, what's this I hear about you stopping Mayor Mare from seeing Celestia?” Palutena asked her hands on her hips.

“I Beg your pardon, your Majesty, but we can't let in ponies without an appointment which we had just finished explaining to her Celestia....” The guard on the right responded his eyes shifting side to side in obvious discomfort. Sighing in exasperation Palutena barged past the guards and opened the door, after which her sense of smell was assaulted with a musky scent, one that clouded her mind slightly, no matter how she would shake her head to dislodge the odd feeling.

Palutena's attention switched as a frantic rustling of paper echoed through the room, a light cream, black maned and tailed unicorn mare with black half moon glasses and an inkwell and quill cutiemark. “You can’t just burst in here! And you’re not even on the list,” Raven complained as my attention was brought to a bored and aloof Celestia whom seemed like she was just phoning it in today, in response to Raven’s distress, Celestia looked to see what the commotion was about.

As Celestia's eyes scanned over her, Palutena waved and smiled at the mare. Celestia's eyes widened, she now had a large grin on her face and her wings flared as she crouched down and wiggled her flank like a cat about to pounce, No. She couldn't. She wouldn't do that! Would she? Palutena thought, Celestia pounced much to Raven's disgust and looked aghast at the whole situation, Celestia’s wings caught her and glided towards her and landing on Palutena, who caught her, staggered by the sudden added weight of the solar diarch.

“Pally! You're free!?” Celestia squealed like a school filly Palutena strained and grunted under the sudden weight of Celestia as she tried to regain her balance and footing, once Palutena was done flailing she noticed just how soft Celestia’s coat was against her bare skin, she had thought it’d be more coarse.

“your Majesty this is highly inappropriate,” Raven chided Celestia, which was just moments before that Palutena noticed Celestia's lust rouged face, half lidded eyes and before She could respond, Celestia sealed Palutena's lips, causing Palutena to squeak in surprise before melting into it and causing the guards and Raven mouths to fall open and eyes bulged in surprise.

Celestia pulled back and looked into Palutena’s eyes, “I have been waiting centuries to kiss you Pally, my love,”

“As have I my little sunshine,” Palutena responded nuzzling Celestia.

“Little!?” Raven exclaimed in disbelief, Celestia glared at Raven as Palutena chuckled.

“This isn’t anywhere near my full size. Ms. Raven. If I was I’d dwarf the mountain that Canterlot resides on. But then that would freak ponies out, so I won’t be doing that unless absolutely necessary.” Palutena explained to the mare with a warm smile, Raven looked ahead as if she saw something in the far distance.
Raven shook her head and turned to Celestia, “Wait is this,” Raven motioned to Palutena, “the reason you never took a suitor or a consort?”

Celestia and Palutena blinked and the two of them smiled while looking at each other. Palutena caressing Celestia’s face, who shivered as Palutena’s fingers glided through her white coat.

“It’s a strange but pleasant feeling finally being able to touch you, and to hold you ‘Tia,” Palutena commented as she smiled at ‘Tia who now was sporting a crimson blush on her cheeks.

A shoeless alabaster hoof mirrored Palutena’s action, “I understand the feeling Pally,” Celestia replied as she leant into Palutena’s arms.

“Princess, who is this? I heard her name of course and it seems familiar and I can’t place it.”

Celestia sighed, “Raven, this is Palutena, goddess of light, wisdom and craftsmanship. She is the patron goddess of the pegasi. She is also my marefriend, my royal consort. The reason you haven’t seen her, is because she was sealed away, fully aware in Ponyville roughly a millenia ago.”

“A pleasure Ms.Raven, to make your acquaintance,” Palutena formally greeted as she presented her right hand to shake Raven’s hoof the poor mare was frozen. When Raven didn’t respond, Palutena waved a hand in front of the mare’s face before sighing.

Eventually Raven snapped out of her shocked stated and she dove into a deep bow,
“Please forgive my impertinence and rudeness when you first came in I had no idea who you were!” Raven grovel causing Celestia and Palutena to roll their eyes in exasperation.

“How could you have not known I told the staff and the guard this morning?” Celestia pointed out.

“Princess! You know I am not a morning pony!” Raven defended, causing Celestia to roll her eyes again.

“‘Tia, I suppose we can let her off? Besides who would wake me so I could watch your beautiful face while you sleep?” Palutena asked with a cheesy grin.

This had the effect of causing Celestia to blush as she tried to hide her face.

“'Tia, before we get distracted, I came by to get Ponyville city status…”

“Done! Raven make a note to elevate Ponyville to city status,” Celestia ordered Raven dutifully noted

Suddenly, Celestia sniffed the air and then Palutena, who giggled and said, “'Tia that tickles!”

Celestia let out a groan that caused Palutena to blush, “'Tia?”

“Pally you're in heat aren't you?” Came Celestia's husky reply, this set off several alarms,

Nervously Palutena said, “'Tia, dear I love you but I don't think I am ready to have foals just yet,”

“Palutena, you knew this would happen as soon as you hit your first heat when you were free, you promised me. Which fortuitously happens to be the day you are freed, you have been denied for a millennia, you must be in excruciating pain from it, yes?” Celestia calmly reminded her, I did promise however I didn't think that my heat would come so close to my own freedom, so I would at least have time to get acclimated before then, I don't want to deny 'Tia any longer than I have but I am scared, Palutena thought,

“I am used to the pain, 'Tia after a thousand years, it’s background noise, I no longer notice it.” Palutena replied, a look of horror flashed on Celestia's face.


Palutena sighed, “‘Tia I am scared, what if we aren't compatible with you? What if I'm barren? I don't want to lose you and I don't want to disappoint you, just because I can't give you foals, logically I know you won't abandoned me, but my emotions are a mess right now.” Palutena explained, shamefully she ducked her head down.

“Pally, I won't abandon you even if the worst comes to pass and you can't give me foals. I don't want you to worry about what happens, so no matter what happens, I’ll stand by your side.” Celestia explained with a soft smile before Palutena brought her into a passionate kiss.

“Just be gentle okay? This is my first time…” Palutena trailed off.

“Pally, I can't hold myself back any longer.” Celestia said need and lust filling her voice. The guard and Raven made a mad dash for the throne room door, lest they too get caught up with their upcoming performance.

Mare mayor and the door guards looked incredulously at them as they slammed the door shut once the last of them was through.

“What's happening?” Mayor Mare asked, curiously. One guard turned and answered panting,

“Code: P.C.F.T.S.” the door guards paled while the Mayor looked confused.

The guard started hoofing out ear plugs, before a lot of them could put their earplugs in a cry of surprise echoed through the door

Following that she heard the sound of clothes ripping, and Palutena's cry “My dress!”

“It's okay! I'll buy you all the dresses you want!” Celestia replied lust taking over.

“Whoa 'Tia that's huge …wait stop it won't” Palutena protested, “Gah! Too full,”

“Too tight,” Celestia whined

“Hang on, I’ve got an idea,” Palutena said with a pained voice,

A few moments later Celestia gasped loudly, “you can turn into an alicorn!?”
There was a clatter of hooves on marble and a yelp of surprise,

“Wha!? Are you trying to mount me already!? Damn it 'Tia, have some patience, I just turned… gah!” Cried Palutena in surprise, “ well good bye virginity I guess,” came Palutena's whimper.

“Palutena, be my broodmare, have my foals! I have waited near ten centuries to do this with you!” Celestia cried out lustfully.

“Ahh...ahh…..aaahaa,” Palutena panted out as she was filled for the first time.

“You’ll make a great dame for our foals!” Celestia cried out.

“'Tia!” Palutena joined her in her cries of ecstasy.

“Hey, sister did you hear from….. what in mother's name art thou doing to Palutena!!! My eyes! It’s everywhere! I cannot unsee what hath been seen!” Luna squealed in disgusted agony.

“Don't look at me Luna! I am unclean!” Palutena wailed.

The guards and Mayor on the other side of the door hearing this blushed deeper and cross their legs,as they tried and ignore Palutena and Celestia.

“Come join us Lulu!” Celestia exclaimed

“'Tia, unhoof us! What art thou doing!? Wait no, oh by my sister's beard, Aah Palutena! Your tongue? It feels so good, don't stop!” Luna exclaimed between groans and squeals of pleasure.

“So how was your day?” Mayor Mare asked the guards, her blush deepening, trying to ignore the heat fueled squeals of pleasure coming from the room behind them.


Three weeks had passed with no sign of Palutena or Celestia, though news of a bow legged and shaky Luna seeing to her duties was frequent after she had resurfaced two weeks prior with a thousand yard stare and ordered the throne room be disinfected and bleached, and anyone caught spreading their ideas on what occurred in the throne room would be tried for high treason.

A day later Palutena emerged with Celestia, out of Celestia's room, her coat was now a light shade of spear mint green and her evergreen mane and tail flowed on an invisible breeze. She stood slightly shorter than Celestia, her cutie mark a swirl of light behind a hammer, scissors and saw crossed over at the handles over an anvil. Her face was similar in shape to Celestia's, however her features had a softer look to them. Celestia had a haunted look on her face, “So that happened,” Palutena remarked simply, she wasn't sure how to process three weeks worth of heat induced fervent sex or the fact that she might be carrying Celestia's foal Does this mean we are officially a proper couple? Palutena felt a pair of lips on her right cheek followed by a nuzzle and turned to see a worried Celestia,

“Palu, do you hate me for what I did in the throws of heat?” she asked, That came out of left field,

“'Tia, I don't hate you, I don't want to lose you, so just don't abandon me or leave me alone, I know you said you wouldn't but my stupid emotions won't stop making me worry” Palutena said in response, Celestia hugged her and kissed her on the lips and got a determined look on her face.

“I have some important business to take care of, will you be okay on your own for a while?” Celestia asked, Palutena nodded and then after another quick peck on the cheek Celestia ran down the hall.

Logically she knew she wasn't running away and leaving her alone, but the ache in her heart and the tears wouldn't stop, as she sat on her plot and sobbed.fucking hormones! A minute later a guard cautiously approached me,

“Your Majesty, is there anything I can do to help?” He asked, soon regretting it as an emotional goddess picked him up, “You want to help?” Palutena asked the poor guard nodded his head quickly in fear,”then guide me to the royal infirmary!” dropping the guard he quickly returned to his hooves and guided the way.

Half an hour later she was in the royal infirmary, undergoing a pregnancy test. “Alright your Majesty, the results are in,” the gynaecologist who performed her test said.

“Congratulations, you're two weeks pregnant and, by the looks of it, it's twins.” The gynaecologist smiled, “So who's the lucky father? I bet it's one of the guards,” she said with a sly smile. Palutena slowly looked into her eyes

“Can you keep it a secret?” she asked warily.

“Sure, the hippocratic oath binds me to secrecy,” she replied.

“Princess Celestia is the father,” Palutena responded as she carefully got to her hooves. I now have eleven months as a pony or longer till they finish nursing. she left the dumbstruck gynaecologist and smiled slightly.

After Palutena left, the gynaecologist called out, “Princess, she has left, did you really have to do this?”
Out from behind the curtain Celestia walked out.

“I’m going to be a father!” Celestia celebrated, jumping up and down, “and yes I did, she is scared that I’ll abandon her for whatever reason. So, I wanted to avoid her knowing I was here to lessen any perceived pressure,” she explained before pulling out a small box, “and I hope, she’ll make me a husband too.” Like I said, I have been waiting ten centuries for this day and I can't and won't wait any longer!

Meanwhile in Froggy Bottom Bog

“What!? That wasn't the doozy!? How can a hydra not be the doozy!? What could be doozier than a hydra!?” Twilight exclaimed, frustrated anger building inside her.


“I dunno, but that just wasn't it.” Pinkie replied shrugging, oblivious to Twilight's rage.

Pinkie’s indifference to the situation caused Twilight's rage to boil over, causing her mane and tail to catch fire, her coat turned white and her eyes turned red, flames roaring around her body as she growled.

Twilight heard Spike burping as a letter arrived, grabbing it she read, “Lady Palutena is pregnant with twins and Princess Celestia is the sire!?” Twilight screeched in disbelief.

Pinkie started spazzing out before her body stopped shaking, “Oh! So that was the doozy!” Pinkie happily exclaimed, having found out what that Pinkie sense combo meant and started bouncing off home, while a burnt Twilight laid on the ground with her right eye twitching as she groaned.

I wonder if Palutena would be willing to adopt me, even if I'm nearly eighteen already. It would be nice to call somepony my mother. Twilight thought to herself.

Next Chapter: Chapter 6: When The Reality Dawns. (Rewrote) Estimated time remaining: 12 Hours, 29 Minutes
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