Thistle Whistle and Minty were always the best of friends, but when Whistle shows interest for a new pony, who Minty shows great anger towards, their friendship might be in for a bumpy road that might be hard for anypony to survive. Just who is this new mare and what is her relation to Minty?
Thistle Whistle only wanted to prove her new friend, Malty, was just a normal mare and a really great friend. If only she knew the chain of events she had started...if only she knew.
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After much thought I decided to just take the gore tag off, the minor blood that appears really isn't "gore" worthy. This is complete but I will be posting 1 chapter a day. If the story isn't tagged as complete then I still have a chapter to post in the next 24 hours, if it is---well this notice is now pointless.
This is by far the most effort I had ever put into a single story. I have spent months writing this, and another few months to go through more than once fixing everything I could. If there are still errors such as typos, well, Tartarus.
Trust me when I say there is just nothing more I could do, you wondered why it took so long to post again? I was improving and now just gotta hope it pays off, Celestia the months... >_> P.S before you complain, yes this story uses the Gen 3 characters but they are brought into the FIM's world.
Proof readers are https://twitter.com/silvergunner and http://saints-fan-12.deviantart.com/ and the title image is by http://prettywitchdoremi.deviantart.com/
Thanks everybody for your help, and enjoy the story! P.S yeah the info above isn't much, but as you read you'll understand why. Somepony better have orange juice on standby. XD
23 Chapters:
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CHAPTER ONE:Just Another Normal Day [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 1st, 2016
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CHAPTER TWO:Pony Hunt [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 3rd, 2016
4,592
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CHAPTER THREE:Talking To Minty [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 4th, 2016
4,793
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CHAPTER FOUR:The Picnic [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 5th, 2016
3,160
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CHAPTER FIVE:Something's Odd About Minty [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 6th, 2016
5,729
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CHAPTER SIX:Roll, Stumble, Lessons [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 7th, 2016
2,823
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CHAPTER SEVEN:Lesson 1, Keep Your Emotions In Check [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 8th, 2016
6,130
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CHAPTER EIGHT:A Unexpected Visit [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 9th, 2016
3,226
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CHAPTER NINE:A Typical, Non Busy Day [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 10th, 2016
2,258
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CHAPTER TEN:Balancing Is Easy, When You Sock Somepony [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 11th, 2016
1,806
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CHAPTER ELEVEN:Sparkleworks, Her Secret Reason [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 12th, 2016
2,360
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CHAPTER TWELVE:It’s Beginning To Look A Lot Like Murder [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 13th, 2016
2,330
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CHAPTER THIRTEEN:Nothing Fancy, Just Dinner [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 14th, 2016
5,240
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CHAPTER FOUTHTEEN:Breakfast, Take Two [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 15th, 2016
1,799
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CHAPTER FIFTEEN:The Heart Breaking News [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 16th, 2016
4,400
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CHAPTER SIXTEEN:Malty And Minty’s Secret [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 17th, 2016
6,279
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CHAPTER SEVENTEEN:The Good News [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 18th, 2016
2,708
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CHAPTER EIGHTEEN:The Big Game [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 19th, 2016
3,574
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CHAPTER NINETEEN:You Thought It Was Over [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 20th, 2016
2,945
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CHAPTER TWENTY:It Gets Worse, And Then Terrible [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 21st, 2016
3,534
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CHAPTER TWENTY ONE:The Horror Of A Relapse [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 22nd, 2016
5,895
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CHAPTER TWENTY TWO:The Confrontation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 23rd, 2016
6,860
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CHAPTER TWENTY THREE:Amethyst’s Wish [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 24th, 2016
4,083