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Don't Get Cocky

by Nosferus

Chapter 5: Chapter 4 A filly's Prayer

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In the town, there were bipedal beings that he could best describe as monsters or demons who were covered in crude armors. These were many monsters who were of different sizes. The smallest one stood at 4 feet with daggers in their hands and had green skin. He named them Goblins.

The midsize ones were about 8 feet who were equipped with crude swords and had horns like a ram. He named them Satyrs.

Then there were the huge ones at 13 feet with bulky body and have tentacles on its face. He named then Cthulhu.

There was one even bigger than the rest of them standing at 20 feet tall was a monster that had one eye instead of two and a huge axe in his hands. He named it Cyclops.

Out of all of them there was one noticeable monster that got his attention. It looked like a person who was 8 feet tall, covered in a black robe from head to toe and had a long scepter in his hand. When he examined this person closely, he found that this thing wasn't a person at all but a mess of hundreds of worms that formed the shape of a person. What creep him out were the red glowing eyes on its worm like face. He just named it The Worm.

This thing seemed to hold more intelligence than the rest of the monsters because it was ordering them to fight the town's inhabitants. Now that he think about it, he moved his eyes to the inhabitants and saw that they were ... well at least looked like humans. Instead of a flat face, they had a small snout that look like a horse face but more human like and had large eyes and tails. Each of their bodies were covered in colorful fur that were different from each Individuals. They had hooves instead of feet but what caught him off guard were the wings and horns. Some of them had wings on their back while some had a horn on their forehead while some had none of them. They were 7.5-8 feet tall.

He also noticed that there were a group of horse/person? you know what, he would just call them aliens for now. These aliens were wearing golden armors and were equipped with either a sword, a spear or a mace and shield. This specific group of more than 100 individuals looks like guards because they were fighting against the monsters. He saw their fighting capabilities and was really disappointed in them as they were only able to take down a few Goblins before they were overwhelmed with brute force and numbers. During this, he saw some of the guards shooting magic from their horns which cause some damage to the monsters but quickly loss when they got surrounded by the monsters. This confirmed that there are magical being in this world. He also saw the Worm casting a spell from its scepter that paralyzed some of the guards. He immediately copied this spell with his "Rinnegan" and added to his arsenal.

After the guards were defeated, the monsters captured them and gathered the rest of the aliens in the in the center of the town. Then the Worm made its way in front of them while the monsters surrounded the aliens.

The Worm then spoke that sounded like multiple voices were talking at the same time, "You pathetic ponies have lost to the might of our king's glory and soon he will become the ruler of this world. You all will be nothing more than our slaves, objects of desire and you will work for us for the rest of your life. If you would not give in, then you will receive some .... punishment if you know what I mean."

This made the other monsters laugh as they stare at the aliens body with lust while the aliens gave a fear and disgusted look.

Just from that little speech, Christopher found out that these aliens are called ponies? Also that these monsters were not only going to enslave them but were also going to do atrocious things to them against their will. His blood started to boil as his rage escalated. This is one of the things that he will not stand for it. He now knows who to beat the crap out and who to protect. Its not like it was obvious from the very start, he sarcastically though.

He activated his "Hair Sensor" and spread his invisible feelers through out the entire town in order to find any hidden enemies. He also activated "Echolocation" and made a map of the entire town and its surrounding in his mind, just in case there were monsters hidden in the ground but thankfully there weren't any.

Before he could reveal himself, his sound map showed him a lot of individuals running away from this village and it also showed a group of monsters running towards these individuals. They must be more ponies who have managed to run away but are now being chased by the monsters. He will not let them. Christopher created a Shadow Clone.

He said, "You. Quickly go towards the fleeing ponies and saved them from the monsters. Kill every bastards who are chasing them. Leave none alive."

The clone nodded and said, "Got it boss."

The clone used "Soru" to dash towards the fleeing ponies in order to save them from the monsters. Christopher remained hidden in the shadow and waiting for a chance to reveal himself.

Near Ponyville Location

*Boom*

A few houses exploded as the blazing hellfire erupted from the town, and like a tidal wave, the flames consumed the monsters that failed to flee the inferno.

Panting, Sergeant Blaze Champion smiled at his handiwork, before the remains of his guards that served in his squad led the small group of ponies along with most the town's youth, across the field of black. The guards pushing the horror-stricken towns-ponies whose eyes fell upon charred corpses.

They had no time the sergeant knew, glancing as one of the mares collapsed in shock, and one his subordinate drop his weapons to quickly pick up and carry the unconscious female. Already the monsters that littered the town and those that survived the inferno were beginning to chase after them.

It was their job to protect Equestria's population, and they wouldn't be able to do it in town. Already most of their comrades had fallen, and the monster outnumbered them 10 to 1. Doing what he can, the sergeant had gathered as many of those he could save along with Ponyville's school children, who that Blaze had personally rescued from the swarm of goblins that were breaking through the school building.

Glancing behind him, Blaze could see a horde of monster had formed and was pursuing them, ignoring their burnt comrades and stampeding over them. They were quickly catching up, and the space between the ponies and monsters was gradually getting smaller.

'They will be on us' Blaze realized.

Just as they cleared the burnt field of death and the road leading to the south was visible beneath their feet, the Sergeant skidded to a stop and faced the approaching horde. His comrades along with a few of the towns-ponies stopped and looked at Blaze with concern.

Blaze ordered his comrades, "You boys get these ponies out of here."

The guards, understanding of the situation that was arising from the approaching horde, nodded and left the sergeant, though many looked back. Without fear, Blaze clutched his sword hilt and in one fluid drew his blade, readying the bloodthirsty blade as the horde approached.

Blaze whispered to himself, "For the Solar Princess and the Luna Princess."

He closed his eyes as the wave of death approaching. At that moment, he prayed for someone to save Equestria, he prayed for someone to protect those who Blaze knew he couldn't. Saying the ends of his prayer, the sound of the horde drowning out his voice the guard's eyes shot open, and he charged towards the enemy with a face filled with fury.

In his hand, the blade sang the song of death when the creatures reached him. Cold steel caressed the Satyrs skin, and his sword *Shing* arched down and sunk deep *Splatter* of the gushing fountain of blood that was the goblins.

A satyr wielding a mace, saw an opening as the pony disemboweled one of its brethren and *Clang* smashed into the guard's helmet and sending him *Crash* crashing into a surprised goblin.

As the guard laid dazed on top of the slowly suffocating goblin, blood slowly pouring down his head, the goblins began to jump onto him, their crude knives plunging into the guard's armor.

*Cling* *Clang* *Crackle* *Creak*

Most of the blunt, rust filled weapons failed to penetrate the guard's armor initially, but the pain struck Blaze's chest piece caved in under the weight. The chest piece was thrown away as the goblins peeled away the metal for the flesh, and the knives began *Shik* *Shing* cutting, stabbing and slicing into the white fur of the guard.

Blaze roared, "Get off you bastards!"

His horn began to glow, an orange aura emitting like a torrent from it. The aura quickly collapsed onto itself and sent a pulse of energy exploding outward.

*Boom*

Goblins and satyrs went flying in all direction. Panting, the guard slowly pulled himself off from the ground. Blood was seeping through the cracks of his armor, his life force slowly seeping into the grass at his feet. He felt faint from the loss of blood but forced himself to carry on. Turning back to the guard, he became dwarfed by a creature, whose shadow swallowed his injured form.

The guard cursed, "Oh hay no."

The only Cthulhu that followed the fleeing towns-ponies, had taken the magical attack like a wall; unscathed. Using a massive chunk of roofing it had grabbed from one of the destroyed houses, like a hammer, *Bash* it slammed the wood into the earth. The Cthulhu withdrawing, the makeshift wooden weapon was saturated with bloody clumps of green skin and red gore.

"Close, but not quite."

A voice called out from behind the sickly looking monster. The Cthulhu's eyes went wide and just as it arced the wood around, a flash of orange erupted in front of the turning creature, *Shik* and a finely-honed blade ripped through the tentacled monster larynx.

Sergeant Blaze stood triumphant, watching as the monster tried to cover its bleeding neck, air failing to enter its lungs. The dozens of monsters that had been blown away by the unicorn cautiously approached the bleeding unicorn. The guard, wiping his brow readied his weapons and prepared to fight.

*Shik*

That was until something powerful slammed into his back. Dumbstruck, he stared down and saw a piece of metal that protruded from his chest. Turning, the guard looked at horror at the smirking satyr, in its hands was a crudely carved wooden bow. Notching another arrow, one creak of the wood, one twang of the string, and unable to dodge in time, the guard felt something brush past his ribs. Grinning, ear to ear, the Satyr notched another arrow and sent it flying, this time the arrow *Shik* taking him in the knee. He crumpled to the ground as his kneecap shattered, screaming in pain finally.

Realizing that the guard's leader was defeated, the dozens of remaining monster raced in the direction that the towns-ponies had fled, leaving the guard and the Satyr, who was watching the dying stallion with a grin of delight. Drawing a dagger from its sheath and licking its lips in anticipation, it approached the dying Blaze.

Blaze croaked, "You think you won bastard. The princesses will find you, and they will kill you".

The dagger-wielding Satyr ignored its threat and instead grasped its furry hand around the guard's neck and rising the weakling struggling. Just as the blade was about to plunge into the dying guard, black flames, as black as night, erupted across the surprised creature's body, quickly consuming its entire body. Reeling the monster let go of the guard, and its knife, and began to wail in pain. Blaze landed on his feet but fell to the ground in quick succession as his knee sent waves of pain throughout his body.

Ignoring the lightheadedness that was gracing his head, Blaze smirked as he heard the withering monster scream. It was trying desperately to extinguish the black fire that was killing it, but it only seemed to spread the flames.

Blaze stated with contempt, "Magic's a bitch huh. Ha ... ha ... ha"

After seconds of pain filled screams, their voices were silent, and they toppled over, the fire slowly spreading across the dirt.

Blaze said, "Seems backup is here. Finally."

Blaze observed with a smile as the monster was silent. He did felt that someone was coming closer to him but he didn't felt any fear as he knew that who ever it was, was the one responsible killing the monster.

Blaze said as his vision was darkening, "Please. I beg of you. Save them. Whoever you are."

Just as a shadow loomed over his body, Blaze Champion breathed his last breath, dying in a pool of blood that seeped outward.

The Shadow Clone of Christopher cursed as he was too late to save the guard. Before coming here, he fought and killed all of the monster that were chasing the ponies and guards. He didn't reveal himself to the ponies and simply went for the monsters. After killing them, he heard one more pony who was fighting one monster. He quickly dashed towards the pony but when he reach him, he saw that a monster was about to stab the wounded pony.

The clone's eyes changed into the Mangekyō Sharingan and glare at the monster holding the helpless pony.

The clone said, "Amaterasu."

Immediately, the monster's body was covered in black flames who released the pony and tried to put out the fires but it was useless. Whatever the monster did failed to put out the fire. Instead it only further spread across its body and burn its body. The monster screamed as it tried to save itself from the black fire but is was all for nothing. Soon, its screams were silenced as it died and its body was burn to ashes by the black flames.

After the monster was burned to ashes, the black flames then began to spread on the ground and nearby trees, burning them.

The clone glare at the black fire and said, "Extinguish."

With just one word, the black fire that could not be put out by any means, were extinguished in seconds. After that, the clone ran towards the wounded guard but it was too late to save his life.

In the guard's dying breath, he heard what he said, "Please. I beg of you. Save them. Whoever you are."

The clone nodded and closed the dead guard eyes. With the monsters dead, the ponies safe, the clone's job was done but not before taking the dead guards body back to his comrades. The clone silently approached the guards who were protecting the ponies civilians. While keeping himself hidden, he quietly put the body of the dead guard near them and left quickly before they spotted him.

When the guard's eye landed on their dead commander, they ran towards him and cried for him. They have not only lost their commander but he was the one who kept the monster back for them to escape. he will be remembered as the pony who fought a hoard of monster alone for the safety of the ponies.

The clone silently whispered in a sad tone, "Forgive me for being late. But rest assured that I will be keeping your final words. I or more specifically my boss will protect these ponies. Rest in peace. You deserve it."

*Poof*

With that, the clone dispel himself.

Back To Christopher

Just as Christopher was about to reveal himself, he stops when he received the memory of his clone. He was happy that the ponies were safe but he became sad that one guard lost his life in order to keep the monsters back.

Christopher was pulled out of his though when a female pony shouted, "We rather die than become slaves to you monsters".

Christopher looked at this pony and saw that she was a cyan color pony with blue wings and rainbow hair. How did she do that to her own hair?

'She looked like the athlete type' though Christopher.

Next to her was a normal orange pony with blond hair and a cowboy hat. She looked physically fit and a hard worker. She joined the cyan pony and said, "That right and we will not go down that easily you varmints".

Another one stood up who was a white pony and wore an elegant dress. This one had a white horn with purple curled hair. She supported the other two by saying, "How dare you. You brutes should be ashamed of yourselves for treating a delicate mare with force. Look at what you did to my hair."

'What? She thinks that her hair is more important that her life' though Christopher.

Suddenly he was caught off guard when a pony zipped it way to the three in an instant and said, "Yeah, you big meanies. I was thinking of giving you all a big "Welcome to Ponyville" party but you destroyed Sugarcube Corner and hurt my friends, so now you can forget about having one".

'Whaaaaa???? This one was a normal pony and was well ..... pink! Pink fur, pink poofy hair, pink poofy tail, pink shirt and pink skirt. She was literally pink!! She looked like she was having the worlds biggest sugar rush. And what she said about giving them a party??? And how the hell was she avoided detection by his "Hair Sensor" and "Echolocation"' though a shocked Christopher.

"Pinkie. I don't think they were expecting any .... if you don't mind me saying" said a quite voice but he clearly heard it. This one was a yellow fur pony with yellow wings and long pink hair and pink tail. When he look at her he saw how cute she was and her shyness only made her more

"HHHHHHNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!???"

'What! what!! What!!! What the hell just happened!!!!? He felt like his heart was going to burst due to high level of cuteness' though Christopher.

Well, after getting over that .... unique experience, another pony with purple fur, purple horn and pink-streaked indigo hair stood with them saying, "Come on girls. We need to come up with a plan to get everypony away from here safely". Christopher was at least to say that he was impressed with them who still fight even thought they know they cannot win.

'And did she say any"pony"' though Christopher.

This is how these six looked like.

The Worm was not pleased at all for defying it which made it furious and what it said next only fueled his anger.

The Worm said, "You dare defy me you insignificant pony. I'll have your heads for this! But I don't want to lose valuable slaves so how about I give you a little .... entertainment!"

The ponies were confused what it was talking when the Worm gave a signal to two of the monsters. One monster brought three young ponies wrapped in chains. One was white fur with lavender and pink-striped hair with a horn. The other one was orange fur, with wings and purple hair. The last one was a normal yellow fur pony with red hair and a pink hair bow.

This is who the three fillies looked like.

When the fillies saw the other ponies, they shouted "Rarity/Rainbow Dash/Apple Jack help us!!!!". The other ponies immediately started shouting "let them go you monsters or I am going to take you all down in 10 sec flat", "you let them go right this instant", "keep your filthy hands of my little sister you varmints" and stuff. From their shouts Christopher he confirmed that they were the younger siblings of the ponies.

Then a Cthulhu came dragging a really bruised pony and throw him in front of the Worm. He examined the wounded pony closely a found that it was not a pony at all but a reptilian like being who had purple and green spines and a tail. The purple pony screamed "Spike" when she saw him.

He came out of his thought with what he heard next. The Worm raised its left arm and pointed at the children and said, "These ponies are weak and useless, so I will make a show out of them. Chain them up on the ground and leave them".

The monster did that and left them. The Worm turned its attention to the bruised reptilian whose name is Spike and said, "You on the other hand are not useless for being a dragon. So you will live as a slave but if you go against us then there will only more pain and suffering for you".

'A dragon? That reptilian was a fucking biped dragon!!! So let get this straight, the world that he is on not only has monsters, and magical beings like the ponies but also dragons and Manticores as well. What next? A wolf made of wood or a hydra that can regenerate its lost heads?' though a sarcastic Christopher.

The Worm then diverted his attention to the five ponies and said , "You want to know what I'm going to do to them? Heh ... heh .. heh".

The ponies were afraid to know what this thing was going to do to the children.

The Worm continued, "I am going to kill them for being useless"!!!!

The ponies were shocked the the monster was going to kill the children and immediately the shy pony, the elegant white pony and the purple pony stared to beg the monsters to spare the fillies life but their pleas were ignored. The cyan pony, the orange pony and the pink pony charged towards the young ones, hoping that they could somehow save them but were immediately subdued by other monsters. Spike could only watch in horror as the Worm began to charge a spell while aiming at the three children. Spike could not even move as all of his limbs were broken.

After hearing what the Worm said, Christopher became so enraged that the ground beneath his feet started to crack due to the energy he was releasing. He changed his plans from "beating the crap out of the monsters" to "Kill them. Slaughter them. Don't let even one of these things left alive. They don't deserve to live."

In the mean time the children lost hope when they saw they could not be saved. The orange filly with tears streaming from her eyes looked at the other two and said,"Well girls I'm glad to be your friend and I enjoyed my time with you both".

The Yellow filly with tears in her eyes said, "And I'm glad that your my friends when I was alone".

The white filly spoke while crying, "And I *sob* I *sob* *sob* I love you girls for *sob* for being by best friends *sob*. I'm going to *sob* miss you all".

The three of them hugged each other tightly while crying and said together, "Cutie Mark Crusaders forever".

Then the Worm fired its spell towards them. When the spell was about to reach them, the white one prayed in a low voice which the others could not hear

The white filly whispered, "Please somepony any"one", help us.".

After saying this she closed her eyes and waited for her demise but at the same time hoped for someone to hear her prayer and come and save her and her friends.
















"I hear it .... your voice."

*Boooom*.

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