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My Flawful Elements

by CartoonEnthusiast

Chapter 9: The Check Up

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At the hospital, twilight, flash, Flurry, Cadance and shining are in the doctor’s room as twilight is getting check with an ultrasound machine. Flurry is 5 years old and a talented magic user, thanks to uncle Sunburst.

“Well Ms. Twilight I checked the results and there’s nothing wrong with you or the baby” said Doctor Horse.

“Really Doctor?” asked twilight “Because this sort of thing happened before with my friends, but we won’t pregnant at that time.”

“Are you sure she’s okay?” asked flash

“Not exactly, Speaking of which the others were here earlier for the same check and asked those questions, but they got the same results: normal.”

“So there’s nothing out of the ordinary,” Cadance put a hoof on her mouth, reminded for an event “Twily, how did that glowing happened”

“I was trying to use my magic to make the room shine, but it got haywire. My friends hold me down and they started to glow...”

“…Then she started to glow and got lifted into the air before hovering down.” Continued flash

“And how did this ‘glowing’ feel like?” asked Cadance

“It feels magical…like my element” realized twilight

Flurry popped out between her parents and asked in a tiny voice “hey aunty twilight, are you & your friends the elements of harmony and the princess of friendship.”

“Why yes, our traits represent those gems” said twilight

“Well maybe it’s a sign of inheritance”

Everypony grasped “Huh”

“What are you saying, kiddo?” said flash

"Well twilight have the most important element, magic and same thing happened to the others. plus, this is your first born, what are the changing of them being the next element of harmony someday." suggested flurry

"Now, now flurry dear. We won't wanna jump to conclusions on that topic. there not born yet."

"Why not. i'm going rule the Crystal Empire like mommy when i'm older." flurry declared, flapping her wings and teleporting "I have my wings, magic and everything."

"Being a princess is a lot more than that" said Candance

"There's the duties, responsibility and protecting your people." said twily

"Sounds like a lot of work went you say it." disagreed flurry

"did not fret yourself baby girl" shining armor ruffling his daughter's head and when back to his wife "When your older you'll wear mommy's crown."

"Ok, but in the meantime..." flurry levitated cadance's crown on her head "I'll wear her crown."

Everypony giggle at her joke.

"Flurry's right on one thing though." said the pregnant alicorn "We think it has something to do with our elements."

"Well, we professionals can't predict what to expect from a child with non-unicorn magic." said doctor

"Even if it's true. they won't learn it alone." said cadance

"They got loving families and elements of harmony as mothers to help them figure it out." said shining armor.

Twilight blushed and giggle "You're right, there's nothing to be scared about."

"Doctor Horse, what's our baby like anyway." asked Flash

"Well, we have some good news, it looks like you're having a unicorn filly." said doctor

"It's a filly,"

"It's a unicorn."

"Yippee, i have a female cousin. Oh she's gonna be a beautiful, talented magic user... like you aunty."

"Well she's my powerful alicorn." compliment flash

"Oh flash" amused twily

"Now that that's settle with, let's go to the baby shower. We're are expected there." said Shining Amor

"Let's" twilight got up from her sit "Thanks doctor."

the doctor bowed "My pleasure, Twilight Sparkle."


Everypony was walking in the road to the castle. So are other relatives. Twilight and Flash are talking about their baby.

Flash gave twilight an assuring smile "You're lucky, the foal ain't an alicorn, aren't a?"

"Well you should know what flurry's like as a baby." twily pointed at flurry who was playing with her parents.

"Ah, who knows, anyway after hearing her opinion and what the doctor say, what do you think?"

"I don't wanna pressure my filly to follow my hoofprints. Not even the others." said twilight "I also worried whether or not they'll be friends."

"Well, the others are pregnant too. Changes are their babies will like our baby." flash rub her belly and spoke in a childlike voice "Heh, maybe little twily jr will earn her wings too."

Twilight shove him aside "Oh flash, stop it."

"Point is we'll just see how things go. this is your first."


"Huh you're right" agreed twilight, looking at her tummy then the surrounding "Isn't Ponyville the friendliest place, the magic starts here and spreads to all of Equestria. it's one of the strongest magic and you can find it everywhere."

Twilight rubbed and talked to her baby " i want you to be apart of that, lil one. You and the other kids that are coming soon. Now i don't know what you'll be. I don't know if you'll be friends with them or if you'll have my element. But i'll tell you this. Every time you feel a spark of magic each time you made a friend, that's friendship. That forms inside you just like it did with me when i meant my friends. You'll created new friendships and learn new things here."

As silience strike,a familiar voice called out. when she realize they reach the castle "Hey twily, what are doing standing around for silly, Come in." called a certain pink pony

"Coming." twilight respond "We all can't wait to see you."

Author's Notes:

Hospital Setting

Also Headcanon: When it come to different magic other than unicorn/alicorn you can't spot it in a hospital. Interesting stuff happening

Yeah Starlight, Sunbrust and flurry's in this story and i ship Sunlight or Starburst (i don't remember the name). i'll think of a background for them later.

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