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My Flawful Elements

by CartoonEnthusiast

Chapter 1: Nervous Daddies

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Have you ever felt insecure about your behavior? Do you get picked on for the faults you contain in that persona? Do you wish to change and forget what make you unique? Well, let me tell you something. Every pony has their own flaws that make them special; we’re not the same, perfect or flawless. But not all flaws can be bad, can them? They have some advantages depending on the situation and with a bit of understanding and accepted friendship and love they grow in all of Equestrian.

A pink Crystal Pegasus with colorful ringlet curls and pink eyes, reading a fanfic on a bench near fluttershy’s cottage. Realizing that the viewers are watching her right now.

“Oh, hi.” Squealed the Crystal pony “I don’t know you were watching me. I’m Rainbow Quartz, a crystal pony from the Crystal Empire. And yes I’m the one who was speaking, we all don’t have it easy fitting in for several reason; our look, our manners, our… flaws.”

The Pegasus started to cry before continuing “We been rejected and shunt away so much that we grow desperate to hurt the ones we love for approval by others you want to impressed.” She whip away her tears and continued with a smile “But now today we learn to embrace our flaws and appreciate those who unique, and it all started with the Daughters of our Heroisms.”

Inside Fluttershy’s cottage, her husband Discord was in the living room with Soarin and Spike having tea and gems. While Rainbow Dash was calming a furious Fluttershy, who is nine months pregnant as she destroys the bedroom.

“FOR THE LAST TIME, I DON’T NEED A SPA DAY I’M PERFECTLY RELAX!” Shouted Fluttershy.

“Fluttershy, the others are waiting for us and you’re destroying the whole place,” exclaimed Dashie, pointing to angel bunny “Look you’re even scaring angel."

“Aw am I’m scary," taunt flutters with a yell “TOO BAD!”

Discord sight “Oh sweet Celestia."

Spike exclaimed “Wow, I never heard fluttershy scream that aloud.”

Continued by Soarin “And you’re normally amuse when she is-- Discord, what’s wrong?"

“Who… me worried no .I’m fine.” Discord exaggerating.

“I don’t asked if you’re worried.”

Discord became nervous, sweat dripping from his forehead and shaking like crazy. He took a deep breath as he speck “It's alright I’m just…”

He was interrupted by the sound of the door knocking. Discord opened it with his magic and three other stallions came in: Flash Century, Trenderhoof and Cheese Sandwich.

“Hey guys, what’s up?” said Flash

“Greetings.”

“S’up every pony!”

“Hey guys what took ya so long?” asked Spike

The three stallions took a seat between Soarin and discord. “Our wives ask us get a groceries and stuff at the store before we leave?” exclaimed Flash.

“It’s the less we can do since there too pregnant to do anything around the house.“replied Trenderhoof

“Anyway, what’s the matter with the Lord of chaos order here?” Cheese shirked “Nervous Daddy or a wife with mood swings?”

“What nervous, Are you saying I’m afraid of my wife.” shattered Discord “You think it’s easy controlling her when she pregnant with my baby?”

“Whoa, whoa easy tiger I was just joking. Though you seem stressed out like that all day.”

Discord groaned though his teeth "I’m fine there’s nothing wrong with me.”

Everypony looked at him with concern, His obviously in denial.

“Discord buddy if there anything on your mind you can tell us, we won’t judge.” insisted Spike.

“Yeah we’re cool dude!” piped Soarin.

Discord had been friends with them since he first started dating Fluttershy, and was even the best draconequus at each of weddings. The fact that they already had a best pony was completely irrelevant, so surely he could trust them.

He sighed “the truth is I’m worried about Fluttershy. Her mood swings is getting worse and she is scar... making me uncomfortable.”

“Mmm I see, wife not making things easier for you because of her pregnancy,” said Flash “I feel your pain, dude.”

“Yeah, I try giving her massages, keeping her happy and doing the chores just to calm her down. And when she snaps she’s fighting animals, destroy the house, insulting ponies…”

Discord put his claw and paws on his face “And the worst part is she hates it, she tried to control it but…” he hesitated a while to speak before continuing “I guess it a pregnancy thing.”

Everypony looked at each other with smile then look back at Discord.

“That’s the thing when a woman pregnant. There are weird symptoms for high-risk pregnancy, I ever read a book about it after Twilight's magic when haywire.” Suggested Spike.

“Wait, you read a book on pregnancy.” Sorain said with a laugh.

“Hey even man must know about sex-ed," Spike swolded at Sorain "Anyway mood swings are one of the most common illnesses in pregnancy, one can be exciting about it but still be stress or overwhelm at the same time.”

Discord put his claw on his chin “Make sense, But like a said it getting worse,” looking the other way and narrowing his eye “and I think fluttershy is worried and is hiding something?”

“Well I’m sure the other girls well convince her to talk about it. Anyway I don’t balm you” Spike confesses “Rarity still has morning sickness since she was preggs. Burp bags and buckets everywhere.”

“And knowing Rarity she must be disgusted by it." explained Cheese.

“Exactly, but it not just morning: there the afternoon, dawn evening when the boutique open. It practical everyday and I think she getting high fever.”

“Well at least it not Cravings,” Cheese dropped his head into his hooves “Pinkie been eating everything at house and I have to run to the store every day to buy more. She literal empty out the icebox yesterday.”

“How is that different from what she normally do?” asked Discord.

“Same it isn’t a surprise she has a big appetite.” nodded Trenderhoof.

“The dish she make are very odd, even for her, plus it not just food she’s eating objects," Cheese began to giggled “Last time I leave the house and return I chase her eating steamers and confettie from her party canoe.”

Everyone burst in laughter after hearing his comment.

“Well that’s your random wife Cheesy,” snickered Sorain “Anyway the doctor told me and rainbow that she couldn’t fly high for a while because wind-pressure isn’t safe for the baby.”

“And she isn’t taking it seriously and is doing stunts with the other Wonderbolts.” sentence finished by Flash

“And even if Spitfire told her to go home and rest she’s flying about the sky or clearing the sky.”

“Well she still works at the weather factory after she became a wonderbolt.” said Spike.

“But there are other peagues who can do it and I’m afraid she’ll get a miscarriage.” complain Sorain.

“At least my wife pregnant isn’t so difficult, Flash,” said Trenderhoof in relief."Her pregnancy just makes her tried and me and the other apples have to do her chores too.” Wiping the sweat off his forehead “Woo, I didn’t wake up till 10:30 in the afternoon.”

A shock of realization when to discord “You know it hasn’t been long since any of us been married and we’re alright incapable of looking after them.” A worried look went to his face “And I gonna be a father in three months, What if I swear it up?” he breath heavily

“I’m with you dude,” Cheese agreed “We were on our own until we tied the knot with them, and never looked after someone.” Put a hoof on his left cheek.

“Well like my Dad always said.” suggested Flash “Once your committed with a special somepony, There’s no turning back.”

“And we can’t just leave em,” piped Spike “That well be terrible ever for us.”

“Well at least at the end of their pregnancy we’ll have an adorable daughter or awesome son to raise.” said Trenderhoof.

They all nodded in agreed to the prize they’ll receive out of this…A bundle of joy.

“And we have to work outside of Ponyville when their older. The girls an take care of them while we’re away.”

Considering that they’d saved all of Equestria multiple times, they ought to be able to look after a child without them. Ever if it’s a single, twin or triple, alicorn, earth pony pegasus or unicorn. There were later interrupted by a loud scream from Flutters.

“DISCORD, WHY ARE YOU TALKING TO THIS GUY WHEN YOUR SUPPOSE TO BE PAMPERING ME!”

“You’re going to the spa fluttershy, calm down!” said Discord.

“DON’T GIVE ME BACKTALK I’M SO PEEVE RIGHT NOW!” gasped as she realized what she said “Oh my, sorry sweetly.” spoke softly.

She and Rainbow Dash walk in the living room as she calms down. Rainbow’s hair is ruff up and covers in dust as she rubs her head sharply.

“Feel better flutters.” asked Spike.

“Yeah, its OK am still stressed and fatigue.” explained Fluttershy.

Sorain observed Rainbow “Oh my gosh Dashie, are you OK?”

She nodded “Yeah i just got a headache from her yell," said nervously “and…falling objects.”

Fluttershy giggle “Yeah, guess I need a relax."

“Well duh,” everypony smirked.

“And don’t worried sorain dear, I’m gonna flutter this time. Ha!” Rainbow joked.

“What are you said?’ scolded Fluttershy “Are you insulting me or so?”

“Whoo woo, Fluttershy, it OK, she only joking!” exclaimed Discord.

She blushed “Oh right. Hehehe!”

Rainbow rolled her eyes “Let’s just give these boys a break and go to the spa. The others must be about to leave.”

“Ok,” Flutters kissed her honey on the lips “Bye Cordy.”

Rainbow did the same with Sorain before taken off with fluttershy.

“Bye girls.” They wave at them goodbye before staring at Discord.

“Pfft she calls a Cordy!” giggled Spike “That funny!”

Considering Rarity called his “Spikey-Wikey” Discord gave his a gaze for him to noted.

“Wives, what are we gonna do with them?”

Everyone nodded in agreement to that statement.

Author's Notes:

Frist chapter of the story. newbie daddies discuss the problems downside and adventages of pregnency and being father.
if you see any errors please inform me

Note:I'm a newbie to writing so dont inslut me and sorry for the format. i'm new so...

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