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The savior

by Rainbow skies

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The ghost fox

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I slowly open my eyes and look around in a daze, I saw I was in a building that liked a white and gold way too much there were stained glass windows with people on them. I also notice I was lying on a marble floor so I tried to get on my feet but gravity had a different idea and I landed on my back and then on my side. I groaned in pain for a bit before I tried again but ended up on my face instead. I put a hand to my face to relieve some pain and when I did I saw a light blue paw on a light blue muzzle I jumped at the sight of it I then looked down and saw I had the same thing with my other arm along with my legs. I looked to my right and saw a mirror leaning against a wall, I got a good look at myself and tilted my head a bit.

I had ghost blue like hair with a black Diamond shaped patch running from my head and across my ears and down my muzzle, I had my pitch black eyes that look more menacing than before, I had three tails with a bit of a black shade on the tips. I opened my mouth and saw some sharp teeth that were pearly white but my tongue was black I closed my mouth and looked down to see that I had white paws, on my chest was a symbol that looked like some tribe would put on, it was a black fur diamond with ancient markings and there was a cross in the middle.

"What the hell how did I turn into a fox that looks like a ghost...hmm I guess I'm a ghost that's a fox... yeah seems legit" I said to myself ,yeah I was surprised I could talk but in all honesty I got changed into a fox not really a huge detail to think about more like being thankful for. "Now lets run down the list before I got here and turned into this," I said.

(Earlier)

I was walking in the wood with some torn off clothing and some blood coming down my face. I got into a fight with some asshole because he was stealing a woman's purse, after the fight that I won I gave the woman her purse back and left for the woods for some reason that was the only place I felt safe in, never knew why maybe it was just how much I knew this place. I kept walking deeper until I heard a faint giggle, it sounded like a small girls voice and right behind me.

"What the" I questioned quietly, I turned around to see no one I've only seen one movie in my entire life, tell me why it was a horror film, 'ok I'm just gonna leave before anything else happens'. "Who's there?" I said out in the dark forest. Or not. The giggle came back except louder then it said.

"Follow me" I stood there for a second, 'Alright I'm staying away from that' I thought but my body just moved on its own. 'Son of a bitch' I cursed in my thoughts as I walked even deeper into the forest and halfway through I felt as though I was actually being pulled instead of me walking. After twenty minutes of walking, I stopped in front of a cave and looked into it. "Enter the cave and start a new adventure," the voice said right in my ear then giggled and vanished.

"A new... adventure" I said to myself, I slowly entered the cave and I was surrounded by darkness I leaned up to a wall and continued walking deeper, I suddenly felt something shine in my eyes causing me to look and see a twinkle of light, I got curious and continued walking inside making it in a room that was light by the moonlight and there on a large pedestal were two objects a sword that looked a hundred years old and a ghostly blue gauntlet. "What in gods name?" I questioned again and walked over until I was right in front of it. I reach out to gauntlet and the sword and as soon as I touched it I felt a small zap on my finger making me yelp in surprise. The old blade shook on the pedestal for second and I backed away a little then in an instant it became sharp and clean almost new, it had a sleek black blade and a blue fox head guard and it floated up a bit next to the blue gauntlet that turned a darker ghostly blue color and black lines filled the tips of the fingers and etched itself deeper making it look like claws.

"Holy shit!" I shouted but when I did the gauntlet flew at me and opened itself then landed on my right arm and closed and it shrunk to match my arm size but it made it a bit smaller and it hurt like hell. I grunted in pain and gritted my teeth, I let out a louder scream as I felt spikes jabbed inside my arm and spread something in my veins it felt gooey and thick. The sword was next and flew right at with the point facing my chest ready to impale me, my eyes widen as the sword came at unreal speeds making it impossible to dodge. I closed my eyes and waited but nothing happened I did feel the wind get knocked out of me which landed me on my back, I opened my eyes and saw the blade in me but no blood came out nor any pain from the spot, it was right were my heart was and I tried to yank it out but It sank deeper and deeper until I couldn't even breath. It seemed like an eternity as the blade sank in me until it was gone and the only thing left was a black circle filled with ancient text on my chest. "What... have... I... done" I choked out before a bright light came and I passed out.

(Present)

"Then I woke up on the floor but what was the voice that leads me to the cave," I said then started to think about who it might be. I was thrown out of my thought when I heard a voice.

"Hey what are you doing in here!" I turned to see a humanoid unicorn pony how I know its a unicorn because it had a horn sticking out of his head. He wore purple armor with gold on the trim he had a blue mane and a light blue streak going through it he had white fur and a look that told me he wasn't happy to see me. I shot to my paws and he put his hand on his sword, I eyed him a bit with my steel cold black eyes, he went and took a step forward but I took one back and was about to bolt. He saw that coming and he called out for more guards.

Now I was panicking I looked around to find an exit but the only one that was there was where the unicorn was I cursed to myself silently then continued looking. I suddenly heard footsteps at the other end of the long hall, I turned and saw about thirty or forty guards all holding swords, spears and bows and arrows. "Well shit," I said out loud, this shocked them and they got into position I continued to look around more until I finally spotted a balcony about a few feet away that was open. 'Yes a way out' I cheered in my thoughts, looked back at the guards and smirked much to their confusion. I suddenly started running to the balcony taking them by surprise but they charged at me after a few seconds, they were fast but I was faster and I got to the balcony first, I noticed there was another section of this building. 'I think it's a castle' I thought to myself then jumped on the railing and launched off it to get to the other part of the castle. When I landed I skidded across it until I was at the edge of the roof causing me to look down and see a city made of marble and gold. I stared in awe at the beautiful city but I have pulled away from that when I heard Pegasus guards land on the building on was on, I frantically looked around and saw a banner with a sun on it that led down into a woods type of place. "Fuck it," I said and ran to the edge, I jumped with all my might until I hit the banner, I used my claws to slide down it slowly. When I was down I got to my paws and ran into the forest.

"What the hell is happening first some voice comes out of nowhere tells me about a new adventure, I get a gauntlet and sword, and I pass out then next thing I know I'm a ghost fox thing in some weird land were there are horses or ponies that are unicorns and pegasi and then some regular looking ones" I said as I ran more into the forest until I knew I was safe. When I felt like the coast was clear I stopped running and sat on my hunches and panted trying to regain my breath. "Geez what else could go wrong," I said with a small groan, I then heard a small whimper from a few feet away, my ears perked up and I turned to the noise. "What the..." I said quietly and approached the sound I went through a few bushes and trees until I saw what looked like a baby wolf that was made out of wood I could have said cool and left but I just approached it and stared at it. He looked like he was a few weeks old but he didn't look that big my guess is that he was the runt which is the smallest in the pack. "Hey, a little guy where your pack?" I asked him he looked at me with a bit of fear and he whimpered more. I thought to myself as I stared at the pup then realized I was bigger than him and looked menacing so I laid myself down to make myself look smaller, he took it well as his fear went away he got up, I looked at his glowing eyes when I sat up and he wagged his tail and panted. "Guess your pack abandoned you?" I asked him to my surprise he stopped his tail wagging and he whimpered and nodded. I felt like he was in my shoes or paws alone and left to fend for himself, well I'm not gonna let that happen. "Hey, why don't you come with me bud I'll take care of you," I said and he tackled me with small tears and licking my face with happiness.

"Ok ok down boy," I said and chuckled as he got off and sat down wagging his tail. "Alright now let's think of a name for you," I said he nodded. "Um, how about woody?" I suggested he shook his head. "Jessy puckman," I said chuckling he did not find it amusing. "Oh I know how about Ragnarok," I said and he gave a small bark of acceptance. "Alright Ragnarok it is then," I said and then I heard his stomach growl. "Hmm, I guess I need to feed you do you eat meat?" I asked and he nodded. "What about berries" he nodded happily, I got to my paws and walked around a bit and rok followed I then spotted a deer eating grass just a few feet from us, I used one of my tails to stop rok dead in his tracks and covered my mouth with my paw. "Ok I'll kill this one just stay here ok," I said and he nodded and sat.

I turned back to the deer I then laid prone and started to slowly crawl to it closer. When I was a few feet from him I pounced the deer didn't have time to react as I landed on its back and bit the back of its neck killing it instantly I jumped off and landed next to it I then signaled rok to come over. He ran over and I told him to dig in and he did I also did too. I mean I would have liked it cooked but I don't want to attract predator or those guard pony guys. When we finished I dug a big grave and put the deer in it and buried it I notice to get dark so I got rock and headed for a spot to sleep we walked for a bit until I found a nice safe spot I laid down and curled in to a ball and rok came and slept on me to make him warm I smiled and soon headed off to sleep.

(The next morning)

The sun was barely shining through the trees and I so happen to be in the line of fire which hit my face I ground and got up gently laying rok down I then started to walk off to find food I found a river and I went in it to catch some fish. I was completely still and didn't move I saw three fish pass by I used my tails and grabbed them lighting fast and threw them to the shore. I then left the river and headed to the suffocating fish I put them out of there misery and grabbed them with my tail again and headed to were rok was.

When I got to him he looked worried but then he saw me and he perked up and barked happily I chuckled and walked next to him and laid the fish down. "Go ahead bud those are for you I'm not use to eating them raw," I said and he happily ate them. I sat there watching him eat until I heard hoofsteps and I shot to my fee but it was too late I and rok were surrounded by spears I got in a low stance and gave a low growl.

"Quit your shit creature and come with us," one of the ponies said he took a step but froze when he looked dead in my cold hazel eyes.

I saw one of the pony guards was about to impale Ragnarok I jumped at him and broke his spear he backed and I growled louder.

"Touch him and you will end up like the stick" I threaten him. I wrapped a tail around rok and held him close to me. "Leave," I said in a low dangerous voice.

"Aint happening were here to take you to the dungeon and I guess we're taking that beast also"

I looked to see the unicorn I saw yesterday I glared at him but he shrugged it off while I wasn't looking I was struck in the back of the head and knocked the took this chance to grab me and rock and carry us back to that castle.

(Canterlot dungeon)

"Ugh did someone catch the licenses plate of the bus that ran me over" I groaned out I noticed I wasn't in the forest anymore but in some cell. "What the...wait weres Ragnarok!" I yelled out I heard a small bark behind me and I turned to see rok wagging his tail I picked him up and hugged him for a bit then let go and looked around for a bit. "Where are we?" I asked I heard hoofsteps and I saw an alabaster pegacorn with a long white dress with a bit of a gold trim on the edges and she had weird hair that blew in the non-existent wind it consisted of a light green, blue and pink. "Ooooh, pretty hair," I said staring at the hair like a child seeing something shiny for the first time.

"Thank you but how can you talk and what are you?" The mare asked and I shrugged.

"Well, one is a fox two I have no idea how I can talk and three let me and rok out of here," I said calmly while sitting and have rok play with one of my tail. The mare saw and was shocked to see rok.

"How did you tame a wild timber wolf they are ruthless creatures," she said slightly afraid I looked at rok and back at her.

"What Ragnarok pfft he's a sweetheart won't hurt anyone well not until I teach him of course but I will teach him for self-defense besides I didn't tame him I told him I will take care of him since he was the runt of the pack that abandoned him so he's my companion" i said and I felt something new at one of my tail I turned to see rock trying to chew my tail I chuckled and got my tail out of his mouth.

"Wait for that easily but you have to be some sort of beast tamer," she said and I shook my head. "Well I don't know what you are but what is a fox?" she asked.

"Um a carnivorous mammal that is part of the dog family with a pointed muzzle and bushy tailor in my case tails," I said and waved my three tails shocking her.

"Wait carnivorous does that mean you eat meat?" She asked.

"Well, I eat both meat and plants so it omnivorous," I said.

"Fascinating but there are not any other foxes in Equestria so you're the only one," she said and I frowned.

"Damn oh well," I said and looked back at her. "Um, can I please be let out I won't harm you or your guards...well maybe one but out of self-defense because they might kill me," I said she thought about it for a bit but she got a key and opened the cell door. I walked out along with rok I stretched.

"Now I would like to ask a few more questions if that's alright," she said I nodded and we walked out the dungeon and into the throne room.

(Eight hours later cause I'm lazy)

We talked and had a few laughs for hours good thing she didn't ask about my past but she got a letter from her student in the middle of it and we decided to have a little fun but with a hint of seriousness. She ordered her to go to a place called ponyville make sure everything was fine and make some friends while she was at it. I looked out the window to see the sun setting Celestia got up and went to the window and charged her horn. 'Forgot she told me they use magic here's thought I saw the sun go down and the moon rise it was brought half way up and it had a mares face on it.

"Hey, Celestia why is there a mares face on the moon ?" I asked but that resulted in a few sniffles. "Sorry that was rude of me to ask such a question," I said frowning a bit.

"No its fine it just I had to do something long ago that I wish I could make right," she said and looked at the but tensed up I noticed this.

"Uh, what's wrong?" I asked and looked at the moon to see that the mares head was gone then Celestia turned to face me.

"Listen I need you to find my student that's in ponyville and tell her nightmare moon is here I'll teleport you there now"she said in a serious tone her horn charged up and there was a blinding flash I covered my eyes and when I opened them I was on the floor in a library with six mares looking at me I saw rok and held him in one of my tails.

"What the fuck are you," the one with the rainbow hair said.

"Um I'm a ghost fox"

Next Chapter: Chapter 2: Nightmare moon Estimated time remaining: 23 Hours, 39 Minutes
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