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The Dark Entity (Being Re-written)

by Darkly

Chapter 15: Death's Rage.

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Dunmer watched from one of Canterlot's Castle's spires. Watching the destruction below.

"Darling, you said they would be here, I would rather not waste more of my recourses to find Death." Dunmer talked to the air.

'Daddy, they will come. Order your troops to defend the castle. Have snipers in the spires and garden. I foresee an unstoppable rage coming soon. The best you can do is fight it.'

"Of course, I'll do as you wish. If you think it is best." Dunmer stretched out his hand and sent a blue magic ball in the sky, it exploded into a bright, red star.

He can already see his army rushing to the castle.

'Daddy, stay here and wait for Death, he will come.'

"I know he will, and I will be ready..."

Dunmer summoned Selina's spear, it glowed white with power. His wings spread, some flesh falling off revealing bone.

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Remorel watched as a bright red light pierced the sky, Luna also took notice of this. Her look of worry grew.

Remorel just stared "Now we know where he is...Let's go.' He increased his walking speed, Luna close behind.

It didn't take long to reach the castle gate, most of the army was in the castle. For what reason, Remorel didn't know.

All he knew, was that he was going to kill every last one of them.

Luna sensed this, she started saying things like "Please don't kill ponies..." or "Please be carful..."

It only made the rage inside him grow, why was he the only one fighting these dammed, wretched Undead!?

It didn't matter, he wanted to kill, something he never thought he could do.

He looked ahead, he could see that the Undead were making a sort of "V" barricade in front of the gate. They knew he was coming.

Remorel drew his sword, its blade glowed in the daylight, the blood reflecting off of it.

"To all things Devine...I smite thee...To all things Devine...I will put you all down..." Remorel chanted.

As quick as a lightening bolt, he ran into the horde, slicing and slashing the rotting bodies into thirds, fourths, fifths, eventually into tiny little pieces.

And, for some odd reason, their souls were being drawn to him. They entered his body, making him feel more powerful and determined.

He looked at his hands, the blood magic was practically draining out of him with power.

He continued his slaughter as he made his way up the once white steps, now blood stained. He slashed the castle door open, knocking some Undead back.

He looked up and saw more. Lots more of the Undead. Some much bigger than most.

"No matter, they will die anyway..." He whispered.

He continued his slashing and slicing, each Undead getting cut open like potatoes. And each Undead that dies gets its soul taken.

The power was enough to destroy the planet twice.

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After an hour of bloodshed, Remorel has reached the spire. Most of the Undead were blocking the way to this particular room. Now, not so much...

The door was no longer its original color, now it was red. Some of the blood on it was dripping from the frame.


Remorel pushed open the door, revealing dark energy and a black cloud shrouding the room.

Luna whispered "What's happening Remorel?"

Remorel just listened, the room deathly silent.

He inched forward...

*ZIP*

Suddenly, a bolt of magic hit around Remorel's feet. Causing him to step back, knocking into Luna.

"So...you have finally come. Not that I'm surprised, you are Death after all. Those Undead were practically child's play."

Dunmer stepped from the shadows "Hello Remorel, long time no see..."

"Quite..." Remorel returned to his fighting stance and glared at Dunmer.

Dunmer just stared.

"I see you brought one of the Princesses..." His voice was calm, creepily calm...

"Yes...this IS her room..." Remorel responded, with an equally calm voice.

Dunmer shook his head "Dumb idea bringing the Princess of the Moon here..."

Dunmer suddenly took a magic beam, aimed it at Luna, and fired. The beam quickly incapacitating Luna.

Luna went down with a shriek, her magic being drained.

Remorel couldn't do a thing, if he intervened, his magic could also be depleted.

He had to watch Luna suffer...

After a few more seconds, she stopped screaming. She laid on the ground, breathing heavily.

Dunmer chuckled "Two down, one to go..."

Remorel went wide eyed.

'Celestia too!?'

Dunmer raised both of his hands, the moon and sun both coming into the sky. The moon went in front of the sun, making an eclipse.

"With the power of the Sun, Moon, Life, and Human Will, I will be able to defeat you and take your power! Making Humanity walk among the living once more!"

Dunmer expanded his wings, flying into the sky "Come Angel of Death! Fight me! And become one with the Sun and Moon you oh so adore!"

Dunmer flew away, climbing high into the sky.

Remorel looked around, the cloud is gone, Luna breathing heavily, the knowledge of Celestia's defeat, and Canterlot in turmoil.

He gripped the handle of his sword, a new feeling in his body, one he hasn't experienced in years.

Rage.
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Luna awoke slowly, her body feeling like it was hit with a ton of bricks.

She looked around, her eyes couldn't focus on anything. But her other senses kicked in.

"S...sister..."

She left the room, slowly limping down the stairs in search for her sister.

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Chrysalis watched from the sidelines, watching Canterlot burn and ponies running wildly.

Some of the reformed changelings went to help, even they are getting slaughtered by the bipedal creatures.

She looked down, thinking to herself.

'Can I really feel friendship..? Will I no longer starve..? What am I to do...'

She looked back up, noticing two new creatures in the sky.

'I...I need to help...'

Chrysalis flew from her hiding spot and towards Canterlot.

'I don't want to be alone anymore...'

Author's Notes:

Sorry for the wait, getting moved into a new house though :3. And sorry if it feels rushed, but there will be perspective chapters with Luna, Chrysalis, and eventually Remorel and Dunmer.

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