Magic & Cutie Marks (Re-Edited)

Solar breathed heavy as he raised his wooden shield and sword up. He stared down his enemy and got into his stance. He made sure to watch his opponents movements. He watched as his opponent made a move into a different position. He knew that was the time to make a move. He ran forward and swung his sword. His enemy was thrown off guard a little but not enough for Solar to land the ending blow.

Shoot, I thought I had him. He watched as his foe came at him. He raised his shield and felt a mighty blow from his opponent's sword. He was sent back a few inches and once again breathed heavy. I'm getting too tired to continue. I need to finish this fight. Solar ran forward with his sword raised high in the sky. He quickly swung it down, but his foe blocked it with his shield. But Solar had no time to rest as yet another attack was about to hit him. He raised his shield and blocked the attack. The two then started to exchange attacks between each other.

Solar carefully watched his enemy's movements. He needed a way to get in and get his final blow. He then spotted it. His foe was going for an upper attack. This is my shot. He ducked and spun around his enemy. It threw his opponent completely off. First rule of combat, get your opponent to mess up. Second, read that mess up. Third, quickly move on that mess up. Fourth, strike the foe. He hit his enemy with his shield hard in the back. His enemy fell to his knees. Solar walked to the front and pointed his sword at his enemies face. He smiled as he had done it.

"You're dead, I win."

A clapping sound echoed around the room. Solar looked to see it was Stonewall. He saluted to his superior officer. Even though he was the prince, Solar wanted Stonewall to train him like any other guard.

"Nice work Solar, you are becoming one of the best guards I have ever trained. I wouldn't be surprised if you take my job one day." Said Stonewall

"Thank you, sir." Said Solar

"Up soldier, you're done for the day. I do thank you for your service." Said Stonewall

The guard that Solar had been fighting got up and saluted to him. He walked towards the exit while holding a few spots from where Solar hit him. Solar just chuckled. "Well, how was I today sir."

"You are excelling at everything boy. I have never seen somepony with your potential. I mean, you were fighting a guard with over ten years of service under his belt. I guess I'm going to have to get into some of my more experienced veterans to train you. But for now, take a break and shower. I think we can end early today." Said Stonewall

"Thank you, sir," said Solar as he saluted.

Solar ran off to the showers and Stonewall watched him. He gave a light chuckle at him. This kid is amazing, he is taking down guards I have personally trained. His intelligence in warfare is uncanny. Though if Doctor Pulse is right about his theories with the magic running through Solar, I wouldn't be impressed if he could make being a guard by his tenth birthday. He sure has a lot of things coming for him. Solar will soon become the official Prince of Equestria. He will probably finish his guard training. Though I still wonder what the magic in his system is doing to him.

***

Celestia was looking over her son's school work. She was amazed by him. She had picked some of the best tutors from her school, but in a week she had to choose a new set of instructors. Solar was excelling in school much faster than she would have ever thought. She even could see him graduating her school at age ten, which was only three birthdays away. She placed a paper down and picked up another one. She looked over it.

Simply amazing, he has passed all the entry level classes. Solars' even excelled in a few intermediate classes. He's already in the highest level classes I have at my school. I have a genius as my son. Though, how much comes from the aspect of this magic. She placed down the paper and picked up his papers from his abstract math class. He's even getting excellent grades in theoretical math at age seven. Most ponies who study this stuff, even with a cutie mark, can't get it this quick. I guess that is why he's special.

She moved from school reports to military ones. She picked up Stonewall's report on Solar. She read through it and set it down. She placed her hand on her chin. My son will quickly become a guard by his tenth birthday, It just doesn't seem possible that he could be this developed. I think it's time I see Doctor Pulse about his theories on my son. She got up and walked towards Doctor Pulse's office. She hoped he could shed some light on these developments of her son.

***

"There you go." Said Pulse

"Thanks, doc." Said the guard

"No problem, now just get plenty of rest, and your body should be up and running in a day or two." Said Pulse

The guard got up from the chair and walked towards the door. But the princess opened it first. He bowed to the princess and walked out. Celestia raised an eyebrow to the guard's wounds.

"How did that guard get so injured?" She asked

"Well, you can thank your son. That was a ten-year veteran of the Royal Guards, and he had his butt handed to him by the prince. I got to say. Solar is making my life enjoyable. I should probably start to expect more veterans in pretty soon," said Pulse putting up his clipboard.

"My son caused all those injuries," she said astonished.

"Yeah, go figure an eighty-pound seven-year-old child can create those kinds of wounds. Well, I guess you didn't come here to talk about wounded guards." Said Pulse

"Yes, why not check these out," she said as she handed a few documents she had just received about her son's schooling.

Pulse took them in his hands and couldn't believe his eyes. He had to sit down to make sure he didn't fall straight to the floor. He then placed the papers on his desk and pinched the bridge of his nose. He then looked at them again.

"Amazing, he is surpassing his classes with flying colors. It is more than I had ever expected for the magic to do to him." Said Pulse

"What do you mean?" Asked Celestia

"Well Tia, I took some more samples from his last check up. I also did some more testing. His results were crazy." Pulse got up and got Solar's folder. He then opened it up. "The magic has condensed perfectly in his body. I believe that he is ready to harness the magic and use it. Though I think it needs something to activate it. The magic has also seemed to heighten his senses and his increased his structure. I wouldn't be impressed if he had a six-pack by his thirteenth birthday. He can quickly build muscle, and his bone structure is incredibly dense. It will take a lot to break any bone in his body. His reflexes are easily higher than anypony. His sight is perfect and can even see micro changes in people. I guess that's how he has been beating a lot of guards silly. The magic is also strangely condensing around his internal organs. I believe it is a sort of defense. Now the major thing I found is that the magic has also affected his brain."

"Anything bad." Said Celestia

"Nothing bad at all Tia, his brain is completely healthy. It is just that I believe the magic has allowed him to understand and learn at a higher level. He also has a fantastic memory system, plus his ability to retain information is significant. I believe the magic has made him into a super-intelligent pony, though these are just theories. I'm not even too sure about a lot of things. But I do know one thing." He said

"What?" Asked Celestia

"He has become stronger than anything in the recorded history of Equestria and even Eques. I'm not sure if that's good or bad. But I guess that's up for you to decide." Said Pulse

"I could have never expected this to happen from just breastfeeding." Said Celestia

"So I have to ask, been teaching him magic." Said Pulse

"Well yes, but he can't summon his fire yet. But now that you tell me that he is ready, I guess I should have him try again." Said Celestia

"Sorry Tia, but he can't pull the magic from his body, just yet." Said Pulse

"What?" Asked Celestia

"Well my research into magic hasn't come up with much, but I do have a few things. Like I said, he needs something to activate the magic. The magic is in a hypersleep state. Now, even as his body takes in more magic, it won't harm him. It seems like it just passes through him if the body has too much. Now the way to wake it up would be a massive surge of magic. Though with all the magic in his body, I think it would be best to push that magic through him slowly. All at once could cause him to have sort of a magic meltdown. But one more interesting thing I found out about his magic usage." Said Pulse

"What more could you find?" Asked Celestia

"His body is creating the magic." Celestia's eyes widened at that statement. "Yeah, typically unicorns pull magic through the land into them to perform spells. Other species of ponies in Equestria already have the amount they already need to carry out their tasks. But Solar's magic seems to be replicating itself. I have no clue how it is even doing that. But I'm sure the kid will be extremely skilled in magic. I guess you got yourself an awesome son there, Tia." Said Pulse

"I do, but how much longer will these keep affecting him." Said Celestia

"Well, the magic seems to be slowing down. I would suspect that it should be done altering his body by age ten. But I'll check that when he comes in for his yearly check-up at age ten." Said Pulse

"Thank you again, Pulse, with your help. I can't thank you enough for taking this job and keeping my son a secret to the outside world." Said Celestia

"Hey, anything for an old friend, Tia." He said

As the two laughed, an earthquake started to shack the castle. Celestia then began to feel a massive surge of magical power surge through the air. Oh no! Then a guard busted through the doors. He was breathing heavily.

"Princess something has gone wrong at your school."

But before Celestia could ask what happened another guard breathing heavily came in, he stopped and spoke to the princess.

"Your highness, something has gone wrong with the young prince. An orange magic is coming off his body, and he is screaming in pain. No guard can get close enough to him. We need help."

"What exactly happened?." Asked Celestia

"Well just a few minutes ago, a Sonic Rainboom was spotted just under the city of Cloudsdale. Then came a powerful surge of magic came from your school." Said the first guard

"Prince Solar Flare was returning to his room when the Sonic Rainboom went off. Then came that surge of magic. At first Solar looked ok, then he started to complain about his head. His hands began to glow a dark orange color. Next thing we know, magic is coming off his body." Said the second guard

"This is what I feared, the magic that was dormant in his body is now active. He doesn't know how to control the outflow of it, so his body is just expelling it any way possible. But I have a planned for this," said Pulse as he got up

He pulled out a syringe and a veil of liquid. Soon the castle shook again. Darn, I underestimated his magic. It can easily tear this castle to pieces. I just hope this works. He placed the cap on the needle. He threw it into his lab coat pocket. He then went back to the princess and two guards.

"What are you planning?" Asked Celestia

"First off, you need to get the school and stop this surge of magic. When it stops, Solar will stop. But my plan is to put him to sleep. I have a needle full of sedative that should calm him down. Then when he is calm, his body should be able to expel the magic in a more peaceful manner." Said Pulse

"But," said Celestia, but Pulse stopped her.

"Tia, I can promise you that your son will be safe. Now you have a school to help, and I have a prince to save. Now let's get going." Said Pulse

Celestia knew he was right. She sighed as she flew out the door towards her school. Pulse looked at both guards in his clinic. "Now take me to the prince."

The guards nodded and took Pulse to the young prince.

***

"Don't hurt the prince!" Commanded Stonewall

He had been trying to calm down Solar, but it was useless. Magic was coming out of his body like crazy. Every time a guard got close, a surge of orange magic pushed them back. It's almost like the magic is defending him. But that makes no sense. Magic isn't living. Damn, where is that guard, I could use Doctor Pulse right about now. He then heard a voice speak out to him.

"Captain Stonewall."

He looked back to see Doctor Pulse and his two guards. "About time you all made it. I could use your help her doc."

"How is Solar?" Asked Pulse

"He is screaming like somepony is killing him. Every time I try to get a guard close to him, the magic blasts them back." Said Stonewall

"Wait for the magic blasts them back." Said Pulse

"Yeah, almost as if the magic is living." Said Stonewall

Now that is interesting. Solar's magic has a defense system. Now that explains why it's surrounding his internal organs. It seems to be protecting its host. Pulse pulled the syringe from his coat pocket. He looked over at Stonewall.

"You got an archer here." Said Pulse

"Yeah, hey Quick Shot, get your tail over here." Said Stonewall

The guard came over and saluted to him. "Quick Shot reporting for duty."

"He's the best archer I got on the force. But how will that help us." Said Stonewall

"Well first of the magic isn't alive. it is defending its host body. It's rare to see magic like this. But if it senses an object enter the field of its host, it attacks back. But it doesn't kill the target. It just keeps them away from the host body. But an arrow can pierce through the defense as it will be too quick. Now the arrow will have my syringe on the end of it. It will deliver a sedative to the prince. Quick Shot, you will send this arrow to the prince. Now for aiming, go for one of his legs." Said Pulse

"Alright, sir." Said Quick Shot

"This will work, Doctor pulse." Said Stonewall

"Yes, the sedative is quick acting. It will begin calming Solar down and place him into a deep sleep the second it hits." Said Pulse

Stonewall took an arrow from Quick Shot's quill. He broke the bolt head off and had a guard give him some of their clothing. He tied a tight knot on the arrow. After it was perfect, he handed it to Quick Shot. He took his bow and pulled the arrow back. He carefully aimed for the prince's leg. Then with a release of this breath, he shot the arrow. It flew quickly towards Solar. It was too fast, so his magic wasn't able to stop it. It easily struck the leg of the prince and the effects quickly took over his body. The magic field slowly died down, and Pulse ran forward and caught Solar. He pulled the syringe out of his leg as it was no longer needed. Heart Pulse placed two fingers on his neck to check his pulse. He sighed as the young prince was still breathing.

"He's ok. Now I think we should get him to his bed." Said Pulse

"Agreed, now I have to make sure everything is ok with the princess and her school. The rest of you get this castle cleaned up. I don't want the ponies of Canterlot starting rumors." Said Stonewall

Stonewall quickly ran off to see the princess. The guards began to clean up the area and help the wounded get to the clinic. As they did it, Pulse carried Solar to his room. He could feel an energy passing through him. He looked down to see his hands glowing orange, and it was pulsing off the top of his hands. I wonder.

***

Solar slowly opened his eyes. His vision was a little blurry. He rubbed them and his vision returned to normal. The first thing he saw was his mother looking over his body.

"Mommy." He said

Celestia's ears twitched and looked down at her son's eyes. But now she could see something had changed. Instead of his birth mother's eyes, they had turned orange, though they weren't completely orange. She quickly forgot about her son's eyes and brought him into a hug.

"Oh my son, I was so worried for you." She said

"I'm all right, mommy, though I don't know what happened to me." He said

"That I can answer," said Pulse as he came towards the resting prince.

"What do you mean, Doctor Pulse?" Asked Solar

"Well, I can't tell you everything, because you're not of age yet. But I can at least say some things. You see, your magic has been dormant in your body for years. Now the way to bring it to life was with a powerful surge of magic. I was thinking of having it given to you in small batches, but it seems that it all came at once. Your magic came to life, and well you couldn't control it. So it went crazy, I was able to get a sedative in your body to calm you down. Do you understand Solar." Said Pulse

"Kind of, I now can use magic." Said Solar

"Yes my son, now how about you do as I taught you. Concentrate your magic. You must create your magical fire before you can do anything else." Said Celestia

"But I don't have a horn like you mother." Said Solar

"I have a solution to that. Concentrate your magic to your hand. Create the fire there." Said Pulse

Solar nodded as he started to look at his hand. He slowly began to concentrate his mind on his hand. He began to sweat as he kept trying to create his magic fire. He was about to give up, but it finally appeared. His hand became engulfed in an orange flame. Celestia and Pulse were amazed how orange it looked. Solar brought his hand to face and looked at the fire on his hand. He released it and tried again. This time it was much easier.

"That's great Solar!" Said Celestia, hugging her son.

"Thanks, mommy, this is as cool as the stuff I saw today." Said Solar

"So what do you remember, before you lost control of your magic." Said Pulse

"Well, I was walking in the hallway after I finished training. I heard an explosion outside. I went to a window and saw a huge rainbow in the sky. I knew that it was a Sonic Rainboom. I was amazed to see one because I had read that it was nearly impossible to do. The next thing I saw, was a dragon bursting out of your school, mommy. But my head started to hurt, and that's all I can remember till I woke up just now." Said Solar

"It seems to match up with what the guard told us. Now Solar, would you like to try something." Said Celestia

"What?" Asked Solar

"Now that you can control your magic, would you like to lower the sun and raise the moon." Said Celestia

"Really mommy, do your job!" Said Solar with excitement.

"Well you are my son, you might as well raise and lower the sun and the moon some days. Now let's get you dressed in some new clothing and go outside to the garden. It's about time to lower the sun and raise the moon." Said Celestia

"Alright, Mommy." Said Solar

***

Solar stood outside with a fresh pair of clothes on. He looked at the massive ball of orange light. His mother stood close to him. Many maids and guards stood outside, ready to see if the young prince could do it. Celestia bent down to her son's level.

"Now try your best. If you think you can't do it, that's ok. Just tell me, and I will take over. But as I have said." She said

"Sometimes we fall, but we have to get right back up. We fall so that we can learn how not to fall." He said

Celestia smiled that she was able to teach her mother's words to him. "Now good luck." She then kissed him on the forehead. Celestia walked back to where Pulse was standing with Stonewall.

"If he does this, what could it mean for his future." Said Stonewall

"It means the kid has a robust set of magic that is comparable to the princess's magic. Or that of any alicorn." Said Pulse

"But what about all the tests you did on him. Doesn't this prove that he could be stronger than any pony or any creature on Eques." Said Stonewall

"It may Stonewall, but he is my son. I will teach him to use his powers for good. He wouldn't want to train to be a guard if he didn't wish to use his powers, strength, and knowledge for good." Said Celestia

"You are once again right, princess." Said Pulse

Solar stood looking at the bright orange ball. Though not directly at it. He raised both his arms but lowered them again. If I want to be a great prince and guard, then I have to do what is hard. I can't take any easy path. No, I have to prove that I am worthy to rule this kingdom by my mother and be a protector of this nation. This time, he rose one hand. He took in a breath of fresh air and let it slowly out.

His hand began to glow its orange color. He pointed it up at the sun. He began to concentrate on it. I need to connect my magic to the magic of the sun. Only then can I lower it, but then have to switch from the sun to the moon's magic, to raise it. He started to sweat and breath heavy as he pushed his body. He could start a connection to the sun, but it was hard as he was trying to connect to the moon also. His body began to shake as he kept pulling the connection to him. He dropped to one leg and panted as he wasn't able to do it. The crowd gasped that he wasn't able to do it. Celestia began to walk forward, but Solar rose back to his feet.

I can't fail this! The first rule of being a guard, you don't fail until you have given up. And I won't give up! He rose his hand back up to the sun. His body began to glow with orange energy. There were more gasps as magic began to swirl around his arm. No matter how hard, I won't back down. No matter the challenge, I won't stop. For I am Solar Ignition Flare, future Prince and guard. The magic kept flaring up around him. Everypony watching began to drop their jaws. The sun was starting to disappear. Solar wasn't even sweating or shaking. He had made the connection to the sun.

They all watched as the moon was raised up to the sky. They all watched as Solar did it all with one hand. He placed the moon in its spot and let his aura go. The glow around his body also disappeared. He gave as sigh as turned around to be brought into a tight loving hug.

"That was perfect my son. You never gave up. I think Stonewall and I have taught you well." Said Celestia

"Thank you, mommy." He said hugging her back

After they had broken, they heard clapping and cheering.Celestia looked down at him.

"Well wave to your fans, I think you deserve it son." She said

He waved and laughed, but he suddenly stopped, and Celestia looked up at her son. He seemed fixed on his hand. She decided to ask her son what was up.

"What's wrong honey?"

"Nothing, except I got my cutie mark," he said as he showed his hand to her.

Her eyes went wide as she looked at it. It was a real cutie mark. It was of three suns. Each sun was colored orange. They were circling an orange crystal sword. She smiled and brought her son into another loving hug.

"What do you think it means, mommy?" Asked Solar

"Well, Solar that is for you to discover. But I can see it has to do with you being a prince and being a guard. I think you will learn the meaning in time, my amazing son." She said

"Should we tell the others." Said Solar

"I think so." She then cleared her voice to get the crowds attention. "Everypony, Solar has truly shown that he is my son. Today he was able to lower the sun and raise the moon. But he also got his cutie mark. Now I think that calls for a celebration. Everypony to the dining room."

The ponies cheered and headed off. Celestia let Solar down. He looked up at the Mare in the Moon. He smiled at it.

"You think Auntie Luna is impressed with me." He said

Celestia looked up at the moon. She still wished Luna was here to see her nephew. But Celestia new in a few years the spell would disappear, and Luna would be back. Celestia looked back down at her son, as a smile came to her face. "I'm sure she is. Now let's go party in celebration of your new cutie mark, you only get one."

"Race you mommy." He said as he ran ahead.

Celestia giggled to herself. "Now come here you." She began to chase her son towards the dining room.

***

Doctor Pulse held a bottle of hard cider in his hands. He sat in his chair looking over Solar's file, yet again. Pulse set it down and took a chug of the drink. He finished the bottle and threw away. He pinched the bridge of his nose as he looked at the file. He sighed as he got up and walked around his office. He looked at the clock and knew he should be heading home to get a good nights sleep. The party was a lot of fun, but he left early. Solar's magic and abilities were still on his mind.

I know I have seen this before, but where. Pulse went over to his medical journals. He pulled one and opened it up. It was a fake book to hide material inside. Inside was a bunch of newspaper clippings. Pulse closed the book and set the clippings down. He looked at them all and pulled Solar's file over to him. The clippings were about the bloodiest war Eques has ever seen. The World War, where every nation of Eques was fighting each other. No pony or creature knew the exact reason the war began. But afterward, more bloody wars kept hitting the nations of Eques. Pulse was aware that there was a connection between Solar's appearance, Celestia being in that forest that day, his powers and the wars. He slammed his hands against the table.

This is crazy, I'm trying to connect Solar to these wars that have taken so many lives. But something about him is so similar to what brought about these wars. It was almost like every time. They were trying to create something through each of these wars. But what can be set up with slaughtering lives? I need some sleep. Pulse put Solar's file up and the clippings away. But as he was, one fell out. He picked it up and his eyes went wide. He had discovered it all with just one small war clipping.

No this can't be right. Not this again!

He rushed out of his office with the clippings in the book. He also took Solar's file with him. He ran from the castle to his home. He made it to his home. He began to pull all his research out from his tour around Eques. He started to post it all on board. He stepped back as his body began to tremble. He turned his head as he heard a knock at his door.

He walked over and peered through the peephole, but felt something enter his body and exit. He grabbed the spot and saw it was bleeding, he backed up and ran towards his room. He knew he didn't have enough time. He pulled a test tube full of a chemical. He took a piece of paper and wrote his final words on it. He tapped it to the book and poured the chemical over it.

I just hope Solar can figure this out. He is the only one who can stop this massacre from happening. Celestia helps us all, as we have been too blind to see the truth in front of us. But I know Solar will find it, he was brought here for this very reason. He soon heard the door bashed open. He slowly walked backward as the intruder came in.

"It seems you poked your nose where it shouldn't have gone, doctor." Said a dark deep male voice.

"Well, it seems I'm the only one who saw it all. You think you can get away with this all. Then you are wrong. You failed, Solar is in the hands of the princess. Captain Stonewall is training him. He will be the one to put an end to your deeds." Said Pulse

"Is that so doctor. How will he do that, when you are dead." He said

"I'm not dead!" Said Pulse

"Not yet that is." He Said

He summoned two blades to his arm and smashed them into Doctor Pulse. Pulse was slowly lifted into the air as the intruder laughed in a dark manner. He summoned another set of blades and set them on Pulse's throat.

"The boy may be in the hands of the princess, but I will still achieve my goal." Said the figure

"But at the cost of millions of lives." Said Pulse

"My returned was foretold. But I decided to speed up my return. I'm sorry, doc. We could have used you. You could have joined us and had a better life. But you stuck your nose in something that wasn't your business. Now I hope you had a beautiful life. At least your death won't be in vein. Your death will continue to move forward my plans. Now goodbye Doctor Heart Pulse." He said

He shoved the blades into his throat. The doctor grasped for the last of his breath. His life flashed before is eyes. With his last dying breath, he uttered a few final word.

"Celestia have mercy."

The intruder sliced his weapon through the doctor's neck. Blood splashed across the wall. He removed his blades, and the doctor dropped dead to the floor. He took up all of Pulse's work. He saw the empty test tube. He tossed it over, and it crashed to the ground. He looked down at the fresh puddle coming from the two wounds of the former doctor. He dipped his finger into the blood. He took his finger and wrote on the wall. He laughed when he finished his note.

No pony or creature can stop my plans. Not even Solar Ignition Flare. But I will see this world as mine, as it should have been centuries ago. Nothing can stop me. He pulled out a test tube of his own. He scooped up some of Doctor Pulse's blood. He returned the test tube. He then left with all of Doctor Pulse's research. He looked up at the castle. He let out yet another dark evil chuckle, as he walked away.

***

Celestia suddenly jolted awake. Sweat was rolling down her face. Her body was shaking in fear. She looked around her room, but there was nothing. The door then busted open with two of her night guards and Stonewall. He quickly made his way over to the princess.

"You ok, princess. The guards heard you screaming. I was making my last rounds for the night when they called me over. Is everything alright." He said

"I'm not sure Captain Stonewall, but I fear something terrible has happened. I also fear something is returning to Eques. I'm not too sure, but I am afraid that the end of time is coming," she said as she got up and walked out to her balcony.

"I don't understand princess," said Stonewall following her out.

"I'm not too sure myself, but a dark evil has returned. One I haven't felt since the World War of my parents. It seems to be growing more and more. I also believe that my son is connected to this all. But I'm not too sure how. But I do know one thing." Said Celestia

"And that would be?" Asked Stonewall

"My son will be the difference between the annihilation and survival of Eques." She said

Stonewall looked out to the land before him. He remembered what his family had told him about the World War, which brought about the rest of the wars that came afterward. The constant bloodshed that each war brought to each country of Eques. He gulped the lump in his throat as he muttered something under his breath.

"Mercy."

Author's Notes:

Well, that was a quick turn of events. Well like I said, this would be a story within a story. Solar will follow the mlp episodes, but he will also have a completely different story line. Now I know a lot of people are going to dislike this story for a few aspects So I will point out a few here.

First off, Solar will not become a complete bad ass. As it stated in the story, everything stops when he is ten. After that age, he will be normal, well normal enough. So please don't thumb down because of that? I promise that Solar won't be some super powerful human in a world of ponies.

Second is the part between our mystery figure and Doctor Pulse. I know it seems a little out of place, but I can assure you that everything Pulse saw before his death will be revealed in time. The figure will also be revealed. I would like to say that this story is rated M for 'gore'. I might edit the tags to better fix the story. I also can assure you that cursing will be every minor in the whole story and will mainly be spoken by our mysterious villains and a few ponies. Celestia will never swear and her son will only do it on occasion.

Now I think that about covers what I wanted to speak on. I promise you that the figure and what he was talking about and what Heart Pulse found. Will be revealed in time. But these will only be small sections at a time. Now comment, like, and follow. I hope to see you all in the next update of Solar Son