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Solar Son

by Sword Master

Chapter 24: Chapter 23-Double Flame (Un-Edited)

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Author's Notes:

So I hope you enjoy this chapter as we get a guest appearance. Also I'm sorry if any grammar problems come up. For now just sorry for them, if you find any. Hope you all enjoy and we will continue with the mlp story line after one more chapter.

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Double Flame (Un-Edited)

Solar sat on the couch in his house. He was working on Heart Pulse's journal some more. He was happy as he had the house to himself, so he could work in relative peace. Twilight and Spike had returned to Canterlot. Twilight was doing her interview and Spike was there to help her out. Solar and Twilight were getting close to adopting there first children. Even though Twilight was carrying a foal, Solar still wanted to give a new life to a filly or two. Solar had already done his interview and they had done the house visit. Spike was happy that he hadn't caused them to lose the chance of adopting a child. But now it was up to Twilight. Of course the agency was going to interview his own mother and Twilight's parents. Solar knew it was all going to work out in the end.

Solar growled as he was stuck on journal. He had only a few sentences done, but nothing that was major. He sighed as he set down the journal. I should have known it was going to get harder, but this is beyond normal. Well I guess you really wanted to hide your work, Doctor Pulse. Solar stretched out his body and closed his eyes to catch a quick nap, but he heard a knock on the door.

Solar slowly got up and stretched out his body. He then walked to the door and opened it up. He was expecting one of his friends, but what he got instead shocked him. It was General Spitfire of the Wonderbolts. Her coat was a gold color and her mane was orange with an amber stripe in it. Her eyes were also an orange color. She had a pair of wings on her back, which made her a pegasus. Her cutie mark was of a backwards capital 'L' that was covered in fire. She was wearing a shirt with the Wonderbolt name on the front and her name on the back. She was also wearing a pair of short shorts. She also had on her blue shades.

"Well I never thought I would see you again." Said Solar

"Well it has been a while." Said Spitfire

"Well I shouldn't keep you outside, come on in." Said Solar

"Thank you Solar." Said Spitfire walking in and placing her shades on her head.

"So Spitfire, whatcha doing on here in Ponyville." Said Solar heading to the kitchen

"I heard you and Twilight got a place here, so I decided to see it for myself. A little strange to see you both living in a library, is that dragon living with you to." Said Spitfire

"Spike, yeah he is my brother. Were also hoping to put a few children in also." Said Solar coming from kitchen with two beers.

"So your still going through the adoption process, I swore Twilight was pregnant." Said Spitfire.

"Well even with Twilight having a child, I still wanted to adopted a filly. I'm unsure though how many to adopt." said Solar

"Well from the look of this house, you could have two adopted fillies and have your foal from Twilight. I wouldn't be surprised if you're adopting a good amount of children, from how you act. But why fillies instead of colts." Said Spitfire taking a drink of her beer.

"Well I just think fillies get a bad rap. I mean, you know that mares produce more fillies than colts. So the mare population is much larger than the stallion population. So sometimes a mare will abandoned a filly, but not a colt. Sure I want a son, but I would first like to give a new life to some fillies." Said Solar taking a drink.

"Well you sure have a big heart. So which fillies do you want." Said Spitfire

"Well it might seem crazy, but a bat. I know what your going to think, I'm crazy. But the bat ponies have as much a right to have a loving family as any other filly." Said Solar

"But why?" Asked Spitfire

"Well while living in Canterlot, I saw how the ponies of Canterlot treated the bats. I think they should have the same rights as any other pony. Now that Luna is back, I hope to see a change in my home town. I also want to see the Lunar Guard also come back to the castle guard. The bats have a better ability to deal with the night, much better than a pony can." Said Solar

"Hm, seems like you know what you are doing." Said Spitfire

Before Solar could say anything, the door was busted open with Rainbow Dash and Rarity. Solar just raised his eyebrow to Rainbow, as she came up to his face. Solar knew Dash was hard headed, but not a mare he really feared like his mother and his wife.

"How dare you?!" Said Dash

"What?" Asked Solar

"How dare you, not tell me you know Spitfire of the Wonderbolts." Said Dash

"Dash were not here to say that." Said Rarity

"Then why are you here?" Asked Solar

"To confront you. How can cheat on Twilight?" Said Rarity

Spitfire and Solar look at each other and then back at the two mares. Solar pinched the bridge of his nose and Spitfire then began to laugh, which caught Rarity and Rainbow off guard.

"Oh you two are funny. No Solar and I are friends. I'm actually married myself." Said Spitfire showing off her wedding ring.

"Wait your married." Said Dash pointing to the ring

"Yes, I have been married about the same time Solar has been married. Though instead of a stallion, I'm married to a mare." Said Spitfire

"Oh so your a lesbian." Said Rarity

"Yes, I married one of my team mates, her name is Fleetfoot." Said Spitfire

"So Spitfire is married to the second best Wonderbolt named Fleetfoot. Why don't I know this?" Said Dash

"Because I and Fleetfoot don't talk about much about our marriage outside of the base. But I do love her with all my heart." Said Spitfire finishing her beer.

"Then your not cheating on Twilight." Said Rarity rubbing her neck

"I really don't know how you got that idea that I would ever cheat on Twilight. Spitfire and I are just friends." Said Solar finishing his beer

"Well I did see a mare walk into your house while Twilight is gone. I kind of might have over reacted." Said Rarity blushing in embarrassment

"No worries Rarity, your just looking at for me. Oh Spitfire, this is Rarity." Said Solar

"Nice to meet you darling." Said Rarity

"And this is Rainbow, a huge fan of your group." Said Solar

"Oh my gosh, I still can't believe I'm looking at one of my heroes or even talking with her." said Dash

"Well darling, how did you meet Spitfire." Said Rarity taking a seat with Rainbow

"Well at Summer Sun Beach. It was the place I and Twilight spent our honeymoon at. I was working out on day when Spitfire came up to me. As you probably heard, I am great in hand-to-hand combat. So Spitfire asked me to a match and well we became friends after that. Then I learned she was also honeymooning with Fleetfoot. So we all became quick friends." Said Solar

"Oh that is amazing, so who won the match." Said Rainbow

"Well Solar did beat me, which brings me to why I'm here today. You said that you would give me a rematch, well I'm ready for it." Said Spitfire

"Well I got nothing else going on in my life. I also could use the challenge." Said Solar

"Can we watch?" Asked Rainbow

"I don't see why not, but only if your ok with it Spitfire." Said Solar

"I have no problem. More the merrier in my book. Plus the more ponies come the more will see me beat you." Said Spitfire

"Oh this is interesting darling. I'll get the others and we'll watch." Said Rarity

"This is going to be awesome, Solar vs Spitfire in a no holds match." Said Rainbow

"Well I guess we have a match, your on Spitfire." Said Solar

"Just know, I have been training and won't hold back for nothing." Said Spitfire

"I wouldn't want it any other way." Said Solar

The two shook hands and they looked into each other's eyes.

***

"Oh this going to be good." Said Pinkie sitting in a chair with a box of popcorn.

Rarity had gathered up her friends and chairs. They were all ready to watch Solar and Spitfire spar. They hadn't seen Solar fight and this was there first chance. Spitfire had decided to lose her shirt, since she wearing an orange sports bra under it. Solar was now wearing a plain white shirt. They each had their hands wrapped up and Spitfire had her wings wrapped to her body.

"So the match rules are simple. Hand-to-hand combat only. No magic for me and no flying for you. But everything else is ok." Said Solar

"Seems kind of unfair, when your magic heightens your senses." Said Spitfire

"No need to worry, I can actually turned them off. I thought I should make this a fair fight." Said Solar

"Actually put them back on. I want to fight you like the day we first fought." Said Spitfire

"If you say so." Solar touched his head and all five of his senses came fully back to the point they were. "Now let's see what you got."

"Get ready to lose." Said Spitfire

"Go Spitfire!" Said Rainbow

"Rainbow, ya cheerin' for the wrong pony." Said Applejack

"Maybe, but I was a fan of Spitfire before I was a fan of Solar. So Spitfire is who I'm going to root for." Said Rainbow

"Please Rainbow darling, everypony knows that Solar can't be beat with his senses. I'm afraid that Spitfire will lose." Said Rarity

"You'll see, Spitfire will beat the pants off of Solar." Said Rainbow

"Quiet, there about to start." Said Pinkie

"Ready Spitfire." Said Solar

"Give me all you got." Said Spitfire

The two ran at each other and meet each other with a strong kick. It easily made the wind around them move. Spitfire smirked at Solar as her tail went for his leg, but Solar somersaulted out of the way. He smirked as he saw her attack coming.

She got on her guard as Solar rushed her with speed. Since his senses were at there heightened points, he could easily see the attacks Spitfire was going to give him. But Spitfire had trained to keep out of Solar senses. She knew his sight was his strongest, but she also knew if she was fast enough, she could get past it. She then blocked as Solar came at her. Damn, I forgot how powerful is hand-to-hand is. Good thing I trained in blocking, but I need to get my head into the game. I need to beat his senses.

Solar went to sweep Spitfire off her feet, but she jumped into the air and came down with her hoof landing a strong hit on his chest. Solar was sent flying backwards and soon stopped himself and breathed. Shit, well now that was an attack. She moved faster than my sense of sight could pick her up. So I guess she really trained to block my sight's ability. This should be an interesting fight. Let's see what you got Spitfire. Solar quickly rushed her and somersaulted to her.

When he was close enough, he stopped spread his legs out and began to spin on his hands and began to attack her. She blocked him, but didn't see the next thing coming. Solar stopped and using his hands pushed himself feet first into her chest. He struck her and then threw her into the air. As she came down, he delivered a blow to her face. It sent her flying into the ground, but Spitfire caught herself and got herself back on balance.

"I'll give you credit Solar, the only true sparring partner is my wife. So fighting against you is something else. But your going have to do better than that to put me down. They didn't give me the title of general of the Wonderbolts because I'm a push over." Said Spitfire wiping away some of the blood from her mouth.

"Then bring it Spit." Said Solar

"I like that nickname, I'll have to start using it for me." Said Spitfire

"This is so awesome!" Said Dash

Spitfire rushed Solar once more hoping to get him off balance. Once she picked up enough speed, she slid under his legs and quickly delivered a blow to his back with her hooves and then spun up and gave him a kick in the head, dazing him. She then grabbed his arm and threw him to the ground. She quickly got out of the way as Solar rose from ground. He coughed up some blood and smirked. Best fight ever!. He watched as Spitfire came at him. He got in a stance Stonewall had taught him. It was to throw his enemy completely off. Hopefully this works, because she is easily over powering my sight.

Spitfire reached him and tried to land a ending blow, but Solar took her arm and gave her a strong upper cut. He then jumped and using his foot smashed her back down to the ground. He landed and Spitfire quickly went at him. I do like her spirit, she never gives up. He grabbed her arm and tossed her into the air and gave her a strong strike to the back, she coughed up some blood as he did so. She was sent flying and Solar ran, but Spitfire got him with her tail. She tripped him and landed safely.

"That's one purpose for a mare's tail. To always trip up a stallion." Said Spitfire

"I think your right." Said Solar

He got up and started his chain attack of fists. Each one hitting Spitfire hard and on point. The last one knocked her back. Solar wiped the blood that was coming down his face. Spitfire did the same as they both huffed and puffed. They each could feel the battle and wounds pushing on them. They knew that it was time to end this.

"Amazing, they are equally matched." Said Applejack

"Yes darling and no matter how much they take, they still fight on." Said Rarity

"Come on, I want to see some teeth!" Said Pinkie

"Pinkie that seems a little cruel." Said Rarity

"Yeah, but who can blame me, I've always enjoyed a good fight." Said Pinkie munching on more popcorn.

"I just hope they don't hurt each other to much." Said Fluttershy

"Seein' those two fight, I wouldn't be surprised if they feel no pain." Said Applejack

"So AWESOME!!" Said Dash

Solar and Spitfire clenched their fists. They each had one good attack left in them. This attack for each of them would settle it. They ran at each other and got ready for the final strike. Solar with his sense of sight started to learn Spitfire, but with her speed, she kept him guessing. But Spitfire was watching him. Even with his senses, Spitfire knew that he was trained to fight. She had to land this blow right to finish it.

The two jumped into the air with their fists raised into the air. Solar friends watched as they waited for who would win. But no pony was ready for the finish they got. Instead of one going down, they both did. As their fists went to their targets, they made contact at the same time. They had both gone for the head. They both struck with the last of their strength and sent each other flying. Then they each stayed on the ground exhausted.

"Its a tie!" Said Dash

"It seems that way Dash." Said Applejack

"Let's go make sure there ok." Said Rarity

Solar got up and went over to Spitfire and gave her his hand. She gladly accepted it. He got her back up to her feet and used his magic to heal her wounds as he did for himself.

"That was great, I haven't had a fight like that in years." Said Spitfire

"Yeah, me to." Said Solar

"You darlings alright." Said Rarity

"Yeah were fine Rarity, I healed us up with my magic after the fight. So what did you girls think?" Said Solar

"It was awesome, now I'm more than pumped to fight you." Said Dash

"But somethin' is botherin' me. Solar ya said that ya had your senses heightened, but you got hit bad. Did ya really keep them off." Said Applejack

"No I had them on, but even our five senses aren't the key to everything. Sure my senses can do things that no normal pony can, but they also can be defeated like any other sense. Spitfire's speed, kept my sight guessing how she was going to act. So in this fight, I was really fighting on my training. Sure at times, I could see her movements, but not all the time. My senses are strong, but I only rely on them when I need them. A guard has to rely on more than his five basic senses." Said Solar

"Well said Solar. Well I should get going. You and Twilight definitely have to visit I and Fleetfoot. Also, we aren't done with this fight, so be ready to fight again." Said Spitfire

"Anytime Spitfire and safe flight home." Said Solar

"Thanks and good luck with the adoption process, I know that you and Twilight will make great parents. See you around." Said Spitfire

She threw on her shirt and took the skies as Solar waved goodbye to her.

"Man Solar, you are so lucky." Said Dash

"Well actually I'm even luckier, because of knowing Spitfire, I get tickets to her and her teams races and shows." Said Solar looked back at Dash.

Dash felt her eye go twitchy and feel over onto the ground. Solar and the girls just laughed at her reaction.

***

Solar sat on his couch with a book in his hand. He then felt his magic fire go off and he found a scroll appear. It wasn't his mother's because it didn't have her sun seal. No, this was his wife's personal scroll that Spike had sent for her. He smiled as he opened it and began to read what was inside to himself.

'Dear Solar,

I hope you had a nice day without me. I hope you weren't to bored with nothing to really do. I'm staying with my parents and they can hardly wait till the baby is born. Cadance and Shining say hi as well as my dad and mom. I know your mom would say hi if she were around. Now down to business, in this letter is an early morning ticket to Canterlot. I know you hate getting up early, but this is important. My interview was great and even though I was a little nervous, I was able to show we are a loving family. So the orphanage has allowed our request to go through. Solar were going to be PARENTS. Now we can go tomorrow afternoon and adopt the child were looking for. They have even allowed us the chance to pick more than one. So please get some sleep, pack an over night bag, because we can stay at the castle and a good pair of clothes. So get to bed Solar and see you in the morning. With all my love, Twilight.

Solar found the ticket and saw that it was early. He chuckled to himself that he got a wife and mother that is a morning person. While he was more of a night owl, like his auntie Luna. But he still enjoyed them both. Solar set the letter down and ran his hands through his hair. He smiled as the day was a great one.

This day was perfect, I got to spare with Spitfire and I'm going to be dad. I can't believe it, I'm going to be a DAD! Well I should get some sleep because Twilight doesn't understand the meaning of sleeping in. Well this time, I think sleeping in will have to be pushed aside. He slowly got up and went up to his and Twilight's room. He entered and got changed for the night. He laid in bed and just laid there looking at the ceiling. Fatherhood, here I come. He closed his eyes and let his dreams fill his mind with what the future of being a father holds for him.

Next Chapter: Chapter 24-Adoption (Un-Edited) Estimated time remaining: 6 Hours, 57 Minutes
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