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Solar Son

by Sword Master

Chapter 22: Chapter 21-Golden Ticket (Un-Edited)

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Golden Ticket (Un-Edited)

Solar and Twilight with Spike were helping Applejack carry a few baskets of her family's apples. Solar needed the training as he was staring to train his mind to be stronger. After the incident with Nightmare Moon, he had taken a small amount of mental damage. But nothing that would cause him to lose sight of everything. Solar was still happy to be free of his fear. While in private, he had told Twilight of the nightmare ,Nightmare Moon, had given him. He was happy to get it off his chest once and for all.

"So ya ok now, Solar?" Asked Applejack

"Well as ok as the prince can get." He said

"I'm just glad your with me again instead of that shell of you." Said Twilight

"I know Twilight." Said Solar with a sigh

"So I hear your training to become mentally stronger." Said Applejack

"Yeah, Nightmare Moon was able to hit my sanity and strike a chunk of my mental stability. But nothing I can't come back from. With the book my mother gave me, I'll be able to train my mind even more. This way, if I get attacked mentally again, I'm more than able to push past it." Said Solar

"Well nice tah hear." Said Applejack

Soon they heard Spike up chuck something. They looked to see he was hold a scroll in his hand. Solar dropped his basket and took the scroll, he could see that it was from his mother. He opened it and looked it over. Inside were three golden tickets. Twilight set down her basket with Applejack and Twilight spoke up.

"What is it?" Asked Twilight

"My mother has given us three tickets and invites us to the one and only Grand Galloping Gala." Said Solar

"Really the Grand Galloping Gala." Said Twilight

"Well that's the biggest party of Equestria." Said Applejack

"Yeah, the most boring party of the year." Said Solar handing Spike his ticket and Twilight

"How so?" Asked Applejack

"You see after Equestria found out that I was its prince, I had to attend every gala, every year. I hate it because it's just a bunch of stuck up rich ponies of Canterlot sucking up to me and my mother. Now not all of them are bad, but I hate the gala period." Said Solar

"Yeah and I'm not much into that stuff, so I think I and Solar will stay home this year." Said Spike

Twilight took the letter and looked it over and found an extra line.

"Not so fast Solar, there is a line down here for you. It comes straight from your mom. She says that you must attend this year and no getting out of it. She expects to see you and if you drop out for any reason, she will cut your income you get from her." Said Twilight

"Damn mom, I should have guessed you would do that much." Said Solar pocketing his ticket.

"Well you still won't see me there." Said Spike handing Twilight the ticket

"Well seeing ya got an extra ticket to the gala, you wouldn't mind handing that tah me." Said Applejack

"I'm going to get back to the library and wait for the shipment of the last of our stuff." Said Spike

"Thanks Spike and Applejack why do you want to go to the gala." Said Solar

"Because I can finally show Equestria how good mah family's apples are. Then I can raise enough money to help the farm and get Granny Smith that new hip she needs." Said Applejack

"Well sounds like a nice plan. I see no reason why you can't have the ticket." Said Twilight

"Wait is that a Grand Galloping Gala ticket." Said Rainbow as she came crashing down to the ground

"Where were you Rainbow?" Asked Twilight

"Oh in that tree catching a quick nap. All the clouds were gone, so it was the next best thing." Said Rainbow

Solar looked up at the tree. "Um...I'm not to sure how comfortable that is."

"Oh it works out just fine. But besides the point, you have a spare ticket, can I have it." Said Rainbow

"Wait one minute Rainbow, why do ya want it. The gala doesn't seem like your kinda place." Said Applejack

"Normally I hate formal parties with rich ponies, but this is the Grand Galloping Gala. This is a chance to meet my idols up front." Said Dash

"Well the ticket is already mine, so just dash away Dash." Said Applejack

"First off, nice pun and second that ticket is mine." Said Dash

"How about we arm wrestle for it?" Asked Applejack

"Your so on." Said Rainbow

Solar and Twilight watched as the two began to arm wrestle. They quickly exited without either of them seeing them leave.

***

"I can't believe that so many ponies want to go to this thing and never once did you invite me." Said Twilight

"I never invited you because I knew you wouldn't like it." Said Solar with his hands in his pockets.

"You don't know that." Said Twilight crossing her arms over her chest.

"Trust me Twilight, ponies have dreams when they come to the gala and they never come true. Applejack's dream of selling her apples and Rainbow's of meeting the Wonderbolts are as real as I wanting to grow a horn and a pair of wings out of my body." Said Solar

"Please Solar your over acting to this all. I'm sure they will achieve there dreams. I know it to be true. As mine is to go and talk with Princess Celestia and tell her everything I've learned." Said Twilight

"So I guess you'll be keeping your ticket." Said Solar

"Yes and I guess you have to keep your ticket." Said Twilight with a grin

"Don't remind me, I've heard a rumor that BlueBlood is going to be there. As you know, I hate that pompous asshole, which even makes this an even worse gala." Said Solar

"I know, but you can take him on." Said Twilight

"Yeah I guess." Said Solar

Soon enough Pinkie came crashing into Twilight and Solar. Solar was able to grab Twilight and Pinkie before they both hit the ground. He then helped them both to their hooves.

"Thanks Solar, I was testing out a new item for my parties and it kind of backfired." Said Pinkie

"No problem Pinkie." Said Solar rubbing his neck.

Pinkie smiled and saw the two tickets on the ground. She picked them up and looked them over. She then heard Twilight's stomach start to grumble.

"Man, I forgot how hungry I am. So want to grab a bite to eat. Wait where are the tickets?" Said Twilight

"Twilight, these are tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala. Which is one of the most amazing parties in Equestria. Oh I just have to sing to you about it." Said Pinkie

Solar and Twilight looked at each other as Pinkie began to sing about the gala and tell everything about how the gala was the greatest thing ever. She then came down to the ground with some balloons and smiled atTwilight. She then saw two tickets and looked between Solar and Twilight.

"Oh two tickets, that means only you and Solar are going." Said Pinkie with a hint of sadness in her voice

"Actually Pinkie Solar has his own ticket, he kind of has to go because he is the prince." Said Twilight

"Don't remind me." Said Solar

"Oh darling what are those?" Asked Rarity coming up with a few bags in her hands.

"There Grand Galloping Gala tickets. Solar already has his own." Said Pinkie

"Grand Galloping Gala tickets like thee Grand Galloping Gala." Said Rarity

"Um, yes." Said Twilight

"Oh darling you have no idea how long I have wished to go. Originally I would try to go, to woe the son of Celestia. But I see another mare already took his heart. But now I can try to woe the heart of Prince BlueBlood, Celestia's nephew. Hopefully he will see my true beauty and then ask for my hand in marriage, which would mean we would be family Solar." Said Rarity

"Well I'm kind of surprised that had a dream to woe me over. Sorry that didn't come true, but I did promise Twilight that she was the only one. Now about BlueBlood, I would tell you..."A hand was placed over Solar's mouth.

"What Solar is trying to say is, he is happy and flattered that you find him attractive and supports your ideas for Blueblood, now one moment with my husband." Twilight quickly pulled him away.

"What was that for, Twilight?" Asked Solar

"Easy Solar, you don't want to crush our friends dreams do you. I mean Blueblood isn't all bad." Said Twilight

"Please he's an asshole with a stick shoved up his ass, he could be a damn scarecrow if he wanted to be." Said Solar crossing his hands over his chest.

"I know you and Blueblood don't have a strong relationship, since he tried to steal me from you and take the throne through me. But that still doesn't give you a right to destroy Rarity's dream. Look at this way, maybe Blueblood has changed since we first meet him, I mean he left soon after you beat him. Not mentioning it means a lot to Rarity. So try not destroy her dream." Said Twilight

"Alright, I guess Rarity should find out if he is as stuck up as I remember him." Said Solar

"Well if he even hurts Rarity, you have my vote to give him a good bloody nose." Said Twilight

"Hey thanks for that vote Twilight and don't worry, I'll make sure it is broken for a whole week." Said Solar

"Now that's my Solar." Said Twilight kissing him on the lips.

Twilight stopped when she heard Rarity clear her throat. "Sorry to interrupt such beautiful love, but Pinkie says that you are taking her to the gala."

Twilight handed Solar the tickets and she went over to talk with Rarity. While Solar was standing, he felt something pull his pant leg. He looked down to see a small snow rabbit. He bent down and looked at it. Well this is interesting, a snow rabbit. Quite rare to find any in Equestria, I wonder who owns him. Soon the rabbit took a ticket out of Solar's hands and ran off, but he didn't get far as Solar could see Fluttershy holding the ticket.

"Oh Solar, is this yours." Said Fluttershy showing the ticket

"Nope, I got mine and this one is my wife's." Showing the other ticket in his hand. "That one is supposed to be Spike's, but he chose not to go. So it is extra and Twilight's choice to pick who gets it."

"Oh I would love if she picked me." Said Fluttershy

"You want to go to the gala?" Asked Solar

"No not really." The bunny began to thumb his leg on her shoulder. "Actually yes, but you see I'm going for another reason."

"What reason would that be?" Asked Solar

"Well as you know, since you lived in the castle. There are many different types of animals that live in your mother's garden. I was hoping to go and meet and befriend them all. That isn't a crazy dream, right." Said Fluttershy

"Not at all Fluttershy, I actually liked spending time with all the animals in the garden. It was always how I got through some of my tough times. But that's your only reason for going to the gala." Said Solar

"Well I'm not social with ponies I don't know. I don't mind helping and talking with my friends." Said Fluttershy

"Well that seems nice, but Twilight is the one who gets to choose." Said Solar

"Oh then I'll go talk with her." Said Fluttershy

Solar and Fluttershy came up and saw that Rainbow and Applejack had return to Twilight. Solar could already see Twilight easily getting frustrated. Solar knew many things about his wife and one was her tolerance level, which wasn't very high. He could already feel the pain that was going to come when her pregnancy continues to move forward.

"Um...Twilight I got your ticket." Said Fluttershy

All the girls turned around to Fluttershy and Solar. Solar felt all the eyes were on him. He took a gulp, he was a mighty warrior, but when it came to the mare race of Equestria, well it scared him. Since the mares easily out populated the stallion population, a lot of stallions knew not to push their luck with mares. He learned the lesson well enough from a few female guards Stonewall placed him up against. He easily underestimated them and he got hit hard. But then when he thought he was stronger than his cousin and mother, well again he learned the hard way. Shining also kind of learned a few lessons with him. So Solar knew the few times to step back.

"How did you get the ticket?" Asked Dash

"Oh Angel Bunny brought it to me from Solar." Said Fluttershy

"You gave her the ticket." Said Pinkie

"Ok, first off, I have a ticket. Second off, I hate the gala for personal reasons. Third, it's Twilight ticket to give and not mine. So leave me the Tartarus out of it." Said Solar walking away.

"Well Twi, who ya taking?" Asked Applejack

"I have no idea! I'm a starving pregnant mare who needs a damn sandwich. You girls please leave me alone and I'll figure it out. When I do, I'll tell you which one will get it." She then took Solar's hand. "Let's go Solar, I'm starving."

"Ladies rule number one, never keep a pregnant mare from her food." Said Solar

The girls looked at each other split away. Solar could already feel that this day was going to be crazy. He already knew Twilight was angry and it wasn't because she needed to put food in her for her and the foal. He knew that she was ticked and at that level of no return. Well this day is going to be interesting.

***

"Finally, we can eat." Said Twilight

They were sitting outside at a little cafe and Twilight was looking over the menu. Solar would look to the skies and sometimes see a rainbow blur. He wasn't sure what Rainbow was doing, but it wasn't good. He was just hoping he could get through the day without Twilight breaking down on him.

"Are you two ready to order." Said the waiter

"Yes, I'll take a daffodil and daisy sandwich." Said Twilight

"Get me the same and an extra order of hay fries, but both to go." Said Solar

"I see sir, right up." Said the waiter

"Why to go Solar?" Asked Twilight

"Just call it a back up plan, so have any idea who you will take." Said Solar looking to the sky for Rainbow

"No not really. I mean, I can really only take one friend and they all have dreams of the gala. I also kind of want to go, to see it for the first time. Plus it would be nice to be seen with you. Maybe we can be together on a magazine with my pregnant belly. But I could also give away my ticket and stay with Spike at home, but then only two friends can go. I can't decided!" Said Twilight

"Now easy Twilight, as my mother says at times, the answer is always staring us in the face. We just need to take a step back and look at it again. Plus if we are taking pictures, then no Photo Finish. After that weekend with her, I will never work with that pony again." Said Solar

"Here are your meal ma'am and your bag sir." Said the waiter

"Thanks." Said Solar

"Finally, I have been waiting for this. Wait, you ordered the same thing, doesn't that hurt your digestive system." Said Twilight

"Not really, sure I'm different. But again this magic seemed to transform my stomach. I can easily digest anything you ponies can." Said Solar

"Um, sir and ma'am you are going to eat in the rain." Said the waiter as ponies went into the cafe.

"It's not raining." Said Twilight

"Actually it has been raining for the lat minute. If you want answers, just look up." Said Solar

Twilight looked up to Rainbow. Solar could already feel his migraine coming on as Twilight and Rainbow spoke.

"Rainbow are doing this for me to pick you for the ticket." Said Twilight

"No Twilight, I would do this for any other pony, just look around." Said Rainbow

"Well Rainbow that would be true if it wasn't raining on all the other ponies." Said Solar pointing to the ponies running around in the ran.

"Oh oops." Said Rainbow

"Listen Rainbow, I want no special treatment. I will choose who gets the ticket by normal means. Now close up that rain cloud and leave." Said Twilight

"Fine." Said Rainbow

She zipped the cloud up and before Twilight could eat her sandwich, the rain came down. Solar felt his body starting to tense up at Twilight's wet body. Damn my fetishes. Solar had to look away from his wife.

"I swear to your mother that if you get a boner from this, I'll blasting your chest with a powerful shot of magic from this range." Said Twilight growling under breath.

"Twilight darling and Solar, don't you two know it is raining." Said Rarity

"Yes, yes I do." Said Twilight

"Well we have to get you out of here before you catch a cold. You to Solar, no need for the prince to be out with a cold." Said Rarity leading Twilight to her boutique and Solar following behind.

Mental note, make sure to buy extra big set of chocolate and flowers for Twilight while she is later in her pregnancy. Also note, control fetishes. Solar then teleported to his wife as he had a spell on her, so he could get to her from anywhere on Equestria. It was a nice spell that Twilight had no idea about.

***

Twilight tried to dry herself off and then Solar appeared. He used his magic and they were both dry. She saw that he still had the bag. She desperately needed something to eat. Solar pulled out the sandwich and Twilight took it and began to eat it.

"So you bought one just for that." Said Twilight

"That's what you get when your husband was watching Rainbow. Plus I just kind of wanted the fries, half for me and half for Spike. I still got half a steak at home I can eat." Said Solar munching on a few fries.

"Now darling as friends, its our duty to do something great with each other." Said Rarity

"That would be?" Asked Twilight finishing the last of the sandwich

"Make overs!" Said Rarity

Her horn came to life and a changing blinder came up and things began to happen. Solar then was hit with his wife's shirt and pants. But he kept munching on his fries. Not the worst thing that was ever thrown at me, clothing wise. Solar pulled them off and set them down next to him. Then Rarity moved the blocker to show a Twilight wearing a extremely small cocktail dress. Solar just stared at his wife. She was wearing a marine green color dress with purple outlines. It barely passed her knees and Solar could look up if he wanted to see her panties. On the back was a zipper, so it was strapless. The front also showed off her beautiful C-cup breasts on her. I wonder if Rarity does lingerie.

"Now your turn Solar." Said Rarity

She got close, but a shield was up blocking her from Solar.

"Nice try Rarity, but I have my military uniform. I also have many perfectly fitting suits." Said Solar

"Solar actually likes to wear his military uniform, it remind him of his father." Said Twilight

"Oh I understand." Said Rarity

"Twi, I'm going to go home and give these fries to Spike and cook up my lunch. See you back at the house. Also Rarity thanks for that spell you gave Twilight." Said Solar as he teleported away.

"Oh darling, I'm happy that it worked. Now back down to business." Said Rarity

***

"Solar I'm going to lose my mind." Said Twilight opening the door.

She then Solar and Spike were playing a game of Yu-Gi-Oh as Fluttershy cleaned away. She was also humming a tune to herself.

Yes Yu-Gi-Oh is also in this story. I'm a player myself and love the game. So I thought my OC could probably love the game to and who else to play with than Spike. So yes it is real and will stay. Remember this is fiction, but Yu-Gi-Oh is the property of Konami and not me. So enjoy.

"Fluttershy not you to. How long as she been doing this?" Said Twilight closing the door

"She only got here a few minutes ago. I and Spike were already in a game when she came." Said Solar looking over his hand and field.

"You two and your dueling and Fluttershy is cleaning. My life is more crazy than I thought. Now Fluttershy, what are you doing?" Said Twilight

"Oh some Spring cleaning to help a friend like you Twilight." Said Fluttershy

"It's summer, Fluttershy." Said Twilight with a deadpan look on her face.

"Well it was Angel's idea and it was to help you, right Angel." Fluttershy looked at her snow rabbit and he gave her a look. "Actually it is for the ticket."

"I win, yes dragons rule." Said Spike

"Alright one game you and one game me. Let's go third match and winner takes all." Said Solar

"Well I accept no special treatments. Now would you kindly leave my house." Said Twilight

Twilight opened the door and found yet another surprise, it was Pinkie Pie. Pinkie began to sing again about how she was going to get Twilight's ticket. Then Solar and Spike heard Twilight scream at the top of her lungs, Pinkie's name. They both went outside with Fluttershy.

"You ok Twilight?" Asked Solar

"No Solar I'm not ok. I'm going to say this again, this town is crazy! I do mean crazy!" Said Twilight getting up with the help of Solar

"So this means I get your ticket to the gala." Said Pinkie

"What ticket?" Asked a pony in the crowd.

"Oh none of you knew, but Twilight has a spare ticket to the Grand Galloping Gala." Said Pinkie

"Pinkie." Said Solar

"What?" She looked around at the ponies gather around Twilight. She then realized what she had done. "Oops." As she rubbed the back of her neck.

Solar pulled Twilight out and she thanked him, but the ponies kept on coming up to them. They each were trying to get the ticket from Twilight.

"Now what Solar?" Asked Spike

"Well this is the part, where somebody puts on a chase song and we go into a montage of everything we do to speed up the plot." Said Solar

"What?" Asked Spike

"I think Pinkie is rubbing off on me." Said Solar

"Well you heard him, um, Mr. Sword Master. Begin the process of this cool montage, I really want to see how it ends." Said Pinkie

"Pinkie who are you talking to?" Asked Twilight

"Oh the writer of this story. I think I might be distracting him from his work. I hope you all have fun." Said Pinkie as she bounced away.

"That pony is beyond psychological help." Said Spike

"Right, but right now we need to run." Said Twilight

"Oh goody its staring." Said Pinkie as she jumped out of the page and sat on the outside of the writing, and watched the show. "Well what you waiting for, put them through it all ready."

"Anybody have any idea where in Tartarus Pinkie went." Said Solar

"Not really." Said Spike

"Who cares, run for it." Said Twilight

The three started to for it. They needed to find a place to hide them all. They began hiding behind Applejack's food cart, but the ponies easily found them, so they were off once again. This time they needed a new place to hide. They kept moving till Solar quickly taught of an idea and an light bulb appeared over his head. They shrugged it off and Solar used his magic to create them costumes. Solar was an old man, Spike was a hipster and Twilight Solar's old wife. The ponies easily ran by them.

"Ha that was great, but mind if I do some writing. Now we make them lose there clothes." Said Pinkie

All three lost everything they were wearing and covered up there parts and looked at each other. Pinkie blushed and coughed as she began to type there clothes back on again. She then made the crowd see them and chase them again. They pointed like an eighties sit come and ran off like one to. Pinkie just laughed.

"I had to do it, sorry Sword Master it if makes it weird, but I just had to." Said Pinkie

They soon reached bridge and Solar went diving in. Twilight after him and then Spike. Twilight and Spike kept on the under part of the bridge and Solar kept to the water. The ponies passed them and Spike looked to see them disappearing but fell on top of Solar. Twilight rolled her eyes but saw the crowd and her eyes shot out like a cartoon. She ran and levitated Spike and Solar out of the water and waving them behind her as she booked it.

"This is hilarious, you should let me write more often Sword Master. But we should see what they are up to now." Said Pinkie

Solar pointed to a costume store. They nodded and entered the store and took the place of the mannequins. Solar was a pony version of Santa Clause, Twilight a clown and Spike unfortunately a hula girl. The ponies ran by them and after they were gone they slipped away running, but the crowd say them again. Solar screamed and watched as his words appeared above him. He pointed to it and the other two shrugged. They looked back to see all the other ponies words were above them. They looked at each other and shrugged again as they booked it.

"Oh silent films are one of my favorite oldies. I just couldn't resist putting that in." Said Pinkie

Soon the gang reached a dead end and looked to see the crowd coming towards them. Then everything froze as a giant pause sign came over my writing screen. Pinkie hopped in front of me. She then pulled out a red marker and marked the words under her. She smiled and waved as she leaped back into the story. Then the pause was gone.

"Does anypony else have a strange feeling that something strange was happening to us." Said Solar

"Yes, but right now, we are cornered and a dozen or so of ponies are coming after us." Said Spike

"Yes they are." Said Twilight

The ponies began move and tell Twilight, Solar and Spike what they could do for the ticket. Solar then realized what he could do. He concentrated his magic and they were teleported away. When the flash was over, they could see they were in the library. Twilight sighed with Solar and Spike.

"Well it is finally over." Said Twilight

"Not quite darling." Said Rarity

The lights came on and Twilight could see her friends waiting for her. Twilight's eye began to twitch like crazy and her head also. Spike and Solar slowly backed up as Twilight slowly lost it.

"I can't take it!"Screamed Twilight

"Actually Twilight darling, we are here to apologize for everything we have been doing to you." Said Rarity

"Ya, we were so focused on our goals, that we never stopped to look at what we were doin' tah ya." Said Applejack

"So we all come to an agreement. We all don't want to the ticket." Said Fluttershy

"Alright that ticket is mine." Applejack scolded Rainbow and she quickly rubbed her arm. "Actually I don't want to go."

"So we are all sorry darling for putting you through that." Said Rarity

They all said they were sorry and Twilight smiled as the weight was lifted off her chest. She then got up and brushed herself off.

"Spike take a note." Spike pulled out a piece of paper and pen. "Dear Princess Celestia, I have learned that one of the joys of friendship is sharing your blessings. But when there is not enough blessings to go around, having more than your friends can make you feel pretty awful. So though I appreciate the invitation, I will be returning both tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala."

"What, but Twilight that's a big thing your givin' up." Said Applejack

"Yes, but if all my friends can't go, then I won't go. Spike you can send that letter." Spike opened a window and blew fire over the letter and it disappeared into the night sky. "You know what this means Solar."

"I sure do baby, I'm stuck going to the gala while your home." Said Solar with a smirk

"Not that stupid, some days I just want to smack the stupid out of you. No this means that I have sent my first friendship lesson to Celestia. This is a great moment." Said Twilight squealing like a school girl

But then Spike quickly barfed up a scroll and Solar picked it up. He quickly read it over. Twilight looked at him as he finished the letter.

"So what does it say?" Asked Twilight

"It seems my mother was impressed with your first lesson of friendship. She also wants to see you girls all at the Grand Galloping Gala. In here are enough tickets for all of you to go." Said Solar

A ticket flew out of the scroll and onto each girl. They all squealed in joy as they had their tickets. Then Twilight's stomach began to growl.

"It seems like I could use a meal. Down to local diner to celebrate." Said Twilight

The girls all exited the place and began to head down the road. Solar looked at the last line of the scroll. It read, 'I had plenty of tickets for all of them. Just wanted Twilight to get a good start with her friendship lessons. Don't tell her son that I kind of did this to her'. It then ended with a winking face. Solar laughed but could see Spike was done.

"What's up?" Asked Solar

"I didn't get a ticket." Said Spike

"I thought you didn't want to go." Said Solar

"Well yeah, but that was before everypony got a ticket." Said Spike

He soon barfed up a ticket and held it in his hands. "Yes I got a ticket."

"Well now look at that, you got a golden ticket. But you realize what we never finished." Said Solar

"Oh our duel." Said Spike

"Want to embarrass Twilight with a duel in the diner." Said Solar holding up his deck.

"Oh yes Solar, now let's get going." Said Solar

The two walked down the road. They then began to say something together.

"We got a golden ticket."

Pinkie once again appeared out of the screen of the computer. She waved at me and my readers. She laughed as she looked at the ending.

"Now that's a nice way to end it Sword Master. Hope to see all of Sword Master's fellow followers when he starts writing up the next chapter. Bye bye people of fimfiction for now that is."

She laughed and went back into the story she came from.

Author's Notes:

So Pinkie decides to get a little action into the story.

You know it S.D. I love to play with my friends. I just hope you let me do some more. I know how about I tell this part of the ending.

I see no reason why, go ahead Pinkie Pie take it away.

Alright everypony, we just saw a great story. I'm not to sure what S.D. wants me to say expect, he hopes you enjoyed it. You can also expect me to make some surprise entrances, like this one. I think that is all I an really say, so in S.D.'s words and now mine. Comment, follow, like, share and tell. Oh one last thing let's give a big hand for S.D. and Solar Son, it has now reached one hundred likes. I would fire off my party cannon, but I couldn't bring it with me. So I hope you will continue to spread the word of this story and everything great about it. See you all later.

Well you heard her, I thank you all for reached a hundred likes and nearly a thousand views. I know the story doesn't have the greatest of grammar and I can only give one chapter to my editor to edit at a time. But keep sticking with me because we have only touched the tip of this seasons ice berg and barely made a scratch on the series's ice berg. Now I hope to see you all in the next chapter. Bye for now.:pinkiehappy:

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