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The Double-Edged Sword

by Asuya
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Asuya lost his only family and vows to save her. Now living in Ponyville, can he save his sister?
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Asuya was once a normal pegasus. But when his adoptive father takes away his only family, his sister, what will happen to Asuya? Will his other half take over, or will he remain in control? Not only that, but will he be able to protect those he cares for without resorting to his cursed form? While he has the power to get back his sister and protect those he cares about, is he willing to pay the price? What will Asuya do with his new life in Ponyville and will he be able to keep it?

First off, this is my first fic, so i can understand if the comments are harsh. Secondly, i'm sorry if the whole idea of Asuya's unnatural form is so cliche, but his character is really tough to convert into a pony. Also, i do NOT own the cover picture. That beast of drawing belongs to Unkn0wnfear on deviantart.com

ALSO: the only things of mine from this entire ordeal are the OCs and stuff, but even then..... anyway, I do not own MLP FiM, that's copyrighted to Hasbro.

Dubious
Incomplete
Adventure
Romance
Gore

10,247 words: Estimated 41 Minutes to read: [Cache]

3 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: Family Issues [Cache] Mar 20th, 2012
    1,345
  2. Chapter One: Enter the Cliche! [Cache] Feb 14th, 2012
    4,870
  3. Chapter Two: Start Again [Cache] Jan 19th, 2012
    4,032
Published Dec 3rd, 2011
Last Update Feb 8th, 2012

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