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A young man falls in love with the beautiful dark alicorn who moves the moon. But she's a fictional character … isn't she?
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There once was a story about the beautiful dark alicorn who moved the moon. In the tranquil countryside, a young boy listened to the story, looked at the stars, and imagined. He grew up and fell in love with the ruler of the night … and she loved him, too.

It was perfect, except for one nagging doubt in the back of the quiet boy's head: she was a character from a children's story.

AUDIO VERSIONS: Reading by Neighrator Pony * Reading by Illya Leonov


Winner of the Writeoff Association's "Written In The Stars" competition! ** Featured on Equestria Daily ** Featured by The Royal Guard (twice! :twilightblush:)

Highly Recommended by Present Perfect! "An excellently written story about an emotional encounter between the titular characters … yet a good bit more than that. If you like reading, you will like reading this."

Recommended by Titanium Dragon! "This story had an excellent style to it, a sort of fairy tale like quality … really, this is a work of original fiction which pokes at MLP in only the barest of ways. But that doesn't mean it isn't relevant to your interests."

Art: Assembled by me. Luna vector by azur-wing.

Teen
Complete
Romance
Sad

6,000 words: Estimated 24 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Quiet Boy and Moon Horse [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 30th, 2016
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Published Jan 29th, 2016

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