season 5's ending was bad , i made it better....

season 5 ending was the worst episode of the entire series to me , in fact i consider it a disgrace to intelligence that the writers would produce such ass of an episode , i instantly thought of so many better ways this concept could have been handled , and they were so easy too , so easy that i made this....

this takes place starting from when starlight confronts twilight , and does a different take on what could have been done with the episode from there.....

this fic was proofread by revolver's dusk

http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Revolvers+Dusk

and even though i felt like i had more corrections to make on the fic after the proofread than before , he was a big help to me for the entire duration of writing this , without him this fic would have far worse off....

if you enjoyed this fic then plz share it with others , as that will probably be the only way people will see it....

omg the mare in the moon is wrong in the cover image , or did the animators from the show just mess up on that too? cause it's mirrored in the episode so i thought that was actually a neat attention to detail they added....

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a week after posting this now i have made a blog post detailing why season 5's ending was bad , so that would be a better place to discuss that if it doesn't also have something to do with the fic specifically....

http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/591730/season-5-end-discussion