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What You've Got :Remastered Backstory

by Broneyofnoel

Chapter 2: Revenge

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After weeks of plotting, Fluttershy had come up with the perfect plan. She wouldn't just poison him, but she'd make it look like a simple cooking accident. She spent three days in the woods near his house before she put her plan into action. On the night that his parents were out, Fluttershy crept over and snuck in through the window.

She eyed her prey with malicious intent, but then flew to the kitchen, where she implanted the poisonous substance in the bottom of a glass that he'd set out a minute before. He started walking towards the kitchen, so she went for the ceiling, behind a vent.

As he reached fro the glass containing the poison, a loud creaking sound could be heard, the two of them looked around, only to realize that the creaking came from the floor. Fluttershy stuck her head out just in time to see the floor bloew him collapse, plunging him thirty feet towards the hard concrete below.

Nopony knew why the floor below that colt gave way under such little stress, most suspected fluttershy, even though she'd planned to poison him, not drop him.

Fluttershy had no family to keep her down, so she just wandered through all the major cities of Equestria, Canterlot, Manehattan, Trottingham, Las Pegasus, Stalliongrad, and even CloudsDale once.

She ran through the bad neighborhoods, being chased by rapists and druggies, each city made her more bitter, until finally she snapped. On an early August morning in Stalliongrad, a Equestria Guard approached Fluttershy, asking why she was in this neighborhood at this time.

She just went crazy, she pulled out a knife and stabbed the guard multiple times, each succeeding time making a more sickening slosh than the last, she put him to the ground and stabbed him with his own spear a few times, and to finish him off, she slit his throat, spilling blood all over the ground.

She backpedaled, examining her work, she felt stronger than ever, the more gruesome the murder was, the better. Or at least the stronger she felt.

As she was walking away from the dead body, she was tackled by at least a dozen more guards, who'd seen her horrible crime but hadn't been able to do anything.

-----------------------------------Three months of court processing later-----------------------------------------------------------------

"Guilty.....One count of first degree Murder, eight years in Canterlot Maximum security Prison." The maximum sentence for a mare of her age, the two guards escorted her off.

Although Fluttershy was seemingly controlled by the law, her violence didn't stop just because she was sent to prison, prison fights always seemed to involve her, and so did the worst injuries.

Once, a prison riot broke out when the guards closed the telephone, Fluttershy didn't care, she just wanted to kill, so she lunged at one of the guards, and pinned him to the ground.

She laughed evilly as she pulled a shank carved from a spoon from underneath her wing. The guard kicked her off of him and pulled a shield out. She lunged once again, but the guard was ready, he hit her in the head with the shield, knocking her unconscious.

Yes, she was assigned to solitary for many years of her sentence, and she was subjected to therapy, even torture, but not a single thing got to her. Her sentence passed slowly, but on the day she was released, she just stood outside of the prison for a while, contemplating what to do next.

"Mother..." She said evilly, she set out for the ten day walk to Ponyville.

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On the tenth day, she arrived in Ponyville, but things were different, there was no day, it stayed black, one of the darkest nights she'd ever seen, it brought chills to her dark core.

As she walked through the lonely streets, occasionally hearing a rustle or a crash, her world just snapped black all of a sudden.

She awoke in the Royal Palace, only there was not a Princess Celestia figure emblazoned along all of the walls, but a dark, nightmarish creature. She had a black coat, green eyes, and was an alicorn, and form what Fluttershy could see, a covered cutie Mark.

"Ffffluttershy." Her voice was sly and dark.

Fluttershy just stood her ground, she wasn't going to be pushed around by a creature like this.

"I see you're a murderer, oh, and you were accused multiple times, but only convicted once." Nightmare said, "I can clear your past if you do something for me."

'I don't care, I like my past, deal with it."

"Listen you little ingrate, if you don't preform...." her horn lit up and one of the guards near the two was levitated and he made a sickening crunch and muffled gurgle as he was broken.

Fluttershy backed up a bit, " I'm not scared."

Nightmare's horn glowed, and she cowered a bit.

"I can make you immortal, I can make you rich, I can do anything, I am more powerful than Celestia ever was!" lightning flashed around them.

Fluttershy cleared her throat, "Fine."

"Good young one, good."

Fluttershy's vision blurred for a moment, and then cleared up, she was in a bright white room with four other ponies, two mares, and two stallions, she was by far the youngest.

"Fight!" a voice boomed through out the room, and a large, sharp knife appeared in the center of the room, unlike the other ponies, Fluttershy didn't immediately rush for it, instead, she stayed back and watched them kill each other.

The two stallions were the first two there, a red one and a black one, the red one reached the knife first, once he pulled it, an explosion tore his whole foreleg off, causing blood to gush, staining the white floor. The black stallion picked up the blade ad walked over to the injured stallion.

He sunk the blade into his forehead and pulled back, causing the stallion's blood to spurt everywhere.

A mare jumped onto the back of the stallion , but he threw her into a wall, and stomped her chest a few times, crushing all of her internal organs and causing her to bleed profusely.

Fluttershy ran and slid beside the dead mare, she covered her chest in the mare's blood, and dabbed a little on her mouth to make her appear dead, yet she laid at an angle that she could still see the two other ponies who were still alive.

The two circled for a while, occasionally one would throw a punch, but nothing major. Finally the stallion leaped over and started strangling the mare with her own mane. She kicked him in his testicles, sending a wave of pain throughout his body, which also caused him to stop choking.

She stood over him, and kissed him once on the cheek. She then stomped his head in, breaking his skull. Now was Fluttershy's time to act, she rose behind the mare, who was worn out from fighting.

"Ahem..." Fluttershy spun the mare around and punched her once in the face, making her stumble backwards.

Fluttershy caught the failed punches the mare threw, and broke her limbs one by one. Once she was immobilized, Fluttershy finished her off, she kicked the mare in the face, which broke her neck from the force, killing her.

Fluttershy stood alone, surrounded by the dead, she waited to be taken out of the room.

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