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Loveliest of Trees (Being Transferred and Revised)

by Nordryd

Chapter 17: Ch.17: Convalescence

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Ch.17: Convalescence

Dear Twilight,

I decided I should probably write in the message book to update you on what’s going on back home.  Things are going pretty well here.  Spike and I are getting along just fine, and don’t worry, your castle is still standing.  We haven’t burnt it down.  Not yet anyways.  Haha, but seriously, things are great.  I’ve been trying to work on that materialization spell you showed me.  Getting better, but it’s still very difficult to cast.  Eventually, though!  I got to spend my very first Nightmare Night with all of my friends.  Fluttershy was basically clinging to me the entire night.  It took a lot of coaxing to get her to even come out of her house.  I guess she’s not a fan of Nightmare Night.  It was fun either way.

One more thing. Something very…strange happened.  On Friday, out of nowhere, my cutie mark started glowing.  Then, a translucent image of my cutie mark manifested and floated over to the Cutie Map.  I thought that only happened with you girls because of your connections to the Elements of Harmony.  Even more bizarre than that, the next day, Spike and I discovered three more thrones around the Cutie Map.  One has my cutie mark above it, but I don’t recognize the others.  One appears to be a shield with a lightning bolt, and the other is a red and yellow sun. Princess Cadence also wrote to us saying one of her guard’s cutie marks started glowing too.  Weird, right?  Did something happen on your end?  Nothing extraordinary happened over here, unless I completely overlooked it.  You’re the expert on this kind of magic, so I figured you could enlighten me.

We all miss you, and I hope you’re doing well!  When you come back, we’ll work on the duplication spell.  It’s your turn to struggle, haha.  Best wishes, and stay safe!

Your Best Friend,

Coppermane


Time:  9:30 AM, Sunday, Coppermane’s House

Sunset Shimmer found herself awake earlier than anyone else.  She heard her backpack buzzing, which could only be coming from her magical message book.  But something wasn’t adding up.  Twilight was already here…right?  Sunset looked to her side to see Twilight sleeping soundly in Flash Sentry’s arms.  Yep, she was here, meaning somebody else, or rather somepony else, was using the book.  Sunset opened her backpack to grab the book, curious as to who was sending a message.  Hopefully it hadn’t been stolen.  This was her only method of communication with Twilight when she wasn’t here, besides physically venturing through the portal.  She opened the book, and was surprised to “Dear Twilight,” at the top.  She opened it just in time to see whomever sign the bottom of the page.  It appeared to be…a letter from pony Coppermane?

Sunset smiled, and took a moment to read over the letter.  She giggled to herself when she read the bit about Nightmare Night.  She looked up at Coppermane and Fluttershy sleeping together, giggling at the image of Fluttershy clinging to Coppermane the whole night.  Fluttershy laid on Coppermane’s chest with his arms around her.  She tried to see if their hands were glowing again…and to her amazement…they were!  She saw Coppermane’s hands glimmer, making Fluttershy stir in her sleep, nuzzling her boyfriend’s chest.  When the glow dwindled, she relaxed once again.  Sunset smiled at the heart-warming sight.  You could tell how much they love each other just by looking at them.  It always brought a smile to Sunset’s face to see them together.  Maybe Sunset could have something like that one day…

Sunset returned her attention to the book, reading the rest of pony Coppermane’s message, but was interrupted when she heard groaning coming from the bed.  She looked to see Coppermane feeling his forehead.  She noticed their hands had stopped glowing as well.  The groaning piqued Sunset’s curiosity.  It didn’t sound like he was stretching.  It almost sounded like he was in pain.  But before Sunset could say anything, Coppermane suddenly made a gagging sound before pushing Fluttershy off and racing to the bathroom, waking her up in the process.  Fluttershy was a little flustered, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes and fixing her hair.  She came to her senses and panned around the room, presumably to see if anyone else was awake.  Her eyes landed on Sunset, looking just as fazed as she was.

“Morning.  What’s up with Coppermane?” Sunset asked.

“I-I don’t know,” Fluttershy said, sitting up on the bed.

Suddenly, their questions were answered when they heard the sound of purging coming from the bathroom, making Sunset and Fluttershy cringe.

“Oh my goodness,” Fluttershy said, getting up to head to the bathroom.

Applejack suddenly stirred, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes.

“Ugh…what in tarnation?” Applejack said.  More sounds came from the bathroom, making her and Sunset cringe.

Sunset sighed.  “Morning, Applejack.”

“Is everythin’ alright?” Applejack asked, sitting up and fixing her hair.  Answering her question, she heard Fluttershy in the hallway, trying to figure out for herself what was going on.

“Coppermane?  A-Are you okay in there?” Fluttershy asked worriedly. The response she got was violent coughing, followed by more sounds of purging.  Fluttershy bit her lip.  Did Coppermane eat something that upset his stomach?  He sounded horrible.  She heard the toilet flush, the sound of running water, and after another violent coughing fit, the bathroom door finally opened.  Fluttershy gasped upon seeing how awful her Coppermane looked.  His hair was unkempt, and his eyes were groggy.  His shirt was as disorderly as his hair, as were his sweatpants.  He leaned on the doorframe to support himself, looking fatigued.  He held his stomach in pain, and he was shivering, despite the hallway being at room temperature.

“M-Morning,” Coppermane said in a very hoarse voice, coughing a little bit.

“Oh, you poor thing,” she said, putting her hand on his heart.  “Let’s get you back to bed.”

Coppermane suddenly felt Fluttershy pull his arm, guiding him back to his room.  His heavy-headedness caused him to stumble around, but Fluttershy was there to keep him stable.  She led him back to his room.

“Here, lay down,” Fluttershy said, guiding Coppermane to his bed.  Coppermane groaned as he laid down, feeling like there was a rock thrashing around in his stomach.  He remained still as Fluttershy felt around his face.  “Oh my goodness, you’re burning up,” she said in a worried tone.

“Is everythin’ alright?” Applejack asked.

Out of her peripheral vision, Applejack could see Rainbow Dash rustle.

“Ugh…what’s going on?” Rainbow Dash said rubbing the sleep out her eyes.

“We need to take your temperature,” Fluttershy said.  “Do you have a thermometer?”

Coppermane nodded, coughing a little bit.  “Cabinet above the utensils in the kitchen,” he said in a rough voice.  Fluttershy wasted no time, and raced downstairs to find the thermometer.  In her wake, she stirred Rarity and Pinkie Pie.

“Morning!” Pinkie Pie exclaimed.  She looked over and saw Coppermane laying on the bed with his hand on his stomach.  She immediately raced over to him.  “Coppermane?  Are you okay?  You don’t look so good.  No siree, not good at all!” she said excitedly, yet worriedly, sitting on the bed next to him.  All she got in response was painful groaning.  “You know what I think?  I think somebody partied a little too much last night!” she said teasingly.  The only reply Pinkie Pie got was a sneeze, followed by more coughing.

“Coppermane, darling, you look horrible,” Rarity said, fixing her hair.

“You’re telling me,” Coppermane said…barely.  Before he could say anything else, Fluttershy came racing back in with a thermometer and a flashlight.  She took a seat beside him.

“Here,” Fluttershy said, putting the thermometer in Coppermane’s mouth, and started to feel around his head.  The commotion woke up Flash Sentry and Twilight.  Now everyone had been rudely awakened by the uproar.

“What’s going on?” Flash Sentry asked.

“Coppermane’s sick,” Sunset said.

The thermometer beeped, and Fluttershy took it out of his mouth.  Pinkie Pie glanced at the number.

“Make that very sick,” Pinkie Pie said.

“Oh my…” Fluttershy said broodingly.

“What is it?” Coppermane asked weakly.

“103.2,” Fluttershy said, putting the thermometer back in its case.  She grabbed the flashlight.  “Let’s look at your throat.  Say ‘Ah’,” she said.  Coppermane obliged, and Fluttershy shined the flashlight in Coppermane’s mouth, looking at his throat.  “Goodness…it’s really irritated back there…”

Coppermane had another violent coughing fit, groaning when it stopped.  Fluttershy whimpered sympathetically.

"My poor baby…” she said, brushing his hair.

Coppermane felt another wave of nausea approaching, and bolted for the bathroom again.

“Did he eat something weird last night?” Rainbow Dash asked.

“Maybe it was being around everyone at the Formal.  His body's probably not used to being around so many people at once,” Sunset theorized.

“It could just be a bug goin’ around,” Applejack said.  The group heard more puking coming from the bathroom, making them all cringe.

“Well, whatever it is, he sounds awful,” Rarity said.  “Poor thing.”

They heard the bathroom door open, and the sound of another coughing fit grew louder as Coppermane approached the room again.

Coppermane stood in the archway, propping his fatigued self on the doorframe while holding his stomach, groaning.

“S-Sorry…” Coppermane said in a raspy voice.  “Morning, everyone.”

“You alright, Coppermane?” Twilight asked.

Coppermane had another round of coughing before responding.  “N-Not really…” he said.   “Um…if you all want to head downstairs…there should be plenty of food for everyone…”

Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash immediately perked up and zipped downstairs, making everyone shake their heads.  One by one, everyone else got up to go downstairs for breakfast as well, with the exception of Fluttershy.

Fluttershy walked up to Coppermane with worry in her eyes.

“Here, let me help you,” she said, taking his hand.

“Fluttershy, I’ll be fine,” Coppermane said before his lack of energy caused his knees to give out.  She caught him before giving him a smirk, raising her eyebrow.  “Well…on second thought…”

Fluttershy just giggled, allowing her sick boyfriend to lean on her as she carefully guided him downstairs.


Time:  11:00 AM, Sunday, Coppermane’s House

After a nice breakfast, everyone sat in Coppermane’s living room, talking amongst each other before parting for the day.  They were all looking forward to a nice day of recuperation after an insane week.  At least, most of them were.

Coppermane laid on the couch in Fluttershy’s lap, wrapped in a blanket, looking and feeling miserable.  His fever gave him harsh chills, and his sore throat made his voice weak and hoarse.  He had random, violent coughing spells, made even more painful by his irritated throat.  On top of that, his stomach was acting up, requiring him to have a wastebasket next to him.  He felt so feeble and heavy-headed, although laying in his loving girlfriend’s arms was helping.  He felt her lightly stroke his hair, helping to comfort him a little, despite his condition.

“Well, are we about ready to head out, girls?” Flash Sentry asked everyone.

“Yes, I think it’s about that time,” Rarity said.  “We should let the poor darling rest.”

“Wait, Coppermane can’t drive us home.  How will we all fit in your car?” Twilight asked.

“I can walk,” Rainbow Dash said.

“Ah can too,” Applejack said.

“You girls sure?  I could handle a few minutes of driving,” Coppermane said, breaking into another coughing fit.

“Coppermane, no.  You’re in no condition to drive,” Fluttershy said.

“Rainbow and Ah could use the exercise anyways,” Applejack said.  Rainbow Dash nodded in agreement.

Coppermane was about to protest, but decided to keep his mouth shut.  He knew Fluttershy probably wasn’t going to allow it, so why bother?

“Alright, if you insist,” Coppermane said.

“Well, that makes room for two people, but there were three of us in Coppermane's car," Sunset said.

“Oh…well…I-I was actually hoping I could stay here,” Fluttershy said, rubbing Coppermane’s shoulders.

“Stay here?” Coppermane asked.

“Of course,” Fluttershy said.

“Why?” Coppermane asked curiously.

“So I can take care of you,” Fluttershy said sweetly.

Coppermane rose his eyebrows. “Oh, thanks Fluttershy, but you don’t have to do that,” he said.  “You’ve had a crazy week.  You deserve a day to unwind.”

Fluttershy ran her fingers through his hair.  “Coppermane, you’re sick.  I can’t relax knowing you’re suffering.  I want to help you get better.”

Coppermane pondered for a moment.  Every time he’s gotten sick before, he was on his own.  He had nobody else around.  He’s never had anybody to take care of him.  Maybe it would be nice.  Did she really want to sacrifice her day of relaxation to look after him? If she stayed, it would also solve the car dilemma.

His thoughts were interrupted by another wave of chills, causing him to tremble.  Fluttershy whimpered sympathetically, wrapping her arms around him.

Sunset chuckled.  “Copper, you might as well let her stay.  She’s not going to take no for an answer.”

“And besides, Fluttershy will take super good care of you!” Pinkie Pie said enthusiastically.  “With her around, you’ll be better in no time!”  Fluttershy blushed a little at this.

Coppermane pondered for a moment, and looked up at his girlfriend, smiling down on him, still brushing his hair.  She looked pretty insistent.

“Are you sure?” Coppermane said.  “I don’t want you to get sick too.”

Fluttershy nodded.  “I’m positive.  Besides, I get to spend more time with you,” she said with a smile.

Coppermane certainly wasn’t going to argue with that.  If she really did want to stay and care for him, who was he to argue any further?  Besides, he hated worrying her.

Coppermane smiled up at her.  “Well…okay,” he said, making her face light up.  “But don’t say I didn’t warn you, okay?”

Fluttershy giggled, but her expression sorrowed when another round of chills hit him, causing goosebumps to crawl up his skin.

Fluttershy felt him convulse, and pulled him into her arms.  “It’s okay.  I’m here,” she said, petting his hair.

“Don’t worry, Coppermane.  You’re in good hands,” Rarity said, winking at Fluttershy, making her blush.

Coppermane let out a mighty yawn before breaking into another coughing fit.

“Alright, let’s let the poor darling rest,” Rarity said.

“Hope y’all feel better, Coppermane,” Applejack said.

“Get well soon, Cop,” Rainbow Dash said.

And with that, the rest of the group bid the couple farewell, and exited the house, eager for their day of recuperation.  Fluttershy and Coppermane remained on the couch with Coppermane’s head on Fluttershy’s stomach.

Coppermane coughed a little bit, and spoke in a hoarse voice.  “You don’t have to do this, y’know?”

“Coppermane, it’s fine,” Fluttershy said, squeezing him in her arms.  “I don’t mind at all.  I’m happy to take care of you.”

Coppermane looked up at his girlfriend and smiled.  “You’re the best,” he said before letting out a yawn.

Fluttershy smiled.  “I’ll go get you some water and ibuprofen. Is there anything else I can do for you?”

Coppermane shook his head, “That’s just fine, thank you.”

Fluttershy giggled.  “Okay, I’ll be right back,” she said, getting up to head for the kitchen, substituting her lap for a soft pillow.  While she sifted through the cabinets, she heard Coppermane shivering, prompting her to pick up the pace.  She brought the water and medicine back over to him, and went upstairs to grab another blanket for him.

“Here, this will help keep you warm,” Fluttershy said, draping Coppermane in another blanket.  The sudden draft gave him chills, but after Fluttershy tucked him in, he settled, letting out a contented sigh.  Fluttershy smiled, and leaned in, only to be stopped by Coppermane’s hand.

“No, don’t kiss me.  You’ll get sick too,” Coppermane said, only to have Fluttershy move his hand away and kiss him anyways.  Coppermane gave her a smirk, feigning annoyance.  Fluttershy giggled.

“Hey,” Coppermane said, taking Fluttershy’s hand, “Thanks.”

Fluttershy squeezed his hand.  “You’re very welcome,” she said before he let out a big yawn.  She giggled, “Get some sleep.  If you need anything, I’m right here, okay?” she said, brushing his hair.

“Thanks,” Coppermane said, breaking into another coughing fit.  After another wave of shivers, he finally relaxed, allowing the feeling of Fluttershy brushing his hair to lull him to sleep.

It took no time at all for him to drift off.  Being sick was really sapping his energy, and in only a few minutes, he was out cold.  Fluttershy stayed next to him the whole time with no intention of leaving his side.

“Sweet dreams, my handsome prince,” Fluttershy said, giving his warm cheek a kiss.  “I love you…”


Sunset ==> Fluttershy, 4:31 PM

Hey!  How is everything?

Fluttershy ==> Sunset, 4:38 PM

Well, Coppermane’s throat is a little better, and his stomach has settled down.  His fever is still high though, and his voice is hoarse.

Sunset ==> Fluttershy, 4:44 PM

What’s his temperature?

Fluttershy ==> Sunset, 4:50 PM

It was 102.6 when we last took it.  Poor thing.

Sunset ==> Fluttershy, 4:59 PM

Well, glad to hear everything else is a little better.  I probably don’t have to ask, but you’ve been taking good care of him, right?

Fluttershy ==> Sunset, 5:09 PM

Oh, absolutely!  I gave him a back massage earlier, and made him some chai tea.  It’s the only kind he likes.  He’s not much of a tea drinker.  I’m just watching him nap now.  He’s so cute when he’s asleep!

Sunset ==> Fluttershy, 5:12 PM

Haha, I knew we left him in good hands.  Do you need anything, or are you good?

Fluttershy ==> Sunset, 5:16 PM

Actually, if you don’t mind, I wanted to make him some chicken soup, but he’s missing some ingredients.  Can you bring some things over? If it’s not too much trouble.  You don’t have to if you don't want to.

Sunset ==> Fluttershy, 5:20 PM

Sure! I can run to the store for you, I don’t mind at all. Just text me a list of what you need, and I’ll be over there as soon as possible.

Fluttershy ==> Sunset, 5:24 PM

Are you sure?  You probably have other things to do, right? I don't want to impose.

Sunset ==> Fluttershy, 5:26 PM

Fluttershy, it’s fine, I promise. I'm not doing anything important right now. I asked you if you needed anything, didn’t I?  Send me a list, and I’ll be over there soon with whatever you need ;)

Fluttershy ==> Sunset, 5:30 PM

Well, okay.  I need carrots, broccoli, onions, and chicken broth.  Thank you so much, Sunset!

Sunset ==> Fluttershy, 5:34 PM

You got it!  I’ll be over there as soon as possible.

Fluttershy ==> Sunset, 5:36 PM

See you soon, and thank you so much again!


Time:  6:00 PM, Sunday, Coppermane’s House

Fluttershy sat at Coppermane’s side as he slept, brushing his hair.  Even when he was sick, he was adorable when he slept.  She waited with anticipation for Sunset Shimmer to arrive.  Coppermane didn’t know she was coming since he’s been sleeping for the past couple hours, and Fluttershy didn’t want to wake him up, but she figured he wouldn’t mind.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

Fluttershy perked up.  Sunset was here!  Fluttershy quickly, but quietly, made her way to the door.  She opened it up to see her fiery-haired best friend standing on the other side holding grocery bags.

“Hey, Fluttershy,” Sunset said.

“Hello,” Fluttershy said in a hushed voice.  “Come on in, but quietly.  He’s still asleep.”

“Oh, okay,” Sunset said before walking in.  She entered the living room, and saw Coppermane sleeping peacefully on the couch, as if he hadn’t moved since she was here this morning.

“Isn’t he just adorable when he’s asleep?” Fluttershy said with a big smile on her face.  Sunset could only chuckle.

“Where can I put these?” Sunset asked.

“Oh, just on the table is fine,” Fluttershy said.  Sunset did just that, but unfortunately, the commotion woke Coppermane up, as indicated by another coughing fit.

Fluttershy immediately walked over to him.  “Hi, Coppermane,” she said, putting her hand over his heart.  “Did you have a good nap?”

“Mmmhmm,” Coppermane said in a hoarse voice, rubbing the sleep out of his eyes.  He heard commotion coming from the kitchen, and was surprised to see a familiar fiery, red-and-yellow hairdo.  “Sunset Shimmer?”

Sunset heard her name, and turned around to see Coppermane looking at her.

“Oh, sorry, did I wake you up?” Sunset asked.

“No, you’re fine,” Coppermane said.  “What’re you doing here?”

“She brought ingredients over so I could make you some chicken soup,” Fluttershy said sweetly.

Coppermane rose an eyebrow.  “You’re…gonna make me soup?”

“Of course!” Fluttershy said.  “Soup always helps when you’re sick, especially with a sore throat.”

Coppermane could only smile.  He put his hand over hers.  “You’re the best.  Thank you so much.”

Fluttershy smiled back.  “Anything for my handsome prince.”

Coppermane’s heart danced.  Just the most perfect princess ever…

“Do you need anything else before I get started?” Fluttershy asked.

“Nope, I’m good.  Thanks,” Coppermane said with a smile.

Fluttershy smiled and gave him one more kiss on the cheek before adjourning to the kitchen to cook Coppermane’s soup.  Coppermane couldn’t help himself from gawking at Fluttershy as she walked away.  She had such a nice figure.

“Do you two mind if I stick around for a little bit?  I was kind of bored back home,” Sunset said.

“Not at all!” Fluttershy said with a smile, cutting up some celery.

“You can stay for as long as you want,” Coppermane said, coughing a little bit.  Sunset smiled and walked over to Coppermane.

“Looks like Fluttershy’s been taking good care of you,” Sunset said, sitting down next to him.

Coppermane chuckled.  “No kidding,” he said in a rough voice, folding his legs to make room for Sunset.  He tried sitting up, but his heavy-headedness caused him to fall on the back of the couch.  He wrapped his blanket around him to guard against chills.  “Maybe I should get sick more often.”

Sunset giggled.  “Something tells me Fluttershy wouldn’t like that too much.”

Coppermane chuckled.  “Yeah, probably not.  Hey, thanks for bringing soup ingredients over.”

“No problem!  Always glad to help,” Sunset said.  “So…how are you feeling?”

Coppermane sighed, shivering a little bit as more shivers hit.  “Well, as I’m sure you can tell, my throat still hurts, but at least my stomach has settled.  Still running a fever though,” he said, wrapping himself tighter in his blanket.

“Well, you’re better than you were this morning,” Sunset said.

“True.  And at least Fluttershy’s here,” Coppermane said, his eyes wandering over to the pink-haired beauty in the kitchen.  She hummed as she went about her work, making Coppermane’s heart dance.  She had the sweetest little voice.  She was so beautiful…

“Hey, Coppermane?” Sunset said, breaking Coppermane out of his trance.

Coppermane blinked, looking back at Sunset.  “Hmm?”

“Can I ask you something?” Sunset said.  “I mean, as long as it won’t be too much on your throat.”

“I’ll manage,” Coppermane said with a smirk, coughing a little bit.  “What is it?”

“I just wanted to ask how it felt to win Fall Formal Prince,” Sunset asked.

Coppermane’s face lit up.  “Oh, Fall Formal Prince?  Well, it definitely unexpected, but a huge honor.  Pinkie Pie can be quite devious sometimes, can’t she?” he said, making Sunset chuckle.  “But most of all, I have the most perfect princess I could ask for.”  He glanced over at Fluttershy again, catching her looking at him.  She blushed a little bit, and gave a cute wave.  Coppermane could only chuckle, waving back.  He returned his attention to Sunset.  “Although, I’m sure you must know what it’s like to win Fall Formal Princess, right?”

Sunset’s heart dropped.  “Wh-What?”

“Well, I remember seeing your face in Principal Celestia’s office on my first day.  Three years in a row, huh?” Coppermane said, completely nonchalant.

Sunset bit her lip.  “Um…c-can we…not talk about that?”

Coppermane looked at her quizzically.  “Why not?  Three times in a row?  You should be proud!”

“Coppermane…please…”

“You must’ve been pretty popular, huh?”

“Copper…”

“I mean, three consecutive years?”

“There’s nothing to be proud about, Coppermane, so can you please just drop it?” Sunset said abruptly, and rather loudly.

Coppermane flinched at the sudden increase in volume.  Where did that come from?  Winning Fall Formal Princess three years in a row?  Surely, that’s something to be proud of, right?  Right?

“Um…I’m sorry…d-did I say something?” Coppermane asked.

Sunset looked at him with a scowl.  “I was just asking you a question.  No need to take shots at me…”

“Take shots?” Coppermane said.  “I…I wasn’t trying to offend you or anything.”

“You know I don’t like being reminded of…the old me,” Sunset said.

“The old you?  Sunset, what are you talking about?” Coppermane asked.

“Don’t act like you don’t know…” Sunset said, holding herself in her arms.

“Sunset, I don’t know, I seriously don’t,” Coppermane said.  He paused when he noticed something in her eye.  A tear?  “Sunset, what’s wrong?  What did I say?”

“Coppermane, you know damn well what—” Sunset stopped herself, her expression softening as she had an epiphany.  He didn’t know.  He was telling the truth.  He had no idea what she was talking about because he never knew the old Sunset Shimmer.  He had no idea what a horrible person she used to be.  She was so used to her classmates bringing up her Fall Formal Princess streak in order to berate her.  She failed to remember that he’s never had to put up with the old Sunset Shimmer.  Now, she may have offended him by snapping at him.

Sunset looked back at Coppermane, her heart heavy with remorse.  “Coppermane…I…I’m so sorry for snapping at you.”

Coppermane smiled, easing Sunset’s mind a little.

“You’re fine.  Sorry for…whatever I said,” Coppermane said.  “But…if you don’t mind me asking…what exactly did I say to upset you?”

Sunset bit her lip.  It surprised her that nobody has told him about the old Sunset Shimmer.  Part of her felt relieved.  He didn’t know about how awful she used to be.  He didn’t know about all her mistakes.  He only knew about the Sunset Shimmer seeking redemption.  The nice version, relatively speaking.  She almost didn’t want apprise him.  She wanted to maintain the illusion that she’s always been a decent person.  What would he think of her if she revealed who she used to be?  Would she lose another good friend?

“Sunset, talk to me.  What did I say?  How bad could it possibly be?” Coppermane said.

Oh, it’s pretty bad, Coppermane.

Sunset thought realistically for a moment.  If he stays at CHS, he was inevitably going to find out.  That day has been secured in the annals of CHS history forever, and one way or another, he’d learn the truth.  As much as she didn’t want to disclose the information to him, she knew it was the right thing to do.  If he was going to find out…better learn from her than someone else.

Sunset sighed.  “Coppermane…um…there’s something you don’t know about me.”

Coppermane rose his eyebrow.  “Would it have to do with this ‘Old You’?”

Sunset’s shoulders tensed.  “Actually…it has everything to do with that…” she said, looking down in shame.

“Well, I’m all ears,” Coppermane said.

Sunset took a deep breath, and proceeded to tell Coppermane all about her old self.  She told him all about how she’s from Equestria, just like Twilight.  Power was all she craved, and when she didn’t get what she wanted, she fled to this world. She told him all about how she basically ruled all of CHS.  Whenever she didn’t get her way, she would use scare tactics and force to make it otherwise.  She told him about how she dated Flash Sentry for a time, not because she liked him, but just to make herself more popular.  Then, the fateful day when Twilight showed up.  She told him all about that year’s Fall Formal, and how she turned into a “raging she-demon”, and realized how much of a monster she truly was.  Now reformed, she tried to seek acceptance once again, but everyone resented her, and rightfully so.  Basically everyone in CHS held a grudge against her, with the exception of Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy.

“The old me was just…awful…” Sunset said, feeling a warm streak on her face as a single tear travelled down.

Coppermane couldn’t believe what he was hearing.  Apparently, he’s only ever known the “good” Sunset Shimmer.  He never knew the “bad” version.  He couldn’t even imagine Sunset being anything other than awesome.  And studying her face further…was that a tear?

“Well, Sunset,” Coppermane said, “I can already tell you that the Sunset Shimmer I’ve always known has been nothing but awesome.  Honestly, it’s hard for me to picture you as…well…a bully.  You’re one of the coolest girls I’ve ever met.”

Sunset smiled a little at this, but her remorse for her past overshadowed that little glimmer of light, causing her expression to darken once more.  “Well…thanks Coppermane.  Unfortunately…a lot of people still look at me and see a monster.  After the incident…I just felt so alone.  I was scared to even approach the girls for a while, just because I was afraid they would hate me.  I mean…I’ve won most of everyone’s trust back to some degree…but there’s still a fair number of classmates who hate me…and…well…they have every right to.  Who wouldn’t hate after everything I’ve done…?”

“Hey, don’t say that,” Coppermane said.  “There’s plenty of people who wave at you and say hi.  I’ve seen it for myself when we walk to Physics together.”

Sunset sighed.  “I just can’t help but feel like everyone still had this deep-seated grudge against me.  On the surface, they might like me, but deep down…”

“Sunset, don’t think like that,” Coppermane said.  “I’m sure if given some time, they’ll warm up to you.”

“Coppermane, let me ask you something,” Sunset said, “How would you feel if one day, Hoops and Score came up to you, and said they’ve changed their ways.  What if they tried to be your friend?  Think about that.  After all the horrible things they’ve done to you…after almost completely separating you from your friends…separating you from Fluttershy…how would you feel?”

Coppermane opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out.  Sunset let her head hang low in shame.  She was looking away from Coppermane, but he could still see the sheer amount of regret in her eyes.  He saw something he never expected to see from a girl like Sunset:  fear.  However, after hearing about everything she’s been through, seeing Sunset so scared didn’t seem that foreign anymore.  He saw a tear run down her face as she looked down with compunction.  Coppermane has always seen Sunset carry herself so confidently, and always seemed so happy.  But now, Coppermane was seeing under the surface, deeper into Sunset’s true feelings.  He looked at Sunset’s dispirited expression, and saw one thing:  guilt.

Wow…poor Sunset…

Beneath that tough, pretty exterior was a sensitive, vulnerable girl.

Coppermane thought about Sunset’s question.  What if Hoops and Score tried to be his friend after everything they’ve done to him?  He wanted to make Sunset feel better, but at the same time, he knew he had to be honest.

“Well, I see your point, Sunset.  I won’t deny that I would be rather taken aback if they tried to be my friend after all this,” Coppermane said, making Sunset’s expression sorrow even further.  “But, I think after some time passes, and if they really try, I could warm up to them.”

This made Sunset look at Coppermane.  “Really?” she asked incredulously.  “Even after everything they’ve done to you…you could forgive them?  You would give them a second chance?”

Coppermane shrugged.  “Forgiveness would definitely take a long time, but a second chance?  I believe everyone deserves a second chance.  And…if it makes you feel any better…” he said, putting his hand on Sunset’s shoulder, “For someone who never knew the old Sunset Shimmer, you’re one of the nicest, coolest girls I’ve ever met, and it’s seriously hard for me to imagine you being anything other than awesome.”

Sunset couldn’t believe what she was hearing.  After hearing about everything she’s done, he doesn’t hate her?  Nice?  Cool?  Did he really think about her like that?

Sunset managed a small, yet sincere smile.  “Y-You really think so?”

“I know so,” Coppermane said.

Sunset was flattered, but the light was short lived.  Her inner fear and insecurity made her expression go somber once again.  “I don’t know, Coppermane.  It’s just hard sometimes…”

Coppermane looked at Sunset with worry.  Seeing Sunset like this was really tugging on his heartstrings.  “Well, Sunset, if you ever need help, your friends are always here for you.  Rest assured we all love you, and we’ll always stand up for you if someone berates you for your mistakes.  And if you ever want to talk about these things, or if you just want to vent, I’ll listen to every word.  Trust me…I know what it’s like to be alone…”

Sunset sighed.  “Coppermane, how could you possibly know what it’s like to have everyone hate you?  You have no idea what it’s like to be all by yourself with nobody t—” she stopped when she had another epiphany.  Her eyes went wide.  Once again, she failed to realize something.  Coppermane knows exactly what it’s like to be all alone.  To have everybody hate you…and in his case…unconditionally hate you.  Coppermane knew almost verbatim what it felt like.  The agony from his experiences is what fueled his revelations at the musical showcase.  It’s why he was so scared of the group when they first met.  It’s what allowed him to invoke the magic of friendship, and unlock his element.  It’s why he fell for Fluttershy, because she was the first person to reach out to him and give him a chance.  Sure, the rest of Sunset’s friends tried to be sympathetic and compassionate towards her, but in reality, they’ve never experienced the torment firsthand.  Coppermane has.  He could actually feel for her…and Sunset realized she could feel for him too.  He knew exactly what it’s like.  Sunset cursed herself inside.  How could she be so ignorant?

“Coppermane…I…I’m so sorry…I totally forgot—”

“It’s fine,” Coppermane said.  “That’s all history now…and your past is too.  And there’ll always be people who don’t like you, Sunset.  That’s just a fact of life.  Just remember that for every person who isn’t very fond of you, there’s a friend out there who cares about you and adores you…including me.  Remember who you truly are:  a nice, cool, beautiful, awesome girl, who I know would do anything for her friends.  And we would do anything for you.  You’re a good person, Sunset.  Don’t let a few negative opinions make you forget that, because in my opinion…you’re a great friend,” he said with a wink.

Sunset felt her eyes welling up again, but not from guilt, from consolation.  It was so flattering to hear Coppermane praise her like this. As she thought about it, since the incident, she really has come a long way.  Sure, there would still be people out there who hate her, whether it’s for her past mistakes or not, but dwarfing those people were a plethora of classmates who have forgiven her.  And to hear from someone who never knew the old Sunset Shimmer that they can’t even imagine her being a bully?  That alone made her happy beyond belief.  She still felt extremely remorseful for her mistakes, but she also had the greatest friends any girl could ask for.  And Coppermane was right, they would always be there for her to help ease her pain.  To reassure her that she’s not a monster.  They always have been…

Coppermane spoke up again.  “Hey…um…I’m sorry for bringing up the Fall Formal Princess thing.  I didn’t think it would stir so many memories.”

Sunset smiled for the first time since they started this conversation.  “It’s fine.  I’m sorry I snapped at you.  I forgot that you never even knew the old me.  But…I’m glad you know about her now.”  She pulled Coppermane into a big hug, completely ignoring the fact that he was sick.  She held him tight in her arms.  “Thank you so much…”

Coppermane was a little surprised at first, but soon smiled and warmly reciprocated.  “Anytime, Sunset.  Remember, if you have any problems, we’re always here for you.”

Sunset’s revelations added a whole new dimension to her that Coppermane never expected to see, but he was glad he could now.

“Rarity was right,” Sunset said.

Coppermane rose an eyebrow.  “Hmm?”

Sunset realized she said that out loud, and pulled out of the hug, blushing a little.  “Um…n-nothing…”

Coppermane looked at her quizzically, and just shrugged.  Probably something private between her and Rarity.  None of his business.  Coppermane felt another round of chills hit, making him wrap his blanket around himself tighter.  After another coughing fit struck, he spotted his beautiful girlfriend approaching him with a bowl in her hand.

“Coppermane!  Your soup’s ready!” Fluttershy said sweetly.

Coppermane smiled upon hearing her sweet voice again.  He adjusted himself on the couch, sitting up straight so he could better eat.  Fluttershy handed the bowl to him, and he set it in his lap.  He looked down to see chicken, vegetables, and various spices floating in a pool of broth.  His mouth watered at the aroma.

“Thank you so much, Fluttershy,” Coppermane said, smiling.

Fluttershy smiled and blew him a kiss.  “You’re very welcome.”

Coppermane smiled, and took his first spoonful.  Wow…Fluttershy really could cook!  His taste buds danced at the flavors.  He swallowed, and the hot broth hit the abraded area of his throat, sending a soothing sensation throughout his body.

“Ahh…that’s the stuff…” Coppermane said, enjoying the soothing feeling.

Fluttershy smiled at his blissful face.  “Sunset, would you like some?”

Sunset’s face lit up.  “Sure, why not?”

Fluttershy smiled and went back to the kitchen to get Sunset and herself some soup.

“Gosh, I love her so much,” Coppermane said, making Sunset giggle.

Sunset migrated to the armchair so Coppermane and Fluttershy could sit together.  Fluttershy brought a bowl back for herself and Sunset, and the three spent the rest of the evening eating soup, talking, and watching a couple movies.  Coppermane might’ve been sick today, but it was still amazing.  Getting closer to one of his best friends…being able to make his girlfriend smile by letting her take care of him…a successful day in Coppermane’s book.


Time:  9:00 PM, Sunday, Coppermane’s House

Fluttershy wanted Coppermane to get plenty of rest so he could be good and healthy for school tomorrow, or at least feeling better than he did now, so she decided that it was time for her and Sunset to leave.  Fluttershy took Coppermane’s temperature one more time.  101.5.  It’s been decreasing all day.  At this rate, he should be fine for tomorrow, which made Fluttershy happy.  It’s a good thing Sunset stuck around, because she could give Fluttershy a ride home.  The group stood in the entrance hall with Sunset by the door, and Coppermane and Fluttershy standing close.  Coppermane supported himself on the wall with Fluttershy giving him some last minute instructions.

“Remember, take some ibuprofen before you go to sleep, okay?  And drink plenty of fluids,” Fluttershy said.

“Okay, I promise,” Coppermane said, but she wasn’t done…

“Text me with your temperature in the morning, and tell me how you feel.”

“Okay, Fluttershy, okay,” Coppermane said, chuckling a little.  “I’ll do all those things, don’t worry.”

“Make sure you get plenty of sleep, okay?”

“Yes, I promise,” Coppermane said.  “Jeez, are you my girlfriend, or my mom?”

Fluttershy giggled, her face turning a slight shade of red.  “I only want you to get better.”

“I know, I know.  I just like teasing you,” Coppermane said.  “Hey…um…thanks for taking care of me today.  I…I really appreciate it.”

Fluttershy smiled.  “You're very welcome, Coppermane.” She lifted her head to give him a kiss on the cheek.  “I love you.”

Coppermane lifted his hand to touch his cheek, warm from her sweet lips.  “I love you too.”  Another wave of chills hit him, making Fluttershy whimper sympathetically, putting her hand on his heart.  Coppermane smiled at her condolence.  “I’ll be fine, I promise.  You should probably be going.  I’m sure Angel and all your pets miss you.”

Fluttershy giggled, and gave him one more kiss on the cheek before she joined Sunset at the door.  Sunset opened it up, and Fluttershy started to follow her out, but she couldn’t help herself from sneaking one more glance at her boyfriend.  She turned around, only to catch him checking her out.  She noticed his eyes were aimed a bit…lower than usual.  He saw her glance back, and quickly darted his vision away, biting his lip.  His face turned to a bright shade of red.  Fluttershy’s cheeks went rosy as well, but she couldn’t help but giggle.  He was so adorable when he blushed!  He looked back up at her, and his face went even redder when he saw her smiling at him.  Fluttershy blew him a kiss.

“I love you…my prince,” Fluttershy said.

Coppermane’s heart fluttered.  Hearing those words…it was music to his ears.

Coppermane blew a kiss back, making her blush.  “I love you too…my princess.”

Fluttershy’s heart did a pirouette.  She would never get tired of hearing him say those heavenly words. She gave him one more wave before walking out the door to join Sunset in her car, closing the front door behind her.

Coppermane didn’t know why he got so embarrassed when she caught him looking at her.  She's his girlfriend, after all.  He’s allowed to check her out…right?  Eh…it’s probably just the way his brain’s wired.  Either way, Coppermane knew he was the luckiest guy in the world to have a girl as lovely as Fluttershy.  When his princess smiled, there wasn’t a prettier sight in the world.

Now, following his girlfriend’s instructions, he immediately started getting ready for bed.  Tomorrow would be his first day of school after the showcase and Formal…assuming he felt better.


Sunset ==> Coppermane, 10:05 PM

Hey, thanks for talking to me earlier today.  I feel a lot better after getting that off my chest.  It’s been an honor getting to know you these past few weeks, and I’m glad we’ve been able to help you as much as we have.  Hopefully you’ll feel better enough for school tomorrow, because I can guarantee you, you’re one of the cool kids now, and will be treated as such, haha.  Hope you get better soon, and thanks again :)

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