Sorry everyone for not being on lately, but this thing called life got real obnoxious and demanded I actually do thing off line for quite a long time *shudder*. Also, I did happen to forget where I was taking this story so I'm going to try to figure it out.

BUT until I figure that out I'm going to show just how sorry I am by answering a few of your guy's questions.

I will also answer a few of the comments on previous chapters! I will be replying in this color! So, without further ado~

Ratmandango said : Well... that was blunt.
For the record, I do not think I wrote the first chapter, so...

TwilightXLuna said : Great first chapter can't wait for the next keep up the great work
Thank you for the support!

goaway said : I did read it, and I quite enjoyed it. As >> Josh_Foster said, it's a little bit rushed, but there's always time for detail later. :twilight smile:
Thank you for reading it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, but as I said before, I don't think I actually wrote the first chapter.

Josh_Foster said : a bit of a fast pace for the opening but im liking the idea of (non-sex) slave Twilight. keep it up :pinkie happy:
Yeah, but it's fine for the first chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter.

Shadow of Doubt said : I love it, so far it is interesting hmm I would love it if he forced her to read and perform dark magic just to spite Celestia
Intriguing idea... I might just use it.

Star Pen said : http://memecrunch.com/meme/DVN9/gentlemen-you-had-my-curiosity/image.jpg
Thanks.

Anyway, that's all for right now everyone! Can't wait to read, and hopefully answer, all of your questions! See ya!