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inFAMOUS Displaced

by Way Big

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Dismiss

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This chapter was written with the assistance of Golden Flare. A Crossover with his story, Prince of the Everfree.

inFAMOUS Displaced
Chapter 16
Enter the Void

I couldn’t sleep...or at least, not well. I stirred awake when Second and Vanitas switched watches. Once he was gone, I fell back to sleep only to see a few images of war in my vision. The faces of many brave ponies, Akomish and otherwise, flashed before my face before ending with Smoke Shot’s face.

After waking back up, I couldn’t get back to sleep. From what I could see of the sky, it was a few hours until sunrise. I quietly got up and snuck out of the room, found a set of strong vines and climbed to the highest point of the castle. I never did get a very good look of the Everfree with my own eyes after being freed, but I knew most of the forest by heart, thanks to my telepathy.

I sent out a few radar pulses, attempting to find Vanitas. It was difficult, as he had a few Unversed patrolling the castle and they felt too similar to him. Once I discerned where he was, I jumped off the tower I was on, activated my dark thrusters and glided to the castle’s main entrance, where he was.

He turned to me and spoke with a tired voice, “Couldn't sleep?”

“PTSD,” I answered. “My second time having normal sleep and I’m plagued with the remnants of a war I fought in.”

“Yeah, similar to me, only my Anxiety kept me wake; been diagnosed with Anxiety when I was a kid, there were times when I'd have anxiety attacks and my body would spasm out on me.”

I gave a whistle. “You’ve got the better end of the deal than me or one other Displaced I’ve met,” I told him, “In your case, you don’t see those you see as comrades-in-arms, brothers, sisters...as dead lifeless faces.” I gave a sigh. “Not to mention, Twilight Sparkle looks like one of them.”

“Sounds like you’ve got it rough,” he gave a sigh of his own, “believe it or not, Anxiety isn't the only thing I'm diagnosed with, and I've been taking meds for them, been like two days since I've taken them.”

I lightly chuckled, “Like I said, you’ve got the better end of the deal. Anyway, I’m sure you have a few questions from yesterday that you want answered.” I waved my hand nonchalantly. “Ask away.”

“Okay, um...that spot you were staring at back at the gardens, what was that about anyway?”

I look at him with disbelief written on my face. “Have you ever been engaged to be wed?”

“Can’t say that I have, honestly.”

“That was the most calm I’ve been in a thousand years,” I said, “That one moment with my fiance...I had to cherish every moment of calm I could while in stone, waiting...waiting for Luna to return...waiting for me to be free...just,” I shuttered, “waiting for when I could truly comfort her.”

“Wow...that's...actually really sweet of you to do, you must really love her a lot.”

“I do.” I gazed to the East longingly. “She suffered those thousand years. Losing a friend and her sister to corruption within three years of me getting encased...keyword: encased, in stone. I wasn’t until after 600 years of “dating,” I was able to propose to her...without the ring, embarrassingly enough.”

“I'm sure she appreciated your attempt nonetheless.”

“Yeah, she did. She nearly broke off my left arm in her hug…” I trailed off for a moment. “Any further questions?”

“Yeah, about Dusk Spark, what exactly happened to her?”

“To best convey that, things need to be put in context,” I began, “The Multiverse is part of a Displaced’s life. I’m from a different version of Equestria, one where a number of ponies are Conduits, or individuals that can control/weaponize almost any element possible. However, to concern Nisled, he is from an alternate version of my Equestria.” I looked to where I felt his eyes would be behind his mask. “A version where his aim...my aim...was to be Infamous rather than Heroic.”

“Whatever he had done over time in his world had led him to murder Dusk’s parents and Spike...Whoever that is...shortly after her ascension. From there, she was practically on an obsessive manhunt. Every rumor, she pursued. She physically lost a bit of herself in any encounter with him.”

“After an entity known as Tirek was defeated, the families and connections of her friends, the other bearers of the Elements, were murdered during the chaos. Later, they discovered Nisled’s plan to engineer an army of Bio-terrorists to take over and rule the world.”
“After dealing with their version of the Beast, Starlight Glimmer, Nisled took advantage of their exhaustion and murdered and mangled her friends,” I shuddered in disgust from the images from getting Dusk’s powers, “Word’s can’t describe how bad it was. I can only show you.” I telepathically projected the images of their dead bodies in the process of being mangled.

I didn’t wait for a reaction, I just continued, “He would have killed Dusk, but their Discord and the Beast interfered, removing any chances of him to take over her world and to get stronger. Any powers he built up over time were taken away, leaving him with smoke, neon, video, concrete, and basic chaos.”

“Dusk then felt it necessary to go back in time to kill him and end the chaos before it began. Her trip went differently than expected.”

“Because she arrived in your Equestria when she did and not her Equestia’s past...Right?” Vanitas asked.
I just simply nodded. “Whoa...if it were me, I would've gone insane.”

“Good thing it wasn’t you then. Any more pressing questions?”

“Yeah, one last thing, how did YOU get Displaced? Were you at a convention like me?”

“Yes, but under different circumstances. I was a student at the University of Idaho in Idaho Falls, but I had money issues. Then, one of my friends said he would pay me a thousand dollars to go to a convention. Me, not being one for certain types of crowds, wouldn’t go to a convention under normal circumstances. But with a chance to keep myself from getting into debt, I went. I didn’t go dressed, as I wanted to use as little money as possible to gain a “profit” off of this.”

“I did, however, have a bit of cash to buy something, which was the costume of Delsin Rowe, this chain,” I showed him the chain on my arm, “And a can of magic spray paint.”

“Damn, man, you got a real bang for your buck, even though you got teleported to Equestria as the guy whose outfit you bought.”

“Yeah. Twenty bucks for the whole thing...a rip off, if you ask me.” I turned to a section of the castle wall that seemed to be in better condition than the some of the castle. An idea formed in my head and I pulled out my paint can. “Do you mind if I…”

I could feel him smirk under his mask, “Oh, God, totally.”

I found a few stray board of wood and I managed to prop them onto the wall to act as templates. With difficulty, I was able to paint the symbol of the Unversed (in blood red) onto the wall, surrounded by the images of the Elements of Harmony. I then had an aura of darkness painted around Unversed symbol, while the Elements had auras of their respective colors (toned to be slightly darker for contrast). Where the dark aura met the rainbow aura, I had the colors mix, as if the darkness was coexisting with the light.

I was about to put away the paint, when I felt a bit of inspiration. I added the cutie marks of Celestia and Luna to upper left and lower right, respectively. When I did, the Princess’s cutie marks and the Unversed symbol seemed to light up and two large chests appeared. One had the Unversed symbol and the other one had the Neutral Karmic symbol on it.

“Dibs on the Unversed marked chest!” Vanitas declared.

“I figured that would be the point,” I said as I moved to the Karmic chest. I went to open it, but it was locked. “Hey, a little help here.”

“Oh right, sorry.” he said sheepishly as he summoned Void Gear and tapped the chest, unlocking and opening it. When it was opened, the inside of the chest gave of a bit of light before it died down. Inside the chest was a Banishing Key.
I showed the Dimensional sphere to Vanitas and said, “There's been a slight change in plans. Nisled gets ripped to shreds, he pulls himself back together, and then we banish him from this world.”

“Alright then. Welp, my turn!” Vanitas tapped his own chest and it opened, revealing a keychain with a stone medallion of a dragon as its token. “One of the keychains the merchant was talking about! Hmm...I think I have an idea on what this one is.” he removed the Void Gear keychain and equipped the new one, making it transform into a new Keyblade; the blade takes the appearance of a pin tumbler lock key with bandages wrapped around the base, with the rest of the Keyblade like all the others. “Sweet! It's Fenrir! One of my personal favorites!”

“That has great range and strength, but maximum ground and midair combos are decreased by 1,” I quote from memory, “Also, it seems a bit too...clunky looking, in my opinion.”

“Eh, everybody has their opinions, it's one of my favorite Keyblades, you think it's clunky, it's all good.” Vanitas says positively. “Besides, with every Keyblade, where there's a benefit, there's a defect.”

“More power for less swings,” I say in an advertising voice, “What a price!”

Vanitas chuckles, “Nice sales pitch, pal.” he removes the Fenrir keychain and reattached his Void Gear keychain, “So now what?”

“Let me check,” I said, and I sent out a radar pulse. I sensed hostility immediately from behind him. I reacted as soon as I sensed that, pulling out Karmic Gear and lunging in his direction, but stabbing past his head. I felt my blade hit something and the air shimmered a bit, revealing a Stealth Sneak Heartless with my keyblade buried in it’s skull. It slowly dissolved, leaving a crystal-like heart to float away.

“Whoa! What was that!? A Heartless!?”

“I would assume so,” I answered, sending out another radar pulse. In that pulse, I sensed more hostility, but it was towards a few benevolent signals. “And I think it may not be the only one in the area.” I ran to the rope bridge, leaped up and used my dark thrusters to glide across. I ran into the forest, sending out a pulse every so often to locate the signals. I summoned a few Garage wolves to speed up the search.

One of them alerted me to something. Once I found that wolf, I saw several Living Bone surrounding three ponies. I couldn’t recognise them, but I wasn’t caring about that at the moment. I charged in, chain and keyblade in hand, but one of them just knocked me away with it’s mace tail.

“Oh nuts! Heal!” Vanitas cast Curaga on me, mending the damage that was dealt to me, “You alright, man?”

“Yeah, I’m okay. Those mares,” I pointed to the three mares, “On the other hand, won’t be. Light that bush near them on fire, place a shield around them, and I’ll do the rest.”

“Okay. Go!” Vanitas cast Flame Burst, the fireballs lighting the bush on fire. I rushed over to the burning bush, and absorbed the smoke from the fire. I then smoke dashed to the center of the clearing just as Vanitas cast Barrier over himself and the mares. I then lowered myself to the ground and then jumped, splitting into three burning embers. Reforming at the peak of my high jump, I began to fall head first. I ignited my smoke thrusters to speed my fall and increase the damage. I landed, making an explosion of embers, ash, smoke, and fire that blew the pack of Living Bone away. All of the Heartless dissolved into darkness, except for one, which I promptly dealt with, with a melee combo with my chain.

“We did it!” Vanitas cheered, then turned to the ponies, “You all okay?”

“We’re quite alright, Darling,” one of them said. Once I heard her voice, I recognized who it was.

“Rarity?” I was finally able to figure out the three mares. “Applejack? Rainbow Dash?”

“We don’t have much time to explain!” Rainbow yelled in my face.

“Our sisters had planned a sleepover in their clubhouse,” Applejack said, “I went to check on them this morning…”

“AND THEY WERE GONE! MISSING!” Rarity finished and fell on a teleported couch and began to sob almost uncontrollably.

“Okay, okay, don't worry, we'll help you find them, right, Delsin?” Vanitas asked.

“Where’s their clubhouse?” I answer, “Let’s see where you saw them last.”


We, being myself, Vanitas, and the three mares hurried in the early sunrise to Sweet Apple Acres. When we arrived at the clubhouse, I sent out a few radar pulses to check for their sisters, but I could only sense hostility.

“Vanitas, electrocute me and keep an eye out for Heartless,” I told him. He complied without a word, casting Thunder on me and readying for a fight. The mares prepared for a fight as well, while I entered the somewhat cramped quarters of the clubhouse. What I saw was a bloody mess in the middle of the clubhouse. I never did see a cockatrice before, but I could tell it was one. I checked where its head was and placed my hand on it. I was able to “read” the leftover bioelectric energy from its brain, seeing it’s death by the hands of Nisled. After I separated from it, I could see the “echo” of him running away.

I exited the clubhouse just as Vanitas finished off a Candy Apple Heartless. “Never thought these guys would make an appearance.” he turned to me, “So, what did you find?” then smelled the air, “And what smells like something died?”

“Because something did die,” I said, the mares turning pale from my words. “Nisled was here and while I didn’t find any evidence of their sister’s kidnappers, I found a corpse of a cockatrice in there. The leftover bioelectric energy it had allowed me have the information I need to track him down. It is very likely that they were kidnapped by him, Applejack took note of their disappearance, and then he brought over and killed the cockatrice.”

“Uh, what?” Rainbow said.

I slammed my head onto a nearby tree in frustration, knocking off all of the apples in the process. “Long story short, I can lead us to where they have been possibly taken.”

“Then what are we standing here for!? Let's move!” Vanitas declared.

“I’m waiting for his echo to stop insulting me in Sign language.”

“...Say what now?” Vanitas asked, dumbfounded.

I didn’t answer, I simply telepathically showed him how Cole MacGrath read echos, and I followed the echo, which was now doing a poor imitation of the Joker.


We followed the echo all the way to… “The Castle?!” I exclaimed, “He went all the way back to the castle?!”

“This could be bad.” Vanitas said.

“Yeah, I agree,” I turned to the mares, “You might want to wait somewhere safe. This could get messy” The mares nodded in understanding and vanished into the forest. I walked towards the castle, sending out a radar pulse every so often to check for danger and keep the echo going. The echo when into the main entryway and stopped over a certain tile and just vanished. I examined the tile that the echo stopped on and managed to pry it from the floor, revealing a secret passageway.

“You think he went down there?” Vanitas asked me.

“The echo ends here, so more than likely.” I moved the tile away from the passageway and dropped down, my arms becoming electrified to provide light.

“Hey, wait up!” Vanitas shouted as he dropped after me.

I turned on the spot and slapped my hand over where I believed his mouth would be. “Keep quiet!” I whisper-shouted, “Let’s just try to…” My rebuke was interrupted by gunfire. On instinct, I pushed Vanitas behind cover and dove behind him. I put my hand back over the “mouth” of his mask and peered out to see what we were up against.

What I saw were the Reapers, just like the ones from inFAMOUS. I listened carefully to the conversation they were having in Reaper (which sounded exactly like Skullcap).

*I just saw two figures dive behind that pillar!*

*Check it out! Our master wants the hostages to remain secure.*

*What if it’s the boy in the mask?*

*Shoot to kill.*

“Dude, are you following any of this?” Vanitas whispered.

“Shush!” I held my finger to my mouth to emphasis that. I then peeked out as far as I could without alerting the Reapers. Three approached our hiding spot. Two were armed with riot shields and AK-47s. The third was a suicide bomber. ‘There are three Reapers approaching us. I’m going to zap one of them. Once you hear the explosion, give them Hell.’

‘Roger that.’

I peeked out again and readied a precision bolt. Time slowed down for a brief moment as I carefully aimed at the suicide bomber’s bomb. I fired that one bolt, frying the Reaper and igniting the bomb. It went off, vaporizing the three Reapers. ‘They must be Chaos constructs! Give no quarter!’

‘Right!’ Vanitas jumped out and cast Dark Thundaga around the area striking most of the Reapers.

I followed behind him, frying whatever Reaper that was lucky enough to escape his onslaught. It wasn't before long that we reached the end of the passageway, where a door was. They were stuck closed, but they weren't for long, as I simply punched a hole in one, the tore them both off their hinges.

“Nice! Let's see what's behind door number one!” Vanitas said.

Without answering, I opened the door and found three fillies, all tied up and gagged. One was a yellow earth pony with a red mane. The next was a marshmallow white unicorn with a purple and pink mane. The last was an orange pegasus with a maroon mane.

“It's the Crusaders! But why foal-nap them, of all ponies? Why not one of the Element Bearers?” Vanitas asked.

“I'm not sure, but we did find them,” I answered. I moved to the earth pony filly and undid her gag.

Once the gag was off, she shouted a warning, “Watch out!” I then heard Vanitas struggling against something. Turning, I saw Nisled holding him in a full nelson just as they teleported out of the chamber. Panicking, I finished undoing all the binds and gags and then ran as fast as I could with the fillies in my arms.

I managed to get to the exit of the castle to see Second and Vanitas barely holding their own against what looked like a brainwashed Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash.

Harmony is just a dreamy mist,” Rarity droned as she flung spell after spell at the duo.

Order and Chaos can never coexist,” Applejack continued in a monotonous way.

Embrace that here in the Everfree,” Rainbow spoke as she flew.

AND YOU SHALL SEE WHAT A WONDERFUL WORLD THIS SHALL BE!” The three said and managed to knock Vanitas to where Nisled stood.

“Agh! That smarts!” Vanitas glares up at Nisled through his mask, “You think you can just kill me without a fight, you cheap knockoff?”
Nisled responded by trapping Vanitas’ arms and legs in concrete and kicking him forcefully in the visor. The visor cracked, and he was flung to the spot where my vision was depicted. Nisled's hands and Vanitas lit up a red color, and he flinched as if he took a massive hit.

“AHHHHHHHH!!!” Vanitas screeched in anguish as he barely clung to consciousness.

“Who’s cheap? Me or the guy who sent you here?” Nisled asked arrogantly, as he summoned a diamond sword (much like from Minecraft). He raised the sword to strike, but I dove down and knocked Vanitas out of the way. The blade went through my shoulder (that's in one side and out the other). I yelled out in pain from the strike, which must have gotten Second’s attention, as he managed to knock the brainwashed ponies back long enough to change into his aura giant form and knock Nisled into the canyon/gorge. When that happened, the mares fell unconscious.

After pulling the sword out of my shoulder, I ran to Vanitas and used a ray sphere pulse to check his vitals. I managed to confirm that he was alive, but just barely. Without instruction, Second poured some of his own life force into him as I prepared a healing volt. Vanitas received the volt as gratefully as you can imagine.

“Ah! What happened!? Where's Nisled!?” Vanitas asked as he looked around frantically.

“You were beaten to within an inch of your life, and a few volts of electricity cleared that up,” I answered, “As for Nisled, he's down in there.” I pointed to the canyon/gorge.

“Can you scan to see if he's dead or something? You know, that pulse thing you do?”

“I won’t bother. It'll take more than what we have to kill him,” I deadpanned, “And I mean it. I saw him get beheaded, only for the body to pick up the head and reattach it as if it had to do that on a regular basis.” I walked to the edge of the crevice, and peered down. “That's why he needs to be banished.”

“If that's what it takes, then so be it, let's banish the bastard.”

“Alright, let's get going...after I switch elements. Hit me with something Dark.”

“Thunder!” Vanitas cast Dark Thundaga, electrocuting me with sinister lightning. I was able to drain out the lightning and absorb the Darkness. I let my Dark suit flow onto me and Karmic Gear appear in my hand. Turning around, I nodded to Vanitas and dramatically fell backwards into the crevice. The wind whipped past as I fell head first. Just before I hit the ground, I flipped to feet first and landed without getting hurt.

Vanitas just jumped off the cliff and landed on his feet with no ceremony, no tricks, no nothing, I guess he's done messing around and getting serious, “Where'd he go?” he whisper-shouted.

‘Only one way to find out,’ I tell him. I pulled out my Banishing Key and held it above my head. It then began to float around and glow. It stopped in front of me and charged with some kind of energy. I sent out a brief pulse to find Nisled, but he was where we may have least expected. ‘DUCK!!!’ We both managed to duck just as the Key fired a beam in the spot where we were standing, striking Nisled and sending him hurtling into a void portal near the mouth of a cave.

“Did that do it? Is he gone?” Vanitas asked me.

“Yep, he's gone,” I answered, “Now, let's see about…AHH!” I suddenly felt something and it hurt my head. I fell to my knees with a hand on my head.

“Whoa! You okay there, man?”

‘Karmic Champion. Prince of Darkness. Come forth.’

“Did you hear that?” I asked.

“Yeah, what was that about?”

‘Come forth.’

“I think it's coming from that cave,” I said, pointing into the cave near Nisled's Banishment spot.

“Let’s go check it out.”

“Okay.” We started walking, and kept an eye out for any Heartless. As we went further in, I couldn’t deny my feelings. “Do you feel as if we're walking into a Holy place?”

“A little bit, why do you ask?” Vanitas looked as if he realized something, “Your powers aren't unholy or something, are they?”

“Not that I'm aware of.”

‘They are not. However, ye must remove the shoes from off thy feet, for the ground upon which you stand is Holy Ground.’

“Well, you heard the Voice,” I said as I powered down my Dark suit and removed my shoes, “Remove your shoes...if you can.”

“Um...I kinda can’t, my suit’s melded onto my body, thanks to that merchant.” Vanitas said, bitterly.

‘He is an exception, Champion.’

“Alright,” I respond, but I then realized something, “Come to think of it, who or what are you?”

‘Come further and you shall see.’

We moved further in until I saw something that just blew my mind. It was a crystalline tree that felt like a living Blast Core.

“Whoa! The Tree of Harmony! It looks more amazing seeing it up close and personal!” Vanitas said.

“I'll admit, I'm impressed,” I said, “But what called us here?”

“That would be me,” then someone stepped out from behind the tree.

“Holy!...Cole!?”

“Who?” Vanitas asked, then saw somebody he never thought he’d see again, “Bro!? No way!”

“What?! You see him?”

“I see somebody, but I don't believe it. How did my brother get here!?”

“Your brother dressed as Cole MacGrath?”

“No, my brother dressed as Ventus from Kingdom Hearts: Birth By Sleep. Wait…” Vanitas began to think about something, “Do I have a concussion, or did I finally go crazy and now I'm seeing hallucinations?”

“You're suffering neither problems,” ‘Cole’ said, “Your minds are perceiving my appearance differently. Delsin sees Cole MacGrath while you see Ventus.”

“Ohhhh, I get it now,” Vanitas said, “So, who are you then?”

“I am the Spirit of the Tree of Harmony.”

“No freaking way!” Vanitas said in surprise. “Wait, why did you call us here?”

“I speak concerning both of you and I offer gifts to help in your futures,” Spirit answered. He turned to Vanitas and spoke, “You already know what is to come in Equestia’s future, give or take a difference. All I can do is offer aid in what way I can.” The spirit pulled two items out of “his” pocket, one was a black crystal shaped like the Unversed symbol, the other was a white crystal shaped like the Mark of Mastery symbol.

“What are these things?” Vanitas asked.

“The Elements of Dusk and Dawn,” it answered, tossing the jewels to him, “When my strength wanes, you and your friend will need to use those to reveal what needs to be sealed.”

“Friend...Dean! Dean is here!?” Vanitas exclaimed.

“Given time, he will be,” the spirit then looked at me, “Delsin Rowe, your doppelgänger, Nisled, will continue to try to spread his ideal of pure, unfiltered Chaos through the Multiverse. However, he cannot travel to any Equestria where you haven’t been or summoned someone from.”

“Does that mean that Sora will have to deal with him until he's properly banished?” It nodded. I hung my head down and said, “He's already pissed off at me for trying to comfort him when he didn't need it. Now he's got a psychopath to deal with.”

“Don't worry, I'm sure he can handle it, if he's anything like the real Sora, he'll take care of things.” Vanitas tried to reassure me.

“It's not him I'm worried about,” I responded, letting Darkness flow down my arms. “If he saw me with these powers, he'd sooner stab me 27 times in the chest before accepting help, and that's including with how upset I unintentionally got him.”

“It’s for that reason, I'm willing to help you.” The spirit then sent a rainbow orb of energy at me. When it hit me, I felt a surge of energy and my vision went through the entire color spectrum. When I could see properly again, I noticed that my clothing (and, therefore, my Karmic rank) had changed to Hero. Not only that, but I felt as if I had a new power.

“Whoa! What happened? Are you okay?” Vanitas asked me.

“I feel...different,” I answered, “I think I skipped the Paragon rank straight to Hero.”

“I also altered one of your abilities, gave you new ones and gave you access to Magic.”

“What do you mean?” I asked.

The spirit sighed in annoyance and pulled out a piece of paper for me to take. I read over the page quickly, then looked at Vanitas with a mischievous grin.

“What is it? What did it say?” he asked.

In answer, my right hand lit up in a blue aura as I said, “Smoke and Mirrors.” Instantly, in a flash of blue smoke, my clothing switched to neutral and several neutral clones of myself appeared.

“That’s...new.”

I dispelled the clones and restored my clothes. “Evidently, what the spirit meant was that I'm now able to match Nisled. He wields Chaos and I wield Harmony,” I explained, “What you saw me do was a fusion of Harmony Magic and smoke.”

“Sweet! So, what happens now?”

“Well, for starters, I need to return home and check up on my fiancè. And thinking about that, when Tia and I smooth out the details, I'll see about getting you an invitation to the wedding,” I said.

“Awesome! So I just do the thing and send you back?”

“Eeyup.”

“Alright then. It's been great meeting you, and I hope to see you at the wedding. Delsin, our contract is complete!”

As soon as that was said, a void portal opened up. I gave Vanitas a goodbye salute and walked through...only to get decked in the face with a golden horseshoe and fly back through the portal.

“Uh…was that supposed to happen?” Vanitas asked.

“Do I have a horseshoe shaped bruise on my face and is there an angry white alicorn walking through the portal with fire in her eyes?” I asked.

“Yes to both questions...and she's making me uncomfortable,” Vanitas answered.

I gave a slight whimper and answered, “Then yes, that was supposed to happen.”

I felt a tugging on my pant legs and I was unceremoniously dragged through the portal while Tia was muttering, “You and I need to talk about all of this.”

Author's Notes:

Delsin is now a Hero!


Sorry for simply skipping past Paragon and going straight to Hero. I was having trouble with the story and providing Karmic choices (seeing as how he simply kept following Good Karma).

Also, how do you think Celestia will punish Delsin (and keep it clean!)?"

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