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Three months have passed since Shining Armor has been trapped as an earth pony maid. Now known as Lowly Servant, she had given up all hope of rescue. She thought it was over until Twilight's error prone pupil, Evening Storm turned her into a filly!
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Warning! This is an UNOFFICIAL sequel to Pajama Pudding's 'Maid to Please'. A lot of this story might make better sense if that one is read first. This story was written with their permission.

PS: The Sex tag is for mature and sexual references of the first fic. There is no actual clop in this story.

Always have a safety word.

This was the one thing Shining Armor had learned from his one night with Cadance transforming his body to anything she fancied. It had ended with him as an earth Pony Maid, coupled with a persona spell making him act like a weak submissive one, who always followed the orders of her superiors. The problem was, all the other maids had become her superiors!

Then Cadance had lost track of her, only to mistaken some other maid for him, and had changed her back into 'Shining Armor' instead! The new lord soon discovered her secret, and not wanting to give up his new life, forced her to remain as she was. The bottom ranked maid "Lowly Servant" and his personal sex slave.

Humiliated and trapped by the spell. She had slowly lost the will to go on. Her days blurring together into one big mess. She had no illusions of rescue. No one knew who she really was. No one even cared. Only the command to not run away or hurt herself had kept her going.

Then came Twilight's new pupil Evening Storm. A unicorn stallion who's spell casting is more chaotic then anything else. He saw she was hurting. He wanted to help, but instead gets her caught in one of his spell misfires, which results in her being turned into a filly!

With this new form comes new commands and challenges, and maybe, possibly, some sort of escape for her.

Will she have the strength to claim it?

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56,789 words: Estimated 3 Hours, 48 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

8 Chapters:

  1. One act of kindness... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 25th, 2016
    14,681
  2. ...can make all the difference... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 23rd, 2015
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  3. ...and bring the truth to light. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 27th, 2021
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  4. Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 24th, 2015
    5,091
  5. Soft Cannon Bonus: The Fate of Lemonfresh [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 28th, 2017
    3,693
  6. Non Cannon Bonus: Loopholes: Corruption [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 28th, 2017
    7,998
  7. A horrible idea for a sequel [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 17th, 2018
    1,063
  8. Another what if Sequel idea [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 6th, 2020
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Published Dec 12th, 2015
Last Update Jun 6th, 2020
Maid to Please 2: Loopholes

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