The Tragic Story of Stardust Blazeby MysteryHorseDude
Chapters
The Runaway
The story begins at night-time in the land of Equestria, where there was an infant left on the front doorsteps of an orphanage in Ponyville. This infant was a unicorn colt with a yellow coat, and he had an orange mane with a white stripe in the middle. He was laying in baby clothes in a basket, with a note on top of him.
A hooded stallion left him there, and he knocked on the door and left.
A grumpy old stallion Earth-pony came to the door, saying "who's there!"
He looked to his left, and then to his right.
The grumpy old stallion said "darn door-ditchers!"
Then the grumpy old pony looked down and saw the infant unicorn colt.
He picked up the basket with his teeth and front left hoof, and took him inside.
The basket, with the baby inside, was laid onto a table, and the grumpy old pony took out the note and read it aloud.
The note said:
"Dear Whoever Reads This,
This is my child, he is a unicorn, and a very special one at that. I'd like you to take care of him, so he may grow up to be happy and healthy. He's more precious to me than anything else. I'm trusting you to make sure he is safe. His name is Stardust Blaze, my son. He was born one week ago."
"What!?" the grumpy old pony said "the pony who wrote this didn't even bother to say what his or her name is!?"
So the grumpy old pony discarded the note and told the baby "well, I'm gonna look after ya now, Stardust Blaze. So ya better like it. I'm the pony who runs this orphanage, and my name is Grumpy Acorn. Ya better remember that, or else!"
Just as anyone would guess, Grumpy Acorn was a very grumpy old pony.
So seven years have passed, and Stardust Blaze is now seven years old. He's living with the other orphans in the orphanage.
One day, Stardust was busy washing dishes.
But one dish was hard to wash no matter how hard Stardust tried, because there was a spot that was hard to remove.
So Stardust gave up.
"Giving up?" Grumpy Acorn said as he entered.
So Grumpy Acorn looked at the dish that was hard to wash, and saw the spot that wasn't removed.
"Stardust" Grumpy said "Our children aren't raised to hide their failures."
So Grumpy took the dish and threw it against the wall, breaking it.
"As punishment, Stardust, you'll work for that ruined dish by doing extra chores for exactly 12 hours, starting with cleaning up that dish that you just broke."
"But you bro-" Stardust said.
"YOU TALKIN' BACK TO ME!?"
"NO! NO! I DIDN'T MEAN TO!"
"THEN GET TO WORK!"
So Stardust cleaned up the mess that was made after Grumpy Acorn broke the dish. After that, Stardust did more chores for 12 hours straight, like doing laundry, mopping the floors, dusting the windows.
But during Stardust's chores, the other orphans would pick on him.
One orphan, a Pegasus colt with a tomato-shaped cutie mark, came up to him and said "hey Stardust Blaze. Ya doin' chores? Grumpy's orders?"
"Yes, Rotten Tomato, I am".
"You know" Rotten Tomato said "you're a unicorn, but you are terrible at magic."
Then a female unicorn filly about the same age as Stardust, with a diamond-shaped cutie mark, came in and said "yeah, Stardust. I'm the same age, but I'm practically a master at magic. Besides, Rotten Tomato and I both have our cutie marks and you don't".
Then Stardust looked at his flank and noticed that he doesn't have a cutie mark yet.
Then a third foal, an Earth-pony filly with a robin-shaped cutie mark, came in and said "yeah, and you know what every-pony in the orphanage is calling you?"
"What!?" Stardust asked.
Then the three foals went towards Stardust and said "Star-dumb Blaze! Star-dumb Blaze! Star-dumb Blaze! Star-dumb Blaze!"
So Stardust screamed and ran off.
Then, Grumpy Acorn stood in front of Stardust, stopping him, and said "I thought I told you to do your chores for 12 hours."
"I was, but they were-"
"DON'T PIN THIS ON THEM! JUST FOR THAT, YOU ARE TO SLEEP IN THE BASEMENT WITHOUT DINNER, AND YOU WILL STAY IN THE BASEMENT STARTING NOW! SO GET IN THERE!"
"Oooh"" said the three other foals. "Star-dumb's in trouble."
"You aren't gonna punish them, too?" Stardust said.
"GET IN THE BASEMENT! NOW!" Grumpy shouted.
Then Grumpy pushed Stardust to get him to walk.
So Stardust sat in the basement, where he would do nothing but cry and sit in a dark corner.
"STARDUST!" Grumpy shouted "SHUT UP AND STOP CRYING IN THERE!"
There was a little hole in the basement with a window in the hole.
There was a pony looking through the hole as she saw Stardust in pain.
That pony was Princess Celestia herself.
"Stardust Blaze" Celestia said to herself "It saddens me to see you in so much pain."
Stardust tried to stop crying. Then he remembered the filly with the diamond-shaped cutie mark saying "yeah, Stardust. I'm the same age, but I'm practically a master at magic. Besides, Rotten Tomato and I both have our cutie marks and you don't".
So Stardust thought that he wanted to escape from his abusive orphanage. And the way he wanted to escape is to practice unicorn magic.
So Stardust spent his time in the basement practicing magic, he started by trying to levitate a pair of weights.
After a couple tries, Stardust was eventually successful at it.
Stardust lived in the orphanage for a few more months, but the other orphans, as well as Grumpy Acorn, were even more cruel to Stardust than before.
But during Stardust's free time, he would continue to practice magic by attempting to levitate heavy objects with his unicorn magic.
However, he was not so successful at it.
So one day, Grumpy came upon Stardust practicing magic and said "You! I saw you've been practicing magic! If you like it so much, then how about you join Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns! They have an entrance exam."
"No thanks" Stardust said. "I'm not ready to-"
"Too late! I already enrolled you!"
"What!? But, but don't I get a say in this!"
There was silence. Then, Grumpy Acorn walked away.
But then he stopped, and he turned around and told Starudst "if you fail this test, you'll be banned from the orphanage, forever!"
Then Grumpy Acorn left.
Then Stardust Blaze got onto the ground and started crying.
Then, Stardust, the three orphans, and Grumpy Acorn, were waiting at the train station for the friendship express to go to Canterlot.
But then, Stardust came up with an idea.
He thought to himself "I never faced Grumpy. I'm too scared. But if I want to be better than the other orphans, I'll have to".
"Grumpy Acorn" Stardust said "I'm not going to Canterlot."
"What!? But you've been practicing magic, and-"
"I'm not ready!"
"Don't you talk back to me! I've raised you for a long time, and no orphan of mine has ever, EVER, talked back to me! Maybe I should teach you another lesson! No more dinner for a month!"
"NO! If that's how you're gonna raise me, by giving me more punishments for things I didn't do or can't help doing, then I'm outta the orphanage!"
Grumpy scoffed and said "fine with me! But don't come cryin' back to me when you learn that you can't make it on your own!"
So Stardust ran back to the orphanage, where he packed his belongings in a pair of saddlebags. Then, he left the orphanage, where he would never come back.
Stardust Blaze, who was now a runaway, was walking through the Everfree Forest.
But then, he heard the howl of Timber-Wolves.
Then, he looked to his left, and saw a silhouette of a unicorn stallion passed by from a distance away.
"Hello!?" Stardust said. "Is some-pony there!? I don't exactly know where I'm going!"
There was no responds.
But then, Stardust heard a twig break from behind him, so he looked behind him, and saw a bush moving.
The bush kept moving, and moving.
Then, all of the sudden, a Timber-Wolf came out of the bush and tried to run after Stardust Blaze.
So Stardust Blaze ran off as the Timber-Wolf was chasing him.
Then, from the Timber-Wolf's right, another Timber-Wolf arrived next to it.
Then, from the center Timber-Wolf's left, a third Timber-Wolf arrived next to it.
So now there were three Timber-Wolves chasing Stardust Blaze.
But then, Stardust Blaze reached a dead end: there was a cliff above him, but he was too small to reach the top.
Stardust looked back at the Timber-Wolves, and saw that this meant the end for him, or so he thought.
Then, his life flashed before his eyes as the Timber-Wolves came closer and closer to him.
Stardust thought that this was the end.
But then, a magical beam was shot in front of Stardust, and a unicorn stallion jumped from the cliff above Stardust and landed safely on four legs in front of Stardust.
It revealed itself as a green unicorn stallion with golden eye pupils, a long white beard, and a white flowing mane and tail.
The unicorn stallion cast a magic spell on the Timber-Wolves, and said "be gone!"
Then the Timber-Wolves cowered away in fear.
Stardust sobbingly hugged the stallion and said "Oh mister, that was so scary! I was in the Everfree Forest, and I was chased by Timber-Wolves, and I thought I was gonna be Timber-Wolf Food."
"Shh" the stallion said as he hugged Stardust, caressing his mane "it's okay, little one. You're safe."
Then the stallion looked at Stardust with an upset face and said "what are you doing out here?"
Stardust answered "I used to live in an orphanage, but every-pony at the orphanage was mean to me, even the one who ran the orphanage, Grumpy Acorn."
"Grumpy Acorn? I know him"
"You do?"
"Yes, we used to be friends, until we got in a fight and we stopped being friends. But he decided to move to Ponyville and run an orphanage. He's not very nice. When I was his friend, I was mean, too. Of course, later I learned that what I was doing was wrong, so that's when we got in that fight and stopped being friends."
Stardust looked at the ground, and he started crying.
He said "They're right. I can't do magic. Every-pony at the orphanage teased me because I'm terrible at magic. It's true, I hardly get better at it, and I may never be good at magic. (sniff) I think ... I think I may never be a great unicorn. Even Grumpy knew that, which is why he forced me to take the Entrance Exam for Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns, because he expected me to fail."
"Did you fail?"
"I didn't take the exam, I ran away before I could take it."
The stallion looked at Stardust with an upset face.
Then he said "You know, you're right. You'll never be good at magic."
"Really?"
"Really. You'll never be good at magic ... if you don't believe in yourself."
Then Stardust paused.
"If I don't believe in myself?" Stardust thought in his head.
No one's ever said that to him before. It's like this stallion was encouraging Stardust to keep practicing magic in order to get better.
"My name, by the way" the stallion said "Is Silver ... Silver Lining. Do you have a name?"
"I do" Stardust said "It's Stardust Blaze."
"Stardust Blaze" Silver Lining said. "That's a great name. You should be proud of it."
"Really? Because the orphans kept calling me 'Star-dumb Blaze'."
"Forget what those orphans said, or even what Grumpy Acorn said. All that matters is your own opinion. Whether you believe it's right or wrong, no matter what, you shouldn't be afraid to have your own opinion. Remember that, now."
Stardust smiled.
He thought to himself "no-pony's ever been this nice to me before since ... forever."
"Tell you what" Silver Lining said. "You won't do very good on your own. So why don't you stick with me. Plus, if you want to learn more about magic, I can teach you. I'm a graduate from Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns."
Stardust thought for a moment.
Then Stardust hugged Silver Lining and said "thank you, Mister Lining, sir."
"Please" Silver Lining said "we're friends. You don't have to call me Mister Lining. You can just call me Silver Lining, or Lining for short."
At that moment, Stardust Blaze realized something. He gained something he always wanted: Stardust gained a friend.
Little did Stardust or Lining knew that soon, the two of them would become close friends.
A New Home
So Silver Lining took Stardust Blaze to his cottage. It was located in the outskirts of Canterlot. It was a small cottage with two stories, a tan-painted brick wall on the outside, a large unpainted brick chimney, and a oak-wood roof.
"This is my cottage" Silver Lining told Stardust. "This will be your new home for a while."
So Silver Lining and Stardust Blaze went inside the cottage, where there was a floor made from oak wood, decorations bought from all over Equestria. The couches and furniture were all made from the finest fabric in Canterlot that bits could buy.
"Wow" Stardust sad. "You have a great home, Lining. Also, how did you afford the furnature?"
"Well, my four-legged friend" Silver Lining said "I afforded it because I worked as one of Celestia's best wizards, just like my ancestor."
"Your ancestor?"
"Yes, you see, I'm the descendant of one of the students of the legendary Star Swirl the Bearded."
"Wow, I've heard stories of Star Swirl the Bearded."
"Also, it's pretty much expected that Star Swirl became very old, and he was unable to be as old as Celestia. However, there's a rumor that Star Swirl is still out there, somewhere, because he found a spell that can cause travel through space and time. Most believe that this rumor is an old pony's tale, but I believe that it's true, and I believe that Star Swirl the Bearded is somewhere deep in space, or beyond, continuing his travels. My dream is to confirm that the rumor is true. That's why I have a certain book that will help me achieve my dream."
"What book?"
"Come with me".
So Stardust Blaze followed Silver Lining into a downstairs basement.
But then, Stardust remembered bad memories where he was forced to sleep in the basement as a cruel punishment by the abusive pony that ran his orphanage.
"No!" Stardust shouted as he stepped out of the basement. Then he ran up the stairs, and he collapsed onto the floor, shivering. Tears rolled down his eyes as he tried to suppress his urge to cry.
"What's wrong, Stardust?" Silver Lining asked.
But there was no answer, Stardust kept shivering.
"Stardust" Silver Lining said "You can tell me what's wrong, I won't judge you."
Stardust slowly got up, wiped his eyes, and said "promise?"
"I promise".
"Okay (sniff). When I was in the orphanage, one of my punishments was being sent down into the basement to sleep in the basement for the night without dinner."
"That wasn't very nice of Grumpy Acorn, was it?"
"No."
Then, Silver Lining placed his hoof on Stardust's right shoulder and said "Don't be afraid. You're not being punished, for you have done nothing wrong. Trust me."
Then, a white unicorn colt with a blonde mane, blue eyes, and a dandelion-shaped cutie mark came downstairs to the first floor, saying "Lining? What was that shouting? (Yawn) I was having a great dream."
The white unicorn colt saw Stardust Blaze: a yellow unicorn colt with green eyes, a yellow coat, an orange mane and tail with a white stripe in the middle of both of them, and no cutie mark (yet).
"Silver Lining" the white unicorn colt said "who's he?"
Silver Lining smiled and answered "he's my new student. His name is Stardust Blaze."
Then Lining looked at Stardust and said "Stardust, this is Dandy Lion, he's my other student. His parents left him on my doorstep when he was a baby, and he's been my friend and pupil ever since."
Then Silver Lining looked back at Dandy Lion and said "Dandy, why don't you come down into the basement with us, we were just about to show Stardust my book."
So Dandy Lion came into the basement with Stardust and Lining.
Lining used his unicorn magic to light his horn for the three of them to see where they were going.
So they went down some long stairs, until they finally went down into the bottom floor.
There, they saw a large crate laying down on the floor.
Lining turned the dial on the crate to make the correct combination, which was 1-0-1-0-1-0.
Silver Lining opened the safe, and he took out a dusty book that was labeled "Personal Journal #1" engraved in a golden plaque.
"Personal Journal #1?" Stardust asked.
"Yes" Lining said "This is the first journal of Star Swirl the Bearded. It contains some very powerful spells, some of them were not meant to be used in real life, ever, and some could cause a disaster. This journal was given to my ancestor by Star Swirl the Bearded himself. Someday, I'll give this journal to one of you to keep."
"Wow" Stardust and Dandy said.
"Tomorrow" Silver Lining said "We'll begin practicing magic. But for now, to be with you two."
"Yes sir" the two colts said.
Then Dandy Lion went back to bed.
"Where do I sleep?" Stardust asked Silver Lining.
Silver Lining put the book back in the safe, then he shut the safe and locked it.
"My boy" Silver Lining said "I'll show you."
Then Stardust Blaze followed Silver Lining as he took him to his bedroom.
Meanwhile, down in the basement, there was a firefly who saw the whole thing. The firefly then went out through an open window upstairs, and it flied far away.
The firefly finally went to Catrina Island, an island far beyond Equestria's borders.
The firefly went onto the beach, and it shape-shifted into a humanoid reptile with green scales, wearing a brown medieval shirt and a brown bandana.
The guard ponies looked at the humanoid and said "Rep, you've returned."
Of course, Rep was the name of the humanoid reptile.
So the guards let Rep enter the territory of Catrina Island.
Rep ran to the tallest castle in the island, where he was given access to the throne room
In the throne room, the one at the throne was Catrina. Catrina is a humanoid cat-like female. She used to be kind and compassionate, but she became corrupted and turned evil.
"Queen Catrina" Rep said "I've found where to find one of the journals of Star Swirl the Bearded."
"Good" Catrina said.
Cancellation
Dear Pony Fans,
I hate to say it, but I'm afraid I'm gonna have to cancel this story as well. I plan to start fresh with new fanfiction with entirely new plots.
Also, if you read "My Little P0N-E: Friendship is Science Fiction", I probably said that I'll do a One Piece crossover, well I may change my mind about that. However, I plan to write a fanfiction where Spike meets his parents, and where Twilight Sparkle and her friends meet Stardust Blaze and his friends, and a new enemy approaches Equestria.
Sorry about the cancellation, but I have to do it because I have other fanfictions in mind. I just want to make everypony, ha! Everypony.
I mean, I just want to make everybody happy. I'm trying to do all I can to make a good story for everyone to read and enjoy.
So please, if you have any ideas for what I should do in my next fanfiction, be sure to tell me in the comments below.
The reason I'm writing fanfictions is because I would like to partner up with Hasbro and turn these fanfictions into canon MLP storylines. But I can't do that if I have bad reviews. That's where you come in. I need your help writing my next fanfiction. So if you have any suggestions for what I should do, I suggest you tell them to me in the comments below. Please, it would mean a lot if I were to hear it from you.
Your buddy,
MysteryHorseDude