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One Step, Pink Step

by David Silver

Chapter 23: 23 - Getting Wet and Dangerous (clop)

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I rode on top of her as she stepped through the city. I tried to minimize the damage she'd do with her huge hooves, and she was mostly alright with the occasional bit of advice. She really seemed to want to talk, but she wasn't very good at it, so she tried to get me to talk.

She nuzzled at me on her back. "Hungry?"

I shook my head. "I'm fine, thank you."

She nodded before nudging me with her massive nose. "Friend?"

I smiled a little. "We can be." I decided to try to get some more out of her, or at least try. "What's your name?"

She looked confused and turned back ahead as she walked. A frown crossed her face as she walked in silence for several minutes. "Ground Stomper," she suddenly whispered. "I... Ground Stomper."

I nodded quickly at her. "Nice to meet you, Ground Stomper. That's a fitting name. Are you alright?"

She stuck out her tongue a little. "Hungry..." She suddenly spotted the patch of green we were headed towards and burst into movement. If her fur wasn't so thick, I'd have slipped off. Thankfully it was, so I hung on tight with both foreclaws as she sailed through the city with speed something her size shouldn't have.

She made a huge jump and came down inside the park, digging up several lines of dirt from her momentum. "Oops." She looked a little sheepish, then leaned down and began sniffing around. "Smells good..."

I slowly pushed up to my haunches, dizzy from the sudden burst of speed and the rough landing. "You may want to try a tree. Something large enough for you."

She walked towards a cherry blossom tree and began grazing the petals right off of it in huge bunches. "Mmmm..." For a while it was just that. She was happy, and she ate. She cleared two trees of their foliage before she sat down on her haunches. She patted her belly and nodded. "Hungry." She said it differently than before.

"You mean you're not hungry?" I gently scratched over her back.

She nodded. "Not hungry. Th... Thank you." She coiled on herself with all the flexibility of a cat and she licked me with her broad and wet tongue. "Thank you."

Before I could even say you're welcome, she rose to her hooves and trotted lightly, if massively, to a little stream in the park and took several large gulps of the water. I wasn't entirely sure if the water there was meant for anyone to just drink like that, but I didn't have any better suggestions for what to drink by someone so massive. She settled back down, then slowly rolled onto her side. She snatched me in a hoof and set me between her four legs. "Nap?"

I pointed back towards the hospital. "We should get back if you're good now."

She frowned at that. "Nap first."

What was I going to do? If she got angry, she could crush me into a fine paste. My moment of indecision was answer enough for her and her frown turned into a smile. She pulled me in with her forehooves and snuggled against me. "Nap..."

I tried to relax with her, when I noticed an odd... scent. Being unwashed and huge, she had a powerful scent. At first, most of it was plain body odor. It was strong and a bit offensive, but I tried to not make a big deal of it. This close, I was catching something new. I couldn't place it, consciously, but something in me knew what it was.

I was... Do I have to explain this part? Yes it does lead into how I got all sticky... very well.

I found myself reacting to her presence. I couldn't even try to get to sleep. I squirmed a little and tried to think about anything else, but her ovrewhelming scent was pressing against some new part of my mind. I didn't even know how I'd do anything about it! She was so much larger than me, every imagined angle seemed ridiculous, at best.

Stop giggling, Pinkie.

She noticed my restlessness and nuzzled at me. "Nap..." But I didn't settle down, and she tilted her head before she suddenly nuzzled me right over onto my back. Her eyes widened a little as my 'problem' came into view. "Nap later..." Her tail began to sway with increasing excitement as she sniffed at my belly. Her tongue slipped out and carefully ran across my entire underside, paying special attention to the stiffness that had drawn her attention.

She was... I'll confess, she was amazing... She worked her tongue up and down over my undercarriage while working me higher and higher. She gave these little coos and didn't stop until it'd become too much and I thrust up against her, spilling across her tongue. She lapped it up into her mouth and cleaned her tongue before nodding. "Your turn."

My turn for what? Or so I wondered a little dazedly as she turned around from me and swatted me with her tail, nudging me towards her rear. "Your turn."

I looked up at her and it wasn't hard to see what she was nudging me towards. She... Look, do we really need to go into this?

I could see them, they were huge! You would have had to be blind to not. Her lips were pouted and dripping and the scent coming from them, well, then I knew exactly what had set me off. She was a big mare in heat, and she'd chosen me to help her out. She gently nudged me again. "Your turn."

She sounded a little agitated having to ask so many times, so I moved in. An angry giant was the last thing I wanted. I sniffed at her gently and swayed from the overwhelming scent. I did it on purpose. I figured if I was drunk on it, I wouldn't think about it too much, and it mostly worked. I became roused and helping her seemed like a fine idea. I leaned in and began cleaning her, even if I could only reach the bottom, and that with some effort.

It wasn't enough for her. Even as she gasped and shuddered from the attention I was giving her, she became impatient. She rolled slowly onto her back and reached down for me, petting over my mane. "Deeper." She picked me up and placed me over her hot nethers. I could reach a lot more and got to licking and nipping all around her thick vulva. Look, really, we don't need to be this detailed!

Let's get to the part where the mess happened. So, besides her leaking getting some, most of it happened a little after that. She was enjoying my attention, but she wanted more than I could provide. Her hoof settled on my back. "Friend." She said it as if she were reminding me of the fact, then everything went dark and tight. She pushed me right into herself, only to pull me back. With earth-rumbling moans, she began using me as a living toy. I could only breath when she pulled me out, and I began to time for it. I wanted to get away, but I didn't want to be squished, either inside of her, or during my escape. I ended up going mostly still at first.

She didn't like that. "Clean," she ordered as she held me up, then pushed me back inside, and that's... kind of how I ended up as I was. I was only allowed to breathe for some of the time, and the rest of it was spent being inside of her, trying to stimulate her. It worked, and... she got very very tight. I thought I was going to die, but I popped out of her rather than exploding. She pet me and smiled. "Friend."

What? Was that all we did? That wasn't enough? That's how I got dizzy and messy, alright?

...

Fine, we... did a little more... When I was on her, but before she pushed me in, she moved me so my... my penis slipped into her. She was hot, but not tight. She was far too big for her to be tight to anything that wasn't my entire body. It didn't matter to her. She kept bucking up against me and encouraging me, and soon I went ahead and began pounding against her like a stallion would. I'm really not sure how much she got out of it, but she seemed to approve of it. When I had squirted into her, that was when she decided to take it to the next step and shove me inside... I was already a little out of it from our sex. She may not have been very, er, tight, but there is something uniquely stimulating about pleasing a woman large enough to squish you with a thought, and she didn't make it a secret that I had pleased her.

Wet, oxygen deprived, and drowning in sexual stimulants, she nuzzled me gently. "Friend. We... Friends." She sounded like she wanted to say so much more, but couldn't. I got the impression there were more thoughts in her head than she could get out. She wasn't nearly as simple and dumb as her speech made her sound. "Special... friend?"

Was she asking me to marry her, or become her boyfriend at least? I admit, I didn't know if I could even survive being her steady source of sexual satisfaction. She must have noticed my hesitation and concern, because her smile became a little frown. "Sorry..." She picked me up and placed me on her back, then walked slowly back to the hospital with me. We didn't talk much past that until we arrived at the hospital and she put me down. "Mad?"

I shook my head a bit. "No! No... Friend. I mean, we're still friends." She smiled gently. "I'm just not sure becoming boyfriend and girlfriend would work out, longterm. Don't you want someone closer to your size?"

She pointed at me with a massive hoof. "Friend. Other... Not friend. Hungry, ignore. Sometimes nip and grunt." Her smile deepened a little. She almost seemed proud of how much she was getting out. "You... friend." She kissed me right on the face, the lightest touch, then she settled down on her belly. That's when the others came out and escorted me inside to this room, and where you found me, Pinkie.

Happy now?

Author's Notes:

Let's try a little something different. This chapter is short. Don't worry! I'll write another today, but it keeps the clop all to itself, so you can skip it if you like, and not miss vital plot points.

It also let me tell things from Hiro's point of view. I'll slip back into Pinkie Mode in the next chapter.

Liked it? Didn't like it? Let me know!

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