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Tales of a Displaced Eco Freak

by Uncle Smiles

Chapter 16: The Great and powerful fuck up

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The Great and powerful fuck up

"I love weapons. I love how they look... how they feel... even how they smell..."— Krew, Jak II


PoV: Jak

Location: Golden oaks

Time: 3:00 P.M.


'I am a dwarf and I'm digging a hole, diggy diggy hole, digging a hole' I menatlly sang to myself a song I remembered from back home. I got up from the couch and grabbed my jacket and went to pick up Nyx from school.

On my way to the schoolhouse, I realized I haven't seen Rhino all day. I was about to question that until I saw Rhino walk by looking tired. I decided to ask him.

"Dude, where the fuck have you been all day?" I asked him as I walked to the schoolhouse.

"Trees. So many damn trees to kick." He said in a tired manner. I guess he's been working for AppleJack.

"Why didn't you use your head, I mean you have a skull that is impossible to break so why didn't you just hit the trees with your head?" I said to Rhino, causing him to facepalm.

"Well beaing in this new half pony body made me forget that." He said. "So where are we heading?" he asked.

"Picking up Nyx and Scootalo from school." I said. He looked at me in confusion.

"Why do we pick up Scootalo? Don't her parents pick her up?" He asked. At the mention of Scootalos parents, my anger flared up a shit ton.

"Yeah but what are you ganna do?" I said trying to sound calm.

The rest of the walk was spent in silence bit it didn't very long as we made it to the schoolhouse. I saw Nyx talking to a couple of fillies, I recognize them as Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. Whatever they were talking about made Nyx mad.

"Of course I have a dad! Why would I make that up!?" I heard her yell out. I decided to interrupt their conversation.

"What's going on here!?" I said to them.

"Those two were calling me an orphan and a liar because they never saw you before." Nyx said calmy.

"Wait don't tell me. This thing is your Dad? Figures." D.T. said. Palm meet face, face meet palm here's a ball play nice.

"Is that really the best insult you can come up with. Nyx here has seen me insult things when I get really angry before I blow something up." I said chuckling a bit remembering Me raging the shit out of my smartphone and completely obliterated an uninhabited part of the forest.

"Well I can call you freak, monkey, thing and a monster."she said in a smugly manner.

"I'm an Eco Freak, my kind evolved from monkeys and I am a monster." I said the last past changing into my dark form and showing my fangs and claws, scaring D.T and S.P.

"Boo." I said quietly as possible resulting in both fillies to turn tail and run, screaming about a monster on the loose. I changed back amd faced Nyx.

"That was cool!" She said, greeting me with a hug and I returned it.

"Meh. Never like bullies, anyway come on Nyx let's go home." I said as Nyx got on top of my head somehow.

We went pass the park but as I looked around for Scootalo and found her sitting by herself on a bench. I walked over.to her.

"Hey Scoots, What are you doing here alone?" I asked her.

"I'm just daydreaming." She responded.

"About what?" I asked wanting to know.

"I was daydreaming about what it would be like have parents who really care." She said with depression.

"Listen Scoots, as long as your parents have legal documents of owning children, I can't help you with that but I can give you a home, some food and a bed to sleep in. And besides you already have a real family, my family." I said to her while hugging her. I felt tears on my shoulder.

"Thanks...dad" She said tightening her grip on me. I felt tears slip down.

"So does that make her my sister?" I heard Nyx asked me while still acting as my hat.

"Yeah, I guess it does." I said as I picked up Scootalo. She yelped in surprise as I grabbed her and pulled her up and put her on my shoulder. She is lighter than she looks.

We made our way back to the library but stop to see Spike.

"Dude, whats up?" I asked him wondering where his heading.

"Didn't you hear, there's a new unicorn in town claiming to be the best in Equestria. I'm heading over there to check if it's BS or not." Spike said.

"How old are you again?" I asked his age.

"I'm 15 but everypony still thinks of me as a baby." he said sadly.

"Well theres a way to make you look your age but that's for your next lesson." I said to him gaining a smile from him.

"Cool. You want to go see the new pony?" He asked.

"Sure." I answered. Shits ganna hit the fan real quick today.

As we made our way to the center of town, Nyx began questioning.

"Why would a new pony claim to be the best unicorn in Equestria? That achievement belongs to Twilight." She said.

"It's probably another word for her that says 'Look at me everyone, I'm awesome!' or something like that." I said gaining some giggles from the two fillies.

We finally made it to the center of town and found a caravan parked in front of town hall. As we gotten closer we heard the voice of a mare shout out.

"Behold, The Great and Powerful Trixie has graced this town with her presence!" Trixie shouted on stage.

In the crowd, we found the girls watching the show.

"Hey girls." I greeted them. I noticed R.Ds hair color was back to being a rainbow.

"Hey Jak." Twilight said.

"So whats going on and who's the wizard?" I asked her.

"I don't know, she just showed up today claiming to the greatest in all the land and all that junk." She said. Somehow Trixie heard this.

"It appears that we have some non-believers in the crowd. Do any of you 8 ponies brave enough to challenge the Great and Powerful-" Trixie was interrupted by me shouting.

"Chuckle-nuts!"I shouted making everypony in the vicinity laugh and it made Trixie mad.

She used her magic to grab me and pulled me towards the stage.

"And what might you be creature?" She asked.

"Bitch I'm not a creature, I'm a monkey." I said making her laugh.

"Isn't that cute everypony, the thing can speak!" She yelled gaining some looks of disapproval.

"I'm not cute!" I shouted angrily." I'm adorable." I said as the crowd went on laughing their asses off.

This made her even more angry because she threw me towards the town hall. Everyone gasped at this. Nyx and Scootalo yelled out for me under the rubble.

I stuck my arm out and gave a thumbs up before I lost consciousness. Before everything went Dark, I casted a duplication spell twice on me for two new resident to town.


PoV change: Lokzii

Affiliation: Jak, Light Eco.

Location: Golden oaks library, main room

Reason for being there: Jak casted a spell to duplicate his body resulting in splitting his Eco alter Egos.


'Ugh, my head...my head?' I thought to myself. I opened my eyes and noticed I'm in the physical world again. I looked around the room and spotted my old room mate and my brother: Alduin.No not the dragon, numbnuts. I got up and walked, well wobbled my way their. 'This is going to take time in getting use to.' I thought to myself.

After a few minutes, I finally got the hang of walking and made my way to my brother and kicked him awake.

"Ow!" He yelled out. Wait for it and there's the face of realisation.

"Wait, ow? I can feel pain but that means." He finally opened his black emotionless looking eyes and took note of his surroundings.

"Yeah, we're out. I guess he needs help again give me a second." I said to him as I focused on finding Jaks eco signature. I found him under a pile of building debris.

"His at the town hall, we need to-" I stopped talking as I saw Alduin raiding the fridge.

"Why!?" I shouted at him.

"Don't blame me, I'm hungry!" He said while eating a slice of cake.

"We can eat later. Right now Jak needs our help!" I said as I grabbed his wrist and ran my ass to the door. As I got outside, I summoned my wings and took flight, still holding on to Alduin.

"I hate you. You know that." He said being grumpy.

"You love me and you know it bro." I said with a shit eating grin. That got a laugh out of him.

"Sure bro." He said.

I finally saw the town hall and began to descend and let go of Alduin so he can make an entrance.

I descended gracefully like an angel on the ground. I had closed my eyes while descending and opened them showing the populace my glowing white eyes. I heard a battle cry from the sky and looked up.


PoV: Alduin

Affiliation: Jak, Dark Eco

Location: very high up in the sky falling.

Why: Because it's badass


I was falling very fast towards the ground making the ponies scream in horror. I did my battle cry.

"LEEEEEROYYYYYY JEEEENKIINSS!!" I shouted out.

I landed on the ground making a small crater. I made it look like i was a demon falling.

I got up closed my eyes and leaped and landed next to my brother and opened my eyes showing them my eyes black eyes. I emitted an Aurora of pure evil and destruction. The ponies were shaking in fear of our sudden appearance.

Suddenly cyan blur made it's way to tackle me but I side stepped to the left making it crash on the wall behind me.

"Ow! How did you see me and more importantly who are you!?" R.D asked. Me and my brother have Jaks memory.

"Oh, you wound me R.D, I thought we were friends!?" I shouted in a mock hurt tone and putting one of my clawed hands to my chest.

"I've never seen you in my life!" She yelled out. The fun was ruined by Lokzii.

"That's enough you two. We came here because Jak called. Has anyone seen him?" I asked. Twilight was the only one to answer and lead us to a tent with him in it.

When we got to him, he looked like he was in a bar fight. I went ahead and checked him for any fatal injuries.

"Who did this to him?" I asked Twilight as I turned to her.

"Trixie, a unicorn showmare threw him using magic."Twilight said. I could feel the hate when she said the culprits name.

"We can deal with her tomorrow, seeing as it's getting really late. Before I forget the name's Lokzii and my brother is Alduin." I said. Twilight nodded sadly do to Jaks condition.

"He'll be fine in the morning." I said as I patted her on the shoulder.

"Oh and you're not then only one who's in love." I said as hurriedly made my way out of there.


PoV: Twilight

Status: Very very confused


'What did he mean by that? Does Jak like me?' I thought to myself. I turned to look at him. Seeing him like this. Nyx cried herself to sleep next to him and Scootalo won't talk to anypony.

I was about to exit the tent but stopped as I heard Jak mumble something in his sleep.

"The palace." I heard him say.

'What palace?' I asked myself as I made my way outside amd met up with the girls, Lokzii and Alduin.

"So how is he?" Asked R.D

"He'll be fine, he just need some rest." I said to them.

"See I told you! I told you, Jackie will be okay!" Pinkie said. I turned to Lokzii.

"So, what are you guys?" I asked them.

"We're both a part of Jak. I'm his good side filled with positive energies and Alduin here is my opposite. He's filled with Jaks destructive energies. We used to fight for control for Jaks body a long time ago." He said. When I heard that they wanted to take control over Jak made me furious.

"But Jak came up with an idea that gives us our own bodies and that idea was perfected into a spell thanks to Star." He said.

"Who's Star?" A.J asked.

"Well he was a very good friend and an awesome pony to hang out with. Most people or ponies in your case, didn't know him as Star but Starswirl the bearded." He said.

'Starswirl!? Jak was friends with the Starswir the bearded!?' I mentally shouted at myself.

"What!?" Is all I could say. After a few more minutes, I calmed down

"How does Jak know the most important pony in history?" I asked them. They looked at each other and Alduin shrugged his shoulders.

"Um about that, Starswirl wasn't a Pony." Lokzii said with a sheepish smile.

"What!? Then what was he?" I asked. How can Starswirl not be a pony!?

"He was a draconian mage, well he ended up a mage but he used to be a dragon that was interested in magic. He studied magic theories, made spells and made sure that all his magic spells could be used for all species on Terra." He said.

I was going to ask him more but Alduin asked Lokzii something.

"Didn't he have an egg with a dragoness that never hatched?" He asked.

"Yeah now that you mention it, he did. Last I saw the egg Celestia took it. I think it was unable to hatch naturally so she used the egg as test to enter her school." Lokzii said.

I was confused by this. The only egg the princess had was the one that I...

"What!?" I yelled realizing that Spike is a descendant of Starswirl.

"Twilight, why are you yelling?" Said Spike next to me.

"I found out who your family is." I said to him.

"Wait. Seriously!?" He asked.

"Yeah but first I have to tell you that Starswirl was a dragon." I said gaining a nod from him.

"He was your father." I said to him.

"So that means I could never meet him." Spike said as he looked down in depression.

"Not exactly. Star didn't die, 'Starswirl' did." said Alduin, confusing me and Spike.

"Last Jak heard of him, he moved to Haven City." He said.

"That reminds me. How's Spargus City going?" Lokzii said wondering to himself.

"What's Haven City?" I asked. I felt somepony tap my shoulder. I turned to look behind me and saw that it was Fluttershy.

"I know what Haven is." She said in usual quiet voice.

"How?" I asked her.

"Because before I moved to Ponyville, I lived in Haven city. It's actually a beautiful city with lots of shops and exotic animals there. I even met a nice creature named Lurkers." She said. The word Lurker doesn't sit right with me.

"The Lurkers name is Brutter, he owned a shop in the market place of the city." She said.

"Then why did you move to Ponyville, Haven sounds like paradise." said Rarity.

"It was but their wasn't many animals, due to the security walls around the city. Brutter encouraged me to move to Ponyville in the first place, telling me that there is a forest with a lot of animals that might need medical help. So I moved here." She finished telling her backstory.

"Have you ever wanted to move back?" R.D asked sadly.

"No but I do go visit the city at least once a month." she said.

"Haven sounds like it's getting better since the war." said Alduin.

"I've heard a lot about the war but never really got to learn more about it. Was their really a palace located in the center of the city." Fluttershy said.

"Jak said something about a palace before I left." I said to everypony. I looked over to see the two brothers and noticed their sad looks.

"There was a palace, it had the greatest view of the city but during the Metal-KG wars it was destroyed completely during one of the many battles." Alduin said.

"Jak was on the palace at the time with another friend a wise unicorn named Samos when it got hit by explosives. The palace fell but Jak and Samos made it out ok." Lokzii said as he found a box and sat down on it.

"Hey guys." said a voice behind everypony. I turned and saw that Jak was okay. I ran and tackled him in hug.

"Jak! You're okay! I thought the worst when we dug you up from the rubble" I said. He returned the hug gently.

"I didn't want to make you, Nyx and Scootalo worry about me." He said with a soft voice.

We were like that until we heard Lokzii say.

"Aww look at you two!" He said mockingly as we broke the embrace.

"Dude shut up! I made your physical form and I can destroy it." Jak said.

"Yeah but you wouldn't do that to your brothers now would you?" Alduin said.

"Yeah i would but since it's been a long time since I last let you guy's out, I guess you could stay for good this time." Jak said causing both brothers cheer at this.


PoV: Nyx

Location: Emergency medical tent in front of town hall.

Time: 6:00 P.M. 25 minutes after Jak woke up


I woke up from my sleep with a loud yawn. I looked at the side of me where I was sleeping next to Dad and saw that he's gone. I got up from the bed and heard some cheering coming from outside the tent.

I walked out of the tent and saw that Dad made a full recovery. The first thing I did was jump unto his back.

"Dad, you're okay!" I said in excitement.

"Like I said Nyx, it's going to take a lot more to kill me." Dad said as he managed to grab hold of me and took me in his arms.

"Where's Scootalo?" He asked.

"She wouldn't let anypony talk to her. She locked herself in your room." Twilight said.

"Alright. Come guys let's go." Dad said to someone. I looked around and cound who he was talking to. I saw what looked like Dad's transformations in physical forms.

"Nyx I would like you to meet my brothers." Dad said pointing at both of them.

"But they look exactly like you?" I asked.

"I casted a spell that duplicated my body. The spell was modified to make each clone sentient but what it did do was it made them. They're my personalities: Alduin represents my negative emotions and Dark Eco." Dad said as he pointed at the one with black eyes and claws.

"And Lokzii represents my positive emotions and Light Eco." Dad said as he pointed at the one with glowing white eyes and wings.

"And just because they have their own bodies doesn't mean my powers are gone." He said as he changed into his other forms.

"And the best part is they're your uncles!" Dad said happily but the smile didn't last long.

"Now Come on. I need to see Scootalo." Dad said


PoV: Scootalo

Location: Golden oaks Library, Jaks room

Status: Deep depressing state


I went back home after they took dad into the medical tent and locked myself in his room.

'Home, he gave me home and a loving father but now that stupid unicorn took that away.' I thought to myself.

I've been crying for about 3 hours straight. I just can't have a happy family can't I!?

I heard the door the room open and close. 'I locked the door how can-' I thought to myself as I got up to look at the pony that came in and saw that it wasn't a pony, it was Dad.

"DAD!" I said as ran to him with tears in my eyes and hugged him.


PoV: Jak

Condition: Sore and tired


"Hey it's alright Scoots." I said as softly as I could while hugging her.

"But I thought I lost you!" She yelled out through her sobs.

"I've been around for a long time and I ain't going anywhere." I said as went on one knee and kissed her forehead.

After five minutes of her sobbing, She stopped and went downstairs with me in tow. When I got there I noticed Rhino wasn't around.

*BAM*

"Dude as soon as I heard about the incident I came as fast as I could!" shouted the Rhino-pony in question shouted.

"Dude! Where were you?" I asked him.

"I was in the forest trying to get used to my Metal-head abilities in my new form when I met this Zebra named Zecora." He said.

"Whatever I'm hungry!" Shouted Alduin.

"I'll ask later." was Rhino said as he saw my brothers.

We went to the kitchen and made dinner and for once we were like a big happy family eating in the dining room telling jokes, stories and having fun. For once I truly felt like I belong here. Next Chapter: A Major Problem Estimated time remaining: 3 Hours, 59 Minutes

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