Meet Nitpick Bittersweet, a painfully average guy who transfered to CHS in his second year of High School. There he will learn the values of life with other people and how to be someone more likable. This is his story.
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Follow the life of Nitpick Bittersweet, a whinny, insensitive, reckless and prideful teenager that over-thinks life with poetic nonsense. Along the way, he'll forge new allies, rekindle with old friends, and create new enemies. With each mistake he makes, a new problem arises for him. With each lesson learned, he becomes a better person... but will it be too late when all is said and done?
This is his story... and it's not a very good one.
Notes:
-Each chapter has a different story telling method. Some are from a first person perspective with a certain character in particular and others are from a third person perspective exploring multiple characters at the same time.
-The pacing of this story is slower than a snail. If you are a not a fan of long novels, then don't read unless you want to give it a shot. This is my first fanfic and the first several chapters clearly shows.
-Any constructive comment is welcomed on the comment section.
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107 Chapters:
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Chapter 1 - Enter Nitpick Bittersweet [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 5th, 2016
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Chapter 2 - A tour around CHS! My name is Sunset Shimmer! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 3 - As brave as shy! Kindful Fluttershy! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 4 - Loyal Passion! Sassy Rainbow Dash! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 5 - Intellectual Might! Prodigious Twilight Sparkle! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 6 - Guardian Dog, Caring Spike! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 7- Old friends... Tweaking Lightbulb and Chocolate Dancer [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 8 - Cranky lesson! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 9.1 - You are being negative, Flash Sentry! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 9.2 - You are being wary, Nitpick! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 10 - His party was popped, Obnoxious Pinkie Pie! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 11 - A Generous Spirit, Fabulous Rarity! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 12 - Friendly bickering! And you are annoying her, Flash. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 13 - A girl´s conversation. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 14 - Master Librarian, Patient Cheerilee! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 15 - Applejack´s Pride and the foundation of Ponyville! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 16 - Nitpick and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 17 - A Social Confusion starts with a Gossip! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 18 - Anti-Misunderstaning planning! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 19 - A fashionable outcome! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 20 - You are a jerk to me. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 21 - You are unsociable. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 22- Unfriendly but reasonable. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 23- Thanks for keeping your promise. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 24- Pinkie and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 25- You are horrible! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 26- A talk between old friends. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 27- Just when I thought I could relax. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 28- Unexpected attitudes. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 29 - Rainbow and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 30 - Ideal Loyalty! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 31- History classes [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 5th, 2016
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Chapter 32 - Just hanging around! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 5th, 2016
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Chapter 33 - We will rise again! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 5th, 2016
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Chapter 34- Fluttershy and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 4 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 5th, 2016
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Chapter 35- Normal school tests. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 2nd, 2016
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Chapter 36- Uncomfortable Awareness. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 17th, 2016
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Chapter 37- Rarity and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 5 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 17th, 2016
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Chapter 38- Incomplete reflections. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 2nd, 2016
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Chapter 39- Ideal Kindness. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 2nd, 2016
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Chapter 40- Am I getting too soft? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 2nd, 2016
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Chapter 41 - Applejack and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 6 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 42 - Enjoying the fair. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 43 - With our fists! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 44 - Sunset and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 7 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 45 - Unluckiest, lucky man. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 46- The Romance of the same Coin! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 9th, 2016
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Chapter 47- The first steps to change. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 9th, 2016
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Chapter 48- An obscure allience. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 49- A catalyst. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 50 - Twilight, my friend. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2016
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Chapter 51- New beginning and clearing doubts. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 7th, 2016
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Chapter 52 - Lightbulb and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 8 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 19th, 2016
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Chapter 53- I'm not Princess Twilight! Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 19th, 2016
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Chapter 54- I'm not Princess Twilight! Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 29th, 2016
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Chapter 55- I'm not Princess Twilight! Final Part [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 29th, 2016
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Chapter 56- You are our one and only [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 6th, 2016
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Chapter 57- Women are trouble... or is it me? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 10th, 2016
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Chapter 58- Shared Leadership [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 9th, 2016
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Chapter 59- Persuasions... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2016
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Chapter 60- The starting chores. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 9th, 2016
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Chapter 61- The annoying Royals! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 8th, 2016
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Chapter 62- Happy Birthday, Pinkie Pie! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 18th, 2016
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Chapter 63- You are scaring her, Flash! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 25th, 2016
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Chapter 64- Slowly accepting you... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 3rd, 2016
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Chapter 65- A time with strangers! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 8th, 2016
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Chapter 66- How we became friends! - Gilda! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 14th, 2016
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Chapter 67- A time with my old role model! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 16th, 2016
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Chapter 68- How we became friends! - Sugarcoat! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 16th, 2016
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Chapter 69- A time in a new place! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 24th, 2016
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Chapter 70- How we became friends! - Reem! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 30th, 2016
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Chapter 71 - How we became friends! - Blueblood! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 72 - The Evil Dungeon of References! Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 73- The Evil Dungeon of References! Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 74 - The Evil Dungeon of References! Part 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 75 - The Evil Dungeon of References! Finale! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 76 - Your Friendship doesn't make sense! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 77 - The reason why we always win! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 3rd, 2016
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Chapter 78 - Gilda and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 9 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 79 - Even in the rain, we all like to talk. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 80 - The prodigious secretary! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 81 - Ideal Laughter! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 82 - A good student! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 17th, 2016
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Chapter 83 - Meeting their expectations! Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2016
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Chapter 84 - Meeting their expectations! Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 1st, 2016
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Chapter 85 - Meeting their expectations! Part 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 9th, 2016
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Chapter 86 - Meeting their expectations! Final part [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 9th, 2016
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Chapter 87 -Even in our free time, we all like to talk. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 17th, 2016
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Chapter 88 - One uncomfortable moment. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 28th, 2017
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Chapter 89 - Blueblood and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 10 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 10th, 2016
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Chapter 90 - The first storytelling. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 6th, 2017
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Chapter 91 - An unexpected behavior. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 13th, 2017
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Chapter 92 - Preparations for a fun day! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 24th, 2017
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Chapter 93 - A little talk between Equines. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 3rd, 2017
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Chapter 94 - Because everything... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 15th, 2017
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Chapter 95 - Can be deceiving... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 28th, 2017
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Chapter 96 - And troubling Princess Twilight... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 28th, 2017
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Chapter 97 - Was a means to an end. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 11th, 2017
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Chapter 98 - The state of my reality. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 27th, 2017
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Chapter 99 - The second storytelling. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 9th, 2017
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Chapter 100 - The reason I must go on! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 22nd, 2017
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Chapter 101 - Because the little voice awakened me. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 6th, 2017
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Chapter 102 - Found by a peculiar source of hope. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 6th, 2017
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Chapter 103 - A nice talk, followed by an unsettling argue, and an uncertain future. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 24th, 2017
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Chapter 104 - Because the little voice is acknowledges me. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 24th, 2017
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Chapter 105 - Screwing people... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 1st, 2018
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Chapter 106 - And screwed futures. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 1st, 2018
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