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The Ultimate Surprise

by shadowshild612

Chapter 38: It begins

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It begins

The next day itazura's pov

I woke up feeling something inside me, me moving my hand down to my pussy and lifting it to my face, getting angry when I saw what it was.  “DILL!”  I shouted, enraged.

He woke up with a start looking around frantically, until he saw me.

“What's wrong? Are you ok?” He asked as Tiara looked up.

I showed him my hand as a response, glaring at him as my eyes glowed.

“That's our fault actually.” Tiara said showing me her pussy and ass still full of cum. “We wouldn't let him pull out, it was too good.” She said happily.

“That doesn’t sound like me.”  I said, growling.

“Shadow was in charge of your personality remember?” Dillan said scared.

“Sorry couldn't resist, trolls. Also Tora and Itazura-sha want their Daddy, and mommy.” Shadow said.

“Shadow, I will find a way to hurt you.”  I growled, snapping my fingers and cleaning myself, before I teleported to the twins.

Dillan slowly came into the room, and hugged me from behind.

“I'm sorry, I should have at least tried to pull out harder.” He said kissing me and picking up Tora.

“It’s not you I’m mad at.”  I told him, picking up Itazura-sha and kissing him back.

“If you do end up pregnant again, I'll be here for you. If it does happen again… please let this be the last time for a while.” He said hugging us, but the last sentence mostly to himself. “But… if you do… I'm kind of hoping for a girl to even it out.” He said tickling me to try to cheer me up.

I giggled, it working slightly.  “If it is I’m going to keep it a secret from you as long as possible just to spite shadow.”  I told him, subtly holding a certain finger up to said writer.

“Neither of those affect me, I'm controlling Dillans story yes, but what he says is his own. I mean with the dates and stuff I'm not that smooth, and not telling him will only hurt him… trolls.” Shadow said disappearing.

“Now I’m disappointed… and feel like doing it anyway.”  I told Dill, giggling. Him putting a hand over his heart.

“Noooooooooo!” He exclaimed jokingly. “But seriously please don't. I'm not sure how I'd be able to handle it.”

“Stop tempting me.”  I told him, a evil smirk on my face.

“Ok, how about a shower? With these three.” He said picking up Dj. “None of them have been bathed sense being born, and nothing funny. I promise.”

“Could I join?” Tiara asked from the door, cum dripping from her lower half.

“No.” I said, sticking my tongue out at her.

“Aw… why?” She asked.

“Tiara.” Dillan said strictly. “You like having my cum inside you right now, and you don't really care. However Itazura does, she was forced to do something unnatural for her and she just needs some time with her… biological family, ok?” He said kissing her. “I'll take one with you later just us ok?”

“Alright.” She said walking away.

“Let’s get in the shower before we have anymore interruptions.”  I suggested.

“Right.” Dillan said taking my hand, and leading me to the bathroom. We got in the shower, and Dillan sat on the floor with DJ and Tora for some reason. I also sat down in-between his legs him hugging me from behind with our children in my lap.

“Consider this an apology, I couldn't resist the urge to see cum dripping from four holes. I don't normally force others to do something… I'm sorry.” Shadow said as a water version of a man appeared bowing.

“What’s am I considering a apology?”  I asked, tilting my head. The lights went low, as a nice comfy warm light came from a candle, the song 'Down’ began to play out of thin air. Dillan apparently unable to resist Singing along, Singing in my ear softly.

“Baby are you down down down down down,

Down, Down,

Even if the sky is falling down,

Down, down

Ooh (ohhh)

You oughta know, tonight is the night to let it go,

Put on a show, I wanna see how you lose control,

So leave it behind, coz we, have a night to get away,

So come on and fly with me, as we make our great escape.

So baby don't worry, you are my only,

You won't be lonely, even if the sky is falling down,

You'll be my only, no need to worry,

Baby are you down down down down down,

Down, Down,

Baby are you down down down down down,

Down, Down,

Even if the sky is falling down,

Just let it be, come on and bring your body next to me,

I'll take you away, hey, turn this place into our private getaway,

So leave it behind, coz we, have a night to get away,

So come on and fly with me, as we make our great escape,

(So why don't we run away)

So baby don't worry, you are my only,

You won't be lonely, even if the sky is falling down,

You'll be my only, no need to worry,

Baby are you down down down down down,

Down, Down,

Baby are you down down down down down,

Down, Down,

Even if the sky is falling down,

(LiL Wayne)

Even if the sky is falling down like she 'posed to be,

She gets down low for me,

Down like her temperature, cause to me she zero degrees,

She cold, like over freeze,

I got that girl from overseas,

Now she my miss America,

Now can I be her soldier please,

I'm fighting for this girl,

On a battlefield of love,

Don't it look like baby cupid sendin arrows from above,

Don't you ever leave the side of me,

Indefinitely, not probably,

And honestly I'm down like the economy

So baby don't worry, you are my only,

You won't be lonely, even if the sky is falling down,

You'll be my only, no need to worry,

Baby are you down down down down down,

Down, Down,

Baby are you down down down down down,

Down, Down,

Even if the sky is falling down”

“Please accept my apologies, in all honesty Dillan is everything iv always dreamt of being. So I thought of how it would be if someone kept the gender of my child from me and… I wouldn't even wish that feeling on blueblood. So please don't blame Dillan for my stupidity.” He said the water man disappearing, splashing us accidentally but it made the babies giggle.

“He is so lucky they didn’t cry, now I’m actually considering forgiving him.”  I said, nuzzling the three.

“But you gotta admit this is nice.” Dillan said kissing me with the room still only having candle light.

“Unc shad” DJ said reaching out to a puddle of water.

“Why do our kids want all the people I don’t like as uncles?”  I asked, sighing in frustration.

“... trolls?” Dillan said laughing. “I think shadow was just trying to lighten up the mood, and technically speaking Shadow wouldn't be their uncle. He created me so if anything he'd be there grandpa, now Double I created so he would be their uncle technically.” Dillan said tickling my neck while kissing my nose.

“Don’t explain to me your displaced family tree, it’s too annoyingly complicated.”  I ordered.

“Yes ma'am.” He said hugging me again this time tickling Dj making him go into a fit of laughter. “Woe, he's just like Abigail.” He said holding Dj.

“Who’s Abigail?”  I asked curiously.

“My one year old niece, human niece.” He said, looking depressed. “Or… at least she was one when I left, I've lost all sense of time thanks to paradox , and time Turner.”

“Would this world be happened to connected to your old Earth by any chance?”  I asked.

“I don't know.” He said sadly.

“It is know.” Shadow said.

“Gamp shad!” Tora said this time.

“Sorry Tora, but not right now.” He said disappearing again.

“Why?” Dillan asked me.

“Well, not only am I a Hoopa, I’ma Goddess Hoopa, so I can piggyback that connection right onto your old Earth.”  I said, doing so before Shadow could change his mind, permanently linking the two as long as my ring that noone but me could remove was there.

“I wasn't going to change my mind, after the whole… nightmare thing, and today it's the least I could do.”

“So… I can temperately go home?” Dillan asked.

“Yep, aren’t I the best?”  I asked, grinning.

“Yes!” He said kissing me. “Do you want to come and meet my family?” He asked.

“Sure.”  I said, shrugging.

“Yay! And of course these three will come with us.” He said tickling the baby's, making them giggle. “If it's ok with you, I'm also going to ask Tiara, and Screwball to come… and Scootaloo.”

“K.”  I said, nodding.

“Hey… how do you think Scootaloo would react if I asked her to join the horde first.” He said making a song reference kind of.

“Probably either really good or really bad.”  I told him.  “Go for it.”

“Alright, want to join?” He asked me. “I won't cum in you again, now that I'm in control.”

“Nope.”  I told him.  “I’ll watch these three.”

“Alright then here goes.” He said leaving.

Dillans pov

I found Scootaloo in her room, playing with some toys, the nervousness of the situation beginning to sink in, I watched as Itazura walked by into the baby's room.

“Um… could you soundproof the girls room please?” I asked her.

She snapped her fingers with a eye roll… also causing the two of us to be naked and the door to lock itself shut.

Scootaloo looked at me with a blush. “U-um dad?” She said.

“Y-yes?” I said nervously.

“Y-you h-have a um…” She said pointing to my cock.

“I know, I was wondering if you… wanted to join my horde?” I said sitting next to her rubbing her pussy.  She moaned, face reddening as she processed my question.

“W-why m-me?” She asked.

“Because I love you.” I said taking her head in my other hand and kissed her passionately, still rubbing but faster.   She moaned louder, blushing more at this, not having expected that answer.

“I...I love you too daddy.” She said pulling me on top of her, kissing me back. When we broke apart, a string of saliva was in between our mouths as my dick rubbed her Virgin pussy.

She got a slightly nervous look when I did, obviously a little scared since this was her first time.

“D-daddy, I'm scared.” She said kissing me again. “It's my first time, so be gentle please.”

“Of course.” I said rubbing her pussy again slowly, very slowly. “How's this?”

“G-great.” She said moaning in pleasure. I slowly began to put it in, going in and out.

“Ready?” I asked.

“Y-yes daddy.”  She said with a moan. I began to put it in, thrusting as I broke her cherry, her screaming in pleasure and pain, blood dripping.

“Are you ok?” I asked beginning to pull out.

“Y-yes daddy, keep going.”  She insisted, moaning in more pleasure than pain.

“Ok.” I said thrusting so much her wings pomfed in my face.”You like?”

“Moar daddy!”  She said, moaning as a answer. I thrusted faster making her squeak each time, until she was moaning my name.

“Daddy, daddy, daaaaaadddyyyyyyy!”  She yelled as she came around me, total bliss on her face. I thrusted one last time emptying my balls into her.

“Did you like that sweetie?” I asked kissing her, as I stood above her.

“I loved it daddy.”  She told me, smiling.

“Ready for round two?” I asked putting my cock near her mouth.

She responded by greedily taking a fourth of my cock in her mouth, sucking. I moaned in heavenly bliss, as I pumped her throat. I came deep inside of her throat, pulling out.

“And finally round three.” I said rubbing her ass hole with my dick. “Ready?”

“Yes daddy.”  She said, shaking her cute little ass at me. I came on her ass just from that, making her giggle.

“Oh be quiet you.” I said jamming it into her. “Oh god scootaloo you're so tight.”

“Your so big daddy.”  She said, moaning and clenching around me. I kissed her again, pumping her ass full of cum, making her arch her back screaming in pleasure, Cuming herself.

“Round four?” I said lustfully as I licked her boobs.

“S-sorry daddy.” She said kissing me. “I'm too sore, but later .”

“Alright, now come on.” I said picking her up and  opening the door, apparently unlocking itself when we came. We walked out into the Hall to see Itazura, Tiara, and screwball standing there.

“You have fun?”  I heard Ita ask, a sly smirk on her face.

Scootaloo, and I looked at each other and began kissing, when we broke apart another string of saliva was hanging.

“That answer your question?” Scootaloo asked.

“Glad I could help.”  Ita said, giggling.  “Now let’s go to your earth.”

“Let us take a shower first.” I said caring scootaloo into the shower. I turned on the water and rubbed my dick on her small sexy ass. “Want more now?” I said noticing a puddle of water underneath her, that wasn't from the shower.

“I’m still sore Daddy.”  She told me.

“Ok, time for round four… licking.” I said, once again sitting on the floor and putting her crotch on my face using a dragon's tongue to lick.

She moaned loudly, grabbing my hair and trying to pull me into her crotch.

“Nice try, but I'm in charge.” I said taking a note from Itazura. “You'll do whatever I tell you got it slave?” I said licking and sucking her pussy.

“Y-yes Daddy.”  She said, letting go of my hair and letting her arms fall to her sides as she moaned in pleasure.

“Kiss me.” I ordered.

“Yes Daddy.” she said, complying immediately.

“Good girl.” I said rubbing her pussy with my dick. “Time to continue, any objections? I'll give you a senzu bean latter ok?”

“I-i don’t know.”  She said, obviously still sore.

“What did I say?” I asked.

“I’m still really sore.” She told me.

“What did I say young lady?” I said forcing her onto my dick. “Well slave?”

“Daddy!”  She yelled, more in pain then pleasure, though I ignored that. I reached into a bag under the sink and grabbed a green bean.

“Eat.” I ordered.

“N-no.”  She said, whimpering.

“Come on honey.” I said calming down. “Daddy is very sorry, I lost control we all do that once in awhile. Please eat it it'll heal you.” I said kissing her with a sad look.

“N-no.”  She said again, not looking at me and freeing herself somehow, whimpering as she ran to the other side of the room. I go up going over to her, and hugging her tears in my own eyes.

“S-stay away.”  She said, whimpering and struggling.

“Sh, it's ok I'm not going to hurt you.” I said hugging her tighter and rubbing her back.

Yeah

I know sometimes things may not

Always make sense to you right now

But hey,

What daddy always tell you?

Straighten up little soldier

Stiffen up that upper lip

What you crying about?

You got me

Hailie I know you miss your mom and I know you miss your dad

Well I'm gone but I'm trying to give you the life that I never had

I can see you're sad, even when you smile, even when you laugh

I can see it in your eyes, deep inside you want to cry

Cause you're scared, I ain't there?

Daddy's with you in your prayers

No more crying, wipe them tears

Daddy's here, no more nightmares

We gon' pull together through it, we gon' do it

Laney uncles crazy, ain't he?

Yeah but he loves you girl and you better know it

We're all we got in this world

When it spins, when it swirls

When it whirls, when it twirls

Two little beautiful girls

Lookin' puzzled, in a daze

I know it's confusing you

Daddy's always on the move, mama's always on the news

I try to keep you sheltered from it but somehow it seems

The harder that I try to do that, the more it backfires on me

All the things growing up his daddy that he had to see

Daddy don't want you to see but you see just as much as he did

We did not plan it to be this way, your mother and me

But things have gotten so bad between us

I don't see us ever being together ever again

Like we used to be when we were teenagers

But then of course everything always happens for a reason

I guess it was never meant to be

But it's just something we have no control over and that's what destiny is

But no more worries, rest your head and go to sleep

Maybe one day we'll wake up and this will all just be a dream

Now hush little baby, don't you cry

Everything's gonna be alright

Stiffen that upper lip up little lady, I told ya

Daddy's here to hold ya through the night

I know mommy's not here right now and we don't know why

We fear how we feel inside

It may seem a little crazy, pretty baby

But I promise momma's gon' be alright

It's funny

I remember back one year when daddy had no money

Mommy wrapped the Christmas presents up

And stuck 'em under the tree and said some of 'em were from me

Cause daddy couldn't buy 'em

I'll never forget that Christmas I sat up the whole night crying

Cause daddy felt like a bum, see daddy had a job

But his job was to keep the food on the table for you and mom

And at the time every house that we lived in

Either kept getting broken into and robbed

Or shot up on the block and your mom was saving money for you in a jar

Tryna start a piggy bank for you so you could go to college

Almost had a thousand dollars till someone broke in and stole it

And I know it hurt so bad it broke your momma's heart

And it seemed like everything was just startin' to fall apart

Mom and dad was arguin' a lot so momma moved back

On the Chalmers in the flat one bedroom apartment

And dad moved back to the other side of 8 Mile on Novara

And that's when daddy went to California with his CD and met Dr. Dre

And flew you and momma out to see me

But daddy had to work, you and momma had to leave me

Then you started seeing daddy on the T.V. and momma didn't like it

And you and Laney were to young to understand it

Papa was a rollin' stone, momma developed a habit

And it all happened too fast for either one of us to grab it

I'm just sorry you were there and had to witness it first hand

Cause all I ever wanted to do was just make you proud

Now I'm sitting in this empty house, just reminiscing

Lookin' at your baby pictures, it just trips me out

To see how much you both have grown, it's almost like you're sisters now

Wow, guess you pretty much are and daddy's still here

Laney I'm talkin' to you too, daddy's still here

I like the sound of that, yeah

It's got a ring to it don't it?

Shh, momma's only gone for the moment

Now hush little baby, don't you cry

Everything's gonna be alright

Stiffen that upper lip up little lady, I told ya

Daddy's here to hold ya through the night

I know mommy's not here right now and we don't know why

We fear how we feel inside

It may seem a little crazy, pretty baby

But I promise momma's gon' be alright

And if you ask me too Daddy's gonna buy you a mockingbird

I'mma give you the world

I'mma buy a diamond ring for you

I'mma sing for you

I'll do anything for you to see you smile

And if that mockingbird don't sing and that ring don't shine

I'mma break that birdies neck

I'll go back to the jeweler who sold it to ya

And make him eat every carat don't fuck with dad (ha ha)” I sang calming her down. “I'm so sorry dear, I'll never do it again.” I said as she looked at me with tears in her eyes.

She said nothing, crying as she buried her face in my chest.

“Here, I know it won't help emotionally but your physical pain will go away.” I said feeding her the senzu bean. “Better?”

She nodded, though she didn’t look like she trusted me that much anymore. I had her look at me in the eyes.

“No matter what, happens, no matter what I will always love, and protect you.” I said as a rainbow aura surrounded me as I kissed her, making her remember everything that was good about me and that it was ok and that she could trust me still. “You gave me something important, now I'll give you something important back.”

“W-what?”  She asked.

“My most prized possession, I haven't shown anyone this.” I said opening a small Compartment, I pulled out a pure emerald necklace. “My great grandfather gave this to me, and his before him. It's my family's legacy, and my mistake, here scootaloo.” I said putting it around her neck. “Remember, I'll always be here for you no matter what, and I'm sorry.” I said kissing her.

“O-okay, daddy.”  She mumbled, kissing me back.

“And I'll even see if Rainbow Dash will join the horde, would you like that?” I asked rubbing her off with a towel that was big enough for us both.

“M-maybe.”  She said. I kissed her again, calming her down more.

“Listen, after we get back I'll take you out on a date, just you and me. How's that sound?” I asked.

“That sounds fun, Daddy.”  She said, wiping her tears out of her eyes.

“Good, now let's Finnish what we started ok? You're in charge this time…  Mistress.” I said bowing and laying on the ground.  “I'm all yours.”

“Daddy.”  She said, giggling as she walked over, aiming my dick at her pussy.  “You’re silly.”  She told me, slowly making me enter her.

I moaned softly but happily. “But you said?”

“That was when I was sore daddy, I’m not sore anymore.”  She said, bouncing on my dick.

“Oh scootaloo~” I moaned kissing her and licking her niples.

“Daadddyyyyyy~”  She moaned back, clenching around me as she came already.

“Keep going?” I asked. “Or finish with a blow job?”

“Cum in me Daddy slave!”  She ordered, bouncing faster.

“Y-yes ma’am!” I said thrusting faster. “You want me to get you pregnant don't you?”  I asked hugging and kissing her as I thrusted harder, and faster.

“Give me your seed Daddy Slave!”  She commanded, moaning loudly.

“Yes… maaaaa’aaaammm!” I shouted shoving my cock all the way inside of her reassessing my cum into her.

“Daaaaaaaddddyyyyyyyy!”  She shouted with me, cumming around me as I came in her.

I turned her over smiling. “My turn to be the Master.” I said smiling lustfully.  “Suck daughter slave.” I ordered putting my cum covered cock in her face.

“Yes Daddy.”  She said, sucking my cock, teasing it with her teeth.

“None of that please.” I ordered grabbing her hair. “Or am I going to have to go rough?”

“P-p-please no.”  She said, whimpering eyes wide.

“Then deepthroat me.” I laughed Letting her hair go.

She didn’t, shaking, making me realise I might of been a little too mean and reminded her of a little earlier.

“O-oh no honey I was just playing, I didn't mean it.” I said hugging and kissing her.

It took a while, but eventually she calmed down.  “C-c-can we j-j-just finish the s-s-shower and leave, please?”

“Of course, but I'll probably still fuck your ass slowly though.” I said, rubbing her pussy.

“D-d-daddy, no.”  She said, not in the mood.

“Why not? I won't do it again.” I said licking her pussy this time. “And you're wet so you must be horny.”

“I-i peed myself.”  She muttered, embarrassed and shaking.

“That's ok.” I laughed, licking her again. “Still delicious though.”

“P-please l-let’s just finish the s-s-shower normally.”  She said.

“I was planning on it, you're just so cute.” I said putting her on my lap, washing her hair as we got back in. “This feel good?”

“Yes.”  She said, calming, leaning back into me.

“I'm sorry scoots, I really didn't mean it, my instincts just take over sometimes. But know that I'll always love you… my newest mate.” I said licking her ear, washing her Body.

“Daddy, please stop being playful before you lose control again.”  Scoots said, scared.

“Don't worry dear that won't happen now.” I said. “I can sense it, it's already forming.”

“Y-y-you mean?”  She asked, a hopeful look on her face.

“Yes dear… you're pregnant.” I said kissing her.

“Yay!”  She exclaimed happily, hugging me.

“So is Tiara, and I'm not sure about Itazura, but let's get dried off yeah?” I asked picking her up.

“Sure Daddy, why don’t you know if Itas pregnant though?”  She asked, tilting her head.

“She’s blocking my Magic again, glad it's back. Wait… you're not surprised to find out that Tiaras pregnant?” I asked.

“You just told me she is silly.”  Scoot said, giggling.

“You do know it's mine right? Tiaras apart of the horde as well.” I said drying us both off, using my Magic to put clothes on us.

“I know daddy, who’s else would it be?”  She said, rolling her eyes.

I thought about it for a moment trying to think of a gross stallion. “Snips?” I said grinning. “Or Snails?”

“Eeeeeeeeeew!”  She exclaimed, a disgusted look on her face, smacking me.  “That’s not funny Daddy.”

“Now who's being playful?” I laughed as we left the bathroom. “But it was funny.” I said as I saw Itazura and the others.

“Sorry, we had some… complications.” I said grinning.

“I heard.”  Ita said in a scary calm voice.

“It's ok, Daddy made up for it.” Scootaloo said showing the emerald. “It's his most prized possession.”

“He shouldn’t of had to in the first place.”  Ita said, tone not changing, glaring at me and crossing her arms.

“O-ok sorry again scootaloo, I should have had better control of my instincts.”  I said.

“It's ok daddy, you haven't had them for long, and they've only just come to the surface.” She said buzzing up to my face and kissing me. “I can't wait for it to be born.”

Ita still gave me a look, obviously upset with me.  “Let’s go to your earth before I change my mind and close the portal.”  She said, an annoyed and disappointed tone in her voice, looking away from me.

“I-i’m sorry.” I said picking up Tora and DJ before going through the portal in shame, her following me with Itazura-sha. Scootaloo and Tiara came after chatting about being mothers soon, followed by Screwball who looked sad.

“Why am I the last one to get pregnant?” She said sadly walking through.

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