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The Ultimate Surprise

by shadowshild612

Chapter 16: Reunion

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Reunion

It's been three years since I began training with Goku, and Vegeta. They have pushed my limits to the max and in each alien form I posses that uses Ki (except for Cordio )  I can access their full power and forms. Its finally time for me to return to equestria and I'm not sure how much things have changed.

“I'm scared.” I said as we all waited for Paradox to pick me up.

“About what?” Goku asked.

“What if nopony remembers me, I mean I wasn't there for more than a few months.” I said with worry.

“Please: You're a prince, you've protected that planet from small dangers,  you adopted  two little fillies who needed a father figure ,You'll be fine Dillan I know it.” Vegeta said.

“Thanks Vegeta, but it's not screwball, or anyone I'm friends with… It's the citizens mainly.” I said looking at the sky.

“Why?” Goku asked.

“you know why Goku, you read my mind when I first arrived here remember.” I said. “Im referring to when the citizens found out that I was their new prince.”

“Oh… good point.” Goku said as paradox and whis appeared.

“Hello Dillan.” Paradox said. “Are you ready?”

“Yes.” I said walking up to him.

“Good, now listen you have two weeks before the enemy arrives on equus so relax and spend some time with your family.” Paradox said with a smile. “Your daughters have been staying with Fluttershy and Discord.”

“Thanks.” I said turning to Goku and Vegeta. “For everything.”

“Of course, now go kick that enemies butt.” Goku said while Vegeta did a two finger salute while leaning against a wall.

“I will…goodbye.” I said as we vanished.

We flew back past the Dimensions and the wormhole we were in began to change. Then a blinding flash emanated from the center of the wormhole. When I Opened my eyes we were in my room at the library.  

“It looks exactly the same as when I left.” I said.

“That's because You've only been gone three month here.” Paradox said to my surprise.

“How?” I asked only for him to hold up his watch. “Right, well thanks for everything but why three months?”

“Because It's less complicated.” He said as he disappeared.

I leaned my ear to the door to see if anypony was there. I heard the voices of spike, the crusaders,  Diamond tiara, silver spoon, and Screwball so I opened the door quietly so I could see them. They were all talking so much that none of them saw me exit the door.

“When is dad coming home?” Scootaloo asked.

“I don't know.”  Screwball said. “But I'm sure he'll be home soon, In the meantime how about some ice cream?”

“Yeah, but he said that we could have a sleepover when he got back.” diamond tiara said. “So when will that be?”

“I hope it's soon, but let's get that ice cream.” Screwball said standing up and noticing me. I put my finger to my mouth to indicate being quiet.

“Yes, i'm getting hungry Ice cream will really hit the spot.” Scootaloo said.

“I hope there's enough for me.” I said startling the girls, and making them spin around with mouths hung open.  

“D-dad?” Scootaloo said. “I_Is that you?”

“Well who were you expecting? Santa hooves?” I said with a grin as Scootaloo and tiara slammed into me.

“Daddy!” Tiara shouted.

“Why have you been gone for so long?” Scootaloo asked.

“Sorry, but if it's any consolation It was a lot longer for me.” I said smiling. “Literally.”

“What do you mean?” Screwball said as she hugged me.

“It's been three years for me.” I said making them all surprised. “Paradox.”

“Oh.” Screwball, diamond tiara, and Scootaloo said together making ‘O’ faces.

“Whose paradox?” Sweetie belle asked.

“A person who can travel through time and space.” I said to her.

“Wow.” She said.

“Yup!... where are Twilight and the others?” I asked.

“At canterlot, you won't believe it! Cadence is getting married!” Applebloom said excitedly.

“Oh, so it's time for the wedding then?” I said making them confused again. “I was wondering when that would happen… I wonder what an anthro queen chrysalis would look like?”

“Who?” screwball said with a hint of jealousy.

“The changeling queen.” I said with a smile not noticing her jealousy.

“And how do you know her?” She said her jealousy growing.

I just deadpand at that question. “really? remember when I told you about how I knew of this world.”

“Oh… right...he.” She said sheepishly.

“Whats wrong?” I asked.

“Nothing, how about we go tell everyone you're back.” screwball suggested.

“Definitely, let's go to canterlot. Ultimatrix Cyclone “ I said shifting into Cyclone and teleporting us all to canterlot.

We appeared in the middle of a hallway and saw the element(except Twilight), and Aunt Celestia walking.

“Hey sis!” Applebloom yelled running to Applejack.

“Apple Bloom? What are you doing here?” Applejack asked as the rest of us approached.

“We wanted to surprise you.” Screwball said walking in front of me as I transformed back.

“Surprise us with what?” Pinkie said no one noticing me.

“With me.” I said walking out from behind Screwball.

Everypony gasped at the site of me. They all stared at me until they all pulled me into a hug.

“Dillan!” They all yelled in unison.

“Where have you been?” Rainbow Dash asked. I was about to tell her but I realized that Twilight was missing.

“Where is Twilight?” I asked. They all sighed and Celestia shook her head.

“She's in the throne room thinking about something that she's done.” Celestia said.

“You mean how she called Cadence evil at the rehearsal?” I asked. Celestia nodded her head. “Hmmm… ARE YOU ALL FUCKING STUPID?!” I yelled making them cringe.

“W-what are you talking about darling?” Rarity asked.

“I'M TALKING ABOUT THE FACT THAT YOU ALL ABANDONED YOUR FRIEND, AND YOUR STUDENT DURING A TIME THAT SHE WOULD NEED HELP!” I shouted.

“B-but she.” Fluttershy started only for me to cut her off.

“SHE’S RIGHT!” I yelled making them surprised. “THE CADENCE IN THE THRONE ROOM ISN'T THE REAL CADENCE! SHE'S THE CHANGELING QUEEN! NORMALLY I WOULDN'T REVEAL THE FUTURE ABOUT ANYTHING, BUT SEEING AS THE TIME LINE IS FUCKED UP ANYWAY YOU ALL MIGHT HAVE JUST KILLED TWILIGHT!”

“K-killed!?” They all yelled.

“Yes! If this chrysalis is anything like the pure evil ones I know then Twilight's as good as dead!” I said as they began crying. “However, is she's not like the others and is only doing what she thinks is best, then Twilight will be fine.” I said calming them down.

“S-sorry what are we gonna do?” Fluttershy asked.

“Let's go see ‘Cadence’” I said walking into the throne room, where only Cadence was

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