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Scootaloo makes a friend on Flight Camp, with his own flying problems. Friendship, coping and hilarity ensue. Also TwiDash friendshipping.
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This is it. Junior Flight Camp: where a pegasus gets their Flyer's Certificate, the official proof that they can fly on their own. Scootaloo's anxious to finally leave her flightless state behind, but having two star flyers in your group doesn't exactly help your nerves much. Nor does having a pair of first-timers as your instructors and an insane unicorn bard as the nurse.

And then there's Doldrum Whimper: a bulky pegasus colt who's the victim of choice in his school, yet can't seem to grasp that his strength is something he should be using. He's like Fluttershy on steroids, for Celestia's sake! Well, he's nice to have around, at least, and it's not like Scootaloo can't make new friends... if they measure up...

Rating adjusted for safe measure. There's no gore, no overly explicit themes, but some of the things are mildly suggestive. It would get under the radar of a kid's show, no problem, but it'd be noted for flying under the radar, still. It's mostly meant to be funny, but I warn you there are some sad moments in this. Don't say I did not warn you, I'm merely pointing it out because I can't use the sad and comedy tags together.

16/9 Edit: in the process of being rewritten. Layout will be adjusted, OC's colour scheme will be adjusted, some unclear elements will be clarified.

17/9 Edit: Rewritten to be grammatically more correct, and the OC now has a new colour scheme. Hope you enjoy!

15/12-17/12 Edit:More grammatical correctness in the spacing of dialogues, some little changes to make things sound more natural and some mentions of Whimper being purple corrected. I could've sworn I fixed all that before, though. Oh well...

Edit of the edit: gone over the whole thing based on the WRITE review of the first chapter, hopefully it's an improvement. The grammar should be accurate now, and OOC-ness reduced, at least in those chapters that allowed for enough leeway.

Teen
Complete
Comedy
Slice of Life

100,758 words: Estimated 6 Hours, 44 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

15 Chapters:

  1. The Flightless Filly meets The Bullhead [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 8th, 2016
    7,236
  2. My Fluttershy [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2019
    8,448
  3. In the Doldrums [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 2nd, 2018
    5,866
  4. Everyone Flies, No One Fails [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 9th, 2016
    6,592
  5. The Wind of Hope [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 10th, 2016
    9,544
  6. Thinking Tank [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 10th, 2016
    7,601
  7. Past and Future Incidents [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2019
    7,717
  8. Rainbow's Wracking Realisation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 3rd, 2018
    6,818
  9. Reversal of Roles [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 21st, 2016
    6,147
  10. Twilight Therapy [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 21st, 2016
    5,332
  11. Assumptions [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 22nd, 2016
    6,368
  12. Scootaloo's First Kiss [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 17th, 2013
    8,148
  13. Fear of the Dark [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 17th, 2013
    7,668
  14. The Gantelope [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 17th, 2013
    4,166
  15. Epilogue: Field Trip [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 17th, 2013
    3,107
Published May 28th, 2012
Last Update Aug 14th, 2012

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