Hey Toby,

I finally just finished that book. I liked it, but it was a little wordy for me. Honestly, a lot of my time was spent trying to understand the way he worded things. Like I mean, none of the words looked too unfamiliar, or at least, looked like they could only come from your world, but this seems more like a book Twilight would dig more than me.

I don't want to sound like I'm insulting you or your books, but perhaps the next one you send me can be a happy medium between Goosebumps and Princess of Mars? Sorry again, but thanks for everything you're doing anyway, Toby!

From,
Spike