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Deaths Hoof

by Son Of Mu

Chapter 1: Deaths Hoof is born.


Deaths Hoof is born.

In the crystal empire where ponies were being forced to mine for crystals, the tyrant known as King  Sombra sat on his throne as he watched his slaves work by looking into a crystal.

"My king." A pony spoke as he entered the throne room. Sombra turned his attention to the pony who was now shaking.

"What is it?" Sombra growled out causing by the pony to shake even more.

"The...the" "Spit it out!"

"More slaves have escaped." The pony yelled out and covered his face with his hooves as he fell to the ground shaking in fear.

Sombra stared at the pony "I see."

The pony didn't hear anything else and slowly stood up only to scream as fire consumed him.

Sombra stared at the smoldering ashes that used to be a pony.

"These slaves are becoming a nuisance." Sombra thought as he stared into his crystal.

"Fear used to be able to keep them in line but they are slowly becoming more brave against me." Sombra thought as he stood up and walked to the balcony and stared down at his empire.

"I need to find someway to keep fear in them but how does one do that by themselves?" Sombra mused.

"Death seems easy........."Sombra drawled out then smiled.

Sombra immediately turned and walked inside. Sombra walked towards where he kept his books of the dark arts.

Sombra pulled a book out that was entitled summoning.  He began to read through it.

"The summoning can work only once and the thing summoned can not be unsummoned." Sombra read out loud.

"That's good but to make sure it can't be used." Sombra cast a fire spell that began to burn the book.

As Sombra walked off to prepare the summoning he began to laugh.

On earth a human that had white skin, brown eyes and black hair. The human was male. What he was doing would decide the fate of the world........playing a game called Call Of Duty Ghosts.

"That's bull! I know I shot him first!"

"If you did you wouldn't be dead Anon." A voice spoke by the couch.

"Be quite old man." Anon spoke back but joking.

Anon was a 18 year old who lived with his parents. He helped them with the house and he often joked with his dad who he called old man.

As Anon was playing the game he noticed it said game over.

"Well now that's over, hand it over." Anon just grumbled about father's taking games.

"Anon come here please." Anon stood up and walked into the kitchen where his mom was cooking.

"Yea mom?" "Can you please go to the store and get ketchup."

Anon sighed "Yea mom." Anon walked over and began to put his shoes on.

Before he left he kissed his mom. "I'll be back!"

"Be careful!"

"What's the worse that can happen?"

Anon didn't know that it was going to be that much worse.

King Sombra finished the circle and stepped back with a smile.

"Time to bring in my servant lol." Sombra horn glowed as he shot magic into the circle which began to glow.

Anon was walking down the street listening to music on his phone. "How do we are always forget ketchup?" Anon wondered out loud only to groan when he heard music that he didn't like began to play.

"I swear the old man does this on purpose." Anon thought as he was changing music but he didn't notice the glowing portal behind him.

"There much better." As Anon took a step he began to feel his body begin to be pulled backwards.

"What's the idea...." Anon turned to yell only to see the portal.

"What in the world!?" Anon fought back but he stood no chance as it pulled him close. AZ he struggled he dropped his phone by accident.

"Oh come!" Anon was within a Couple of inches.

"No!" He was finally sucked in.

Sombra stood there waiting for anything to come out of the summoning circle.

He finally growled and went to leave when he heard a noise and turned just in time to see a creature appear.

Anon looked around as he appeared to be in a room and he saw a pony.....with a horn......in armor.

"Whoever did that to a pony is wrong." Anon walked over to it as it just stared at him.

"Hey there girl or guy I'm not going to hurt you." Anon went to pet the pony only to find himself slammed into the wall and he began to feel his body being pressed down.

"I am not girl! I am king Sombra and I shall be addressed as such!" Anon eyes were wide open in shock.

"A talking pony!" Anon felt the pressure lifted causing him to fall to the ground.

"You are a frail little thing aren't you?" Sombra asked more to himself then to Anon.

Anon stood up slowly. "Uma not to be rude or anything but king where am I?"

Sombra stared at the human but decided to tell him anyway.

"You are in my crystal empire my servant."

"Hold on I'm not your servant!" Sombra just stared at him.

"This weak thing will not bring fear to my enemies." Sombra thought to himself.

"Hey are you listening to me!?" Anon didn't know it but his mind was being searched.

Sombra smiled when he saw a warrior from ancient times in this things world.

"Spartan huh? With just a few changes." Anon began to worry when he saw that smile.

"Well I see you are busy so I will..." before Anon could move Sombra grabbed him with magic and slammed him onto the floor pinned him down.

"Hey let me go."

I actually have need of you." Sombra was walking in circles around him.

"What for?"

"You see I need a...enforcer you could say...that will enforce my will on everypony."

Anon eyes widened when he realized just what type of King this pony was from playing so many games.

"You basically want me to kill anything that stands against you." Anon statement was met with a smile that sent shivers down his spine.

"No I won't do it!" Sombra just chuckled as his horn began to glow and dark shadow began to close in on Anon.

Anon struggled to move but he felt the shadows go over his body. At first nothing happens then the pain came.

Anon screamed as he felt his bones breaking and his muscles being rearranged. This continued for a hour before Sombra finally stopped. Anon groaned in pain.

"Hope you didn't think that was it." Sombra spoke as.he bound Anon hands and feet where he couldn't move.

"I after all need a enforcer who can withstand pain."

All that was heard was Anon screams. The crystal ponies shivered in fear as they thought Sombra had killed.more ponies.

This was what happened to Anon for a five weeks. Everyday Sombra would break his bones and rearrange muscles while also.cutting Anon body. It was finally that Sombra was pleased with the results.

Anon layer on a table but he was different. He was like the ancient spartan muscle rise. He also would of towed over Celestia where her head would come up to his chest.

Anon was forced onto his feet where he was barely able to stand. He glared at Sombra with complete hatred.

"Now for the look." Sombra spoke as he cast his magic again bringing armor forth.

Anon felt the armor being put on him but couldn't move.

The last piece was the helmet. (Avatar picture only everything is black)

"Finally." Sombra spoke as he brought forth a shield and a sword. (Black Spartan shield and Achilles sword from Warriors Orochi.

Anon grabbed them and ran at Sombrero wanting to kill him only for Sombra to knock him aside.

"Now the real training begins."

For A Year Anon was beaten into the ground by Sombra. Anon hated him more and more but couldn't do anything about it.  When Anon thought it couldn't get worse it did.

Anon felt his body was moving by itself.  At first he thought he was losing it until he did something so horrible he knew it was true.

Anon stood next to Sombra side as they stared at what appeared to be the crystal guard who had gone into hiding had formed a coalition against Sombra. They numbered in a hundred and there was mares as well as young children.

Anon felt his body moved as he attacked them without mercy. The guard stood no chance.

Anon and Sombra stared at the fifty mares with the children they brought back to the empire.

Sombra gathered the ponies so they can watch the example.

"All who defy me shall suffer the same fate as these traitors!" Anon felt his body move as he drew his sword and walked up to the first pony who was a filly.

The ponies were begging for mercy. Anon felt his body move by itself.

"No! No! No!" Anon watched as he slaughtered them all without mercy. He stood there with blood dripping off his blade.  

The last was.....a baby that was crying. Anon watched as he raised his sword and swung down. Anon eyes widened in horror as he saw the baby was split in half.

"All who try to rebel shall face the same treatment by my right hoof....Deaths Hoof!"

As more years went by, Anon had forgotten who he was as he way watch himself as he massacred ponies and even towns. Deaths Hoof as he went by now never left Sombra side. He always stood behind him silently. Then those two came.

Sombra and Deaths Hoof stood in the throne room.

"It appears that another rebellion needs to be crushed." Sombra spoke with a evil

"I hate you."

"Sombra!" The two looked over to see the two princesses that they had heard about.

"This has gone on too long Sombra!"

"Oh?'

"Thou has tortured thou ponies and even murdered the innocent! " Luna shouted.

Sombra just yawned. "I tire of this but I feel merciful how about you two surrender and become my queens?"

There answer was to shoot magic at him where Deaths Hoof just simply blocked it with his shield while also drawing his sword. "Danm it!" Anon thought disappointed.

"Deaths Hoof kill the blue one." Sombra shot magic at Celestia.

Deaths Hoof and Luna stared at each other before Luna yelled as she swung her sword while Deaths Hoof blocked it with his shield.and swung horizontally while Luna deflected it with her sword.

"Why did thou did.some many unspeakable horrors!?" Luna yelled.

Deaths Hoof didn't speak. "You murdered families!" Luna shouted as she rushed at him.

The two traded blows but Luna was being pushed back by Death's Hoof.

Deaths Hoof saw a opening and kicked her in the chest causing her to slam against the wall.

Deaths Hoof approached her with his sword raised only to have to bring his shield up to block a magic bolt. Deaths Hoof watched as she flew up in the air to aide her sister. Deaths Hoof watched in horror as his master was defeated but not before he put a curse upon the empire.

Deaths stood facing the two princesses.  Deaths Hoof felt his body was paralyzed by their magic.

"Deaths Hoof you have done many horrible things and so we sentence you to be trapped in a coffin. Never to see the light again!"

The last thing Deaths Hoof saw was Luna face. Before the light disappear from his vision Anon let a tear out in his mind.

Author's Note:

This is my first story so please be nice.  I might make a sequel not sure yet just depends on how many like it enough or if I am in the mood lol.

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