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Rainbow Dash's Husband: The Rewrite

by WestRail642fan

Chapter 1: Chapter #1: Jealous Husband To Be

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Chapter #1: Jealous Husband To Be

Rainbow Dash's Husband Re-Write.

Chapter One.

Jealous Husband To Be.

It was a warm spring morning in PonyVille, the birds were singing as the equine inhabitants went around their daily tasks like taking their pets for a walk, taking their children to school or going shopping in the local market.

''Ok sweetheart, you got everything?'' Said Fluttershy while checking her daughter's school bag.

''Yes mom'' Scootaloo saying while rolling her eyes. ''Your more organized then Twilight.'' she added as Fluttershy nuzzled her.

Meanwhile our favorite rainbow maned Pegasus was flying to meet her new friend who recently decided to live in Equestria after their run it with Russian spies who were after a train full of gold. She landed on the gravel track bed and walked up to two large white and grey locomotives which bore three white stripes, large white numbers which read 642 and 644 and the faded yellow and gold logo of WestRail. She walked up to her friend called David who was a human from a far off place.

''Morning David.'' She said blushing slightly between panting, ''Morning Kid.'' he replied much to Rainbows hate. ''My name isn't kid, it's Rainbow Dash.'' She replied

''Yeah, yeah, yeah'' he said pulling out a broken spring from the lead locomotive's rear truck. ''Is that the cause of the problem'' Rainbow said while looking at the broken spring which was bend and fractured. ''Part of it, the rest is all over the inside'' David sighed ''Looks like i need a new one'' he added.

''If you want, i can get you it.'' Rainbow asked. ''You know, that's not a bad idea.'' David replied thinking over what the Pegasus said, ''Ok here's the money and here is what the spring looks like'' David added while giving Rainbow some money and the spring's part number before she left for the shops. ''She may be a bit annoying but she is growing on me.'' David said quietly.

Half an Hour Later.

Rainbow was walking back to David with the spring needed when she bumped into her coltfriend Steven Thunder. ''Oh hi honey.'' She said before kissing his cheek, ''What are you doing here?'' She questioned as it wasn't like Steven to come down to the ground. ''Oh.. uh i came to find you, you weren't there when i woke up.'' he replied. ''Um ok'' she said, ''Well i have to get going.'' she added ''What is with Steven lately, he doesn't seem himself.'' she thought as she walked up to David. ''Where are you going?'' Steven said as followed Rainbow Dash. When he saw Rainbow Dash talking to David he grew angry ''Why is she with that meat bag!'' he said as his rage boiled.

A few hours later Rainbow Dash left for home Steven made a plan on how to get David to stop being friends with Rainbow Dash, he decided to put his plan into action tomorrow as it was too late to strike now.

David waved Rainbow off as the sun began to set over PonyVille, he watched her flying into the orange sky while he drank some coffee. ''Well, the engine is fixed, once its sun rise, time to find that robot before it can kill...'' David said while looking into the sunset as the last of the sun vanished from the horizon. He went inside the cab and sat down in a chair and started to think ''Dad, once that robot is destroyed, you'll be at peace.'' He thought as he fell asleep.

The Next Day.

As the sun rose into the sky David woke up from his slumber when the sun shone thought the windows ''Time to clean up.'' he said as he walked over the clothes that were all over the floor. He washed them in the small sink and hung them along the railing. Few minutes later Rarity came by and screamed when she saw David's old, ripped clothes.

''What are you screaming at?'' David said annoyed at the white mare for screaming this early as he walked up to her.

''Your clothes are ruined!'' she said after calming down. ''But why are that so bad?'' she added.

''I've worn the same clothes since my dad was killed five years ago, my mum blamed me for his death so I've never been home since then.'' David replied while looking down.

''Who or what killed him?'' Rarity asked with a shocked look on her face.

''He was killed by a war machine his team were designing, it was a robot designed to kill the enemy and leave no evidence. It would be send a target via its computer chip but something went wrong, it learned, it killed the whole team except one, me. I'm the only survivor of the murder and ive been tracking it ever since, that's why im here, what ever it needs it's found it here.'' David said while looking at the town. ''They don't know how much danger there in.'' He added as he watched the town's inhabitants go around with their lives

''Who wanted that thing!'' Rarity replied with an even more shocked and sickened look.

''The army of the country i used to live in, its was going to be used to terminate any people to tried to start wars'' David added.

''Are you sure its here in Equestria?'' Rarity asked, ''Also if it knows you alive why hasn't tried to kill you?'' she added.

''There is no doubt about it, it's here and its looking for something, anyway it can't find me because I'm reported dead where I'm from. Anyway what can i do for you miss Rarity?'' David said.

''Oh, im here to ask you to help me with something.'' She asked as Twilight came walking up.

''Morning Rarity'.' Twilight said as she stood next to Rarity.

''Morning Twi.'' Rarity replied as David gave them some coffee, ''Thank you David.'' Twi and Rarity said in unison.

''What is it you need help with Rarity.'' Said David as he remembered what Rarity asked.

'Oh, its my boutique's door, its keeps getting stuck, I was wondering if you could take a look at it for me'' Replied Rarity.

''Ok i'll be over in a bit, i just have things i need to do first'' He said while flicking switches in the cab.

The locomotives roared into life in a cloud of smoke and dust, they then rolled off into a siding next to town and shutdown.

''Ok Rarity, lead the way.'' David said as he got a few tools out and a can of oil.

''Thanks for helping David, i was going to ask Big Mac but he's away for the week, also what was the name of the robot?'' Rarity said as they got to the boutique.

''It's no problem Rarity and he never had a name, only a code name S.P.R.I.N.G.T.P.A.P'' David said. ''Ah theirs your problem, the door is damp. Has it rain by any chance?'' David added as he examined the door.

''Yes is has rained, why you ask?'' She said confused.

''The door's wood got wet and expanded and that's the reason why its getting stuck, my dad's  shed door used to do it.'' He added as he sanded down part of the door and then oiled the hings.

''Their you go Rarity, one fixed door.'' He said as he tested the door.

''Thank you dear, I can get some work done'' She replied as she put the open sign outside.

''Its no problem, I'm happy to help a lady, also its free of charge m'lady.'' He as he walked off.

As David walked back to his locomotives, he stopped by Sugar Cube Corner. He opened the door and was leapt on my a bubbly pink mare who bore three balloons on her flank.

''Hello Pinkie.'' He said between grunts, he bopped her nose to make her stop.

''That tickles.'' she giggled, ''What can i do for you?'' she added as she helped him up.

''Yeah, do have any iced buns?'' He asked with a question look while pinkie checked.

''One left, you can have it!'' Pinkie said as she put the bun into a small paper bag.

David gave her the money and walked out the shop while waved him off ''Come again soon.'' she added.

Steven watch David walking toward the engines ''Time to strike.'' He said as his rustic red fur changed into light cerulean blue and his blue mane changed into a rainbow of colors ''I know why your here David, you want revenge because i killed you father.'' He added as his eyes changed from yellow to a rose pink, he then waited for David beside the steps to the nose of the lead engine.

David saw what looked like Rainbow Dash and waved at it, to which it waved back.

''Morning Rainbow.'' He said when he was only a few feet away.

''Don't Rainbow me, you jerk!'' She snapped to which David flinched, ''I'm getting married tomorrow and i don't you ruining it!'' she added

''What, me ruin your wedding!, your an accident waiting to happen!, you know what, go!, just fuck off!'' David said snapping.

Steven plan had worked know all he need to do was to do crocodile tears ''Y-y-your a jerk!'' Clone Rainbow said as she ran off with tears.

David was so mad, he kicked the side of the locomotive, leaving a shoe size dent and rust where the paint crumbled away.

''I've saved her and her country and what do i get? Once I've destroyed that robot i'm leaving! They can all go to fucking hell for all i care!'' He said while chucking a stone at 642 cab which bounced off the shell when it made contract with it.

As Steven changed back to himself he saw the real Rainbow Dash walking towards David when she saw him hitting his engines.

''Whats wrong David?'' She said as she grabbed the cuff of his jacket with her mouth. she recoiled as he turned round and stared into her very soul.

''I thought i told you to fuck off!'' he splutters, leaving Rainbow caught off guard. ''What are you talking about?'' She said calmly, thinking David had her confused for somepony else.

''You calling me a jerk, saying i ruining everything and that i might ruin your lousy wedding!'' He snapped as Rainbow tried to hold back her tears as David turn away from her.

''Steven was right, you are a jerk!'' She said thought her teeth and she flew away as fast as she could.

End of Chapter One.

Next Chapter: Chapter #2: The Truth Revealed Estimated time remaining: 42 Minutes

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