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Derpy's Shame By Mr Critical
Streaker(s): Anthro Derpy Hooves

I stare at the door, quiet and frightful. Both of my eyes were fixated on the little hotel, unable to move as my conscience begged me to return home and crawl into the covers. I had lost my job as a mail mare due to too many accidents; lost packages, wrong addresses, and minor property damage. They had finally given up on me and let me go. It wouldn’t be so bad if it weren’t for the fact that I had a daughter to take care of, but I knew that we would be desperate for cash and I absolutely refuse to see my little Dinky grow up on the streets, or worse taken from me. The mere thought made me want to burst into tears, but now was not the time for tears.

I held onto my trench coat, praying a gust of wind wouldn’t come by. Ponyville was so small, that everypony knew each other. One wrong step, and everypony here will pass on the story of how Derpy was caught in naked underneath her trench coat. I would be a laughing stock, worst of all; Dinky would know her mother is a whore. She’d probably hate me for the rest of her life.

Wasting no more time, I gathered what courage I had and walked in. My eyes darted around in their usual unfocused manner. No pony was there say for the mare at the front desk. She looked up at me for a sec then went back to her magazine, chewing away at her bubble gum. I had the room key already, and would forever dread the numbers for the rest of my life; Room 27. Why did it have to be so far away? I let out a sigh and start walking, the weight of my hooves growing heavier with every step.

As I walk, I can hear the sounds of others in their rooms. The hotel was known for where ponies could engage in dubious activities. I could hear every moan of lust, creak of the bed, and drip of fluids. Knowing full well that would soon be me. I even pass by a door that was wide open and see the cakes, but they don’t see me. Mr. Cake couldn’t see me regardless; he was tied down to a bed and blindfolded. I caught a glimpse of Mrs. Cake and Pinkie Pie in black outfits with small metal studs. I really hope I wouldn’t have to do anything like that.

Room after room, my frightened imagination would run amuck in my head. This was my first job, and my first time in bed with a pony after I found out I was pregnant with Dinky. I had no time to find a pony, I was always busy taking care of her. Now, I’ll have to get back into practice if this is going to be my only source of income from now on.

I take the final step as I stand before the door. A sensation of fear washes over me as I see the red paint and the golden numbers. I wouldn’t just barge in, what if I caught him doing something… to get himself ready? I shutter a bit to think of the awkward moment. Instead, I softly knock, hoping he wasn’t hear. “Come in.” I hear somepony call back. I let out a pained whimper as I slowly open the door. He was nowhere in sight, and to my relief, I couldn’t see any lewd or dangerous looking clothes or sex devices.

The room itself was fairly standard. Red blankets, red carpet, white walls, a mirror on the roof, small de- wait what? I take a second glance and see a mirror on roof, knowing full well what it was for. I banish the thoughts and walk in. I hear some pony in the bathroom with the water running. My mind now turned to who I would be with this evening. I thought of a terrifying monster of a pony. Like King Sombra and Nightmare Moon had a baby. Uh… King Nightmare… the third. I could see him now; brooding, black coat and teeth like knifes. I imagined him pinning me down and putting a collar on me. “You’re mine now, slut!” He would say. I would be forced to do his will, day in and day out with no breaks. Maybe he’d force Dinky to watch. Oh sweet Celestia, that would be awful!

I soon removed the thought, thinking that would be ridiculous. He’s probably just a regular pony who’s just lonely. At that moment, a thought came to mind; what if this pony was a disgusting animal. An image of a grotesque pony covered in his own filth came to mind. His belly thick with whatever he could grasp and coated in oil. He’d make me clean him and pick food out of his folds. My belly lurched, I tried my best not to vomit. Though, I realized that was silly; if he was like that, why would he be washing up?

The bathroom door unlocked, and I froze in place. I felt my sweat drop as the door creak as it opened, my client coming to meet me. My heart was fluttering faster than Rainbow Dash trying to set a record, this was it; the moment of truth. I saw his hoof first, then pants. I let out a sigh and was thankful he was somewhat clothed. The leg was joined by a cream colored hand. Then I saw him in full.

He ducted under the archway of the bathroom and we came face to face, or rather I was looking up at his face whole he looked down at me. My fear went into overdrive as our eyes met. He was tall, very tall. Maybe seven feet tall, I thought I would be spending my time with an alicorn but I saw no sign of a horn or wings. He was an earth pony, probably the biggest I’ve ever seen. Yet, I don’t recall seeing him around town. He must be new or a tourist. Either way, I don’t have to worry about him bragging about this around town. “Oh, hello.” He sounded really friendly, but my mind was so wrought with fear that I remained paralyzed by his visage. “It’s a pleasure to meet you.” I still couldn’t respond. I watched him ruffle his shaggy black mane, an awkward look on his face. “So uh… I-I guess we can get started now that you’re here.” Oh shit, he wants to get started.

He sits back and lays on the bed, a very noticeable crease being formed. “Well, would you like to take off your coat, miss…” I shake my head, freeing myself of my paralysis.

“I-It’s Der-“ I freeze, remembering you’re not suppose to give your real name. “D-Ditzy. My name is Ditzy.” Perfect.

“Ditzy. Hm, a rather curious name, but I find it cute.” I felt my cheeks get a little warm. “Now, may I take your coat?” He offers his hand to me, and I grow a little hesitant. With a gulp, I remove my trench coat and reveal my naked body. No shirt, no underwear, all I had was the coat. I hide my small breasts with my arm. Pegasi weren’t known for being all that well endowed but we made up for it with sensitivity. Even now as my erect nipples graze against the fur on my arm, I could feel a tiny bit of wetness trickle down my leg.

The stallion takes my coat and politely hangs it up for me. “You know… I’ve never done anything like this before.”

“N-Neither have I. I-It’s my first day.”

“Oh. Well… have you ever… you know?” I start to turn red, I could see it in the mirror on the dresser.

“O-Once. I got drunk at one of my friend’s parties. This guy I liked had a bit of… well, he said he had protection. But, when I found out I was pregnant, he…” Tears start to swell up in my eyes, I tried to hold them back for him but I soon feel a comforting hand on my shoulder.

“It’s alright. You don’t have to say anymore.” I let out a small sniffle, trying to smile back at him. He goes back to the bed and lays back. My smile soon vanishes as I see a thick bulge developing in his pants. I had no idea if that was his… thing, or if he had a brick down his pants. “IF you want, we don’t have to do any of the penetration stuff. If you’re not comfortable with it, we can’t-“

“No. I-It’s fine. You… Y-You can do whatever you want to me. Just… please don’t hurt me.” He looks to me as if I had said something insane.

“Ms. Ditzy, I promise I won’t do anything to harm you.” I wanted to believe him, but I knew actions spoke louder than words. With a nod, I revealed my small breasts to him. He gave me a smile, but I was focused on the bulge. I swear, I saw that thing move.

“N-Now, how will you be paying?” He reached into his pocket and brought out a medium sized bag of bits, putting it on the table. He wouldn’t say anything else, but merely stood up. My attention had been stolen by the bag of money that would no doubt save Dinky and I from losing our home. However, my sight was soon encompassed by the towering figure. In the time between when he stood up and approached me, he somehow lost his shirt. He wasn’t built, but he had a large frame. He was probably tough too, maybe like two Big Mac’s and Applejack combined.

I watched as his hand came forward and I felt his touch on me once again. My brain in an utter panic reacted terribly to him as I leapt back in fear, my wings flared up as I let out a scream of terror. I race down the halls, tears streaming down my eyes as run passed the doors. I make it outside and close the door behind me with a great amount of force. I huff and pant, thankful to have fresh air. The grey clouds above always gave the air a wonderful scent to it.

Reveling in my freedom, I start to hear the sounds of ponies gossiping around me. I turn to them a bit confused as to what they were talking about, but I soon see that everypony’s eyes were on me. I look down at myself and to my utter shock and horror, I discover I was still naked. I left the coat in the room with him, but the damage was already done. Everypony could see my perky breasts and my slightly soaked marehood. I used my wings to cover my boobs, but my hands would have to hide my slit from their view.

A small gust of wind rushed by and I could feel the cold air graze against my soft crescent. I let out a soft moan as my wings flare out and stiffen. “N-No! Not now!” Everypony let out a gasp as they gawked at me and my unintentional exhibitionism. I start to tear up again and start running, cupping my eyes with my hands as I ran through town. I wanted to vanish, disappear forever. Somewhere no pony knew who I was or ever will. Everypony was getting an eyeful of me and my folds; I could feel their hot gaze on my body as I ran through town in tears. However, in my distress, I failed to notice where I was going. I tumbled through the markets and gasp in pain as I was now jumbled up in ropes and cloth. I struggle and moan, trying to get out. One of them was riding along my marehood and with each tug, I felt it part me. I let out an aroused gasp, feeling it dig into my pink flesh.

I try to get out as best I can, but it proved too much for me. Everypony was gathering around me, glaring at me with their judgmental gaze. I couldn’t imagine what they were thinking of me, but I had a small idea. I kept moaning and gasping as I tried to set myself free, but I soon find a familiar face part the crowd. He was here and he saw me in this compromising position. Unlike the others, he came towards me, frightening me even more. I would kick and push his hands away, thinking he was still trying to take me. “N-No! Get away!” I shouted, soon finding myself free from the ropes.

“Wait!” Somepony shouted as I darted away. My wings were too stiff to fly and all I had at the moment were my hooves. I had to get away from that stallion; I needed to get away from everypony. I couldn’t remember where I was running now, but it was better than where I was before. I ran fast, faster than I ever could before. Driven by fear, I would see to it that I find somewhere I could regain my thoughts and think of how I could get out of this mess. I had no idea how much time had passed, but eventually I soon come out of my thoughts as I run head first into a wooden wall.

The wind was knocked right out of me as I fell onto my butt and into a patch of mud. I was too busy rubbing my head to ease the pain to care about a little filth. Looking up, I see a big red barn. I was in Sweet Apple Acres, my prayers were answered. If there was anypony who could help me, it was the apples. Who knows, they could even give me a better job than-. “Mommy?” Oh dear sweet Celestia, why do you do this to me?

My head slowly turns to where I heard the voice, a look of absolute terror on my face as I see my little filly standing right there next to me with the youngest Apple, both drinking juice boxes. “Mommy, why are you playing in the mud, silly? Oh that smile, so innocent. She had no idea what I was doing, but by the look of Applebloom, I think she knew a little more than she wanted to let on.

“U-Uh… Mommy is… playing… Pig Pen!”

“Pig Pen?

“Y-Yes. Mommy wanted to play a new game because… I’m so happy to see you.”

“Aw, I’m happy to see you too!” Without warning, my daughter leapt into the mud and started to roll around, giggling. “Pig Pen! Pig Pen!” She repeated. Just watching her brought a soothing smile to my face.

“Um… Applebloom? Could you go get your sister fo-“ My joy soon faded as I see him once more. He was running up the road towards me. He was getting closer, and by contrast I needed to get further away. I stumble out of the mud pile and start running through the apple trees.

“Mommy! Where are you going!” I ignored my daughter’s pleas, running fast as I feel small trickles of rain. I made a mockery of myself to the town, now my daughter saw her mother in a compromising position. She’s probably going to hate me when she’s old enough to know what really happened. Hell, I’ll be lucky if social services don’t come and take her from me after this whole ordeal. Then again, they’re probably right to. I’m a terrible mother, and with no job to support her, she’d probably be better off with a mother who wasn’t a slut.

Tears start flowing yet again, the situation I found myself in was too much. The whole town probably knew what I was doing and they’d probably never want to look me in the eye again.

As I ran back into town, I felt a few small drops of water hit my fur. I look up and see the clouds were getting ready for a session of rain. I had nowhere else to go but my house… but I left the key in the coat I was in. Dammit! I chided myself for a stupid move. I stop in my tracks and turn to run for the hotel once more. I didn’t care if everypony could see me naked anymore. The shame was already laid and I couldn’t possibly get any lower than I already was.

I’ll probably have to move somewhere new, change my name. I don’t want to do it, but I couldn’t knowingly put her through a life of where everypony knew I was a mare who slept around for bits. She’d be made fun of and belittled. All because of me. Maybe… she’d be better of it I just wasn’t around anymore.

I make my way to the hotel once more and barge in. The mare at the front desk looks at me once then again realizing I was naked and covered in mud. I ignored her and walked into the room as before. I was lucky to find that it was opened still… but the coat was gone. I frantically searched for it, but I would recall watching that stallion set it on the coat rack. The only other place it could be was if… he had it.

He had my coat and by extension my keys. I was locked out of my own house, couldn’t fly, naked and covered in mud. The whole town knows what I am and my daughter… m-my daughter. Oh sweet Celestia, why did she have to see me like this? I don’t care if the town knows, just… why did it have to be her. Distraught, I took myself out of the room and sauntered out of the hotel. There, I could feel soft trickles of rain pelt me as ponies wandered back to their homes to take shelter. I felt some of them look at me and my folds, gawking at me as I tried to hide myself from their view. I didn’t really care anymore, my life was over.

I soon wander into an alleyway to huddle up into a corner. Once there, I start to cry. I don’t hold back as I let every tear wash over my muzzle as I look back to the series of events that lead me to this point. I was a clumsy ditz, unable to do a simple job of taking something from point A to point B. Because I failed such a simple task, I wouldn’t be able to do be able to do anything else but sell my body for bits. What’s worse, I doubt anypony would hire me for anything, especially for sex after they hear I flaked out on my first job. The tears only came on stronger after that. I wept and wept for so long, I could sense that it was getting darker out.

Suddenly, I heard hooves in the grass. I looked up and to my utter shock, saw him. Why was he following me? Did he really want to… do that with me so bad. I backed into my corner, utterly frightened as the giant came towards me. “Please… l-leave me alone.” I had been crying for so long, my throat was completely dry. I covered my eyes as he raised his hand. Holy crap, he was going to hit me! I braced for an impact, thinking a stallion his size would pulverize me. I waited, and waited… and waited… and waited. Yet, nothing came. I peered out to see what was taking so long, and soon found something before me; my coat. I was in shock, taking it in disbelief. “Y-You… my coat? I-I don’t understand!”

“You ran out so fast, I’ve been chasing you down to give you your coat. It’s raining out here and you could get sick.” Oh my god… he was… trying to give my coat back to me. I’ve been running around town in the nude and he’s been trying to give my clothes back to me this whole time. I don’t think I’ve ever felt any dumber, nor humiliated in my entire life. “Are you okay? You look like you’ve been through a lot.” I take my coat and cover myself.

“I… I’m sorry. I’ve just… I-I’ve been through so much today. Everypony probably thinks I’m an indecent whore. Celestia knows my daughter won’t be able to live this down.” He doesn’t say anything, but I feel him sit beside me.

“I see. Well, is there anything I can do to help?”

“Why would you want to help me? I’m a screw up and I’d probably make your life worse. You’d be better off keeping your distance.” I hold onto my legs, not caring if I smear mud along my arms. “Please… just leave me alone.” It takes a while, but I feel him get up and leave as I curl up into my coat. After a few seconds, I hear the jingle of metal pieces hit the ground.

“Get up.” I hear him say. I look to my hooves and see the bag of bits. “Technically, I’m still paying for your service, and as you said ‘I can do anything I want so long as I don’t hurt you’, remember?”

“Y-Yeah, but-“

“So, first thing I want to do is help you get your life back to where it was before.”

“Wh-Why would you-“

“No, I’m not done.” I silence myself as I let him continue.

“Second, you’re going to go out on a date with me.” Wait, WHAT?!?!

“But… I don’t have time for it. I have a-“

“I’ll take care of it. Besides, how else are we going to lie to the town?” What? “I mean, why else would you have run out like that? We’ve been dating for a while now. You’ve been so busy your whole life, it’s no wonder you were afraid of being intimate with a stallion.” There was no way he was being serious… was he?

I stand up, sniffling softly. “You… you’d do that for me, knowing what I was doing?”

“Of course I would.” He held out his hand to me. “Now come on. Lets get you home. I bet your daughter is worried sick.” I smile softly, only to let out a small sneeze. I think I was getting sick myself.

“Okay.” I stay close to him as we start walking. “Do you… Do you think you could draw a bath for me please?”

“Sure.” He didn’t even think it through. He just said yes to me the moment I asked him to. He was the nicest stallion I had ever met. He was big, strong, kind, hands-. I stop that thought as I begin to turn a soft shade of red from embarrassment. That or I was starting to develop a fever. Either way, I was happy to be with this stallion.

“What’s your name?” I asked him sheepishly.

“Demo Reel, but you can call me Demo if you want to.”

“Demo. Okay then.” I pause for a moment. “My name’s Derpy Hooves, but you can call me Derpy.” I feel his arm wrap around me as we walked, his firm embrace was comforting as we walked through town.

“It’s a pleasure to officially meet you, Derpy.” I nuzzle into his chest, not caring that the back of my coat was showing off my ass. It was embarrassing when I felt ponies stare, but for all I cared I could be naked again. I liked being around Demo, he was nice to me and he wouldn’t judge.

The moment we get to the door, I unlock it and walk inside. Once free from the public view, I drop my coat and wipe my hooves. “I’ll go start that bath for you. Do you want anything after you get out?”

“Can you… make muffins for me?”

“From a box or from scratch? I can do both but it will take time if I do it from scratch.” I felt my heart flutter again, this time not of fear, but from something else.

“U-Um… box is fine. Blueberry.”

“Cool. Blue Berry’s my favorite.” I start to feel myself swoon a bit. I start to wish that he was that stallion I met years ago. Hell, he would have probably stayed with me. I hear the door open again and I yelp from the surprise.

“Mommy!” Dinky walks in and hugs my muddy leg. She was just as filthy as I was, maybe even more so. Her face was covered in mud. “Mommy, where did you go? I thought we were playing tag but you ran off to fast.” I kneel down and bring her in for a hug, smearing myself with more mud.

“I’m sorry, sweetie. Mommy… had forgotten she had some things to do. I didn’t mean to worry you.”

“It’s okay.” We both hear the sound of a bath starting, catching her attention.

“Hm? Who’s here?”

“Oh… it’s just…” I start to fluster a bit as I form the words. “That’s just mommy’s new friend.” There was another word I wanted to call him, but I wanted to wait to make it more official. I didn’t want to lie to her. “He’s just making mommy a bath, and from the look of things… you could use one yourself.”

“AHHHH! No bath!” She left me, running off to escape her fate with me in the tub. I let out a soft giggle as I get up to chase her. Despite everything that happened today, The shame and humiliation, seeing her happy almost made it worth it. And as I chase her, I catch Demo drawing my bath for me. We make eye contact and he gives me a smile. I felt butterflies form in my stomach as my daughter screams for my attention. Somehow, I knew that things were going to look up for us.