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The Son of Princess Luna

by Danny Eclipse

Chapter 19: Ultimate Enemy

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Ultimate Enemy

(5 hours later, at dawn.... At Canterlot.)

(The doors open and the Mane 6 came in. Cheering broke out. However, meanwhile outside Canterlot....)

(The guards defending Canterlot Castle's gate, they see black mist pouring in. Suddenly, they see a hooded figure walking to the gate.)

Guard 1: "Excuse me sir, but you can't come in here."

(Suddenly, for some odd reason, they saluted to him. They felt their true purpose was to be loyal to him alone. Darth Revan used his Force Corruption.)

Before you argue, Star Wars IS 1 of the many crossover to this story. So, force is useable.

Guard 2: "What are our orders, Master?"

(Dark evil tone in my voice) "Simple. Lead me to the Princesses and Mane 6."

(That was when several droids came out, on their chests was an insignia that brought chills to anypony who see them.)

(As they walked in, the song "Imperial March" began to play. More droids came out, they were Commando Droids. We made our way to the throne room, all guards we came across, I simple used Force Corruption. We made it to the doors and the guards opened the door and the black mist filled the room, making ponies scream. The Royal Guards came to the Princesses as did the Night Guards. The Mane 6 looked at the intruders and they see me [Darth Revan] walking out of the mist. The Corrupted Royal Guards came to my side.)

Luna: "Mutiny! Traitors!"

(Because of my Mask, my voice was slightly dark and complex between 2 voices, speaking at the same time) "Oh Luna, they aren't traitors. I just have them under my influence, The Power of the Dark Side can do many things many would see as impossible."

Corrupted Guard 1: "What are our new orders sir?"

Celestia: "Who are you?"

"I am Darth Revan, leader of the Sith Empire....."

Twilight: "Why do you attack us, Revan?"

"I have my reasons. Soldiers!" (The Corrupted Soldiers ready themselves) "Leave the Princesses and Mane 6 to me. Dispose of the Royal and Night Guard."

Corrupted Soldiers: "Yes sir!"

(The Corrupted Soldiers charged and clashed blades with the Royal Guard, who took the fight somewhere else. The Night Guard went with the Royal Guard.)

"Droids, secure the area. Don't let no pony in."

(The Commando Droids from behind them saluted and closed the doors and ray shielded it, leaving us alone.)

Celestia: "Revan, why attack us?"

"Because, you have been a thorn in my side for far too long. Now, I can finally rid of that thorn, forever!"

(Celestia and Luna summoned their armor. Then they realized that if there is going to be a fight, the Mane 6 need armor. So, Celestia and Luna gave them armor as well.)

"You think they can beat me? You're joking."

(Celestia made her first move. I aimed my hoof at her and Force Storm (The final version of Force Shock) was fired at her. Celestia cried out in pain and Luna glared at me and charged. I looked at her and I used Force Wave to push her back. She slammed into a wall and the Mane 6, pulling out Lightsaber (Which was impossible to know where they got them, but I guessed from my Aunt and Mother) and both Twilight and Applejack charged at me. I pulled out my 2 Lightsabers and blocked their incoming attack. When I did, I used Force Wave to push them back. Pinkie leaped at me but all I did was Force Grip her and threw her aside. Suddenly, Rainbow appeared behind me, ready to strike me. I, however, used Master Speed Force Power and managed to block her attack in the nick of time. She was shocked to see I blocked her attack and I used Force Wave again and she was pushed to the ray shielded doors. I looked at Rarity and Fluttershy, who didn't move. Rarity was about to attack until I used Force Insanity and they cried out in horror. They began to run around, screaming. Celestia managed to get up and see what I did to them. She pulled out her Double-edged Yellow Lightsaber and threw it at me. I saw it coming and Force Push to push it away. Celestia tried to charge at me, but I grabbed her with Force Grip and held her in place.)

"You know, I did look up to you. But now, all I see, is a betrayer of her people."

(I threw her upward, through the ceiling. It crashed through it and I went after her. She landed on 1 side, I landed on the other. A storm began to erupted, Lightning crackled in the sky, rain poured onto us.)

Celestia: "Why Revan? Why attack us?"

"Because, all I see in this government is corruption and harmony. You must understand, the new era is approaching where 2 forces must fight. The Light and The Dark. Sombra and Nightmare Moon felt the taste of the Dark Side, but could never truly use it. But me? I can use it with the Force."

Celestia: "But why attack us!? There has to be more than that!"

"There is more..... You took everything from me!"

(I charged at her with a burst of speed and began to punch her, didn't stop for a second.) "You took my Mother!" (I punched her in the stomach) "You took my Father!" (I punched her in the head) "You took away everything from me!!" (I punched her again, she was pushed away to a stone edge wall. She looked at me with a sad look.)

Celestia: "I'm...... sorry...... for everything...... I never......"

(I paused for a moment before I grabbed her by the throat and held her up. She began to choke) "I don't want your apology! I want my life back!"

(Before she reply, Rainbow Dash came zooming at me and pushed me to the side and pinned me to the ground. Celestia fell to the ground, gasping for air.)

Rainbow: "Just who the hay are you!?"

(She grabbed my mask and threw it aside and gasp, eyes narrow in horror.)

Rainbow: "No..... It can't be."

(I gave her an evil smile before Force Pushing her off me. The others managed to get to us. When Rainbow slid to a halt in front of them, her wings lowered. I got up and revealed my face to them, making them all gasp.)

Twilight: "Darth Revan IS Danny Eclipse!?!"

(Dark voice in mine) "No. I was the pony FORMALLY known as Danny Eclipse. But you're little Danny is no more...."

Luna: "What do you mean!?"

"Oh, nothing much. Discord just showed poor Danny that you ALL hated him. Luna never loved him, Celestia tossing him to Clockwork without a second's thought, Twilight wishing she never was assigned to watch him behind his back, Applejack admitting he is more trouble than any normal pony, Fluttershy saying he was annoying the daylight out of her, Pinkie saying his "improvement" are no right for the party, Rarity calling him a "ruffian" and not a proper Gentlecolt, and finally..... Rainbow Dash....."

(They all gasp at what they were hearing.)

"Rainbow Dash..... Hurt and broke his heart...... She claimed him to be a complete LOSER and said that she NEVER WILL care for him, even if they were the last 2 ponies left on the world."

(They all gasp even more. Rainbow's ears lowered down. She loved Danny and learning that Discord shattered his crush her, made it hurt for her.)

"Now, heart shattered and no one to turn to..... He came to the Dark Side. He wanted REVENGE! So, I was born!"

(They all looked down.)

Rainbow: "Danny..... You believe Discord? Well, he lied to you! I love you Danny Eclipse! No pony, not even Discord, will change that!"

(I laughed at loud, a cold chilling laugh) "You can say that ALL you want! But Danny won't hear it! He believes you ALL hate him!"

(Rainbow didn't raise her lightsaber. Instead, she dropped and began to walk over to me. I raised my sabers and was ready to strike. She didn't stop though. Just as when I was about to strike, she lean against me and kissed me. I was taken back to that action and backed away. My dark eyes flicked to normal and back.)

"Rainbow..... No!"

(I force pushed Rainbow back, but she held her ground. She kept walking towards me. I kept backing up until I was at the edge. I was about to force push her again until the part of the castle I was on  collapse and I began to fall. I felt something grab my hoof and I looked and see Rainbow holding onto me.)

Rainbow: "I got you!"

(I was confused and shocked) "But why!? I almost killed you! Why save my life!?"

Rainbow: "Because I already told you! I love you!"

(My eyes narrowed before they turned back to normal. I began to cry at what she said and my bat-like wings turned to normal and my horn went inside my head, quick hurt a lot. Rainbow pulled me up and I hugged her as she hugged me. After a long hug, we looked at each other before we kissed. The love for each other was too much for them to handle. They began to cry until the roof door opens and all the Royal Guard and Night Guard came. They looked at me, completely disbelief. They were about to arrest me until Celestia stopped them and said I was clouded in the Dark Side. After that, we stopped and nodded at each other, declaring Boyfriend/Girlfriend Relationship.) Next Chapter: The Ruined Date [Meeting 2 Spirits of Creepypasta] Estimated time remaining: 2 Hours, 10 Minutes

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