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Flittering Love

by Patriot Pony

Chapter 1: On This Flittering Day

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On This Flittering Day

Attention: This is a Ova after season 4. It's focuses on a pegasi of dealing with her emotional problems(my own idea). And I in liberty to make my own shipping, not pairing with other background characters. But my own fan-made character. That's all I wanted to point out, and enjoy the story.

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After Tirek's defeat, Ponyville and the rest of Equestria now continues the path of peace without any threats. At Cloudsdale, Pegasus' continues their normal routine as weather controllers, and other sort of things they have going on.

Sitting on a cloud by itself, was a Pegasi named Flitter. She was saddened of herself and her sister, Cloudchaser, and with other pegasi from stopping Tirek from causing destruction onto their beloved nation. She never felt that emotion ever since, thinking of if they would quickly reacted before Tirek got enough power to take her and her sisters' magic, they would've stopped him onto his tracks.

She buried her teary eyes with her hooves, and started to let out her cry. As she was still there, a voice came from behind.

"Hey, Flitters. You okay?" Asked her sister, Cloudchaser, worried about her. Flitter turns around and nods with a sobbing moaning.

"I not doing fine, Cloudchaser. I was just sad of us that we didn't stop that monster who took our talents or magic from us and our friends." She stated.

Cloudchaser knew that she was referring to Lord Tirek, which he was the one took her and her friends' magic or talents last time. Cloudchaser sits next to her and tries to comfort her sister.

"Flitters." Cloudchaser began. "I know how you feel about not on succeeding on something that was supposed to be a mission to protect our homeland from 'him.' But I mean, so what. We're safe now and our nation's not in danger anymore. We did our part, and it doesn't mean that we're not notable of stopping Tirek from destruction. You did your part too." Cloudchaser told her sister, trying to informed her that she did her job too.

Flitters wipes off her tears and partly calms herself, then turns to Cloudchaser and thanked her for her comfort.

"Thank you for cheering me up." Flitter said to her, hugging her. Cloudchaser then nodded while patting her back, "Anytime for you, sis. If you need anything from me, let me know." Cloudchaser and Flitter then share a laugh, while trying to forget about what happened, Cloudchaser spotted Thunderlane, as he informs her that it's time to go to work.

Cloudchaser turns to her sister and nodded, "Hey, sis. I gotta get going. I catch you later, okay." Okay. Thank you again, Clouds." Flitter nodded with a smile, and Cloudchaser flew off to work.

As Cloudchaser left, Flitter emotions came back. She decided to travel to Ponyville to have a short or long walk. She lift herself from where she sat with her wings, and flew to Ponyville while tearing up a bit.

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As Flitter arrived to Ponyville, she begins to walk through town. While walking through town, she met a red unicorn stallion, named Crimson Flame.

Crimson Flame's a autistic unicorn with a since of loving and caring everypony around him, even if their upset or other moods he wants to cheer up. Despite of his disabled personality, he's well handled colt, shy around mares, kind-hearted, and lovable pony who has a heart of gold to show how much love he wants to make everypony happy, like Pinkie Pie. He also has a dark side that if anypony treats him like dirt, or anypony around him, he would immediately snap with impulsive and hot-tempered attitude, defending himself or anypony.

Crimson and Flitter bumped into each other. As Crimson Flame picked himself up, he turns to Flitters and helped her up.

"Are you okay?" Crimson asks Flitter. Flitters looks up to him with teary eyes, causing Crimson Flame to worry if he hurt her by accident.

"I am very sorry if you hurt you! Are you alright?" He nods to her, lifting her hoof. Flitter sighed a bit and responds to him, "I'm fine. But...I'm not in a mood Now."

Crimson wonders why she's upset. He asks and said to her, "What's seems to bother you, though? If you want to discuss it, feel free to talk to me."

Flitter looks at him and thought that he could have something to say. So she decided to have a talk with Crimson of what she's crying about.

"Well," She begins, "I was upset of the monster called Lord Tirek, which me and my friends from Wonderbolts academy, tries to stop him from causing destruction in our country. But we were striped off from our talents or magic from him. That's when I had a feeling of being a failure or some sort of thing that we didn't stop him or stuff like that. I was sad of me or my friends, not being able to stop him. That's how upset I was."

Making sense, Crimson understands how she felt of not being a hero to do something of protecting their country from a horrible threat. Crimson then thought trying to make her forget about what happened.

"Miss. There's something you should know too!" Crimson said to Flitter, getting her attention. "Listen. I know how you feel about not being some pony to stop something from causing havoc in you nation. And I understand. I been through that too, like I'm worthless, and not good enough. But so what, you're still notable in my opinion, and I don't care what they say otherwise. You deserve to be known for that, and deserve to be worthy of something. You're not the only one, if you realize that. Don't that haunt you. I promised that good things will happen, and I believe in that."

Flitter then smiles at him and nodded, "thank you for telling me that. You're very kind." She then hugs him, causing him to blush.

Flitter looks up him and asks, "What's wrong? You're blushing." Crimson then responded, "Well...uhmm...I was just...Just..." Crimson then took a breath and said to her, "I'm meant to say that I'm very lucky to meet such a beautiful creature like you. Cause I never met a mare with such beauty."

By surprise, Flitter gasped, never heard of anypony could say something like that to her. But it was a first time that he said that to her, causing her to smile.

"Ooh, thank you! That means a lot to me!" She stated to Crimson, hugging him again. Crimson felt it was his first time fallen for a mare, developing a romantic feeling for her.

He felt his heart beats faster. Despite of it, he ignores his anxiety from getting the best of him. He calmly took another breath, and asks Flitter, "Hey miss?" Flitter then responded, "My name's Flitter."

Crimson continues, "Okay. Name's Crimson Flame."

"It's very nice to meet you, Crimson!" Flitter nodded with smile, feeling her emotions suddenly disappeared.

"Nice meeting you too!" Crimson said to her. He then cleared his throat and got back to ask her something.

"Anyways, If you want, if you're not busy or so. Would like to go on a...Uhmm."

"Date?" Flitter answered Crimson's question.

"Well, yeah! Where do you like to eat for dinner or snack?" Crimson asked her. "Like Sugarcane Corner?" She nodded, pointing her hoof to the gingerbread-house-like-restaurant.

"Sure!" Crimson answered. "Whatever you want to do or something, hit me up."

"Okay! Thanks!" Flitter smiles, as she joyful flew away.

"Hey, Flitter!" Crimson calls her out, getting her attention. "You think this evening's okay?"

Flitter responded, "Yeah! Tonight's sounds fine to me! What time?"

Crimson answered, "I guess 6:30."

"Okay! Sounds good! Bye!"

"Bye!"

Crimson Flame waved and head home to get ready for his first date. He felt a bit nervous if something might go wrong. He also thought about practicing for his date, like talking, have a friendly conversation, and be a gentlecolt for Flitter. Next Chapter: Flitter's First outing Estimated time remaining: 2 Minutes

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