Hello again. This time we will be riffing a fic called Kingdom of Monsters by hielispace. This is what a friend of mine likes to calls Edge Porn. The relishes how dark and edgy it is. It’s pretty absurd. Fun to riff though. This time I am uploading the story in two parts. There is no way I am going to upload 16 chapters. That is way too much work. From now on I will put chapters into one or two parts if they are short (1000 words or less) to make it a bit easier on myself. Who has time to upload 16 chapters anyway?

Next time I will be doing Book 1:Changing Patterns by natis120. Its stars an OC that is the daughter of Queen Chrysalis and King Sombra. What more needs to be said than that?

If you have a fanfic recommendation, comments, or criticisms please leave a comment or PM me at my fimfiction account or my blog on Tumblr. Please NO clop or fanfiction with extreme violence. I am not going to do those. I want to do a more family friendly series and it is going to be relatively clean. Besides everyone else does them. Okay, I might do one for a special occasion. But otherwise no clop or extreme gore fics. Ok, enough rambling. On with the fic!

Thank you hielispace for letting me use your fic! You are awesome!

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Doctor and Ditzy’s Science Theater

by Rixizu

Episode 25 - Part 1

Trixie moaned in pleasure as the hot water of the jacuzzi soaked into her body. It was just the thing she needed and she let herself fall into the soothing warmth of the water. It had been a far too long time since she’d done something like this. Trixie had always enjoyed visiting a spa, but rarely found the time to go to one.

The last week had been a strange one. Adjusting to life in the facility wasn’t easy. The confined corridors and rooms were stifling to Trixie. Worse yet, the whole place had an anti-magic field strong enough she couldn’t even manage a basic levitation spell. It was very trying having to pick up everything by hoof. She needed to be free, not cooped up here. She worried about what might happen to her new wagon. Trixie grunted in frustration. She just made her first down payment on the thing too!

Trixie put those troubling thoughts out of her mind for the moment. There was nothing she could do now. She let her muscles relax, the tension soon left her. Trixie looked up and there was the Doctor passing by with a book in his hooves. He was shaking his head and muttering under his breath.

Trixie sat up straight and peered at the Doctor. “What are you reading?”

The Doctor looked up. “Oh, I was just reading up on 18th-century history. I find it pitifully inaccurate. It expects us to believe Sir Ion Storm poisoned his brother and wife to become head of the Storm family. Ridiculous.”

Trixie raised an eyebrow. She’d heard of this controversy. The leading and believed theory after the mysterious death of Heavy Storm and his wife was that they were poisoned by his brother. After all, he had so much to gain from doing so. He was never found guilty, but the accusation haunted him to his grave and this day. “Oh, and you know what happened for real?” Trixie asked sarcastically.

The Doctor had a glint in his eye. “I might.” He said. Something about the way he said it suggested that he knew more than he was letting on. Something he did often much to Trixie’s annoyance.

Trixie laid back and sighed. She didn’t know what to make of the stallion. He was odd, to say the least but had an intellect and vast knowledge she had never seen before. There was something otherworldly about him somehow. It seemed like he knew things he probably shouldn't and talked about things that happened centuries or millennia ago like they actually happened to him. There was something un-equine about him too, which was ridiculous. But the theory didn’t completely leave her mind.

Trixie decided to change the subject. “So when does this experiment start?”

“About five o’clock more or less. That gives you about an hour or so.” The Doctor explained.

“Very well.” She looked at the Doctor as he left. “Say Doctor?”

The Doctor turned back. “Hmm?”

Trixie gave her best seductive smile. “How about joining me? I would...enjoy the company.”

“No thanks.” The Doctor said simply and walked off.

“Hphm,” Trixie said in protest. The fact that the Doctor didn’t just dive into the jacuzzi with her showed there was something supremely wrong with the stallion. Oh, well. He was very easy on the eyes in Trixie’s opinion. His aloof attitude actually made him more attractive. She did think that she wouldn’t mind being trapped here if he was around. The fact Ditzy had no interest in him whatsoever made things even easier.

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Trixie walking into the main meeting room feeling refreshed and revitalized. She knew what was coming and wanted to be at her best to tackle it. She saw that the Doctor and Ditzy were already there.

Ditzy raised an eyebrow. “No cape and hat?”

Trixie scoffed. “What? You think Trixie spends most of her time wearing her ensemble? Hardy. Trixie would find it more a complete nuisance.”

“It isn’t really all that surprising. That would just wear them down.” The Doctor surmised.

Trixie nodded. “The Doctor is correct. A good hat and cape aren’t cheap.”

“Looks like it is about time for the experiment.” The Doctor said after looking at the clock.

A monitor went to life filled with static that covered the whole screen. A deep distorted voice appeared over the speakers. The static moved up and down to the frequency of the voice. “Hello, my little test subjects,” Dinky said.

“The Great and Powerful Trixie demands to know what you have done with her things,” Trixie said in a hard voice.

Dinky sounded taken aback. “Well... um…” She coughed. “I assure you that your cart and things are safe somewhere.”

“Trixie should hope so. She better not discover that you left it in the middle of the street.” Trixie said haughtily.

“And you should give her some of her things,” Ditzy interjected helpfully. Trixie found the mare to be a bit odd at first, but she was earnest and friendly enough. Trixie thanked her quick wits. She didn’t even think of that.

“Trixie will provide a list,” Trixie said with a snort.

“Fine.” Dinky gave in surprisingly easily. “Anyway, today's experiment is titled Kingdom of Monsters by hielispace. Chapters one through eighteen. Enjoy.” She gave a rather corny evil laugh. The very loud experiment alarm went off.

“Eighteen chapters?!” Trixie said alarmed.

“Don’t worry about it. They’re probably pretty short.” The Doctor said comfortingly.

“If...you say so.” Trixie gave a hesitant nod.

Ditzy nodded. “The experiment usually doesn’t last that long. Trust us, it will be fine.”

Trixie nodded and the three went into the theater.

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Trixie: So what does Trixie do exactly?

Ditzy: Just say whatever you want. Believe me, jokes will really help you get through these things.

Trixie: O-ok…

Doctor: You’ll be fine, just have fun.

“Tell me again why we are mapping the Everfree forest, it is not like anyone goes of the path,” Commented Spike as he and Twilight walked through the Everfree.

Doctor: (Twilight) Oh Spike, stop being so silly. You act as if doing this will lead to something horrible. You’ve seen too many horror movies.

        “In case ponies get lost,” Twilight replied as she drew some more on the map.

Ditzy: (Twilight) Sunny Town, check. Sacrificial altar, check. Zecora’s Hut, check.

“On, look at that, it’s your bedtime, go back to the library and get ready for bed, I will come shortly.” That was a lie,

Doctor: It was two in the afternoon.

Twilight just was annoyed at Spike for asking the same question over and over again.

Trixie: (Spike) Are we done yet? Are we done yet? Are we done yet?

        “Fine, see you in a bit,” Spike said as he walked out. Twilight will only be a minute, she can’t get hurt, Spike thought as he went back over to his home.

Trixie: It’s only the Everfree; full of the horrible unspeaking monsters.

Ditzy: Have to start this plot somehow.

Doctor: (Spike) Get lost in the forest? Please. Wait, didn’t I already come this way?

        Twilight kept mapping out the forest, letting her thoughts wander.

Trixie: And failed to notice the timberwolf stalking right behind her!

Why is everyone so scared of this place? It feels like home,

Ditzy: Get a few lamps and potted plants and it would be downright homely.

Twilight shook her head, how could this place be home? Twilight thought she saw a green flash in a some water. It is probably nothing.

Ditzy: Trixie please stop grinning like that.

Trixie: What? Trixie just thinks it's fun to see Sparkle blunder to her death.

        Then she came across a cavern with a eery glow come from within it. What is that, I should go check it out.

Ditzy: You can’t say this is stupid because the Doctor would do the exact same thing. Only more carelessly.

Doctor: (Glares)

She slowly moved towards the cave. Those actions sealed her fate.

Ditzy: Spoilers! Ugh, I hate that!

When she entered the cave, she was amazed. Torches glowing green were lining the walls. Strange markings were written in a random pattern,

Doctor: (Reading) Be sure to drink more ovaltine.

A pool that had a liquid that seemed to glow ten times brighter than the all of the torches combined.

Doctor: (Twilight) Toxic waste? Eh, whatever. It’s probably nothing.

Against her better judgement she went over and touched the fire burning within the torches.

Ditzy: Twilight loves burning herself for fun!

Instead of burning her, it felt like her hoof was dipped in liquid nitrogen. How can a fire be cold? Twilight thought.

Trixie: As her hoof broke off.

        Then a splitting headache gripped Twilight,

Ditzy: Not enough caffeine.

Making her tumble into one of the markings. A pain shot through her legs. This must be dark magic. Twilight thought as she cried in pain. She needed to find relief.

Doctor: With Bayer Aspirin. Sure to get rid of any headache or backpain!

Maybe that pool will do something. She thought as she jumped in.

Ditzy: (Blinks) What? Why the hay would she think that?

Which is where the physical pain stopped, and the metal pain began.

All: Doh!

Trixie: Trixie was so sure that would work!

The unicorns mind was changing. Becoming more and more dark. Twilight tried to fight it, but the darkness seemed so nice.

Ditzy: It bought her candy and presents.

Spirit of Rarity: She loved the way darkness wore those really tight faux leather pants.

Her alien thought Made her now enjoy the transformation she was experiencing.

Trixie: (Twilight) Look at all the tentacles my body is sprouting! That’s so cool!

A wave of pleasure shot though her as her hind legs

All: Um………….

became like the tale of a snake.

All: Phew.

Her fur became scales from the waist down. She opened her mouth, trying to gasp for air. Instead her organs transformed and the pony once known as Twilight was no more.

Doctor: Because she suffocated due to her lungs turning into gills.

        “Ow my head,” Twilight said as she woke up from her sleep. Where am I? All I can remember is falling into this pool.

Trixie: (Twilight) This is the last time I eat the pink one’s special cupcakes!

Doctor: I think you mean Pinkie Pie?

Trixie: Right, what you said.

Then one of the symbols lit up. Filling her with information about her new spices flooded her mind.

Doctor: (Twilight) Oh! So that is the secret of KFC’s herbs and spices!

I’m a lamia?

Doctor: Oh dear. If she starts eating children, I’m quitting!

Twilight thought before the next wave of information hit her.

Trixie: (Twilight) Woah! I know kung fu!

So that is what happened. She was speechless. What could she do. Maybe I could help everyone, with is new power I could help everyone become Powerful.

Ditzy: And fulfill more monster filly fetishes.

Trixie: Doesn’t that mean nopony will be?

With those words she accepted her powers.

Ditzy: Suddenly being a snake-pony thing seemed pretty cool!

Her scales and fur became green. Her cutie mark formed on her back, but with a snake coil around it. Twilight was gone. Only Eclipse Shadow remained.  

Doctor: Eclipse Shadow? (Rolls eyes)

Ditzy: That’s trying way too hard.

Trixie: So we should expect names that sound like they were created by an edgy 14 year old.

                                Author's Note:

How due you guys like the rewrite. Tell me in the comments

Ditzy: Rewrite? This thing is barely a few paragraphs long! What was the original like?

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Chapter 2

Fluttershy looked around desperately for a particular herb.

Trixie: (Fluttershy) Where is the Locoweed? Mommy needs her fix!

Angel was really sick, and she needed it to make some medicine for him. After searching for at least a hour, she still couldn't find some.

Doctor: (Fluttershy) Curses. This parking lot doesn’t have the herb I need!

Well, I don’t have any so I guess I have to go to... A shiver went down her spine. The Everfree Forest.

Trixie: Apparently everypony has taken their Stupid Pill in this story.

As she walked into the forest, careful to stay on the path, she thought she saw a flash of bright red light in the distance. It was probably nothing.

Ditzy: Oh come on. Has nopony seen a horror film?

She thought as she ventured into the deeper and deeper into her final resting place

Ditzy: Again with the spoilers! Thanks story!

Eclipse spent some time fiddling around with her new body and powers.

Ditzy: Finetuning her new character sheet.

My snake half is extremely flexible.

Trixie: Must resist sex jokes.

Eclipse mused as she twisted it around a torch. My magic seemed to have grown stronger as well.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) I now do 2d6 more to my enemies!

Eclipse looked over the markings on the walls. The runes told her that the purpose of the cave was to lead the Elements here, to be 'improved'.

Ditzy: So they can have cool new fan art on Deviantart!

She figured that one of them was meant to retell information, another meant to comence the transformation itself, and last one seemed to pull the elements to this cave. Then the pool's grey-ish light seemed to disappear. That’s odd.Eclipse thought. Suddenly, the pool vanished in a flash of light, and in its place a blood red drinking cup appeared on a white pedestal. The cup had an elegant design on it, containg ruggedly graceful bat wings on a blood red, metallic cup.

Doctor: A vampire, how creative.

Ditzy: What is it with you and vampires? Seriously. You can barely contain your dislike for them.

Doctor: They are an ancient enemy of my people, Ditzy.

Ditzy: (Blinks) Really?

Trixie: (Snorts) Pull the other one.

The next element must be coming. I guess I have a chance to test out my new powers.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) I have all these cool new combos to play with!

Doctor: (Eclipse) Look at the skill tree I have now!

Eclipse thought, barely being able containing her excitement as she zipped around the corner.

Trixie: (Eclipse) Wait a second. According to this ancient script, she’ll sparkle in sunlight. On second thought, nevermind. This isn’t an improvement at all!

Fluttershy was extremely afraid, although being very careful to stay on the path. That is, until she saw a bright red glow in the distance. It somehow overrided her fear, leading her towards the light, like a moth to a candle.

Trixie: (Fluttershy) Oh hey! A red light district! I’ve been wanting to get some action for awhile!

As she entered the cave, her fear returned.

Doctor: (Fluttershy) Curse my irresistible love for red lights!

She wanted to leave, but the three markings on the wall seemed to trap her in.

Trixie: (Fluttershy) They say ‘Do not leave’. It would be rude to disobey them!

She walked deeper into the cave when she heard something slithering around.

Ditzy: (Fluttershy) Oh Jim is that you? It’s been too long!

She moved towards the noise to inspect it, but then she felt something rap around her hooves. She tried to move, but what she now knew as snake coils had already made their way up her body. She struggled and wriggled trying to free herself.

Ditzy: (Fluttershy) Jim stop it! This is not funny at all!

Forcing Fluttershy to look Eclipse in the eyes, she activated her new power. Fluttershy seemed to melt in her coils,

Doctor: It turned her into a gelatinous ooze.

her mind becoming clay in Eclipse’s hooves. That was easy. Eclipse thought. Now then, let’s see what this power can do.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) I know! I’ll make her think she’s Daring Doo and send her on some adventure!

“Fluttershy, you will always do what I tell you,” Eclipse said.

“Always do what you tell,” Fluttershy replied in a zombie-like state.

“You will love me, you will trust me, you will obey me,” Eclipse commanded.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) I call it LOTTO for short!

“Love, Trust, Obey,” Fluttershy said. Eclipse then released her hold on her mind.

“Now, go drink from that cup,” Eclipse commanded. Who ever set this up must have known that I would do this, otherwise Fluttershy would never have drunk from that cup.

Doctor: She hates fruit punch.

Kind of creepy.

Doctor: (Eclipse) Why am I doing this again?

“As you wish,” Fluttershy said.When she picked up the cup, she shivered. It glee faintly.

Ditzy: It broke out into song.

The closer it got to her mouth, the stronger the glow. When it finally reached her mouth. It’s glow was strong enough to blind most.

Doctor: So Fluttershy dropped it and screamed, “ow my eyes!”

Fluttershy took her first sip, the mysterious, bitter and copper tasting liquid moving slowly down her throat.

Doctor: Hmmmm. I wonder what it could be.

The second swallow seemed to go down more smoothly as well as taste better. After the third gulp, she was eager to get more. It just tasted so good. Who needs kindness when I have this?

Trixie: Soon she’ll be knocking over convenience stores so she can get her next fix.

She felt her wings change, feathers falling out, being replaced by a thin membrane. The more her body changed, the less kindness she contained.  

Doctor: (Fluttershy) I think I’m going to order a big dinner and not leave a tip! Bwahahaha!

Each feather falling off to reveal more and more of her bat wings. Her ears became that of a bat's as well as growing long, sharp fangs. Eclipse was amazed at the transformation. The mare’s change was very different than how she changed. It must be that her mind is, or rather was, stronger than mine.

Doctor: Not sure what that means.

        When Fluttershy seemed to have stopped shape shifting, Eclipse asked, “How do you feel?”

Ditzy: (Fluttershy) I don’t think that’s any of your business! (Giggles) Being evil is so fun!

        “I...I don’t know,” The newly created vampire replied. Her body felt so... so...different. Eclipse watched as Fluttershy's coat darken to black and her eyes go from teal to red. What I am talking about, of course I know how I feel!

Doctor: (Fluttershy) I can’t wait to take an unnecessarily long time to write a check at a cash register!

        “You sure you don’t know,” Eclipse asked as she watched her closely. Then, right before the vampire was about to answer, a dark red light appeared on her flank. When the light faded, a new cutie mark had taken the place of her normal three butterflies. It was of a bat ripping through a butterfly.

Ditzy: (Fluttershy) I could really go for some mosquitoes right now.

        “Yes my queen, I know how I feel,” the pony once known as Fluttershy finally said. (Eclipse noted the she called her queen.)

Ditzy: (Eclipse) Ahhh… I wanted to be a princess!

“I feel amazing.”

Doctor: (Fluttershy) Does anypony have some apples? I’m sooo thirsty!

With that, the shy pegasus that used to be Fluttershy ceased to exist. In her place, the vampire known as Draintooth was born.

Doctor: Draintooth? Really?

Trixie: Were you even trying with that one?

Ditzy: Wait a minute, what about Angel? He’s still sick!

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Chapter 3

Rainbow Dash couldn’t sleep. It felt like something was forcing her to stay awake.

Doctor: It was her time to be turned into a monster with little resistance.

Why can’t I sleep.

Ditzy: (Rainbow) I knew I shouldn’t have drank those eight energy drinks tonight.

Rainbow asked her self. She needed to find out.

Trixie: (Rainbow) I know! I’ll bug a certain super egghead to research it for me!

If something is doing this, it would have to be in the Everfree. Rainbow Dash thought to herself as she burst out of the door.

Doctor: Only evil magic could cause that leap of logic.

Eclipse studied the markings carefully.

Ditzy: (Eclipse)(Reading) Ands o, teh eluments shalll be rebonr intu purfect beeings of darknes. Did they even proofread these things when they were written?!

Trying to determine what the other two did. One just completely stumped her.

Ditzy: Not even a strategy guide could help her.

It seemed to require too much magic to work. The other one seemed to need magic from someone to activate it.

Trixie: (Eclipse) And where can I get a trained chimpanzee at this hour?

“Servant, come over here,” Eclipse said, even though the mind control broke during the transformation. Drain still did everything Eclipse told her to do.

“Yes, my queen,” Draintooth said as she flapped her new wings,

Ditzy: (Draintooth) You...you stupid head! (Giggles) I love being mean and bad!

Doctor: (Eclipse) Ugh, it is going to be an uphill battle with this one.

bringing her over to Eclipse in seconds. Eclipse activated her magic then, suddenly they were teleported to a castle.

Trixie: Right into Princess Celestia’s bedchamber.

This place is amazing, did master build this?

Ditzy: Twilight minored in architecture at magic school.

Drain thought as she examined the black stones that made up majority of the building.

Ditzy: Because evil is very uncreative with its color scheme.

Doctor: It must really stink being evil. You are stuck with only about 3 colors at most.

“I’ll have to check this place out later, another one of our friends seem to be entering the cave, and I would like to watch,” Right after Eclipse said this she opened a magic viewing portal to look at the cave.

        As Rainbow entered the cavern, she was struck with awe.

Ditzy: (Rainbow) This looks like something out of a Daring Do novel!

The fire dancing in the torches were a wonderful site.

Trixie: They were doing the jitterbug.

There was a majestic sphere hanging in mid-air with indents along its surface. It was almost begging to be touched.

Ditzy: (Sphere) Please please please touch me! Pretty please with sugar on top!

Nothing bad will happen if I touch it. The pegasus thought as she moved towards it. When her hoof touched the sphere, it was like her entire body froze, she needed to heat up. As if to answer her call. Spikes shot out from the indents, some empailing Rainbow.

Doctor: (Rainbow)(Sniffling) I just wanted a blanket!

Then all she knew was heat. Her body crumpled into ash. Leaving her soul to burn. The ash reformed making new wings and armour. The rest was just a flame, kept in check by an invisible force.

Doctor: We call it Phil.

As Eclipse reappeared back in the cavern. She asked, “How are you?” The Elemental didn’t know, she hated being transformed without her consent, but at the same time. It just felt so good.

Doctor: Oh sure it seems great now, but then you start monologuing and sending enemies into needless death traps then it is all downhill from there.

No, she couldn’t think like that. But why not? The elemental was torn. On the border of light and dark. As her thoughts transformed, so did part of her body. Two eyes made of blue flame formed, she gained a helmet that had a mark of a burning rainbow.

Ditzy: As in a rainbow on fire? That’s just silly!

The element of loyalty was corrupted into the element of pride as she fell into darkness.

Trixie: Because it wouldn’t be as self destructive as the the Element of Disloyalty.

Ditzy: Element of Pride? That sound familiar somehow.

Trixie: Trixie has no idea what you’re talking about.

“I feel great my queen,” Replied the elemental. Rainbow Dash was Gone, now only Ashburn remained, and she was her to stay.

Ditzy: (Ashburn) Whatever else happens, I am... Ashburn. Whether you like it... or not.

Doctor: Ha.

                Author's Note:

You get a to find out who is next if and only if you can guess the naming pattern pattern

Trixie: TSFSRDRPPAJ?

Ditzy: Oh! How about TSFSRDAJRPP?

(I will message you)

Trixie: (Author) And win an all expenses paid trip to Haywaii!

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Chapter 4

“How do I get you to work?” Eclipse asked herself as she tinkered with the marks on the wall, trying different spells on them.

Doctor: Have you tried turning it off and on again?

Trixie: Have you tried kicking it a few times?

        “Do you need help my queen?” Ashburn asked as she used her new wings to blaze a trail over to her, leaving sparks in her wake.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) Ow! Ow! Ow! Watch where you are flying!

Her pride could be useful. Eclipse thought as she looked over to her slave.

Trixie: (Ashburn)(Snorts) So much for the egghead. Move over and let somepony as awesome as me handle it.

        “No, but how do you think we should go about improving Spike?” Eclipse asked to keep her busy.

Ditzy: His chiseled features aren’t handsome enough?

Trixie: (Blinks) What?

Doctor: Don’t mind her. She’s lost in her own little world.

        “Dragons can breathe fire,  so there must be a source.

Doctor: (Ashburn) Maybe there’s a nuclear reactor in his body!

If I can get to that, the rest should happen on its own,” Ash said, though she had no idea what she just talked about.

Ditzy: I know! They could shrink down and have an adventure in Spike’s body!

        “That just might work. We'll have to try it later,” Eclipse said as one of the markings lit up. “Let’s go. One of the elements is nearing the cave."

Doctor: (Eclipse) Hmm. Looks like it’s going to rain and it will probably flood the cave.

        “Yes my queen,” the vampire and elemental said as Eclipse teleported them out.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) Now we can throw her a surprise ‘welcome to the darkness’ party!

        Applejack thought she was a flame in the distance.

Ditzy: Ha! Got it!

Trixie: Dang it.

It doesn’t seem too big... she thought as she went out with a bucket of water to the Everfree forest.

Trixie: (Snorts) She’s trying to stop a forest fire with a bucket of water?

Ditzy: Come on, evil magic told her to do this… I guess.

As she walked towards the source of the light, her thoughts started to wonder.

Doctor: (Applejack) Ah wonder, how did the song Bohoovian Rhapsody go again? Is this the real life? Am I in a fantasy? No that can’t be right.

What caused the fire? Will Zecora be there? Will this one little bucket of water be enough?

Trixie: (Applejack) If only I knew a unicorn with a giant head that could move a lot of water around easily.

She was so deep in thought, she didn’t even notice when she went off the path towards the cavern.

Ditzy: And accidentally tumbled off a cliff. Ouch.

When she entered the cave, the torches petrified her. They screamed of her impending burning hell should she touch them.

Trixie: Touch a torch and you go to hell.

In the center of the room, the source of the 'fire' became clear.

Doctor: (Applejack) Oh! It was just a campfire. Silly me.

Applejack moved towards it slowly, not wanting any booby traps to spring on her. As she neared the center, she started to smell the smoke. It smelled amazing.

Trixie: (Applejack) Has somepony been vaping?

She didn’t notice she dropped the bucket. She didn’t notice she started drooling, either. All she could focus on was that delicious smell and what it's origin would taste like. When she finally made it to the source of the smoke, her body started to change.

Ditzy: What? How does that work? She wasn’t exposed to fire or fruit punch or whatever.

Trixie: The author is getting lazier with these transformations.

Claws started digging their way through her hooves her nose started to morph itself into a wolf’s. Her teeth grew and became sharpened. At first it was painful, then the farm pony’s ability to think started to desentigrate,

Doctor: Reality television and Nascar became her new favorite pastime.

making her only feel pleasure as her body morphed. As the smoked dissipated, so did Applejack's inner light. Her thoughts were consumed with darkness and feral emotion.

Doctor: So what do werewolves have to do with smoke and fire exactly?

“How are you, my lycan?” Eclipse asked as she teleported herself and her slaves  back to the cavern.

Trixie: (Eclipse) No! Get off me! I’m your Queen! Bawurfhiuasvrvsaji!

Doctor: (Applejack) As sweet as granny’s apple pie!

“That’s a mighty good question,” The lycan said, not being able to come up with anything else. Then she felt a surge of darkness. Her body became twice as big.

Ditzy: Opps. That wasn’t suppose to happen.

Her face became a wolf's. A mark appeared on her hoof of a claw ripped out of a apple.

Ditzy: She has a Xenomorph cutie mark?

“Answer the question,” Ash said from the corner.

Doctor: (Applejack) I don’t know. A little gassy maybe?

Trixie: (Applejack) I could really go for a sprite right now.

“I feel great,” the lycan in question growled out. “If you allow me my queen, do you know how all of this, this greatness happened?”

“I think I can answer that,” a dark voice boomed as the king of darkness appeared in front of the monsters, with his trademark grin in tow.

Ditzy: Oh my gosh! It’s Ganondorf.

Trixie: Figures he would be behind this!

                Author's Note:

I made some edits to the other chapters, manly just more description.

Doctor: (Author) Now I have three sentences of descriptions instead of one!

The next challage is to guess what king sombra

Ditzy: King Sombra? Oh come on! I was hoping for somepony cool.

Trixie: Trixie wants Ganondorf! Not some bland overdesigned evil unicorn.

to say. I will massage people the prize.

Doctor: My guess? Crystalssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!

Ditzy: Yeah, he’s kind of like a Pokemon like that.

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Chapter 5

“Sombra!” Drain screamed as she got into attack position. Ashburn joined her as her flame burned bright.

“Relax, I am here to help,” Sombra said as he drifted around the room.

Ditzy: Would you stop that and stay still? It’s really distracting.

“What could you offer us?” Eclipse said with Venom.

“How about power?” Sombra replied. Eclipse’s eyes lit up at that.

Doctor: (Yawns) Is that all?

Trixie: Power for what?

“Go on,” Eclipse said.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) I’m so pathetically weak in this form. I need your help to get stronger!

“You see, I used to be apart of my own kingdom of monsters. They had something you lack.

Trixie: They didn’t have stupid names?

Dark Magic.”

Trixie: Why are you speaking in bold?

Sombra said with a grin bigger than Pinkie Pie’s,

Doctor: (Rolls eyes) And here I thought this might actually say something original.

“it would be such a waste to see such power go to waste, after all, I am the one who set this whole thing up.”

Trixie: (Sombra) Xanatos eat your heart out!

“How did you survive the crystal empire?” Ash asked.

“I have my ways,” Sombra said smugly. “Now what about my offer?”

Doctor: (Eclipse) Not until you answer my question, mister.

“I accept, how do I gain your magic?” As Eclipse said this, Sombra laughed.

“Easy, You abzorb my very essence, it will kill me, but I think you want that. Here,”

Doctor: You’re sacrificing yourself for the greater evil? You expect me to believe that?

Ditzy: Yeah, being evil means you’re nothing but super selfish!

sombra teleportation a piece of paper and wrote down a spell on it. “This is how you do it.” Eclipse looked the spell over.

Trixie: (Eclipse)(Reading) You put your right foot in. Your right foot out. Right foot in. Then you shake it all about. And then you do the hokey pokey. Turn yourself around.

“Let’s begin,” Eclipse said lighting up her horn. Dark magic wasn’t pleasant to cast. It took a lot of negative emotion.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) I know! I’ll think of the time Trixie came to Ponyville! That could power a hundred dark spells!

Trixie: Ha.

Not only that, but it did lead her to her worst fear.

Ditzy: Quesadillas!

As the spell continued. Sombra shrieked in pain. Dying in agony.

Trixie: (Sombra)(Gasping) Yep, totally worth it. Yep.

The spell went on. And soon the dark magic started to take it’s toll. Eclipses’ mind became less and less able of thinking of anything other than hate Clawdark felt it, too.

Ditzy: Who? Oh right, Applejack. You forgot to name her last chapter.

Doctor: Clawdark? These names are getting worse somehow.

Her mind being consumed by rage.

Trixie: Yes. Yes. Let the hate flow through you.

Drain seemed to be in pain. While Ash seemed to be craving something.

Ditzy: (Ash) I could really go for a taco right now.

The longer the spell went on. The more darkness sounded appealing. Who needs light, darkness is better. It gives so much more power.

Ditzy: It also makes you hit your knees on coffee tables.

Trixie: Trixie thought they were already in the dark. The chapters told us this in agonizing detail.

Ditzy: They are super dark now I guess.

Twilights scales began to drip darkness. Her mane turning oily black.

Ditzy: Ick.

Doctor: I think they have a shampoo for that.

As well as she grew in fangs of her own. Drain’s coat seemed to shrink, leaving her leathery skin open, not only that. but her tail became a bat’s tail,

Doctor: You mean small and thin like a mouse’s tail?

making it able to grab anything within reach,

Trixie: She was part monkey.

Ditzy: Since when do bats grab things with their tails?

Ash changed color from a burning red to a dark orange. Her armour started to gain visible cracks that darkness leaked out of.

Trixie: And...that’s a good thing?

Doctor: (Ashburn) Ha! Now my armor is easy to breach and barely protects me! Eat that, forces of good!

Clawdark’s fur seemed to change color, from orange to a dark brown. Her nose made itself like that of a wolf’s with a bit of pain.

Trixie: Wait. Trixie thought it was already like a wolf.

Ditzy: Now it's super wolfy!

There eye’s all changed. The whites of their eyes becoming green and with purple trails at the end of them. even Ash’s who were now on her lowering helmet.

Ditzy: Cool?

“Now, Who should we improve next?” Eclipse asked with her new, more snake like voice.

Doctor: Then why didn’t you say “Now, who sssssssshould we improve next?”

“Maybe Rarity?” growled Clawdark, as if words were still a new concept.

“Works for me,” approved Ashburn as her voice seemed to come from everywhere at once.

[b]“Sounds like fun!” Screamed Draintooth loudly.

Trixie: (Eclipse) Ah! Why are you yelling?!

Doctor: (Draintooth)(Screaming) I don’t know! This transformation seems to have made me unable to control the volume of my voice! Don’t worry about it though! I’m sure you’ll get used to it!

Ditzy: Why is everypony er monster speaking in a different color? And what does that even mean?

Doctor: Regular text is dull. Let’s brighten things up with colored text!

Ditzy: I thought this was suppose to be a super dark edgy fic?

“Very well,” Eclipse hissed as she activated her new, curled horn and one of the markings lit up. “While I’m overseeing that, Applejack, you should go improve your family.

Trixie: (Applejack) Ah thought my name was Clawdark….

Ditzy: Great, not even the characters can get all these new names straight.

[color=#7AAF26 “Welcome to the pack, Bite,”]Ash you should go improve Spike, oh and when you're done, burn down the library. Drain, you can go where you like.”

Ditzy: (Draintooth)(Yelling) Thank you. I was thinking of going to the bingo hall tonight. I hear they have some nice cash prizes. It will make it a lot easier to take care of my animals. If... if that is okay with you I mean.

“Yes my queen,” they all said in unison as they moved out.          

                Author's Note:

Who should be first (NOT next) AJ's family or Spike. Cast your vote. (next is Rarity)

Ditzy: Ha! Knew it!

Trixie: Yeah yeah.

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Chapter 6

As the fastinheratanisha woke from her  slumber, she thought:

Trixie: What the hay is a fastinheratanisha? Is that even a word?

Doctor: The author is like Shakespeare and is inventing his own words.

I am too nervous to sleep. I have to finish in order. isn’t it a nature peice, I should take a walk to get a inspiration. Then she left the safety of her house never to return.

Ditzy: Spoilers again! Come on!

        Eclipse smiled as she slithered around her castle. Now all I need is Pinkie pie and all my friends will be perfect.

Doctor: Speaking of that, didn’t you say you were already perfect before you transformed into this new form? So does this make you doubly perfect now? Or does that mean the first form wasn’t actually perfect after all?

As Eclipse moved around she noticed a twinge of pain as she moved around.

Ditzy: Poor thing has a thorn stuck in her tail.

I wonder what that could be. She soon found out that it was one of the marks in the cave. It must be an alarm.

Trixie: Trixie loves the throbbing pain alarm. She should get one for her cart!

Eclipse then opened a viewing portal to watch the show.

Trixie: (Eclipse) Hey! Blues Clues is on! I love this show!

        Rarity's walk took her to the Everfree. On her way in, there was a flash of dark green light in the distance.

Ditzy: A rave was going on.

As the dark light of the cavern drawn her into the cave.

Trixie: (Rarity) Ick. There are glowing spots everywhere! What the hay did ponies do in this place?

She was incaptivated by the mirror in the middle. The design on the ridges was so elegant. As Rarity moved closer, she started checking herself out.

Ditzy: (Rarity) Looking good!

The mirror made her even more beautiful. Her mane was in new style.

Trixie: An afro.

And her fur was a shining red. As Rarity moved closer to the mirror. Her sides started to ache. When her hoof touched the mirror it cracked at the same time as 4 hooves jetted out from side. It was okay though. It was the price to pay for being beautiful.

Doctor: 15 bits plus shipping and handling!

When her hoof touched the mirror. It shattered as Rarity screamed in pain. Her skin became a dark red. Extra eyes forced their way from her skull. Her tail fell off as a sack formed on her back. The more her body changed, the less painful the change became until it became a pleasurable experience.

“So, how do you feel?” Eclipse asked in the most innocent voice she could muster.

Trixie: (Rarity) Not so great. My acid reflux is acting up again.

“I feel…” The Arachne couldn’t finish her sentence. She was hideous. Or was she. The more she thought about it. The more beautiful she felt. “Beautiful.”

Doctor: See, you're only as beautiful as you think you are!

With that, Rarity was no more. Her jaw opened up and became four separate parts.

Ditzy: You are one ugly motherbucker!

She also gained eyes of shadow. Her element twisted into the element of Vanity. Archnea was born.

Trixie: (Archnea) I would love to go out and convert ponies darling, but it’s muddy out and I just got a manicure!

“Wonderful, now go tell Claw to convert all of the farmers and Ash to improve the weather team and Scootaloo,” as Eclipse said this.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) I am singling out Scootaloo because obviously that tiny child is a big threat to my plan!

Liquid shadow rushed out of her scales leaving a dark trail wherever she went.

Doctor: (Archnea) Who? Sorry darling, but I have no idea who you are talking about.

“As for me, I am going to take a trip.”

Trixie: (Eclipse) To Disneyland.

“Yes me queen,” Archnea said as she went off.

Ditzy: (Archnea) Hey look, a mirror! I think I will stay here instead of wasting my time with that boring old mission.

When she was gone Eclipse laughed and teleported to canterlot.

Author's Note:

That's it for tonight, cast your votes, Aj's family or Spike.

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Chapter 7

I need to find Applejack. Big Mac thought as he ran through the orchard. As he searched for his sister. He heard one of the trees being bucked. AJ must have gotten’ an early start to the day. As he approached where the noise came from he felt a sharp pain in his leg. When he turned around his eyes widened in horror at the thing biting at her leg.

Ditzy: And Clawdark’s eyes widened when Big Mac bucked her in the face!

That was too easy.

Trixie: (Clawdark) It’s like the author set the difficulty to ‘little baby mode’.

Claw thought as her jaw let go of her brother. Claw barely kept in her laughter as her brother changed into a lycan.

Ditzy: Lycan transformations are always a barrel of laughs!

Big Mac howled in pain as claws digged their though his hooves. His snout and face became wolfish and his fur became grey. Big Mac’s thoughts were consumed by nothing but feral emotion as his memories were erased. Leaving only the very basics of his personality intact as well as a new undying obedience to the alpha.

Trixie: (Alpha) Aye-yi-yi-yi-yi! Zordon, why am I the one leading a pack of werewolves?!

        There was a sharp pain in Claw’s ears as they became even more wolf like.

Doctor: Is there any point to these transformation? I thought they were already powerful creatures of darkness.

Ditzy: Ugh, all these transformations and new names are really getting hard to keep track of!

Her breath now left everything it touched forever covered in darkness.

Trixie: And how is she suppose to see where she is going now if her breath constantly blocks her view?

Her mind also changed, transforming into a harsher pony as well as basic pack mentality.

Doctor: It also made her chase after squirrels, sticks, and mailponies.

       “Welcome to the pack, Bite,” Claw said, thinking that it was her right as alpha to choose the name.

Doctor: That isn’t even trying.

        “Thank you, alpha. Now what are your orders,” Bite said without any hesitation. His transformation was complete with a mark appearing of a bite out of an apple.

Doctor: Bite later used it as the basis of a logo for the new brand of computer he was making.

“Go to the Everfree and wait for more of the pack,” Claw growled out. Making it impossible to understand if you were not a monster.

Ditzy: Great, that might make getting something at a Drive-thru even more difficult!

After he ran off. Claw turned around and said: “Now, I assume you have something to say.”

“I am serving as the queen’s messenger, she wants you to improve every farmer in ponyville,”  Archnea said as she crawled out of a tree.

Trixie: (Clawdark) Thanks for wasting my time. I was already under the impression I should do that.

“I can do that, just got to finish convertin’ ma family,”  Claw said as she waited for Archnea to leave. When she finally left. Clawdark laughed.

Trixie: (Clawdark) Her face looks like an old mare’s vag!

Claw was careful to not wake Applebloom as she moved to bite her. Until she got frustrated and nearly bit off her hoof. The youngest of the Apples screamed in pain as her body transformed.

Ditzy: This is just low. You didn’t need to show this!

Trixie: (Twists her face in disgust)

Doctor: (Shakes head)

Her hooves ripped open as claws came out. Her entire body transformed to fit her new animalistic instincts. Her nose and ears became sharper and her fur became grey. The memories of Applebloom were drowned out by the new feral instincts.

Ditzy: And yet, did not curb her drive to find her cutie mark!

Clawdark felt a wave of power wash over her. Her teeth grew and became a sickly yellow. Her fur grew and her main fell off.

Doctor: (Sighs) Didn’t you just transform earlier in the chapter?

She was uncontrollable drooling as her mind gained the ability to think more

Ditzy: She made a big mess on the floor! But she’s evil, so I guess she doesn’t care about things like that.

“Welcome to the pack, Snarl,” Claw said with a snarl of her own.

Doctor: It seems this newfound intelligence did not improve her naming skills.

“Thank you Alpha, do you want me to join Bite?” Snarl asked as the last bit of pony was destroyed.

Ditzy: Um, how does she know who Bite is? She just transformed.

Trixie: So why doesn’t Snarl get to talk in bold? Trixie would think it would him of all pon-monsters.

Her fur changed color to grey and grew to twice the normal length. Claw nodded and Snarl ran off.

Ditzy: (Snarl) Maybe I could get my cutie mark in frisbee catching!

Doctor: (Clawdark) Ugh.

Author's Note:

Over the next couple hours I will be making my other chapters longer.

Ditzy: This is the HD special edition version of Kingdom of Monsters!

So if you see the word edited by the chapter name, that means that it has been edited. Also, if you want to be my editor then message me.

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Chapter 8

This is bad, this is very very bad! Luna thought as she moved to the far side of her room. She needed to find that chess board. It was the only way to solve this.

Doctor: Oh so THAT’S how you beat possessions: chess! Who would’a thunk it?

At least it could stall until Celestia woke up.

Ditzy: The princess needs her beauty sleep! Waking her up now would just be rude!

She’s coming! The night princess thought as she set up the chess board. She spent the next five minutes trying to calm herself down. She almost succeeded until Eclipse teleported in.

Doctor: The princess was very particularly about how she treats guests. Oh, and the fact she’s an evil snake monstrosity I guess.

          “How are you doing, Luna?” Eclipse said casually as she sat down opposite of Luna.

Trixie: Nice puke-green text. It fills Trixie with terror just by looking at it.

        “Fine, I assume you know how this chess game will work,” Luna said in the best monotone she could muster.

Trixie: (Luna) Don’t sound like you’re going to pee yourself, don’t sound like you’re going to pee yourself.

Ditzy: (Eclipse) Of course! I will jump all your pieces in minutes!

        “It makes sure that the bet that is made over it must come true, as long as it is possible, right?” Eclipse stated as her scales curled around the chair. Luna nodded.

Trixie: So Trixie couldn’t use it to make this better story then?

        “How about this, if you win I submit to you, if you will stop your conversation effort entirely,” Luna probused.

Trixie: (Luna) This green text is hurting my ears.

Doctor: I don’t blame her. Eclipse is a terrible conversationalist. It’s always darkness this and darkness that. Blah blah blah….

Ditzy: It’s like talking to Ansem.

          “Works for me, now then, lets begin!” The lamia said as the chess board glowed. The game had begun.

Doctor: Wait, so the only thing Luna gets if she wins is an ended conversation?

       “You know, you could always join willingly,” Eclipse said as she moved her knight.

Doctor: I thought the deal was that you would shut that big fat gob of yours.

       “Why would I do that?” Luna asked.

      “Simple, everypony must die, right?” Luna nodded.

Ditzy: (Luna) Have thee forgotten I’m already immortal?

“Simple, everypony must die, right?” Luna nodded. “Well, to be blunt, monsters don’t die.”

Doctor: Really? Huh. It looks like I’ve been doing it wrong this whole time.

Trixie: They also have stupid edgy names and shop at Hot Topic. Death doesn’t seem so bad.

Luna gasped, they were immortal. How is that possible?

Ditzy: I don’t know. Nothing about them makes any sense.

It didn’t matter they were still converting ponies against their will. They were still evil. Or are they?  “All you have to do is forfeit. Then you will never be alone.”

Trixie: All you need to do is give up your individuality and everything that makes you who you are!

Eclipse said to Luna with a smirk. Luna kept playing, but it was clear that Eclipse had already won. That broke Luna’s resolve for good.  

Ditzy: Shinji Ikari has more grit than this princess.

As Eclipse finally checkmated the lunar princesses, she looked as if this is what she wanted and Eclipse’s scales were already around her.

Doctor: (Flat) What an upset.

Trixie: (Flat) This is the most shocking twist Trixie has ever seen.

“Now then, time to welcome you to the kingdom,”  after she said this she let the darkness that was flowing out of her to touch Luna. Making her buckle and shake. Her legs turned into a shenake’s tail. Her fur turned into scales and both became a green shade. Luna was drowned out in the power she now felt. Her memories replaced with the need to serve her new queen.

Doctor: Hmmm. I think that Luna might be right about them not truly being evil.

Eclipse Serpent felt amazing as power washed over her.

Ditzy: She started reenacting a Herbal Essences commercial.

Her eyes became cat like slits. Her mane turned into miniature snakes with glowing green eyes.

Ditzy: Sure that sounds cool, but now she has to feed every single one!

Then the darkness came. Her thoughts were now full of hate and spite. Her love of learning and knowledge replaced

Trixie: Now she burned books for fun!

with a hate for ponykind and anything that was not devoted to her and her alone along with the ability to hide it.

Doctor: It made her a very interesting and deep character.

Ditzy: Um, wasn’t she already like that?

As she let go of the new lamia, she said, “Welcome to the darkness, Slit.”

All: (Laugh)

Eclipse picked the name just to show that she was in charge.

Ditzy: (Coughs) You might want to give her a less suggestive name.

Trixie: (Eclipse) When I improve Celestia, I think I’m going to call her Prick!

“Thank you for the welcome,” Slit said as the last drop of disobedience was drained from her mind. Her cutie mark reappeared as a snake biting the moon.

Ditzy: (Snake) What is this?! I thought the moon was suppose to be made of cheese! Thanks Yahoo Answers!

Her tongue became forked and she gained a lisp as Equestra lost one of it’s princess to the darkness once again.

Ditzy: Except this time it was a thousand times more lame.

Author's Note:

So, what do you guys think of this chapter?

Trixie: It was… special.

Doctor: You had a chess game and refused to show any of it.

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Chapter 9

Ashburn tried her best to not burn down to the ground. After she creeped up on Spike, who was still sleeping,

Doctor: Goofy sneaking music was playing in the background.

Ditzy: Oh no! Ashburn accidently burned Spike’s comic books! Now she has to find new ones so Spike doesn’t realize he lost them!

she felt the fire inside him. This is going to fun! She thought as she corrupted the flame inside, Spike transforming him.

Trixie: It’s just that easy.

Spike awoke with a pain in his throat.

Doctor: This fic is brought to you by Ricola. Natural herbs guaranteed to soothe any sore throat.

All: Ricola!

He tried to speak, but all he could do was breathe fire that charred the floor.

Ditzy: Great. That’s going to take forever to get out!

The ashes suddenly moved and dug into his skales changing their color to a dark blue. Spike could not control the inferno that was coming out of his mouth. The black flame utterly destroyed the library

Ditzy: (Sniffs) Never forget...

and as more and more ashes found their way into the dragon. The more the darkness took hold. Light what a evil thing.

Ditzy: Yeah! Light was cool until Corona came along!

Spike thought as he grew to three times his previous size.

Trixie: (Snorts) Really? How scary!

Doctor: That would make him roughly the size of Big Mac.

His eyes became like his queens and his spine became the color of her scales.

“How do you feel, my prince?”  Ashburn asked, amazed at her new leader.

Trixie: Wait what? Why is he the leader?

Ditzy: He’s only a few seconds old, maybe there are some tests and training he should take before taking on this role?

“Fine, slave," The shadow dragon said as he examined his claws. Which were now made out of pure darkness turned solid

Trixie: (Spike) How the hay did my claws get so dirty? I was just born a second ago!

“I would hope so, Shade,” the queen said as she teleported in. Ash bowed.

“So, what should we do now, Eclipse?” After Shade said this, Ash gasped He called master by her name!

Ditzy: (Ashburn) Why can’t Eclipse-senpai notice me too?

“You should go to the outlands and convert there. I will be overseeing ponyville,” Eclipse said, then she added: “oh, and Ash, you go convert the weather team, along with Scootaloo.”

Doctor: (Eclipse) Everything would be ruined if she was running around!

Ash bowed as she flew off. Shade’s deparchter wasn’t far off from that. When they were both gone, Eclipse laughed like a mad mare.

Doctor: And now she’s laughing maniacally. How long until she starts putting people in death traps and unnecessarily monologues her plan?

Author's Note:

look for mistakes

Trixie: Are you really sure you want an answer to that?

Ditzy: You didn’t capitalize that sentence for one.

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