Hello again. This time we will be reading Night Fall Equestria. A revenge story where Twilight is raised from the dead and gives in the dark side so she can get back at Sombra and Chrysalis (Oh course it’s them) for killing her! This isn’t your daddy’s MLP. It has extreme violence, torture, and swearing and Twilight kills people! It’s pretty silly, but enjoyable in a way. I had fun with this one.

If you have a fanfic recommendation, comments, or criticisms please leave a comment or PM me at my fimfiction account or my blog on Tumblr. Please NO clop or fanfiction with extreme violence. I am not going to do those. I want to do a more family friendly series and it is going to be relatively clean. Besides everyone else does them. Okay, I might do one for a special occasion. But otherwise no clop or extreme gore fics. Ok, enough rambling. On with the fic!

Thank you FLUTTERxxDASH for letting me use your fic! You are awesome!

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Doctor and Ditzy’s Science Theater

by Rixizu

Episode 27 - Part 1

Trixie yawned as she skimmed the book titles in the library. Calling it a library was pushing it a bit. There were only about sixty books here or so. There was a wide variety of genres. Most were fictional, but the non-fiction titles ranged from geology to bizarre like rockology and the study of subtleties of lint. They were all used too. Dinky, whoever she was, was cheap. Apparently, anything not created by holograms she bought used. She wrinkled her brow in disgust. Their host wasn't a generous one.

She sighed dramatically. Of course, the Great and Powerful Trixie shouldn’t be here. She should be out in Las Pegasus entertaining the masses with her amazing and splendid magic. Not trapped here. She gritted her teeth. It didn’t take long for the amazement of this strange facility and her situation to wear off. Trixie wanted to go home already to her new cart. She belonged on the road, not here.

Trixie did not understand how those other two kept their sanity. They both seemed to take their imprisonment in stride. They seemed to accept it somehow. According to the Doctor, he was just biding his time until the right opportunity to escape. Whatever that meant. Did he really not care it might take years for that opportunity to appear? Maybe never at all? Ditzy's assessment he was some sort of genius was a grand exaggeration.

She refused to sit still and wait. The Great and Powerful Trixie would find a way out of here. She would search every small nook and cranny in this place. Sure, the Doctor and Ditzy claimed they already did that, but Trixie didn’t care. She wanted to see for herself. They might have missed something and Trixie would be damned before she would just sit around hoping for a rescue or an escape opportunity that would never come. Or worse, depend on Sparkle of all ponies to save her. One way or another, she would find a way out of here.

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"Hi, Trix!" Ditzy greeted as Trixie entered the main meeting room. The Doctor gave a small nod.

“Hey.” Trixie, for her part, gave a vague wave in return.

“How did the search go?” Ditzy asked.

That took Trixie back. She was careful in not making her intentions known. “Well…”

"We both thought the same thing after getting trapped here," Ditzy answered as if reading her thoughts, "can't say I blame you.”

The Doctor shrugged. “Well, who knows? Maybe a new head might think of something we didn’t.”

“That’s strange coming from you.” Ditzy teased. “I thought it would be impossible for a super genius to miss any possibility."

The Doctor snorted. “I’m no omniscient. I’m serious. I perfectly willing to swallow my pride in being wrong if it means getting out of here.”

Ditzy rolled her eyes. “That would be a first.” The Doctor smiled and shook his head.

Trixie sighed. “There has to be a way out of here.” The last three hours had been less than fruitful. Why couldn’t there be a convenient air duct for them to use?

“Naturally.” The Doctor agreed. “Dinky will make a mistake sometime, and then we pounce on it.” He smashed his hoof on the ground for emphasis.

“And that will never happen.” Dinky scoffed. Her voice came out of the main monitor.

The Doctor waved a dismissive hoof. “If you say so.”

Dinky muttered something inaudible under her breath. It amused Trixie to see how easy it was for the Doctor to get under Dinky’s skin. Something she would have to ask about later. It might come in handy.

“Anyways, my little test subjects,” Dinky said to get back on topic, “today you will read Night Fall Equestria by FLUTTERxxDASH, chapters 1-3. Enjoy.” Dinky gave out that stupid evil laugh of hers.

“Ah, so this is the classic Asimov story, but with ponies.” The Doctor said.

"Not another long multi-chapter experiment." Ditzy sighed. "I really hope this isn't another 20 parter."

Trixie was about to agree when a loud blaring alarm went off. She reflexively covered her ears from the painful noise.

“Ready?” The Doctor asked her over the noise. She nodded, and they all entered the theater.

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The Abyss

The room was pitch black apart from the light red glow of the crystals, a dark figure came in front of the light and came closer to the tied up Twilight Sparkle, "Child, how does it feel to be so helplesss, you're teacher, you're friendsss, all gone and you are a husk of the mare you used to be,

Doctor: (Twilight) Shut up! I’m working out and taking online classes to get my degree! I’m doing great!

without a horn you are nothing," Dark purple magic wrapped Twilights horn and with a loud SNAP!!! The figure tore it from her skull.

Trixie: (Winces) Ouch.

Doctor: Oh, it’s going to be one of those stories.

Screams of pain, noise that just wasn't natural escaped from her mouth,

Trixie: She sounded like a tea pot whistle.

Tears flowed like rapids from her eyes as the trickle of red joined the stream of liquid that escapes her.

A sharp toothed grin came across the figures face, "That was payback my dear little sparkle, for my horn AND body was literally blown apart by you and you're friends,"

Trixie: Really? Seems to me that you missed a certain ‘vital’ part while assembling yourself.

he leaned over and licked some of the liquid, with a low tremble hum, "mmmm tastes like sweet vengeance!!"

Ditzy: With a nice hint of honey!

the venom seemed to drip from his mouth.

Trixie: (Sombra) Wait, um, you don’t happen to have ponyAIDS do you?

A haggid voice came from the beaten body of Twiight,

Ditzy: (Twilight Sparkle) You're a wizard, Harry!

"N..ver..  y.ou..wont...last..so.mbra," gasping for air, coughing and wheezing but her eyes still showed resistance.

Doctor: (Twilight) Tis but a scratch!

"DAMN YOU TWILIGHT SPARKLE!!!

Ditzy: Woah! Language, your evilness!

you will die in here alone, you will lose you're sanity, you will lose you're hope!,"

Ditzy: What is it with villains and wanting ponies to lose hope before they die? Just...just kill them!

Doctor: I’m not going to complain. It’s gotten me out of ton of scraps.

his eyes flared up as purple mist drifted off his green enveloped eyes.

Trixie: For purple mist coming from your eyes, Clear Eyes is awesome. It removes greenness and has an ingredient to moisturize. Wow.

The sound of buzzing came as a second more slender figure came towards her, "Do not worry my king, she cannot escape but just in case," Twilights left front leg was enveloped in green magic as it twisted and turned in ways it shouldn't.

Ditzy: It was used to make an origami crane!

Another set of screams as she nearly passed out from the pain, her captors would not let her slip though as Sombra slammed a hoof into her.

"GAHH!! *COUGH*.......*COUGH* haa...haaaa you bastards!" Twilight now didn't even have the strength to keep her eyes open.

Trixie: Or use proper capitalization.

"Now that was just sick and twisted, HAHA get it 'Twisted', oh Crysalis you are just the sweetest thing mine eyes hast laid upon in centuries," Sombra chuckled as he began to walk out of the light,

Doctor: (Crysalis) Ugh, why did I agree to have an alliance with this dolt again?

Crysalis followed, his voice echoed through the caves, "time is ticking my dear, you're end is soon, say you're prayers in you're last moments, goodbye," the noise of loud creaking doors slamming was the last thing she heard, Twilight then passed out.

Some hours later the moon rises

Twilight awakes, still not having much strength and feeling very disorientated from blood loss, the cold rusting shackles that bind her are sharp cutting into her fur, at this moment the only thing keeping her tied to this plane of existence is the pain she inhabits that is her body.

Ditzy: But they did give her a nice pillow, so it wasn’t all bad.

Knowing full well her horn is gone she know that this will hurt, trying her best to get anything she can from her power, small flickers of purple come from the nub on her head only to be replaced with pain, more screaming and blood pulsated out of the open wound, "this is the.........end, no magic, I cant even see my friends anymore *panting* Spike, I hope he got away, thankfully he stayed with the ponies in ponyville, *Tears flow again* I'm sorry Spike, I'm not coming home anymore,

Doctor: When you get home there you will find

This letter dear that I have wrote to you

And when you read it oe'r

Till then you'll understand

Why I'm not coming home anymore

I think this is it, I'm getting cold" she thought,

Ditzy: This is the big one! You hear that, Elizabeth? I'm coming to join ya, honey!

Twilight with the last of her strength opened her eyes ever so slightly to see the light of the moon through a crack on the roof of the cavern. "funny, the student of the sun falls beneath the moon in her last moments, tragic"

Ditzy: Yeah! Screw Luna and her precious night!

As Twilight began to close her eyes she heard a voice, regal and loud that resonated in her, "Thou would chose death willingly, thine power only amounts to this feeble amount, you worm, struggle for you're existence, I can give you power beyond you're dreams...........

Doctor: (Voice) All for the low low price of 15 bits!

"Who's there"

Ditzy: (Voice) I am thou, and thou art I.

"Thou dost not need to know,

Doctor: (Voice) Just call me.... Steve.

just know I'm the only one left who can save you're sniveling existence, as you're the only one who can now free me, brake thine shackles, accept the darkness,"

Ditzy: Uh, not this again.

Trixie: At least she didn’t stupidly stumble into an evil cave this time.

Twilight realized the voice was not audible through her ears but it was a telepathic connection to somepony.

Trixie: (Twilight) Don’t think dirty thoughts! Don’t think dirty thoughts!

"I'l never accept the darkness," Twilight began to cough blood as she spoke.

"Think child, I can still hear thou through you're mind but you must accept you're hatred, accept the darkness if you wish to free yourself and you're friends, DO IT NOW!!!"

Ditzy: (Voice) Come on, what’s the worse that could happen. (Cough) Except losing your soul. (Cough)

The light in the room started to drift from sight, the moon could not be seen, Twilight felt Liquid at her hooves,

Trixie: Twily had an accident.

It was warm much like a bath at the spa but this liquid was thick and smelled, It smelled of rotten flesh,

Doctor: But you couldn’t deny how nice and relaxing it was.

Twilight didn't even have the strength to puke from the smell, The liquid encased her legs and seemed to crawl up her chest as it seeped into her wounds like nails, digging deep and hard causing pain to thrush through Twilights mangled body. Twilight could feel it pulse through her vains and spread through her body, her arm snapped and popped in a violent manner as it bent back to its original position. The nub on her head began to drip the thick liquid as it started to solidify into a new horn, her fur malted as her skin bubbled, It burnt like she was in the center of the sun itself, in an instant it stopped as she felt knew fur and mane with a tail on her body, the pain wasn't there anymore more so it changed into something euphoric,

Trixie: (Twilight) Oh yes! It’s like I’m touching Celestia!

it was strength, her eyes bolted open, Two red orbs in the pitch black of the cavern as she screamed out not in pain but in power as she tore the chains that held her,

Ditzy: Twilight smash!

the wounds that the chains made sizzled as they healed like brand new. Finally away from her binds she breathes out, A dark red mist escaped her lips, "What is this, its.....its fantastic I've never felt so empowered before"

Ditzy: (Twilight) I can’t wait to see what skill trees I get from this.

The light came back to the room, a pool of red and purple lay under the crystal pillar where she was, "That was the darkness, you said you would resist the power but you accepted it without struggle so easily"

"No I would neve....."

"But Thine power now dost not lie, you did accept it,

Doctor: (Voice) Sure you didn’t actually say that you accepted it, but you probably thought yes at some point and that is good enough for me.

Trixie: What a load of crap.

you're body does not lie,

Ditzy: What is this a hentai?

even now you have changed you're appearance for you're task, the Twilight which once was is now dead, you need a new name, if not you will be soon found by King Sombra and his black arch mage guards"

Trixie: (Voice) You will now be know as Dark McEdgelord.

"But I......I cant change my name what would I be called, I wouldn't be me anymore I would be changed my destiny is with my friends"

Ditzy: Is that how that works?

Doctor: (Shrugs)

"I suggest you look at thine flank and see what you're cutie mark now holds," Twilight began to turn, in the moonlight her cutie mark had changed, the pink star was now red, A black mist flowed from it, the five stars had become a dark purple

Trixie: (Voice) I used Photoshop’s color balance feature and some mist I found off the internet. It’s totally different now!

and she noticed her fur was much darker, almost black itself, apart from that she could not see anything else so she decided to run to a crystal that was able to act like a mirror ever so slightly, "Oh Celestia, What has happened to me, I..I.I've changed so much," her new horn was twisted like before but had small shards point out at different angles, her hair was longer and more messier with the purple turned to deep crimson and her stripe was now black, same with the tail but the worst was her eyes, slitter like a dragons with blood red pupils,

Doctor: Well, with a look like that I’m sure a new name is all she needs to avoid detection from Sombra’s ponies.

"What have I become,"

Trixie: I’ve become an angsty teenager’s OC!

she stumbled back wards and fell on her flank biting her lip, "OW," she licked her teeth and felt four canines as sharp as a knife on the top and bottom of her mouth, "I..I.I...I I'm a monster"

Doctor: (Twilight) And now I have the sudden craving for chicken for some reason.

"As I had said it would be best if thou changed thine name, you are not you anymore, you are not Twilight Sparkle you are much more than that pathetic excuse for a pony, you are the the suns eclipse, you are Astral Star"

Doctor: That’s a lot better than I thought it would be.

Ditzy: Hey! No mention of darkness or black at all!

"Astral Star, It doesn't sound too bad, I cant keep my old name looking like this, Why would you want too it was shit anyway,

Ditzy: (Twilight) I’ve always wanted to be named Dusk Shine instead!

What was that, who was that, Doesn't matter to us," Twilight started to climb the crystals up to the hole in the roof of the cavern, slipping she grazes herself on the razor sharp rocks but stabilizes herself, the crystal had a black liquid dripping upon it now as she carried on climbing finally reaching the hole and climbing out,

Trixie: Unfortunately, Astral Star got an infection in her legs and died again.

"whatever that voice is its quiet now, where do I go now and you still haven't told me who you are,"

The voice comes back, "I told you Astral that it matters not who I am,

Doctor: Too bad, I’m calling you Nancy now.

only that I am here to help, you're friends will be released from their prisons when Sombra falls, but first we must kill the bug queen, she is to the east many will come to block you're way upon this quest but you're body shall tell you what to do"

Ditzy: (Twilight’s body) Forget revenge, get 30 hayburgers at Wacky Hut! I’m starving here!

Trixie: (Twilight’s body) I also really have to pee.

"What do you mean my body will tell me?" Twilight waited but nopony returned her question only silence and the crickets could be heard in the night air, "Atleast tell me how far I'd have to walk, still she said that my friends could be sav.......," Pain spread through her head, FORGET FRIENDS, FORGET FAMILY, ONLY DEATH, KILL THOSE WHO WRONGED US, KILL, KILL, KILL!!!!!,

Doctor: (Voice) Manos has decreed it.

The voice stopped as Twilight opened her eyes again.

"What was that?"

Ditzy: (Twilight) And why did it forget to turn off the caps lock? Next Chapter: Episode 27 - Night Fall Equestria - Part 2 Estimated time remaining: 37 Minutes