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The princesses are dead and gone, leaving us to decay as Celestia’s harmony gives way to tyranny and death.But there is a chance – a shimmer of hope – living in another world. In order to get it, I must first find a mare lost to the wastes.
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The world has grown as sick as the yellow light from the sunset that never ends.

Happiness and hope are lost to the endless dust I walk through. The princesses and their heroes who brought hope into our world are dead and gone, leaving us to decay as Celestia’s harmony gives way to tyranny and death.

But there is a chance – a shimmer of hope to set things right – through a portal to another world.

In order to get to it, I must first find a mare lost to the wastes.


Originally written for the More Most Dangerous game contest, it has been heavily edited into what you see before you.


Rated Mature for profane language, intense themes of violence, and semi-graphic gore.

Written by Nicktendonick, with massive help by KwirkyJ for editing, advising me on this, teaching me how to write in first person past tense, making me a better writer, helping transform my stuff into something much better, and for being just invaluable.

Kwirky, thank you, I would have never finished this thing if it wasn't for you.

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16,825 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 8 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

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Shimmer of Hope

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