Bon Bon's Acceptance-Part 3

Bon Bon lay next to her naked coltfriend, resting her head on his chest. She sighed in contentment after having made love with him, and her marefriend Lyra, who was snuggling against Chris’s other side, purring happily. She opened her eyes and looked towards the unicorn, noticing the happy smile across her lips as she nuzzled her head just under their stallion’s chin.

Lyra truly was a beautiful mare.

Bon Bon smiled to herself as she gazed upon the joyful and relaxed unicorn, then looked up to her coltfriend, who was taking in the dusking sky above.

“Amazing…” Chris whispered in awe.

Bon Bon reluctantly raised her head off of Chris's warm body, then gazed up at the golden sky through the tree tops. Rays of fading sunlight shone through the leaves, illuminating the tiny specks of firelily pollen that floated through the air, creating a beautiful and relaxing atmosphere that brought back many nostalgic memories to her. She would often spend many late afternoons in this forest, completing homework, reading, or just relaxing at the end of the day.

“I can see why you would spend so much time in a place like this…” Chris said softly, running his hand through the back of her curly mane.

Bon Bon blinked, then looked back to Chris, meeting his eyes as he smiled at her. She smiled back with a light blush. “It is beautiful…” she admitted, looking over the forest fondly.

“It really is,” Lyra added, lifting her head from the safety of Chris’s neck as she peered around. “I’m glad I could finally see this place for myself. I always remembered you telling me stories about it when we were fillies and I always tried to picture it in my mind.”

“Is it what you thought it would be like?” Bon Bon asked curiously.

Lyra shook her head. “Not at all! It’s so much better than that! It really sucks that this all of this will be gone in a few days.”

Bon Bon nodded her head sadly in agreement. “I’m just grateful I got a chance to see it again,” she said with a blush, taking in a slow breath through her nose, letting the sweet fragrance of fresh firelilies fill her nostrils before looking back to her loved ones. “But, I’m even happier that I got to share this part of my past with both of you… I honestly can’t express how much this moment means to me, but… thank you both so much for this wonderful gift.”

Lyra and Chris both smiled at her lovingly.

“You’re welcome, Bonny,” Chris said, leaning in to steal a small kiss from the blushing mare.

“I guess this means I can start calling you my coltfriend now,” Bon Bon said with a half-lidded gaze as she looked into Chris’s eyes, then turned towards Lyra. “And after all these years, I can finally call you my marefriend.”

“Took ya long enough,” Lyra teased with a wink, sticking her tongue out. They both giggled before exchanging a small and loving kiss.

“So…” Chris said, rubbing them on the back, causing the two mares to look at him curiously. “Since we’re going to be a herd now… whose house are we going to live in?”

“Well…” Bon Bon started to say, but paused, drawing a little line in Chris’s chest with her hoof. “I was kind of hoping we could all move into your place.”

“My place?” Chris questioned. “Why is that? Your home is pretty nice and closer to town than mine.”

“Yes, but your house is a lot larger…” Bon Bon pointed out softly. “Plus, I really like the location it’s in. It’s just far enough away where it's not too inconvenient to walk into town, and we can have our privacy.”

Lyra nodded in agreement. “And your home is custom-made for you already, so you don’t have to keep ducking your head when you walk through doors,” she added happily with a soft giggle.

Chris ran his hand through his hair, rubbing the top of his head. “Yeah, I guess that’s a good point.”

“Also, your bed is really big… We can fit all of us on it,” Bon Bon pointed out shyly.

“Can it?” Lyra questioned with a teasing smirk. “I don’t know about that one, Bonny… maybe we should test that.”

Bon Bon giggled, then hummed, tapping a hoof to her chin in mock thought. “You know, maybe we should test it a few times. Just so we can get more accurate results,” she teased with a sly grin.

Lyra’s eyes widened in shocked surprise, not expecting Bon Bon to play along, but she quickly composed herself. “Yeah!” she shouted excitedly. “I agree! I mean, we want to really make sure it can fit all of us, and we should also test its durability! You know, cause it’s better to be safe than sorry!”

Chris laughed loudly, holding both mares close to him. “I’m likin’ this idea,” he admitted, wiggling his eyebrows in a playful manner. “Count me in for testing.”

Bon Bon giggled before humming playfully at him. “Well… Maybe if you're a good colt,” she teased before leaning in and kissing him gingerly.

Chris reciprocated, pressing his lips to hers as he placed a hand on the back of her mane. His tongue pressed up against her entrance and she gladly opened, allowing their wet muscles to slowly dance around each other. They let their embrace linger for a moment before pulling back. “I love you, Bonny,” he said softly.

His words sent pleasurable tingles down her spine. She loved hearing him say that. Silver told her the same thing, but it always felt so hollow and empty. Chris was different. His words were warm, honest and true. He really did love her, just like Lyra did. “I love you too, Chris,” she cooed, lying her head back down onto his chest, wrapping her hoof around his barrel.

Chris turned to Lyra and placed his hand behind her head, then gently guided her to lean towards him. “And I love you, Lyra.”

Bon Bon watched as her lovers kissed. They tilted their heads to the side as they leaned in, letting their tongues dance around each other. After a while, they slowly pulled apart, leaving behind a small line of saliva that connected them for a moment before it thinned out into nothing. It was a very arousing and pleasant scene for her to watch and she pouted a bit when they broke it off.

Lyra giggled softly, licking her lips as she leaned back. “And I love you too, Big Guy,” she cooed before joining Bon Bon in lying down on his chest, shutting her eyes once she was comfortable.

Bon Bon let out a happy and content sigh, thinking Lyra had a pretty good idea. Chris was just so warm and cuddly, like a big teddy bear. She never wanted to leave this spot.

Chris laid his head back into the field of flowers, then ran his hands through both Lyra and Bon Bon’s manes, looking up to the darkening sky. They stayed like that, embracing each other and letting the sounds of the forest wash over them before Chris spoke up again. “Girls?” he called to softly, moving his hands to scratch behind both of their ears.

Oh, Sweet Celestia did Bon Bon love it when he did that.

“Hmmm?” Both mares hummed their responses in delight as they leaned into his hands.

“It’s getting pretty dark out,” Chris pointed out. “We should probably go back and find our stuff, then set up camp.”

“Mhmmm… just five more minutes,” Bon Bon muttered softly as she snuggled closer to his body. She wasn’t ready to get up anytime soon and she was half tempted to just ask them both to stay here with her forever.

“Yeah. We got plenty of time,” Lyra added, yawning loudly. “Let’s just chill here for a little while longer.”

Chris chuckled at them both, then shook his head before lying back again. “Just five more minutes. That’s all you two get,” he said firmly.

Lyra groaned softly in disapproval. “Fine…”

Bon Bon smiled and giggled softly at Lyra’s adorable pouting. She nuzzled into Chris’s body a little more, reaching her hoof over and placed it onto Lyra’s, enjoying what little time was left to cuddled with her lovers. She thought to herself a bit while Chris went back to gently petting her mane with that magical hand of his. She just couldn’t believe how much her life had changed in such a short time and she couldn’t have been happier about it. She was in a herd now with the loves of her life, something that she honestly never expected to happen so soon, if at all. It was a wonderful feeling.

Truly. It was the best day of her life.

Author's Notes:

It's nice to see Bon Bon smiling after all this... I hope you guys like the little picture at the end there lol.

Well... this is it... the end of Bon Bon's Acceptance... Kind of hard to believe it’s really over. I wrote over 200k words and people read it… some were even crazy enough to like it...

But! This isn’t the end for these characters. I do plan to do some kind of a continuation of this story as long as people want it. I also plan on making a bonus clop chapter for this story if you guys are interested. It will be about Bon Bon's first heat after a month or so of them being a couple. I might just add it as a bonus chapter or have it as it’s own separate story. Either way, if this is something that you guys want to read, let me know! Also if you liked this story then leave a comment or give me a like!

Now for credits!

A lot of people have helped me with this and I would like to thank them. I'm not a great speller or even that we'll educated when it comes to grammar. I also have dyslexia, which makes it difficult for me to write, so I needed a lot of help to make sure I could provide you guys with the best possible experience. In fact, you can see how bad I am just by looking at this authors note. I don’t let my editors touch these notes, but it’s even worse when I’m moving things around and changing stuff constantly in an actual chapter… I just want you guys to know that my rough drafts are pretty much unreadable and all these guys helped to make it legible.

If I have forget anyone to thank that helped, please let me know.

I would like to thank all my main editors and proofreaders. These are the people that helped me the most and where there from day one pretty much.
Mephistokiller
JeremyStorm
Alcatraz
Laven_Eclipse
Eppie Genetic
BikerPon3
Ven Rose
The Great Reader
Regreme

I would also like to thank my guest editors and proofreaders as well. They came in to help whenever I asked for added assistance or new opinions on chapters when I needed it, or when my main editors couldn’t help on certain chapters.
Flammenwerfer
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PhucknuckL
Etherealunessence

And I want to thank everyone in the comments that pointed out all the mistakes I made so I could fix them later!

But, most of all I think I need to make a special shout out and thank you too… JeremyStorm... this fucker… this piece of shit right here... really helped me a lot... and he’s the best!

Jeremy! You’re so awesome!

He really helped with how this story played out, and I want to tell you guys what he did to help the story. It’s only right that I give credit where credit is due.

The first and most important thing he helped with was the first date chapter. He read it and gave me his honest opinion, saying that Bon Bon was a complete bitch and not likable at all. She was too mean and there was no reason for people to what her to be with Chris and Lyra, and he was right. After he told me this, I went back and changed a lot in the chapter and I think it worked out for the best.

Another thing that was going to be in the story, but Jeremy pointed out was… Luna… Yes… I was going to have Luna in this fic. At first, I wanted to have more dream sequences with Bon Bon and Chris throughout the week in the cabin, then Luna was going to be the one to come down and help Bon Bon see that she can trust Chris after the whole door fiasco. I’m so glad he pointed out how deus ex machina that was, and how bad it would have been to have multiple dreams in the story. It worked out so much better when Berry was the one that came in to talk to Bon Bon… Sooo much better!

There was also the deal with the door being open… Ahhh the door… we argued quite a lot about that… Originally, Chris was supposed to find out the door was open before he had sex with Bon Bon for the first time, but Jeremy argued against it and made a lot of good point, so I changed it to after the intimacy scene. I wish it didn’t work out like that so that things were not so coincidental, but I think it worked out for the better.

Other than that, Jeremy’s pretty much a shit!

No, but seriously, thank you Jeremy for the help!

So… I think I could have handled thing better in this story for sure, but I'm not ashamed to say that I'm proud of what I made. I always hear people tell me "you know, I hated Bon Bon at first, but I loved her once I got to know her." I can't tell you how happy that makes me. That was one of the bigger goals of this story. To have a pony that was a little unlikable turn into somepony sweet and kind once we got to know her and see her get over her prejudices.

I also wanted to write a story that didn't have the pony falling for the love interest right away. There are too many stories that have their character just click instantly and I can't stand that. It feels so fake and forced when the pony just loves the human within seconds of meeting him/her. I wanted to tell a story where it wasn't so black and white like that. Something that showed some grey area when it came to the romance and had some hurdles to overcome.

And I wanted to do a decent herd fanfiction.

I love the idea of a herd. It’s so much fun to read when all the characters just come together in a real way and become apart of each other. Sadly thought… I haven’t read that fic yet! I can’t tell you how many shitty fics I’ve read with this awesome herd idea and they just leave a bad taste in my mouth. Too much of it seems like a crazy mix match of ponies that don’t work well with each other, all because the author wants their OC to bang all of his/her waifus. So, I decided I would try my hand at a this herd thing and see if I can make something that was more believable and enjoyable to read. Did I do that here? I really have no idea, but I like to think I did something decent with it...

Also something that I’m kind of proud of is how we got to know Chris. I know he’s not the best character in the world, but what I like about him is how I introduced him. In the beginning we really don’t know a whole lot about him, but as time went on we started to see who he was at the same time Bon Bon did. I thought that was kind of fun. Would I do that again? No, probably not… I don’t think that’s the best way to tell a story to be honest, but it was fun none the less.

In conclusion. Thank you everyone that read this story to the very end and I truly do hope you enjoyed it. I started writing fic this at a bad time in my life as a way to escape it. I also wrote this as a way to give something back to this community that’s brought me a lot of joy and wonderful memories.

So once again thank you all for reading and I hope to see you in the next story!

If you do want to see more from me, then let me know by watching my account! I have a lot of ideas for things that I would love to write, so stick around!

I love you all!