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Ever since ponies can remember, two benevolent alicorns have watched over them and ruled them. But how did those alicorns get there? And what hardships did they endure?
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The royal princess sisters, Celestia and Luna, have long ruled Equestria. But these two princesses didn't just pop out of thin air, magical and wise. This is the story of two young earth pony sisters, and how they came to be the wise and benevolent rulers they are today.

EDIT: Look, I get that some people think my story sucks, but could you at least comment and give me constructive criticism as to why? Otherwise, I can't make it any better, and everyone will go on hating it.

Everyone
Incomplete
Adventure
Romance
Comedy

2,642 words: Estimated 11 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

2 Chapters:

  1. A Royal Chat [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 25th, 2016
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  2. Moonlight on the Subject [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 29th, 2015
    1,486
Published May 29th, 2015

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