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Grand Theft Auto: Ponytropolis III, Part 2

by Pinkamena666

Chapter 19: Judgement

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Fluttershy ran into the clothing store and gasped, running and kneeling beside Chrysalis.

"Wh-What happened?!" She cried, looking more worried than Twilight has seen her before. "Y-You promised, you'd... You promised me you'd be careful!"

Chrysalis raised a hand as the crying mare began to simply shudder and whimper. "R-Relax..." the Changeling coughed. "Y-You need to listen to me..." She clenched her eyes tightly, letting out a grunt before opening them. "You have to kiss me..."

"K-Kiss you?" Fluttershy asked. "I-I mean I don't have a p-problem with that, but--"

"J-Just, hurry..." Chrysalis grunted, before Fluttershy dove in and kissed her.

Chrysalis began kissing back as she closed her eyes and her horn lit up with a green glow. Twilight turned from Surprise, who was still out cold, and looked at the two kissing. Chrysalis' veins began to glow green as she clenched her eyes. She soon found the strength to hold the mare close as her wound began to close. Her hold on Shy tightened as her kiss deepened and eyes clenched even more tightly. Breathing heavily, she kept the kiss going as her wound finally closed.

She quickly broke the kiss and laid back, her back arching as she let out a grunt. Fluttershy sat up quickly and gasped.

"Wh-What's wrong?" She asked, sounding afraid before noticing the wound was gone. "H-How..."

"Healing spell..." Chrysalis said with a grunt, letting out a deep sigh before laying limply on the floor, panting heavily. "One of... the most... exhausting spells... Both physically and... magically..." Chrysalis explained, panting heavily.

Fluttershy smiled and wiped away her tears. "Th-That's why you... needed me?" She asked.

"Love keeps... a Changeling's magic strong... My love for you is great and... vice versa... so I was able to pull it off..."

Fluttershy leaned in and hugged her again before Twilight looked back at Surprise. The white mare's fingers began to twitch slightly. Seeing this, Twilight gripped her pipe in both hands.

"If you two don't want to see this..." Twi said before looking over her shoulder. "I suggest you leave now..."

Fluttershy looked up at her before looking down at Chrysalis. The Changeling tried to get up but was too weak, letting out a sigh. Twilight looked back at Surprise, who started to open her eyes.

"Wh-Who the fuck..." Surprise groaned, before opening her eyes fully and seeing Twilight. Letting out a growl, she tried to get up but soon felt the restraint around her neck. "Fuck! Get this off me!" She yelled, gripping the bar.

Twilight slowly knelt down over her and smiled darkly. "Now, that I have you right where I want you... the fun... can begin..."

"Oh, the fun?" Asked Surprise with a chuckle. "Gonna shoot me? End it just like that? You don't have the balls..."

"Oh, I got balls alright..." Twi replied before slapping the mare hard across the face. "And, I'm gonna enjoy every second of this..."

Surprise let out a giggle. "Slap me to death? You think that hurt?"

"No..." Twi said, shaking her head as she stood up. "But, this might." She then raised her pipe and brought it down hard on the mare's left shoulder.

Surprise let out a yell as there was a loud crack. "FUCK!!!" She yelled. "You bitch!"

"Ooo, there it is..." Twilight said with a chuckle before stepping on her shoulder, making Surprise yell in pain. "Feel that? That's pain... Hurts nowhere near the amount of pain you've caused us..." She then removed her foot and raised her pipe again. "Shall we list their names?" Twi asked.

"Fuck you!" The white mare yelled, trying her best to hold back tears.

"Let's see... There was... Tech!" She yelled, whacking the mare's elbow.


"Oh, enough of the sappy shit!" Surprise yelled, raising her gun and shooting Tech in the head.

The gunshot made Twilight jump before she realized what happened. "T-Tech?" She asked, looking down at him, and covering her mouth.

"NO!" Yelled Flora. "You bitch! You fucking bitch!"


Surprise let out a yell as another crack filled the air, her elbow shattering from the blow. "FFFFUUUUUCK!!!"

Fluttershy whimpered and looked away. Chrysalis eyed Shy, before eyeing Twilight.

"Let's see... Who else?" Twilight asked teasingly. "Oh, yeah... Emerald!"

Surprise let out another yell of pain when she felt a hard blow to her wrist.


"No!" Yelled Emerald. "I want Twilight back! I want my mistress!" She cried, tears streaming her face.

The white mare stared at her before sighing. "You wanna be with Twilight so bad? Then, be with her," she said, raising her gun and shooting the mare.

Diamond gasped and caught her sister. "Emerald?! NO!"


1 Day Ago, After Surprise's Takeover...

Twilight ran up to the hotel, seeing it in flames with a body laying out front. Running over to it, she gasped and knelt down beside it.

"E-Emerald?" She asked, tears forming in her eyes as she held the limp body of her former pet. "Emerald?" Tears began to stream her face. "No!" She yelled, burying her face in the mare's neck.


"That fucking bitch?!" Surprise yelled, forcing out a chuckle. "You know she died screaming your name?!"

Twilight's face turned to a pissed off scowl before stomping on the mare's broken wrist repeatedly. "Shut... the... fuck... UP!!!" She yelled, wiping a tear away.

Surprise let out a loud squeal of pain that was stopped short when her voice cut out.

"Lightning round!" Twilight yelled, raising her pipe. "This one's for Aqua!" She then whacked Surprise's right shoulder, then her right elbow, and then her right wrist, making the mare yell out loudly. "This one's for me!" She yelled, delivering a blow to the mare's left and right sides, almost breaking her ribs.

Surprise let out yet another pained yell before kicking Twilight away. The unicorn stumbled but kept her balance

"No, I'm not done yet!" Twilight yelled, whacking Surprise's left and right ankles.

The white mare's eyes were now filled with tears as she couldn't find the strength to yell audibly.

"And, it may have been Dune, but... I'm blaming you... for Citrus and Blitz..." She said, pointing the pipe at the white mare. She then brought the pipe don hard on the mare's left kneecap, before going for the right, shattering both. Surprise tried to yell in pain but nothing came out.


Blitz shook his head in disbelief. "I'm not sure... I was doubtful at first, but... seeing that..." he said, pointing at the corpse. "I'm not so sure anymore..."

"Well, I for one would like to believe this is all bullshit," the mare said with a sigh.

Both climbed back in as Blitz turned the key to start the car. There was a click noise before the car exploded into a fireball, car parts flying everywhere as smoke billowed into the sky.


"Now, for the lightning round... EVERYONE YOU KILLED IN THAT HOTEL!!!" She shouted, before going wild and whacking each of the mare's four limbs randomly at random locations.

Fluttershy covered her ears, whimpering softly and clenching her eyes shut tightly, not wanting to hear the brutality of what was going on. After about a minute, Twilight stopped. Looking down upon the mare's mangled limbs, she let out a deep sigh and pulled out her gun.

Surprise was panting shallowly before weakly eyeing Twilight. "Nice... balls..."

Twilight raised her gun and aimed it at the mare's head. "Stop talking..." she said, firing three times.

Hesitating, she slowly lowered the gun and looked at the three bullet holes in the mare's head. Blood trickled out as the mare lay there limply. Not wanting a repeat of what happened with her, Twilight knelt down before feeling Surprise's neck. No pulse. Standing back up, she looked over at Chrysalis and Fluttershy, seeing the pegasus cowering.

Taking a step towards her, Fluttershy inched away with a whimper. Twi stopped, realizing that the mare was afraid of her now.

"I-It's okay, I..." Twilight started, before looking at the doorway to see Midnight and Rainbow Dash standing there.

Twilight stared at them, breathing heavily before looking down at Surprise's lifeless body. Dropping the pipe with a metallic clank, she began to cry. "I-I... I'm not..." she whimpered, before dropping to her knees. "I'm not like her..."

Midnight looked at Surprise's body and quickly ran over to the unicorn, kneeling don and hugging her. "I don't care what you did to her... She deserved it... But, never think that you're like her... Ever..."

Twilight sniffled and whimpered, nodding before hugging the black mare tightly. Seeing that the purple unicorn was busy, Fluttershy moved back to Chrysalis and laid with her, waiting for the mare.

Twilight's eyes shot open as her crying suddenly stopped. "L-Let go..."

"What?" Asked Midnight, pulling back to look her lover in the eyes.

"Let go..." Twi repeated, standing up. "It isn't over yet..." With that, she began walking towards the door.

As she passed Fluttershy, the pegasus cowered and closed her eyes. Twi eyed her before leaving, her hand gripping her gun tightly.

Next Chapter: Epilogue Estimated time remaining: 19 Minutes
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