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Grand Theft Auto: Ponytropolis III, Part 2

by Pinkamena666

Chapter 17: You're My Pet Now

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Twilight let out a groan and propped herself up on her hands, her arms shaking. Letting out a cough, she held her forehead and winced. "Ah, fuck..."

"What's wrong, Twilight?" Asked Surprise as she walked up to the downed mare, dropping a walkie-talkie-like device in front of her. "Forgot I had two amazing techies on my team?"

Twilight glared up at her and tried to get up, her back acting up and sending a wave of pain throughout her body. "Shit..."

Surprise tilted her head and knelt down. "Come on, Twilight, you're making this too easy." She then stood up and kicked her in the side, making her yell in pain and roll onto her back.

"Bitch!" The lavender mare grunted as she clenched her teeth.

Surprise smirked and stood over the mare, squatting down. "You realize how easy it would be... to kill you now?" She asked, getting a pissed off look from Twilight. "Would be a very unsatisfying end for you... Especially after just coming back from the dead... So..." She then stood up and grabbed Twilight by the shirt, pulling her to her feet.

Twilight let out a yell of pain as she felt her hurt back straighten out as well as a shooting pain in her left leg. She gripped Surprise's wrist to try and pull her hand away but couldn't due to the pain she currently felt.

"Come on, Twilight..." the white mare cooed before backhanding her across the face and letting her fall to the floor. "Fight back."


A yellow pegasus stallion with spiky light green and red hair tackled a red stallion to the ground and started punching him as another grabbed him from behind. Just then a pale brown unicorn stallion with golden brown and light silver hair rushed the second attacker before snapping his neck.

The yellow pegasus then grabbed the head of the stallion he tackled and slammed it into the pavement repeatedly until the stallion stopped twitching.

"Not bad," the pale brown stallion replied, holding out a hand.

The yellow stallion took it and stood up. "Not bad yourself... What's your name?"

The brown stallion pulled out his gun and turned around before shooting an enemy stallion in the head. "Mystic Flare," he replied, turning back to face the yellow stallion. "You?"

"Starlight Comet."

"Well, Comet..." Mystic said as he looked down at the stallion with the smashed head. "Glad you're on our side..."

As they talked a white stallion with short black hair and a combed tail landed on his back near them. "Hey, guys," he said with a smile.

The two looked down at him.

"Um..." Comet started. "Hi... Who are you?"

"Name's Maverick," the white stallion said before quickly getting to his fight. "You guys having fun, too?"

Both Comet and Mystic eyed each other.


Surprise lightly rolled Twilight onto her back with her foot and straddled her waist. "I could let you live, ya know..." she cooed as she slowly laid atop Twilight, her right hand rubbing Twilight's forehead. Twilight winced in pain and gritted her teeth. "What's wrong? Can't use your magic? Hard to concentrate?" She asked before pressing her thumb against Twilight's bullet wound, making her yell loudly in pain. "Doesn't matter, anyways," the white mare cooed, running her left hand over Twi's left breast. "Magic doesn't work on me, remember?"

"I-I wonder why that is..." Twilight growled.

"My secret... Now..." Surprise said with a smirk, gripping Twilight's shirt. "About my offer to let you live..." She then pulled up slightly to expose the mare's belly.

Twilight went to punch her but Surprise grabbed her wrist with her left hand and pressed into the bullet wound again. Twi let out another pained yell as her hand clenched up.

"Bad pet..." Surprise cooed, leaning in and slowly licking up Twilight's cheek. "That's no way for a pet to behave..."


A grey earth pony stallion and light golden unicorn stallion stood back to back as there were two Apocalypse stallions charging them, one going for the golden stallion and the other for the grey stallion.

The two eyed each other before the grey stallion charged and the golden one simply dodged to the side. The grey stallion tackled the enemy as the other kept on dodging.

"Stop moving!" The Apocalypse stallion yelled at the golden stallion.

The stallion kept on dodging until suddenly there was a gunshot. The golden stallion looked over to see a dark cerulean stallion wearing a leather jacket.

"Stop playing games," Night Skies said as he walked over to the golden stallion. "This is serious."

"I was just having--" the stallion began.

"No time to explain," Night interrupted. "Have you seen a little filly around anywhere?"

"A little filly?"

"Yes," Night replied before raising his gun and shooting at an Apocalypse stallion. "Should be with a red mare."

The golden stallion shrugged. "I think I saw some still in the mall..."

Night immediately left, heading for the mall.

"Name's Lance Blazer, by the way!" The stallion called after him.

"And, I'm... Shear Edge..." the grey stallion added, wanting to get his name out there.


Surprise smiled at Twilight as she ran her left hand over the mare's slim and slightly muscular belly. "Mmm... Someone's been working out..."

"To kill fuckers like you..." Twilight said with a glare.

Surprise frowned and slapped her hard. "Manners, pet."

Twilight held her cheek and suddenly had a realization; if she were to regain the ability to use her magic, she'd need the mare to stop hurting her so she can concentrate. In order to do this, she'd have to play along to avoid being beaten some more. Otherwise this mare could win.

"S-Sorry... Master..." Twilight muttered through gritted teeth.

"What was that?" Asked Surprise, leaning in and smirking. "Say it again."

"Sorry... Master..." Twi repeated.

The white mare giggled. "Again."

Twilight's eyes narrowed but she obeyed. "Master..."

Surprise sat up and chuckled. "You are a quick learner." She then eyed Twilight's hands. "Hmm... I know a good place to put your hands so you won't feel inclined to use them..." She grabbed Twi's right hand and found that the unicorn wasn't resisting. Smirking, she proceeded to slip her hand into her pants. "Now, finger me..." she said with a seductive moan.

Twilight went wide-eyed. If this mare started doing sexual acts with her then that could make it so she'd lose concentration. The white mare then took Twi's other hand and slipped into the unicorn's pants. "And finger yourself at the same time."

Twilight gulped and began, letting out soft moans.


A white pegasus stallion with medium-length white hair popped up from behind a car and fired off two handguns at a couple of Apocalypse. Ducking for cover, he waited before popping back up to come face to face with a black unicorn stallion, who held up his hands.

"Whoa, don't shoot," the black stallion said. "Friend." He then ducked as a gun went off near them.

The white stallion nodded and motioned with his head to tell the stallion to take cover beside him. The black stallion nodded and took cover behind the car as well.

"Name's Lone Shadow," the black stallion said, watching the white one fire off his guns.

"Klondike Heart," the white stallion replied. He then took cover once more and eyed the stallion. "Don't seem like much of a loner..."

Shadow gave him a light smirk but said nothing.


Surprise let out a moan before pulling Twi's shirt over her breasts and grabbing them. "Mmm... No bra... What a slut..."

Twilight looked away, finding it hard to concentrate. She then eyed Surprise and slowed the rubbing of herself, now only gently rubbing the wet lips. She then smiled and nodded. "A slut? What gave it away? My pets?"

Surprise smiled and leaned in. "That was a giveaway, yes..." she cooed before kissing Twilight's neck.

The unicorn narrowed her eyes and looked over at a nearby clothing rack, trying to use her magic on it. Surprise then sat up and continued rubbing Twilight's breasts.

"You'll be a great pet, Twilight..." Surprise said as Twilight looked away again. The white mare smiled and reached behind her back, lifting up her shirt and gripping the knife she had concealed there.

Author's Notes:

OC Info:
Starlight Comet - Starlight Comet
Mystic Flare - Mystic Flare
Maverick - MaveriKat
Shear Edge - Grave lord Nito
Lance Blazer - Lanceblazer17
Night Skies - A Fresher Perspective
Klondike Heart - Klondike Shy
Lone Shadow - LoneShadow

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