Grand Theft Auto: Ponytropolis III, Part 2
Chapter 1: Scattered
Load Full Story Next ChapterSurprise looked out the window of the car as Dune drove them back towards the mall. "I have a stop I gotta make before we head back..."
Dune eyed her. "As you wish, boss..."
Rainbow Dash sat at the end of the docks, looking out at the water. "Please, don't be dead..." She said, thinking about both Twilight and Gilda.
She then heard a commotion coming from inside and got up before quickly walking back to the warehouse.
Chrysalis kicked a box across the room and yelled. "Just when I was finally happy!"
Lightning ran up to her and held her shoulders. "There's no evidence that anything happened to her, right? It's quite possible she's still alive and we will find her, but I really need you to keep it together. We can't let Surprise win, okay?"
The Changeling took deep breaths and nodded. "You're right... She wants us to fall apart..."
Rainbow sniffled as she watched, before eyeing Chrysalis. "Tell me that was a Changeling..."
Lightning gasped as Chrysalis eyed the cyan mare. "No..." she said. "I would've felt it..."
Dash sniffled again and nodded, looking away. "I-I'm sorry..."
The Changeling hesitated before walking over to her. The pegasus clenched her eyes shut tightly before feeling the Changeling hug her close. Rainbow hugged back as both tightened their hold on the other.
As Dune parked his car in front of Vinyl and Octavia's Surprise pulled a necklace with an oval pendant. She then put it around her neck and got out.
"Come on," she said, heading to the building.
Dune turned off the engine and got out as Surprise kicked the door open. "Open all the curtains down here," she said, seeing all the curtained off windows.
Dune nodded and made his way around the bottom floor, opening the windows before rejoining Surprise and heading upstairs. When they got to the upper floor, Surprise gently held her pendant before heading to a nearby door.
After hesitating for a few seconds, she kicked the door open. As she did, she was greeted by Vinyl who lunged at her. The white mare smirked and quickly held up her pendant, a bright light beginning to shine from it. Vinyl stopped dead in her tacks and covered her eyes before diving back under the bed.
"Not a fan of UV light, huh?" Asked Surprise with a smile. "Open the curtains, Dune, while I keep our friends at bay."
The stallion nodded and went to open the curtains in the room, filling it with light. The only shadowed areas were the corners of the room and under the bed. The white mare then stepped up beside the bed and smiled, tossing her glowing pendant underneath. When she heard painful hissing, she gripped the bed and flipped it over.
When the sun hit the two vamps they immediately dove into the nearest shaded corner with Vinyl covering Octavia as best she could.
"Now, that I have your attention..." Surprise began as she scooped up her pendant and sat down in the sunlight.
"Who the hell are you and what do you want?" Asked the DJ.
Surprise giggled and ran her hands through her hair, starting to flatten it out. "Well, I now control this city which would be amazing if it weren't for all you vamps, werewolves, and Changelings out there... However, I don't really wanna kill you two, either..." she cooed, crawling towards them. "After all, vamps are quite the seductive creatures, aren't they?"
Vinyl glared at her. "So, you want us to not make any attempts to kill you during the night... That it?"
The white mare sat down directly in front of them. "I'm not worried about that. I'm having spotlights set up on the roof of the mall... Ultraviolet lights... I just want you to know who's in charge around here. Now, just because I'm letting you live doesn't mean I won't kill you if you try and cross me."
"Kill us?" Asked the DJ with a smirk. "A mortal versus a vampire... I know who's winning that fight..."
"Do you?" Asked Surprise before back-handing Vinyl, who let out a grunt of pain. "Unfortunately for you, I've done the research. After a vampire is hit by sunlight they're weakened for a few minutes." She then grabbed the DJ's neck. "Don't think I didn't come prepared. I'm no idiot... Now... are we in agreement?"
"Fuck you," Vinyl growled.
"Fuck me..." Surprise repeated with a sigh before right-hooking Vinyl in the face and grabbing Octavia by the neck. She then yanked the cellist away and stood in the center of the room, using her body to keep the sun from hitting the vamp. "Last chance or you can watch your mare friend here burn alive..."
"No!" Vinyl yelled, attempting to move forward before the sun hit her. Letting out a screech of pain, she jerked backwards, hitting the wall. "Okay, just... give her back to me, please..." she said, sniffling. "I-I can't live forever without her..."
The white mare smirked and leaned in, kissing the choking vamp's cheek. "You're a lucky mare," she said, before shoving Octavia towards the DJ.
On her way through the sunlight, Octavia screeched in agonizing pain before Vinyl pulled her into the shadows. The cellist then whimpered as she had a large burn on her cheek.
"Now, you two get to sit there until sunset," Surprise said with a giggle. "Should be about... ohhh... over 12 hours, at least," she said with a smile, before turning and leaving the room. "Come on, Dune. We have two more stops to make."
The stallion nodded and followed, leaving the two vamps cuddled up in the corner.
Applejack peeked out of the alley and saw a tank roll by on the street.
"Shit... They got the tanks..." she groaned, before ducking back behind the building.
She and Pinks had found a small open area behind a nearby restaurant. Looks like where the chef goes to dump out the trash from the kitchen.
Pinkamena was pacing back and forth in the idle of the small area. "We need to regroup with the others... And, hopefully, find a few of us who managed to make it out of the hotel... Celestia, Luna, Shining Armor, Cadence, Gilda... F-Fluttershy..."
AJ eyed her and sighed. "We'll find them... We just have to make sure Surprise or her gang doesn't find us first."
"Easier said than done..." Pinks replied with a scoff. "She has eyes across the city... We don't stand a chance..."
"Hey..." AJ snapped quietly. "We have to focus. We can't give up."
"Oh, for all we know the others are d--"
"DON'T SA..." AJ shouted before quickly lowering her volume. "Don't say that... They're fine."
Pinks raised an eyebrow and sighed. "Fine. Let's assume everyone's alright. What's it matter? What can we possibly do?"
"We can hold on..." AJ said, eyes fixated on the pink mare. "Hang in there. Use the alleys to move. Shoot any cameras we see... We're survivors, Pinkie. You above all should know about survival..."
Pinks eyed her with a dark look before sighing. "Maybe you're right..." she grumbled.
"Ah know I'm right. Now, let's go huntin' fer our fellow team members," AJ said with a smile.
The pink mare smiled back lightly and nodded. "Alright... Lead the way..."
Dune had parked his car across the street from Bit & Bridal, both he and Surprise waiting before they saw a car coming down the road. It's left half was blue and the other half, green. It was a sleek-looking car with a computer chip texture design, giving it a real retro, computer-y look.
"There they are," the white mare said with a smile as she got out of the car. "Wait here," she said to Dune before closing the door.
The blue and green car pulled up beside her and screeched to a stop. Both doors opened and, from the blue driver's side, a green unicorn mare with short, spiky blue hair stepped out. She was wearing a blue tube top and blue shorts with a black vest and boots on.
From the green passenger's side, a blue unicorn mare with short, green spiky hair stepped out. She was wearing a green tank top and black denim shorts with a pair of black sneakers.
"You must be the new leader," the green mare said as she closed her door.
"I've been the leader this whole time," Surprise said with a smirk as she folded her arms. "Problem?"
"Oh, no," the green mare said with a smile, shaking her head. "Truth be told I... like it... when a mare's in charge."
The white mare smiled back. "I can tell I'm gonna like you..." She then eyed the other mare who was moving around to the back of the car. "Your sister feel the same way?"
The blue mare looked over at her and nodded. "Oh, yes, of course. I much prefer mares in charge than stallions."
Surprise let out a chuckle. "So, did you bring it?"
The blue mare nodded and pulled out two think-looking black gloves. "Here they are," she said, walking them over to Surprise.
The white mare took them and put them on. "Very nice."
"So, how did the necklace do?" Asked the blue mare, reaching out and gently running a finger over the pendant.
"It did fine," Surprise replied with a smile, reaching up and placing her hand on the mare's, gently forcing her to place her entire hand on her upper chest. "Now, which one of you is Bit... and which is Byte?"
"I'm Byte," the blue mare replied with a very light blush, her palm just above the white mare's breasts.
"And, I'm Bit, of course..." the green mare said before opening her car door. "Anything else, boss?"
Surprise's grin grew as she looked Byte in the eyes. "No, that's all for now," she said, sliding the mare's hand down and over her breasts before letting go and heading towards the sex toy shop. "Head back to the mall and wait for me there." She then stopped and looked back at her. "And, if you see a black filly with silver hair... responds to the name Malice... keep her safe for me until I get back." She then turned back to the sex shop and kept moving.
Byte hesitated before nodding. "Yes, ma'am." After watching Surprise leave she quickly headed around the car and climbed into the passenger's seat. Bit eyed her as she closed the door.
"What's up with you?" She asked, putting her hand on the key.
"She ran my hand over her chest when she... walked away..."
"Wait, so... you felt her boobs?" Bit asked, receiving a nod from her sister. Letting out a sigh, she turned the engine on. "Lucky..." she muttered, before driving off.
Surprise entered Bit & Bridal and looked around. "Oh, Ruby!" She sang. "Come out, come out, wherever you are..."
She stopped at the counter when the red mare stepped out from the back room, completely nude.
"My, my, Ruby..." Surprise cooed, looking her over. "Don't you ever wear clothes?"
"Where's the others?" She asked, crossing her arms.
"The... others?" Asked Surprise, playing dumb as she placed her right index finger on her lips.
"I heard you out there..." the succubus said as she narrowed her eyes. "The new leader... You're the cause of all this, aren't you?"
The white mare smirked. "Oh, no... You got me."
"Where's the others?" Ruby repeated.
"The others..." Surprise said with a sigh as she tilted her head back. "Hmm... I dunno... All I know is that Tech, Emerald, and Twilight are dead."
Ruby's expression didn't change. "I didn't know them that well... All I care about is my sister."
"Oh, well, like I said... No clue where they are... Though, it shouldn't take too long to find them..." Surprise then tilted her head. "As for why I'm here... I'd appreciate it... if you stayed the fuck out of my way. This is my city now and everyone will do as I say."
"Oh, really?" Asked Ruby. "Why don't you make me?"
The white mare let out a chuckle and clenched her gloved right hand into a fist. "Gladly." The succubus smiled and disappeared in a blur. The white mare then looked around the shop with a smile. "Interesting..." she said, listening carefully. "You know I read your file at New Horizons... And, I read something rather interesting..." She then picked up a long metal dildo from a nearby shelf, looking it over. "Your brain isn't as stable as you think..." Her ear twitched when she heard a light creaking sound at the other end of the room. Smiling, she continued talking. "The part that controls your ability to ignore pain, to be precise... A strong electrical shock..." she started, before hearing a creak behind her. She quickly whipped around and thrust the dildo forward, stabbing Ruby in the chest. "...would make the brain forget how to ignore pain."
Ruby growled before a strong electrical current coursed through the metal dildo and into the mare, who let out a blood-curdling scream.
"And, that's no teleportation..." Ruby said with a smirk. "Just super speed." She then grabbed Ruby by the neck and pulled the dildo out before throwing her into the wall. "Not so tough now, are ya?" She asked, the succubus coughing up blood and coughing, sparks still shooting off her.
Surprise then walked over to her and knelt down, placing the metal dildo underneath the mare's chin and forced her to look her in the eyes. "I'm in charge now. So, do me a favor and behave, okay? Having a sex-crazed pseudo-demon around'll be fun. But, cross me and I'll kill your sister in front of you when I find her... before killing you, too..."
"And, if... you don't find her?"
Surprise smirked. "Then, I'll make your death much more painful, kay?" She said cheerfully.
Ruby glared at her but nodded. "Fine... But, if I was a real demon--"
"Oh, if you were real..." Surprise began. "I would've had to find a way to kill you. This way, though, I can keep you around. Now, stand up."
The succubus glared at her before doing as asked, getting up on wobbly legs as she was still recovering from the shock. The white mare looked over and smirked.
"Nice body... Now, turn your back to me and place your hands on the wall."
Ruby's eyes narrowed even more before doing as told. "How'd you beat me?"
"I've been training my body and my senses for about 15 years to prepare for this..." Surprise cooed before ramming the dildo in the succubus' ass.
The mare let out a grunt and winced. "Ffffffuck..."
The white mare smiled and began moving the metal dick back and forth. "Nice ass..." she said, giving the mare's butt a smack. "Now, I gotta go... but it's been fun..." she said, smirking as she turned and walked away.
Surprise climbed back into Dune's car and closed the door.
"How'd it go?" He asked.
"It went perfectly well."
"Good to know New Horizons kept accurate records," he said, turning the engine on.
"I admit, I was weary at first," Surprise said as she eyed him. "Though, my trip to Manehattan confirmed their accuracy."
Dune chuckled and put the car in drive. "So, you found them?"
Surprise nodded. "I found them..."
Amanté and Deva were seated against the side of the sewer tunnel, staring at the dirty sewage water.
"I'm starting to miss the hotel..." Deva said with a sigh.
The taller mare eyed her and nodded. "Same. It was a much better place than the sewers..."
Deva leaned against her and groaned. "What happened? Who fucked us?"
"No clue, sister..."
Deva let out a longer sigh before eyeing Amanté's legs. "Well..." she started with a smile. "At least I still have these..." she said, reaching out and rubbing her sister's right leg.
The taller mare smirked and stuck her boot in Deva's face. "If you want... you can have some fun with them."
The dark silver mare smiled and quickly pulled off her sister's high-heel boot and grabbed her ankle. After licking her lips she stuffed Amanté's toes into her mouth before they heard a noise in the tunnels.
Deva stopped and eyed the direction the sound came from. "Wha wa at?" She asked, her question muffled by her sister's toes.
Amanté shook her head. "No idea... Sounded like a voice..."
Deva eyed her before quickly removing her mouth from the foot and standing up. "It could be an enemy."
"Or it could be one of us," Amanté said as she put on her boot.
When the tall mare stood up they began heading down the tunnel towards the voice.
Surprise entered the hospital which was already crawling with Apocalypse gang members. "Remember, boys!" She cooed. "Keep the nurses alive!" She then went over to the front desk and smiled at the frightened mare. "A mare came in with her sister. Which room?"
May was seated beside Dawn's bed as she watched the sleeping mare. Down the hall she could hear a bunch of yelling from mares and stallions.
"Please, wake up, sis..." she whimpered.
She suddenly heard the elevator ding and open.
"You boys haven't even touched this floor yet," Surprise with a sigh as she left and saw a bunch of nurses being cornered by Apocalypse gang members.
When one nurse broke free and ran a stallion pulled out a gun and shot her. Surprise quickly pulled her own gun out and shot him in the leg, getting the attention of the others.
"Are you stupid?!" She yelled at the downed stallion, who was clutching his leg and yelling in pain. "I bet you wish you had a nurse to help you now, huh?!" She yelled before shooting him twice in the head. She then looked at the nurse that was shot and walked over to her, finding her breathing heavily. She had a gunshot wound in her side. "One of you nurses get over here now!" Surprise yelled, placing a hand over the wound to stop the bleeding.
They hesitated but a nurse finally made her way over to the white mare. "Y-Yes?" She asked, sounding quite nervous.
"What's your name?" Asked Surprise.
"R-Redheart..."
"Well, Redheart... Can you help her?"
The mare looked down at the wounded nurse and knelt down. "Doesn't seem to have hit any vital organs... We should be able to patch her up."
"Do that," Surprise said before getting up.
Redheart quickly put her hand over the wound as Surprise went back to the other nurses. "Stop cowering like pussies and help her."
The others started moving slowly before rushing to help Redheart. Surprise then looked at the other gang members. "We need them to survive, you FUCKING MORONS!!!"
"But, ma'am, we weren't gonna--" a stallion began.
The white mare raised her gun at him. "Shut the FUCK up!" She yelled, making the stallion take a step back. "If any of you kill another nurse... I will rip your balls off, cut off your dick, and FEED THEM TO YOU!!! And, then I'll probably kill you! Depending on what MOOD I'M IN!!!" Once she saw they had all gotten the message loud and clear she turned and headed down the hall. "Carry on... and make sure that nurse gets better!" She sang cheerfully as she began skipping.
She stopped when she came upon May and Dawn.
"You gonna kill us, too?" May asked, keeping her eyes on Dawn as she held her hand.
Surprise looked at the gun in her hand before holstering it. "No, I don't think you'll be any trouble..." She then turned away from the room and kept skipping down the hall.
Rainbow Dash walked over to Flog and Sterling. "You two should head back... This isn't your fight."
"It became our fight when Surprise killed Mistress--" the dragoness started to argue.
"Please, Sterling... You have your own group to worry about... And Jade should be with her sister..."
"She's right," Flog agreed, heading back to his van. "Come on, you two."
Jade quickly joined him as Sterling hesitated. "Once we leave, you'll have to move..."
"I know," Dash replied with a sigh. "And, I promise... Surprise will pay for what she's done."
The dragoness pulled her into a tight hug before letting go. "Be careful," she said, before turning and heading towards Flog's van.
Rainbow watched them load up before walking back to her group. "Alright. Time to move..."
Author's Notes:
GTA Soundtrack [Surprise's Theme]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztJirkY5AMw
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