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Week in Ponyville

by Aladeen_Brony

Chapter 8: Deleted scene #1: Transformation

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Week in Ponyville

by Aladeen_Brony


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Prologue

  Week in Equestria/Ponyville

                           An My Little Pony:Friendship is magic fanfiction by Aladeen madafaka

                                                        Prologue

NOTE:THIS IS NOT FOR KIDDIES(12-16 YR OLD GUYS), BECAUSE I´M SURE U BRONIES OUT  THERE KNOW WHAT RULE I´M MEANING ;). And I don't swear LOTS in this fanfic! AND I DON'T OWN ANYTHING IN THIS FANFIC, BUT THIS FANFIC . ALL TITLES BELONG TO THEIR RESPECTFUL OWNERS!

My name is Stevie Leland Maximilan, i live in England(presice location classified, because privacy) and i´m 17-year old first year college student in Bottisham village College(real school, but name has been randomed[i didn't want to say who i really i am]). And i am brony, not like hardcore brony(guy, who has totally lots of mlp stuff). I wonder why the hell i watch mlp, i know that it´s for girls, but this is getting weird. But i totally accept people, what they are like aka i´m not racist.

I haven´t written any fanfic yet(until now) but i have read,watched and listened mlp fanfic and creepypastas(fanfics what i have watched or read are Princess Molestia, Sweet apple Massacre (parts 1 and 2)  and My Little Dashie( iwatched mini movie) [Creepypastas: Cupcakes{i listened Cupccakes}]). At this point i give inspiraton credits to writers of: My Little Dashie, Sweet apple massacre- series and Princess Molestia, so HUGE THANKS FOR INSPIRING YO! This following story is placed to saturday in june with my friend, my 17th birthday and day after my b-day  and week and couple days in equestria.

I had a rough time last year(2014), because first my parents divorced and moved living separately  in different places not very far away from each other, luckily me and my 11-year old lil'bro can visit my dad's apartment any time but weekends we have to go to mom's house or dad's house(every other weekend is at my dad' s apartment).  Luckily  I have one friend now(after 7th,8th and 9th grades),whos is always good friend and loyal to me(who never lies or tell my secrets tosomeone else). If you have only one friend, then you know that there´s someone who cares about you :).

I wasn´t very good at school, because i though that i have  ADD. I luckily managed to have no 6´s in my 9th grade diploma. I was bullied in school a lot, and by that ”a lot” word i mean following: i was bullied literally so much, that i were thinking doing suicide on 7th grade. The bullying thankfully stopped for awhile, when i changed class from 7A to 7C where i had one friend.

I liked(and i still like) playing computer and console games, whenever i had a chance. Now i know what you readers are thinking, ”this is not part of this fanfic AT ALL!”  but you are wrong i did put this  prologue here just for fun, because i wanted to tell something about my life. Now, i started playing computer- and console games i 6th grade, because i started somehow like playing in computer. In console i started playing at the same time(at 6th grade), because my parents bought Playstation 2 and we had no other console. In PlayStation 2 i played such classical games as: Sly games 1-3, Tony Hawk's Pro skater 4 and Lego Star Wars.

I became a brony step by step. First i heard mlp at 8th grade when my friend Thomas said, he looked 12 hours of Mlp to locate Derpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo  in almost every episode. And if you

don´t know who Derpy is, then you´re gonna have bad time.

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Second time, when i heard about mlp was in 9th grade in  about year later, when my ex-classmate showed me and my couple buddies video about ****** **** **********(name censored for your own good measures) it´s a R34 game made by PhoneKidde(name randomized, because i wanted to protect author´s privacy). Next time when i heard about My Little Pony was in my class trip to Sweden in 9h grade, when my friend Thomas and few else ex-classmates(who were Thomas´s buddies, but  not mine)went to swedish fantasy game store and bought an My Little Pony t-shirt which said: -”I don´t usually watch cartoons,but when i do, i watch My Little Pony”

-”I don' t usually watch cartoons, but when i do, i watch My Little Pony”  Source: Google Images

Third time when i heard about mlp was in my HatsWapp Semmenger(Name changed due author´s privacy)group, where my buddy Thomas and my sports team friend, Matthias sent couple pictures about mlp.

Also i became a brony via fandubs by Rant Art Sol Or(name changed to an anagram to protect authors privacy)and all Bouy Ope To Up´s(name changed to protect author´s privacy).And finally i watched first episode of  mlp on 13th of September, 2014. Without further talking let´s go straight to my story/fanfic :)

Chapter 1: The Beginning Part 1: Just a normal weekend

Chapter 1:The Beginning, part 1:Just a normal weekend

It started same as every saturday: i woke at half past ten and i put wi-fi on my smatphone  to check, if there´s any new tweets and email. ”5 new messages” ”What the hell?”- i said, when i looked my message list. There was notifications that  some streames went live on Hiwtch.”Mom!” -I shouted. -”well, what is it?”-my mom asked ,”what you are you going to give me as my birthday present?”  -i said. ”i don´t know yet” what you would like to have?” -my mom said.  ”I want something for example: money”- i said ”what´s for lunch?”  - my lil' bro asked 2 hours later. ”Noodles and meatballs” - my mom said. I really hate my lil' bro, he' s like derpy from ”i´m-sure-you readers-know-where”, really idiot is my lil´bro. Back to story...

After lunch i sent a message to my friend Thomas through HatsWapp Semmenger: ”Hey, do u wanna hang out today?”.

About 12.45 phone vibrated and i watched, what it was. It was a message from Thomas: ”Sure, is 13.45 ok?” -The message said. ”Ofc(Of Course)” -i answered. Not very long after message was sent, i packed my Gacig:the Mathering cards(same as always: name randomized, because i don´t want to get copyrighted) and head to the bus stop. As i waited the bus on the bus stop something were wrong, ”the birds were flying to east” ”usually they fly on west” -i thought on my mind. Then i noticed something coming north-west of the bus stop, it was flying and  pink and yellow  ”was it Fluttershy?” -I said in my mind to myself as i watched to the left of the bus stop the bus came ”OH SHI-” - i yelled and i wawed my hand in a bit of hurry to get the bus stop. Thankfully the bus stopped and i showed my 30- day travel card to the driver and he did put my card in the machine and took it out  the machine and said: ”ok you´re good to go” and thanked, smiled and walked to bench, where i sat to wait the right stop to jump off.  

After i got off in the right bus stop, which were ”Governor” i started to walk on the right(Thomas´s house were on opposite side of the  Art Gallery[once again name changed, because privacy{the bus stop were approx. 0.500 miles away from Thomas´s house}])and while walking i heard a song, which were similar to Pinkie Pie´s Parasprite polka, ”OH GOD NO!” -i shouted and continued walking to Thomas´s house. As i walked and walked, the song started to sound more quiet step by step ”What´s next? Derpy?” - i said myself. Quite after that i heard someone saying: ”Hey you! Do you want a muffin?” i looked behind me and there was, you´ve guessed it- Derpy. I scared and falled back on the asfalt but i did got up and took the muffin from derpy´s hoof  and said: ”Thanks ” and smiled, Derpy smiled back and flew away.  I looked the muffin and thought: ”maybe i should save this for later if Thomas also wants to eat this also.

After the i got Thomas´s house(he lives in a 5- story building near the art gallery) i rang his door phone and the door suddenly opend, i walked in, walked the stairs all the way up to 5th floor where Thomas´s house were, rang his doorbell, walked in and said ”hello” to his parents and suggested to Thomas:”should we go on a walk? ”Sure”, Thomas said and as soon we walked outside we noticed something unusual.

                                                           End Of Part 1 of 2

Chapter 1: parts 2-5

Chapter 1 , part 2:Unusual Activity

As Thomas and i went outside the building, where Thomas lived, we noticed that somerthing was wrong. Pinkie Pie´s Parasprite polka started sound again, but now from behind us ”what the hell” - i said, ”what is that song?” -Thomas and i said at the same time. Polka started sound even louder, and when i turned around to see what was going on there i saw: PINKIE PIE! ”OH HELL NO!” -I said loudly ”Thomas, you must see this” ”Turn around” - i said and tapped Thomas on his shoulder. ”What the hell?!” -Thomas said, ”i don´t know” - i said. Then suddenly in front of us were all mane 6 ponies(Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Applejack)and Princess Celestia.”Holy sh*t!” -we both yelled at the same time, ”what you want ponies?”-i asked. ”Nothing” -Twilight said, but ”i want to rape you Stevie” -Said Big Macintosh as he came around the corner. ”No, No, NOOOOOOOO!” -I yelled as Twilight started to strip me and Big Macintosh started to put his huge **** into my ass and my eyesight began to cloud over... A faint ”Stevieeeee” began to hear in my head, i opened my eyes and there was Thomas who said: ”are you ok?”. ”Yea,i think so” ”what happened to me?” - i answered as Thomas helped me to get me on my legs.  ”You suddenly fainted, silly”  -Thomas said. After that we went on regural walk around the town and when we came back, i heard a loud *thud* behind us. ”That sounded like a book was fallen”- i said.  

When me and Thomas watched what had fallen behind us, there was a book lying on the ground.

                                                            End of Part 2

                                           Chapter 1, Part 3: Mysterious Book

When i looked the book at closer look, it had unicorn in it´s cover. We opened the book and the first page were written on fine calligraphy: ”This book is owned by Twilight Sparkle”. At that moment our jaws opened and wondered: ”where the hell  this book came from?”. I thought:”Let´s put this into this paper bag(which i had alreafy in my coat´s pocket) and watch it later”. After we went inside and to Thomas´s bedroom, i looked out the window and i saw rainbow, even it wasn´t  rained on the whole day.  Then happened something weird, time stopped and only Thomas and i were moving, we both went outside the bedroom and realised: ”what the hell is going on here?”. Moments later we both saw a yellow pegasus  pony with a pink mane  taking a peek from Thomas´s bedroom´s door, and she said a faint:”Hello”. Both Thomas and i identify the pegasus pony as ”Fluttershy”. Not much time elapsed as Fluttershy ran out of the room with a knife and murdered me and said:”Hasta la Vista,Baby”.  Then suddenly i woken in my bed and watched, what clock was , it was 6.30 Am. ”Okey, i hope it was all a dream”, then i went back to sleep and after couple hours my mom said:”HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” End of Part 3 of the Chapter 1

                                                Chapter 1, Part 4:Mah Birthday

                                                       This is very short :)

When i got of my bed i was still little bit sleepy, thankfully i got wonderful presents from my parents, relatives also my grandpa and grandma sent me money. When i went to sleep, i noticed a strange book on my table, which had a golden unicorn in it´s cover. When i went finally sleeping, i saw a strange purple light coming next to me and also i heard whispering which sounded like: ”Here it is”, ”Good, take it carefully and try not to make any sound at all” *books falling*

”what was that noise?” i wondered and got up. There were right in front of my eyes Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, then i asked:”what the hell are you two doing here?”

                                                     End Of Chapter 1:Part 4

                      

                    Chapter 1:Part 5:Conversation w/ Princesses Luna And Celestia

”Why you came into my room?” -I asked, ”i want this book, which was fallen from my student Twilight yesterday, when we were visiting your world” - said Celestia.  Suddenly Luna´s horn started glow black and big silent explosion covered all the neiborghood ”What was that?” - i asked in a bit of confusion, ”Just a time-paralyzing spell” - Luna answered. ”Do you ever had a feeling, that you were in a dream and you don´t know if that´s real or not?” -said Celestia and all the sudden  in front of me appeared a large mirror where i could see myself as a pony(reference to Equestria girls). Then my vision faded out slowly and i falled on the ground with a wiew, that Luna and Celestia were in my room...

                                                End of Chapter 1: Part 5

                                                      End of Chapter 1.

Prologue for chapter 2

  Prologue for Chapter 2

It was a sunny day in ponyville, evrypony were happy and hard-working. Applejack was bucking apples with Big Macintosh in Sweet Apple Acres, Rarity was designing dresses in Carousel Botique, Pinkie Pie was, you´ve guessed it in Sucarcube corner doing something(Pinkie Pie is unpredictable)(NO CUPCAKES!),Rainbow Dash was somewhere up the clouds hanging out with other pegasus ponies. Fluttershy was somewhere in the forest(not everfree forest) taking care of the  animals and feeding them, Twilight(also known as crazy-book-lady[LittleshyFIM]) was at the oak wood library reading books(just for fun[reading books]). And they didn´t know, that their life was getting a twist...

Prologue for chapter 2

  Prologue for Chapter 2

It was a sunny day in ponyville, evrypony were happy and hard-working. Applejack was bucking apples with Big Macintosh in Sweet Apple Acres, Rarity was designing dresses in Carousel Botique, Pinkie Pie was, you´ve guessed it in Sucarcube corner doing something(Pinkie Pie is unpredictable)(NO CUPCAKES!),Rainbow Dash was somewhere up the clouds hanging out with other pegasus ponies. Fluttershy was somewhere in the forest(not everfree forest) taking care of the  animals and feeding them, Twilight(also known as crazy-book-lady[LittleshyFIM]) was at the oak wood library reading books(just for fun[reading books]). And they didn´t know, that their life was getting a twist...

Chapter 2: A new pony in town, Part 1: Sleepover problems

Chapter 2: A new pony in town: Part 1: Sleepover problems

At the same evening(Prologue) Rarity, AJ(applejack) and Twilight were having fun together at Oak Wood Library(a sleepover[DO NOT CONFUSE WITH EPISODE: “Look before you sleep”!!!!]) , and all the sudden Twilight had cold chills, “are you ok, Twi?” Applejack asked, “Yes, i´m fine” Twilight answered. *lighting strike* “Aaaaah!” Rarity screamed and jumped on the air, “calm down, silly” Applejack calmed rarity, “it was just a lighting, are you afraid of lightings?” Twilight said. “nope” Rarity said quietly. Suddenly outside of Oak wood library heared a large splash and mud came all over the front windows(it was raining in that very evening) and then suddenly electricity in oak wood library went off and AJ(Applejack) and Rarity started panic... “Aaaah!” Rarity and Applejack started to scream together and twilight started to calm down applejack and rarity by lighting a candle and saying:”calm down everypony”, “Applejack, would you watch what cut the power?” Twiilight said “Yes ma´m” applejack answered and went outside to watch, what did cut the electricity.

After Applejack did put power on, she ran back inside and the way inside Applejack stumbled on something big and fell on mud, when she got up she wondered:”what the heck is this, where I tripped on?” When applejack did touch the huge muddy thing it was clear: this was something bigger than a rock. “Twiligh, Rarity come hurry!” Applejack souted and Rarity and Twilight came as fast as they  could and asked: “what is it, Applejack?” “something big, I think it´s... it´s... A PONY” applejack said and lightning struck on the sky at the same time. “oh my sweet celestia” said Twilight and Rarity on the same time, “is it alive?” said Rarity hesitantly. Then applejack washed mud off pony´s face, who was lying on the mud unconscious and put her right hoof in nose area to feel if, it were breathing and it luckily was. “We must get you inside hurry, so you don´t get cold” , said Twilight and her horn lit and magic lifted pony up from mud and brought the  pony inside, after wash of course.  I slowly opened my eyes  then and i saw light, then  someone closed  and then I heard someone  on top of my forehead saying: “rest now, my little pony, rest now”. Then I fell asleep....

“Where the heck is spike?” Twilight asked in confusion, “i don´t know” Rarity answered and walked around the floor of library, “Where the hell did you came from?”  said Twilight, Appleajck and Rarity at the same time. “Twilight, do you have a place  where that pony can  sleep?”  “He(pony, that they found had more male voice) can sleep in my bed, I can take matress and couple pillows out from closet(Note: I know,that oak wood library doesn´t have a closet normally, but in this fanfic it has). As Twilight went to sleep, somepony/something knocked on the door. It was Spike. Spike was also exhausted and went straight to bed without saying a word  and falled asleep straight. Then Twilight though:”What could next day bring?”. Moments later the whole ponyville was sleeping.

 

Chapter 2: Part 2: Where the heck am i?

   Chapter 2: A new pony in town: Part 2: Where the heck am I?

As the sun shine brightly trough Oak Wood  Library´s highest window and birds were tweeting I wondered myself smiling:” What a great way to start a new day” “Man, the sun is very bright today”, I said in my mind. “WAIT!””the sun has never ever been so bright,and this blanket feels different” I thought. “Hey, you!, get off Twilight´s bed” said somewhat familiar sound. When I opened my eyes, there were Rarity,Rainbow Dash,Applejack,Fluttershy and Twilight around me( I was lying on Twilight´s bed). Then I realized something was horribly wrong,“Who are you and WHAT THE F*CK AM I DOING HERE?!” i said. When I got up I noticed, that I was transformed into pony and of course I didn´t have a cutie mark. “I´m Twilight sparkle and who are you?” Twilight asked, I answered: “I´m stevie and what do you know what i´m doing here?” “Nope”,said all the ponies in following order: Applejack,Twilight,Rainbow Dash, Rarity and lost but not least, Fluttershy. “When did I come here?” I asked,  “we don´t know, you were lying on the mud yesterday evening outside and we brought you inside”  said Twilight. Suddenly purple and green dragonbaby ,which I recognized as Spike, Twilight´s companion came upstairs yawning and wondered who I were. Then my vision started to blur out and I shouted:”NO! YOU ARE NOT REAAAAAALL.....” and I falled to ground. 5 mins later...

I opened my eyes and wondered:“what, what happened to me?”,stood up, sat up in chair, which Twilight brought just for me. “You just suddenly fainted” “here, drink this”,said Twilight and handed me a glass of water. “Are ya feeling better?” asked Applejack. “Yea, I think so”, I answered to Applejacks question after, when I drank the glass of water, which Twilight brought for me.

Note: this wasn´t planned to be this short, but at this point I will put one of my deleted scenes here and then continue the story at the same place ofc(of course). Ps. There will be lots of deleted scenes  and removed words in this fanfic,which I will put later on.

Deleted scene #1: Transformation

“Are we ready?” asked Princess Celestia from Luna, who were dragging large human body, which apparently was sleeping or dead. “Is it alive?” one of the guards asked nervously, “No, we made him faint and do not ask how” (Celestia and Luna [CENSORED] after they showed the opposity mirror), “ very well then, are you ready little sister?”, asked Celestia from Princess Luna. “Yes I am” said Luna and both alicorn princesses horns lit and started to cast a powerful spell. After few minutes their horns stopped glowing and both Luna and Celestia realized: “we need more powerful magic”. “Indeed, my sister” said Luna after Celestia had finished her sentence. “Go look for Princess Cadance, she can help us”, said Celestia. Then “Royal Guard” went looking for Princess Cadance, but he didn´t found her anywhere around Canterlot. “Princess Celestia, we didn´t find her” said the guard in a  sad mood, “very well then, Thank you for you service guard” “You´re dismissed”, said Celestia and the guard walked away and Celestia closed the door leading to the royal throne, when the guard left the room. “what now, Big sister?”, asked Luna from Celestia hesitantly. “Should we locate you-know-what-elements?” , asked Luna from Celestia . “No, I know already where they are, silly”, said Celestia in bit of laughing.

When the elements of harmony(from this forward I shall sthorten that name to eoh, but I´m sure that ya´ll realize what it is)were retrieved from SECRET  place, where they were Luna asked:”are you sure about this, Tia?”. “Yes, I am” Answered Celestia and took the eoh to place, where the “Human” was and when both Celestia and Luna were in the transformigation room, they saw(No, not the movie Saw) that the “Human” had escaped/lost(no, not the show Lost. )(The “Human” were missing). Then the eoh dropped on the floor(Celestia were holding the eoh witht her horn[forgot to tell that]) . “W-What happened?” Asked Celestia in a bit of confusion. “ The human woke and escaped. We tried to stop so called “human”(At this point “human's sex shall be secret), but “human” were too strong”, one of  the royal guards asked to Celestias´s question. Moments later royal guard came to the  transformigation room shouting: “Princess Celestia! Come hurry!” “What it is?” asked Celestia in a bit of confusion. “Some huge creature(“Human”)broke into  the royal throne and then passed out”  said royal guard.

Then Luna and Celestia looked into each others faces and then Celestia thanked Guard. After Celestia thanked guard, both Celestia and Luna began to run towards the royal throne, where “Human” located. When “human” was retrieved and transported back to transformigation room, Celestia said: “The transformigation shall begin” Then eoh started spinning around(6 ponies not required to use the eoh in this fanfic/deleted scene) and after few seconds all around Canterlot echoed: '”TASTE THE RAINBOW MOTHERF*CKER!” Note #3: This was a excact copy  of  video found in YouTube, so thx for inspirating vid :) If u r reading this whoever  uploaded dat sound effect  :).

The rainbow what-ever-it was created so huge cloud of smoke/dust that the whole castle had to be ventilated. “Did it work?” wondered Luna and Celestia. After the dust had fallen Celestia and Luna yelled at same time:NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!The “human” was still not transferred to pony form in other words the purpose of  using eoh was transfer the “human” to pony form. “How could this happen? wondered Celestia , the eoh were the strongest transfromigation tools out there(not including Twilight´s magic and The Great and powerful Trrrixie).  In this fanfic the eoh are used also for transformigating “humans” to ponies). Note #4 I had another of these  what-the-f*ck -i'm doing feelings lol(no,not the game “League of Legends”). “What we do now?” asked Luna, then “Royal Guard” came to the transmog room and said: “Princess Celestia, your faitful student Twilight Sparkle has come to visit you”. Twilight, she can help us!”, said Celestia in her mind, after the guard had left the room Celestia and Luna went to see Twilight. “Twilight, my faitful student what brings you here?” asked Celestia and then Twilight answered:”i got a letter, that said you need help”.  “yes, first put this scarf on your face so i won´t ruin the suprise” said Celsestia in a bit crooked mood. “What suprise? Twilight asked. “If I said,what the suprise was it wouldn´t be a suprise anymore ” said Celestia and started lead Twilight to transmog room instead of  “suprise” room.

“Here we are” said celestia,when she and Twilight came to transmog room, Twilight asked:”when I can take this scarf off my eyes?”. “not yet, first you need to cast a special spell, to test if you can do all 26 spells” said Celestia and chuckeled by herself, “26? I thought there were 25 different spells.”, said Twilight bit confused. Note #5 Fluttershy's wrath(NOPE) “What shall I do?” asked Twilight, and then Celestia said: “transform this big thing(“Human”) into something”. “Ok”, said Twilight and then Twilight started to cast a spell so strong, that even  Celestia couldn´t watch.  After the spell were casted Celestia watched Twilight, who were all sweaty because that spell and said to Twilight: “Well done, Twilight” , “Now come rest and have a cup of  cocoa”. The “human” was surrounded by Twilight's magic and was about to transformigate to something. “now you can take the scarf off”, said Celestia after they were next to fireplace drinking cocoa. “Well done Twilight, you done very well :)!”, said Celestia and handed Twilight cup of  hot cocoa. After Twilight was leaving, Celestia said:”Twilight, wait!” “Well,what is it?” Twilight asked curiosly and then Celestia thanked Twilight for coming to visit.

Afterwards(Few hours later[after “Royal Duties]) , when Celestia went to transformigation room with Luna(Luna were missing for a few moments), HUGE blast of Twilight's magic wiped both Celestia and Luna down.  When  wave of Twilight's magic had disapeared from  transmog room Celestia and Luna were surprised, because the “human” In the table were disappeared and it wasn' t nowhere to seen until Luna said:”Celestia, look!”. The “human” were transformigated to Pegasus pony. It(“human”, which were now a pony) was held in Clesestia's bed for keeping it warm(it was icy cold), when Luna raised the moon it started suddenly raining. “Where we deliver this pony?”, wondered Celestia and then Luna came up with an idea:”Let's deliver him to Twilight's house”.  “Yes, ofc(I'm sure by this time you know what that means)” “Twilight, she can take care of  this”. After few minutes of thinking how to deliver pony to Twilight's house, guard who were just randomly wandering around Celestia's castle he said:”Do you need help, Princess Celestia?” “Yes, dump this unwanted intruder out to Oak Wood Library”, said Celestia in a bit creepy mood. “Very well then, I shall dump this intruder out” (Guard was a pegasus pony) And the Guard delivered him to Oak wood library in middle of night. “There it is”, said Guard and moments later the pony were in ground(he was dropped from a height(Approx. 1200 feet)). Then guards flew away and few minutes later at Oak wood Library fron door opened and somepony came out, took the pony and took it inside.

                                          End Of Deleted Scene #1: Transformation Next Chapter: Continue of Chapter 2: Part 2. Estimated time remaining: 37 Minutes

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