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Coco's Torn String of Fate

by Kaijeno

Chapter 1: It now begins

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Author's Notes:

Authors note: Hello every pony. This is my first MLP fan fic. So please Go easy on me.
This is your typical love story . Enjoy.


Manehatten, the place to be something. From selling food, to the plays in theaters but now it is know for fashion. Rarity ,now know as the goddess of Style has made it to the big leagues. She owns at least three buildings around the world and of course one would be in Ponyville so she can be close to her friends. But, this story is not about her . Nope, this story is about a young Earth Pony in Manehatten who works at the first ever Fashion Building of her brand which Rairty calls, “Le Hooves and Mane.” This pony is named Coco Pomell.

It was an early morning for our young earth pony. Coco was staggering to the kitchen for breakfast . She had her usual meal: One bowl of wheat cereal and a Sunflower Sandwich. This was practically normal for her everyday life and it was kinda tiring for her to keep going through all this.

“ Well time for another great day.” So she said as her recent smiled changed to a frown. Its been almost 3 years since Rairty made her the Co-Owner of the whole business. She should feel happy that she gets this privilege right? She’s not really, Coco feels as if she isn't as good as Rarity.

As she walked to the building, she was greeted by her new unicorn assistant named Ruby String. Her fur was all red with her wonderful ruby eyes. Its like she could be a crystal Pony.

“ Good Morning boss.” Ruby said with smiled has she handed Coco a latte with her magic. Coco was still deep in thought about her life. She wonders what else she can do besides design. As they reach to her office which was neatly made . The Fabrics were organized and her blueprints were neatly stacked. Ruby had her own desk which she sat next to coco and begun there work.

"Now Ruby,there is going to be a special thread coming to this building. Rairty herself made this with her boyfriend so it is extremely valuable okay." Coco said dully as she sighed

Ruby nodded at her statement, however she was a bit worried about her boss, “I really hope she’s okay.
‘ She thought to herself.

The young pony looked out the window and stared out into the distance wondering what else is there for her.




Meanwhile on the East side.

“STOP YOU THIEF!!!”

A young Stallion unicorn was being chased by the cops. This pony stole some rare merchandise. He was hooded up so all they saw while running was a brown horn and golden eyes .

They have been chasing him for almost 20 whole minuets. The hooded pony kept running and running until suddenly. He finally got stuck in a dead end.

"We have you now. Surrender now and we may give ya break." The Earth Officer pony said.

“You little think you can catch me ? Guess again .” The Mysterious pony use its magic horn and turned it to a sword and made a rift to escape leaving the officers speechless.

“T-that was amazing.” The Officer Earth Pony Said,

“That was a high level teleportation spell. Only a few including princess twilight can use this . This pony an’t no joke.” The officer unicorn said they fall back to the station.

Farther away from them, the hooded pony came out of the rift who was then greeted by other ponies . Most of theses looks like they belong in a gang. Which they actually are. Though this pony isn't really in the gang itself. He just works for them.

“There he is the man of the hour. Did you get the goods?” The raggadity looking earth pony said.

“The Mysterious pony took off his hoodie. Now fully seeing his appearance, his fur was a darkish Brown color with his dirty blonde mane and tail .

“You damn straight I got the goods.” He pulled out of the bag a large chocolate diamond. Which made every pony basks In it glory.

Oh yeah the boss will love this,”Said the earth pony that took it and walked to the large abandoned building ,”Oh yeah. You pony’s better scram. Remember the heat is still on ..um…um.” The earth pony started rubbing his head for his name.”Err what was your name again Pony?”

One face hoof to the face the unicorn did as he walked away, “ Its Aura,Arua Gemstone.

As they all left,Arua went back to his home where he was greeted by his older brother,"Arua you made it back huh?" Arua's brother was named Stervi who almost looked exactly like his younger brother expect his Mane is more messy and his eyes are a light red.

"Yeah I made it out. I thought you said the Cops wouldn't know about the operation. I got heat all over my ass now. Thank god I was covered up or its jail-time for your little brother. " He said laughing while his brother laughed as well." Still big bro you promised right? The last job we are gonna do is our last right? After this we'll move out of the projects and move on to big things right?

Stervi walked up to him and gave him a pat on the head.,"I never go back down on my word."

He was so excited to finally leave this dump he called home. He was't all like this though. Arua was top grade student in the Canterlot Academy for gifted unicorns which was now under Princess twilight control. He was doing so well but he left the academy before he can even finish his final exam. Twilight told him that he can always come back to finish but promised her not to get in trouble and boy did he break that. Still his life is about to change. One more job,just more and they can finally move up in society and stop there bad ways.

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