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When the Wonderbolts announce a new competition, Dash is determined to do anything to win.
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On an otherwise normal day, Fleetfoot comes around to Ponyville to announce a little try-out/competition. The prize: training under the Wonderbolts, and an appearance as their warm-up act on one of their shows. It's the opportunity of a lifetime for Rainbow Dash, and she's not leaving anything to chance. She's had it with the goof-ups trailing behind her, little blemishes on her reputation adding up to one giant stain.

So she decides to ask her friends for some help. Rarity's got the Crusaders mixing up some new things for the spa, there's no one around to catch her, and the fillies just stare at her so cutely, so she agrees to get a makeover. What she wants is a way to make ponies forget all the embarrassing things she's done.

What she gets is a few lessons on what it means to be a high-flying pegasus, the value of her friends, and the power held in a look.

Quite a bit of side characters to this four-parter, gratuitous rhyming in chapter 1,

general awesomeness from two Wonderbolts, Big Mac and other assorted surprises. Aesops are added later to get the look and feel of the show more into it.

Teen
Complete
Comedy
Slice of Life

21,664 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 27 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

4 Chapters:

  1. Pony Overhaul [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 13th, 2013
    3,365
  2. The Higher You Fly.... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 13th, 2013
    5,334
  3. The Thunderclad [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 14th, 2013
    3,895
  4. The Mane Act [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 22nd, 2014
    9,070
Published Apr 25th, 2012
Last Update May 1st, 2012

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