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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic -- Off The Record

by The King of Hearts
A new pony is introduced to Equestria just before the fight with Nightmare Moon in Episode 1. Changing the entire story.
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Omnipotence was truly… Beautiful. But the 'holier-than-thou,' attitude sorta ruined it for him.

“Tell me,” She asked, her tone nothing but condescending, as she leaned toward the face of the entrapped pony in front of her, “You think yourself important?”

“Important?” Alex asked, scratching his chin as best he could inside the levitation spell that held him in place, “Maybe?”

“Truly an impressive answer,” She scoffed, an ugly scowl plastered across her face, “You assume, that slightly altering the chain of events in a universe, could ever make you worth something? Pathetic.”

“That hurts!” Alex half-grinned, feigning shock to her, “Between the time travel, the split personality, and the big wedding, I think I’ve made some sort of impact.”

“You couldn’t be more wrong,” She laughed, squinting lightly at him for just a moment, “Dust in the wind, was it?”

“Great song, but inappropriate use, if you ask me,” Alex smiled, unsure if her prodding through the events in his head was something he should praise her for, “But, if you’re so sure that I lack importance, you need to start from the beginning. Not when you showed up last week. Not when Scootaloo and her friends saved Equestria. Not when King Sombra was turned to dust in front of his old subjects... Not even when Discord was freed from his stone imprisonment, and tried to take over Equestria again. The very beginning. Nightmare Moon, and the return of Princess Luna.”

She gave him a sick smile, entertaining the idea. Perhaps it would be interesting to see things from such a... puny perspective. To see the series of events unfold. Of course, it could also be a waste of her time…

“Fine.” She said, slowly placing him on the ground, and resting her horn against his, “Let’s start from the beginning.”

“Get ready sweet heart,” Alex said, licking his lips and winking at her, as she closed her eyes and focused deeply, “It’s one heck of a trip.”

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Basically, a guy goes to Equestria to episode 1 of the series, and he changes the whole playout of the series, adding a bunch of side stories and different paths for some characters to take.

And, he's an alicorn OC.

Yeah yeah, I get it.

Off you run and cry about it. I've heard about it twelve million times. Literally. Not Hyperbolically.

If you insist on calling him a Gary Stu, and a self-insert, I'll assume you're flirting with me, and calling me perfect, since a Gary Stu tends to have no flaws .

So unless you plan on taking me out, and maybe getting some wine in me, don't go calling me perfect.

Thanks!

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Cover art was done by Famosity! Here is a link:

http://famosity.deviantart.com/

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194 Chapters:

  1. Prologue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 14th, 2016
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  2. Magic 101 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 23rd, 2015
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  3. The Ticket Master - Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 11th, 2012
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  4. The Ticket Master - Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 12th, 2012
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  5. Applebuck Season - Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 18th, 2012
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  6. Applebuck Season - Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 30th, 2012
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  7. Griffon the Brush Off [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 15th, 2015
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  8. The Doctor [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 9th, 2012
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  9. Hillside [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 27th, 2019
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  10. Boast Busters [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 21st, 2012
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  11. Green Hair [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 26th, 2012
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  12. The MAJOR Problem [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 26th, 2012
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  13. The Morning After [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 17th, 2017
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  14. Luna Shy [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 7th, 2012
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  15. The Bad News [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 10th, 2012
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  16. A Surprise Encounter [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 12th, 2012
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  17. Confessions of a Baby Dragon [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 18th, 2012
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  18. Flying Lessons [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 20th, 2012
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  19. Look Before You Sleep [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 26th, 2012
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  20. Twilight Comes Home [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 30th, 2012
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  21. Bridle Gossip - Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 14th, 2012
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  22. Bridle Gossip – Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 23rd, 2012
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  23. Swarm of the Century - Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 12th, 2015
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  24. Swarm of the Century - Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 19th, 2012
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  25. Heart's Desire [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 20th, 2012
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  26. His New Chapter [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 13th, 2012
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  27. Meanwhile... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 27th, 2017
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  28. The Short Road [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 4th, 2013
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  29. Chasing the Rainbow: Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 11th, 2014
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  30. Call of the Cutie [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 1st, 2013
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  31. Fall Weather Friends [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 13th, 2015
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  32. The Case of the Missing Ponies [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 1st, 2013
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  33. Suited for Success [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 1st, 2013
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  34. A Sudden Journey [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 11th, 2013
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  35. The Fall of the Night [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 12th, 2013
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  36. Back to Manehattan [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 9th, 2013
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  37. The Source of the Rainbow [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 9th, 2013
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  38. A Colorful Background [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 18th, 2017
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  39. Sonic Rainboom [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 18th, 2017
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  40. Leaving Again [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 4th, 2013
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  41. Adjusting to a New Life [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 4th, 2013
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  42. A Prelude to a Ritual [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 5th, 2013
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  43. The Ritual - The Royal Perspective [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 6th, 2013
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  44. The Ritual - A Crusader Perspective [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 8th, 2013
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  45. The Other Crusaders [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 18th, 2013
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  46. The Show Stoppers - Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 30th, 2013
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  47. The Show Stoppers - Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 1st, 2013
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  48. A Dog and Pony Show - Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 6th, 2013
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  49. Dog and Pony Show - Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 6th, 2013
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  50. Haven Station [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 12th, 2013
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  51. Going Home [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 10th, 2013
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  52. What Time is it? Relaxation Time! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 13th, 2013
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  53. The Knight in Shining Armor [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 15th, 2013
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  54. The End of the Vacation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 15th, 2013
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  55. Growing Up [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 31st, 2016
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  56. Party of One [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 17th, 2013
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  57. The Best Night Ever - Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 18th, 2013
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  58. The Best Night Ever - Part 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 22nd, 2013
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  59. The Best Night Ever - Part 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 23rd, 2013
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  60. The Best Night Ever - Part 4 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 24th, 2013
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  61. The Best Night Ever Part - 5 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 26th, 2013
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  62. The Best Night Ever - Part 6 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 27th, 2013
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  63. The Best Night Ever - Part 7 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 28th, 2013
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  64. A Sudden Turn for the Worse [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 29th, 2013
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  65. Reversed Condition [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 30th, 2013
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  66. Earth World Problems [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 1st, 2013
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  67. Back to School [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 1st, 2013
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  68. Contrast [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 3rd, 2013
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  69. A Harmless Game [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 4th, 2013
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  70. The Beginning of Chaos [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 8th, 2015
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  71. The Element of Wrath [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 7th, 2013
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  72. The Element of Deceit [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 8th, 2013
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  73. The Element of... Sorrow? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 10th, 2013
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  74. The Element of Greed [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 12th, 2013
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  75. The Element of Loyalty [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 12th, 2013
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  76. The Final Romance [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 13th, 2013
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  77. Endgame [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 31st, 2016
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  78. Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 21st, 2017
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  79. Credits [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 7th, 2013
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  80. Return [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 19th, 2013
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  81. Return: Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 14th, 2015
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  82. Quiet Thoughts [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 30th, 2013
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  83. The Return of the Crystal Empire [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 3rd, 2013
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  84. The Crystal Kingdom [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 20th, 2013
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  85. Harsh Memories [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 1st, 2013
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  86. //// [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 11th, 2013
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  87. Crystal-Kingdom-Cutie-Mark-Crusaders [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 20th, 2013
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  88. Oops— [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 27th, 2013
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  89. The Return of the Fallen King [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 28th, 2013
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  90. Shadows to Ashes [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 6th, 2014
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  91. So, What Next? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 13th, 2014
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  92. In the Long Run [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 20th, 2014
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  93. That Quiet Time Between Adventures [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 17th, 2014
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  94. Happy, Happy Mares [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 10th, 2014
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  95. Alpha's New Home [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 17th, 2014
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  96. Chaotic Regret [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 21st, 2014
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  97. Keeping Busy [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 24th, 2014
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  98. Simple Days, Complicated Tomorrows [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 11th, 2014
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  99. Lament [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 6th, 2014
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  100. Lament: Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 15th, 2014
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  101. The Horrible Unknown [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 23rd, 2014
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  102. Anxiety [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 30th, 2014
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  103. New Power [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 9th, 2014
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  104. Irritable [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 16th, 2014
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  105. Unwanted Questioning [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 18th, 2014
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  106. Ignorance was Bliss [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 22nd, 2014
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  107. Confrontation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 24th, 2014
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  108. Coming Clean [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 29th, 2019
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  109. An Ill-Deserved Vacation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 28th, 2014
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  110. As if Nothing had Changed [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 30th, 2014
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  111. Escape [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 21st, 2014
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  112. Home in Each Other [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 26th, 2014
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  113. One Last Secret... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 28th, 2014
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  114. Misunderstanding [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 22nd, 2014
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  115. Just Hangin' Out [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 15th, 2014
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  116. The New Mare in Town [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 16th, 2014
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  117. To Break Those who are Great [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 23rd, 2014
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  118. Leave it Alone [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 1st, 2014
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  119. Hiding from the Darkness [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 11th, 2014
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  120. Sparks of Chaos [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 14th, 2014
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  121. Two Steps in a New Direction [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 18th, 2014
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  122. Yet another Addition to the Crew [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 19th, 2014
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  123. An Overdue Invitation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 25th, 2014
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  124. The 100% Canon Wedding [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 26th, 2014
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  125. What a Crappy Brother! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 1st, 2014
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  126. Wedding Preparations [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 17th, 2014
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  127. Ignorance is Sleepiness [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 2nd, 2015
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  128. The Face of a Liar [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 15th, 2015
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  129. Missing in Action [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2015
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  130. Nothing Suspected [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 14th, 2015
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  131. The Truth Revealed [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 15th, 2015
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  132. Queen Chrysalis [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 28th, 2015
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  133. Omega [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 29th, 2015
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  134. A Hard Sell [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 8th, 2015
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  135. The Greater Cause [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 9th, 2015
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  136. Aftermath [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 13th, 2015
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  137. One More Confrontation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 18th, 2015
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  138. Announcement [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 20th, 2015
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  139. The Appeal of Books [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 23rd, 2015
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  140. Shock and Awe [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 25th, 2015
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  141. A Summary [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 10th, 2015
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  142. Reintroduction [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 5th, 2015
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  143. A Heated Debate [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 10th, 2015
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  144. A Brand New (Re)Start - APRIL FOOLS, DON'T TAKE SERIOUSLY [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 2nd, 2015
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  145. Back in the Diner [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 5th, 2015
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  146. Paying Respects [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 17th, 2015
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  147. The Questions Couples Ask [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 1st, 2015
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  148. The Hive [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 9th, 2015
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  149. A Push in the Right Direction [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 20th, 2015
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  150. Shopping Trip [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 22nd, 2015
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  151. The Show [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 4th, 2015
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  152. Plus One to Equestria [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 16th, 2015
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  153. 'Paying' the Price [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 20th, 2015
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  154. Unnecessary Worry [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 29th, 2015
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  155. 'Horse' Training [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 7th, 2015
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  156. Turning Point [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 22nd, 2016
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  157. Pity [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 15th, 2015
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  158. The Stage is Set [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 29th, 2018
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  159. Prelude to Chaos [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 28th, 2015
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  160. Riding Home - Stress [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 12th, 2016
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  161. Riding Home - Misery [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 16th, 2016
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  162. Riding Home - Ignorance [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 21st, 2016
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  163. Stopover [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 28th, 2016
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  164. Uncomfortable Relaxation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 1st, 2016
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  165. The Other Side of the Wall [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 15th, 2016
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  166. Explosive Sibling [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 4th, 2016
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  167. Discordant [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 26th, 2016
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  168. See ya' Chet [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2016
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  169. Surrender [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 8th, 2016
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  170. Conflicting Stories [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 21st, 2016
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  171. At the Mercy of the Strings [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 26th, 2016
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  172. An Old Friend [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 16th, 2016
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  173. Far Past Bickering [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 5th, 2016
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  174. Realization [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 25th, 2016
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  175. The Girl that Shouldn't Exist [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 9th, 2016
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  176. An Odd Request [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 11th, 2016
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  177. Invisible Friends [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 20th, 2016
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  178. Not All She Seems [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 28th, 2016
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  179. The Rising Darkness [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 30th, 2016
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  180. Awake [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 2nd, 2016
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  181. What's the Plan? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 14th, 2016
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  182. Pursuing Chaos [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 31st, 2016
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  183. Ascension [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 23rd, 2017
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  184. Confronting Chaos [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 14th, 2017
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  185. The Horrible Plan [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 17th, 2017
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  186. Magical Mystery Dream [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 22nd, 2017
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  187. One Final Stopover [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 23rd, 2017
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  188. The Nightmare [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 24th, 2017
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  189. The End of Two Chapters [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 25th, 2017
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  190. A Chaotic Debriefing [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 28th, 2017
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  191. A Lost Element [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 3rd, 2017
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  192. Affirmation and Desolation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2017
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  193. The Odd Two Out [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 10th, 2017
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  194. Off the Record [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 27th, 2019
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Published Apr 24th, 2012
Last Update Oct 31st, 2017

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