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Mako's quest through equestsia

by MrMako

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Mako realized he is deep under.

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Chapter 1 Mako realized he is deep under.

  Mako wakes up feeling different and almost weightless.As Mako trys to get up he notice his legs all broken "MY MY LEGS THEY ARE BROKEN!!!!".And Mako notices that they are not broken,so Mako gets up and notices that he is in a forest.So Mako walks out and sees a cottage, and sees a a golden horse and walks up to it and says "Hello where am I ?" And the horse hides from Mako and he asks "What is wrong ?" and the golden mare notices his friendliness and says "You are at my house,near the Everfree Forest" Mako asks "What is your name ?" she says "Fluttershy" Mako says "Mako". Mako says "Nice to meet you" Fluttershy says "You're a pegasaus too" Mako wonders *Pega-what* "Your wings Mako" Mako looks behind him and sees wings. Mako asks "Is any place I can get some food and see other ponys" Fluttershy says "Yes north that way". Mako wanders that way.

Mako arrives at the town and sees other ponys. And he sees a white pony. He runs up too it. And before he can say anything she interrupts and says "My dear what is wrong why are you running?" Mako says "Well i was trying see if I could ask you questions?"  the white pony say "Well my dear let us go to my shop over there."  Mako asks "What is your name?" "Rarity my dear,yours? "Mako" "What a dashing name."  "Well thank you."  They both head off to the shop. Both of them enter the shop "Now honey what do you ne---" "RARITY YOU'RE HOME!" and young pony says Mako screams "YEECH!!" and falls to the ground "Sorry Mr." "It's ok you just scared me" "Now what is you name little pony?" "Sweetie Belle mr." "And my name is Mako" "Thank you m--Mako" "And you have your Cutie mark Mako" *Cutie what* and Mako looks behind him and sees a anvil and hammer

'Yes I do I'm good at making things." "Now Rarity do you have some tea?" "Yes,of course I do dear" "What kind do you have?" "Peach,apple,blueberry and cherry" "May I have Cherry?" "Of course my dear" Rarity starts to make tea,Mako wonders why is he here,theirs nothing going on here it's almost peaceful."Mako" "Yes Sweetie Belle?" "Have you met Fluttershy,Pinkie Pie,Rainbow Dash,Applejack and Twilight Sparkle?" "Fluttershy yes the rest no" "What about Scotaloo or Applebloom" " Have not met them ether" Rarity interrupts with "Tea is done" Mako says "Thank you Rarity" Rarity asks "Where did you come from dear?" "Well I'm not sure honestly" "Well any idea dear?" "I woke up in the Everfree,then I met Fluttershy" "Well how was she?" "Good,seems she was feeding some animals" *Mako finishes his last of his tea* "Well thank you Rarity for the tea" "You're welcome dear,but are you hungry?" Mako says "Yes" "Well my dear there is a restaurant in the middle of Ponyville" "Well I have no money"  "Well want to work a little for some bits" "Sure"  *Mako works with Rarity around the shop for about 2 hours and earns 75 bits*  

To be continued..... Next Chapter: Chapter 2 Meeting Scotaloo,Appleblom and Applejack Estimated time remaining: 30 Minutes

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