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Young in the City

by David Silver
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A young zebra finds his life in Viljatown disrupted. Sent fleeing, he finds strength in friendship, both old and new, as he explores places perhaps best left forgotten.
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The first, official, Ponyfinder story, Young in the City follows the adventures of a young zebra named Pure Water and his adventures in and under the capital city of Viljatown. New chapters will come out with a speed depending partially on how well the Patreon for Ponyfinder stories is doing.

As mentioned above, this story is sponsored by patrons. We hope to get enough support to add illustrations and even comics to the tale as it unfolds. If you wish to become a patron yourself, you may for as little as $1 a month(More if you want more say in stories or get your own OC into the story or even get drawings of characters) and keep the words flowing.

So who is this guy, posting his first story to FimFic with a patreon tag? Glad you asked! I'm David Silver, of Silver Games LLC, makers of Ponyfinder. I've been happily engaged with the community with my creations, and I see no reason to stop. I love getting feedback and I love the challenge of working other people's ideas into my world. It worked great for the first book, is working fantastically for the second in two Kickstarters, so let's see how story making goes with what is effectively Kickstarter for ongoing projects, Patreon.

Phew, that's enough about me, hope you like the story so far. If you have ideas, suggestions, or critiques, comment away! You won't hurt my feelings pointing out mistakes. These are unedited for the moment, but that may change.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Alternate Universe

3,245 words: Estimated 13 Minutes to read: [Cache]

2 Chapters:

  1. Rough Holiday [Cache] Sep 26th, 2014
    1,921
  2. Into the Depths [Cache] Sep 26th, 2014
    1,324
Published Sep 26th, 2014

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