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Ponytropolis II

by Pinkamena666

Chapter 28: Tracking A Succubus

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Later That Night...

Ginger gave Surprise a kiss before the white mare moved to their apartment door. "I won't be long. I just wanna hit the shops before they close."

Ginger nodded. "Be careful. Remember, there's a scary monster out there," she said with a light smile.

Surprise gave a chuckle as she opened the door. "Sure. Back soon, babe," she said before leaving.

Ginger smiled before turning and heading towards the bathroom. She gripped the bottom of her shirt, ready to pull it off when something in the living room caught her eye. Letting go of her shirt, she turned and headed into the living room, making her way over to an open window.

Looking outside, she saw nothing. "Huh..." she muttered, closing it.

Turning around, she began making her way back to the bathroom, pulling her shirt off and tossing it aside.


Chrysalis let out a sigh as she nuzzled Shy's cheek, both still cuddling in the pegasus' bed. "I think we fell asleep..." she said with a chuckle.

Fluttershy let out a yawn and smiled, gently rubbing Chrysalis' back when there was a frantic knock on the door. Shy let out a light "Eep" before getting out of bed and grabbing her nightgown. Once she was dressed she made her way to the door and opened it, revealing an unhappy Dash.

"That thing in here with you?" She asked, getting a nervous look from the other pegasus.

"Um... Y-Yes, Dashie, we're... sort of dating now..."

The rainbow-haired mare went wide-eyed. "You're what?! With her?" She said, asking that last part in a loud whisper as if she realized how loud she as initially.

"What's the matter, Dash?" Asked Chrysalis, who was leaning against the bedroom door frame, still naked. "Jealous?"

"Jealous?" Asked Dash, glaring at the Changeling. Of you, maybe... Of Shy... no... I actually feel bad for her having to look at you when she wakes up."

"At least I have someone, Rainbow," the queen spat, beginning to walk towards the two mares. "Who do you have?"

"I have Twilight."

"I-I thought Twi was... with Midnight..." Fluttershy said softly.

Dash eyed her as Chrysalis chuckled. "More jealousy?"

"Sorry," Shy mouthed at Dash. Though, it seemed like she wanted to speak, only nothing came out.

"I could have anyone I want," Dash finally said. "I'm just not ready for a serious relationship yet."

"Sure, you aren't..."

"I'm not!" Dash protested.

"Girls, please..." Shy said as loud as she could muster. "You have a job to do... Right, Dash? Isn't that why you came here?"

Rainbow eyed the quiet pegasus before looking at Chrysalis. "Yes, and, unfortunately, I need her help..."

"Then, stop arguing and do your job..." Fluttershy pleaded. "Please. We're counting on you to find that thing..."

Dash eyed her again before returning her gaze to Chrysalis, letting out a sigh. She then patted Shy on the shoulder before turning and heading down the hall. "Get dressed and meet me outside..."

Chrysalis watched her leave and then sighed as well. "What a bitch..."

"Chryssie..." Flutters said, hearing the rude name-calling. "I know she can be really stubborn at times, but you two need to work together..."

The queen nodded. "I know, and... I suppose I could try to get along with her..." she said as she gently pulled Shy close to her. "For you..."

Fluttershy smiled up at her. "Thank you..."


Ginger turned the water on in her shower and stepped in. "Mmm, that feels good..." she said, sighing happily.

She and Surprise had found a really good deal on this hotel room. It came with a few perks, such as a big bathroom with a glass wall shower. Ginger then closed the glass door and closed her eyes, letting the water rush over her.

After a little while she heard the bathroom door open. "Surprise?" She asked. "Baby, is that you?"

She then opened the door with her eyes closed, trying to find her towel on the wall. Once she found it, she took it, realizing someone was holding it. "Thanks, babe," she said with a smile, wiping her eyes.

When she opened them she found herself face-to-face with a naked red mare with piercing red eyes. Ginger let out a scream as the red mare quickly moved towards her.


Chrysalis leaned against her door, looking out the window as Dash eyed her from the driver's seat.

"Fluttershy's right..." Dash finally said.

The Changeling nodded slightly. "Of course she is..." she muttered.

"We may hate each other, but we still have to work together, so... temporary truce?" She asked, holding her right hand out.

Chrysalis eyed her and slowly reached her hand out. The shake lasted for a fraction of a second before both pulled their hand away.

"So... Sense anything?" Dash asked.

Chrysalis shook her head. "No..."


Ginger scooted backwards until she hit the side of the tub, staring wide-eyed in horror as the red mare crawled towards her.

"P-Please, don't... h-hurt me..." the brown mare whimpered as Ruby crawled on top of her to look her in the eyes, their faces centimeters apart.

"Your girlfriend squealed..." the red mare replied. "Hard to stay hidden when people know..."

"Huh?" Asked Ginger, not really understanding the way this mare was speaking. She seemed to have almost learned how to speak perfect English, however some things still seemed cryptic. "O-Oh, the... a-alley?" Ginger asked, suddenly realizing. "Y-You mean how she... made a scene?"

Ruby nodded and leaned in, sniffing Ginger's neck. "Attention... Unwanted..." She then lifted her head to look the mare in the eyes again. "I need to make sure you don't squeal anymore..."

"W-Wait, wha--?" Ginger started to ask when Ruby quickly grabbed her neck. Tears fell from her eyes as she stared at the red mare.

Ruby smirked and quickly leaned in, kissing he mare on the lips. Ginger went wide-eyed as she felt the red mare's tongue slide into her mouth and almost halfway down her throat. The brown mare began to gag and choke as she found it extremely hard to breathe. Ruby then broke the kiss and pulled back slightly, her tongue still deep in the mare's throat. Ginger wanted to scream for help but was finding it impossible.


Chrysalis quickly sat upright with a gasp. "So, that's what it feels like..."

Dash eyed her. "You feel something?"

The Changeling nodded. "Yes. That way," she said, pointing to the right, outside her window.

Dash nodded and quickly weaved through cars as she swerved right at the next intersection, making a few drivers honk their horns as they had to slam on the brakes.

"What else can you tell me?" Asked Dash.

Chrysalis shook her head and shrugged. "I-I don't know. This is my first time tracking a different species' love... But, going from the level of energy I'm feeling... I'd say she's getting ready to feed."

"Let me know if it gets stronger..." said the cyan mare, a determined look in her eye as if she would do anything to get to the victim in time.


Ruby quickly pulled her tongue out, making Ginger gasp for air. "No good to me to just kill you..." she cooed, leaning in and licking up the mare's neck. "I need food..."

Ginger gasped and coughed. "Wh-What?" She stammered.

Ruby then ran a fingernail down the mare's neck and to her chest before gripping her breast. Ginger let out a shuddered gasp as she tensed up.

The red mare let out a chuckle as she leaned in and began licking the nipple, feeling the levels of need rising within the brown mare.

"P-Please, s-stop!" Ginger cried as Rub slid a hand between her legs. "Not... until... I feed..." Ruby almost sang as her eyes gave a light flash of red. "And, when I'm through with you... I think I'll feed on that girlfriend of yours..."

Ginger whimpered and closed her eyes as she felt something other than water trailing down from her pussy.


Dash sped up and eyed Chrysalis. "We close?"

Chrysalis looked around before nodding. "Should be somewhere around here... But, I can't say where for sure..."

Dash let out a groan. "Someone's life's at stake!"

"Don't you think I know that?!" Chrysalis snapped back. "I got us this far, didn't I?!"

"Doesn't matter how far you've brought us if we still fail!"


Ginger panted and moaned as she felt an orgasm near.

"That's it..." Ruby moaned, licking her lips. "Give me you energy..." she cooed, fingering the mare faster.

Ginger's moans increased as her back arched, getting ready for her orgasm. Suddenly the bathroom door opened, revealing Surprise.

"No one makes my girlfriend cum but me!" She yelled.

Ruby glared at her before leaping back onto the shower wall before leaping out for the door, knocking over Surprise. Ruby then slid over to a window and looked back at the white mare. After opening her mouth wide, revealing her sharp teeth as she hissed, she turned and dove out of the window, quickly reaching out and sticking to the side of the building.


Dash looked up at hearing glass shattering before slamming on the brakes. "There!" She yelled, pointing. Chrysalis looked up, too, to see a red mare crawling on the side of a tall apartment building. Dash then got out of the car, pulling her gun. "Take the car and follow that thing. I'm going to check on the victim." Chrysalis nodded and slid into the driver's seat. "Oh, and... Chrysalis?"

"Yes, Dashie," asked the queen, knowing she probably wasn't going to like this.

"Scratch the car... and I kill you..." Dash warned before running towards the building.

Chrysalis let out a sigh as she closed the door. She didn't like it. The queen then slammed on the gas and took off as the Succubus leapt from the apartment building onto the roof of another building.


Inside the building, Dash ran up the stairs, counting the floors as she made her way to the 6th floor. "Four... Five... Six..." she said, before running down the hall to the room at the end.

A couple ponies were already standing in the hall after hearing the window shatter. Dash ran right passed them and barged into the room, looking around and spotting the broken window.

"Shit..." she groaned, before hearing an orgasmic moan. Ears perking, she made her way to the bathroom and stood in the doorway.

Surprise looked over at her as she pulled her fist from Ginger. "Um... Hello." Dash stared at them, a blush on her face. "What?" Asked Surprise. "She was on edge."


Chrysalis swerved around the corner and parked the car on the side of the road. She then quickly got out and leaped at the building, climbing up the side of it before standing up on the roof, looking around. The source of the Succubus' lust energy was fading until it was gone entirely.

"Shit..." the queen grumbled, crossing her arms. "This thing is fast..."


Surprise stepped out of the shower and noticed Dash's gun. "Were you looking for that red mare?"

"Red mare?" Asked Dash. "Well, that's certainly more information we could use," she replied with a smile, holstering her gun. "You know, you two probably shouldn't stay here any longer..."

"Well, where would we move to?" The white mare asked, tilting her head.

Dash smiled sadly. "After the recent battle at the hotel... there are plenty of rooms available..."

Surprise nodded sympathetically. "Well... Thanks," she replied with a light smile. "I'm sure we'd be much safer there..."

Ginger's panting slowed as she nodded. "Y-Yeah... Sounds safe."

Dash chuckled and took out her phone. "Let me make a call..."

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