Big Mac's Harem
Chapter 10
Previous Chapter Next ChapterFinally, Fluttershy emerged from the door and brought the little chick over to Big McIntosh. It seemed like she had worked a miracle as the little bird stood in her hoof, cheeping and hopping about. She had its wing and leg bandaged up and had cleaned the dirt and blood off of it. She giggled as it jumped up and down and then, with a smile still on her face, continued, “I think he’ll be fine. I think it would probably be best though if I kept him here for a few days, that way he’ll be away from any danger and can fully recuperate. Oh…” she blushed, “if that’s OK with you, that is.” Big Mac nodded and smiled at her and she finished, “Oh, that’s great! Applebloom can come and visit him whenever she’d like.” Big Mac nodded, indicating that he would pass the word along. “I’ll be right back,” she said to him and then took the little chick back into the room to place him into an enclosure.
Fluttershy emerged back after a few seconds and then took a seat beside Big McIntosh. Even though her head was lowered, as it usually was, he noticed that she happened to be staring at him. He began to wonder why, but then it struck him. The cost! He had forgotten to pay her for her services. He reached into his saddlebags and pulled out a few bits. He was a little embarrassed that he hadn’t come prepared, but Fluttershy was a sweet mare and even if she was offended or dissatisfied at least she would be nice in letting him know; that, or she would keep it to herself. “Is this enough?” Big McIntosh asked rather nervously.
Fluttershy cocked her head as her eyes went from the money to his eyes, and then back to the money, and then back to his eyes again. “Um,” Fluttershy began, “What is that for Big McIntosh?”
“I need ta pay you don’t I?” he asked her and continued to hold the bits out.
Fluttershy smiled at him gently and replied, “Oh, no. You don’t owe me anything. I’m just glad that I could help out and save a little creature.” She ever so gently pushed his hoof away. “Thank you though.” Big McIntosh nodded, accepting defeat, and then placed the bits back into his saddlebag. They were both quiet for a moment and then Fluttershy, surprisingly, was the first to break the silence. “If you don’t mind me saying,” she blushed and looked away from him just momentarily, “I think this is the most I’ve ever heard you talk.”
Big McIntosh smiled at her innocent comment. “Oh,” he said and blushed as well, “Yeah, I guess it is.” In truth, Big McIntosh was never afraid to talk around Fluttershy. As a matter of fact, her silence and the way that he felt secure around her was all a part of the reason that he liked her before. It was one of the many things that he felt that they had in common, and it drew him to her all the more.
There was more silence and then Fluttershy spoke up once more. “I don’t understand why…” Big Mac cocked his head at her and then she continued, “You have a very beautiful voice.”
Big McIntosh blushed very deeply. The compliment took him entirely by surprise. Along with being naturally quiet, part of the reason Big McIntosh never talked was because he didn’t like the sound of his own voice. He thought that it sounded too deep and that it felt backwoods just coming out of his mouth. However, he realized that he couldn’t just stay silent all of his life, so he just resorted to a simple, albeit still country, “yep” or “nope.” When he was around Fluttershy though, whom he knew was just as silent and insecure as he was, he felt like he could say anything to her. With a shaky voice, Big McIntosh thanked her. “T-thank ya…” he said.
Fluttershy giggled very quietly and then said, “You’re welcome.” She moved her hoof back and forth over the suede pattern in the sofa and blushed, and her eyes darted back and forth from him and out into the room. She hoped that she wasn’t revealing the crush that she had on him to him. She had harbored a crush on Big Mac for a long time and now she couldn’t believe that he was here, in her house, and that she was all alone with him. She wanted to let him know her feelings, but she was too afraid. She didn’t know what she feared more, the act of actually telling him, the act of him discovering, the act of him rejecting her, or even the act of him accepting her.
The next thing she knew though, Big McIntosh was kissing her. She didn’t know what possessed him and he didn’t know what possessed himself, but neither of them cared. Fluttershy, though awkward in the act, kissed him back. They were both acknowledging a love that, until now, failed so many times to express itself. Time seemed to slow down and they kissed each other sweetly and passionately for what seemed like hours. Eventually though, they both pulled away from each other, albeit slowly. “I’ve wanted ta kiss you for a long time,” Big Mac revealed to her.
Fluttershy seemed to blush deeper than she had ever done so before, and then she herself revealed a deep secret. “I’ve wanted you to kiss me for a long time,” she said so quietly that he could just barely hear her. “D-Do it more time,” she requested. Not one to disappoint, and not wanting to let the feeling of love leave the room, Big McIntosh kissed her as she wanted. Only this time, something else happened. The way that her lips felt against his and the way that her feminine body felt against his made him aroused as thought crossed into his mind of all the things he would like to do with her. He knew that it was wrong, but he just couldn’t help it. It was natural what was happening to him.
Little did he know though, Fluttershy was experiencing the exact same feelings and physical sensations. She loved how he just seemed to take her and make her his, and then she also loved how much passion and love he seemed to be putting into kissing her. Fluttershy became aroused as Big McIntosh pushed himself into her and though she tried to resist at first, she couldn’t stop herself from reaching down and rubbing her pussy. Big McIntosh felt something brushing against his chest, so he stopped kissing her for a moment and looked down to see what she was doing. When he saw her rubbing herself, he couldn’t help but become all the more aroused, leading him to be completely hard.
His erection inadvertently brushed Fluttershy’s body and she opened her eyes to see what had touched her. When she did so, she blushed deeply and became so embarrassed at seeing how much she had gotten into it that she failed to notice he had pulled away. Also, she saw that she wasn’t the only one among them aroused. Slowly and awkwardly, she pulled her hoof away and her eyes darted all around the room. Big McIntosh smiled at her though, and he let her know that it was OK and that what she was feeling was only natural. He resumed kissing her and in the meantime made his way so that he was on top of her. He wanted it just as badly as she wanted it.
Fluttershy touched his cheek with her hoof and then wrapped her forelegs around his neck, pinning his lips against hers. Big McIntosh pushed his tongue in Fluttershy’s mouth and tried to hold himself back as she took it and began to suck on it. When she finished, Big McIntosh stopped kissing her mouth, pecked her once on the forehead, and then looked down and went to steer himself inside of her. When Fluttershy felt his head poking at her vagina, her eyes grew wide as she all of a sudden remembered that she was a virgin. “Wait!” she quietly exclaimed, “Wait…” Big McIntosh stopped everything and looked into her eyes, “Please… please be gentle. I’ve… I’ve never done this before.” She looked away from him and blushed.
Big McIntosh understood and nodded his head and kissed her to prove so and to show her that she had nothing to fear. He wanted to go ahead and push inside of her, but he knew that he couldn’t do so. He looked down at his giant stallionhood and knew that if he were to do so it would only hurt her. Before the ecstasy that was in the air could clear, Big McIntosh moved himself downwards, almost to where his legs were dangling over the sofa, and proceeded to eat Fluttershy out. He licked her pussy all over on the outside and then pushed his tongue inside of her as much as he could. The way that Fluttershy began to wiggle her body around and hold back an orgasm showed him that she was a weak mare and that he would have to be careful. He licked her all over outside and all over on the inside as deeply as he could and, when he was satisfied, pulled himself back up to where he was at eye level with her and then braced to enter into her. “Oh…” Fluttershy panted heavily, “That was wonderful!”
If she enjoyed that, then Big McIntosh was sure, well, he hoped anyway, that she would love this even more. He planted his lips firmly onto hers so that it would distract her from him entering into her. When he pushed his pulsing cock inside of her awaiting pussy, Fluttershy closed her eyes tightly and let out a little moan followed by a little whimper. She wasn’t able to move her head much because it was pinned to the sofa cushion and Big Mac was still kissing her, but she didn’t mind because she knew that he was doing it for her own good.
As he thrust into her slowly and gently, Fluttershy had to bit her lip and close her eyes even harder to control the pain. Eventually though, when he pushed about half of himself into her, Fluttershy foundered and started to sniffle and cry. When he pushed into her it hurt so very badly, but it was superseded by the pleasure, though slight at most, from him pulling out of her.
He kept up the pace of pushing in and pulling out, pushing in and pulling out until he made it so that it was pleasurable for Fluttershy as well. She was even tighter than Twilight had been, but based on the way she was holding back her tears, to no avail at that, he could tell that she wasn’t enjoying it. That was, she wasn’t enjoying it until Big McIntosh got her broken in. He finally pushed all of his stallionhood deeply into her and held it there for a short time. Fluttershy whimpered and more tears fell from her eyes, but then she moaned in pleasure as she had a tiny orgasm when he pulled out of her.
After that though, it was nothing but pleasure for the both of them. Big McIntosh pushed in and pulled out of her like he had been doing, only this time to moans and gasps of pleasure instead of whimpers and squeaks of pain. It was all quite relieving. He varied his speed to make it extra special for the both of them, but since Fluttershy was a gentle mare and he wanted it to be special for them, he tended to keep it nice, slow, and romantic. As he slowly pushed into her, he kissed her gently on the lips and looked into her beautiful blue eyes. He always did think that they what made Fluttershy look so beautiful.
“A-Aaah!” Fluttershy let out a whimper of pleasure and bit her bottom lip as she buckled and then came, this time completely. The way he kept thrusting into her and the pleasure of the orgasm sent shivers down through Fluttershy. “I… I love you,” Fluttershy mumbled and then looked between her body and Big Mac’s to watch him thrust into herself.
She was too mesmerized by watching his big cock thrust into her and her mind was clouded somewhat from her massive orgasm, but she was sure that she heard him say, “I love you too,” back to her. Tears began to fall from her eyes now, but they were silent and thus Big Mac didn’t take notice of them. They weren’t tears of pain, nor were they tears of confusion, but they were tears of joy. All Fluttershy had ever wanted was for somepony to say “I love you” and now, the stallion that she had had a long-time crush on, the stallion of her dreams, was right here telling her so and proving it to her by making sweet love with her.
Fluttershy again reached her forelegs up around Big Mac’s neck and pulled him down so that she was kissing his lips. When they touched, Big Mac began to thrust just a little bit faster and braced for orgasm. He tried to hold it in for as long as he could, but he just couldn’t do it any longer Fluttershy was just so tight! He took one final thrust deep inside of her, almost entirely, and then he released. His cock pulsed several times as his seed came pouring out inside of her tight pussy, but Big Mac didn’t want to stop there. He wanted to please Fluttershy even more and make a mark on her of sorts, so he pulled out and allowed the rest of his cum to go flying out onto her face and onto the upper part of her body. There was only a little bit left to go, so it wasn’t too terribly messy, and even then she didn’t mind.
She loved the taste of it as she opened her mouth and allowed it to come flying in and go right down her throat, and she loved the warm and gooey feeling of it on her body and around her mouth. What she loved most though, was the feeling of it inside of her. It just made her feel all warm and tingly inside!
Big McIntosh let out a sigh of exhaustion and then climbed off of her as his cock eventually receded back up to him. He sat back down beside her and then helped to pull her up and off of her back. Once she was sitting beside him, they both looked into each other’s eyes and they both couldn’t help but smile and then break out into quiet laughter. Fluttershy, still breathing heavily, fell over onto his shoulder and closed her eyes for a few moments. “That was wonderful,” she told him and then snuggled his shoulder with her head. She craned upwards and then kissed him on the cheek. “You’re amazing…” she finished quietly.
Big Mac kissed her on the head and leaned his head over on top of hers. They stayed like this for a while but then Big Mac stopped and took his head off of her; he started to have second thoughts. He was falling in love with Fluttershy and he was already in a “committed” relationship with Twilight Sparkle and had some relationships going with the rest of Fluttershy’s friends. It was ironic… he was with everypony except Fluttershy. At that, he was around everypony around Fluttershy, just not her. To make matters worse, he didn’t have prior feelings for any of them! Sometimes he felt even that he didn’t have any feelings for them at all, but then Twilight Sparkle would cross into his mind at the promise that he had made to her. She loved him, and he did like her back, so it wasn’t his place to love her and then leave her. Same as with all the rest of the mares that he had slept with. It was a horrible predicament and this experience with Fluttershy, the one that he actually longed to be with, was a big wakeup call for him.
He wasn’t even worthy of sitting there in her living room, and he wasn’t worthy of having her head on his shoulder. He was trash. All he was, was a stallion that took advantage of mares that were seeking love, most of them anyway, and then moved right on to her best friend. He couldn’t take it anymore! He jumped up off of the sofa and Fluttershy placed her hooves down to save herself from hitting the cushion. She looked up at him. “Umm…” she started quietly, “Is everything alright Big McIntosh?”
Big Mac’s eyes darted all around the room. No! Nothing was right! He couldn’t tell her that though, and he certainly couldn’t tell her of all of his current relationships. He needed to be alone right now, but he didn’t want to tell her that either. She would think that she had done something wrong or that Big Mac just did all of it to get with her, and being the volatile mare that she was, it would send Fluttershy over the edge. “I don’t wanna go…” Big Mac started slowly, his eyes still darting about, “B-but Applebloom an’ Applejack’s probably gettin’ worried. I need ta tell him the little feller’s OK.” He started to back towards the door. As he glanced at Fluttershy’s face, he couldn’t help but see doubt in it, but then again his eyes were moving too fast.
“Oh,” Fluttershy smiled and then got up off the couch to open the door for him, “OK.” She pulled the door open and then kissed him on the cheek. Big Mac walked outside of it and then turned and returned her kiss. He went to walk off, but Fluttershy stopped him. “Umm…” she began and looked away from him nervously, “You’ll come back to see me… won’t you?” She bit her bottom lip in embarrassment and looked down at the ground.
He choked back tears even when she asked him to come back and see her. He didn’t deserve to, but he would because he loved her and because he didn’t want to leave her alone. He picked her head up, kissed her on the cheek, smiled at her, and then said, “Eeyup.” Fluttershy blushed and then saw him off.
As he walked down the path away from her cottage, those feelings of guilt came soaring back into him. He wanted to break out into a run as quickly as he could, but he knew that Fluttershy was watching him and he wanted to appear casual and make it look as though nothing was wrong. However, when he exited out of her front yard and got a little ways down the path, he took off into a run and never looked back. He didn’t look forward to arriving back at the barnyard because he would have to see yet another mare that he had slept with, his own sister at that, but there was nowhere else he could run. Big Mac was trapped, and he knew it.
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